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DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 2013-02-05T20:31:46+00:00

Irreversible wrote:
[Normal]

Hey Dekaane! ! xDD /*Hi Irre :3

00:12:407 (2) - http://puu.sh/1XTb7 /*Done, arranged in a nice way.
00:13:970 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - In this part, the flow could be better (like .. you know xD ask me ingame so i can show you ^^) /*I'll keep as I have now, I'll talk with you in-game for change this.
00:26:470 (4,5) - Put 5 on the red tick? Since it sounds much better. Also it's a guest diff, and it is allowed to be a little harder, isn't it? /*I'm following drums here :c
00:28:970 (4,5) - ^ (if you want, change it everywhere) /*^
00:36:157 (3,4) - Well this looks a bit weird. Let 4 look a bit different. /*Arranged a bit that part, I think it's better now.
01:15:063 (5) - Add a circle xD /*It would be a bit hard for a Normal imo

Note: Like the beat, have a look at the patterns

Edit: Oops, I forgot this, sorry

Sonnyc wrote:
Dekaane's normal:

01:17:720 (4) - ^? Not sure here though /*It's on the same phrase that the ones before, everything else changed.

Thanks /o/ Update here: http://puu.sh/1Y4yG

Momochikun

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Momochikun 2013-02-06T22:37:31+00:00

UPDATED

Kayano

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Kayano 2013-02-07T03:47:51+00:00

[General]

[Easy]
00:13:970 (4) - NC
00:44:907 (1) - NC move to 00:45:220 (2) -
00:47:407 (1) - NC move to 00:48:032 (2) -
00:49:595 (1) - NC move to 00:50:220 (3) -
00:51:470 (1) - delete NC
00:53:970 (1) - NC move to 00:52:720 (3) -
00:55:220 (3) - NC

[Normal]
00:31:782 (1) - NC move to 00:30:220 (6) - ?
00:41:782 (1) - ^?
01:25:688 (1) - delete NC

[Mochi]
If this diff is Insane, that you should have a Hard or it will be unrankable
00:27:407 (1) - delete NC
00:29:282 (1) - ^
00:30:220 (3) - NC
01:13:970 (5) - ^

rhythm is good. Good luck!

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2013-02-08T23:37:11+00:00

Omg D: There are so many unsnapped green lines.. i try to fix them ;:__; i'll send you the insane soon

Hellzero

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Hellzero 2013-02-09T07:46:06+00:00

[Mochi]
I think AR9 more fit for this ddifficulty.
00:11:938 (4,3) - stack start (4) and end (3)
00:12:876 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - stack all notes

SPOILER

00:13:657 (3,4) - make ctrl+g
00:13:188 (4) - NC here
00:13:813 (4) - move to 00:13:501 (2) -
00:18:970 (6,1,2) - make another pattern. It more fit music [

SPOILER

img]http://puu.sh/1ZH4q[/img]

00:23:032 (1) - move to 00:22:876
00:22:720 - add circle
00:23:501 (2,3,4,1) - move sliders on white tick
00:25:532 (4) - move to 00:25:376
00:28:032 (1) - ^
00:28:657 (2,1) - these sliders are not fit music
00:31:157 (3) - copy this slider and paste as 00:30:220 (1)
00:30:688 (2) - end not snap! and make more symmetry like this

SPOILER

00:31:626 (4,5) - just 5 circles stream
00:33:032 (4) - remove this
00:35:532 (2) - ^
00:38:032 (1) - like this ^
00:38:657 (2,3) - not snap end sliders
00:41:626 (6,1) - just 5 circles stream
01:06:157 (1) - put at center
About new combo
Correct new combo should start at big white ticks so i recomend you use NC each 2 big white ticks.

[Normal]
00:31:782 (1) - i think it shoul be start at 00:31:626
00:41:782 (1) - ^
00:59:907 - add note

[Easy]
00:22:720 (1,2) - i think more better make 1 slider (00:22:720 - 00:23:188) more fit music and easyery to play
00:23:657 - and add here note for more easy play
00:25:220 (1) - ^
00:27:720 (1) - ^
00:31:782 (3) - slider 00:31:626 - 00:32:720
00:33:032 (1) - start at 00:33:188
00:35:220 (3) - like 00:22:720 (1,2)
00:37:720 (1) - ^
00:45:220 (2) - NC here
00:50:220 (3) - ^
00:51:470 (1) - remove NC
00:52:720 (3) - NC
00:53:970 (1) - remove NC
00:55:220 (5) - NC

0gre_old

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0gre_old 2013-02-09T13:30:30+00:00

wow!! I love this song!

please give me a chance to make a taiko map for this ><!

~after neary 2days~

I guess it has been refused.. ?
sorry to disturb~

Last edited by 0gre_old 2013-02-11T10:01:58+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

BeatofIke

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BeatofIke 2013-02-09T22:14:43+00:00

Okay here is the video! Enjoy!

http://www.sendspace.com/file/78n3yp

Momochikun

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Momochikun 2013-02-09T23:33:26+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
Okay here is the video! Enjoy!
http://www.sendspace.com/file/78n3yp

Arigatou.. >.<

Momochikun

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Momochikun 2013-02-10T00:26:05+00:00

Added video.. xD
Edit : Ups.. double post --

DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 2013-02-10T02:14:08+00:00

Hellzero wrote:
[Normal]
00:31:782 (1) - i think it shoul be start at 00:31:626 /*I'm following guitar there, and it will sound off if I begin that in a red tick
00:41:782 (1) - ^ /*^
00:59:907 - add note /*I'm following vocals there

Thanks for taking your time, also Momochikun please update my diff awa http://puu.sh/207wD

Lehon

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Lehon 2013-02-10T12:18:20+00:00

Hi ~

M4M? I've posted in your modding queue a few minutes ago

I've already mod your map, so take all the time you need xD

Here's the mod:

General:
I love this song! And nice mapset too. There are very few mistakes, the majority about distance snap. I've tried to suggest you my best, so I hope this mod will be useful

Easy:
00:33:032 (1,3) - overlap.. I don't know if it's rankable or not O:
00:42:720 (1) - unsymmetrical, try this: http://puu.sh/20iMD
00:44:595 (3) - ther is an error in the distance snap, move it at x:40 y:232
00:49:595 (1) - ^ , move it at x:284 y:308
00:50:220 (3) - ^ , move it at x:124 y:260
00:51:470 (5) - ^ , move it at x:268 y:44
01:00:220 (5,6) - I think it's difficult for a beginner to understand the timing, I recommend you to do a slider, it's easier

Dekaane's Normal:
00:24:907 (6) - move this at x:396 y:348
00:36:157 (3) - I think it's too close to the slider, maybe move it at x:48 y:104, it's better imo
00:46:157 (5) - it ends too soon, maybe let it finish at 00:46:782
00:56:157 (6) - ^
01:13:188 (3) - this is too close to the slider too, maybe move it at x:20 y:92

Hinely's Hard:
00:28:970 (1,2) - overlap, move 1 two grids left
00:32:720 (4,5) - distance error, move them 1 grid down
01:09:438 (2) - overlap with the other circles, try to move it in another part with the 2, who cares of the distance snap xD an example: http://puu.sh/20j6w
01:16:938 (2) - I think it's better external the sliders than internal, move it at x:360 y:188

Mochi:
00:13:188 (4,5,6,7,8) - you can make a star, the right positions of the circles are 4 x:256 y:240 - 5 x:275 y:85 - 6 x:163 y:195 - 7 x:320 y:173 - 8 x:176 y:103
00:19:126 (4,5) - unsymmetrical, move 4 at x:160 y:108
00:27:407 (1,2) - distance error, move them at x:280 y:136
00:28:032 (6) - ^ , move it at x:268 y:340
00:34:907 (5) - ^ , move it at x:336 y:232
00:36:470 (1) - ^ , move it at x:312 y:92
00:50:220 (3) - 1 grid right to overlap it perfectly with the previous slider
01:06:157 (1) - it's too far from the next slider, consider make it closer to the slider

In the end, I love your map! Hope it will be ranked soon ~

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-02-10T14:01:03+00:00

Lehon wrote:
Hinely's Hard:
00:28:970 (1,2) - overlap, move 1 two grids left Did it another way.
00:32:720 (4,5) - distance error, move them 1 grid down I'm sure enough this is okay...
01:09:438 (2) - overlap with the other circles, try to move it in another part with the 2, who cares of the distance snap xD an example: http://puu.sh/20j6w Also fixed this the other way.

Thanks before~

http://puu.sh/20lix (Yes, .rar.)

Rotte

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Rotte 2013-02-10T16:17:01+00:00

Hi~ From PM and mod in 9/2/2013

[General]

Offset is too large,11462 is a good choice.
If you not want to add video in this mapset,plz select letterbox.
Add a red line in 00:11:149 - ,BPM 192.because of easy diff.
TAG add DakeDekaane and Hinely(If the hard diff is he maked)

[Easy]

If you want to put objects in 00:11:157 - ，you must be fixed offset in 00:11:157 - later.
HP+1 OD+1

Useless Green line
00:18:970 -
00:30:220 -
00:57:720 -

Rhythm
00:15:220 (5) - Rhythm is weird.
00:27:720 (1,2,3,4) - Rhythm is weird
01:13:501 (6) - Consider to remove this slider,the rhythm is not suit in this diff

Sound Effect
Fine.

[Dekaane's Normal]

Useless Green line

00:42:095 -
00:42:407 -

Rhythm
00:59:126 (3) - Rhythm is weird.
in 00:58:970 -

Sound Effect
Fine.

[Mochi]

HP+1 OD+2

Useless Green line
Fine

Rhythm
00:11:470 (2) - The space is not well,it should be placed in 44|276.
00:15:532 (6) - Rhythm is weird,plz refer to this example
00:19:282 (1) - Rhythm is weird,1/8 is well.
00:23:032 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Rhythm is weird!weird!weird!If you want to flow

vocal,the rhythm is example1.If you want to flow the rhythm,plz see example2.
example1

example2
00:33:032 (4) - This circle is useless in rhythm.
00:35:532 (2) - The same as 00:33:032 (4) - .
00:36:001 (4) - Weird rhythm..,Romove it is a good choice.
00:38:032 (1) - Plz listen the music,the rhythm is weird!,it's a 2 accent beat.I don't mention this problem in other

diff.
00:47:720 (2,3,4) - Rhythm is wrong.
00:51:157 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Rhythm is wrong.plz flow the music to make some new objects.

I recomend you use 3 circle in this time
01:06:001 - It's not should be block.
01:08:813 - The same as 01:06:001 -
01:09:595 (6,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Rhythm is wrong.
01:25:688 (3) - NC

Sound Effect
01:25:688 (3) - Finish.

GL.

DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 2013-02-10T23:30:50+00:00

Lehon

Lehon wrote:
Hi ~

Dekaane's Normal:
00:24:907 (6) - move this at x:396 y:348 /*Done
00:36:157 (3) - I think it's too close to the slider, maybe move it at x:48 y:104, it's better imo /*This should be already fixed (Mochi why you no update q_q)
00:46:157 (5) - it ends too soon, maybe let it finish at 00:46:782 /*That is following vocals
00:56:157 (6) - ^ /*^
01:13:188 (3) - this is too close to the slider too, maybe move it at x:20 y:92 /*Did something else.

In the end, I love your map! Hope it will be ranked soon ~

Rotte

Rotte wrote:
Hi~ From PM and mod in 9/2/2013

[Dekaane's Normal]

Useless Green line
00:42:095 - /*Useful now
00:42:407 - /*^

Rhythm
00:59:126 (3) - Rhythm is weird. /*Nice catch, done
in 00:58:970 -

Sound Effect
Fine.
GL.

Thanks both for modding, Mochi, I beg you, update please q_q code is here: http://puu.sh/20BOj

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-02-11T09:43:19+00:00

Rotte wrote:
TAG add DakeDekaane and Hinely(If the hard diff is he maked)

"Hinely" is a portmanteau of me and Xinely's name; enough said lol

EDIT: Update the map please .-.

Momochikun

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Momochikun 2013-02-13T11:38:41+00:00

Updated..

BounceBabe

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BounceBabe 2013-02-15T23:21:53+00:00

Hi, from the Queue!

Hard

00:19:907 - Spinner should start here, just add a circle here then 00:19:751 -
01:07:720 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Shouldnt happen distance wise, start a new distance a larger one at the 2nd NC to improve the spacing and to make it more readable
01:11:157 (5) - Feels too much, remove it

Insane

00:25:532 (1) - Circle should be here 00:25:688 - soundwise
00:33:032 (4) - Circle should be here 00:33:188 - soundwise
00:47:407 (1,2) - Reverse NC, so it goes with the vocal
01:06:313 (2) - Slider feels wrong here, doesnt fit the music at all
01:08:657 (1,2) - Reverse Nc, so it actually fits and its also better for stanza
01:10:063 (1) - Also is so wrong, the sound of it overall, the slider is just not fitting
01:13:970 (5) - Nc for new vocal
01:18:345 - That slowdown doesnt fit one bit and is too sudden to see it, remove it

GL

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-02-16T07:56:04+00:00

BounceBabe wrote:
Hard

00:19:907 - Spinner should start here, just add a circle here then 00:19:751 - Done.
01:07:720 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Shouldnt happen distance wise, start a new distance a larger one at the 2nd NC to improve the spacing and to make it more readable Nope; this is already readable as is, and I think there's no need to change it.
01:11:157 (5) - Feels too much, remove it That one follows the music on the background.

Thanks for modding~

http://puu.sh/23lk6

Cloudchaser

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Cloudchaser 2013-02-17T17:55:36+00:00

I only mod Hard cuz I'm a little tired

Hinely's Hard

For Xinely:

01:00:220 (7,8) - can you make slider (8) with more form? like it http://puu.sh/244XI

Nothing else I can say :3!
Nice song, Nice map, I hope in rank of this map.

Star~

Good luck~

kajiyatta

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kajiyatta 2013-02-18T18:23:26+00:00

from PM
General
I think you put NC at downbeat better. this NC pattern seems confusing and not consistency
Easy
Placement
00:46:782(2,3,1) like this? it's more beautiful

SPOILER

00:36:157(4,5,6) make symmeterical?

SPOILER

Rhythm
beginning slider & note at red line seems a bit difficult, you can try to follow the music not vocal.
00:15:376(5) a bit weird and difficult for newbie.

SPOILER

01:12:563(4,5) delete (5) and add a reverse better

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
I think you missed some finishes, you can follow it in Normal diff.
00:30:220(2) add finish at head
01:18:970(2)^

Dekaane's Normal
Placement
00:39:595(5) make a blanket?

SPOILER

00:54:595(4) to follow the flow, maybe Ctrl+G better.
Rhythm
00:32:876(1) delete this note? it's a bit difficult for expectation.
01:04:438(2,3) a bit weird for me, maybe this will follow the music more better.

SPOILER

Hinely's Hard
Placement
00:14:595(3) this jump seems not beautiful and good for music, maybe like this?

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:30:220 unnecessary green line
00:31:157(1) it's a bug? too short and weird.
01:25:688(1) too fast for Hard, maybe ×1.50 better
Hit Sonud
00:17:095(2)~ I don't think it's good to put a Normal whistle.

Mochi
Placement
00:11:157(1) to put away? it's too close with (2)
01:03:657(4) Ctrl+G?
01:13:188(1,2,3) put a jump like this? it's more fun imo

SPOILER

Rhythm
there are some blank in this map, for Insane you can put more notes better.
00:47:407(8) maybe avoid blank better.

SPOILER

good luck & star
and if you could, please mod my map thanks.

DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 2013-02-18T20:53:02+00:00

kajiyatta wrote:
Dekaane's Normal
Placement
00:39:595(5) make a blanket? /*Done
SPOILER
00:54:595(4) to follow the flow, maybe Ctrl+G better. /*Done
Rhythm
00:32:876(1) delete this note? it's a bit difficult for expectation. /*If I do that it will be empty and the next object is offbeat, making it a bit difficult to read, also that circle is for drums.
01:04:438(2,3) a bit weird for me, maybe this will follow the music more better. /*Although I'm following vocals there, it sounds better, done
SPOILER

Thanks for modding :3, update is here~ http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=20Ua6ypy

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-02-19T07:20:23+00:00

kajiyatta wrote:
Hinely's Hard
Rhythm
00:30:220 unnecessary green line ...Can't see why it is unnecessary.
00:31:157(1) it's a bug? too short and weird. Nope. 0.5x and follows the music.
01:25:688(1) too fast for Hard, maybe ×1.50 better Done.
Hit Sonud
00:17:095(2)~ I don't think it's good to put a Normal whistle. Added an S:C2 inherited timing point at 00:16:470.

Thanks for modding~

http://puu.sh/24YCR

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2013-02-19T16:41:38+00:00

as you posted after my queue was closed , i just suggest some HS mod and skip Easy diff

[Normal]

- 00:46:157 (5) - clap on start and delete whistle
- 00:48:188 (2) - ^ on end ^
- 00:50:688 (2) - ^
- 00:52:407 (4) - clap
- 00:56:157 (6) - you know here
- 00:59:595 (1) - clap
- 01:01:157 (1) - finish spinner by 01:02:720 - here is better
- 01:08:970 (1,2,3) - clap on end

[Hinely's Hard]

- 00:15:063 (1) - finish?
- 00:30:688 (5) - ^ on start
- 00:40:688 (2) - ^ and delete whistle
- 00:45:532 (3) - why clap here?
- 00:49:282 (4) - add whistle on start
- 00:59:595 (6) - NC?
- 01:00:688 (8) - finish on start
- 01:09:438 (2) - finish?
- 01:12:563 (1) - ^ on repeat
- 01:19:595 (3) - ^ on end
- 01:24:438 (2) - ^ on start
- 01:25:688 (1) - SB on this part looks really odd try other pattern

[Mochi]

- 00:16:001 (7,8) - ctrl G only Timing
- 00:40:688 (2) - finish
- 00:50:220 (3) - clap on end
- 00:54:282 (1) - clap on start
- 00:56:782 (3) - ^
- 00:57:095 (1) - clap
- 00:58:345 (2) - ^ on start
- 00:59:282 (2) - ^ on end
- 01:00:220 (6) - finish on end
- 01:07:095 (5) - clap on end
- 01:09:438 (4) - soft finish
- 01:10:688 (9) - ^
- 01:11:626 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/257rQ try this rhythm
- 01:12:563 (6,1) - need finish
- 01:13:970 (5) - clap on end
- 01:18:345 (1) - ^
- 01:18:970 (3) - ^
- 01:20:220 (3) - finish on start ( and delete whistle )

that's all GL

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-02-20T10:05:11+00:00

HelloSCV wrote:
[Hinely's Hard]

- 00:30:688 (5) - ^ on start ...Why should I? There's clearly no need for that there.
- 00:45:532 (3) - why clap here? Removed.
- 00:49:282 (4) - add whistle on start Done.
- 01:09:438 (2) - finish? No need for that there.
- 01:12:563 (1) - ^ on repeat ^
- 01:24:438 (2) - ^ on start ^
- 01:25:688 (1) - SB on this part looks really odd try other pattern I see no problems there, to be honest...

Thanks for modding~

http://puu.sh/25wE6

DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 2013-02-20T14:30:12+00:00

HelloSCV wrote:
[Normal]

- 01:01:157 (1) - finish spinner by 01:02:720 - here is better /*The spinner is following vocals, so the end is fine
that's all GL

Everything else was done, thanks /o/
Update http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=KZBhvjKZ

Bass

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Bass 2013-02-20T20:23:49+00:00

Hi, some suggestions

[General]

ok

[Easy]

00:52:720 (1) - For better look I'd move it a bit like http://puu.sh/25F3V looks better

Solid diff, nothing more to add.

[Deekane's Normal]

01:05:063 (3,1) - remove (3), on normal it might be bit hard to hit 1/2 and then switch to 1/1

Nice diff.

[Hinely's Hard]

ArtistUnicode is broken, fix that.

00:13:970 (1,2,3) - How about rearanging this pattern for make it look more fancy? Like... http://puu.sh/25Fix
00:55:220 (1,2,3) - again... this pattern could be more creative, right now it doesn't look nice...I hope we both can agree that this http://puu.sh/25Fog looks really better
00:56:313 (11,12,13,14,15) - I don't hear any significant change in music so why increased spacing there?
01:02:720 (1,2) - objects right after spinner... ah always I am rather for giving even more skilled player some little break to recover
01:07:407 (5) - What about that slider being curved in opposite direction? I mean http://puu.sh/25FHK . Just player slides in that direction and suddenly comes to next pattern smoothly, gives nice feeling.
01:07:720 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - I really suggest avoiding putting it in same spacing, especially in Hard, it's really confusing for player
01:12:251 (4,5,6) - they are hidden by (2)'s hitburst, place them somewhere else away from there
01:18:970 (1,2,3) - that pattern doesn't look neat at all
01:25:688 (1) - this slider shouldn't be speeded up at all, it's really crazy and... not allowed.

[Mochi]

00:29:438 (4) - That slider could have be done better, like http://puu.sh/25Hc6
00:32:720 (3,4) - Actually this or this would make better flow with rhythm and clicking
00:35:063 (6,7,1) - pretty much this tiplet doesn't fit there, I don't hear any 1/4s in music
00:37:720 (2) - NC would be better but actually I don't like how this rhythm goes, doesn't flow at all
00:47:563 (x) - Strongly suggesting adding circle there for better rhythm and to avoid confusion
00:52:720 (1,2,3) - that sounds really odd, and I can't hear there 1/4, just vocals mainly. Just remove (2)
00:56:470 (2,3) - place them like that for better flow http://puu.sh/25Ik2 . Current placement, shape just doesn't run smoothly.
01:08:657 (4) - stack under (2), somehow flows better
01:11:313 (2) - any reason why it ends on 1/4?
01:13:970 (5) - new combo for repeating chorus
01:18:188 (6,7,1) - would sound much better when (7) is removed, 1/4 triplet definitely doesn't fit there at all

Pointed major things. Good luck!

Momochikun

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Momochikun 2013-02-21T07:30:02+00:00

Updated !

for kajiyatta, i'll mod ur map ASAP. i;m in the middle of final exam >.<

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-02-22T05:56:22+00:00

Bass wrote:
[Hinely's Hard]
ArtistUnicode is broken, fix that. Fixed with Xinely's help.
00:13:970 (1,2,3) - How about rearanging this pattern for make it look more fancy? Like... http://puu.sh/25Fix Xinely said that she wanted to keep it like that.
00:55:220 (1,2,3) - again... this pattern could be more creative, right now it doesn't look nice...I hope we both can agree that this http://puu.sh/25Fog looks really better ^
00:56:313 (11,12,13,14,15) - I don't hear any significant change in music so why increased spacing there? She's fine with that; can't be helped.
01:02:720 (1,2) - objects right after spinner... ah always I am rather for giving even more skilled player some little break to recover Removed the circle and lengthened the slider.
01:07:407 (5) - What about that slider being curved in opposite direction? I mean http://puu.sh/25FHK . Just player slides in that direction and suddenly comes to next pattern smoothly, gives nice feeling. I want this to blanket the previous slider...
01:07:720 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - I really suggest avoiding putting it in same spacing, especially in Hard, it's really confusing for player Don't think so; it's readable and fits with the song.
01:12:251 (4,5,6) - they are hidden by (2)'s hitburst, place them somewhere else away from there The approach circles?
01:18:970 (1,2,3) - that pattern doesn't look neat at all Hmm?
01:25:688 (1) - this slider shouldn't be speeded up at all, it's really crazy and... not allowed. Same reason as 01:07:720 (1,2,1,2,3,4).

Thanks for modding anyway lol

http://puu.sh/26teR

Last edited by Hinsvar 2013-02-22T06:12:56+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 2013-02-22T06:01:35+00:00

Bass wrote:
Hi, some suggestions

[Deekane's Normal]
01:05:063 (3,1) - remove (3), on normal it might be bit hard to hit 1/2 and then switch to 1/1 /*It should be changed in last update
Nice diff./*Thanks >w<

Pointed major things. Good luck!

Thanks anyways
Update my diff please :c : http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=KZBhvjKZ

Bass

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Bass 2013-02-22T08:54:40+00:00

One more thing, about you wanted keep it blanketed with previous slider. Map should feel nice while playing, not only look nicely. You don't have to blanket everything...
Also still I think putting 2x speeded slider on Hard diff with that bpm makes no sense...
And approach circles.. I know but still I think that circle always should be a bit visible too...

Momochikun

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Momochikun 2013-02-24T04:20:28+00:00

Updated yo~
thx for mod

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-02-24T04:53:32+00:00

Bass wrote:
One more thing, about you wanted keep it blanketed with previous slider. Map should feel nice while playing, not only look nicely. You don't have to blanket everything...
Also still I think putting 2x speeded slider on Hard diff with that bpm makes no sense...
And approach circles.. I know but still I think that circle always should be a bit visible too...

...I'll rethink about them. Will wait for the next mod first.

V E

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V E 2013-02-26T11:41:37+00:00

yuu kue mochi,,,, dari mod huequehehe
maaf, cuma bisa fast mod

easy
nice

dekaane's
already good

hinely
00:35:220 - (9) not stacked properly
00:58:813 - (4) ^
01:02:407 - spinner should end here
01:02:720 - why you start from red tick? kinda weird imo, add note or move slider and fiil the empty spot

mochi
00:12:407 - rem NC
00:20:688 (2,3) - please reduce (2) 2 repeat and move (3) to white tick... also it's good to make new repeater at 00:21:470, ofcourse reduce (3) repeat if you do that, and please end to white tick or red tick
00:46:157 (2) - it's good to move to (5) head that visible before

thankss~

Xinely

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Xinely 2013-02-26T12:10:43+00:00

makasih om selova ~
fix all ww

diff : http://puu.sh/28Eun

MineC24

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MineC24 2013-02-27T05:06:16+00:00

Modding queue~~

(Sorry. I'm late

)

Easy

00:40:220 (1) - spin end 00:42:095 please.

Very nice Easy

Dekaane's Normal

imo AR -1

01:01:157 (1) - spin end 01:02:720 please.

Hinely's Hard

imo AR -1

00:19:907 (1) - spin start 00:20:063 and add note 00:19:907
00:22:720 (1,2) - remove clap sound
01:01:157 (1) - spin end 01:02:407 and add note 01:02:720 (whistle sound and stack by 01:02:876 (2) )
01:08:345 (1,2,3,4) - very confuse...

Mochi

00:12:407 (1) - remove NC

Nice Song and Nice Map

DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 2013-02-27T18:30:23+00:00

jaehn215 wrote:
Modding queue~~

imo AR -1 /*I feel it plays better with AR5, as the BPM is fast.

01:01:157 (1) - spin end 01:02:720 please. /*Following vocals for this spinner, no changes.

Nice Song and Nice Map

No changes, but thanks for taking your time c:

Momochikun

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Momochikun 2013-02-27T22:19:50+00:00

selova wrote:
yuu kue mochi,,,, dari mod huequehehe
maaf, cuma bisa fast mod

mochi
00:12:407 - rem NC k
00:20:688 (2,3) - please reduce (2) 2 repeat and move (3) to white tick... also it's good to make new repeater at 00:21:470, ofcourse reduce (3) repeat if you do that, and please end to white tick or red tick ok~
00:46:157 (2) - it's good to move to (5) head that visible before hmm.. stack ?

thankss~

jaehn215 wrote:
Modding queue~~

(Sorry. I'm late )
Mochi
00:12:407 (1) - remove NC fix from before

Nice Song and Nice Map

Thx for mod

edit : UPDATED

K i A i

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K i A i 2013-03-01T12:30:06+00:00

From Modding Queues

[easy]
00:15:220 (2) - how about make this slider's bending to offside?
00:19:282 (1) - this spinner must end at 00:22:095
00:37:720 (1) - how about make this slider roundly?
00:49:595 (1,2,3) - do not increase distance in Normal, Easy diff

[normal]
00:13:345 (4) - how about make this slider's bending to offside?
01:07:720 (1) - ^

[hard]
00:32:407 (3) - Ctrl + G?
00:55:688 (2) - this is also not bad. -> http://puu.sh/2aeFF
01:08:345 (1,2,3,4) - it'll be make disarray to player.. how about change arrange this part?

good map~
good luck! + 1 + 1(Mochi)

Momochikun

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Momochikun 2013-03-06T10:52:04+00:00

Thx..
updated for my diff

DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 2013-03-06T21:31:04+00:00

I knew I was forgetting something, sorry for the late

K i A i wrote:
From Modding Queues
[normal]
00:13:345 (4) - how about make this slider's bending to offside? /*This leads the flow to the next slider as it is now
01:07:720 (1) - ^ /*That's ok for this, changed

Thanks~

Update: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=KZBhvjKZ

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-03-07T10:50:06+00:00

Didn't change the one on my part because the pattern is supposed to be like that...

Xinely also didn't change anything.

Still, thanks for modding, K i A i

shARPII

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shARPII 2013-03-08T23:13:26+00:00

Hello Momochikun. I'm really sorry to be late ^^' I had a lot of things to do and a big event to prepare (tomorrow is the D-day :3) that's why i took all this time. I hope my mod will help you and let's go ^^

Help about my mod

Must be fixed
Should be fixed
(nazi)-suggestions :3

[Easy]

00:11:470 (2) I think you can put a NC here to fit with the song. With (1) you have the drum and then, the music begin.
00:27:720 (1) (nazi-sug time) : Previous => 1.04x I think you can move this slider a grid left to be perfect.
00:27:720 (1,2,3,4) I think this rythm is not really easy or instinctive for an easy diff. Maybe try this rythm instead? http://puu.sh/2ekzB
00:32:720 (3,1) reverse NC. For me, the new beat is beginning and it wasn't really a pattern before so you can put this circle with the other slider instead. I really think this is better if you reverse.
00:35:220 (4) if you like my previous suggestion, put a NC here.
00:49:907 (2) Previous : 1.05x you can move it one grid right (and after that move (3) a little bit) to be perfect imo
00:50:845 (4,6) I think something symetrical could be better here (like this : http://puu.sh/2ekMZ)

Everything else seems ok for me

[Dekaane's Normal]

Hey DakeDekaane :3 Here we go for you <3

00:13:345 (4) The slider's end is a little too high for me. I think that you have to lower it
00:18:188 (3) This circle is too high on the grid. Consider lowering it!
01:13:501 (1) ^
01:17:720 (4) ^

I have looked your diff over and over, I really can't find something else, this is really good! Nice work Dekaane!

[Hinely's Hard]

00:42:095 100% for hitsounds' volume is too loud for me imo. If you can lower it a little, it could be perfect.
01:07:720 (1,2,1,2,3,4) Not really readable : same spacing for 1/2 and 1/4. Please change this
01:12:251 (4,5,6) why did you put a triplet here. It follow nothing. Remove (5,6).
01:25:688 (1) slider velocity multiplier 2.0x is too big. Please reconsider and put 1.5x instead. This is totally unpredictable currently.

Nice hard diff

[Mochi]

I think this diff is ok. I'm a bit tired so I'll watch again this diff sunday (when I could play with my full capacities xD) and I'll edit if i find something weird. Except some NC (for example, when you do a triplet and you change the combo on it, i don't really like that but that's a choice and modify this is really optionnal ^^)

Hope it will help you

Your map is good for me so I drop one star! Good luck for the next!

DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 2013-03-09T00:43:51+00:00

Hi shARPII, fixed all that high objects :3

shARPII wrote:
I have looked your diff over and over, I really can't find something else, this is really good! Nice work Dekaane!

Thank you~ >-<

Update is here c: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=KZBhvjKZ

Andrea

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Andrea 2013-03-09T20:57:26+00:00

~General~

Tags through the difficulties are inconsistent.

Colours through the difficulties are inconsistent, I don't think you did that on purpose.

Kiai time through the difficulties is inconsistent, I don't think you did that on purpose.

~Easy~

Tick Rate 1 is better to me.

00:42:720 (1) - Too soon after spinner for the easiest difficulty.
01:13:188 (5) - Add a finish.

~Dekanee's Normal~

01:01:157 (1) - I think it's better to end this spinner on the next white tick.
01:05:220 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:13:501 (1) - ^
01:13:970 (2) - New combo.
01:15:220 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:18:970 (3) - Remove the whistle and add a finish.
01:25:688 (1) - Remove this new combo, it's not necessary.

~Hinely's Hard~

00:30:688 (5) - You're missing a finish at the begin of this slider.
00:31:157 (1) - I don't like this slowdown, it doesn't really make sense to me.
00:44:595 (1,2) - Why this sudden jump? Use the same spacing, please.
01:05:220 (1,2,3,4) - This might be hard to read at first sight.
01:07:720 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
01:12:563 (1) - Sudden and unexpected jump.
01:21:782 (2) - This note confused me, I thought it was on blue tick at first.
01:25:688 (1) - Why would you add such a random speedup at the end? Please do something else.

~Mochi~

Rename it to "Mochi's Insane" for consistency with the other difficulties.

00:16:470 (1) - Finish on slider start.
00:20:688 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - A bit confusing to understand when the true stream starts due to the many slider repeats.
00:22:876 (4) - New combo.
00:23:032 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:30:220 (1,2,3) - Finish on every slider start.
00:47:720 (10) - New combo.
00:47:876 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:54:907 (1) - ^
01:00:141 (4) - Remove this circle, it doesn't follow anything.
01:08:970 (1) - Finish on slider start.
01:10:220 (6) - ^
01:11:470 (2) - ^

This map is not bad, but you still need to keep working on it. Best of luck to all of you!

Momochikun

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Momochikun 2013-03-10T00:18:52+00:00

ShARPII

shARPII wrote:
Hello Momochikun. I'm really sorry to be late ^^' I had a lot of things to do and a big event to prepare (tomorrow is the D-day :3) that's why i took all this time. I hope my mod will help you and let's go ^^

[Easy]
00:11:470 (2) I think you can put a NC here to fit with the song. With (1) you have the drum and then, the music begin. i'll discuss it with the GD first
00:27:720 (1) (nazi-sug time) : Previous => 1.04x I think you can move this slider a grid left to be perfect. k.. fixed
00:27:720 (1,2,3,4) I think this rythm is not really easy or instinctive for an easy diff. Maybe try this rythm instead? http://puu.sh/2ekzB Let's wait for the next mod
00:32:720 (3,1) reverse NC. For me, the new beat is beginning and it wasn't really a pattern before so you can put this circle with the other slider instead. I really think this is better if you reverse. I'll fix it for the next mod :3
00:35:220 (4) if you like my previous suggestion, put a NC here. ^
00:49:907 (2) Previous : 1.05x you can move it one grid right (and after that move (3) a little bit) to be perfect imo k
00:50:845 (4,6) I think something symetrical could be better here (like this : http://puu.sh/2ekMZ)
fixed

Everything else seems ok for me

[Mochi]

I think this diff is ok. I'm a bit tired so I'll watch again this diff sunday (when I could play with my full capacities xD) and I'll edit if i find something weird. Except some NC (for example, when you do a triplet and you change the combo on it, i don't really like that but that's a choice and modify this is really optionnal ^^) ^^

Hope it will help you
Your map is good for me so I drop one star! Good luck for the next! Thx~

Andrea

Andrea wrote:
~General~

Tags through the difficulties are inconsistent.

Colours through the difficulties are inconsistent, I don't think you did that on purpose.

Kiai time through the difficulties is inconsistent, I don't think you did that on purpose.
I'll update it after GD give me the updated ver

~Easy~

Tick Rate 1 is better to me. k

00:42:720 (1) - Too soon after spinner for the easiest difficulty. i reduce the spinner length then
01:13:188 (5) - Add a finish. ok

~Mochi~

Rename it to "Mochi's Insane" for consistency with the other difficulties. k then.. isn't will looked as GD ?

00:16:470 (1) - Finish on slider start. k
00:20:688 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - A bit confusing to understand when the true stream starts due to the many slider repeats. changed to stream
00:22:876 (4) - New combo. k
00:23:032 (1) - Remove new combo. k
00:30:220 (1,2,3) - Finish on every slider start. k
00:47:720 (10) - New combo. k
00:47:876 (1) - Remove new combo. k
00:54:907 (1) - ^ k
01:00:141 (4) - Remove this circle, it doesn't follow anything. k
01:08:970 (1) - Finish on slider start. k
01:10:220 (6) - ^ k
01:11:470 (2) - ^ k

This map is not bad, but you still need to keep working on it. Best of luck to all of you!

Thx ^^

Thx for mod ^^ waiting for GD~

DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 2013-03-10T05:34:56+00:00

Andrea wrote:
~General~

Tags through the difficulties are inconsistent.

Colours through the difficulties are inconsistent, I don't think you did that on purpose. /*Oops, I was the rebel one, made my colors consistent.

Kiai time through the difficulties is inconsistent, I don't think you did that on purpose. /*My kiai will stay, I changed the end though.

~Dekanee's Normal~

01:01:157 (1) - I think it's better to end this spinner on the next white tick. /*This spinner is following the vocals, it's fine
01:05:220 (1) - Remove new combo. /*This goes along with the 1, 2, 3, in the lyrics :c
01:13:501 (1) - ^ /*Ok
01:13:970 (2) - New combo. /*Ok
01:15:220 (1) - Remove new combo. /*This goes along with the 1, 2, 3, in the lyrics :c
01:18:970 (3) - Remove the whistle and add a finish. /*Ok
01:25:688 (1) - Remove this new combo, it's not necessary. /*Well, someone had to say it, done.

This map is not bad, but you still need to keep working on it. Best of luck to all of you!

Thanks~
I'll let the tags to Mochi, my update is here: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=KZBhvjKZ

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-03-10T10:10:34+00:00

shARPII wrote:
[Hinely's Hard]

00:42:095 100% for hitsounds' volume is too loud for me imo. If you can lower it a little, it could be perfect.
01:07:720 (1,2,1,2,3,4) Not really readable : same spacing for 1/2 and 1/4. Please change this Uhm, I believe it's easily readable... I did it on my first test perfectly, and certainly not by luck.
01:12:251 (4,5,6) why did you put a triplet here. It follow nothing. Remove (5,6). Done.
01:25:688 (1) slider velocity multiplier 2.0x is too big. Please reconsider and put 1.5x instead. This is totally unpredictable currently. ^
Nice hard diff

Andrea wrote:
~Hinely's Hard~

00:30:688 (5) - You're missing a finish at the begin of this slider. I don't think that spot is loud enough for a finish to be applied there.
00:31:157 (1) - I don't like this slowdown, it doesn't really make sense to me. It does make sense, IMO... Clearly goes well with the song itself.
00:44:595 (1,2) - Why this sudden jump? Use the same spacing, please. Done.
01:05:220 (1,2,3,4) - This might be hard to read at first sight. Not for me. I'm sure with myself.
01:07:720 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - ^ ^
01:12:563 (1) - Sudden and unexpected jump. Did stuff here.
01:21:782 (2) - This note confused me, I thought it was on blue tick at first. And I don't think so. There's no problem with this.
01:25:688 (1) - Why would you add such a random speedup at the end? Please do something else. It clearly fits with the song, IMO, but okay, reduced the speed-up to 1.5x.

Thanks guys

Taking over Xinely's part because she won't be able to go online until April 18th.

http://puu.sh/2fc3i

Dark_Ai

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Dark_Ai 2013-03-10T17:12:24+00:00

Call me in-game when you update the map for a mod

Momochikun

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Momochikun 2013-03-11T05:41:45+00:00

Updated !

@Dark : I'll catch you in-game when you are online xD~

[NSER]-Zazalng

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[NSER]-Zazalng 2013-03-12T07:37:22+00:00

Hello Sir I from Modding Queues

[General]
Kiai Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Dekaane's Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:970, ends on 01:13:189
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:13:970, ends on 01:22:720

- [Hinely's Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:970, ends on 01:13:188
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:13:970, ends on 01:23:032

- [Mochi's Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:970, ends on 01:13:188
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:13:970, ends on 01:23:970

- [Mochi's Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:970, ends on 01:13:188
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:13:970, ends on 01:23:032

Tags
- Consider adding "Dekaane" to all of your tags
- Consider adding "Hinely" to all of your tags
~~- Consider adding "Mochi" to all of your tags~~ - Sorry for my Mistake

[Mochi's Easy]
00:12:720 Like it okey ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650620 | it have same sound in 3 beat
00:23:970 i think it ok than circle http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650625
00:47:407 - 00:49:282 Fix like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650629 | Combo 1 2 incorrect beat

Nothing to see now
[Dekaane's Normal]
00:13:970 - 00:16:157 Fix like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650636 | Outlayer Slider 1 & 4
00:48:188 Make New Slider Start at 00:48:032 - 00:48:657 | Incorrect Beat
00:49:126 Incorrect Beat Delete Plz and Note 00:48:970 and 00:49:282
01:17:720 - 01:18:345 Do it plz http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650721 | 01:18:032 it have beat for 1 note but it is normal diff use silder like that picture

Nothing to see now
[Hinely's Hard]

Nothing to see now
So Impassive

RikiH_

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RikiH_ 2013-03-12T14:17:22+00:00

Ohai. I'm from popner's queue.

Mochi's Easy

00:23:657 (2,3) - I'd prefer an arc pattern here. Put (2) in 180|200 and (3) in 232|140
00:29:282 (3,4) - I don't like this orizontal line... Put (3) in 228|112 and (4) in 180|256 maybe
00:34:595 (2) - Curved is better imo

00:42:720 (1) - This is not perfect, you should remake it with the new algorhythm
00:49:907 (2) - Move to 220|280. It flows better
00:53:970 (3,4) - Why don't you make this pattern symmetrical?

01:00:220 (5) - This is supposed to be in 257|176 to stack with the previous circle
01:05:220 (2,3) - Better this way imo

01:07:720 (2) - Like this?

01:12:563 (4) - Try this, or something.

01:18:345 (1,2,4) - These three sliders are overlapped, please do something to fix them
01:21:157 - Add a note?
01:23:970 (1,2) - Make a blanket? Also, add a repeat to the second slider

Dekaane's Normal

00:11:157 - Add a note, like in Easy
00:22:720 (1,2) - Curved?

00:31:782 (2) - I don't like this slider, it's strange... Try this

01:06:157 (4,1) - Swap NCs. The song says "one, two,three" so it's better to have a combo of three notes lol
01:08:970 (1) - Put the central sliderpointpoint in 188|72
01:25:688 (6) - Replace it with a silenced slider. End it in 01:26:157

Hinely's Hard

00:18:970 (1) - Please try this rhythm, it fits better imo (I'm lazy and i don't want to cut the screenshot lol)

00:22:095 (1) - Something like this is better imo

00:26:938 (2) - Put the final sliderpoint in 220|380
00:29:595 (3) - Final sliderpoint to 320|56 please
00:38:501 (2,3,4) - Stack them properly
00:43:657 (4,5) - This way please

00:55:220 (1,3) - Make them curved... If you know what I mean
01:06:157 (4,1) - Swap NCs
01:12:251 (1) - Convert this into two sliders?

Mochi's Insane

00:16:470 (1,2,3) - Can you move this to the center somehow?
00:21:860 (17) - Streams usually finish on big white ticks... I suggest you to remove this note
00:22:407 (2) - Move to 132|28
00:25:532 - I'd add a note here
00:31:626 (4,5,6,7,8) - It's better this way...

00:38:501 (4,5) - Improve a bit this blanket
00:39:907 (8) - move to 256|60, right in the center
00:40:688 (2,3,4) - What an odd flow... Make something like this. If you don't like my suggestion at least change it in another way!

00:45:610 (7) - Move 1 or 2 grid down
00:50:063 (2) - 416|208 in order to avoid that overlap
00:50:220 (3,4) - Like this?

00:52:399 (9) - 180|28 ?
01:08:657 (4) - This is supposet to be here: 418|192
01:25:688 (1) - Replace it with a silenced slider. End it here: 01:26:157

___________________________________________________________________________________

Done! Good luck with your map

Take a star.

Dark_Ai

1,832 posts

Joined July 2010

Dark_Ai 2013-03-13T20:00:09+00:00

Hey there. Mod from my Queues
sorry delay ><

Must be fix
It's only what I think

General

nothing

[Mochi's Easy]

00:16:470 (1) - stack this slider better with the slider before
00:53:970 (3) - Let this slider begin at 00:53:657 it's better imo
01:00:220 (5) - end this slider on 01:00:845

[Dekaane's Normal]

00:32:876 (1,2) - I would delete these two note and add one at 00:33:032 + 00:33:345
00:45:220 (4,5) - ending these two slider on the next white lines

That's all what I have to say here ~
good luck with ranking ~

DakeDekaane

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Joined February 2012

DakeDekaane 2013-03-14T01:04:01+00:00

Sorry for late >_<
Wa~ Tons of mods :c

Here I go~

Zazalng

Zazalng wrote:
[Dekaane's Normal]
00:13:970 - 00:16:157 Fix like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650636 | Outlayer Slider 1 & 4 /*It's ok what I have, I'm following the guitar there for make an easy rhythm to follow.
00:48:188 Make New Slider Start at 00:48:032 - 00:48:657 | Incorrect Beat /*That part is a mix between vocals and guitar, either is using the beat where I'm beginning the slider.
00:49:126 Incorrect Beat Delete Plz and Note 00:48:970 and 00:49:282 /*That circle is for guitar, and helps to keep the 3/2 rhythm I'm using there.
01:17:720 - 01:18:345 Do it plz http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650721 | 01:18:032 it have beat for 1 note but it is normal diff use silder like that picture /*I don't find a slider fitting there, as there is a somehow sudden change in vocals.

RikiH_

RikiH_ wrote:
Ohai. I'm from popner's queue.

Dekaane's Normal

00:11:157 - Add a note, like in Easy /*If I don't, I'd be a rebel one, done.
00:22:720 (1,2) - Curved? /*Look squeezy, and I don't like that kind of sliders, but re-arranged this part
00:31:782 (2) - I don't like this slider, it's strange... Try this /*But I like, I feel it fits for the guitar :c
01:06:157 (4,1) - Swap NCs. The song says "one, two,three" so it's better to have a combo of three notes lol /*That's right but (4) wouldn't belong to the next combo, and having a combo of one object will receive many complains, so it's better as I have now
01:08:970 (1) - Put the central sliderpointpoint in 188|72 /*I think I get your point, and many had told me something about this part, changed a bit
01:25:688 (6) - Replace it with a silenced slider. End it in 01:26:157 /*I feel it's better only a circle, a slider wouldn't fit in the end imo.

Done! Good luck with your map Take a star.

Dark_Ai

Dark_Ai wrote:
Hey there. Mod from my Queues
sorry delay ><

Must be fix
It's only what I think

[Dekaane's Normal]
00:32:876 (1,2) - I would delete these two note and add one at 00:33:032 + 00:33:345 /*That would break my rhythm after that, as I'm following drums.
00:45:220 (4,5) - ending these two slider on the next white lines /*I get your point, but those two are for vocals

That's all what I have to say here ~
good luck with ranking ~

Thanks for your mods~ :3
My update here~ http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=KZBhvjKZ
If you wonder why it's the same url, pastebin allows me to edit and keeps the Unicode as puush doesn't work fine for me.

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-03-14T06:12:45+00:00

RikiH_ wrote:
Hinely's Hard

00:18:970 (1) - Please try this rhythm, it fits better imo (I'm lazy and i don't want to cut the screenshot lol) Done.
00:22:095 (1) - Something like this is better imo ^
00:26:938 (2) - Put the final sliderpoint in 220|380 ^
00:29:595 (3) - Final sliderpoint to 320|56 please ^
00:38:501 (2,3,4) - Stack them properly I'm sure enough they're already stacked properly...
00:43:657 (4,5) - This way please Made something similar.
00:55:220 (1,3) - Make them curved... If you know what I mean I think this is fine, though.
01:06:157 (4,1) - Swap NCs Err, why would I?
01:12:251 (1) - Convert this into two sliders? ^

Thanks for modding~

http://puu.sh/2hqhk

Momochikun

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Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Momochikun 2013-03-17T01:17:12+00:00

Updated !

eldnl

Former osu!catch Champion: 2013

2,930 posts

Joined March 2010

eldnl 2013-03-19T19:16:09+00:00

General

There are some inconsistency in kiai times between the diffs, consider use the same for all the difficulties.
The reverse arrow on the white slider is invisible.

Easy

00:42:720 (1) Add a new combo to this note!
00:48:188 (1) The rhythm that this note is following is practically impossible to read for new players, please use a slider instead.

Normal

AR seems a bit fast, reduce it by 1.
00:19:751 (1) Use a slider here, same like the previous one.
01:00:220 (2) Very bad anti jump for a normal difficulty, change the slider position.
01:25:688 - Add a note here, see the other difficulties.

Hard

00:16:782 (1) Add a new combo to this note!
01:19:438 (2) I think you should delete this note, is a random and unnecessary jump, also sounds better without this note.
01:25:688 (1) Use a simple note here, instead of a slider, also you should remove the new combo.

Insane

00:19:751 - Use the same distance between (6,7,8)
01:25:688 (1) Remove new combo here.

Awesome map!

Nichiyouki

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Joined August 2011

Nichiyouki 2013-03-19T19:17:38+00:00

Hi, Momochi-kun :3

M4M request from my modding queue

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should consider
Black = My suggestion

General

Remove "iori nomizu" on tags because her name existed in the artist name.
Kiai time is different all diffs on the end of 2nd kiai time, and only "Dekaane's Normal" diff on the end of 1st kiai time. So please use kiai time to same with "Mochi's Easy" diff by this this.
- Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:970, ends on 01:13:188
  Kiai #2: Starts on 01:13:970, ends on 01:23:970
Japanese artist name is "野水いおり". Please change this name is "野水伊織" (Normally, Japanese use Kanji characters.)
Generally, the name in front of your level of difficulty is the name of who is guest diff. So you should consider "Mochi's Easy" and "Mochi's Insane" diffs because this map is mapped by you, which you are the GD. I will suggest that remove the name in front of your diffs. However, you can change Insane diff into other name. For example; "Mochi" or "Momochi" diff, etc.

Mochi's Easy

00:11:157 (1) - Move to x:42 y:143. It will be more beautiful when you observe between (1,2).
00:19:282 (1) - I hear cymbal sound on the rhythm which is in spinner end. So I think it will be better if you add finish or whistle on spinner.
00:27:720 (1,2,3) - I feel weird when I try to compare between these notes and the rhythm of song. I think you should move (2) at 00:28:970, move (3) at 00:29:595, and add repeating the slider 1 time to this picture. Then add clap on slider end, too.
SPOILER
00:32:720 (3) - Change clap into finish here which you can consider comparing the slider begin of 00:22:720 (1).
00:42:720 ~ 00:48:657 - You should add clap on 1st tick and 3rd tick to follow the rhythm
00:42:720 (1) - Add finish on slider begin will be better.
00:49:907 (2) - Spacing between note previously and this is too far. Please reduce spacing into about 1.00x.
00:55:845 (2) - I hear drum sound on the rhythm of song. So I suggest that add clap on slider end.
00:58:345 (2) - This, too. But you should add clap on slider begin.
00:58:970 (3,4) - Remove (4). Then move (3) at 00:59:282. It will be suitable more than imo, and if you fix these, You should add clap on slider end, too.
01:23:970 (1) - Try to make it blanket with next note by this picture.
SPOILER
00:42:720 (1) - Add NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

Dekaane's Normal

This diff isn't add video. Please add it from "Black + White (TV Size).avi" to same with Mochi's Easy and Mochi's Insane diffs.
00:11:470 (3,4,5) - If you want to be more beautiful, try to make (1), slider end of this, and (4) is equilateral triangle. Then adjust spacing on (4,5) by this code.
```
444,216,12407,2,0,P|395:160|322:137,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,92,13188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,56,13345,2,0,P|152:44|100:44,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
00:43:032 (1) - Spacing between note previously and this is too close. Please increase spacing into about 1.00x
00:56:157 (6) - Move to right 2~3 grids and up 1 grid to adjust spacing, and make it to be more beautiful.
01:01:157 (1) - I feel the rhythm of spinner isn't follow with the rhythm of song. You should end the spinner at 01:02:720, and I think that add whistle here, too.
01:18:970 (3) - I think that change whistle into finish will be better imo.
01:21:470 (1) - Add clap here to follow the rhythm on spinner end.
01:25:688 - I hear the rhythm here, too. So you should add a circle here.

Hinely's Hard

This diff isn't add video. Please add it from "Black + White (TV Size).avi" to same with Mochi's Easy and Mochi's Insane diffs.
00:13:790 (1,2,3) - Make by this picture will be more smoothly and more beautiful.
SPOILER
00:16:470 ~ 00:18:970 - I think normal hitsound is weird sound for me. I suggeat that change into S:C2. It will be suitable more than.
00:16:782 (1) - Add NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
00:18:032 (5,6) - Move to down 5 grid and left 2 grid will be more smoothly.
00:29:595 (3,5) - Try to make these is symmetric will be bettter imo.
00:30:688 (5) - Add finish on slider begin to follow the rhythm.
01:12:251 (1) - It will be more fun than this if you remove repeating of slider. Then add a slider on 01:12:876 ~ 01:13:188 instead.
01:17:563 (4) - Move to x:164 y:200 will be better.
01:22:095 (3) - Move at 01:21:938 instead. I think it will be more fun, and add finish here if you fixed.

Mochi's Insane

00:13:501 (1) - It isn't necessary to add NC. So please remove it.
00:14:907 (3) - Try to avoid overlaping with 00:15:532 (1) will be better.
00:15:454 (5) - You use normal hitsound, which it cause weird sound and too loud. So you should change additions & sampleset into auto or soft
00:19:595 (7) - Move to up 4 grid to make it in the middle of triangle (1,2,3). It will reduce confusion to play, but if you want to be better than this, move 00:18:657 (1,3) to left 1 grid.
00:22:720 (3,1) - It's a jump after cause anti-jump on 00:22:095 (1,2,3), which it's overmapped. So Please fix it.
00:33:032 (1) - Move to up 2 grids will be look better.
00:35:220 (1) - It will be better if you end the slider at 00:35:376. Then add a circle on 00:35:532 to follow the rhythm and vocal, but you should remove finish on slider begin.
00:46:157 (2) - Try to stack with slider begin of 00:45:220 (5).
00:52:563 - I think that add a circle here will be better imo.
01:08:345 (3,4) - Use ctrl+G will be more smoothly for me. Then if you fix it, please switch soft-clap/normal-whistle between these.
01:10:220 (6) - I hear weird sound. Please remove finish on slider end, and add NC here to follow the rhythm and vocal.
01:10:845 (1,2) - Remove NC on (1), but add it on (2) instead.
01:13:032 (1,2,3,4) - I feel these can't play smoothly. So I will suggest that use ctrl+G to make to be able to play more smoothly. Then change adding clap from (4) into (1) instead, and you can try to make (1,3) and (4,2) are symmetric.
01:12:095 (6) - This, too. Please remove finish on slider begin.
01:20:845 (5) - I feel weird when I play. I suggest that make by this picture will be more smoothly.
SPOILER
01:24:126 (1) - Try to make it parallel with 01:24:595 (1).

Comment: Is this map your 1st beatmap? owo I really good map, and I like this song, too \:D/ and I hope it will be better after fix my mod :p Now I will give a star to you

Hope my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

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Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2013-03-20T13:03:54+00:00

eldnl wrote:
Hard

01:19:438 (2) I think you should delete this note, is a random and unnecessary jump, also sounds better without this note. Done.
01:25:688 (1) Use a simple note here, instead of a slider, also you should remove the new combo. Err, I don't see anything wrong here...

Nichiyouki wrote:
Hinely's Hard
This diff isn't add video. Please add it from "Black + White (TV Size).avi" to same with Mochi's Easy and Mochi's Insane diffs. | Should be there now.
00:29:595 (3,5) - Try to make these is symmetric will be bettter imo. I think the thing I have now is fine.
00:30:688 (5) - Add finish on slider begin to follow the rhythm. ...Okay, okay, added.
01:12:251 (1) - It will be more fun than this if you remove repeating of slider. Then add a slider on 01:12:876 ~ 01:13:188 instead. Umm, this is intentional (I have no idea where to place the second slider, anyway...), but if more people complains about this, I'll rethink about it.
01:22:095 (3) - Move at 01:21:938 instead. I think it will be more fun, and add finish here if you fixed. Done.

Thanks for modding \:D/

http://puu.sh/2kOqa

Mochi: Remember to fix the broken Artist/TitleUnicode part~

DakeDekaane

osu! Alumni

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Joined February 2012

DakeDekaane 2013-03-21T00:48:21+00:00

eldnl

eldnl wrote:
General

There are some inconsistency in kiai times between the diffs, consider use the same for all the difficulties.
The reverse arrow on the white slider is invisible.

Normal

AR seems a bit fast, reduce it by 1. /*The BPM is fast enough to keep AR5
00:19:751 (1) Use a slider here, same like the previous one. /*Ok
01:00:220 (2) Very bad anti jump for a normal difficulty, change the slider position. /*It's ok imo, it fits with vocals, also it's in 2/1, it's easy to play.
01:25:688 - Add a note here, see the other difficulties. /*I thought it was already added, anyway, put a circle.

Awesome map!

Nichiyouki

Nichiyouki wrote:

Hi, Momochi-kun :3

M4M request from my modding queue

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should consider
Black = My suggestion
Dekaane's Normal
This diff isn't add video. Please add it from "Black + White (TV Size).avi" to same with Mochi's Easy and Mochi's Insane diffs.
00:11:470 (3,4,5) - If you want to be more beautiful, try to make (1), slider end of this, and (4) is equilateral triangle. Then adjust spacing on (4,5) by this code. /*Nice one, done.
444,216,12407,2,0,P|395:160|322:137,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,92,13188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,56,13345,2,0,P|152:44|100:44,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:43:032 (1) - Spacing between note previously and this is too close. Please increase spacing into about 1.00x /*Oops, fixed
00:56:157 (6) - Move to right 2~3 grids and up 1 grid to adjust spacing, and make it to be more beautiful. /*Done
01:01:157 (1) - I feel the rhythm of spinner isn't follow with the rhythm of song. You should end the spinner at 01:02:720, and I think that add whistle here, too. /*After many people telling me this, I'll do.
01:18:970 (3) - I think that change whistle into finish will be better imo. /*I know what happened here, done.
01:21:470 (1) - Add clap here to follow the rhythm on spinner end. /*Done
01:25:688 - I hear the rhythm here, too. So you should add a circle here. /*Done
Hope my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~

Also, changed my kiai :<
Thanks for mod, update here: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=KZBhvjKZ

Mythiax

637 posts

Joined August 2012

Mythiax 2013-03-21T09:33:51+00:00

Hi~ Mod from (＾Ｕ＾)ノ Taris and Senri Modding Queue (＾Ｕ＾)ノ

Red: Unrankable
Blue: You should fix this.
Green: Opinion, curiosity or just something that deserved to be mentioned.
Black: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this.

[General]

Change the singer name. Your current one is 野水いおり and the correct name is 野水伊織.
Remove iori nomizu from tags. Her name is already in the song.
All difs have a note at 00:11:157 - This note is place before the red line (BPM line) starts. It's only one note and it's ok but a BAT may ask you to change this so it would be safer if you adjuts the offset.
It's your own map so you can't call your own difficulty "Mochi's Easy" or "Mochi's Insane". That's only for guest diff. Rename this diffs to Easy and Insane. However, you can also name your insane "Mochi" if you want, but without the "Insane" in the name.

[Mochi's Easy]

00:15:220 (2) - Spacing
00:23:970 (3) - This sliders it's overlaped with 00:23:657 (2) - Please fix this.
00:27:720 (1,2,3) - These notes don't fit with music. Try this:
Here is the code if you liked it:
```
400,320,27720,6,0,P|449:327|501:318,2,80
340,172,28970,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,232,29595,1,8,0:0:0:0:
```
01:17:720 (2,1) - Spacing

[Dekaane's Normal]

Nice map.

[Hinely's Hard]

Both of you understad the other pretty well. Nice map.
This difficulty doesn't have the video added. Add it.

[Mochi's Insane]

00:19:438 (6) - Move this note to x:256 y:32. That way will be aligned with 00:19:595 (7) -
00:32:407 (2) - Make this slide straight and move it to x:251 y:216. Looks better and spacing is perefct that way.
00:35:220 (1) - Make this slider with a curve? Better flow and that way, you don't break your previous slider's pattern 00:33:345 (3,5,6) -
00:45:532 (6,7,8) - Move this notes to x:356 y:248. Seems to be a better placing imo. (Select the three notes and move them together. That way, you won't mess it up and you'll keep the correct spacing)
00:46:157 (2,3,4) - Move this notes to x:348 y:68 so (2) will stack with 00:45:220 (5) - start. To fix spacing, move 00:46:470 (5) - to x:224 y:208
00:55:532 (5) - Suddenly a red cube in a slider? Why don't you use a normal curved slider?
01:05:532 (2) - Move this to x:256 y:56 and move 01:05:845 (3) - to x:456 y:304. They make a perfect triangle.

01:06:157 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is not pattern at all. Looks too random imo. Try this:

Here is the code if you liked it:

252,176,66157,5,8,0:0:0:0:
132,168,66313,2,0,P|120:204|140:252,1,80
220,328,66626,2,0,P|258:346|289:331,1,80
368,240,66938,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,116,67095,2,0,L|428:60,2,80,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,176,67563,1,0,0:0:0:0:

01:09:282 (2,3,4) - Turn this into a three stacked notes and move it x:92 y:216?
01:13:501 (4) - Move this to x:364 y:248 and move 01:13:657 (5) - to x:368 y:160.

Really nice map for being your first map. Keep woring hard on it. GL with this and any doubts about my mod, ask me anytime in-game. Bye~

Rieki_old

Rieki_old 2013-04-02T14:28:47+00:00

it's enough good imo
try find MAT (:

Momochikun

1,944 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Momochikun 2013-04-25T04:49:20+00:00

Revived and Updated !
Sry for late.. i got an exams xD

Niva

Global Moderator

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Joined November 2009

Niva 2013-04-25T09:02:54+00:00

Hi there Momochikun! You asked me a testplay a while back then, I had only playtested Mochi diff at the time being but here we go:

(don't kudosu please - it's not a mod anyway)

First of all, the jumps are really, REALLY hard to read in AR7, please highly consider using AR9 or at least 8 for this 192 BPM song orz - I can't even pass this map with AR7 (really) but when I switched the difficulty setting to AR9 I got this in first try:

SPOILER

The places where I can't read with AR7 are:

00:19:751 (8) - Didn't expect this comes 1/2 really, with AR7 it looks very much like 1/1
00:22:095 (1,2,3,4) - The (3,4) especially, I didn't expect 00:22:876 (4,1) to be 1/2
00:59:907 (2,3,4) - Actually this pattern is tricky no matter in what AR imo, even in AR9 I still think that (3,4) is actually 1/4 apart due to (2,3)'s spacing

Also here are the places where I consider a bit worriable:

00:13:345 (5,6,7,8) - I still can read this with AR7, yes, but would be better with 9 ofc
01:16:157 (1,2,3) - This sudden jump is quite shocking while playing because of the new combo usage
01:20:063 (2,3,4,5) - Again I'm somehow worried if you kept AR7 in this pattern, not as hard as 00:13:345 though
01:24:126 (1) - I was definitely expecting a note 1/2 before this orz, I was a bit confused with the rhythm when I played here because you missed the big beat on the downbeat orz (luckily I was still able to catch it)

Ayesha Altugle

3,052 posts

Joined October 2011

Ayesha Altugle 2013-04-25T12:06:39+00:00

can't star

Ayesha Altugle

3,052 posts

Joined October 2011

Ayesha Altugle 2013-04-25T12:10:30+00:00

You cannot make another post so soon after your last.

General and Metadata Inconsistency in Tags:
[Dekaane's Normal] : momochi dakedekaane xinely hinsvar kuro usagi bunny girl asuka you izayoi adaption novel opening -
[Easy] : momochi dakedekaane xinely hinsvar kuro usagi bunny girl asuka you izayoi adaption novel opening -
[Hinely's Hard] : iori nomizu momochi dakedekaane xinely hinsvar kuro usagi bunny girl asuka you izayoi adaption novel opening -
[Mochi] : momochi dakedekaane xinely hinsvar kuro usagi bunny girl asuka you izayoi adaption novel opening

P A N

2,353 posts

Joined December 2011

P A N 2013-04-26T14:00:37+00:00

[Easy]

AR +1 because the BPM is fast
00:27:720 (1) - move center to 408|256
and move 00:28:657 (2) - to 328|256
00:39:907 (3) - I think move to 424|297 is better
00:49:907 (2) - distance error here
01:01:157 (1) - try 25% playback rate. I think this spinner end at 01:02:563 is better.
01:18:970 (2) - move to 296|252
01:19:595 (3) - move to 388|124
01:23:970 (1,2) - what about make it like http://puu.sh/2Hqtl.jpg I think its look good

[Dekaane's Normal]

00:41:782 (2) - move this to 00:41:626 and end at the old time is better
01:01:157 (1) - end at 01:02:563?

[Hinely's Hard]

what about AR -1? I think it's hard for hard.
00:37:876 - add note here. I think its better to follow the music
01:08:970 (1) - move center up 1 grid
*3 option here*
01:17:563 (4) - move to 176|184
or move to 140|240
or fix the distance
----------------------------------------
01:17:720 (5) - move center left 1 grid
01:18:657 (8) - what about 364|176
01:21:470 (1,2,3) - move them down 3 grid to follow the distance of 01:20:845 (2,3)
01:22:251 (4,1) - move both down 3 grid to stack with 01:20:845 (2)
nice diff ><

[Mochi]

AR +1 or 2 please. it's destroy my eye X_X. very slow for that kind of jump and speed...
00:26:782 - what about change the rhymth to http://puu.sh/2Hr93.jpg
00:31:782 (6) - down 1 grid
00:45:610 (7) - delete note is better. try 25% playrate. and it also fun to play
00:46:235 (3) - ^
00:47:095 (7) - NC
00:47:720 (1) - remove NC
00:48:970 (2) - NC
00:49:907 (1) - remove NC
00:50:220 (3) - NC
00:58:188 - add note
01:05:845 (3) - move to 456|304 pleaseeeeeeeeee
01:06:157 (1) - move to 180|208
01:10:220 (6) - copy from 01:08:970 (1) and Ctrl+G. and NC please
01:13:657 (5) - up 2 grid
01:16:313 (2) - move to 168|288
01:18:813 (3) - move to 148|124?
01:23:501 (2) - delete this is better
01:23:970 - add note pleaseeeeeeeee

GOOD LUCK

Last edited by P A N 2013-04-26T15:28:34+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

DakeDekaane

osu! Alumni

3,500 posts

Joined February 2012

DakeDekaane 2013-04-26T14:50:49+00:00

So, here we go again :3
All fixed here: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=KZBhvjKZ

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,804 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2013-04-28T01:56:35+00:00

P A N wrote:
[Hinely's Hard]

what about AR -1? I think it's hard for hard. Nope; the song's BPM is high (192), and AR8 fits the intensity of this diff.
01:08:970 (1) - move center up 1 grid Not sure what are you talking about actually lol, but moved the node here.
*3 option here*
01:21:470 (1,2,3) - move them down 3 grid to follow the distance of 01:20:845 (2,3) Nope; I want to keep the distance spacing on the triangle pattern here.
01:22:251 (4,1) - move both down 3 grid to stack with 01:20:845 (2) ^
nice diff ><

Thanks for modding

lol

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Source:Mondaiji-tachi ga Isekai kara Kuru Sou Desu yo?
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Ayesha Altugle

3,052 posts

Joined October 2011

Ayesha Altugle 2013-05-11T09:55:29+00:00

Hinely's Hard

why title unicode is : Black â€ White?
it should be Black † White as other diffs

that's all

Star Stream

2,037 posts

Joined June 2010

Star Stream 2013-06-22T13:18:42+00:00

From my queue

[General]

Okay

[Easy]

00:12:095 - normal clap
00:17:095 - ^
00:28:657 (2) - don't overlap with 00:28:657 (2) -
00:42:720 - finish and nc
00:52:720 (1) - don't overlap
01:20:220 (4) - no arrow, make it as 2/1 slider

[Normal]

00:59:595 (1) - boring, make it as 1/1 slider or at least don't stack 2 on this
01:01:157 (1) - extend to 01:02:720 -
01:13:188 - kiai end is unsnapped

[Hard]

00:31:782 (1) - weird rhythm, i'd add 2 1/4 circles after 00:31:157 (1) - and a circle on 00:31:938 -
01:07:720 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - terrible anti-jump, even i got confused with them
01:12:251 (1) - remove arrows, add a circle on 01:12:876 - and 1/1 slider from 01:13:188 - and remove 01:13:501 (2,3) -
01:25:688 (1,1) - 2 sliders on here, also i'd just map this part by making a slider from 01:25:376 (4) -

i recommend remapping it to develop it yourselves first

[Mochi]

00:18:657 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - they play terribly, but if you really want to stick this pattern, ctrl+g 00:19:282 (5,6) - then 00:19:438 (6,7) - again
00:21:782 (16,1) - keep go with stream, players may get confused with the rest drum sounds
00:42:720 (1) - ctrl+g, plays better after 7 and makes enjoyable jump with 2
01:01:157 - add a circle here for the finish sound
01:03:032 (2) - ctrl+g
01:17:876 - add notes
01:25:376 (1,1) - make them as a slider

weird, the kiai parts are oviously dynamic than non-kiai parts. but boring than non-kiai parts.. you could make the kiais harder

Good luck then

DakeDekaane

osu! Alumni

3,500 posts

Joined February 2012

DakeDekaane 2013-06-27T02:58:32+00:00

Star Stream wrote:
From my queue

[Normal]
00:59:595 (1) - boring, make it as 1/1 slider or at least don't stack 2 on this /*Made something that follows drums.
01:01:157 (1) - extend to 01:02:720 - /*That spinner matches nicely with vocals
01:13:188 - kiai end is unsnapped /*Fixed

Good luck then

Thanks for modding :3

My update: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=KZBhvjKZ

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,804 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2013-06-27T03:02:57+00:00

Star Stream wrote:
[Hard]
00:31:782 (1) - weird rhythm, i'd add 2 1/4 circles after 00:31:157 (1) - and a circle on 00:31:938 - Changed it to something similar.
01:07:720 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - terrible anti-jump, even i got confused with them ...I don't. Honestly, how can this be terrible?
01:12:251 (1) - remove arrows, add a circle on 01:12:876 - and 1/1 slider from 01:13:188 - and remove 01:13:501 (2,3) - Did things by myself.
01:25:688 (1,1) - 2 sliders on here, also i'd just map this part by making a slider from 01:25:376 (4) - Uh... I'm not sure of what are you talking about; sorry ._.
i recommend remapping it to develop it yourselves first Uh, idk, I think it's already okay the way it is. Might need some improvement, I admit, but not to the point of complete remapping, surely o.o

Thanks for modding.

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osu file format v12

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Artist:Nomizu Iori
ArtistUnicode:野水伊織
Creator:Momochikun
Version:Hinely's Hard
Source:Mondaiji-tachi ga Isekai kara Kuru Sou Desu yo?
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GIDZ

1,002 posts

Joined January 2013

GIDZ 2013-06-28T12:59:03+00:00

Easy:
~I dun see any problems here 0.o

Normal:
~Is it just me or is there no video?
~I dun see any problems here either 0.o

Hard:
~No video?
~01:08:345 - These notes dun look like 1/2 beats,try to seperate them more.
~01:13:501 - Streams like these are too fast for hard diff.
~Nice mapping

Mochi:
~00:15:376 - Remove triplets,I think this sounds better for an intro --> http://puu.sh/3qh7l.jpg
~Very nice insane

I know it's not much but it was good! So good luck getting it ranked!

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2013-06-28T20:30:13+00:00

I don't know about you

But I'd do the pink haired chick so hard

OVERALL:
Add either clap hitsounds or hitnormals on every count 2 and 4, so it matches the drums and all. (When it's fitting, of course. If there's no drums then don't put it lol)

Insane:
00:11:938 (4) - It seems weird to suddenly shorten the spacing like this when the music hasn't really changed.
00:14:438 (2) - Flip vertically?
00:16:470 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Idunno like usually I never suggest to add jumps but I feel it'd be fitting for this part. Especially since you (kind of) implied that pattern in the beginning for that part.
00:42:720 (1,2) - It might be better to follow the lyrics for this part.
00:52:876 (2) - ^
01:23:970 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Idunno it's a bit weird how you decide to put jumps for the snare hit but you didn't jump the part that I would imagine to make a pretty fun pattern.

Hard:
So like this name is totally misleading. Something like "Collab Hard" would make more sense.
Since I'm assuming that it's made by Hinely
and it's not
Also the video doesn't show up in this diff.
00:31:157 (1) - Why is there a slowdown here? Like I know it's a long note but the music doesn't really change.
01:00:688 (3) - CTRL + G to make this flow better?

Hard Storyboard:
01:03:970 - Why does the name just kinda pop out he's like PEW PEW PEW and it doesn't even fit with the music.
01:25:905 - Why does it pulse again here there is literally nothing.

Normal:
Tick Rate 1?
Video also doesn't work for this diff
00:11:157 (1) - THERE COULD BE A HITSOUND HERE BUT YOU DIDN'T PLEASE DO IT
00:47:095 (1) - This curve is so thin, so it looks kind of wrong.

Easy:
00:28:657 (2,3,4) - Like it's kind of unfitting to have a focus on the 2 and 4 when there's like no drums
00:36:157 (4,5,6) - ^

DakeDekaane

osu! Alumni

3,500 posts

Joined February 2012

DakeDekaane 2013-07-03T04:59:12+00:00

All fixed, thanks CDFA :3
http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=KZBhvjKZ

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,804 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2013-07-03T06:43:20+00:00

Yep, the diff wasn't made by someone named Hinely ofc; but it's a portmanteau of me and Xinely's name, and I think that's okay...

About the video... Mochi, fix this for us please orz

For the slowdown, the music does change and that spot feels slower, so yeah.

Did the Ctrl+G though.

For the first entry on the storyboard, I'm following the vocal lol

And for the second, I think it doesn't matter since it's already fading out anyway o.o

So yeah, that's it; thanks for modding

ahaha.wav

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Momochikun

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Topic Starter

Momochikun 2013-07-03T07:19:31+00:00

@hinsvar : udh gw fix..

Updated

yurunneram

682 posts

Joined January 2012

yurunneram 2013-07-04T10:41:06+00:00

Once I get kudosu for this I'll hit 100 kudosu~ ^^ Better do a good job <3

GENERAL

White isn't a very recommended combo colour o.o since it makes the kiai time rather blinding. If you can, change the colours.

EASY

I think the approach rate should be lower since this is Easy..

00:22:720 (1) - The slider just ended. Have at least a two beat rest for noobs.

00:28:657 (2,3) - Have the same rhythm as 00:26:470 (2,3) for the sake of consistency.

Deekane's NORMAL

00:31:782 (2) - I suggest it to end at 00:32:407 instead and put a stub slider on 00:32:720 (comb with the next note)

Not much here

Hard

01:07:720 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Cool but a little confusing :T

01:11:157 (5) - delete

Zat's all~ ^^

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~

Momochikun

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Momochikun 2013-07-04T15:24:35+00:00

Thanks for mod

Kin

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Joined August 2010

Kin 2013-07-05T09:05:59+00:00

gogo bubble \o

Alarido

1,744 posts

Joined September 2012

Alarido 2013-07-05T15:11:31+00:00

Hi

A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue

Legenda wrote:
→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

* No General issues to point.

♥ [Easy] and [Dekaane's Normal] are nice.

[Hinely's Hard]
♥ Nice diff too.
♥ It's a collab ♥

[Mochi]
00:30:063 (6,7) - These notes feels overmapped, especially (7), because has no sound (in truth, bursty/pulsing sounds) that justify them. Just for the flow, keep the note (6) and delete the (7) please (:
00:47:798 (5) - Felt there is no sound for justify keeping this note.

Aaand that's it ^^

GO GO LET'S RANK this map as soon as possible, dear BATs ♥

And take a Star !

Att.

Momochikun

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Momochikun 2013-07-05T19:49:15+00:00

Thx for mod.. updated

DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 2013-07-06T01:49:45+00:00

Took the suggestion in yurunneram's mod, thanks :3
http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=KZBhvjKZ

Momochikun

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Momochikun 2013-07-08T18:24:38+00:00

Okay updated (again)

MMzz

Elite Mapper

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MMzz 2013-07-09T22:32:23+00:00

[Insane]
00:45:220 (5) - Add a new combo here and remove combo from 00:45:845 (1) - . This combo sequence makes much more sense with the music. You can also NC here too: 00:46:157 (2) - .
01:09:282 (2,3,4) - This triplet is out of place, it should start at the end of 01:08:970 (1) - if you listen to the music. So you can make the 1/4 go off the slider end, or make 1 a sing note then move the triplet back.
01:10:532 (2,3,4) - ^
01:11:782 (2,3,4) - ^

[Hard]
01:25:688 (1,1) - Looks like you have two notes ontop of each other, might want to fix that.

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-07-10T12:12:11+00:00

MMzz wrote:
[Hard]
01:25:688 (1,1) - Looks like you have two notes ontop of each other, might want to fix that. LOL. Fixed.

Momochikun

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Momochikun 2013-07-10T14:14:53+00:00

Fixed all.. thx for mod :v

Azure

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Azure 2013-07-11T08:46:37+00:00

Hello, from popner and Azure's modding

[Hard]

00:15:063 spinner start form 00:14:985 - 00:16:470 end
00:19:907 add note and change spinner start from 00:19:985 - 00:21:782
00:22:720 (1) -clap +finish
00:22:876 (2) -clap
00:41:470 NC
01:00:688 (3) change to this http://puu.sh/3A8Xn.jpg

[Insane]

00:11:470 I think changing Volume to 80% will be better
00:14:907 (3) change this slider to http://puu.sh/3A8vp.jpg flow is better for me
00:18:657 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) use ctrl+shift+D to make it more beautiful

that's all

Exw

931 posts

Joined July 2012

Exw 2013-07-11T13:05:38+00:00

Hello.

[Easy]
00:18:970 (1) - i think you shouldn't put new combo here.
01:12:563 (4,5) - hm http://puu.sh/3AeUK.jpg?

[Dekaane's Normal]
00:41:626 (2) - ctrl + G

[Hinely's Hard]
00:12:720 (6) - new combo
00:41:470 (6) - ^
00:58:813 (4) - http://puu.sh/3Affh.jpg this is not too bad.

[Mochi]
00:11:470 (1) - http://puu.sh/3AftD.jpg?
00:15:376 (4) - put on the end of slider 00:14:907 (3) shouldn't bad. http://puu.sh/3AfvP.jpg

Sorry if my mod sucks.
Thanks.
Good luck.

Momochikun

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Momochikun 2013-07-11T15:30:12+00:00

Fixed.. i'm also remapped some part
Thx for mod

waiting for GD'ers ~

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-07-12T08:36:56+00:00

Azure wrote:
[Hard]
00:15:063 spinner start form 00:14:985 - 00:16:470 end Done.
00:19:907 add note and change spinner start from 00:19:985 - 00:21:782 ^
00:22:720 (1) -clap +finish The instrument here doesn't indicate a need for some finishes.
00:22:876 (2) -clap It already uses a clap...
00:41:470 NC Done.
01:00:688 (3) change to this http://puu.sh/3A8Xn.jpg Will keep this for now; not touching.

Subaru Takamaru wrote:
[Hinely's Hard]
00:12:720 (6) - new combo
00:41:470 (6) - ^
00:58:813 (4) - http://puu.sh/3Affh.jpg this is not too bad.
Did all.

Thanks for modding!

Hard

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Black White.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62729
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 11470,22720,33032,42720,52720,63970,73970,78970,85845
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Black + White (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Black † White
Artist:Nomizu Iori
ArtistUnicode:野水伊織
Creator:Momochikun
Version:Hinely's Hard
Source:Mondaiji-tachi ga Isekai kara Kuru Sou Desu yo?
Tags:momochi dakedekaane xinely hinsvar kuro usagi bunny girl asuka you izayoi adaption novel opening
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pieguyn

2,020 posts

Joined May 2009

pieguyn 2013-07-13T08:50:31+00:00

hi, from my queue

8 pages +82 OTL, hopefully this is helpful

[General]
offset 10220 plz to avoid having notes behind red line

[Easy]
00:18:970 (1) - remove NC? no need to put combo with just 1 note in it
01:20:220 (4) - too far from (3)
01:20:220 (4) - add finish on start to match cymbal

[Dekaane's Normal]
fine

[Hinely's Hard]
00:29:282 (2) - add whistle on both ends? feels weird cause the other ones had more whistles, but on this one, there isn't
01:08:345 .(1,2,3,4) - spacing seems too close, I thought it was a 1/4 stream o.o maybe space it out a bit more?
01:19:595 (2) - add finish on end to match cymbal
01:25:376 (4) - IMO add finish sounds fine here

[Mochi]
01:08:657 (4,1) - not centered? not necessary to change this if you don't want to cause it's not something people will notice, I just randomly saw it when I paused in the editor 0.0
01:15:845 (3) - move it a bit more down to make 01:15:220 (1,2,3) - equidistant?
01:18:032 - pause here sounds weird, try this rhythm http://puu.sh/3BM2W.jpg
01:23:032 (1,2,3) - make it equidistant? just move (2) down a bit

that's it, hope it helps

nice map, good luck ~

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,804 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2013-07-13T12:13:39+00:00

Don't think the first one is necessary, and I'm sure enough they're readable for the second one. Did the third, but for the fourth, there isn't anything in the song that supports the finish.

Thanks for modding!

yeah

osu file format v12

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Momochikun

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Momochikun 2013-07-15T08:55:54+00:00

Updated orz~

sheela

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sheela 2013-07-17T16:57:28+00:00

Hi! From my queue~ Sorry for the late mod

[Mochi]
00:58:345 (2) - Move to 00:58:188 and add a circle at 00:58:657

Sorry if it's just one thing. Good Luck and star!

DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 2013-07-18T21:17:49+00:00

Subaru Takamaru wrote:
[Dekaane's Normal]
00:41:626 (2) - ctrl + G

Sorry for the late orz, but if I do this the spacing will mess up and my pattern too, thanks anyway.

Momochikun

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Momochikun 2013-07-19T11:43:58+00:00

Okay :v

Mismagius

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Mismagius 2013-08-04T03:54:32+00:00

IRC mod log

15:08 *Blue Dragon is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/214394 Nomizu Iori - Black + White (TV Size) [Easy]]
15:09 Momochikun: ~
15:09 Blue Dragon: 00:19:282 (1) - add a finish in this spinner?
15:10 Momochikun: hm.. sounds good, okay
15:10 Blue Dragon: 00:35:220 (3) - add a new combo since you added it on everytime the song did this
15:10 Momochikun: fixed
15:11 Blue Dragon: 00:50:220 (3,4) - spacing is weird here
15:12 Momochikun: oh wait.. it's 1.04 orz.. fixed
15:13 Blue Dragon: 01:00:220 (5) - I think you should make this slider less curved, plays weird now
15:13 Momochikun: changed it to straight maybe ?
15:14 Blue Dragon: ok
15:14 Momochikun: fixed
15:16 Blue Dragon: 01:23:970 (1,2) - rhythm is kinda unpredictable here, maybe do this? http://puu.sh/3SQVz.png
15:17 Momochikun: hmm..
15:18 Blue Dragon: that's all for easy
15:18 Blue Dragon: you gonna fix Normal and Hard yourself?
15:18 Momochikun: okay.. fixed all
15:18 Blue Dragon: do you have mapper's permission?
15:18 Blue Dragon:

15:18 Momochikun: don't worry.. my GD'ers are friendly :V
15:19 Blue Dragon: okay then
15:19 Momochikun: or you want to irc them ? the normal GD is online right now
15:19 Blue Dragon: yeah, better
15:19 Momochikun: DakeDekaane
15:22 Blue Dragon: well, he can't check
15:22 Momochikun: orz.. my bad
15:22 Blue Dragon: I'm talking to him
15:23 Blue Dragon: if you can change things in his diff
15:23 Blue Dragon: just asked
15:23 Momochikun: ok
15:23 Blue Dragon: okay, he agreed
15:24 Momochikun: nice
15:24 Blue Dragon: 00:58:970 (3) -
15:24 Blue Dragon: move the second point of this slider to x:88 y:88
15:24 Blue Dragon: flows better with previous/next note
15:25 Momochikun: fixed
15:27 Blue Dragon: 01:16:938 (2) - add a sliderpoint on x116 y200?
15:27 Blue Dragon: less linear
15:27 Momochikun: did you mean remake this slider ?
15:30 Momochikun: oh i got it.. fixed
15:31 Blue Dragon: oh sorry
15:31 Blue Dragon: osu! didn't send me notification PM
15:31 Momochikun: nvm
15:33 Blue Dragon: okay
15:33 Blue Dragon: did you fix it?
15:33 Blue Dragon: or didn't understand
15:33 Blue Dragon: :p
15:34 Momochikun: fixed..
15:34 Blue Dragon: ok
15:34 Blue Dragon: about hard
15:34 Blue Dragon: Xinely isn't online..
15:34 Momochikun: i've got the permissions earlier..
15:34 Blue Dragon: oh
15:35 Momochikun: All hard diff on my mapset is made by her anyway
15:35 Blue Dragon: 00:18:657 (6) -
15:35 Blue Dragon: select this note then hold shift
15:35 Blue Dragon: to align it perfectly with 5
15:35 Blue Dragon: if you didn't understand, you can just move it to x385 y308
15:36 Momochikun: i know..
15:36 Blue Dragon: oh sorry
15:36 Blue Dragon: xD
15:37 Momochikun: sry for being stupid-look :V
15:37 Blue Dragon: lol, no
15:37 Blue Dragon: it's just that often people don't know about this
15:37 Momochikun: haha
15:37 Blue Dragon: it took me like 3 years of mapping
15:37 Blue Dragon: to find it out
15:37 Momochikun: i'm new to the mapping world.. you know OwO
15:38 Blue Dragon: your insane is awesom
15:38 Blue Dragon: awesome*
15:38 Blue Dragon: especially for a new mapper
15:38 Momochikun: thanks ^^
15:42 Momochikun: hmm ?
15:42 Blue Dragon: checking currently
15:42 Blue Dragon: hard
15:42 Blue Dragon: 01:07:720 (1,2,1,2,3,4) -
15:42 Blue Dragon: i have a problem with this
15:42 Blue Dragon: but hinsvar says in the thread
15:42 Blue Dragon: he won't change it
15:42 Momochikun: the anti jump huh ?
15:42 Blue Dragon: yes
15:43 Momochikun: if he says he won't change it.. i can't help it
15:44 Momochikun: i'll talk to him later.. maybe
15:46 Blue Dragon: well yeah, tell me when he's online
15:46 Blue Dragon: i will talk to him directly
15:46 Blue Dragon: anyways, nothing else in this diff
15:46 Blue Dragon: moving to insane
15:46 Momochikun: okay
15:47 *Blue Dragon is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/218021 Nomizu Iori - Black + White (TV Size) [Mochi]]
15:47 Blue Dragon: 00:28:032 (3) - looks better like this http://puu.sh/3SS7X.png
15:48 Momochikun: hmmm
15:48 Momochikun: okay fixed
15:48 Momochikun: i just assume change the slider into U letter
15:48 Blue Dragon: it usually flows good but
15:49 Blue Dragon: not in this case
15:49 Momochikun: yeah
15:50 Blue Dragon: 00:35:532 (2,3) -
15:50 Blue Dragon: spacing, wtf?
15:50 Blue Dragon: xD
15:50 Momochikun: orz.. wrong spacing, fixed
15:51 Blue Dragon: hmmm, nothing else
15:52 Momochikun: hm.. yes ?
15:52 Blue Dragon: wait
15:52 Blue Dragon: i'm gonna check with other BATs
15:52 Blue Dragon: if stuff in hinsvar's diff is fine
15:52 Momochikun: okay
15:55 Blue Dragon: yeah, definitely must be changed
15:55 Momochikun: orz
15:56 Blue Dragon: i'll talk to him when he's online
15:56 Blue Dragon: for now i'll savelog
15:56 Blue Dragon: update and i'll recheck later

stuff in Hinely's Hard is fixed, so this is ready for a bubble~

good luck!

Momochikun

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Momochikun 2013-08-04T03:57:41+00:00

Thanks Blue Dragon <3 ~

DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 2013-08-04T04:06:52+00:00

yay \o/

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