1. CPLs' Hard (4.91 stars, 223 notes)
2. Easy (2.62 stars, 75 notes)
3. Hard (4.98 stars, 205 notes)
4. Insane (5 stars, 252 notes)
5. Seraphin's Normal+ (4.53 stars, 147 notes)
6. Ts8zs' Normal (4.09 stars, 113 notes)

[Seraphin] wrote:

Hi.

[Hard]
00:01:254 (4) - confusing, try something more like Fixed

this

00:09:195 (8) - Open up the .osu in notepad or similar and replace Fixed?
56,52,9195,2,0,B|64:144|132:192|176:400|388:192|176:-16|132:192|64:240|48:336,1,540
with
72,52,9195,2,0,B|72:176|72:176|184:280|268:192|188:96|72:252|72:252|72:344,1,540
see if that looks better.
00:10:607 (1,2,3) - how about spacing these out? Fixed
00:20:489 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
00:33:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - WAAAY TOO HARD Fixed
00:04:077 (2) - NC here instead of at the note before it Fixed?

Will mod other diffs once they are finished.

toloveruu wrote:

AH WHOOPS random kudos gomennasai. And sure go ahead. Someone revoke that kudosu plz

CPLs wrote:

toloveruu wrote:

AH WHOOPS random kudos gomennasai. And sure go ahead. Someone revoke that kudosu plz

tell the BAT to revoke it

or PM

oh, BTW, do you accept any GD? if you do,please take a look at my diff (this originally for my own mapset,but I can't submit anymore beatmap)

http://puu.sh/3BTKt

I'm using a custom hitsound btw,so you might hear differently

If you can't it's okay, I will submit my own set later time

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haii ~ owo)/
Request via in-game ~


[General]
- Your video has audio in it, mute it
- ハイスクールD×D NEW (Japanese title of the anime owo) can go into the tags
- This is the opening of it (? add opening and op into the tags as well


[Hard]
- Approach Rate -1
- Overall Difficulty -1
00:00:725 (3,4,5) - Slider end stack (5) with (3)

SPOILER

Heres the code if you want owo

312,120,725,2,0,P|240:104|147:148,1,180
152,60,1254,1,0,0:0:0:0:
77,14,1430,2,0,P|72:94|176:146,1,180

Make sure you delete (3,4,5) and save it, then open the .osu file and paste it under hitobjects

00:01:960 (6,7,8) - How about this?

SPOILER

00:01:960 (6) - x:256 y:196
00:02:048 (7) - x:56 y:247, middle point at x:96 y:336 and last point at x:208 y:336
00:02:489 (8) - Copy (7), ctrl + H and ctrl + G
00:03:548 (1,2) - ? ~

SPOILER

00:03:548 (1) - Middle point at x:160 y:144 and last point at x:180 y:236
00:04:077 (2) - x:80 y:208, end of the slider at x:224 y:88
00:04:783 (4) - Place where 00:03:195 (9) was placed
00:04:607 (3,4,5,6) - Make your spacing consistent
00:06:372 (1) - Slider end stack with 00:05:666 (7)

SPOILER

00:06:901 (2) - x:240 y:124
00:07:077 (3) - x:260 y:212, middle point at x:212 y:268 and last point at x:100 y:252

SPOILER

00:07:607 (4) - Place on (1)'s end
00:07:783 (5) - Copy (3), use ctrl + H and ctrl + J and move to x:76 y:148
(Might differ from yours a bit since I suggested this without stacking 00:06:372 (1)'s slider end with 00:05:666 (7), just rearrange it to look like the picture ~)
00:09:195 (8) - ~

SPOILER

Here's the code

36,72,9195,2,0,B|39:165|92:232|163:400|316:188|173:-38|62:155|49:219|32:279|32:343,1,540

May not be the best arrangment of slider points, but it's the shape you wanted xD

00:10:607 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make it like this, perhaps?

SPOILER

I'll give you the code for this one too ~

308,340,10607,6,0,P|384:264|408:176,1,180
332,148,11136,2,0,P|304:244|208:288,1,180
164,204,11666,2,0,P|244:192|196:96,1,180
148,120,12195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,172,12372,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,260,12548,1,0,0:0:0:0:

00:16:783 (7) - 3 grids up
00:17:313 (8) - 3 grids left
00:17:666 (1) - Middle point at x:328 y:76
00:21:019 (2) - Copy (1), use ctrl + J and ctrl + H and place to your liking
00:28:077 (6) - Ctrl + J and ctrl + H and move to x:192 y:256, use ctrl + G afterwards, then move the last point one grid left
00:38:136 (4) - x:96 y:52
00:38:842 (5) - x:0 y:252, middle point at x:80 y:264, and last point at x:128 y:224
00:43:783 (4) - Make it like the previous slider
00:51:901 (2,3,4) -

SPOILER

00:52:254 (3) - x:312 y:204, middle point at x:328 y:260 and last point at x:312 y:304
00:52:783 (4) - x:236 y:176
00:56:489 (7,8,1) -

SPOILER

01:04:077 (5) - x:56 y:276, middle point x:100 y:344, last point x:192 y:344
01:06:195 (2) - Copy (1) use ctrl + J and ctrl + H and place at x:68 y:304
01:17:489 (2) - Last point x:208 y:204
01:18:901 (6) - Slider end stack
01:22:695 (1) - End at 01:26:842


[Insane]
00:02:666 (6) - Make this a straight slider instead ? Or maybe something like this ~

SPOILER

00:03:548 (1,2) -

SPOILER

00:12:548 (5) - Stack
00:16:783 (6) - x:184 y:300, middle point x:260 y:356, last point x:336 y:288
00:19:607 (4) - Blanket 00:18:372 (1) (Middle point x:80 y:292, last point x:20 y:208)
00:23:313 (1) - x:408 y:132
00:34:607 (4) - Blanket (2) (Middle point x:68 y:184, last point x:72 y:92
00:35:136 (5) - Try starting a slider here and placing it where (2) was placed, middle point x:232 y:76, last point x:276 y:152
Should look like this ~

SPOILER

00:38:136 (6) - Place at x:28 y:304 and last point of the slider at x:80 y:164
00:38:842 (7) - Place at the end of (5)
00:39:548 (8) - Ctrl + G and place at x:140 y:52
00:40:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

SPOILER

Code owo

306,65,40254,6,0,P|308:140|368:192,1,146.25
392,100,40960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,180,41136,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,264,41313,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,240,41489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,144,41666,2,0,P|232:104|228:64,1,97.5

00:42:195 (7) - x:128 y:80
00:43:783 (2) - Middle point x:284 y:164, last point at x:288 y:188
00:45:548 (7) - Stack with (2)
00:51:901 (2) - x:476 y:248
00:54:901 (2) -

SPOILER

00:57:195 (1) - ? ~

SPOILER

00:58:607 (1,2,3,4,5) -

SPOILER

Here you go owo)/

400,136,58607,6,0,P|336:92|216:72,1,195
112,104,59136,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,160,59313,2,0,P|304:168|360:248,1,195
176,360,59842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,268,60019,2,0,P|268:232|260:316,1,195

01:03:195 (4) - x:428 y:16
01:03:901 (1,2,3) - ~

SPOILER

01:05:666 (1,2) - owo

SPOILER

Code

256,192,65666,6,0,P|184:156|208:24,1,195
69,118,66195,2,0,B|141:166|193:86|273:102,1,195

01:11:842 (6) - x:20 y:240
01:14:136 (5,6) - Slider end stack
01:17:489 (2) - One grid left
01:18:901 (7) - Blanket the previous slider

SPOILER

01:19:430 (8) - x:296 y:68
01:19:519 (9) - x:324 y:108
01:19:607 (10) - x:328 y:156
01:22:695 (1) - End at 01:26:842


Good luck with your map!

bryan170799 wrote:

- background image is not rankable. you need a background image of maximum 1024*768 1366x768 is rankable now:3

[Seraphin] wrote:

Mod part 2

[Insane]
00:03:195 (7,8) - move closer to (6), that jump feels out of place Fixed
00:23:842 (2) - curve? Fixed
01:15:195 (7,8,9) - try removing the 'lean' of the notes so they are straight It's fine here

NO KD

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haii ~ owo)/
Request via in-game ~


[General]
- Your video has audio in it, mute it
- ハイスクールD×D NEW (Japanese title of the anime owo) can go into the tags
- This is the opening of it (? add opening and op into the tags as well


[Hard]
- Approach Rate -1
- Overall Difficulty -1
00:00:725 (3,4,5) - Slider end stack (5) with (3)

SPOILER

Heres the code if you want owo

312,120,725,2,0,P|240:104|147:148,1,180
152,60,1254,1,0,0:0:0:0:
77,14,1430,2,0,P|72:94|176:146,1,180

Make sure you delete (3,4,5) and save it, then open the .osu file and paste it under hitobjects

00:01:960 (6,7,8) - How about this?

SPOILER

00:01:960 (6) - x:256 y:196
00:02:048 (7) - x:56 y:247, middle point at x:96 y:336 and last point at x:208 y:336
00:02:489 (8) - Copy (7), ctrl + H and ctrl + G
00:03:548 (1,2) - ? ~

SPOILER

00:03:548 (1) - Middle point at x:160 y:144 and last point at x:180 y:236
00:04:077 (2) - x:80 y:208, end of the slider at x:224 y:88
00:04:783 (4) - Place where 00:03:195 (9) was placed
00:04:607 (3,4,5,6) - Make your spacing consistent
00:06:372 (1) - Slider end stack with 00:05:666 (7)

SPOILER

00:06:901 (2) - x:240 y:124
00:07:077 (3) - x:260 y:212, middle point at x:212 y:268 and last point at x:100 y:252

SPOILER

00:07:607 (4) - Place on (1)'s end
00:07:783 (5) - Copy (3), use ctrl + H and ctrl + J and move to x:76 y:148
(Might differ from yours a bit since I suggested this without stacking 00:06:372 (1)'s slider end with 00:05:666 (7), just rearrange it to look like the picture ~)
00:09:195 (8) - ~

SPOILER

Here's the code

36,72,9195,2,0,B|39:165|92:232|163:400|316:188|173:-38|62:155|49:219|32:279|32:343,1,540

May not be the best arrangment of slider points, but it's the shape you wanted xD

00:10:607 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make it like this, perhaps?

SPOILER

I'll give you the code for this one too ~

308,340,10607,6,0,P|384:264|408:176,1,180
332,148,11136,2,0,P|304:244|208:288,1,180
164,204,11666,2,0,P|244:192|196:96,1,180
148,120,12195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,172,12372,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,260,12548,1,0,0:0:0:0:

00:16:783 (7) - 3 grids up
00:17:313 (8) - 3 grids left
00:17:666 (1) - Middle point at x:328 y:76
00:21:019 (2) - Copy (1), use ctrl + J and ctrl + H and place to your liking
00:28:077 (6) - Ctrl + J and ctrl + H and move to x:192 y:256, use ctrl + G afterwards, then move the last point one grid left
00:38:136 (4) - x:96 y:52
00:38:842 (5) - x:0 y:252, middle point at x:80 y:264, and last point at x:128 y:224
00:43:783 (4) - Make it like the previous slider
00:51:901 (2,3,4) -

SPOILER

00:52:254 (3) - x:312 y:204, middle point at x:328 y:260 and last point at x:312 y:304
00:52:783 (4) - x:236 y:176
00:56:489 (7,8,1) -

SPOILER

01:04:077 (5) - x:56 y:276, middle point x:100 y:344, last point x:192 y:344
01:06:195 (2) - Copy (1) use ctrl + J and ctrl + H and place at x:68 y:304
01:17:489 (2) - Last point x:208 y:204
01:18:901 (6) - Slider end stack
01:22:695 (1) - End at 01:26:842


[Insane]
00:02:666 (6) - Make this a straight slider instead ? Or maybe something like this ~

SPOILER

00:03:548 (1,2) -

SPOILER

00:12:548 (5) - Stack
00:16:783 (6) - x:184 y:300, middle point x:260 y:356, last point x:336 y:288
00:19:607 (4) - Blanket 00:18:372 (1) (Middle point x:80 y:292, last point x:20 y:208)
00:23:313 (1) - x:408 y:132
00:34:607 (4) - Blanket (2) (Middle point x:68 y:184, last point x:72 y:92
00:35:136 (5) - Try starting a slider here and placing it where (2) was placed, middle point x:232 y:76, last point x:276 y:152
Should look like this ~

SPOILER

00:38:136 (6) - Place at x:28 y:304 and last point of the slider at x:80 y:164
00:38:842 (7) - Place at the end of (5)
00:39:548 (8) - Ctrl + G and place at x:140 y:52
00:40:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

SPOILER

Code owo

306,65,40254,6,0,P|308:140|368:192,1,146.25
392,100,40960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,180,41136,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,264,41313,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,240,41489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,144,41666,2,0,P|232:104|228:64,1,97.5

00:42:195 (7) - x:128 y:80
00:43:783 (2) - Middle point x:284 y:164, last point at x:288 y:188
00:45:548 (7) - Stack with (2)
00:51:901 (2) - x:476 y:248
00:54:901 (2) -

SPOILER

00:57:195 (1) - ? ~

SPOILER

00:58:607 (1,2,3,4,5) -

SPOILER

Here you go owo)/

400,136,58607,6,0,P|336:92|216:72,1,195
112,104,59136,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,160,59313,2,0,P|304:168|360:248,1,195
176,360,59842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,268,60019,2,0,P|268:232|260:316,1,195

01:03:195 (4) - x:428 y:16
01:03:901 (1,2,3) - ~

SPOILER

01:05:666 (1,2) - owo

SPOILER

Code

256,192,65666,6,0,P|184:156|208:24,1,195
69,118,66195,2,0,B|141:166|193:86|273:102,1,195

01:11:842 (6) - x:20 y:240
01:14:136 (5,6) - Slider end stack
01:17:489 (2) - One grid left
01:18:901 (7) - Blanket the previous slider

SPOILER

01:19:430 (8) - x:296 y:68
01:19:519 (9) - x:324 y:108
01:19:607 (10) - x:328 y:156
01:22:695 (1) - End at 01:26:842


Good luck with your map!

ts8zs wrote:

Ts8zs' Normal

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Sympathy.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 51195
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 372,14842,26136,37077,51372,51548,62666,62842
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Sympathy
TitleUnicode:Sympathy
Artist:Larval Stage Planning
ArtistUnicode:Larval Stage Planning
Creator:toloveruu
Version:Ts8zs' Normal
Source:Highschool DxD New
Tags:
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
725,352.941176470588,4,2,0,80,1,0
51372,-100,4,1,0,70,0,1
62489,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
62666,-100,4,1,0,70,0,1
82607,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
82783,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,128
Combo2 : 128,255,128
Combo3 : 179,102,255
Combo4 : 128,255,255

[HitObjects]
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http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/865593 I think no big problem in it:3

Make Music track lead-in 1.5 seconds(Also my diff)
You can find it in "song setup"-''Audio" Do not drag it, click on it's right 3 times

Insane
01:21:107 (1,1) - Move first spinner's end to second's head and move second's head latter 1/4
01:28:077 - I think spinner end at here is better(Also move the green line:3)
Hard
00:24:372 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is not suitable for Hard,change it:3
01:28:077 - I think spinner end at here is better(Also move the green line:3)

CPLs wrote:

this is the hitsound

http://puu.sh/3CyNM.wav (soft-hitclap)

sorry late

EDIT:

I forgot one thing, this video isn't the official opening,you can find the official opening here
download at keepvid

this is the updated version of my diff : http://puu.sh/3CzmI.osu

A little things don't KD this post

[General]
-BG Size is too big, over 1MB, convert to JPG? Fixed
-video is missing on ts8zs" Normal Fixed
-on my diff so many things not fixed,there is my updated version as I mentioned above Fixed
-add some tags (metioned by some modders) Working on now
-Maybe use the video I give you above ^ ?Added

bryan170799 wrote:

hi

General
- Since this is TV size, add "(TV Size)" behind the song name Fixed
- add some tags like opening, etc. Fixed
- background image is not rankable. you need a background image of maximum 1024*768

Hard
Why is the Hard Diff setting same as insane? try this
HP : 6 CS : 4 AR : 6 OD : 6 Fixed

I'm bad at modding flow so that's all from me

CloudSplash16 wrote:

Hi

[Easy]
Circle Size -> 3 or bigger Fixed
I suggest decrease in Slider Velocity to make this easier to beginners It's already really low...
As this is Easy Diff, I suggest you keep consistent spacing (Distance Snap) Fixed
At 00:00:725 (1,2,3) - you have a full beat between 1 and 2, but half beat between 2 and 3, and kept same distance. This could be confusing. Fixed
00:12:548 (3) - Red tick might be too hard for Easy. I suggest remove the circle, and either start spinner there or extend previous slider to red tick. Fixed
00:14:842 (1) - I generally like the flow of this section
00:37:430 (1,2,3) - Distance snap. As mentioned before, and throughout this section Fixed
01:18:372 (2,3) - Is there a way to blanket this while keeping 01:19:783 (3) - aligned with 01:16:960 (1) - end? It's fine

[Ts8zs' Normal]
00:43:783 (3,5) - Stack ends better?
01:21:195 (4) - There's no beat in the music here. Perhaps make 01:20:666 (3) - not repeating slider, and make longer slider from 01:21:019 (4) - to 01:21:548 -
Extend Spinner at end to 01:28:254 -

[CPL's Hard]
This is good. I don't really have anything to say about this

[Hard]
I feel that this is too hard.
If possible, make the jumps a bit smaller.
00:07:607 (4) - Make this stack with end of 00:06:372 (1) - It's okay
00:06:901 (2) - Maybe make this stack with end of 00:07:783 (5) - ?It's okay
00:10:607 (1,2,3) - These blanket well, but I don't really think it looks good It's okay
00:22:607 (8,9,1) - This looks a bit messy. Perhaps have 8 and 9 go around 1 in blanket Fixed
00:33:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is definitely too hard for "Hard" difficulty. Fixed
00:57:195 (1,2) - Put more space between these. Stacked instead
01:09:901 (5,6,7,8) - I don't like how this looks. Fixed
01:16:960 (1,2) - This could blanket better Fixed?
01:21:107 (1) - I suggest end this spinner at 01:22:430 - and start second spinner at 01:22:607 - It's okay

[]
I'm not good enough to mod insane

Good Luck!

[Navy] wrote:

Hello~

My 1st modding..

I would make a mistake..

Hard

00:01:960 (6,7,8) - Interval is a little far for hard Fixed

00:24:724 (1,2) - Put one upon another will be great ( i think it is difficult..) Fixed
00:25:077 (3,4) - " Fixed

00:33:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - it is really good, but so hard..interval about 2/3 ? Fixed

00:57:195 (1) - What do you think about using angled slider? It's fine

01:16:254 (7,8,9,10,1) - like 00:24:724 (1,2) It's fine

Insane

00:42:813 (9,10,11) - roll in slow part will surprise people It's fine

01:02:489 (1,2,3) - Make them round will be great It's fine

01:18:019 (3,4,5) - Put one upon another roll It's fine
01:19:430 (8,9,10) - " It's fine

Insane diff is wonderful Great quality
I favorite ~
M4M please

Ekusukariba wrote:

General
There's a nipple visible at one point in the video (1:00-ish). Maybe find some way to censor it if you can? Otherwise, it'd probably be best to remove it.
You can use my MP3 from here if you want: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/104618 it's much higher quality.

Easy
00:51:548 (1) - Starts a bit late from the vocal. Move it back to 00:51:372 (1) and extend the slider to the next white tick. Fixed
01:02:842 (1) - Same here. Move it back to 01:02:666 (1) and extend to next white tick. Fixed

CPLs' Hard
00:38:842 (5) - I was expecting a clap at the beginning of this slider. Add one? It's good the way it is

Insane
00:49:342 (1) - Maybe extend the spinner so it ends on the white tick before the start of the chorus to create a more fast-paced feel. Fixed
01:08:489 (1) -Looks weird. Space it so that it isn't so close to 01:08:313 (5). Might have to move 01:09:019 (2) as well depending on where you position the first slider. Fixed

Thanks for the mod :3

Good luck with your map. (｡◕‿◕｡)

[Seraphin] wrote:

Mod part whatever
[Ts8zs' Normal]
OD +1
00:01:165 (2) - remove first half, not mapped on anything
hitsounds seem too loud
007:636 (5) - too far off the grid
01:04:165 (1) - ^

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Sympathy.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 51195
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 372,14842,26136,37077,51372,51548,62666,62842
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Sympathy (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Sympathy (TV Size)
Artist:Larval Stage Planning
ArtistUnicode:Larval Stage Planning
Creator:toloveruu
Version:Ts8zs' Normal
Source:Highschool DxD New
Tags:ハイスクールD×D NEW opening op
BeatmapID:274993
BeatmapSetID:104403

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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51372,-100,4,1,0,70,0,1
62489,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
62666,-100,4,1,0,70,0,1
82607,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
82783,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0


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Combo3 : 179,102,255
Combo4 : 128,255,255

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[Seraphin] wrote:

[CPLs's Hard]
OD +1 it's fine
00:38:888 (5,6) - a little awkward changed
00:06:065 (1,2) - stack okay
00:24:418 (3,4,5,6) - flow here doesn't feel right ctrl+g
00:33:594 (7,8,9) - ^ ^
lotsa doubles

Ekusukariba wrote:

General

CPLs' Hard
00:38:842 (5) - I was expecting a clap at the beginning of this slider. Add one? doesn't fit

[Seraphin] wrote:

Mod part whatever

[Easu] I'll just call this Easy for the hell of it :3
More like a easy+ cuz of all the 1/1 separated sliders
okay besides that

[Ts8zs' Normal]
OD +1
00:01:165 (2) - remove first half, not mapped on anything
hitsounds seem too loud
00:57:636 (5) - too far off the grid
01:04:165 (1) - ^

[CPLs's Hard]
OD +1
00:38:888 (5,6) - a little awkward
00:06:065 (1,2) - stack
00:24:418 (3,4,5,6) - flow here doesn't feel right
00:33:594 (7,8,9) - ^
lotsa doubles

Sorry about shitmod

CPLs wrote:

I will take a look later

the hitsound of my diff is not custom, please use the custom

Tari wrote:

As your request

General

[General]

1. please check the letterboxes in CPL's Hard because they don't correspond with the other diffs (missing in CPL's Hard

Easy

[Easy]

1. First off, why is the sv so fast in this diff o.o? It should be changed to 1.0 and it would make much more sense, because right now Normal has lower SV than easy, which makes me confused since easy is suppose to be easier than normal, but I'll give you a regular mod anyways, (might need to remap if you change the SV or slider velocity)
2. 00:02:224 (2) - What is this spacing? I don't understand. Either you increase spacing here, or you change the spacing here 00:03:636 (3) - (Depending on what distance snap your following change only one and make them consistent)
3. 00:14:930 (1) - Sudden change in spacing here, well I guess I can understand why, but its not recommended to do something like this because it can be confusing to beginners and hard to understand. at least add finish to signal it.
4. 00:37:518 (1) - I would say you can add a finish here, more or less to signal music change, + it sounds nice here
5. 00:37:518 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Please, if you decide to change spacing for one part, make sure they're all consistent, there like a mix of 0.3 distance snapping and 0.4 please make them all the same
6. 00:51:460 (1) - Same for here, this needs a finish too, its start of kiai
7. 01:00:989 - Oh gosh no, this part of the video needs to be blocked, too hentai
8. 00:52:342 (2,3) - Rhythm needs to be revised, something like this would work better I presume http://puu.sh/3DOU2.jpg
9. 01:03:636 (2,3) - ^
10. 01:05:754 (1,2) - Well maybe change rhythm here too, it doesn't follow vocals well enough orz
11. 01:11:401 (1) - Finish to start
12. 01:11:401 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Do consistent spacing here please, maybe confusing

Ts8zs' Normal

[Ts8zs' Normal]

1. 00:00:460 (1) - Add whistle here? it sounds good
2. 00:23:930 (4) - The clap sounds bad here? maybe remove it orz
3. 00:29:754 (2,3) - Try something else like this : http://puu.sh/3DPXS.jpg Its to make more consistent and better flow in previous section :3
4. 00:37:518 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - I'm sorry, but I think the way you put claps here sounds kinda bad, it doesn't fit with the music, or was it intentional
5. 00:57:989 (1) - I think it would be cleaner if you move the slider end so it can be stacked with 00:56:577 (3) - , I think it looks much much better and ofc cleaner
6. 00:22:695 (2,3) - The way you put these notes looks kinda messy, maybe try this : http://puu.sh/3DRn4.jpg
7. 00:28:342 (4) - Looking back, this can be made cleaner by fixing stacking issues too, try to make slider end stack with 00:26:224 (1) - slider's start position
8. 00:32:577 (2) - Move this slider so it can be better blanketed with 00:33:107 (1) - , simple fix, just move slider end down and move the slider up
9. 00:41:754 (3) - Same stacking issue here, try to make it look like this http://puu.sh/3DRuG.jpg

[box=Seraphin's Normal [color=#80FF00:d128c:d128c]Fixed all]

[Seraphin's Normal]

1. 00:35:224 (2) - Better to unstack, hard to read because it doesn't follow a particular pattern.
2. 01:00:636 (6) - ^
3. 00:44:577 (4,5) - Try to position so both slider end and circle stack to 00:42:812 (1) -
4. 01:16:166 (5,6) - ^ but stacked with 01:15:283 (3) -
5. 00:51:460 (1) - Add a finish here please
6. 00:47:401 (3) - Also might want to add NC here, you rarely have 1/2 breaks so NC would be nice
7. 01:07:695 (5) - First off, this isn't really readable and it isn't used anywhere else in the map, can you at least remove the reverse and replace it with a stacked circle?
   Not much wrong just a bit messy

Tari wrote:

As your request

Ts8zs' Normal

[Ts8zs' Normal]

1. 00:00:460 (1) - Add whistle here? it sounds good GJ
2. 00:23:930 (4) - The clap sounds bad here? maybe remove it orz maybe I need remap:3
3. 00:29:754 (2,3) - Try something else like this : http://puu.sh/3DPXS.jpg Its to make more consistent and better flow in previous section :3 doesn't sounds good
4. 00:37:518 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - I'm sorry, but I think the way you put claps here sounds kinda bad, it doesn't fit with the music, or was it intentional
5. 00:57:989 (1) - I think it would be cleaner if you move the slider end so it can be stacked with 00:56:577 (3) - , I think it looks much much better and ofc cleaner
6. 00:22:695 (2,3) - The way you put these notes looks kinda messy, maybe try this : http://puu.sh/3DRn4.jpg
7. 00:28:342 (4) - Looking back, this can be made cleaner by fixing stacking issues too, try to make slider end stack with 00:26:224 (1) - slider's start position
8. 00:32:577 (2) - Move this slider so it can be better blanketed with 00:33:107 (1) - , simple fix, just move slider end down and move the slider up
9. 00:41:754 (3) - Same stacking issue here, try to make it look like this http://puu.sh/3DRuG.jpg

other all fixed:3
Map could for sure use more mods orz

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 51371
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

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Title:Sympathy (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Sympathy (TV Size)
Artist:Larval Stage Planning
ArtistUnicode:Larval Stage Planning
Creator:toloveruu
Version:Ts8zs' Normal
Source:Highschool DxD New
Tags:ハイスクールD×D NEW opening op c.g mix
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
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224,136,79871,6,0,L|176:88,2,55,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,168,80401,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,240,80754,2,0,L|176:264,1,55
200,256,81107,2,0,P|268:272|368:240,1,165,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,208,81989,2,0,L|480:272,2,55
416,104,82695,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82871,12,0,88342,0:0:0:0:

Tari wrote:

CPL's Hard

[CPL's Hard]

1. 00:00:460 (1,2) - Replace with slider, you can't have two notes before a timing line (how are people suppose to click accurately) done
2. 00:19:518 (5,6) - Way too much stacking going around here, can you try to replace with slider? would feel alot better to me and less boring / repetitive to players done
3. 00:24:636 (4) - Instrumental parts should have there own combo, so adding a new combo here would be a good idea done
4. 00:36:107 (5) - ^ to keep your combo's the same done
5. 00:40:342 (9) - Add whistle to start? it sounds nice done
6. 00:41:754 (4) - ^ done
7. 00:44:577 (5) - ^ done
8. 00:45:989 (9) - ^ done
9. 00:48:812 (7) - Really should be a finish or a whistle to the start of this slider, this beat is strong. finish
   The kiai could use more finish / whistle usage. kinda lacks hitsounds in that part done,finish

CPLs wrote:

Tari wrote:

CPL's Hard

[CPL's Hard]

1. 00:00:460 (1,2) - Replace with slider, you can't have two notes before a timing line (how are people suppose to click accurately) done
2. 00:19:518 (5,6) - Way too much stacking going around here, can you try to replace with slider? would feel alot better to me and less boring / repetitive to players done
3. 00:24:636 (4) - Instrumental parts should have there own combo, so adding a new combo here would be a good idea done
4. 00:36:107 (5) - ^ to keep your combo's the same done
5. 00:40:342 (9) - Add whistle to start? it sounds nice done
6. 00:41:754 (4) - ^ done
7. 00:44:577 (5) - ^ done
8. 00:45:989 (9) - ^ done
9. 00:48:812 (7) - Really should be a finish or a whistle to the start of this slider, this beat is strong. finish
   The kiai could use more finish / whistle usage. kinda lacks hitsounds in that part done,finish

updated
http://puu.sh/3E9JV.osu

@toloveruu
btw why do you changed the offset again? 813 is good for me...

toloveruu wrote:

Changed it because you "can't hit notes accurately" before the timing point

CPLs wrote:

toloveruu wrote:

Changed it because you "can't hit notes accurately" before the timing point

you can change back to 813, I believe I have changed it to sider so player can hit more accurately

about letterbox, you can turn it off at : Song Setup --> Design --> Uncheck all box (if checked) Done

EDIT:

please ensure the video is included in all diff Done

I have timing suggestion, if you don't want to change back,it's okay,but I think it should be changed (well,its up to you anyway)

813
460

Yales wrote:

Insane.

That's a nice map.
Almost everything I wanted to mod is already done ^^.

I would just say one thing:
00:48:811 (4) - I think it would be nice to put this slider 1x velocity and put it 1 tick bigger... (somthing like this : http://puu.sh/3F1ml.jpg if you like). Its good right now

Besides I think that :
00:00:811 (3) - 00:01:517 (4) - 00:02:223 (5) - 00:02:752 (6) - 00:03:635 (1) - Are a bit too fast for the beginning. x0.75~ looks quite nice but then there's a problem with the size of 00:02:223 (5) - Also: 00:03:282 (7) - this note would be too much.
I don't know what you think about it, but I quite like it x) ! It makes a little speration between this first "slow" part where every notes are close and the second part (x1 velocity) when it starts to be a little more jumpy... Its fine here too

Hope you like it
Sorry if not .

Good job ~

CPLs wrote:

plz update

http://puu.sh/3FJOc.osu

added more sounds

- Melody wrote:

~M4M // Only ; Easy/Normal/Hard


Easy;
In Easy you MUST use the DS! I turned it on and there were no problems >.<

00:12:105 (5,1) - That spinner comes too fast for beginner, cut it Moved back a little
01:00:105 (3,1) - ^ Moved back a little
01:19:870 (5,1,1) - ^^ Moved back a little
00:29:047 (1) - That stacks with 00:30:458 (3) - Remove it to another pattern Supposed to look like that
00:58:694 (2,3) - Don't stack them Fixed
01:04:341 (3) - Stacks with 01:05:752 (1) Supposed to look like that
01:18:458 (4,5) - Never overlay Slider in Easy, it's confusing for beginner! Fixed

Ts8zs' Normal

00:10:694 (1) - Make Circles instead Slider? (More Challenging)
00:24:988 (2) - ^
00:28:341 (4) - ^
00:36:811 (3) - ^
01:01:164 (3) - ^

Hard ;


00:31:870 (1) - Remove it to another place it looks so simple-minded This is good
00:34:870 (6,7,8) - Remove it to another place Same here


~Done
~Good Luck

- Melody wrote:

Ts8zs' Normal

00:10:694 (1) - Make Circles instead Slider? (More Challenging)
00:24:988 (2) - ^
00:28:341 (4) - ^
00:36:811 (3) - ^
01:01:164 (3) - ^

~Good Luck

[Seraphin] wrote:

A BAT needs to come here and bubble this

Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

* No complaints in General.

[Easy]
00:23:399 (1,2) - Could unglue a bit more this sliders, doing something like → http://puu.sh/3HmQo.jpg

[Ts8zs' Normal]
* No complaints here ^^

[Seraphin's Normal+]
00:21:811 (3,4,5,6) - Inintuitively wrong and combobreaker spacing between (5) and (6). Could make it better if doing something like → http://puu.sh/3Hn8X.jpg → with stacking (5) with (6)'s head.

[CPL's Hard]
00:27:988 (5,6,7,8,9) - This flow could be improved a bit doing the following steps:

1. Moving 00:28:164 (6) to x:456 y:152 (stacking with (9)'s head)
2. Doing ctrl+G on 00:28:341 (7,8) to invert them.
3. Doing Ctrl+G on 00:28:164 (6,7) to invert them

[Hard]
00:09:282 (8) - Just move the 4th node to x:188 y:368, so you will get a nicer loop (: Probably you'll get a problem here because this 4th node overlaps the bookmark selector on bottom (it will confuse you if you try doing this by hand), so take the code and change it on Notepad instead (:

36,72,9282,2,0,B|39:165|92:232|188:368|316:188|176:-44|62:155|49:219|32:279|32:343,1,540,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Insane]
* No complaints here ^^
♥ I loved the whistles you made here in the calm part ^^ very nice ♥

Alarido wrote:

Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND V

Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

* No complaints in General.

[Easy]
00:23:399 (1,2) - Could unglue a bit more this sliders, doing something like → http://puu.sh/3HmQo.jpg Fixed

[Ts8zs' Normal]
* No complaints here ^^

[Seraphin's Normal+]
00:21:811 (3,4,5,6) - Inintuitively wrong and combobreaker spacing between (5) and (6). Could make it better if doing something like → http://puu.sh/3Hn8X.jpg → with stacking (5) with (6)'s head. Fixed

[CPL's Hard]
00:27:988 (5,6,7,8,9) - This flow could be improved a bit doing the following steps:

1. Moving 00:28:164 (6) to x:456 y:152 (stacking with (9)'s head)
2. Doing ctrl+G on 00:28:341 (7,8) to invert them.
3. Doing Ctrl+G on 00:28:164 (6,7) to invert them

[Hard]
00:09:282 (8) - Just move the 4th node to x:188 y:368, so you will get a nicer loop (: Probably you'll get a problem here because this 4th node overlaps the bookmark selector on bottom (it will confuse you if you try doing this by hand), so take the code and change it on Notepad instead (: Fixed

36,72,9282,2,0,B|39:165|92:232|188:368|316:188|176:-44|62:155|49:219|32:279|32:343,1,540,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Insane]
* No complaints here ^^
♥ I loved the whistles you made here in the calm part ^^ very nice ♥

And thaaat s it ^^

GOOD LUCK on ranking this ^^ and Take a Star!!! (the first on the day ^^)

Att.

[ Sana ] wrote:

Hi from my queue~

[CPL'S Hard]
00:27:988 (5,6,7,8,9) - confusing.
00:53:399 (8,9,10,11) - i advice this rythm

use 3/4 slider reverse

00:56:576 (6,8) - make them same shape
01:20:752 (5,6,1) -

change like this

[Hard]
00:34:870 (6,7,8) - find another place

like this

Supposed to be like this


[Insane]
00:10:694 (5) - make it more beautiful Nah
00:16:341 (5) - ^ Nope
00:42:899 (9,11) - remove Fixed


GL

[ Sana ] wrote:

Hi from my queue~

[CPL'S Hard]
00:27:988 (5,6,7,8,9) - confusing. not really, it flows good
00:53:399 (8,9,10,11) - i advice this rythm

use 3/4 slider reverse

done
00:56:576 (6,8) - make them same shape done
01:20:752 (5,6,1) -

change like this

doesn't fit..

Unsfamiliar wrote:

Hiya! From my modding queue thingo. Let's go:


Ts8zs' Normal
00:12:105 (2) - Maybe add another reverse to this slider so that a note rings out on that lyric at the end of the intro. Then obviously shorten that spinner 00:12:635 (1) by 1/2 a beat. not a good idea XD

Unsfamiliar wrote:

Hiya! From my modding queue thingo. Let's go:

CPL's Hard
00:53:399 (8) - Shorten this slider by a half note (same length as the one before it) and add a note here 00:53:752. It flows better this way, imo, since it follows the previous note and quicker lyrics. For example, a longer slider would be appropriate as you already have at 00:54:458 (1). no slider here..
00:57:282 (8) - Delete this slider and change this note 00:57:105 (7) into a slider that last for a whole beat like the previous slider.This is because the long lyric actually starts here. Then add a note here 00:57:635 with the clap. okay
01:21:105 - I can't help but feel that there needs to be a note here... fine

Unsfamiliar wrote:

Hiya! From my modding queue thingo. Let's go:


Ts8zs' Normal
00:12:105 (2) - Maybe add another reverse to this slider so that a note rings out on that lyric at the end of the intro. Then obviously shorten that spinner 00:12:635 (1) by 1/2 a beat.

Seraphin's Normal+
01:09:988 (4,5,6) - Why is this combo further than all the others? Is it reasonable to expect something like this in normal? I wouldn't know, I don't really play normal. It's just the spacing has been pretty consistent throughout the rest of the song, only that part... Fixed

CPL's Hard
00:53:399 (8) - Shorten this slider by a half note (same length as the one before it) and add a note here 00:53:752. It flows better this way, imo, since it follows the previous note and quicker lyrics. For example, a longer slider would be appropriate as you already have at 00:54:458 (1).
00:57:282 (8) - Delete this slider and change this note 00:57:105 (7) into a slider that last for a whole beat like the previous slider.This is because the long lyric actually starts here. Then add a note here 00:57:635 with the clap.
01:21:105 - I can't help but feel that there needs to be a note here...

Hard
00:43:870 (4) - Maybe shorten this slider 2 ticks, then add a note here 00:44:399 ? It's fine
00:45:635 (9,1) - These are probably too close. I mean, there is a whole beat in between the two combos. Fixed

Insane
00:19:694 (4) - This doesn't seem equidistant like the previous square formations It's fine
00:52:694 (5,1) - Probably too close? It's fine
00:54:458 (1,2) - ^ It's fine
01:20:576 (5) - The head of this slider isn't aligned in the star formation Fixed
01:21:194 (1) - 01:22:694 - This isn't anything too significant, but I think adding a few extra notes during this period instead of a spinner would be more appropriate. The other difficulties are the same except for Ts8zs' Normal. It's fine

Nicely done! Wasn't really much to be fixed, guess I was just nitpicking

Anyway, hope you find some of my suggestions helpful. Good luck.

Ciao~

CPLs wrote:

plz update mine

link is above ^^^

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Can I make a Guest Difficulty? ._. I'm in love with this song :c

Papysh wrote:

Hi, Papysh here (with late mod)
Also sorry for not modding GDs at the moment i may mod them later

Easy

1. 00:12:105 (5) - Maybe curve that a bit http://puu.sh/41RtL/1f5271351e.jpg I like it the way it is.
2. 00:09:282 (3) - Spacin g is broken here but you can fix it easily Just move the 00:09:282 (3,4,5) - A bit down Due to spacing X0,5 or X0,6 Fixed?
3. 00:53:752 (4) - Maybe rotate it a bit so it can look better with 00:52:341 (2,3) - It's fine
4. 01:03:635 (2) - Please avoit that close touchingFixed
5. 01:02:752 (1) - Make kiai start at this red tick Nope
6. 01:00:105 (3) - Make kiai stop at the tail of this slider Nope

Hard

1. Please us same kiai times as i typed in Easy
2. 00:12:105 (2) - You can ctrl G here for flow and jump to next notesIt's fine
3. 00:33:988 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Really confusing part for me maybe try to remap that Spaced out a little
4. 01:18:282 (4) - Move it higher Okay

Insane

1. Please the kiai like on easy
2. 00:16:341 (5) - Ctrl H on it would make it better with 00:16:870 (6) - Nah
3. 00:24:458 (3) - Maybe NC here just to make it less confusing partOk
4. And i had more sugestions but all of them were nazi so no ;-;

Good luck

CPLs wrote:

ooh I miss this thread