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OEvil

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OEvil 2013-06-09T16:36:22+00:00

Mod Request!~

[Normal]

Edits:
- 1/3 of the map is kiai time. Consider reducing this

[Hard]

Edits:
- 1/3 of the map is kiai time. Consider reducing this
- 00:10:040 (1) - Remove this circle.
- 00:10:290 (2) - Remove this circle.
- 00:10:040 - Add a slider from here until 00:10:290, with a NC.
- 00:10:790 (4) - Remove this circle.
- 00:11:040 (5) - Remove this circle.
- 00:10:790 - Add a slider from here until 00:11:040.
- 00:27:040 (3) - Remove this circle.
- 00:27:290 (4) - Remove this circle.
- 00:27:040 - Add a slider from here until 00:27:290.
- 01:08:540 (1) - Remove this circle.
- 01:08:790 (2) - Remove this circle.
- 01:08:540 - Add a slider from here until 01:08:790, with a NC. Like This: http://puu.sh/3bRfx.jpg
- 01:12:290 (1) - Remove this circle.
- 01:12:540 (2) - Add NC.
- 01:15:040 (3) - Remove this circle.
- 01:15:290 (4) - Remove this circle.
- 01:15:040 - Add a slider from here until 01:15:290.
- 02:58:540 (1) - Move to {x:196 y:184}
- 02:58:790 (2) - Move to {x:304 y:100}.
- 02:59:040 (3) - Remove this circle.
- 02:59:290 (4) - Remove this circle.
- 02:59:040 - Add a slider from here until 02:59:290.
- 02:58:540 (1,2,3) - ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ Make This like this ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ : http://puu.sh/3bRtx.jpg ↑↑
- 03:07:290 (4) - Remove this circle.
- 03:07:540 (5) - Remove this circle.
- 03:07:290 - Add a slider from here until here 03:07:540.

I Hope You Like My Mod

Dark_Ai

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Dark_Ai 2013-06-09T19:28:37+00:00

OEvil

OEvil wrote:
Mod Request!~

[Normal]
Edits:
- 1/3 of the map is kiai time. Consider reducing this I dont think this is a problem

[Hard]
Edits:
- 1/3 of the map is kiai time. Consider reducing this
- 00:10:040 (1) - Remove this circle.
- 00:10:290 (2) - Remove this circle.
- 00:10:040 - Add a slider from here until 00:10:290, with a NC.well okay
- 00:10:790 (4) - Remove this circle.
- 00:11:040 (5) - Remove this circle.
- 00:10:790 - Add a slider from here until 00:11:040. okay
- 00:27:040 (3) - Remove this circle.
- 00:27:290 (4) - Remove this circle.
- 00:27:040 - Add a slider from here until 00:27:290. no I like it like this way
- 01:08:540 (1) - Remove this circle.
- 01:08:790 (2) - Remove this circle.
- 01:08:540 - Add a slider from here until 01:08:790, with a NC. Like This: http://puu.sh/3bRfx.jpg I dont like it ><
- 01:12:290 (1) - Remove this circle. ^
- 01:12:540 (2) - Add NC. ^
- 01:15:040 (3) - Remove this circle.
- 01:15:290 (4) - Remove this circle.
- 01:15:040 - Add a slider from here until 01:15:290. I think same as above
- 02:58:540 (1) - Move to {x:196 y:184}
- 02:58:790 (2) - Move to {x:304 y:100}. hmm okay
- 02:59:040 (3) - Remove this circle.
- 02:59:290 (4) - Remove this circle.
- 02:59:040 - Add a slider from here until 02:59:290.
- 02:58:540 (1,2,3) - ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ Make This like this ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ : http://puu.sh/3bRtx.jpg ↑↑
- 03:07:290 (4) - Remove this circle.
- 03:07:540 (5) - Remove this circle.
- 03:07:290 - Add a slider from here until here 03:07:540. I dont really like these suggestions gomen >< so no change :c

I Hope You Like My Mod

Thank you for your mod

Updated ~

tiper

tiper 2013-06-10T17:19:33+00:00

[Hard]

I don't sure but some notes seem to be off for me.
Maybe I ain't right but check this diff and I think you'll find some hidden vocal beats which are landing on 1\3 ticks
00:33:540 (3) - nc, cuz there's new vocal line starting?
00:42:040 (5) - ^
00:45:790 (1) - rnc
00:46:040 (2) - nc because of same reasons
01:18:790 (2,3) - ctrl+G both. This flow looks better for me
01:22:290 (1) - rnc
01:22:540 (2) - nc
02:20:290 (1) - rnc
02:20:540 (2) - nc
03:04:290 (1,2) - rnc (1), nc (2)
Looks like a pretty good relax-diff. The main problem is in missnapped notes but as I said I don't sure. Just check them out(f.e. some of 1\4 ticks).

[Normal]

Can't say a lot. Pretty nice Normal. :>

Dark_Ai

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Dark_Ai 2013-06-10T18:29:31+00:00

well changed everything you pointed out C:
Thank you for your mod

Updated ~

Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2013-06-10T19:42:19+00:00

Hi :3 mod as requested

irc

03:11 Zero__wind: hi hi ~
03:11 Zero__wind: If it's ok for me to simply irc mod for you ?
03:11 Dark_Ai: okay
03:12 Zero__wind: fine, I'm just about to check it out and found you editing
03:12 *Zero__wind is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/258816 Hyun A - Ice Cream [Hard]]
03:12 Zero__wind: 00:09:540 (4) - clap at end
03:13 Zero__wind: 00:12:290 (1,2) - maybe don't let 1's tail touch 2's head and that would looks better, forget about the distance snap ?
03:13 Zero__wind: After all ths is Hard
03:14 Zero__wind: it's up to you
03:15 Zero__wind: maybe a default soft finish on head sounds nice for 00:16:290 (1) -
03:16 Zero__wind: 00:36:290 (4,5) - recommend to stack, for this is the first time this kind of rhythm appears
03:16 Zero__wind: 00:38:540 (2,3,4) - while this one is ok imo
03:17 Zero__wind: maybe NC on 00:58:290 (8) - instead of 00:59:040 (1) -
03:18 Dark_Ai: still Hard?
03:18 Zero__wind: and 01:01:040 (1) - this NC is not really neccessary
03:18 Zero__wind: yeah
03:18 Zero__wind: 01:18:790 (2) - clap on head
03:19 Zero__wind: maybe add a note at 01:24:915 - to form a tripple
03:19 Zero__wind: for the current rhythm don't follow the vocal
03:20 Dark_Ai: 01:01:040 (1) - I think I wont change this ^^
03:20 Zero__wind: fine
03:20 Zero__wind: It's also ok for me
03:20 Dark_Ai: okay
03:21 Zero__wind: maybe simply split 01:31:165 (4) - into two circles would be easier for hard-lever playrers to handle
03:22 Zero__wind: maybe consider to move NC from 01:52:040 (1) - to 01:52:290 (2) - for the down beat lands on (2)
03:22 Zero__wind: It's ok for you to keep it, following the vocal
03:23 Dark_Ai: ok
03:25 Zero__wind: eh ? why is that I found no claps for the last kiai
03:25 Zero__wind: oh no, not the whole part
03:25 Zero__wind: clap on 02:56:790 (2) -
03:25 Dark_Ai: o.O
03:25 Zero__wind: 02:57:790 (5) -
03:25 Dark_Ai: oh forgot to add after remake this part xD
03:25 Zero__wind: ~~
03:26 Zero__wind: I was wondering if my ears went wrong
03:26 Zero__wind: noting wrong ~
03:26 Zero__wind: nothing*
03:26 Zero__wind: then...
03:26 *Zero__wind is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/258817 Hyun A - Ice Cream [Normal]]
03:27 Zero__wind: oh let me wind back =.= a little more for the Hard diff
03:28 Zero__wind: 00:14:040 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - maybe add some whistles for this part
03:28 Zero__wind: just like what you did in Normal ?
03:28 Zero__wind: It really sounds nice, when I checked this part in Normal
03:29 Zero__wind: ok,, this time it's really for Normal
03:29 *Zero__wind is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/258817 Hyun A - Ice Cream [Normal]]
03:30 Zero__wind: maybe also add NC on 00:32:290 (2) - if you want to keep the NC on 00:31:790 (1) -
03:30 Zero__wind: it's up to you
03:30 Zero__wind: clap 00:43:790 (2) -
03:32 Zero__wind: maybe add notes at points like 01:07:540 - and 01:15:540 - to bring some variety to the rhythm
03:32 Zero__wind: drum whistle at 01:21:290 (2) - 's end ? because you used it on 01:20:290 (1) -
03:33 Zero__wind: also maybe add drum whistle on 01:23:290 (4) - 's end
03:33 Zero__wind: of course, if you just want to only use for once, it's ok
03:33 Zero__wind: or you can use it as pattern for this part, till the break time
03:34 Dark_Ai: changed ^^
03:35 Zero__wind: also for the part from this point on 02:24:290 (1) - ~
03:36 Zero__wind: maybe somehow add a finish on the last note ? 02:40:290 (6) -
03:36 Zero__wind: custom one or default one is up to your choice
03:38 Zero__wind: oops also I seem forget to say, you may add finishes at all the first down beat of each kiai part
03:38 Zero__wind: also in Hard diff
03:38 Zero__wind: do what you like
03:38 Dark_Ai: hmm :/
03:38 Zero__wind: and no other critical stuffs found ~
03:38 Zero__wind: quite good song and map :3
03:39 Dark_Ai: ah thank you >o<

Good luck~
＊

Dark_Ai

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Dark_Ai 2013-06-10T19:46:06+00:00

Thank you for star and mod :3

Updated ~

RikiH_

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RikiH_ 2013-06-13T09:57:17+00:00

Chyo-Kun asked me to mod this.

Normal

00:16:290 (1) - Add a finish or a clap on this note, it feels empty at the moment
00:31:790 (1) - Is this NC really necessary?
01:04:290 (1) - The same as above, you should add an hitsound here
01:10:290 (3,1) - Fix the stack, they are not perfectly stacked
01:35:290 (5,6) - You can curve the slider and move the following note just a bit, for a better flow

02:06:290 (2,4) - Try to add whistles on these notes. If you like it, you should apply this in all similar parts of the song in all diffs
02:18:790 (4) - 208|68 for a better flow
02:20:790 (2) - This way for a better flow

02:56:290 (1) - Add an hitsound here please
03:10:790 (5) - For a better flow:

Hard

00:00:290 (1) - I'd put an hitsound at the beginning, maybe a finish
00:15:790 (7) - Whistle at the beginning? If you do it, apply this in all similar parts of the song and in al diffs
00:31:790 (1,2) - Actually this blanket is a bit ugly...
01:01:040 (1) - Uhm, whistle at the end?
01:19:790 (4) - I'd use ctrl+g here
01:20:540 (2) - Well, this is 1/4. I suggest you to use a 1/4 slider with a repeat instead of 1/2 that sounds a bit odd
01:28:665 (1) - I really think this should start 1/4 later, so move the slider 1/4 later, and move the clap from the end to the beginning
01:31:040 (3,5) - Delete these notes. The rhythm will improve in my opinion but it's your choose
01:50:290 - I'm not an expert but I think the blue pause is supposed to be snapped on the tick
02:32:665 (1) - Same as 01:28:665 (1)
02:34:790 (1,2,3,4) - For the rhythm: Delete (3) and replace (4) with a note in 02:35:165
02:54:290 - Same as 01:50:290 (I'm not sure about this anyways)
02:57:290 (4,5) - Improve this blanket

_______________________

Nice map, take a star. Bye

Roxas

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Roxas 2013-06-13T20:16:21+00:00

I'll melt you with this mod rawwr /me runs xD

[General]
Nothing to see

[Normal]
00:33:040 (2) - Delete this?
01:50:290 - Adjust here

02:16:290 (1,2) - Make a thing like this

SPOILER

02:54:290 - Do as 01:50:290 -

[Hard]
01:01:040 (1) - You really need NC here? There aren't SV changes or huge jumps...
01:37:040 - Do as normal
01:50:290 - Same as I said in normal
01:51:790 (1,2) - Change with a slider?
02:02:790 (4) - Move like here

SPOILER

02:54:290 - Do as 01:50:290 -

Star for the baka ♥

Dark_Ai

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Dark_Ai 2013-06-14T13:38:37+00:00

RikiH_

RikiH_ wrote:
Chyo-Kun asked me to mod this. :3

Normal

00:16:290 (1) - Add a finish or a clap on this note, it feels empty at the moment okay
00:31:790 (1) - Is this NC really necessary? hmm I deleted the next one
01:04:290 (1) - The same as above, you should add an hitsound here okay
01:10:290 (3,1) - Fix the stack, they are not perfectly stacked huh o.o
01:35:290 (5,6) - You can curve the slider and move the following note just a bit, for a better flow okay
SPOILER
02:06:290 (2,4) - Try to add whistles on these notes. If you like it, you should apply this in all similar parts of the song in all diffs I dont think it need :/
02:18:790 (4) - 208|68 for a better flow okay
02:20:790 (2) - This way for a better flow well i like it so no change here
SPOILER
02:56:290 (1) - Add an hitsound here please hmmkay
03:10:790 (5) - For a better flow: changed
SPOILER

Hard

00:00:290 (1) - I'd put an hitsound at the beginning, maybe a finish ok
00:15:790 (7) - Whistle at the beginning? If you do it, apply this in all similar parts of the song and in al diffs I dont think it need
00:31:790 (1,2) - Actually this blanket is a bit ugly... I think its okay
01:01:040 (1) - Uhm, whistle at the end? ok
01:19:790 (4) - I'd use ctrl+g here hmmm well okay
01:20:540 (2) - Well, this is 1/4. I suggest you to use a 1/4 slider with a repeat instead of 1/2 that sounds a bit odd changed
01:28:665 (1) - I really think this should start 1/4 later, so move the slider 1/4 later, and move the clap from the end to the beginning ok
01:31:040 (3,5) - Delete these notes. The rhythm will improve in my opinion but it's your choose sounds good
01:50:290 - I'm not an expert but I think the blue pause is supposed to be snapped on the tick yep changed
02:32:665 (1) - Same as 01:28:665 (1) changed
02:34:790 (1,2,3,4) - For the rhythm: Delete (3) and replace (4) with a note in 02:35:165 changed
02:54:290 - Same as 01:50:290 (I'm not sure about this anyways) changed
02:57:290 (4,5) - Improve this blanket ok

_______________________

Nice map, take a star. Bye Thank you very much for the mod and star ~ :3

Hentai prince o3o

Roxas wrote:
I'll melt you with this mod rawwr /me runs xD haarrr owo

[General]
Nothing to see

[Normal]
00:33:040 (2) - Delete this? hmm I like it like now :c
01:50:290 - Adjust here Okay
02:16:290 (1,2) - Make a thing like this okay tried my best
SPOILER
02:54:290 - Do as 01:50:290 - okay

[Hard]
01:01:040 (1) - You really need NC here? There aren't SV changes or huge jumps... changed =w=
01:37:040 - Do as normal okay
01:50:290 - Same as I said in normal already change from the preview mod
01:51:790 (1,2) - Change with a slider? okay
02:02:790 (4) - Move like here changed
SPOILER
02:54:290 - Do as 01:50:290 - same as above

Star for the baka ♥ Thank you >w< baka hentai prince ♥ o3o

Updated ~ :3

aabc271

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aabc271 2013-06-16T13:30:28+00:00

As requested by Dark_Ai, I'm coming for a solo mod ~
I seldom mod solo diffs so don't expect a very good mod > <
Anyway, let's go :3

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[

Hard]

01:19:290 ( 3 ) - Maybe remove this clap ? imo it stands out the music a lot and sounds a bit odd.

01:20:540 ( 2~5 ) - Although it's clear that it's a 1/4, I notice some spacing inconsistencies here, eg x1.17, x0.92. Maybe you'll want to fix that ?
02:01:040 ( 3~5 ) - ^, maybe move 5 to (53,205) ?
02:24:540 ( 1~6 ) - ^
02:26:540 ( 1~5 ) - ^, maybe move 4 and 5 to (330,70), (370,214) respectively ?

02:08:290 ( 1~2 ) - Maybe it's me, but I think 2 is not blanketing 1 perfectly ? Maybe you can try the following ?

272,140,128290,6,0,L|345:195,1,90
326,284,128790,2,0,P|412:266|436:187,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

02:14:290 ( 1~4 ) - I wonder if it's me, but imo 3 is too close to 1 and should be moved a bit upwards ? If so, move 4 as well.

I like the flow of the diff :3
Overall nicely-made, so can't mod much ;w;

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[

Normal]

00:09:790 ( 3 ) - Maybe 1 grid left to fit the spacing with 00:10:790 ( 2,3 ) ?

00:26:290 ( 3~5 ) - imo the placement of 3,4 doesn't really fit the coming 5. Maybe move 4 to (274,311) ?

00:32:290 ( 2~4 ) - The spacing isn't so consistent ? I'd prefer moving 3 a bit further from 2

03:07:290 ( 5,1,2 ) - I guess 5,2 can be further improved in terms of symmetry ( ctrl+j )

Also overall nice.
I like how the styles of normal and hard are similar but both work well :3

-----------------------

That's it. I think this mapset should be ready to go

Don't slap me if my mod is not useful. I'm new to solo modding

Anyway, good luck on your map ~

Dark_Ai

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Topic Starter

Dark_Ai 2013-06-16T20:25:12+00:00

changed everything ~
Thank you for your mod :3

Updated ~

Konei

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Konei 2013-06-19T18:13:33+00:00

Editing with a mod o.o

Faust

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Faust 2013-06-29T11:34:23+00:00

Hi.

So I've taken a look-through. Just there are just some things I thought are worth noting.

Normal:

Fulfills itself as a pretty solid difficulty, nothing awkward here.

- 00:02:790 (4) - Nudge the middle slider-point up by 1 grid ? Haha.

Hard:

- 01:04:790 (2) - Shift 1 grid up.

- 02:29:040 (2) - Can tell you're aiming to simplify things while ending on the downbeat.

Here a suggestion I have:

SPOILER

- 02:31:290 (4) - End this slider at - 02:31:665 - and make a repeat, then place a note at - 02:32:290 - ?

Everything is alright. I'll wait on Konei for the mod update.

Don't need to kd this post.

Dark_Ai

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Dark_Ai 2013-06-29T12:17:33+00:00

Changed everything except your last suggestion >< I like this way like it is now :3

Thank you for your check :3 ~~Fasu-chan~~ Faust ><
seem like Konei doesnt have much time imo ;__;

Updated ~

Pink Agate

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Pink Agate 2013-07-03T02:07:21+00:00

circle skin in your map

cilcle skin in my map

And why are they so similar? Are you use my cirlce skin

Faust

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Faust 2013-07-06T13:27:33+00:00

Let me know if Konei is still willing to make a mod post.

Konei

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Konei 2013-07-06T17:59:03+00:00

IRC log

19:25 Dark_Ai: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/135773&p=2413063#p2413063 :( hey 
19:28 Konei: alright, ich mach mich jetzt sofort ran
19:29 Konei: irc?
19:29 Dark_Ai: okay
19:29 Dark_Ai: :D
19:30 Konei: Normal, ok? :3
19:31 Dark_Ai: Okay :33
19:31 Konei: 00:24:290 (1) - Missing hitsound on start? Finish denke ich
19:32 Konei: 00:30:790 (2) - Vielleicht addest du noch einen clap, wﾃｼrde den Rhythmus halten, auch wenn es kaum hﾃｶrbar ist
19:33 Konei: 00:42:290 (1) - Missing clap on repeat
19:33 Konei: 00:53:290 (2) - Missing clap on end
19:33 Dark_Ai: da ist clap
19:34 Konei: ehh? dann habe ich ihn vermutlich irgendwie gelﾃｶscht
19:35 Dark_Ai: wahrscheinlich xD
19:35 Konei: 01:52:290 (1) - Missing hitsound on start?
19:36 Konei: 02:08:290 (1) - Missing finish on start
19:37 Konei: 02:16:290 (1) - Same?
19:37 Dark_Ai: ok
19:40 Konei: Ok, nur die paar Hitsounds
19:40 Konei: let's see Hard
19:40 Dark_Ai: gut :3
19:41 Konei: Hast du dich wegen des Starratings versichert? Normal hat 3,07 und die Ranking Kriterien empfehlen eine Diff mit weniger als 3,0 starrating
19:42 Dark_Ai: nein also bist jetzt hat niemand was gesagt 
19:42 Konei: hm okay okay, wollte nur Drama unranking vorbeugen
19:43 Konei: 00:31:790 (1) - delete NC, add it on 2 and remove it on 00:33:540 - , das passt besser zu den Downbeats
19:44 Dark_Ai: 00:33:540 - ? 
19:44 Konei: 00:33:540 (1) -
19:45 Dark_Ai: okay 
19:45 Dark_Ai: naja bin mal kurz weg lass dein mod einfach hier okay ^^
19:45 Dark_Ai: cucu
19:45 Konei: alles klar :o
19:46 Konei: 01:04:290 (1) - Missing finish on start
19:46 Konei: 01:09:790 (1) - Remove NC, add it on 2
19:47 Konei: 01:22:290 (8) - add NC here, remove it on the next note
19:48 Konei: 01:36:290 (1) - add a finish or something? Sounds too strong to leave it empty
19:49 Konei: 02:08:290 (1) - Missing finish on the start
19:51 Konei: 02:28:915 - add a note to follow the vocal, du hast es in den frﾃｼheren parts auch getan, also hilft es, das Ganze konstant zu halten
19:52 Konei: 02:40:286 (1) - Vielleicht setzt du hier einfach nur einen circle, scheint komisch die break auf nem upbeat zu starten
19:52 Konei: 02:56:290 (1) - Missing finish on start
19:53 Konei: 03:04:290 (5) - Add NC here, remove it on the next note

Sorry for the delay, ehehe

Well, go go!

Dark_Ai

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Dark_Ai 2013-07-06T18:15:17+00:00

~~Will update when I'm at home ty <3 :3~~

Updated~ owo

Pink Agate wrote:
circle skin in your map

cilcle skin in my map

And why are they so similar? Are you use my cirlce skin

uhm yes I do. something wrong? D:

Faust

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Faust 2013-07-12T18:05:32+00:00

Bubbles are an important component in ice-cream, incidentally.

Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2013-07-12T18:06:44+00:00

Ice Cream Ice crema >w<

dkun

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dkun 2013-07-12T18:18:52+00:00

Artist should be "HyunA"!

Going to pop this until we've received confirmation on the skin element usage. Everything else seems good to me! Keep me updated.