-Cloudchaser wrote:

Por tu propia petición!

☢ General☢

• ☢ Offset: 75 Okey
  ☢ Source: Mondaiji-tachi ga Isekai Kara Kuru Sō Desu yo? Idiota yo olvidé agregarlo.

☢ Normal ☢

• Esta dificultad es bastante difícil para un principiante como por ejemplo la distance tiene que ser corta y constante ya que grandes espacios es complicado para un novato X.
  Yo te recomendaría que pusieras esto en "Difficult"
  
  SPOILER

  

1. 00:19:607 (1) - quita NC, ya que es innecesario en esta nota.
   
2. 00:25:232 (1,2) - trata de no hacer stacks de notas ya que es un poco difícil para jugadores novatos.
3. 00:28:669 (1,2) - ^
4. 00:27:732 (1,2) - quita NC (New Combo) y quita el stack
5. 00:32:107 (1) - ajusta este spinner, te sugiero que sea de 1/1, es decir, línea blanca con línea blanca
6. 00:37:732 (1,2) - quita new combo y stacks
   le falta un poco más de trabajo a esta diff, pero nada mal.

Todo hecho, dejé el OD como estaba y quité casi todos los stacks, no veo necesidad de quitarlos todos ya que en mi opinión notas stackeadas no deberían suponer problema para los newbies.

☢ Hard ☢

1. 00:19:060 - a 00:19:841 - , 00:19:216 (2,3) - suena mal con 80% de volumen y claps igual como 00:19:607 (1) - consiguete algún hitsound clap para este o3o digo yo He pensado en cambiar los hitsounds de la canción por unos de bateria más fuertes.
   
2. 01:18:044 (9) - Borra esto de aquí, ya que no tiene ninguna utilidad en ese lugar Sigue la bateria.
3. 01:23:513 - ¿agrega circle? Listo
4. edit: 01:23:591 - ^ Nope, no le veo sentido añadir un triple ahí.

☢ Black + White ☢

1. 00:11:169 (1,1,2,1,2) - New Combo
2. 00:12:419 (1,2,1,1) - ^
3. 00:13:200 (1,1,1,1,1,1,2) - ^
   Hay muchos errores de Combos, no sé como explicarte cuando se ponen ya que la explicación que tengo es difícil de entender.
4. 00:31:169 (1,2,3,4,5) - te sugiero que no hayan cambios drásticos de velocidad, pasó de un slider de 0,50 a 1,00 No le veo problema a ese slider en slowmod seguido de un stream, es totalmente leible.
5. 01:02:575 - a 01:03:982 - breaktime No me gusta, pero lo añado por ahora, quizá alguien con low acc en esa parte pierde por el espacio.
   
   Nada mal, pero tiene el mapa problemas de Combos, arreglable pero lo debes hacer si o si.

Respecto a los combos, están muy random, debo trabajar más en ello.
Disculpa si me demoré! suerte

L-Len wrote:

Hi!

[Hard]

00:13:045 (3) - Unsnapped I didn't see anything unsnaped here, but I move it just in case
00:13:357 (1,2) - overlap Fixed I think
00:15:388 (2) - 2 grid up I moved only once
00:48:200 (2,3) - make more beautiful like this

I made all that I can do
00:50:544 (1) - 1 grid left Looks better thanks

[Black + White]

01:20:857 (3,4,5) - move to 183|332
01:21:169 (6) - move to 327|332
01:21:325 (7) - move to 317|196
Made all
Sorry for bad modding..

Natteke wrote:

[Gero's Easy]

clap... clap... clap... clap... clap... clap... clap... clap... clap... clap... clap... e.e

Terrible hitsounds. meh!!

Also last part is unmapped.

Natteke wrote:

Offset: 214. Don't forget to fix green lines! I will wait for more opinions, I think the offset is ok

[Black + White]

Almost can't hear your hitsounds :/ I will up the volumen, but not now c:

Combos are weird on this diff. (and all other diffs)

00:13:978 (1,2) - It's a bit confusing, I keep thinking these are regular sliders and not slowed down. Maybe using tick rate 2 would help with this slider and all slow sliders after it Ok i use tick 2 for now
00:20:917 (1) - Not sure if this plays well right after the spinner, I'd suggest removing this note I removed just because it start in blue dot.
00:39:915 (4) - pretty weird spacing, looks ugly too. Try spacing this note out at the same distance as (2) and (3) Ok fixed
00:45:071 (3) - I know you tried to make this symmetrical but it looks pretty mad I move the note now I think is good
00:54:290 (2) - if you want symmetry here, move it a bit to the left? Didn't notice that, thx
00:54:446 (3) - looks bad, it's way too close to (1) I stacked with (2)
01:04:915 (1) - why is this a new combo? Cuz it may confuse if ther's no NC ther
01:21:321 (7) - aaargghh my eyes, maybe try to make a star like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/619311 Fixed

[Hard]

00:40:540 (2) - Try moving this note away from (1)? Something like this would probably work better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/619315 I like the way it is
00:46:790 (1,2) - lonely lonely new combo, you don't really need it for just 2 notes hehe I put it because of the drum, but I removed now
00:58:821 (1,2) - same problem as 00:40:540 (2) I stacked (2) with the slider
00:59:915 (1,2) - here too I like the way it is
01:04:915 - it feels so empty here without a note Ok c:
01:13:509 - unused timing section. not very important thoguh, doesn't affect the gameplay I like it so much
01:17:103 (6) - how about you move this note to 01:16:946 - and add a note here 01:17:259 - and here 01:17:415 - I like it
01:23:978 - this part is unmapped? it's so nice, add something here Cuz that part is special for Insane players, is a bonus

[Normal]

00:35:696 (1) - consider moving this note further away Nope sorry, it may confuse newbies
00:49:603 (1) - lonely new combo for one slider I put a NC ther cuz the voice, but now I removed
00:55:228 (1) - here too Same, but I didn't removed it

your new combos... try following this pattern: count the beat 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8, this way you have consistent combos I will work on combos is all diffs

01:25:228 - this part is empty too!! Same as hard

spboxer3 wrote:

Don't give kd for this post.

source: Mondaiji-tachi ga Isekai kara Kuru Sou Desu yo?

please check this typo from your source

from: wiki

Irreversible wrote:

Hello o: From my queue~ Sorry that it took ages.. but still, you're the first one of round three who gets a mod. ^^;

[General]

I suggest use some custom hitsounds! Write me a pm for more informations~ There are custom e.e

[Normal]

00:22:103 - I think the spinner ends here o.o Nope, I follow the rhythm
00:32:728 - The Spinner definetly ends here If I do that the spiner will be too short for a Normal
00:40:228 (1) - Listen to the music: She says something like Wa-Ha-Shi 00:40:696 - "Ha" is said here: so the reverse has to be here. 00:40:696 - Fixed
00:56:165 (1) - Remove NC ok
Why are the hitsounds so quiet in Kiai time? I think they should be louder than before XD I will filx them in a future

Note: Same as Easy

[Hard]

00:18:821 (1,2,3,4,1) - This part sounds very odd. 1) The rythm you placed seems wrong. 2) The hitsounds.. why normal? o.o Try to remap it. I like the way it is, but I changed the sounds to soft
00:23:353 - Add a circle It may confuse
I looked at it until this part 00:41:165 - : I suggest another beatpattern. Try this: 00:22:728 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/256rl and repeat it until 41 seconds. (except there are other beats, i hope you can understand me o:) I really don't get this
00:46:165 (4) - no hitsound There is a drum ther, but I deleted the finish In the slider tail before that note
00:52:571 (4) - Add a circle I follow rhythm, sorry but nope
01:03:353 - o.o what about adding something here? xD Nope
The same thing with the hitsounds make them louder xD Same as Normal

This diff is cool. You got some nice patterns here But still - go over it again, and maybe fix some wrong hitsounds: Remember; use the same hitsound pattern as much as you can!

[Black + White]


00:13:353 (1,2,3,4) - Stacking is pretty boring I think is funny
00:13:978 (1,2,1) - Well.. i don't recommend this slow-thing Why, is funny and rankeable
00:17:728 (2,3,1,2,3) - Weird placing I will change it when I have some Imagination

Well.. i suggest you take a look at http://osu.ppy.sh/s/75509 , i think this is nice placed and stuff - maybe you get some ideas! Also, sorry for that short mod. But i think i gave you some tips, and in this case, you can ask me for a re-check! PM me whenever you want

See you then~

Makyu wrote:

Go ahead, but please, make two of them, or find someone to make the other onem you know, that rule.

Irreversible wrote:

I didn't say you should copy it, but you can still have a look :3

scanter wrote:

SPOILER

[Normal]
Change AR 4~5, OD 4 AR4 but OD3
00:11:478 (1) - Add finish on slider's first.
00:16:478 (1) - ^
00:18:665 (4) - Delete slider's main clap and slider's end finish, add finish on slider's arrow. because I listened to finish sound at 00:18:978 I added the finish but I didn't delete the clap.
00:19:603 (5) - Add slider tick's finish.
00:15:228 (3,4) - You should keep distance x1.1 I think, looks a little strange about jump. move to x:84, y:220
00:23:040 (1) - suggestion rhythm. how about that? http://puu.sh/25ZJ2 Nope sorry
00:29:915 (3) - Add slider tick's finish.
00:31:165 (4) - Add finish on slider's first.
00:31:946 (1) - Looks a little strange. consider change circles & sliders combination. I think Is ok
00:31:946 (1) - Clear slider's finish.
00:38:196 (4) - Looks so bad. move to different place. you should do not hide. I changed it In a diferent way
00:40:228 (1) - Clear clap at slider's arrow and add finish on slider's every points. I think is ok the way it is
00:41:790 (2,4) - Clear finish. I can't hear about that sounds.
00:42:728 (1) - Add finish on slider's first.
00:43:665 (3) - Clear finish at slider's first.
00:52:728 (1) - Add finish on slider's first.
00:57:103 (1) - Add finish on slider's end.
00:58:040 (2) - ^
01:06:478 (2) - Add finish
01:12:571 (1,3) - ^
01:16:165 (1) - Add finish on slider's arrow.
01:18:978 (1) - Add finish on slider's first.
01:20:853 (2) - Clear slider's finish
01:22:103 (1) - Add finish on 01:22:415

[Hard]
Change HP 5~6, OD 6
00:08:978 (1) - Clear finish.
00:11:478 (1) - Add finish.
00:15:384 (2) - Add clap on 00:15:540
00:16:478 (1) - Add finish.
00:18:821 (1) - Add finish on 00:18:978
00:29:603 (3) - Add clap on slider's end.
00:30:228 (1) - Clear clap.
00:30:696 (3) - Add finish on slider's first and clap on slider's end.
00:31:165 (4) - Clear clap.
00:32:103 (4) - Add clap on slider's first.
00:33:196 (2) - Clear finish.
00:34:915 (4) - Move to x:146, y:221. not perfect stacked.
00:40:228 (1) - Clear clap.
00:40:696 (3) - Clear clap at slider's first and Add finish on slider's first.
00:42:728 (1) - Add finish.
00:46:165 (4) - Clear finish and move to x:131, y:210. not perfect stacked.
00:47:103 (6) - Clear clap at slider's first and add clap at slider's end.
00:47:728 (1) - Add finish on slider's first.
00:49:290 (4) - move to x:148, y:61. not perfect stacked.
00:55:696 (2) - Clear whistle at slider's first.
00:57:728 (1) - Add finish on slider's first.
00:58:353 (2) - Add finish on slider's end.
01:00:071 (5) - Add finish on 01:00:228
01:00:696 (2) - Clear clap at slider's first.
01:04:915 (4) - Add clap.
01:12:571 (1) - Add finish at slider's first.
01:13:978 (1) - Add finist at slider's first.
01:14:290 (2) - Ctrl + G? Nope sorry
01:18:353 (1) - You should add notes here. so strange. I think is ok this spinner
01:23:978 (7) - NC

[Black + White]
00:13:196 (4,1,2,3,4) - Move to x:234, y:175. not perfect stacked. Since none like this, I will change.
00:23:196 (2) - Move to x:290. y:223. same as.
00:58:353 (2) - Move to x:181, y:271. same as.
00:58:821 (1) - If you follow this, move to x:66, y:115.
00:59:290 (2) - ^, move to x:245, y:39.
01:00:696 (3) - Move to x:87, y:207.
01:05:540 (2) - Should more perfect stack.
01:15:540 (2) - Move to x:438, y:192

I can't hitsound mod at Black + White. because this is essence difficulty btw thank you ~

JauiPlaY wrote:

SPOILER

Ok, let's see...

[General]
I guess it's fine, but what does the tag 0gre mean? He's the taiko mapper

[Normal]
Still I think it's weird to begin with a spinner.
00:19:290 - Why finish? Already changed
00:20:540 (1) - Same suggestion as Easy. Nope sorry, I like the way it is
00:25:228 (1,2) - Confusing for a normal. Why? the specing is good
00:27:728 (4,5) - ^ Same
00:31:946 (1) - Move to 00:31:868.
00:35:696 (1) - No need to add NC here.
00:37:728 (3,4) - Confusing for a normal. It's ok
01:12:571 (1,2,3) - Bad spacing.
01:13:509 - Move the timing point to 01:13:899. Not because the kiai time MUST be consistent in all diff

[Hard]
Still I think it's weird to begin with a spinner.
00:19:603 (1) - Remove NC.
00:33:196 (2) - Remove the finish.
00:40:228 (1,2,3) - Spacing. It's ok, I never missed In that part, and I'm noob at this game
00:59:290 (3,4) - ^ same here
01:18:353 (1) - Can't you make something more interesting than a spinner? Why? imo the spinner it's ok here
The spacings in kiai were kinda random.

[Black + White]
Maybe you should use black/white combo color. Or...it's hard to understand why this diff has such a diff name. Because it's the name of the song?
Still I think it's weird to begin with a spinner.
To be honest the rhythm was not bad, however, maybe you'd like to fixed those tiny issues like the unperfect stack on 00:12:884 (3,4). They are not major problems, but will make you map looks poor. I fix a lot of stack problems
I won't list those little issues all cuz it will be actually a nazi-mod. Please understand me.

And, at last, I can hardly found impressive hitsound using in your map. In other words, boring hitsounds everywhere.
I know I'm like quite picky, but imo this map definitely needs further working. Good luck.

BounceBabe wrote:

SPOILER

Hi, from the Queue!

Normal

00:14:290 (2,3) - Spacing I moved it and the spacing was good
00:27:728 (4) - NC so you match previous combo pattern
00:33:040 - Spinner should end here
00:35:696 (1) - Remove NC
00:36:790 (2,4) - Dont let this overlapp Already changed
- 00:37:728 (3) - NC for matching pattern
00:47:728 - Slider should start here soundwise

Example

00:58:978 (3) - Place this below the sliders, to make better playability
01:08:978 (1,2) - Spacing, keep normal spacing and dont ever make such a jump on Easy or Normal for symmetry

Hard

This is too hard for a Hard diff, its close to Insane

00:12:415 (1,2) - Spacing
00:13:040 (3,1) - ^,
00:18:978 - Try this rythm is much better and is less confusing because 00:18:821 (1,2,3,4,1) - this doesnt fit soundwise

Example

00:33:196 (2) - Finish is so wrong here, remove it Already do it
00:40:228 (1,2,3) - Spacing, 2-3 is not right
01:06:790 (1) - Remove NC, unnecessary

Insane

00:13:353 (1,2,3,4) - First, not stacked well, second, it is boring to play on one spot, make more jumps here
00:19:134 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - This is too overmapped and doesnt play or fit good at all, make something what fits the song I know red is unrankeable stuff, but I clearly listen drums there.
00:21:009 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ..... im speechless, why would you put a stream somewhere where is NO sound at all relating to streams. And please dont tell me "because it fits" because i hear that excuse very often. Im listening drums there. But ok, is red text so i just delete that part, and just extended the spinner
00:23:978 (1) - Remove NC Nope, there si a big dot there, and Im following the vocan with that NC
00:25:384 (4) - NC to follow pattern
00:48:665 (1) - Remove NC
00:51:165 (1) - ^
00:57:728 - Slider should start here soundwise imo it's ok the way it is

Well, this needs so much work. Good luck

neonat wrote:

Hi there, some suggestions from my queue.

General

the normal-hitclap for custom that you used sounds the same as normal-hit, do you really need it? 00:31:634 (1) - in Normal difficulty sounds the same as a normal hit. You maybe have the old one, try to dw the song again

Gero's Easy

01:04:603 - try starting the next object at 01:04:603, give's people more time to react, especially in an easy

Normal

00:47:728 (5) - NC k
01:06:478 (2) - NC here instead of 01:06:165 (1) k
00:31:634 (1,2,3) - try reducing the volume of hitsounds, especially the first 3, it's a little bit loud I'm listening good

Black + White

00:14:915 (1) - how about lengthening it and making it end at 00:15:540 Because those trhee notes are following the guitar
00:18:040 (1) - remove NC k
00:18:353 (3) - NC k
00:18:821 (1) - remove NC k
00:18:978 (2) - NC k
00:26:634 - how about something here? A fill-in and keeps a pace to the song Im following vocal here

Good luck!

Lundlerol wrote:

hi~
0gre's taiko irc mod reqs~

IRC MOD

12:32 Lundlerol: じゃあやるぞー
12:32 Lundlerol: irc mod
12:32 Lundlerol: 00:20:853 (2) -  
12:32 0gre: はい
12:32 Lundlerol: スライダーは甘え
12:32 0gre: つまり？
12:32 Lundlerol: はずせ
12:33 Lundlerol: あとこれ
12:33 Lundlerol: 誰がやっても
12:33 Lundlerol: オフセずれてんだろ
12:33 0gre: 知ってる
12:35 Lundlerol: ちょいとトイレ
12:35 0gre: おk
12:37 Lundlerol: ただいま
12:37 0gre: おかー
12:37 Lundlerol: 00:11:165 (1) - 
12:37 Lundlerol: ここのさー
12:37 Lundlerol: Kをkにかえて
12:37 Lundlerol: 00:11:478 (1) - 
12:37 Lundlerol: コイツをDにかえてみたらー
12:38 0gre: そうだね～
12:41 Lundlerol: 00:25:071 (3,4,5,6,1,1) - 
12:41 Lundlerol: ここら辺迷ってんだよなー
12:42 Lundlerol: 00:22:728 (2,3,4,1,1) - 
12:42 Lundlerol: ここか
12:42 0gre: あー
12:42 0gre: ここ迷った
12:43 Lundlerol: 俺なら
12:43 Lundlerol: 00:25:228 (4) - 　ここを
12:43 Lundlerol: 始点に
12:43 Lundlerol: ３連置くかなー
12:43 Lundlerol: 00:25:540 (1,1) - 
12:43 Lundlerol: で
12:43 Lundlerol: この２つはk dで
12:44 Lundlerol: 00:27:728 (4,5,6,1,1) - 
12:44 Lundlerol: ここも
12:44 Lundlerol: 00:32:728 (2,3,4,1,1) - 
12:44 Lundlerol: 00:35:228 (1,2,3,1,1) - 
12:45 Lundlerol: 00:37:728 (4,5,6,1,1) - 
12:45 Lundlerol: これ全部なー
12:46 0gre: おk－
12:47 Lundlerol: 00:44:603 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,1) - 
12:47 Lundlerol: ここの３連はどこに沿ってるんですか
12:50 0gre: うーむ
12:50 0gre: え　ここ？
12:50 Lundlerol: もしかして：適当
12:50 Lundlerol: おう
12:50 0gre: 声の
12:50 0gre: 払い
12:50 Lundlerol: 払いとは一体
12:51 0gre: 00:44:915 - 
12:51 0gre: ここの上がってる部分を強調してる
12:51 0gre: で00:45:071 - 
12:51 0gre: ここにd　置くことで　止めてる
12:51 Lundlerol: 00:45:228 (2) - 
12:51 Lundlerol: これあったら止めれてないがな
12:52 0gre: あの部分だけ
12:52 0gre: だって次が
12:52 0gre: 00:45:696 - 
12:52 0gre: ここでまた違うから
12:52 0gre: 00:44:759 (2,3,1,1) - 
12:52 0gre: ここと
12:52 0gre: 00:45:228 (2,3,4,1,1) - 
12:52 Lundlerol: n
12:52 0gre: ここの違いを作るために　
12:53 0gre: あそこで　d　を切って
12:53 0gre: 00:45:071 - 
12:53 0gre: ここ止めたって言ったけど
12:53 0gre: 00:45:228 - 
12:53 0gre: 結局流れるから　d　置き
12:53 Lundlerol: 結論言うと
12:53 Lundlerol: 00:45:071 - 
12:53 Lundlerol: その話ならここいらん
12:54 0gre: d　ってこと？
12:54 Lundlerol: dいらん
12:54 0gre: 何もいらんてこと？
12:54 Lundlerol: 00:45:071 - 
12:54 Lundlerol: ここがいらん！
12:54 0gre: あ　そこか
12:54 Lundlerol: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/634429
12:54 Lundlerol: おう
12:55 0gre: 00:45:071 - 
12:55 0gre: k　にしてみようかなー
12:55 0gre: ほうほう
12:56 Lundlerol: 何故に
12:56 0gre: あ　てかここ　00:45:853 - 
12:56 0gre: k　消した
12:56 Lundlerol: じゃあ尚更
12:56 Lundlerol: 00:45:071 - 
12:56 Lundlerol: ここいらんわ
12:57 0gre: 確かに良いけど
12:57 0gre: 00:45:071 - 
12:58 0gre: 00:46:790 - 
12:58 0gre: この間
12:58 0gre: 二つも止める流れには見えない
12:58 0gre: なんか違和感感じない？
12:59 Lundlerol: じゃあなんで違和感感じると思う
13:00 0gre: 00:45:071 - 
13:00 0gre: ここと
13:00 0gre: 00:45:853 - 
13:00 0gre: ここ
13:00 Lundlerol: ちげえよ
13:00 Lundlerol: 00:44:759 (2,3,1) - 
13:00 Lundlerol: ここだろ
13:00 0gre: どっちかは入れたい
13:00 Lundlerol: この３連どうにかすれば
13:00 Lundlerol: 00:45:071 - 
13:00 0gre: これかー
13:00 Lundlerol: ここは入る
13:01 0gre: 00:44:759 - 
13:01 0gre: 今ここから
13:01 0gre: d k kkd d k d    d k
13:01 0gre: になった
13:02 Lundlerol: 00:44:915 (1) - 　
13:02 Lundlerol: 俺ならここを３連の始点にするがな
13:03 0gre: それ試してみたけど
13:03 0gre: ここ
13:04 0gre: ボーカルだけにむやみに沿わせなくても　良いと思うんだけど
13:04 0gre: なんていうんだろ
13:04 0gre: 理由っていうか
13:05 0gre: 感ww
13:05 Lundlerol: 感（）
13:05 0gre: でも　今出来てる感じはどう思う？
13:05 0gre: 00:45:071 - 
13:05 0gre: それになんかここで変わり目が目立つから
13:05 Lundlerol: このあとボーカルに沿ってる部分の多々あるのに
13:06 Lundlerol: なんでこここんなに違和感あるんだろうかーって
13:06 0gre: それを繋いで支えてるみたいな
13:06 0gre: 別にボーカルだけに沿ってるわけじゃないぞ？
13:06 0gre: 00:46:478 - 
13:06 Lundlerol: 同じ雰囲気の中で
13:07 Lundlerol: コロコロボーカルに変えるのはどうなんだ？ってことを言ってるんだよ
13:07 0gre: 00:46:243 - 
13:07 0gre: そしたら　ここにも　連打を入れることになるよ？
13:08 0gre: 00:47:806 - 
13:08 0gre: ここなど
13:08 Lundlerol: 00:46:243 - 
13:08 Lundlerol: ここいれて
13:08 Lundlerol: 00:46:399 - 
13:08 Lundlerol: ここを消すがな
13:08 Lundlerol: 俺はな
13:08 0gre: そこに　k　？
13:09 Lundlerol: kでもdでもいいんじゃない
13:09 0gre: つまり　d　kdd　d　d　k　？
13:09 Lundlerol: kdkでもいいよ
13:10 Lundlerol: ちょっと俺
13:10 Lundlerol: 郵便局いってくるわ
13:10 0gre: えwww
13:11 0gre: おk
13:11 Lundlerol: 親がはよいけって
13:11 Lundlerol: うるさい
13:11 0gre: 分かったw
13:11 Lundlerol: おう
13:11 0gre: 待っとるよ
13:11 Lundlerol: うい
14:45 Lundlerol: トイレ
14:46 0gre: お　
14:46 0gre: おかー
14:46 Lundlerol: トイレいってくる
14:46 Lundlerol: 　
14:46 0gre: おk　早くねw
14:55 Lundlerol: あー
14:56 Lundlerol: 喉いてー
14:59 Lundlerol: 01:04:446 (1) - 
15:00 Lundlerol: K違和感しかない
15:00 0gre: 01:04:759 (2,1) - 
15:00 0gre: ここ　k　d　になった
15:01 Lundlerol: irc終わってないのに編集されるとめちゃくちゃややこしくなるの知ってた？（威圧
15:01 0gre: ごめんねw
15:01 Lundlerol: お、おう
15:02 Lundlerol: ご飯食べる
15:02 0gre: おkw
15:02 Lundlerol: pc前で
15:20 Lundlerol: 01:06:790 (1) - 
15:20 Lundlerol: ここ
15:20 Lundlerol: kな
15:21 0gre: kkk　？
15:21 Lundlerol: kdkで
15:21 Lundlerol: いいんじゃない
15:23 0gre: 01:06:790 - 
15:23 0gre: よく聞くとさ
15:23 0gre: なんか下がって
15:23 0gre: 上へ払いって感じがしない？
15:23 Lundlerol: それ上がってるように聞こえない？って言ってる意味になるが
15:23 Lundlerol: 　
15:24 Lundlerol: あと
15:24 0gre: 上がるだけなら　普通に繋がる
15:24 Lundlerol: どれに沿ってるかわからんからさー
15:24 0gre: うん
15:24 Lundlerol: 何とも言えないわ
15:24 0gre: 思った事言えばおkよ！
15:24 Lundlerol: シンバルの音に合わせただけなんだけどな俺
15:25 0gre: 01:06:790 - 
15:25 0gre: ここ？
15:25 Lundlerol: おう
15:25 0gre: あー　言いたいことは分かったw
15:25 Lundlerol: 01:07:415 (1) - 
15:25 Lundlerol: ここもな
15:26 0gre: 確かにシンバルに合わせるの大事だけど　ここらへんって
15:26 0gre: ボーカルの方が強い気がしない？
15:26 Lundlerol: ・・・
15:27 Lundlerol: 僕はもう何も言いません・・・
15:27 0gre: なんでw
15:27 0gre: なんでそうちょくちょく音取りを変えてるんだとか
15:27 Lundlerol: シンバルの音っていう以外に
15:27 Lundlerol: 何か言う必要ある？
15:27 Lundlerol: そこまで汲み取れてるなら
15:27 Lundlerol: 更に言う必要無いよな
15:28 0gre: まー　言いたいことは大体分かってるけどw
15:28 0gre: 分かった　じゃ　次ない？w
15:29 Lundlerol: シンバルの音たどっていくなら
15:29 Lundlerol: 01:08:040 (1) - 
15:29 0gre: ふむ
15:29 Lundlerol: あ、あとここぬkてる
15:29 Lundlerol: あ、あとここぬけてる
15:29 Lundlerol: 01:08:040 (1) - 
15:30 Lundlerol: 01:14:915 (1) - 
15:30 Lundlerol: シンバル
15:30 Lundlerol: 01:17:415 (4) - 
15:30 Lundlerol: シンバル
15:30 Lundlerol: 01:18:040 (1) - 
15:30 Lundlerol: シンバル
15:30 Lundlerol: 01:18:665 (1) - 
15:30 Lundlerol: シンバル
15:31 Lundlerol: 01:19:290 (1) - 
15:31 Lundlerol: シンバル
15:31 Lundlerol: 01:19:915 (1) - 
15:31 Lundlerol: シンバル
15:31 0gre: 01:18:040 - 
15:31 Lundlerol: 01:20:540 (1) - 
15:31 Lundlerol: シンバル
15:31 0gre: つまりここら辺全部シンバルって言いたいのね？w
15:31 Lundlerol: おう
15:31 Lundlerol: 音はな
15:31 0gre: うん
15:31 Lundlerol: あートイレいきたい
15:32 0gre: 今食ったばっかやんw

finished~

CDFA wrote:

It's all ogre now

Insane:
00:13:978 (1,2,1) - Please no like you don't even know how awkward this is to play. But I think is good this slow D:
00:19:134 (1) - Remove NC k
00:19:603 (1) - ^ k
00:22:728 (1) - ^ k
00:26:946 (2) - Make this a regular C slider instead of being curved up so high on one side? I don't really like too much curved sliders, maybe a few one, sorry no changes
00:30:228 (1,2,1) - Slowing down a slider is cool when it's used right. As of now, it's not being used right. k
00:40:228 (1,2,1) - ^ k, But the last one still in slow down
00:47:728 (1,2,3) - ^ k
00:50:228 (1,2,3) - ^ k
00:58:821 (1) - Remove NC k
01:03:978 - Help please 1.3x speed up is no bueno Yes yes, its bueno!
01:24:134 (2) - Add clap on end of slider k
01:24:759 (2) - Add clap on beginning of slider k
01:25:228 (1) - Add clap k

Hard:
Tick Rate 2 k
00:18:978 (1) - Add clap on end of slider k
00:27:884 (2) - Can you move this so there's no overlap? k
00:31:556 - You're fine you don't need to raise the volume, it's disturbingly loud. I just changed Normal hitsounds for soft again
00:59:915 (4,5) - Move this so there's no overlap I like this overlap :c

Normal:
00:29:915 (3) - It'd be nicer if this was a symmetrical pattern. Like this: (NOTE: Rough sketch): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/632954
00:41:790 (2) - Add clap
00:53:665 (3) - Add clap on end of slider
01:06:165 (1) - Remove NC
01:07:728 (1) - ^
I just made all

Easy:
Tick Rate 1
00:20:228 (1) - Give easy players time between the spinner and the note
01:01:165 (1) - ^

Entreal wrote:

Hello, from a long time ago queue. Sorry for taking so long, I had studies for school (paiiiiinnn). I hope this can be useful to you!

Gero's Easy

00:31:790 - NC?
01:12:571 - You can probably make this slider from 01:12:571 to 01:12:884 and make a reverse slider since when she sings she pauses for like half a second or so.

Something like this, you can probably make the slider better though >.<
01:13:509 - If this point is to just end kiai time, then bring it to 01:13:196
01:20:853 - Somehow the clap sounds really weird, maybe just me.

Normal
00:10:659 - Not snapped, should be to 00:10:618 Thanks
00:40:228 - NC? There is a NC there
00:41:790 - If following ^, Remove NC There is not an NC there
00:42:415 - Add clap k
01:11:478 - This slider looks really strange to me, probably change the look of it? You can just leave it if you think differently I think this slider it's ok

Hard
00:31:712 - This circle sounds really weird, remove it? Im listening a drum there, sorry nope
00:48:665 - Finish hitsound? It sounds wreid, nope sorry
01:02:728 - Spinner? Leaving this space empty is weird to me I made that because I like some things like that, sorry, unless a MAT or BAT say me this part is unrankeable I will not change it.
01:14:759 - Circle? k, I put a circle there, but I removed the prevew one
01:18:353 - You can probably leave this spinner, but I suggest doing something instead of it. It's ok, I will leave this spinner
01:23:978 - Probably remove NC, since Normal you didn't k


Black+White
Some whistle sounds sound really weird, you could remove those. (ex. 00:50:228) There is no hitsound there
Also please note that I can't map fast maps really well.
00:16:478 - Finish sound. k
00:19:446 - This circle is too far from circle 2, suggest moving it closer. I think it's ok a little jump there
00:24:290 - Why is from here to 00:31:634 no sound? I fixed thanks
00:51:165 - Clap sound! There is a Clap there D:
00:57:571 - ^ k
00:57:728 - Finish k
01:02:728 - Like Hard, Spinnerrrrrrerereerrerree Like hard nonononono

Also i looked at your queue, mind if you can mod mine? :3 Why not

0JOKER0 wrote:

0gre req

[0gre's Taiko Oni]

. 00:46:009 - 消し ✔
. 00:45:853 - 足し ✔
. 00:49:603 - この辺 k ✔
. 01:01:478 - dkkddkkd ✔

[0gre's Taiko Muzukashii]

. 00:11:165 - k ✔
. 00:19:212 - 変え ✔
. 00:43:509 - 足し ✖ ここは抑えても良いかと思いました
. 00:44:915 - k ✔
. 00:49:446 - 消し ✔
. 01:23:665 - d ✔
. 01:02:551 (2) - dkkdkkkd ✔



offset is strange. 1/16 left

Gloria Guard wrote:

Hi Makyu (:3 」_)=3

From in-game

[General]

offset -8/ 220 k


[Normal]

OD +1 HP +1 ~ 2

00:10:696 (1) please sound up 20% easy same I just put it on 90%

00:18:665 (4,5) http://puu.sh/2eylE Changed in a diferent way

00:20:540 (1) You to modify the above details. this is spin move 00:19:993 k

00:29:915 (3,4) hmm..the beat is very awkward. change please this is beat -> http://puu.sh/2eyv1
and 00:32:103 (1) spin move 00:31:556 k

00:37:415 (2,1) blanket -> http://puu.sh/2eyxe k

00:41:790 (2,3,4) Read this part seems to be very vague...Recommended to widen the distance. k

00:53:665 (3) Shape of the slider is very strange. change please http://puu.sh/2eyAD k

01:02:728 (1) this is spin sound up 20% It's ok the way it is, no changes

01:13:509 kiai time end line move 01:13:196 ? Easy same k

01:18:821 (3,1) overlap Nope sorry


[Hard]

HP + 1 ~ 2

00:13:821 (2,1,2) specing This is a jump, no changes.

00:14:603 (1,2,1,2) overlap please change this is part -> http://puu.sh/2eyDC I changed a bit

00:27:884 (1,2) blanket -> http://puu.sh/2eyEu k

00:31:655 (4,1,2,3) blanket k

00:39:134 (1,2) ^ k

00:42:728 (1) add finish k

00:45:696 (1,2) blanket k

00:59:768 (4,5) specing This is an antijump, no changes

01:02:415 (4,6) hmm... why is the blanket ?... please change -> http://puu.sh/2eyIj k

01:07:728 (1) 2 gird left k

01:10:618 (3,4) blanket I think it's ok

01:13:509 kiai time end line move 01:13:196 ? Easy,Normal same

01:18:353 (1) Abrupt spin remove please and add note
Baffled by the sudden spin players can. I like this spin, sorry I can't remove it. If this is unrankeable just let me know and I can change it


[Black + White]

AR - 1 HP - 2 OD -1 Nope sorry

00:10:696 all diff same sound 20% up

00:31:634 (3,4,5,6,7) .. OMG ! specing !! Placed back please,Pattern is too bad.... Those notes wheren't there before, I fix it, thanks <3

00:50:696 (2) Ctrl+G k

00:54:446 remove note k

00:55:602 (1,2,3) This is patter shape,,, bad shape pattern.. change please -> http://puu.sh/2eyPk I made my best

Makyu wrote:

I'd like to see more mods :c

Andrea wrote:

Makyu wrote:

I'd like to see more mods :c

Do you want me to mod this? I'll gladly help you if you want.

Makyu wrote:

Well, all my answer now is in the trash (stupid autologout)

I'm too lazy to reanswer again, so, I made almost all the mod of both.

thanks a lot guys <3

RikiH_ wrote:

Hi from popner's queue

Normal

00:11:157 - I'd add a note I can't, way too close to the spinner
00:19:282 (5) - I suggest 158|248 to be in the perfect center k
00:27:407 (3,1) - Improve this, please I made my best
00:42:720 (1,2,3) - I'm not sure about this, it can be unreadable for newbie players... I think is ok, but I keep it in mind
00:44:907 (5) - The same, maybe unstack this same here
01:15:532 (3,2) - Please stack these objects properly It brakes the distance snap, and it should be ok if there is no stack there
01:18:032 (3,1) - This overlap is bad I don't see any problems here

Hard

00:11:470 (1,2,3) - Something like this? (Maybe make the sliders better than mine lol)

My intention is not a blanket there
00:16:938 (2) - Ctrl+g? it brakes the distance between (2) and (3)
00:26:470 (2,3) - Please make them the same. They are a mirrior, I remember i copy and paste that slider
00:32:407 (1) - In my opinion this NC is not needed k
00:35:376 (2,1) - A better blanket here? I made my best
00:46:157 (4,5) - Stack these properly Ik
00:50:688 (2,3) - ^ k
00:53:657 (1,2) - ^ k
00:55:220 (1,2,3) - ^ (2) is ok, I just restacked (3)
01:07:720 (1) - I'd make this symmetrical to 01:06:938 (4) or something similar Why?
01:14:282 (2) - Ctrl+g? k

Black + White

00:14:907 (1) - I'd finish this here: 00:15:532 Nope, maybe the players can get confused, and they can stop pushing the slider too eraly
00:22:720 (2,3) - Stack them properly k
00:28:970 (1,2) - Please make them the same I changed them a bit, must be fine now
00:55:220 (1,2) - Stack them properly, it's very important in a pattern like this (2) is a mirror of (1) maybe ther are not well stacked but they are in a correct position, I think there be no problem here
00:57:720 (5,1,2,3,4) - Please, delete 00:57:720 (5) - And move 00:57:876 (1,2,3,4) 1/2 earlier. The actual rhythm sounds really bad imo Not following the vocals, im following the drum, if I change to the vocals the player can confuse and miss
01:05:220 (1,2) - Fix the stack should be ok now
01:09:438 (3,4) - ^ Should be ok now
_______________________________________

Not bad. Just fix those stacks /: Good luck for ranking

1. try offset 206 ( -14 ) this is better imo

1. end same time with insane~
   
   - Noting special

1. same issue with Hard diff ( end time )
   
   - 01:15:532 (3,2) - stack perfectly?
   - 01:16:157 (1) - delete finish on end
   - 01:21:938 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/2ixYs this is much better

1. i'm recommend to end same time with insane
   
   - 00:58:813 (3) - delete this
   - 01:12:563 (1) - finish on end
   - 01:18:345 (1) - why spinner here? that isn't good way

• 
  - 00:15:532 (2) - add note with clap
  - 00:17:407 (1) - delete finish on end
  - 00:24:595 (3) - delete this note? feels weird
  - 00:29:907 (3) - clap
  - 00:31:157 (3) - delete finish on end
  - 00:39:595 (3) - same reason with 00:24:595 (3) - this~
  - 00:52:720 (1) - finish
  - 00:52:720 (1,2,3,4,5) - i think this straight pattern isn't good enough :/ try star pattern or pentagon
  - 00:57:720 (5,1) - ctrl G ( only timing )
  - 00:58:345 (2) - finish on end
  - 01:00:220 (2,5) - add missed finish
  - 01:01:626 (6) - clap 01:01:860 (2) - delete clap
  - 01:03:970 (1) - finish on start
  - 01:24:438 (3) - finish 01:24:751 (2) - finish on end 01:25:376 (2) - finish on start

RikiH_ wrote:

Hi from popner's queue

Gero's Easy

00:11:157 (1) - Covered by the spinner's hitburst, please move it away neh ><
00:23:657 (2,3) - This blanket is a bit ugly, improve it fixed
00:41:782 (1,2) - Move the whole pattern to 340|156 and put it in the center fixed
00:44:907 (1) - Move to 182|87 and put it in the center (disable grid snap) fixed
00:49:282 (1,2) - Well, I'm sure you can make this better fixed
01:13:970 (1) - 322|319 to put this in the center fixed
01:16:157 (1) - Move slider's tail (2nd sliderpoint) to 91|76, the pattern will look better fixed

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HelloSCV wrote:

M4M sorry for delay

[General]

1. try offset 206 ( -14 ) this is better imo

i'll wait more opinions, imo the actual offset is ok

[Normal]

1. same issue with Hard diff ( end time ) That end is only on Insane, sorry
   
   - 01:15:532 (3,2) - stack perfectly? k
   - 01:16:157 (1) - delete finish on end k
   - 01:21:938 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/2ixYs this is much better This is not a bad Idea.

[Hard]

1. i'm recommend to end same time with insane As I say on Normal, that end is only on Insane diff
   
   - 00:58:813 (3) - delete this Why? it ruins the flow, imo
   - 01:12:563 (1) - finish on end I don't want to listen that spam on finish.
   - 01:18:345 (1) - why spinner here? that isn't good way Because when I was mapping this part I feel better playing with a spinner in that part.

[Insane]

• 
  - 00:15:532 (2) - add note with clap I don't really know, but I will put it for now
  - 00:17:407 (1) - delete finish on end k
  - 00:24:595 (3) - delete this note? feels weird I feel that note really good.
  - 00:29:907 (3) - clap I miss that one
  - 00:31:157 (3) - delete finish on end k
  - 00:39:595 (3) - same reason with 00:24:595 (3) - this~ same here.
  - 00:52:720 (1) - finish k
  - 00:52:720 (1,2,3,4,5) - i think this straight pattern isn't good enough :/ try star pattern or pentagon I like this kind of pattern, you need good control with the cursor and is not only jump spam like an star or a pentagon, sorry, I'll keep this
  - 00:57:720 (5,1) - ctrl G ( only timing ) Nope, I feel this part nice, and if I do that I have to recalculate spacing again
  - 00:58:345 (2) - finish on end k
  - 01:00:220 (2,5) - add missed finish Thanks
  - 01:01:626 (6) - clap 01:01:860 (2) - delete clap It feels wreid, I wil use it, buf if someone tell me this is wreit too i will revert the changes
  - 01:03:970 (1) - finish on start k
  - 01:24:438 (3) - finish 01:24:751 (2) - finish on end 01:25:376 (2) - finish on start k

Good luck~

eldnl wrote:

Normal

00:11:157 - En esta dificultad hay mas tiempo entre el spin y la nota, siendo que deberia ser al revez ... Ya me llamaron la atencion por poner una nota muy rapida despues del spin, así que lo dejaré asi
00:19:985 - Quizas el spin quedaria mejor si iniciara en el tick rojo siguiente, aparece muy cerca del slider. imo es irrelevante donde comienza, lo pondrá en el tick rojo
00:29:907 - Este slider no sigue muy bien el ritmo, y haces algo diferente para seguir el ritmo de la voz? queda mucho mejor. el problema de ese slider es que siempre olvido ponerle su respectivo clap >.<
00:35:688 - Sin duda ningun jugador al nivel "normal" podria leer el ritmo que llevas aqui, que tal un slider? Ya deberia estar bien
00:42:720 (4,1) - Este salto no me convence, te aconsejo removerlo, pero ahi tu si lo haces ... No entiendo.
01:08:970 (1,2) - Puedes mover estos sliders un poco mas abajo y se verian mejor con el slider (3) Rompe el distance snap.

Hard

00:10:845 - En esta dificultad es mejor que el spin termine aqui y luego agregas una nota. Nada mal
00:30:220 - No estoy seguro pero esta parte me parece especialmente complicada, te aconsejo cambiarla, pero no es necesario. No lo es, esta siguiendo perfectamente la bateria, a demás ya estas atento de seguir la bateria desde este slider 00:29:595 (3) - por lo tanto mentalmente cambiaste de la voz a la bateria en ese momento, con el final de ese slider, o al menos asi lo veo yo

Insane

00:19:907 - Aqui queda mejor si pones una nota y despues el spin, digo yo no? Lo veo muy complicado, especialmente despues de seguir un patron de triple nota + triple tan rapidamente
00:22:407 - Agrega un NC aqui, ya que sigue a un spin. No querras decir aqui? 00:22:720 - y no, lo veo bien así como está
00:24:282 - Es muy extraño escuchar esto silenciado, subele un poco el volumen. No habia notado eso, gracias, ya lo arregle.
Me gusto mucho esta diff!


Suerte ;D

kintyan wrote:

［Black + White］　00:30:220 - 00:31:470
もう少し形を変えるなどして綺麗にしたい所
例えるなら　00:53:657　の場所みたいに変えるなら思い切り変えたい

1:02:720 - spinnerを加えるといいかもしれません

1:22:720 - 1:23:970　- この間に拘りが無いのであれば何か追加したいですね
個人的には 1:22:876　-　1:23:657　 までspinnerを入れてみてはどうでしょう

1. 00:08:970 (1) - NC spinner bug
2. 00:27:720 (1,2) - maybe put the red slider point into y-axis for better curve
3. 00:28:657 - 00:33:657 - 00:33:657 - 00:36:157 - 00:45:845 - add circle here to fit the music imo
4. 00:52:407 (1) - add repeat to this slider, delete the 00:53:032 (2) - and add note here 00:53:345
5. 01:04:595 (1) - NC spinner bug
6. 01:08:032 (6) - why you no try to make this slider shape like 01:06:157 (4) look better imo
7. 01:11:782 (2) - make the length of this slider till here 01:12:251 sounds better

1. 00:19:282 (5) - shorter this slider length till here 00:19:595 sounds better
2. 00:20:063 (1) - this spinner should start here 00:19:907
3. 00:26:157 (1) - remove NC, imo it's spamming
4. 00:28:657 (1) - ^
5. 00:31:470 - this spinner should end 00:32:720 for better flow and after that add circle here 00:33:345
6. 00:35:220 (5) - NC and remove NC here 00:36:157
7. 00:38:657 - remove NC for sam reason: spamming
8. 00:46:782 (2) - why not stack this under this note? 00:44:907 (5)

1. 00:11:470 (1) - add finish like the previous diff. on the head
2. 00:16:470 (1) - ^
3. 00:18:970 (1,2) - ^
4. 00:26:470 (1) - wanna look symmetry? move this note to x:176 y:288
5. 00:26:470 (2) - and after that move this slider to x:232 y:132
6. 00:56:470 (1) - remove NC, imo it shouldn't use
7. 01:02:720 - it'll be more nice if you use spinner here

1. 00:22:407 (2) - NC spinner bug
2. 00:29:438 (2) - i think it'll be more nice if you do blanket with previouse slider.
3. 00:44:595 - remove NC here, follow the vocal
4. 01:02:720 - add spinner, same reason as hard diff.
5. 01:23:032 - 01:23:345 - 01:23:657 - consider to add note there to follow the vocal?

blackabyss wrote:

hi from popner's special rules queue
[General]
combo colour at taiko diff. are different from the standard diff.
[Easy]

1. 00:08:970 (1) - NC spinner bug
2. 00:27:720 (1,2) - maybe put the red slider point into y-axis for better curve
3. 00:28:657 - 00:33:657 - 00:33:657 - 00:36:157 - 00:45:845 - add circle here to fit the music imo
4. 00:52:407 (1) - add repeat to this slider, delete the 00:53:032 (2) - and add note here 00:53:345
5. 01:04:595 (1) - NC spinner bug
6. 01:08:032 (6) - why you no try to make this slider shape like 01:06:157 (4) look better imo
7. 01:11:782 (2) - make the length of this slider till here 01:12:251 sounds better

[Normal]

1. 00:19:282 (5) - shorter this slider length till here 00:19:595 sounds better I don't like it, and I'm following the whole rhytm there
2. 00:20:063 (1) - this spinner should start here 00:19:907 Nope, the reason is above
3. 00:26:157 (1) - remove NC, imo it's spamming You may be right, but I think the NC there and the other one are ok, since Im using the same pattern in the others diff too
4. 00:28:657 (1) - ^ As I mention above
5. 00:31:470 - this spinner should end 00:32:720 for better flow and after that add circle here 00:33:345 well, I like this, but I have to reject the offer, becouse: 1. Maybe the spinner is too short, 2: If I finish that spinner there, it will be following the drum rythm and that note there not, that may confuse the player and maybe he will miss there, and if I put the note 00:33:188 - <- there, it will be a bit difficult for a newbie player. But I really like that suggestion
6. 00:35:220 (5) - NC and remove NC here 00:36:157 Same reason as I mention before
7. 00:38:657 - remove NC for sam reason: spamming and I have to say, same reason
8. 00:46:782 (2) - why not stack this under this note? 00:44:907 (5) Brakes the spacing, and the symmetry

[Hard]

1. 00:11:470 (1) - add finish like the previous diff. on the head
2. 00:16:470 (1) - ^
3. 00:18:970 (1,2) - ^ I made those, and the above's one too
4. 00:26:470 (1) - wanna look symmetry? move this note to x:176 y:288 1.10x spacing with notes in that part, I supose it will be no problem, fixed
5. 00:26:470 (2) - and after that move this slider to x:232 y:132
6. 00:56:470 (1) - remove NC, imo it shouldn't use k
7. 01:02:720 - it'll be more nice if you use spinner here I know a couple of maps point this before, but I'd really like to keep this.

[Black + White]

1. 00:22:407 (2) - NC spinner bug Im watching an NC here, but I press "Q" just in case
2. 00:29:438 (2) - i think it'll be more nice if you do blanket with previouse slider. Why? it ruins the mini-jump I like this kind of mini-jumps on Insane maps :3
3. 00:44:595 - remove NC here, follow the vocal k
4. 01:02:720 - add spinner, same reason as hard diff. I have to say the same as I say on Hard diff
5. 01:23:032 - 01:23:345 - 01:23:657 - consider to add note there to follow the vocal? well, when I playtest my song, I always get exited with this pause, imo feels awesome

good job, your rhythm sounds good. like them <3
here stars for ya owo/

kintyan wrote:

［Black + White］ 00:08:970 (1) - 00:10:688 　 00:08:970 (1) - 00:10:845 - spinner is long. ok, feels good :3

00:30:220 - 00:31:470 - slider to make it beautiful. I think theyr'e pretty enought

01:02:720 - 01:02:720
01:22:720 - 01:23:970
spinner ? Nope, as I mention on blackabyss's mod, I like this part too much
Something is added.

-Cloudchaser wrote:

vamoh por bubble oezi

Yo jamás tendré un mapa rankeado ;_;

-Cloudchaser wrote:

vamoh por bubble oezi

Yo jamás tendré un mapa rankeado ;_;

eldnl wrote:

Easy

00:08:970 - Agrega un NC en el spin. Fixed
00:11:157 - Es bastante dificil recuperar el control del mouse despues de un spin para los nuevos jugadores, necesitan mas tiempo. Tiene el tiempo suficiente, no hay cambios
00:51:157 - Puedes copiar el slider anterior para hacerlo simetrico, agregandole un repeat. de hecho eso hice solo que le aumente la parte que le sigue rectamente.
01:04:595 - Tienes que agregar un new combo, ya que sigue a un spin. Fixed
01:12:563 (2,3) - No estoy muy seguro de la distancia de este slider y la nota anterio, que tal si la aumentas un poco? sera mas facil de leer. Fixed

Suerte ;D

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156,96,22720,6,0,L|156:154|180:188|180:255,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,276,23657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,360,23970,2,0,B|328:354|349:311|349:311|431:308,1,160
444,132,25220,6,0,B|400:83|400:83|359:38|321:36,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,90,26157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,38,26470,2,0,B|143:39|103:85|103:85|59:133,1,160
184,256,27720,6,0,B|254:219|254:219|327:254,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
327,78,28970,2,0,B|254:113|254:113|182:76,1,160
120,136,29907,1,8,0:0:0:0:
34,116,30220,2,0,P|38:171|82:215,2,120,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,116,31782,6,0,L|375:67,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,8,32720,2,0,P|450:53|408:146,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,292,33970,2,0,P|259:260|188:291,1,160
187,115,35220,6,0,P|258:146|328:114,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,256,36470,2,0,L|291:299,1,80
211,294,37095,2,0,L|141:256,1,80
136,169,37720,6,0,B|173:141|173:93|173:93|173:14,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,20,38970,2,0,B|349:92|349:92|349:140|386:168,1,160
356,252,39907,1,8,0:0:0:0:
315,330,40220,2,0,B|255:319|255:319|195:331,2,120,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,156,41782,6,0,P|255:85|170:161,1,240,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,43032,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,268,43345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,316,43657,2,0,B|124:276|124:276|81:255|81:255|46:199,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
182,87,44907,6,0,B|224:100|257:70|257:70|289:99|330:88,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,212,46157,2,0,B|422:265|422:265|379:286|379:286|351:326,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,292,47095,1,0,0:0:0:0:
187,325,47407,2,0,L|111:272,1,80,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
47,230,48032,2,0,B|72:192|114:192|114:192|174:119,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,130,49282,6,0,B|390:191|390:191|432:191|457:229,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,279,50220,2,0,B|344:279|344:279|312:252,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,188,50845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
198,253,51157,2,0,B|168:279|168:279|46:279,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,112,52407,6,0,L|180:70,1,80,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,28,53032,1,8,0:0:0:0:
394,134,53657,2,0,B|408:183|378:210|378:210|316:272,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,318,54595,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,266,54907,2,0,B|127:211|127:211|97:184|111:135,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,30,56157,2,0,P|305:71|402:53,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,128,57095,6,0,L|452:209,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,292,57720,2,0,P|365:334|298:296,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,232,58657,2,0,P|173:190|106:228,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,288,59595,2,0,L|168:120,2,160,8|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,61157,12,4,63970,0:0:0:0:
256,324,64595,5,0,0:0:0:0:
196,260,64907,2,0,L|147:195|194:131,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,69,65845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
319,131,66157,2,0,L|366:195|317:259,2,160,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,70,67720,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,128,68032,2,0,B|149:193|149:193|122:236|80:240,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,318,68970,5,4,0:0:0:0:
120,360,69282,2,0,P|192:353|183:281,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,232,70220,1,4,0:0:0:0:
328,280,70532,2,0,P|320:351|392:358,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
477,337,71470,5,4,0:0:0:0:
444,255,71782,2,0,L|388:192,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,101,72563,2,0,L|211:101,2,80,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,319,73970,6,0,B|254:364|254:364|188:319,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,257,74907,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,196,75220,2,0,B|125:151|125:151|59:196,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
13,120,76157,6,0,L|86:72,1,80,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
167,76,76782,1,8,0:0:0:0:
243,31,77095,2,0,B|270:72|247:118|247:118|300:162,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,212,78032,1,8,0:0:0:0:
434,274,78345,6,0,B|403:312|350:302|350:302|291:338,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,320,79282,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,256,79595,2,0,P|122:181|150:97,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
221,65,80532,1,8,0:0:0:0:
298,106,80845,2,0,P|324:181|303:257,1,160,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81626,12,4,83970,0:0:0:0:

kajiyatta wrote:

from this queue
General
almost suggestions
Gero's Easy
tick rate 2 seems difficult for newbie since they don't have a technique of seamless moving. it makes to stop combos maybe.
Placement
00:56:157(3) I suppose this would be nice lflow

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01:07:120(5) Nc here. vocal " one two three" is ended like 01:13:970(1,2,3)
01:08:132(6) a bit narrow with next (2) slider, it's ok but move like this?

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01:11:470(1) to be symmetrical at 01:08:970, move to y:318?
01:19:595(3,4,5) move to center?

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Rhythm
00:08:970(1) just suggestion, I suppose this spinner starts at 00:08:345 better because of beginning vocal.
00:57:563 unnecessary green line
01:20:845 ^
01:21:548^

Normal
why used ×1.00 spacing and 1.10　spacing? I suppose you should set same spacing with all notes in this diff. I don't know why the spacing changes sometimes when I'm mapping, I notice most of times, but sometimes I can't notice D:
Placement
00:42:720(1) please set same spacing. Ready
00:48:782(2) stack at (5) at 00:44:907? Do you mean this? 00:46:782 (2) - and nope, it brakes my pattern
Rhythm
00:08:970 same as Easy Well, I like it
00:29:595(2,3) like this to follow the music? I like this, but I like more mine

SPOILER

http://puu.sh/2nx3e

Hit Sonud
00:18:970(5) add finish at head and end? Sure
00:40:220(1)^ yeap
01:13:970(1) add finish at head
01:21:938(1) add finish at end
01:23:970(5) add finish I made all

Hard
some blanks like 01:02:720.01:13:345 doesn't feel good I suppose... T.T In my mind this kind of blanks are really awesome
Placement
01:14:282(2) extended to 01:14:595 and put like this? I'm not really sure about this, but I will do this.

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Rhythm
00:08:970 same as Easy Ok
00:18:813 add a note here? k
00:41:157 it is Hard diff, so you can put some notes better instead using spinner. e.g) I like this spinner, and I'm following the vocal, i know it's hard, but imo it's ok like this.

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01:00:063(4) umm, a bit weird to hear. maybe like this? Nop, Im on the rhythm here

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01:18:345(1) eh... why spinner? even if Easy & Normal put some notes, so I highly suggest you should do like that. A final spinner isn't bad.
Hit Sonud
00:11:157(1) add clap Why the fuck this clap is missed.... thanks

Black & White
OD -1 or HP -1 better. OD7 is free acc on insane diffs, The HP drain on this diff makes it way more funny imo
same as Hard, on Insane you shouldn't make blanks so much.You can easily change that by turning circles into sliders when you feel a second circle isn't appropriate Same as hard, In my mind it feels awesome, but if a MAT will not bubble my map cuz of this I will change it.
Placement
Rhythm
00:08:970 same as Hard Already do it
00:22:095 unnecessary green line Deleted
00:31:626 ^ Deleted
00:13:970 changed rapidly of slider velocity makes confused even if Insane since the musical flow doesn't change. and it is difficult to expect imo. The difficulty here are the jumps not the slider speed changes, imo
00:39:438(2,3,4) to follow the vocal, you can easily change and it is more comfortable. ok

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Hit Sonud
01:18:813(3) add finish at end k

some points I should say will miiss, but now that's all. good luck.

shankishiro wrote:

okei supongo que no hay ningun problema en que haga el mod en español vengo de parte de gero
Antes de comenzar dire que soy nuevo en esto de modear asi que la mayoria de cosas que digan seran sugerencias...
Normal:

00:15:220 (3,4) - no recomendaria que stackearas en una normal ya que son diff para nuevos Yo no le veo dificultad a un par de notas stackeadas, especialmente con una velocidad tan lenta, es totalmente leible imo
00:26:157 (2) - Desmarca el NC Nope, romperia con mi patron de combos en hard y en insane
00:31:470 (1) - Que termine en 00:32:720 - y agrega estas 2 notas creo que suena mejor Si, tienes razón suena mejor, pero no puedo hacer eso ya que sería poner una nota muy cerca al spinner y ultimamente están poniendo problemas por eso

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Bueno es todo lo que puedo hacer espero haberte sido de ayuda (las diff hard y la otra no las modeare por el simple echo que nose mucho )-

Suerte con tu map! y animo nunca bajes los brazos

1. Reduce HP Drain by 1 tick, it's way too high even for an Insane difficulty.

1. 00:11:782 (2) - Add a clap on slider start to follow the music.
2. 00:38:345 (4,5) - The overlap between these sliders looks really bad, try to make them like this.
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3. 00:41:626 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This whole pattern is missing hitsounds, make sure to add some claps so you'll emphasize this part.
4. 00:43:657 (5) - Remove the finish from this slider begin, it doesn't fit here and also sounds too loud.
5. 00:45:220 (1) ~ 00:51:157 (4) - You have seriously overused the finish hitsound here, please make sure to remove most of them and keep only the ones that truly follow the melody.
6. 00:47:720 (2,3,4) - The overlap between these sliders looks really bad, try to make them this way instead.
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7. 00:55:220 (1,2) - Again, remove these finishes from here, you seriously overused them, they're killing my ears. xD
8. 00:57:095 (1) - Add a clap on this circle, to follow the music.
9. 00:58:657 (2,3,4,5,6) - These stackes notes might be confusing to read, space them normally perhaps? I'm sure you can do much better than this.
10. 01:00:220 (7) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
11. 01:01:157 (9) - This slider is completely hidden from the previous one, please move it somewhere else to fix this problem.
12. 01:01:626 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Again, try to add some claps on this pattern to make a better effect with the music background.
13. 01:07:720 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not necessary to have it.
14. 01:09:438 (5) - Add a finish at the begin of this slider, so it will emphasize with the strong part of the music.
15. 01:10:688 (5) - Same as above for the same reason.
16. 01:12:251 (6) - Another main finish is missing on this slider end, make sure to add it here as well.
17. 01:12:876 (7) - On this slider too, on both start and end.
18. 01:15:845 (3) - This slider is completely hidden from the previous one like the one above, please move it somewhere else to fix this issue.
19. 01:22:251 (3,4) - Remove the finish from (3) and add it on (4), it should be there.
20. 01:23:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You've used finish hitsounds pretty well on this pattern, but you're missing to add some claps, so yeah, add them too.

23:27 Makyu: Tu ya viste mi nueva insane?
23:27 Makyu: la volvi a mapear D:
23:27 -Cloudchaser: la veré
23:27 -Cloudchaser: np pls
23:28 *Makyu is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/221364 Nomizu Iori - Black + White (TV Size)]
23:29 -Cloudchaser: quieres un irc mod?
23:30 -Cloudchaser: hay unas cosas para arreglar
23:30 Makyu: claro, tu escribelo que si me demoro en contestar es pq me llamaron
23:30 Makyu: pero escribelo que te leo
23:31 -Cloudchaser: Ok
23:31 -Cloudchaser: primero
23:31 -Cloudchaser: subele el volumen
23:31 -Cloudchaser: No se escucha nada
23:31 Makyu: Deberia estar al 90%
23:32 -Cloudchaser: 00:11:782 (2) - este slider me gustaría que fuese igual que 00:11:470 (1) - 
23:32 -Cloudchaser: de esa manera se vería más hermoso el mapa
23:33 Makyu: ok
23:34 -Cloudchaser: 00:56:782 (5) - am, no me gusta este circle acá
23:35 -Cloudchaser: No no
23:35 -Cloudchaser: olvida eso
23:36 -Cloudchaser: 00:58:345 (1) - sería mejor si este slider fuese de esta manera http://puu.sh/2o6oP o esta http://puu.sh/2o6pM
23:36 -Cloudchaser: más diversión
23:37 -Cloudchaser: 00:59:907 (6) - haz esto un poco más derecho, algo como así http://puu.sh/2o6rU
23:38 -Cloudchaser: 01:25:688 (8) - mueve esta nota a x:160 y:100
23:40 -Cloudchaser: 01:12:251 (6) - encuentro algo estúpido este slider, reemplazalo yo sugiero
23:40 -Cloudchaser: o3o
23:40 Makyu: te leo
23:40 -Cloudchaser: lo sé
23:41 -Cloudchaser: eso es lo que veo por el momento
23:41 -Cloudchaser: ^^
23:41 -Cloudchaser: cuando updatees le hecho otra miradita
23:41 Makyu: k
23:41 -Cloudchaser: me mandan a dormir (pero no lo haré) 
23:41 -Cloudchaser: :3
23:41 Makyu: jaja
23:42 Makyu: eres revelde
23:42 -Cloudchaser: te seguiría moddeando
23:42 Makyu: como la vaca que no quiere dar leche
23:42 -Cloudchaser: pero no tengo audifonoso
23:42 -Cloudchaser: pd, guardo savelog uwu
23:42 -Cloudchaser: PEPPY CHUPA LA TULA

Arnold0 wrote:

Mod for popner's special rules queue


[Normal]
00:11:157 - There is a loud sound here so you can add a note here Too close to the sinner, I can't
00:25:220 (1) - End at 00:25:845 - so it's a good transistion bettween mapping on music and mapping on vocals I don't like this, I miss one clap drum with that, and imo it lost the flow
00:27:720 (1) - End at 00:28:345 - ^ I have to say the same
00:29:595 (3) - Move this at 00:29:436 - it folow vocals and sound better and some 1/2 is possible in normal I don't know about this, some people tell me, including a bat to not add note at 1/2, and if I do this I will lose the pattern
00:29:907 (4) - You could custom hitsound the tick at 00:30:845 - like the other one it sound better. There is a finish there, but I don't have any custom finish

[Hard]
01:01:470 (4) - I think you shoul add a note here it plays better for me ok
01:14:282 (2) - End at 01:14:438 - and add a note at 01:14:595 - folow vocals better ok

[Black + White]
01:04:595 - Seems empty, add a note ? Not for me


That's all good luck with rank