1. Calm (2,48 stars, 165 notes)
2. Challenging (4,93 stars, 424 notes)
3. Relaxing (3,62 stars, 212 notes)

Xagrok
Arrival
TrigonometrY
Kiyro
Papysh
rezoons
Lally
Nemis
happy30
Kin
Philippines
Andrea
Cherry Blossom
Parachute
Thunderstorm
Leader
Irreversible
Luanny
mancusojuanmattos
Strawberry
xxheroxx

TrigonometrY wrote:

Hello
[Relaxing]
OD -1 Done!
01:51:223 (3) - nc Done!
01:51:574 (1) - remove nc Done!
[Challenging]
HP DR, OD - 6 Only OD 5 for now, maybe I'll rise other things...
00:19:995 (4) - nc I think it's not needed
00:20:345 (1) - remove nc ^
00:42:100 (3) - I would delete reverse and start NC with circle on downbeat: I agree, fixed

SPOILER

01:39:995 (1) - looks like random slider. Every twist of slider must fit the beats, so: I don't know, if anyone else points this out I'll fix. For now I'll keep it

SPOILER

01:45:609 (1) - ^: Since I'm totally noob and I can't make a slider like that I replaced it with a spinner

SPOILER

02:03:854 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure, but it looks like overmapping for me, same here 02:09:468 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why? The sounds on blue ticks are clearly udible...
03:04:468 - I don't hear any beat. Replace it with circle on red tick? There is a beat in the background, I think it's fine
03:09:995 (1) - same and remove nc I agree
03:09:819 (5) - nc Done!
03:19:644 (1) - overmapping I think
03:21:047 (1) - ^
03:19:644 (1,1,1,1) - replace it with spinner, maybe? Well, a spinner is better in a Hard, fixed!
[Extreme]
00:15:960 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - wut What's wrong? Blue ticks are clearly udible
00:16:486 (5,6,7,8) - replace it with slider and circle: Derp

SPOILER

00:38:942 (1,2,3,4) - try this rhythm: Again, no

SPOILER

00:46:486 (4) - why nc is here? Because there are some jumps and I wanted to make them readable. Anyways if someone else points this out I'll fix
00:47:889 (1) - 00:49:293 (1) - 00:52:100 (1) - ...^
01:06:310 (1,2,3,4) - wow Jumps like thiis are rankable, and pretty nice, so I'll keep them...
01:30:170 (1) - looks strange. Please, straighten slider All NatsumeRin maps have sliders like this and they are ranked, so I think there is no problem, the important is that is readable!
01:35:784 (1) - ^
02:03:854 (1) - blue ticks are almost inaudible here, so I propose replace it with two circles:

SPOILER

^Same in all streams until 02:12:275 (1) - Sorry, I disagree, blue ticks are audible...
03:19:644 (1) - are you sure? Maybe, spinner will be better fit the music? Well, if some one else point this out blah blah blah

Nice BGs btw. Good luck in rankings!

Kiyro wrote:

[General]
Meh, the mapper is unrankable. Shit mappers are unrankable, I think.

[Relaxing]
Metti ar5 e non cagare il cazzo.
00:11:924 (1) - 0,000000000001 grid up for a better flow.
00:19:293 (3) - Fallo simmetrico che va meglio
01:30:170 (1) - MA 'STE MERDE PUOI FARLE SOLO TU. FALLO PIU' DECENTE.
02:47:363 (1) - Ma leva 'sto coso e mettici solo un beat con finish sulla fine.
03:15:433 (3) - Like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/683330

[Challenging]
Ar8, gli slider a 1/4 sono troppo tosti ar7.
00:10:170 (1,1,1,1) - Add some new combos here. TOGLI 'STE MERDE INUTILI
02:01:574 (2) - Simmetrico pl0x
02:13:679 (1,1,1,1,1) - YEAH
02:23:503 (1) - Insegnami a mettere gli slider nel vuoto, ti prego.
02:26:837 (2) - NON E' SIMMETRICO
02:31:223 (1) - Leva la nc senza senso.
02:58:591 (1,1,1,1) - MUOIO MALISSIMO

[Extreme]
01:30:170 (1) - .
01:35:784 (1) - .
02:33:328 (1,2,3,4) - CENTRALI E SIMMETRICI
02:59:995 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - PORCODIO

Papysh wrote:

~In game mod :3

1. Last time i did a map with an easy, a hard and an insane MAT said that i needed a Normal if i wanted to get ranked one day.
2. You have quite a little kiai. I think you can add 03:11:223 to the end.

1. 00:20:696 (1) - I don't think the spinner is really useful. Maybe split it onto two sliders.
2. 00:27:012 (4) - NC?
3. 02:36:135 (1) - All your sliders looks good and then.... THAT. It's kind of weird. I think you should change it's shape (and maybe remove the NC)
4. 03:19:644 (1) - Finish?
   Very good diff. I can't find much because it's very well mapped. defnitely one of my favorite easy ever.

1. 00:10:170 (1,1,1,1) - I'm not sure about the NC. In fact it's the kind of NC i often see is pending beatmap but barely in ranked map.
2. 00:16:486 (4) - Move it to x=212 y=288?
3. 02:03:854 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You want my opinon about this? This is not veary pleasant to play. When you have 3-4 like this in a row it doesn't matter but when it's all over the map with sometimes 12 (like here) it's not good. I think you can remove a lot of 1/4-slider in your map. But well.... it's just my opinion.
4. 02:13:6479 (1,1,1,1,1) - Same remark as 00:10:170.
5. 02:58:591 (1,1,1,1) - ^

1. You know you're supposed to be able to finish your own diff, right?
2. I can only say HP drain rare +1 or 2 but i won't try to mod it because i can't finish it.

1. 00:19:293 (3) - il prossimo è un pochino distante
2. 00:55:082 (4) - il prossimo è un po' vicino
3. 01:21:749 (3,4) - perchè aumenta cosi random lo spacing? fixalo per la consistenza con il resto
4. 02:27:714 (2) - la simmetria che hai cercato di fare ti ha sballato di pochino lo spacing io credo che se fai questo slider con l'ultimo punto un grind verso l'interno e lo copypasti lo spacing sara di nuovo perfetto \o3o/

1. 00:38:942 (2) - questo slider personalmente non mi convince molto ha un qualcosa che non va, forse è come si forma in mezzo ..hmm che ne dici di provare con una cosa del genere invece?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:43:854 (1,2,3,4,1) - questa pattern io la vedrei piu a forma di stella,tipo che si avvicini un pochino di piu' a :
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:56:486 (1,2) - che ne dici di farli un po' piu' cosi:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:00:696 (1) - se non hai intenzione di aggiungere dopo questo slider come ti congligio qui sotto,rimuovi la new combo perchè non ci sta a fare niente
5. 01:01:398 (x) - che ne dici gi aggiundere 2 circle qui o uno slider perchè in confronto al resto mi sembra veramente un pochino vuoto qui
6. 01:03:503 (3) - che ne dici di farlo piu' tonto questo slider, per migliorare un po' il flow per lo spinner,cosi i giocatori non dovranno sforzarsi molto per andare al centro
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:14:030 (3) - anche qui secondo me potresti cambiare un pochino la forma tipo:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:18:240 (1) - 2 cose insieme per questo slider: la prima rimuovi la new combo che non ci sta a fare niente qui sinceramente, la seconda è che hai 2 red points in mezzo, io credo ne basti solo uno per creare la forma allo slider
9. 01:39:995 (1,2,1) - non mi piace assolutamente come è il flow qui che ne dici di fare una cosa del genere ma non cambiando molto la pattern:
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 02:29:117 (1,2) - allora qui è brutissimo come va flowa sia in game che visto dal editor sembra un po un movimento innaturale,perche non cerchi di creare una cosa simile che tende a migliorare un po' il flow tra 02:29:117 (1,2) - lo slider (2) - l'ho semplicemente copypastato e poi messo apposto lo spacing.per uscire una cosa simile:
    
    SPOILER

    
    
    la diff è molto caruccia con questi slider o3o

1. 00:20:696 (1) - che ne dici di aggiungere un clap qui dato che si sente in sottofondo uno specie di clap ci starebbe non tanto male con la musica
2. 00:22:802 (1) - un finish sullo slider start per i miei pareri ci starebbe benissimo
3. 00:34:030 (1) - secondo per rafforzare e anche addolcire un po' il suono qui perchè invece non fai finish+whistle ?
4. 00:45:258 (1) - qui dato che si sente che è una parte energica che sta per cominciare io avrei usato o semplicemente un normal sampleset, o un normal finish , prova come ci sta secondo me ci sta benissimo :O
5. 00:49:468 (1) - seguendo la tua pattern di finish qui ne hai dimenticato uno
6. 01:00:696 (1,2) - stessa cosa qui, seguendo le tue patten sembra che manchino
7. 01:07:714 (1) - secondo me dato che è l'inizio del kiai il soft finish non rende molto l'inizio che ne dici di usare un normal finish invece?
8. 01:42:802 (1) - credo che manchi un finish qui
9. 02:01:047 (2) - finish?

1. 00:10:521 (1,1,1) - non lo so se è cosi tanto necessario avere le new combo qui
2. 00:35:258 (1) - che ne dici di un bel ctrl+g ? *D*
3. ti do un consiglio generale che vale per tutte le patter simili a seguire: 00:57:188 (3,4) - so cosa hai cercato di fare la per i miei gusti hai lasciato la fine del primo slidr troppo al di fuori,e questo secondo me rovina un pochino tutto il flow generale nella mappa nelle patten simili, io avrei optato per fare delle patten in un modo simile:
   Questi sono solo esempi di come avrei fatto io le pattern ne ho preso in considerazione solo un paio perchè non credo ci sia bisogno di manzionarle una a una dato che è solo una mia considerazione personale,perchè nelle pattern in se non c'è nulla di sbagliato.
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
4. 01:16:135 (1,2) - avrei optato di piu' per degli slider curvi qui e non cosi rigidi dato il flow viene un po' a mancare tra 01:16:661 (2,3) - quindi che ne pensi di cercare di fare un altra forma? :V
5. 01:39:995 (1) - ç_ç non so cosa suggerire è semplicemente brutto al confronto di tutta la mappa e di quei slider tutti carini :C
6. 01:55:960 (1) - credo che sia meglio qui uno slider semplicemente ricurvo
7. 02:03:503 (4,5) - perche non li sostituisci con una nota e uno slider con la reversearrow? secondo me ci starebbe un po' meglio :V
8. 02:13:679 (1,1,1,1,1) - stessa storia riguardo alle new combo
9. 02:23:942 (1) - so cosa hai seguito con l'inizio di questo spinner ma per essere piu' precisi comincia a 02:23:986 - quindi credo che sia meglio che sposti l'inizio a 02:23:986 - o semplicemente a 02:24:030 -
10. 02:58:591 (1,1,1,1,1) - new combo inutili per me
11. 03:04:381 (2,3) - non hai mai usato un ritmo del genere in tutta la diff a me a prima impressione mi ha confuso molto perche non cerchi di fare una tripletta che è molto piu leggibile apposto dello slider?

1. 01:06:310 (1,2,3,4) - io ridurrei lo spacing qui sinceramente mi sembra un po' esagerato >u<
2. 01:18:240 (6) - uhm :
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   semplicemente non so cosa dire o3o wah

rezoons wrote:

Hi ,

You need a mod?

[General]

1. Last time i did a map with an easy, a hard and an insane MAT said that i needed a Normal if i wanted to get ranked one day. "Relaxing is a Normal, actually, so I think it's ok, unless the gap between the two diffs is too big, obvious.
2. You have quite a little kiai. I think you can add 03:11:223 to the end. Of course, now it's better

[Relaxing]

1. 00:20:696 (1) - I don't think the spinner is really useful. Maybe split it onto two sliders. Replaced with sliders
2. 00:27:012 (4) - NC? I don't think it's really useful here
3. 02:36:135 (1) - All your sliders looks good and then.... THAT. It's kind of weird. I think you should change it's shape (and maybe remove the NC) lol. Fixed, I kept the NC anyways
4. 03:19:644 (1) - Finish? There already is a finish here o.o
   Very good diff. I can't find much because it's very well mapped. defnitely one of my favorite easy ever. Thanks s lot!

[Challenging]

1. 00:10:170 (1,1,1,1) - I'm not sure about the NC. In fact it's the kind of NC i often see is pending beatmap but barely in ranked map. Well, you're right, they aren't needed that much.
2. 00:16:486 (4) - Move it to x=212 y=288? Yes, a rhombus is better
3. 02:03:854 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You want my opinon about this? This is not veary pleasant to play. When you have 3-4 like this in a row it doesn't matter but when it's all over the map with sometimes 12 (like here) it's not good. I think you can remove a lot of 1/4-slider in your map. But well.... it's just my opinion. You are the second that points this out, so I fixed it
4. 02:13:6479 (1,1,1,1,1) - Same remark as 00:10:170.
5. 02:58:591 (1,1,1,1) - ^ Fixed both

[Extreme]

1. You know you're supposed to be able to finish your own diff, right? I can
2. I can only say HP drain rare +1 or 2 but i won't try to mod it because i can't finish it. Well, after thinking a lot about this I decided to put HP -1 since actually this diff is really difficult to pass

Well, i LOVE your easy. And for this one you totaly deserve a ~star~. I think your hard is really spoiled by those 1/4-sliders. There are too many of them. Don't remove all of them but a good portion. (Think about the player). And i won't say anything about the Insane. But well... It's just my opinion. Thank you a lot for really helpful mod and star

Anyway, good luck getting it ranked. ^^

Lally wrote:

Hi from TAM queue \o3o/

[Relax =w=]
Spacing:
considero soltanto errori maggiori a 0.04

1. 00:19:293 (3) - il prossimo è un pochino distante Fixed
2. 00:55:082 (4) - il prossimo è un po' vicino Fixed
3. 01:21:749 (3,4) - perchè aumenta cosi random lo spacing? fixalo per la consistenza con il resto lol, manco me ne ero accorto
4. 02:27:714 (2) - la simmetria che hai cercato di fare ti ha sballato di pochino lo spacing io credo che se fai questo slider con l'ultimo punto un grind verso l'interno e lo copypasti lo spacing sara di nuovo perfetto \o3o/ Esatto!

Placement:

1. 00:38:942 (2) - questo slider personalmente non mi convince molto ha un qualcosa che non va, forse è come si forma in mezzo ..hmm che ne dici di provare con una cosa del genere invece? Mi piacciono questi tipi di slider, per ora non lo cambio. Comunque se me lo fanno notare altri modders, lo cambierò!
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:43:854 (1,2,3,4,1) - questa pattern io la vedrei piu a forma di stella,tipo che si avvicini un pochino di piu' a : Sì, ho provato a fixarlo senza rovinare lo spacing
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:56:486 (1,2) - che ne dici di farli un po' piu' cosi: Stesso discorso di prima
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:00:696 (1) - se non hai intenzione di aggiungere dopo questo slider come ti congligio qui sotto,rimuovi la new combo perchè non ci sta a fare niente Nah, voglio tenere separato questo pattern dai due slider precedenti
5. 01:01:398 (x) - che ne dici gi aggiundere 2 circle qui o uno slider perchè in confronto al resto mi sembra veramente un pochino vuoto qui Sinceramente non capisco cosa intendi... C'è già uno slider qui
6. 01:03:503 (3) - che ne dici di farlo piu' tonto questo slider, per migliorare un po' il flow per lo spinner,cosi i giocatori non dovranno sforzarsi molto per andare al centro Hai scritto tonto :C Comunque sì, fixato
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:14:030 (3) - anche qui secondo me potresti cambiare un pochino la forma tipo: :V
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:18:240 (1) - 2 cose insieme per questo slider: la prima rimuovi la new combo che non ci sta a fare niente qui sinceramente, la seconda è che hai 2 red points in mezzo, io credo ne basti solo uno per creare la forma allo slider Se senti c'è un leggero cambio nella musica, quindi la NC per ora la lascio, a meno che qualcun altro non mi dica di cambiarla... La forma mi piace un sacco e non la cambierò
9. 01:39:995 (1,2,1) - non mi piace assolutamente come è il flow qui che ne dici di fare una cosa del genere ma non cambiando molto la pattern: L'ho cambiato un po'
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 02:29:117 (1,2) - allora qui è brutissimo come va flowa sia in game che visto dal editor sembra un po un movimento innaturale,perche non cerchi di creare una cosa simile che tende a migliorare un po' il flow tra 02:29:117 (1,2) - lo slider (2) - l'ho semplicemente copypastato e poi messo apposto lo spacing.per uscire una cosa simile: Proprio li odi quegli slider! Comunque l'ho fixato, li ho fatti curvi
    
    SPOILER

    
    
    la diff è molto caruccia con questi slider o3o Grazie :3

Hitsounds:

1. 00:20:696 (1) - che ne dici di aggiungere un clap qui dato che si sente in sottofondo uno specie di clap ci starebbe non tanto male con la musica Scusami ma mi sembra che stoni un sacco...
2. 00:22:802 (1) - un finish sullo slider start per i miei pareri ci starebbe benissimo Mi sono dimenticato di aggiungerlo, grazie per avermelo fatto notare!
3. 00:34:030 (1) - secondo per rafforzare e anche addolcire un po' il suono qui perchè invece non fai finish+whistle ? Done!
4. 00:45:258 (1) - qui dato che si sente che è una parte energica che sta per cominciare io avrei usato o semplicemente un normal sampleset, o un normal finish , prova come ci sta secondo me ci sta benissimo :O Vero
5. 00:49:468 (1) - seguendo la tua pattern di finish qui ne hai dimenticato uno Ops, giusto
6. 01:00:696 (1,2) - stessa cosa qui, seguendo le tue patten sembra che manchino Aggiunto solo sul primo slider. Sul secondo stona secondo me
7. 01:07:714 (1) - secondo me dato che è l'inizio del kiai il soft finish non rende molto l'inizio che ne dici di usare un normal finish invece? Fatto, suona meglio
8. 01:42:802 (1) - credo che manchi un finish qui Sì D:
9. 02:01:047 (2) - finish?

Fatto

[Challenge òwò]
Placement:

sinceramente non ho molto da dire su questa diff è fatta molto bene apparte per 2-3 cosuccie Grazie mille ancora!

1. 00:10:521 (1,1,1) - non lo so se è cosi tanto necessario avere le new combo qui Già tolte, lol
2. 00:35:258 (1) - che ne dici di un bel ctrl+g ? *D* Oddio, mi sembra un po' strano. Per ora comunque mi fido e lo metto
3. ti do un consiglio generale che vale per tutte le patter simili a seguire: 00:57:188 (3,4) - so cosa hai cercato di fare la per i miei gusti hai lasciato la fine del primo slidr troppo al di fuori,e questo secondo me rovina un pochino tutto il flow generale nella mappa nelle patten simili, io avrei optato per fare delle patten in un modo simile:
   Questi sono solo esempi di come avrei fatto io le pattern ne ho preso in considerazione solo un paio perchè non credo ci sia bisogno di manzionarle una a una dato che è solo una mia considerazione personale,perchè nelle pattern in se non c'è nulla di sbagliato. Boh, sinceramente non penso che 4 pixel facciano la differenza...
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
4. 01:16:135 (1,2) - avrei optato di piu' per degli slider curvi qui e non cosi rigidi dato il flow viene un po' a mancare tra 01:16:661 (2,3) - quindi che ne pensi di cercare di fare un altra forma? :V Ma mi piacciono così ;_;
5. 01:39:995 (1) - ç_ç non so cosa suggerire è semplicemente brutto al confronto di tutta la mappa e di quei slider tutti carini :C Lo so. Non sapevo che fare, alla fine ci ho messo uno spinner
6. 01:55:960 (1) - credo che sia meglio qui uno slider semplicemente ricurvo Se non crea confusione non vedo perchè toglierlo...
7. 02:03:503 (4,5) - perche non li sostituisci con una nota e uno slider con la reversearrow? secondo me ci starebbe un po' meglio :V Nah, poi odio quando gli slider iniziano sui tick blu
8. 02:13:679 (1,1,1,1,1) - stessa storia riguardo alle new combo Fixato
9. 02:23:942 (1) - so cosa hai seguito con l'inizio di questo spinner ma per essere piu' precisi comincia a 02:23:986 - quindi credo che sia meglio che sposti l'inizio a 02:23:986 - o semplicemente a 02:24:030 - Opto per la prima, anche se mi sembra strano che qualcosa inizi sugli ottavi...
10. 02:58:591 (1,1,1,1,1) - new combo inutili per me Fixed
11. 03:04:381 (2,3) - non hai mai usato un ritmo del genere in tutta la diff a me a prima impressione mi ha confuso molto perche non cerchi di fare una tripletta che è molto piu leggibile apposto dello slider? Sì, in effetti...

[Extreeeeem OAO]

1. 01:06:310 (1,2,3,4) - io ridurrei lo spacing qui sinceramente mi sembra un po' esagerato >u< Beh, sì. lol
2. 01:18:240 (6) - uhm : Troppo pigro per fixare, comunque penso che lo cambierò
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   semplicemente non so cosa dire o3o wah Grazie ancora

spero ti aiuti \o3o/ wuhuu Sì, sei stata utilissima, grazie Ricambierò il mod il prima possibile!

per info per la mia mod: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/2237370#p2237370

Nemis wrote:

[General]
Aggiungi "Drum And Bass dnb" ai Tags. Fatto
Assicurati di avere gli stessi audio lead-in e le stesse impostazioni (letterbox, countdown, epilepsy warning...) in tutte le difficoltà.

[Relaxing]
Metti AR3 ed OD3, è la difficoltà più semplice! Sì, in effetti
Ci sono un sacco di new combo che trovo insensate, prova a ridarci una controllata generale perchè combo come 00:49:468 (1) - dovrebbero iniziare su 00:48:065 (3) - , 00:59:293 (4,1,2) - quì pure... Le NC vanno bene così come sono, sinceramente
00:20:696 (1,1) - Sono troppi vicini, un principiante misserebbe di sicuro lo slider Hanno 0.9 di distanza come tutti i beat della mappa...
00:38:942 (2) - Cambierei la posizione dei due punti rossi così: Già detto a Lally che mi piace così D:

SPOILER

00:42:451 (2) - Utilizza più punti per questa curvatura, il blanket è a posto ma la curva che si vede sotto è davvero brutta... Ci penserò, per ora il blanket è perfetto e non voglio rovinare nulla
01:07:714 (1,2) - Migliora questo blanket Fatto
01:18:240 (1) - Abbastanza strana la parte centrale, ti consiglio di renderla più evidente o di eliminarla No, strano =/= brutto
01:28:767 (1,2,3,4,1) - Sistema questa stella Fatto
01:30:170 (1,2) - Cerca di muovere questi due sliders al centro Non penso sia necessario
01:51:574 (2) - Come prima cercherei di rendere più evidente lo spezzamento che c'è al centro Come prima

[Challenging]
00:05:258 (1) - come mai finish? Perchè sì D:
00:08:065 (1) - Come mai finish? Perchè c'è un finish nella canzone
00:14:205 (3,4,5,6,7) - Stacka bene tutti questi sliders Fatto
00:15:432 (7) - Questo elemento è unsnappato Ops, fixed
00:52:626 (2) - Con CTRL+G si crea un bell'effetto Fatto
00:55:433 (1,2) - Essendo l'unico pattern con uno slider 3/4 propongo di toglierlo Nah, non vedo nessun problema
01:39:995 (1) - Non lo trovo molto carino esteticamente Già fixato
01:45:258 (4) - Aggiungi un beat dopo questo slider o allungalo di 1/4 (e di conseguenza fai partire lo spinner 1/4 dopo) Non ha senso...
02:14:030 (1,1,1) - Sono proprio inutili queste new combo Già fixate
02:31:223 (1) - Non è ben stackato con 02:31:924 (1) - Fixato
02:58:942 (1,1,1) - New combo inutili Già fixato
03:02:626 (7) - New combo qui e togli 03:03:153 (1) - ^
03:06:837 (4) - New combo qui e togli da 03:07:363 (1) - ^

[Extreme]
E' abbastanza overmappato l'inizio, hai messo triplette, streams, 1/4 sliders un po' a caso... Non sono a caso. Le triplette ci sono in TUTTE le canzoni DnB e le note da 1/4 sono perfettamente udibili.
00:15:432 (4) - Questo elemento è unsnappato Fixed
00:34:731 (1,2,3,4) - Per far scorrere alla perfezione questo quadrato con quello che c'è prima 00:34:030 (1,2,3,4) - occorre partire da 00:34:907 (2) - questo beat ed andare in senso orario Fixed

SPOILER

00:52:100 (1) - Questa new combo è inutile Non credo proprio dato che c'è un cambio sostanziale nella canzone e un jump
00:53:503 (1) - New combo inutile ^
00:54:907 (1) - Altra new combo inutile ^
00:59:293 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - (vedi screen sotto) ad aggiungi una new combo su 00:59:995 (5) - Sì

SPOILER

01:07:012 (5) - Suggerisco di aggiungere una new combo quì Fatto
01:29:293 (2,3,4) - Non so quanto possa essere bello da giocare come pattern siccome il beat è su un tick azzurro Segue la musica ed è readable
01:34:381 (1) - Suggerisco di aggiungere una nota quì e spostare di 1/4 l'inizio dello spinner No
01:37:188 (1,2) - Aumenterei lo spacing Ci sono già abbastanza jumps...
01:38:591 (1,2) - Anche quì lo aumenterei ^
01:39:995 (1) - Suggerisco di aggiungere una nota quì e spostare di 1/4 l'inizio dello spinner No
01:41:398 (1) - Cambierei la forma di questo slider, non so quanto possa esser giocabile Tutti quelli che hanno testato la mappa non hanno avuto problemi
01:43:678 (5) - Unsnapped Fixed
01:51:223 (1) - Rimuovi questa new combo Fatto
01:52:099 (4) - Unsnapped ^
02:09:117 (4) - Questo elemento esce fuori dallo schermo Anche te me l'hai detto... Penso che non ci siano problemi dato che giocando risulta dentro
02:17:889 (1) - Anche questo elemento esce fuori dallo schermo ^
02:58:699 - New combo inutili Non credo proprio, come fanno a sembrarti inutili?
03:01:398 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Aggiungi una new combo Ehm... Dove?
02:59:995 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Non flowa molto, immagina un percorso a spirale e vedi come è meglio ruotare i quadrati e da quale beat partire Sono d'accordo, però non saprei trovare un flow migliore... Quindi per ora lascio così ma poi lo fixerò
03:02:100 (5) - New combo Done
03:01:398 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - screen (guarda l'ordine) Sì, molto meglio, thanks

SPOILER

03:06:310 (5) - Aggiungi una new combo Beh, sì
03:07:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Rendi tutti questi beats equidistanti Ma perchè.
03:19:644 (1) - Non c'è alcun 1/8 quì E io ce lo metto lo stesso perchè sono trasgressivo.

Kin wrote:

Hi ~
M4M

General :

03:22:451 - finish your kiai time here Yes, I misput it, lol

Relaxing :

00:50:872 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like this pattern for easy diff, and the blanket on 3 can be better Like thisI agree, I tried to do my best to make the blanket decent
00:59:293 (4,2) - Lil overlap I don't know how to fix... It isn't a big mistake because I didn't even noticed it, anyways I'll think about how to fix it
01:11:924 (1) - remove clap (on arrow) Ops, I misplaced it, removed!
01:25:960 (1,2) - I don't like this kind of pattern, it's maybe just me <_< :C
01:48:416 (1,2) - you can make a better blanket overlap like this one Fixed
01:59:644 (1,2) - try to move the red point on one slider tick ? No big deal with these slider, I'll keep them
03:07:012 (3,1) - maybe kinda hard pattern Nah

Challenging :

00:00:346 - 00:22:451 - this part look too loud for me, maybe do something like this ? Why not
00:55:433 (1,2) - use a distance snap a bit lower for this single tap ? Sure
01:27:889 (2) - move slider end on 3 like this ? Nah, it's not really necessary, and I'd break the spacing
01:59:644 (1,2) - try something like this ? It's just epic. Changed!


Extreme :

00:00:346 - 00:22:451 - like Challenging diff Done
01:06:310 (1,2,3,4) - reduce spacing ? it's hard jump and suddenly a anti jump while stream Well, maybe. If someone enlse points this out
02:05:258 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - really hard to read this pattern People who tested the map didn't have problems, so I'll keep it
02:17:889 (1) - out of screen http://puu.sh/2yILj Goddamn fullscreen. You are the 4th that says it, so I fixed it

it's all I can find <_<
Well nice Extreme diff, fun to play \o Thank you a lot for your modding! I'll modback as soon as possible!
good luck ~

happy30 wrote:

Testplay ~ no kudosu please
Replay

Extreme
I like the beginning that builds up a bit of difficutly but in the latter parts the stream feel a bit too overmapped.
I didn't like some of the 1/4 slider streams that had a too big spacing. In the last part it looked like you made it too difficult for the song.
but other than that you did a good job

[Relaxing]
00:20:696 (1,1) - Sono troppi vicini, un principiante misserebbe di sicuro lo slider Hanno 0.9 di distanza come tutti i beat della mappa... Mi riferisco allo spinner ad allo slider che c'è subito dopo! Un principiante starà ancora spinnando quando lo slider sarà già finito D:

[Challenging]
01:45:258 (4) - Aggiungi un beat dopo questo slider o allungalo di 1/4 (e di conseguenza fai partire lo spinner 1/4 dopo) Non ha senso... Ho dato questo suggerimento perchè sul tick bianco parte uno spinner che è privo di suono (all'inizio). Sarebbe quindi una buona idea aggiungere quel beat per far sentire l'ultima nota della serie di 1/4

[Extreme]
03:07:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Rendi tutti questi beats equidistanti Ma perchè. Intendevo in questo senso: http://puu.sh/2yQyD , se vedi qui http://puu.sh/2yQAa non sono equidistanti

Nemis wrote:

[Relaxing]
00:20:696 (1,1) - Sono troppi vicini, un principiante misserebbe di sicuro lo slider Hanno 0.9 di distanza come tutti i beat della mappa... Mi riferisco allo spinner ad allo slider che c'è subito dopo! Un principiante starà ancora spinnando quando lo slider sarà già finito D:

[Challenging]
01:45:258 (4) - Aggiungi un beat dopo questo slider o allungalo di 1/4 (e di conseguenza fai partire lo spinner 1/4 dopo) Non ha senso... Ho dato questo suggerimento perchè sul tick bianco parte uno spinner che è privo di suono (all'inizio). Sarebbe quindi una buona idea aggiungere quel beat per far sentire l'ultima nota della serie di 1/4

[Extreme]
03:07:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Rendi tutti questi beats equidistanti Ma perchè. Intendevo in questo senso: http://puu.sh/2yQyD , se vedi qui http://puu.sh/2yQAa non sono equidistanti

piccoli chiarimenti

pink ftw

RikiH_ wrote:

Thank you a lot happy30 for your testplay, are you sure that no kudosu?

happy30 wrote:

RikiH_ wrote:

Thank you a lot happy30 for your testplay, are you sure that no kudosu?

you can give me a kudosu if it really helped you, I just don't want to encourage kudosufarming with testplays only

1. Something's wrong with the map after I opened it in osu!. It shows that the map was not submitted.
   
   SPOILER

   Perhaps try to re-submit your map?
   
   
   
   
2. I don't know if it's just me but I'm seeing a weird difficulty spread between [Relaxing] and [Challenging]. Try consulting a staff about this cause I think you will need another difficulty to maintain a balanced difficulty spread.

1. Something is really wrong with the you worked on your New Combos on some parts for this difficulty. I kind of sensed that you marked a new combo when you hear some unique sounds in the music but I think it's not really a good reason to mark a new one. Just like in:
   
   1. 00:13:679 (1) - I can hear something in the music that is unique so you marked a new combo (Tell me if I'm wrong). My point here is that I think it's more reasonable if a new combo has been marked on 00:14:731 (2).
   2. 00:15:784 (1) - This one as well, I think it's not a good place for a new combo. Try placing the new combo on 00:17:538 (2).
   3. 00:18:591 (1) - Remove this new combo. And add a new combo on 00:20:345, then remove the new combo on 00:20:696.
   4. 01:34:381 (1) - A new combo here is not necessary, please remove it.
   5. 01:38:591 (4) - A new combo should be placed here instead rather than in 01:39:995, so better remove the new combo on that one.
   6. 01:41:749 (2)- Mark a new combo on this one and remove the new combo on the next circle: 01:42:802 (1).
   
   I hope you're getting my point and this (and you're following them) because the current combo pattern you have is really not making any sense at all. It feels like you've been marking new combos randomly. Don't feel offended for this though 'cause I'm just trying to help you out. ^^
   
   
2. 00:19:293 (3,4) - Why not make a little blanket out of these circles? It'll play better in my opinion. Try to see the image below:
   
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   Don't forget to fix the spacing if you'll follow this one.
   
   
   
   
3. 01:02:100 (1,3) - You're missing a Finish hit sound on these circles I believe.
   
   
4. 01:18:240 (1) - Somthing's really wrong with the center of this slider. I know you wanna add a little style but I think If you really want to, you should add a little bit more friction on that part. It's too short to be noticed in my opinion. On the other hand, I think you're missing a Finish hit sound on the slider's tail.
   
   
5. By the way, I think bumping your Approach Rate +1 would make the spread a lot better. (:

1. 01:13:153 (4,1) - Something's wrong with the spacing here. Please fix them and make sure it's consistent.
   
   
2. 01:27:363 (1) - You're missing a finish hit sound here.
   
   
3. 01:29:117 (2,3,4) - The clap hit sounds here are not really blending well with the music. Try following these:
   
   1. 01:29:117 (2) - Add clap on this slider's tail.
   2. 01:29:468 (3) - Remove clap on this slider's tail.
4. 01:51:574 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I know the claps here are following the music, but they become a little annoying in my opinion. What I could suggest here is you tone down the volume by maybe 10-20% and I think everything will be fine here.
   
   
5. 02:07:363 (3,4) - Ugleh overlap. lol just kidding, sorry ^^ I think it would be better if you try to avoid this overlap.
   
   
6. 02:23:971 (1) - Spinner snapped to 1/6? lol please fix this one; make it start on 02:24:030.
   
   
7. 03:01:223 (1) - Remove the finish hit sound here cause I think it's not really necessary for this part.
   
   
8. Raise your HP Drain by 1 to maintain a good spread in this difficulty.

1. 00:53:503 (1) - I think the new combo here is not necessary compared to 00:52:100. Same thing with the new combo on 00:54:907 (1). I believe you should just remove them.
   
   
2. 01:03:503 ~ 01:04:907 - I would map this part if I were you. Seeing this filled by a long spinner is kind of shocking in my opinion. I think it deserves more circles than just a spinner. Also, I think it's much more better if the spinner starts on 01:04:907.
   
   
3. 01:06:310 (1,2,3,4) - How 'bout something like the image I provided below? They look better than the current one.
   
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4. 01:21:924 (2,3) - These circles are kind of breaking the flow in my opinion. The slider is kind of unexpected since the rest of the triple streams are all made up of hit circles. What I can suggest here is you replace the slider with two hit circles instead, they'll make much more sense.
   
   
5. 01:34:381 - I would suggest a circle added here because I feel like something is missing somewhere after the slider stream you did there. You should try testing it for yourself. The gameplay would improve much better if a circle has been added here.
   Note: But since there's a spinner on this timeline, I would suggest you move the spinner on 01:34:556 instead.
   
   
6. 01:36:486 (5,6,7) - I know the spacing here is consistent but I believe it's placed wrong. Try placing all the slider heads together like what I provided below:
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
7. 01:38:942 (1,2) - This is kind of confusing and unexpected. Can you just unstack these sliders instead?
   
   
8. 01:42:802 (1,2,3) - The spacing here is really hard to read. I thought the spacing was 1/4 between 1 and 2 but it was 1/2. Then suddenly, the spacing between 2 and 3 was 1/4. D: It's really confusing here :/ I suggest you try to make a way to move (1) farther from (2) so it will be more readable for players. This suggestion also includes the sliders on 01:47:012 (1,2,3).
   
   
9. 01:51:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You're not serious here right? :/ 1~4 could be acceptable but I think 5 and 6 are a joke, really. Tone the spacing down.
   
   
10. 02:09:117 (4) - This slider's tail is out of screen. Please move it.
    
    
11. 02:12:977 (5,6,7,8) - You gotta be kidding me. D: Why not make a decreasing space in this part instead? This is not really fun to digest for many players in my opinion.
    
    
12. 02:23:503 (8) - I think it would be better if you replace this slider with a hit circle instead and make the spinner start on 02:23:679. I know you want the spinner to emphasize the little moaning in the music (lol) but I think it's much more better to start on 02:23:679.
    
    
13. 02:34:731 (3,4) - Ctrl + H these sliders cause you're making a weird spacing with the previous sliders.
    
    
14. 03:02:100 (1,2,3,4) - Can you just scale them down for heaven's sake! D: [.85] would do.
    
    
15. The rest of the jumps, you know where they are, I would like you to ask some staff about it, as I'm not sure how I should handle these things. D: lol

Philippines wrote:

Sorry for the long delay in my M4M queue. Okay, this'll be my 250th mod, so let's see what I can do..

[General]

1. Something's wrong with the map after I opened it in osu!. It shows that the map was not submitted.
   
   SPOILER

   Perhaps try to re-submit your map?
   
   
   
   
2. I don't know if it's just me but I'm seeing a weird difficulty spread between [Relaxing] and [Challenging]. Try consulting a staff about this cause I think you will need another difficulty to maintain a balanced difficulty spread.

[Relaxing]

1. Something is really wrong with the you worked on your New Combos on some parts for this difficulty. I kind of sensed that you marked a new combo when you hear some unique sounds in the music but I think it's not really a good reason to mark a new one. Just like in:
   
   1. 00:13:679 (1) - I can hear something in the music that is unique so you marked a new combo (Tell me if I'm wrong). My point here is that I think it's more reasonable if a new combo has been marked on 00:14:731 (2).
   2. 00:15:784 (1) - This one as well, I think it's not a good place for a new combo. Try placing the new combo on 00:17:538 (2).
   3. 00:18:591 (1) - Remove this new combo. And add a new combo on 00:20:345, then remove the new combo on 00:20:696.
   4. 01:34:381 (1) - A new combo here is not necessary, please remove it.
   5. 01:38:591 (4) - A new combo should be placed here instead rather than in 01:39:995, so better remove the new combo on that one.
   6. 01:41:749 (2)- Mark a new combo on this one and remove the new combo on the next circle: 01:42:802 (1).
   
   I hope you're getting my point and this (and you're following them) because the current combo pattern you have is really not making any sense at all. It feels like you've been marking new combos randomly. Don't feel offended for this though 'cause I'm just trying to help you out. ^^
   
   
2. 00:19:293 (3,4) - Why not make a little blanket out of these circles? It'll play better in my opinion. Try to see the image below:
   
   SPOILER

   Don't forget to fix the spacing if you'll follow this one.
   
   
   
   
3. 01:02:100 (1,3) - You're missing a Finish hit sound on these circles I believe.
   
   
4. 01:18:240 (1) - Somthing's really wrong with the center of this slider. I know you wanna add a little style but I think If you really want to, you should add a little bit more friction on that part. It's too short to be noticed in my opinion. On the other hand, I think you're missing a Finish hit sound on the slider's tail.
   
   
5. By the way, I think bumping your Approach Rate +1 would make the spread a lot better. (:

[Challenging]

1. 01:13:153 (4,1) - Something's wrong with the spacing here. Please fix them and make sure it's consistent.
   
   
2. 01:27:363 (1) - You're missing a finish hit sound here.
   
   
3. 01:29:117 (2,3,4) - The clap hit sounds here are not really blending well with the music. Try following these:
   
   1. 01:29:117 (2) - Add clap on this slider's tail.
   2. 01:29:468 (3) - Remove clap on this slider's tail.
4. 01:51:574 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I know the claps here are following the music, but they become a little annoying in my opinion. What I could suggest here is you tone down the volume by maybe 10-20% and I think everything will be fine here.
   
   
5. 02:07:363 (3,4) - Ugleh overlap. lol just kidding, sorry ^^ I think it would be better if you try to avoid this overlap.
   
   
6. 02:23:971 (1) - Spinner snapped to 1/6? lol please fix this one; make it start on 02:24:030.
   
   
7. 03:01:223 (1) - Remove the finish hit sound here cause I think it's not really necessary for this part.
   
   
8. Raise your HP Drain by 1 to maintain a good spread in this difficulty.

[Extreme]

1. 00:53:503 (1) - I think the new combo here is not necessary compared to 00:52:100. Same thing with the new combo on 00:54:907 (1). I believe you should just remove them.
   
   
2. 01:03:503 ~ 01:04:907 - I would map this part if I were you. Seeing this filled by a long spinner is kind of shocking in my opinion. I think it deserves more circles than just a spinner. Also, I think it's much more better if the spinner starts on 01:04:907.
   
   
3. 01:06:310 (1,2,3,4) - How 'bout something like the image I provided below? They look better than the current one.
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
4. 01:21:924 (2,3) - These circles are kind of breaking the flow in my opinion. The slider is kind of unexpected since the rest of the triple streams are all made up of hit circles. What I can suggest here is you replace the slider with two hit circles instead, they'll make much more sense.
   
   
5. 01:34:381 - I would suggest a circle added here because I feel like something is missing somewhere after the slider stream you did there. You should try testing it for yourself. The gameplay would improve much better if a circle has been added here.
   Note: But since there's a spinner on this timeline, I would suggest you move the spinner on 01:34:556 instead.
   
   
6. 01:36:486 (5,6,7) - I know the spacing here is consistent but I believe it's placed wrong. Try placing all the slider heads together like what I provided below:
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
7. 01:38:942 (1,2) - This is kind of confusing and unexpected. Can you just unstack these sliders instead?
   
   
8. 01:42:802 (1,2,3) - The spacing here is really hard to read. I thought the spacing was 1/4 between 1 and 2 but it was 1/2. Then suddenly, the spacing between 2 and 3 was 1/4. D: It's really confusing here :/ I suggest you try to make a way to move (1) farther from (2) so it will be more readable for players. This suggestion also includes the sliders on 01:47:012 (1,2,3).
   
   
9. 01:51:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You're not serious here right? :/ 1~4 could be acceptable but I think 5 and 6 are a joke, really. Tone the spacing down.
   
   
10. 02:09:117 (4) - This slider's tail is out of screen. Please move it.
    
    
11. 02:12:977 (5,6,7,8) - You gotta be kidding me. D: Why not make a decreasing space in this part instead? This is not really fun to digest for many players in my opinion.
    
    
12. 02:23:503 (8) - I think it would be better if you replace this slider with a hit circle instead and make the spinner start on 02:23:679. I know you want the spinner to emphasize the little moaning in the music (lol) but I think it's much more better to start on 02:23:679.
    
    
13. 02:34:731 (3,4) - Ctrl + H these sliders cause you're making a weird spacing with the previous sliders.
    
    
14. 03:02:100 (1,2,3,4) - Can you just scale them down for heaven's sake! D: [.85] would do.
    
    
15. The rest of the jumps, you know where they are, I would like you to ask some staff about it, as I'm not sure how I should handle these things. D: lol

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Hi from pm in game
m4m
My map :

SPOILER

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/82258

Here is my noob mod :3
Grid level 4

[Relaxing]

00:49:468 and 01:00:696 I think these NC are useless. I put them on every big white tick, so I think I'll keep them
01:17:538 (3) - (the end) 1 grid left for a better blanket. Okay
01:42:802 (2) - 1 grid down Done

[Challenging]

00:15:784 (1,2,3,4) - 1 grid left and 1 down. Uhm, why? Anyways, I fixed
00:54:381 (3) - I don't know what this slider follows. It follows the song...

02:08:767 (3) - (the beginning) why whistle here ? because you didn't add a whistle here 01:23:854 (3), if you follow the same rhythm, you should add the same hitsound at the same place.
and many other sliders like this. Removed the whistle, I probably misplaced it

02:15:082 (1) - Normal finish sounds better. Applied in all diffs

[Extreme]

00:14:731 (2,3) - like this ? Epic, fixed

SPOILER

02:14:030 (1) - (end) 1 grid down for a better curve. I would ruin the blanket, so no
02:14:381 (1) - (third point (first after red)) 1 grid down. ^
02:14:731 (1) - (end) 1 grid down. ^

02:15:082 (1) - Normal finish sounds better. Already fixed
02:16:749 (2,3,4,5) - Hard to play >.< I don't know how to change it :< sorry


Extra

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it was my second try >.> O: It's difficult to get an A, congratulations

Nice map, and nice music Thanks!
Good Luck ~

1. "INFLUENZA SYMPTOMS VOL 1" dovrebbe essere il nome dell'album quindi non va nella Source ma nelle tags.

1. 00:15:784 (3) - Dimezzalo e aggiungici un repeat, esce meglio
2. 01:09:117 (3,4) - Brutti :c
3. 01:25:960 (1) - Rimuovi la new combo
4. 01:56:837 (1) - ^
5. 01:59:644 (1) - ^
6. 02:02:451 (1,2,3,4) - Quadrato che può confondere i principianti, cambia
7. 02:56:837 - Fai iniziare lo spinner qui

1. 00:02:451 (2,3,4,5) - Falli come 00:10:170 (1,2,3,4) - (qualcosa di simile, non so se mi spiego)
2. 00:55:433 (1,2) - Meglio fare slider 1/2 - beat - slider 1/2
3. 01:18:065 (2) - Meglio 2 beat
4. 01:51:574 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Ti prego sistema sta pseudo-vagina, falla meno "a rombo" lol
5. 02:47:363 (1) - Mi sembra troppo lento, fai 0.60/0.75

1. 00:15:960 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Non mi piacciono questi slider stream, non ci stanno per niente
2. 01:52:626 (1) - Cos'è sto coso dritto.
   Nothing else, diff molto bella.

Parachute wrote:

hi. ^^


Extreme
00:24:205 (1) - remove finish
00:27:012 (1) - ^
00:38:240 (1) - ^
00:39:644 (3) - add finish at the beginning
00:42:451 (1) - remove finish
00:43:854 (1) - ^
01:26:135 (2,3,4,5) - please.. just no... remove the sliders and add circles instead
01:42:100 (1,1) - remove the ncs
01:49:117 (5) - ^
01:50:521 (5) - ^
02:03:503 (8,9) - make them at least a bit more together Nah, not really necessary
02:05:258 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i dont know but.. this isnt good.. make something better pls I don't know what to do... It's readable, no big deal
02:32:451 (4,5) - reverse slider or 3 circles please


Challenging
00:23:854 (2) - move to x:256 y:336 ?
00:16:486 (4) - hmm kinda not fitting to the circles before that slider I disagree
01:20:345 (1) - uhm... delete at least one red point No, sorry
01:55:960 (2) - veery weird...^^ I like weird things
02:23:503 (1) - make it like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/741702
02:47:363 (1) - really ..make here the same thing what you made on relaxing or extreme .. much better xD What is the problem with these sliders >:C
03:18:065 (4) - thats not really good o: change it please I don't know, for now I'll keep it

Relaxing
00:12:275 (2) - remove whistle
00:15:082 (2) - ^
00:17:538 (1) - ^ at the end of the slider
00:27:714 (1,2) - maybe like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/741612
00:38:942 (2) - well... i guess one red point is enough here and it makes the slider look better... well if the red point is at the white tick.. and you have to make the white point of that slider more down for that^^ Nah
00:43:854 (1) - remove whistle
01:02:100 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/741622 fits much more i guess o.o Well, yes but there is not a big difference, I'll keep it!
01:51:574 (2) - maybe remove the 2 red points in the middle of the slider... looks better for me^^ :<
01:56:837 (1) - remove finish at the end I think it's necessary
01:58:591 (2) - add finish at the beginning
02:27:714 (2,3,1) - yes you should really do something else here Thanks a lot but I don't want to break the symmetry or the spacing
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/741598 , http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/741601
02:31:924 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/741597 wouldnt it be better like this^^
02:47:363 - you should lower the volume for this beat to about 30 Why?
03:00:696 (2) - i dont know if its just me but.. these sliders really look weird o.o (and i mean all of those sliders in that map xD) STAHP


good luck.^^

Thunderstorm wrote:

Hey!

Some suggestions

[Calm]
00:50:872 (1,2,3,4) - I'd suggest to do not use overlaps in easy diff's since it can be confusing and stess newb's But they are readable...
01:25:960 (1,2) - ^
01:48:416 (1,2) - ^
01:56:837 (1) - I'd better remove NC here, and swap combo between 01:58:591 (2) and 01:59:644 (1)
02:27:714 (2,3) - maybe align these two? They would look bad
03:07:012 (3) - makes 03:08:416 (1) - hidden until last moment, so newb's can be confused Uh, I don't know how to fix it, you're right anyways, I'll try something
Nice slider patterns though Thank you :3

[Relaxing]
It can be a mistake, but why only 45 sec long? It's still Work In Progress

[Challenging]
Some overlaps looks not so accurate, and I'd suggest to respace 01:16:135 (1,2) but overally, nice diff

[Extreme]
00:07:714 (3,1) - this kind of anti-jumps killing diff's flow Nah, they fit the song, I don't see the problem!
00:10:170 (1,1,1,1) - I'd suggest to put SB speed up warning here There are plenty of ranked maps with paterns like this without SB...
00:13:328 (3,1) - same as 00:07:714 (3,1)
00:18:942 (2,1) - ^
01:08:767 (7,1) - this overlap looks pretty bad I guess. I'd better space (7) or (1) away
01:51:574 (1,2,3,4,5) - Nice pattern, but I think most ppl will just screw it 'cause of enormous 1/4 stream spacing. Consider to reduse spacing here It's an 'Extreme'! I think the title tells enough
02:12:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
03:04:907 (6,7,8,9) - ^
03:10:521 (5,6,7,8,1) - ^
03:16:135 (6,7,8,9) - ^

GL w/ it

Leader wrote:

Yo
[General]

1. "INFLUENZA SYMPTOMS VOL 1" dovrebbe essere il nome dell'album quindi non va nella Source ma nelle tags. Uh, suppongo di sì ma per ora lo lascio lì, altrimenti non saprei cosa cavolo mettere come source

[Calm]

1. 00:15:784 (3) - Dimezzalo e aggiungici un repeat, esce meglio Poi si rovina lo spacing...
2. 01:09:117 (3,4) - Brutti :c Ma... Ma... Il blanket... ;_;
3. 01:25:960 (1) - Rimuovi la new combo
4. 01:56:837 (1) - ^
5. 01:59:644 (1) - ^
6. 02:02:451 (1,2,3,4) - Quadrato che può confondere i principianti, cambia
7. 02:56:837 - Fai iniziare lo spinner qui

Skippiamo la Relaxing

[Challening]

1. 00:02:451 (2,3,4,5) - Falli come 00:10:170 (1,2,3,4) - (qualcosa di simile, non so se mi spiego) Nah, così penso vadano bene
2. 00:55:433 (1,2) - Meglio fare slider 1/2 - beat - slider 1/2
3. 01:18:065 (2) - Meglio 2 beat Non ho mai messo stream nella diff, quindi lo lascio
4. 01:51:574 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Ti prego sistema sta pseudo-vagina, falla meno "a rombo" lol
5. 02:47:363 (1) - Mi sembra troppo lento, fai 0.60/0.75 No big deal, è durante una pausa... Non penso causi problemi

[Extreme]

1. 00:15:960 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Non mi piacciono questi slider stream, non ci stanno per niente Ma seguono la roba sullo sfondo
2. 01:52:626 (1) - Cos'è sto coso dritto. (Doppio senso atroce, fixato comunque <3)
   Nothing else, diff molto bella.

Buon mapset, good luck :3/

Irreversible wrote:

Hey there!

Sorry it took me so long, but i really didn't feel well the last times u.u

[General]

Looks fine! ~

[Extreme]

HP 4?? xD OH GOD, I FAILED AT IT. I accidentaly put 4 D: Now it's HP 7

00:00:346 (1,2,3) - Something went wrong with the distance snap here, i don't think this bigger gap between 2 and 3 are on purpose. Well, no big deal but I fixed!
00:10:170 (1,1,1,1) - Wow, this looks cool! Thank you :3
00:38:942 (1,2,3,4) - this makes kinda no sense.. why did you put it like this? Has it to do anything with the song? xD I dislike straight sliders
00:41:398 (4) - I think this should follow the path of the previous slider. Ops, yes
00:45:258 (1) - You might can see it yourself what's weird here: You put a round stream, but the slider interrupts that, because it doesn't follow the round-ness xD of the stream. Fix it by rotating! I think it's not a big deal
01:08:767 (7) - I think the last white point should look on the left, because it will get a blanket with the next slider I agree but I would ruin the flow...
01:24:731 (2,3,4) - Why did you increase DS between the streamcircles here? o.o Fix it But nobody cares D:
01:38:065 (5,6) - ehm.. fix the distancesnap too, it doesn't look to good just to have a random gap here Okay
02:03:854 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Hm.. i'm honest here: I don't like that part.
It's a bit weird to play, and the distance snap is REALLY weird here, if you play it, it looks really weird to my eyes, and i don't really know what exactly i'm doing here, i start spamming, because so many things appear. Also, at the
begin you use double reversed sliders, and then single sliders. The problem: The double reversed ones are really boring, and then it just gets super spammable.. i would really consider changing it by a stream, or just go on mapping as you did before - it will turn out much better.
Also something good is to use a stream at the begin (with circles) and then you go into the slider stream, this is funny, then you can also put a bigger DS. Oh, fuck it. I remapped all. <3
03:00:696 (5) - You forgot nc here i guess? Yup

Another tip: You should use a bit more DS between the sliderstreams, when it's fitting: it will stress the player, this can be very funny then.
Nevertheless: the map is pretty well made! it's fun to play as well, except that i spam sometimes because there are so many things, gogo! Thanks!

[Challenging]

You used HP 6 here, but in Extreme you used 4..? This is really weird D: I accidentally put 4 in Extreme, lol
Wow, this is really slow for Challenging.

00:07:012 (2) - Move this one a bit to the left, for same distance between the slider, 1 and 3. Okay
00:12:626 (4) - a bit downwards please, just aesthetics :d Ok
00:45:258 (1,2) - This really breaks the flow, please move it to somewhere else. True, I made another pattern
01:24:556 (1) - Distance again, i dunno what went wrong here but sometimes it just looks not the same DS between some parts, even if they should be the same (i actually think) No sorry, I can't understad what you are saying...
01:37:188 (1) - Is this slider on purpose? It seems to 02:55:559 - There is a sound on the blue tick
02:55:559 - Oh well, you could make a calm part here, but two breaks are a bit too much .. It's impossible to map that part!

looks fine!

[Relaxing]

This map is pretty interesting, it has nice patterns and the rhythm is also good! I don't think there is anything too wrong, since you mostly made something wrong with the DS in the other diffs, but i checked that, and it's nothing wrong here Fantasatic, thanks!

[Calm]

00:10:170 (1) - Make this one more symmetrical (sorry, can't help you with that, i'm bad as well) Fixed
00:41:047 (1,2) - This blanket looks a bit weird, it's so near to each other, try to transform the second slider a bit I don't know how to fix it, sincerly... The blanket is good imo
01:09:117 (3,4) - On the ticks there is definetly a hitsound missing
Same for the other bigger sliders! (most of the time, not all of them of course) check them pülease! You are the first that says it, I might consider this in the future
02:08:065 (1) - Rotate this one a bit, it will follow the previous slider better :3 Fixed
02:56:837 (1) - Is that allowed in easy? I'm not sure. I don't know, I fixed, just in case
03:14:030 (1) - A finish could fit pretty well Done
03:19:644 (1) - hitsounds on the ticks D: The same as before


Really nice rhythm here! Thanks!



Good luck !

[Luanny] wrote:

i'm laaaate

[Calm]

-Perfect diff omg <3 Thanks <3

00:32:626 (5) - fix the end to make a perfect blanket Okay
00:38:942 (2) - I'd suggest a shape like this instead WHY DOES EVERYONE HATE THIS SLIDER NNNNGHGHHGHGH. Fixed

SPOILER

01:14:731 (1) - whistle on the head
01:16:135 (2) - ^
01:25:960 (3,4) - ^ Ok
01:48:416 (1,2) - blanket is not perfect True
02:31:924 (1) - this flows better imo You forgot the screenshot I think, I changed it anyways

[Relaxing]

01:16:135 (2) - make it blanket with 3? you just need to move it up a bit and fix the curve. Just a little suggestion~ Okay

SPOILER

[Challenging]

-This diff plays great and is imo the best of this mapset. Simply awesome. Thanks a lot, really
-imo you should use some soft whistles for the 1/4s. Would sound great Ain't nobody got time for that I will think about it in the future

[Extreme]

-I won't really ~mod~ it but will give my view of the map. I persoally find the jump between the hard to insane kinda extreme. Too many streams with normal spacing while the hard is full of easy repeat sliders. There's not much to fix but I will show you what bothered me the most

00:10:170 (1,1,1,1) - this is REALLY unexpected Well, there are plenty of ranked maps (Mainly NatsumeRin's maps) with patterns like this ranked, I think I'll keep it, since it doesn't confuse other players
00:44:556 (6) - NC Yes
00:53:679 (1,2,3) - make this with the same slider shape pls. this looks weird atm Yes
01:30:170 (1) - this flows really bad imo. make a normal repeat slider? Everyone hates this slider, changed
01:35:784 (1) - same here, but I dunno how to fix Fixed
01:48:416 (1) - this sudden direction change plays weird Nah, I'll keep it

Well, good luck o3o/

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Oh, nice BGs . Mod requested from my queue! And sorry for the delay

[Extreme:]

-cut-

- I needed to start the mod in this difficulty, because should use more work. You need to fix the jumps mentioned in my mod (and some other if you want too), but this jumps inconsistencies is not the best way to make the map fun to play. So, I highly recommend to fix that, other than these jumps the first part of the map plays good

I decided to remove this diff since I mapped it totally wrong :/

[Challenging:]

Sometimes the hitsounding sounds empty, I'll recommend some whistles here

• 00:02:451 (2) - A Whistle at the slider start follow properly the instrumental. You should add it
• 00:05:960 - Add a whistle, here in the repetition, follows fine the vocals
• 00:13:679 (2) - Whistle at the Slider beginning
• 00:17:188 - Add a whistle here in the repetition
• 00:23:503 - Add a Whistle at the slider end, to follow properly the instrumental
• 00:24:907 - (^)
• 00:25:609 (2,4) - Add whistles in both slider ends
• 00:28:416 - Whistle in the repetition
• 00:30:521 - Whistle, here at the slider end
• 00:31:924 - (^)

Fixed all whistles

• 00:32:626 (1,2,3,4) - Is really necessary the 1/4 sliders usage here? Because the 1/4 are not in a really high pitch, in addition you didn't do that in 'Extreme' so I find this unnecesary in this difficulty. Hmm.. Maybe a spinner works fine here Since Extreme was removed, I decided to keep it
• 00:35:258 (1,2) - Personally, I didn't understand really fine this jump, because it is not consistent. If I follow this criteria, you should add a jump between 00:36:661 (1,2) - and this is not really suitable. So, would be better if you keep the normal spacing between these objects True
• 00:45:960 (3,4) - Due to the slow slider velocity in the map, this jump doesn't fit at all. In addition, the rhythm should some little tweak too, I recommend you to use this rhythm and note placement Fixed

SPOILER

• 01:04:030 (2) - As I said a pair of times in 'Extreme', reduce the Slider length in 1/2 and add a Note in 01:04:556 Ok
• 01:18:240 (1) - I'd remove this New Combo, is not really necessary imo Well, you're right
• 02:00:170 (2) - Will fit much better with the music if you reduce this Slider in 1/2 and then add a note in 02:00:696 - Remember that it is a Hard difficulty, so this will be simple to be followed I love this pattern ;_;
• 02:01:574 (2) - (^) In this case yes, I fixed it
• 02:07:714 (4,1) - The spacing is inconsistent between these objects comparing with the whole of the diff. since in general you use 1.20x and here you used 1.00x. So, moved the slider (1) to x:264 y:88 to keep the spacing consistent and that blanket Yes, thanks!
• 02:31:223 (1) - So much combo spam , I'd remove this new combo Okay
• 02:47:363 (1) - Increased the slider speed at least to 0.75x as I explained in 'Extreme' Okay
• 03:08:065 (3,1,2) - I'd keep consistency in this pattern, I mean try a rhythm like this one Much better. 7 1/2 sliders are annoying and senseless

SPOILER

• 03:19:644 - Add a note here, and move the spinner 1/4 forward. As you did in Relaxing Okay

- Nice one :3, the slider velocity is kinda low comparing with 'Extreme' but it is ok I think

[Relaxing:]

• Settings:
--> The settings are a bit high for this difficulty in general, what about reducing HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty 1 tick? It will help the mapset spreed too (OD,HP-1) Well, the song is calm, after all, fixed
--> *Optional* - The Circles are kinda pretty shorts for this difficulty, I tried reducing the Circle size and it plays fine. So, would be good if you give it a try at least (CS-1) Sorry but no, it's a bit odd because in "Challenging" circles are bigger, and most of players hate small circles

• Here, you can apply the Whistles mentioned in 'Challenging', because they follow fine the music too. Sure!

• 01:02:100 (1,1) - I'd reduce the spinner length in 1/1 because it follows better the vocals, in addition average players will have more time for the rest I agree

- Nothing critical, really. I enjoyed this difficulty , great job.

[Calm:]

• Settings:
--> They are kinda high for this diff. Reduce in 1 tick the HP Drain Rate, Approach Rate and overall difficulty in 1 tick please (HP,AR,OD -1) Okay

• You should apply some whistles mentioned in 'Challenging' in this difficulty too. Sure

Good diff. here too. Remember that a lot of overlap patterns are hard to read to new players in some way. You don't need to change them in this diff. but remember that for your next mapsets

Lowest difficulties looks ready to go, they are really good to me, challenging should be ready after to fix my mod imo.
But.. Extreme needs more mods :/, anyways I'll give you a star icon since I really liked the lowest difficulties.
Well, that's all from me. Good Luck with this mapset

RikiH_ wrote:

I decided to remove "Extreme" diff since it's totally wrong.
I filled it with random streams and random jumps, which don't fit for a song like this.

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

RikiH_ wrote:

I decided to remove "Extreme" diff since it's totally wrong.
I filled it with random streams and random jumps, which don't fit for a song like this.

Hmm.. I don't totally agree with you about this decision because I think this song deserves a high difficulty level (like an Insane).
But this is just my opinion, it is your decision to consider that because it is your map
For now, I can only say good luck with your mapset (:

Strawberry wrote:

[Relaxing]

1. 01:25:960 (1) - Try to make the blanket better?~ http://puu.sh/3d3tv.jpg Sure
2. 02:14:030 (2,3,4,1) - re-arrange them like this? Would be cleaner imo. http://puu.sh/3d3xO.jpg Yes, I made a star
3. 02:37:538 (1) - move a grid down so that i could be on the same straight line with the present slider.

　
[Challenging]

1. Use AR8 and OD7 for the 'Challenging'. Btw I feel that you can try some jumps even small some what since the present absence of some entertainment as the highest diff in the mapset. Put AR8 and OD7. I also tried to put some small jumps but I think they would ruin the flow so I prefered not to put them
2. 01:34:381 (5) - How about to change a shape more artistic rather than the present optional one? I can heard that there has few waves from 01:34:907 - to 01:35:082 - in the song, so how about try this shape?~(just suggestion. http://puu.sh/3d39T.jpg Wow, epic! Fixed
3. 02:10:170 (3) - Why not to curve it since it could be a blanket with the following slider (4). Would be flow better imo~ http://puu.sh/3d3mf.jpg

Of course

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Really nice DnB map. Consider the suggestions on Challenging diff and call me back after other points fixed.

• • "electronic" nelle tags non è necessario visto che è il genere della canzone.
  • Cosa è "INFLUENZA SYMPTOMS VOL 1"? Se è un album sappi che metterlo nella source è sbagliato, perchè? Leggi.
  • Onestamente preferirei se rinominassi la easy e la normal in "Beginner" e "Normal", calm e relaxing non stanno poi tanto bene con questa canzone imo.
  • Sposta il preview time a 01:07:714, non vedo il motivo di metterlo quasi alla fine della canzone.
  • Che ne dici di usare uno sliderslide silenziato?
  • 02:50:082 (break) - Avere due break uno dietro l'altro non è proprio il massimo, prova a mappare questo qua.

• • 00:10:170 (1) - Rendilo perfettamente simmetrico (spammare Ctrl + h può aiutarti)
  • 00:53:679 (3) - Prova a capovolgerlo orizzontalmente:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:57:889 (3) - Questo slider può essere migliorato, guarda:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:59:293 (4) - ^
  • 01:18:240 (1) - Prova ad accentuare un pò di più la spaccatura centrale:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:31:574 (2) - Invece di uno slider dritto fai uno slider leggermente curvato verso l'alto.
  • 01:51:574 (2) - Come 01:18:240.
  • 03:19:644 (1) - Elimina questo slider e aggiungi uno spinner come nelle altre due diff.

• • 00:15:784 (5) - Curva questo slider 15° in senso antiorario per un flow migliore.
  • 01:06:310 (1) - Fai finire questo slider a 01:06:837 e aggiungi una ripetizione.
  • 01:28:767 (3) - Curvalo di 5~7° in senso antiorario per avere la stessa angolatura di 01:29:819 (4).
  • 01:59:644 (3) - Aggiungi una new combo come hai fatto a 01:54:030 (1) per tenere una consistenza.
  • 02:23:503 (1) - Trovo questo slider superfluo, eliminalo.

• • 01:25:960 (1,2) - Non mi piace il flow qui, prova così:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 02:23:503 (1) - Stessa cosa della Relaxing, elimina questo slider.
  • 02:47:363 (1) - Uno slider a ~ come quello che hai fatto nella Relaxing sta molto meglio qui imo.
  • 03:09:117 (3,4) - Prova questa pattern:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 03:14:731 (3) - Capovolgilo verticalmente e orizzontalmente, invertilo (Ctrl + g) e riposizionalo a x:272 y:212.

xxheroxx wrote:

Salve dott. Diprè! o/ lol



Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
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General

• • "electronic" nelle tags non è necessario visto che è il genere della canzone. Tolto
  • Cosa è "INFLUENZA SYMPTOMS VOL 1"? Se è un album sappi che è metterlo nella source è sbagliato, perchè? Leggi. È vero, mi ero totalmente dimenticato di ciò.
  • Onestamente preferirei se rinominassi la easy e la normal in "Beginner" e "Normal", calm e relaxing non stanno poi tanto bene con questa canzone imo. Non sono d'accordo, se leggi i mod precedenti molte persone dicono che la map è rilassante, quindi preferirei tenere questi nomi, o magari cambiarli però non in "Beginner" e "Normal", siccome non mi piacciono molto
  • Sposta il preview time a 01:07:714, non vedo il motivo di metterlo quasi alla fine della canzone. Sì, in effetti
  • Che ne dici di usare uno sliderslide silenziato? Non mi piacciono molto gli elementi silenziati, penso che lascerò così
  • 02:50:082 (break) - Avere due break uno dietro l'altro non è proprio il massimo, prova a mappare questo qua. Ci ho già provato, mi usciva uno schifo, quindi ho preferito lasciare il break

Calm

• • 00:10:170 (1) - Rendilo perfettamente simmetrico (spammare Ctrl + h può aiutarti) Ho cercato di fare del mio meglio
  • 00:53:679 (3) - Prova a capovolgerlo orizzontalmente: Epico, fixed
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:57:889 (3) - Questo slider può essere migliorato, guarda: Ok
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:59:293 (4) - ^
  • 01:18:240 (1) - Prova ad accentuare un pò di più la spaccatura centrale: Fixed
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:31:574 (2) - Invece di uno slider dritto fai uno slider leggermente curvato verso l'alto. E' meglio, fatto
  • 01:51:574 (2) - Come 01:18:240. Sure
  • 03:19:644 (1) - Elimina questo slider e aggiungi uno spinner come nelle altre due diff. Ok

Relaxing

• • 00:15:784 (5) - Curva questo slider 15° in senso antiorario per un flow migliore. Ok
  • 01:06:310 (1) - Fai finire questo slider a 01:06:837 e aggiungi una ripetizione. Qui preferirei lasciarlo unico, secondo me suona meglio
  • 01:28:767 (3) - Curvalo di 5~7° in senso antiorario per avere la stessa angolatura di 01:29:819 (4). 6°
  • 01:59:644 (3) - Aggiungi una new combo come hai fatto a 01:54:030 (1) per tenere una consistenza. Okay
  • 02:23:503 (1) - Trovo questo slider superfluo, eliminalo. Fatto, ho pure fatto iniziare lo spinner 1/4 prima

Challenging

• • 01:25:960 (1,2) - Non mi piace il flow qui, prova così: Li ho un po' curvati entrambi
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 02:23:503 (1) - Stessa cosa della Relaxing, elimina questo slider. Fatto anche qui
  • 02:47:363 (1) - Uno slider a ~ come quello che hai fatto nella Relaxing sta molto meglio qui imo. Effettivamente quello attuale ha una forma strana, fixed
  • 03:09:117 (3,4) - Prova questa pattern: Meglio della mia
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 03:14:731 (3) - Capovolgilo verticalmente e orizzontalmente, invertilo (Ctrl + g) e riposizionalo a x:272 y:212. Flowwa molto meglio, fatto

Bella mappa, richiamami appena controlli questi suggerimenti. Grazie mille per il tuo mod, hai migliorato molto la map, appena ti trovo online ti richiamo