Hey there!
Sorry it took me so long, but i really didn't feel well the last times u.u
[General]
Looks fine! ~
[Extreme]
HP 4?? xD
00:00:346 (1,2,3) - Something went wrong with the distance snap here, i don't think this bigger gap between 2 and 3 are on purpose.
00:10:170 (1,1,1,1) - Wow, this looks cool!
00:38:942 (1,2,3,4) - this makes kinda no sense.. why did you put it like this? Has it to do anything with the song? xD
00:41:398 (4) - I think this should follow the path of the previous slider.
00:45:258 (1) - You might can see it yourself what's weird here: You put a round stream, but the slider interrupts that, because it doesn't follow the round-ness xD of the stream. Fix it by rotating!
01:08:767 (7) - I think the last white point should look on the left, because it will get a blanket with the next slider
01:24:731 (2,3,4) - Why did you increase DS between the streamcircles here? o.o Fix it
01:38:065 (5,6) - ehm.. fix the distancesnap too, it doesn't look to good just to have a random gap here
02:03:854 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Hm.. i'm honest here: I don't like that part.
It's a bit weird to play, and the distance snap is REALLY weird here, if you play it, it looks really weird to my eyes, and i don't really know what exactly i'm doing here, i start spamming, because so many things appear. Also, at the
begin you use double reversed sliders, and then single sliders. The problem: The double reversed ones are really boring, and then it just gets super spammable.. i would really consider changing it by a stream, or just go on mapping as you did before - it will turn out much better.
Also something good is to use a stream at the begin (with circles) and then you go into the slider stream, this is funny, then you can also put a bigger DS.
03:00:696 (5) - You forgot nc here i guess?
Another tip: You should use a bit more DS between the sliderstreams, when it's fitting: it will stress the player, this can be very funny then.
Nevertheless: the map is pretty well made! it's fun to play as well, except that i spam sometimes because there are so many things, gogo!
[Challenging]
You used HP 6 here, but in Extreme you used 4..? This is really weird D:
Wow, this is really slow for Challenging.
00:07:012 (2) - Move this one a bit to the left, for same distance between the slider, 1 and 3.
00:12:626 (4) - a bit downwards please, just aesthetics :d
00:45:258 (1,2) - This really breaks the flow, please move it to somewhere else.
01:24:556 (1) - Distance again, i dunno what went wrong here but sometimes it just looks not the same DS between some parts, even if they should be the same (i actually think)
01:37:188 (1) - Is this slider on purpose? It seems to 02:55:559 -
02:55:559 - Oh well, you could make a calm part here, but two breaks are a bit too much ..
looks fine!
[Relaxing]
This map is pretty interesting, it has nice patterns and the rhythm is also good! I don't think there is anything too wrong, since you mostly made something wrong with the DS in the other diffs, but i checked that, and it's nothing wrong here
[Calm]
00:10:170 (1) - Make this one more symmetrical (sorry, can't help you with that, i'm bad as well)
00:41:047 (1,2) - This blanket looks a bit weird, it's so near to each other, try to transform the second slider a bit
01:09:117 (3,4) - On the ticks there is definetly a hitsound missing
Same for the other bigger sliders! (most of the time, not all of them of course) check them pülease!
02:08:065 (1) - Rotate this one a bit, it will follow the previous slider better :3
02:56:837 (1) - Is that allowed in easy? I'm not sure.
03:14:030 (1) - A finish could fit pretty well
03:19:644 (1) - hitsounds on the ticks D:
Really nice rhythm here!
Good luck
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