Momochikun wrote:

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Hi Hi ~ it's Eru and Yui huray~
As your request..
Ukh.. i can't mod this freely because 01:06:279 > 01:07:079

[General]
Many note at blue tick according to the vocal. so i don't sure about the timing

[Normal]
Many anti jump here.. consider remapp the anti jump part and use normal spacing I believe the entirety of this diff is 1.0x spacing.

[Hard]
More like a light insane
00:04:979 (3) - This note is confusing me.. it has same spacing but different pattern i saw so many like this at hard and insane diff This is on a 3/4 note, can't do anything about it. Dist snap is on.
00:55:079 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - This is too hard for hard.. sure I don't think it's too hard. Some other people may have agreed with you, but none have given me suggestions on how to make it better... (it's actually easier than it was before)

[Insane]
00:40:879 (1,2) - Consider reducing spacing.. Might consider this. It is a bit of a stretch.

sorry for tiny mod..
GL~

gideon5504 wrote:

Hey there~ From my M4M queue!

Servant x Akareh:
~I thought this was gonna be hardest, but turns out the one on top is harder. Maybe rename the top to something more convincing. Rename mine or Insane? I just put the first random name I came with, but if unsfamiliar wants to rename it to something else go ahead. As long as it has Akareh In the diff name I don't really care. Name it Akareh's funtastic pa pa pa time.
~00:34:279 (1) - Space it, looks confusing. that's fine, lol.
~Again, it was enjoyable

That's all from me here ^^ Nice map! Good luck!

gideon5504 wrote:

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Hey there~ From my M4M queue!

General:
~Turn off distance snap and grid snap for perfect stacks in hard and insanes. I can't really tell the difference, I need someone to give me further insight into this one.

Normal:
~Try to follow more music in easier diffs.
~00:37:479 (3) - Split it into 2 1/1 beat sliders. Fixed.
~00:39:079 (1) - Avoid these long sliders. split them to one from 00:39:079 to 00:39:479 and the other from 00:39:679 to the downbeat. Ok. Also fixed some other unnecessary long sliders
~01:24:279 - Add a circle. I used to, but removed to give more time after spinner. Fixed.

Hard:
~01:25:479 (5) - Slider doesn't fit.. Change it to a circle at 01:25:879 instead. Fixed.
~Pretty decent diff.

Insane:
~00:01:079 (3) - 3rd note is unnecessary and creates some confusion. Hmm. I'll consider removing it. But then I'll also have to remove (2)..
~01:24:279 (2) - Space this for players to read it better. Put the rest in symmetry after. Tweaked it a bit.
~I enjoyed it quite a bit

That's all from me here ^^ Nice map! Good luck!

Akareh wrote:

Name it Akareh's funtastic pa pa pa time.

1. 00:23:079 (1) - Not symmetrically good, I'd go for a normal curve slider
2. 01:06:279 (2) - This could be confusing for new player, try to move slider repeat point to 136|312 or similar

1. 00:13:479 (1) - I'd change it to a curve slider like http://puu.sh/3Xzht.jpg
2. 00:23:079 (5) - New combo should be here as you did in the previous patterns
3. 01:15:479 (3) - Move it some grids up and then try to make a curve slider like http://puu.sh/3XzlJ.jpg

1. 00:23:979 (4) - Move slider end point to 52|324
2. 00:33:579 (6) - Move this some grids down, it should be under (5), imo
3. 01:19:279 (1) - Remove repeat from 01:18:279 (2) - , it's uglyyy ;_;
4. 01:25:879 (5) - NC?

• 
  Nothing to say

1. 00:12:279 (2) - Weird flow, move this slider down a bit
2. 00:26:079 (5,6) - Move them right a bit, ignore the stack
3. 00:50:879 (2) - Don't stack it, ugly to play

Leader wrote:

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Hello, M4M

[Normal]

1. 00:13:479 (1) - I'd change it to a curve slider like http://puu.sh/3Xzht.jpg Fixed.
2. 00:23:079 (5) - New combo should be here as you did in the previous patterns Done! You mean following patterns
3. 01:15:479 (3) - Move it some grids up and then try to make a curve slider like http://puu.sh/3XzlJ.jpg Ok

[Hard]

1. 00:23:979 (4) - Move slider end point to 52|324 Alright.
2. 00:33:579 (6) - Move this some grids down, it should be under (5), imo Agreed. Tweaked it a bit.
3. 01:19:279 (1) - Remove repeat from 01:18:279 (2) - , it's uglyyy ;_; Ok ok
4. 01:25:879 (5) - NC? Fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:12:279 (2) - Weird flow, move this slider down a bit Yep.
2. 00:26:079 (5,6) - Move them right a bit, ignore the stack Alright.
3. 00:50:879 (2) - Don't stack it, ugly to play Fair enough, my map is a bit ugly

Good luck >< THANKS!

CPLs wrote:

Hard : 00:11:679 (4) remove clap from here ,add circle at 00:11:879 with clap to make your pattern same with next one

1. 00:00:679 (1) - how about repeat on 00:01:279.
   
2. 00:07:879 (3) - i think that it is more better!, and add whistle on end of slider?
   

   256,72,7879,2,0,B|204:64|116:96|56:68,1,200,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:15:079 (3) - remove finish on end of slider
4. 00:18:279 (3) - NC
5. 00:21:479 (4) - ^and make more clear slider
   
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6. 00:23:079 (1) - remove whistle
7. 00:31:079 (3) - like 00:07:879 (3) mod
8. 00:35:879 (1) - more curve
9. 00:39:079 (1) - remove finish
10. 00:48:679 (1) - make more clear slider
11. 00:55:079 (1) - whistle is more better than finish.
12. 01:06:279 (2,3) - finish is more better than clap
13. 01:13:879 (4) - whistle

1. 00:03:079 (5) - whistle on middle of slider and end of slider.
2. 00:07:079 (3,5) - clap is so awkward.
3. 00:13:479 (1,3) - ^
4. 00:51:879 (1,2,3,4) - finish
5. 00:54:279 (5) - NC?
6. 01:07:879 (1,2,3) - finish
7. 01:25:879 (3) - NC

1. 00:40:479 (4) - perfectly overlap on 00:39:679 (2)
2. 00:41:679 (4,5) - remove (5)note and one repeat (4) note
3. 00:47:079 (5) - NC
4. 00:48:679 (1) - finish
5. 01:01:279 (11) - remove clap
6. 01:03:079 (6) - NC
7. 01:06:279 (6) - ^
8. 01:12:879 (7) - ^
9. 01:15:879 (6) - finish
10. 01:19:279 (6) - NC

TaMul wrote:

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from my queue

[Normal]

1. 00:03:079 (5) - whistle on middle of slider and end of slider. Hmm, don't think it'll fit.
2. 00:07:079 (3,5) - clap is so awkward.
3. 00:13:479 (1,3) - ^ Humm ok I guess. Removed. Pretty sure someone told me to put them there though. Oh well.
4. 00:51:879 (1,2,3,4) - finish Ok, fixed. Also in Hard and Insane
5. 00:54:279 (5) - NC? It's fine I think.
6. 01:07:879 (1,2,3) - finish I'll leave the finishes off of these ones.
7. 01:25:879 (3) - NC Fixed.

that's all~.GL!

CPLs wrote:

akareh's diff BG disappear.

or maybe I have to redownload?

CPLs wrote:

Akareh's diff lacks hitsounds on kiai, I think you should add more finishes, I found some appropriate place for more hitsounds

00:57:279 (2) clap at both
00:57:679 (3) clap at tail
00:58:279 (1) finish is more suitable here than clap (slider head)
01:00:879 (9) add clap here, and remove the clap from 01:01:079 (10)
01:03:279 (7) ^ and remove clap from 01:03:479 (8)
01:04:679 (1) I'm not sure, but finish here is better
01:06:479 (7,8) invert the hitsounds
01:09:479 (8) clap here
01:10:279 (9) ^
01:11:079 (1) finish at head

TaMul wrote:

from my queue


[akreh]

1. 00:40:479 (4) - perfectly overlap on 00:39:679 (2) yup
2. 00:41:679 (4,5) - remove (5)note and one repeat (4) note Nope
3. 00:47:079 (5) - NC Ok
4. 00:48:679 (1) - finish Ok
5. 01:01:279 (11) - remove clap It sounds weird if I do o.O
6. 01:03:079 (6) - NC Ok
7. 01:06:279 (6) - ^Ok
8. 01:12:879 (7) - ^ Ok
9. 01:15:879 (6) - finish Ok
10. 01:19:279 (6) - NC Ok

that's all~.GL!

spaminabox wrote:

Servant x Akareh

00:27:479 (7,8) - The piano actually stops at the end of (6), however I have overlooked every other over map so it's not too big a concern. But delaying (7) by a quarter and changing (8) to a circle would be my way of doing it. Tried what you suggest and I don't really feel good with that, so I'll leave it as is.

00:51:879 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I would swap around the finish and the claps for this section. Okay

00:58:279 (1) - The hitsounds done in this way is just a mess when there's an regular beat I'm sorry. x.x I REALLY wanna just put claps on the red beats, however that's not possible with the map as it currently stands. I would only put claps on every white beat and then add extra claps as follows.
01:00:879 (9) - Here
01:04:479 (6) - Here
01:07:679 (7) - And here
The finishes seem to be fine. Omg, that sounds so unbealievably good. Fixed.

01:02:879 (5,1) - The jump feels slightly big, I'd put (1) to y:88 Fixed

01:25:279 (3,4) - If you want (4) centered around (3) it needs to be in the realms of 191,222 since (3) is moving as a result of the stacking. Yep, moved to 192,224. Looks bad on the editor, looks fantastic on the song itself.

Thanks a lot

I think that's me done. Gl with the ranking. ^^

spaminabox wrote:

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Here for a M4M with any luck. ^^

Normal

00:23:079 (1,2) - I would swap the new combo around to keep consistency when the finish ends on sliders.
00:32:679 (1,2) - ^
00:35:879 (1,2) - ^ I'm pretty sure I changed these because other people told me to ><

Hard

00:18:279 (1) - Add whistle. Fixed

00:31:079 (1) - Add whistle both ends of slider. Put one on the head of the slider; there was already one on the tail

00:56:479 (1,2) - I would ctrl+g it myself, it's fine as is though. Ok, I might just do that. It's not hard revert it anyway.

01:04:479 (7) - I would rather stack on top of 4, the jump to 1 should stay but it doesn't feel like it should be that far from 6. Fair call!

Insane

00:02:979 (2) - Nazi mod, Move to 372,180 Ok

00:47:679 (2) - I would ctrl+g this. Nah, I like this.

00:56:479 (1,2) - This jump feels too large, I would keep it the same as the rest. Jumps=Life

01:05:779 (4,5) - More nazi modding sorry D:, move these to x:381. It's fine, since they are directly beneath the next note.

01:16:079 (1) - The rhythm feels wrong, I'd go with something along the line of this http://puu.sh/3Ywjl.png
01:22:479 (1) - ^ I feel these are both fine, since a reliable modder told me to do it like this

I think that's me done. Gl with the ranking. ^^ ->

11t wrote:

Mod

Hello!

[Normal]

00:11:879 (3,4,5,6) - This arrangement looks a bit odd, especially in comparison to the rest of this section, which is arranged quite nicely and symmetrically. Personally I try to avoid directional changes at sharp angles during an otherwise curved hitcircle sequence. Maybe stack 5 on 6? Or try to arrange this into some sort of geometrical shape? It's good to be a bit unorthodox sometimes I think someone recommended something like this, though I could be mistaken.

00:53:079 (3) - Move to 208,152 to equalize the distance between 00:51:879 (1,3) and 00:53:079 (3,5).

00:53:679 (4) - Move to 128,24 for symmetry. Fixed both.

01:21:879 (3) - Super super nitpicky, sorry! but this slider isn't symmetrical with the rest of the diagonal sliders in this pattern. With Grid Level 4, take the endpoint of this slider, and move it two squares to the right. Or you could just take 01:20:279 (1) and CTRL+J it, or 01:18:679 (3) and CTRL+H. Hmm ok, but I think 1 square is enough.

[Hard]

Drain Rate: consider decreasing. Especially during some of the sections with less objects, it's very hard to increase the HP bar. Fair enough. HP -1.

00:06:279 (3,4) - I feel like this would work better as a repeat slider. You'd have to adjust spacing afterwards though. Ok.

00:54:179 (1) - Hard to read. You've made the spacing here smaller to help with that, but it still plays awkwardly. Maybe rework it like this?
I'll consider this, but really it warrants a new combo there.

01:04:479 (7) - Hard to read. It seems like this is because 01:04:679 (1) appears on the screen shortly after 01:04:279 (6) is hit, so the player's attention remains up here at the top, which makes it easy to miss the hidden 7-circle here. One possibility is to stack 7 on 6, but that gets rid of your jump that you have here. I stacked (7) on (4) as suggested by spaminabox.

[Insane]

Drain Rate: too high. In most parts it takes around 1/6th of the entire map of continuous perfect play to recover from a half bar. Maybe. But Hard is Hp 6, so Insane should be less lenient?

00:02:979 (2) - Move left a bit to smooth out this curve. I think I actually moved in right, again, thanks to spaminabox's mod.

01:02:079 (4) - Hard to read, since the 5-circle tends to grab the player's attention immediately after the 3-circle. Honestly I'd prefer something more like this:

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Well... alright then. It's not really vital, but sure. I guess it does flow better
This back-and-forth also prepares the player for the jumps you have right after.

[General]

Enjoyable mapset overall! Good luck with ranking! Thanks! Btw, I love your mods

Nymph wrote:

Nymph

[General]
the whole mapset except the last diff feel like lack of hitsounds at 00:03:879 and the 2nd kiai, I strongly suggest to add more hitsounds at there.

I think the 2nd kiai is better to end at 01:23:879.(actually imo the 2nd kiai really didn't feel like a kiai part....)


[Insane]
00:00:879 (2,3) - the music didn't have beats like these, they feel very uncomfortable to play with, so I suggest to remove them

00:01:479 (2,3) - same^

01:07:879 (1,1) - 01:08:479 (1) - same at here and here Fixed all.


Sorry I have some work these days and can't write a big mod, hope this can help you a little bit. Anyway I think this map can be better if you work on the hitsounds harder, maybe call me back when you think it is better and ready to go.

sheela901 wrote:

[Servant x Akareh]
01:25:479 (4) - Move to left to two grid?

CPLs wrote:

[Akareh]

01:25:579 snap to white tick

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spboxer3 wrote:

17:37 *spboxer3 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/276165 Kayano Ai, Nakahara Mai & Toyosaki Aki - May I Help You? (TV Size) [Servant x Akareh]]
17:38 spboxer3: 00:36:879 (7) - make it more down like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/962694 fixed
17:38 Unsfamiliar: That's Akareh's diff
17:39 spboxer3: can you ask him ?
17:39 Unsfamiliar: Neither Rainbow or Akareh are online >< Exams D:
17:40 spboxer3: okay www
17:41 spboxer3: 01:03:079 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ;w; I-is this bad? Do I have to do something here?

I will back when it done