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Nomizu Iori - Black + White (TV Size)

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Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
I don't know about you

But I'd do the pink haired chick so hard

OVERALL:
Add either clap hitsounds or hitnormals on every count 2 and 4, so it matches the drums and all. (When it's fitting, of course. If there's no drums then don't put it lol)

Insane:
00:11:938 (4) - It seems weird to suddenly shorten the spacing like this when the music hasn't really changed.
00:14:438 (2) - Flip vertically?
00:16:470 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Idunno like usually I never suggest to add jumps but I feel it'd be fitting for this part. Especially since you (kind of) implied that pattern in the beginning for that part.
00:42:720 (1,2) - It might be better to follow the lyrics for this part.
00:52:876 (2) - ^
01:23:970 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Idunno it's a bit weird how you decide to put jumps for the snare hit but you didn't jump the part that I would imagine to make a pretty fun pattern.

Hard:
So like this name is totally misleading. Something like "Collab Hard" would make more sense.
Since I'm assuming that it's made by Hinely
and it's not
Also the video doesn't show up in this diff.
00:31:157 (1) - Why is there a slowdown here? Like I know it's a long note but the music doesn't really change.
01:00:688 (3) - CTRL + G to make this flow better?

Hard Storyboard:
01:03:970 - Why does the name just kinda pop out he's like PEW PEW PEW and it doesn't even fit with the music.
01:25:905 - Why does it pulse again here there is literally nothing.

Normal:
Tick Rate 1?
Video also doesn't work for this diff
00:11:157 (1) - THERE COULD BE A HITSOUND HERE BUT YOU DIDN'T PLEASE DO IT
00:47:095 (1) - This curve is so thin, so it looks kind of wrong.

Easy:
00:28:657 (2,3,4) - Like it's kind of unfitting to have a focus on the 2 and 4 when there's like no drums
00:36:157 (4,5,6) - ^
DakeDekaane
osu! Alumni
3,500 posts
Joined February 2012
DakeDekaane
All fixed, thanks CDFA :3
http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=KZBhvjKZ
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,804 posts
Joined December 2011
Hinsvar
Yep, the diff wasn't made by someone named Hinely ofc; but it's a portmanteau of me and Xinely's name, and I think that's okay...

About the video... Mochi, fix this for us please orz

For the slowdown, the music does change and that spot feels slower, so yeah.

Did the Ctrl+G though.

For the first entry on the storyboard, I'm following the vocal lol

And for the second, I think it doesn't matter since it's already fading out anyway o.o

So yeah, that's it; thanks for modding :D

ahaha.wav
osu file format v12

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Artist:Nomizu Iori
ArtistUnicode:野水伊織
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Source:Mondaiji-tachi ga Isekai kara Kuru Sou Desu yo?
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Momochikun
1,944 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Momochikun
@hinsvar : udh gw fix..

Updated :D
yurunneram
682 posts
Joined January 2012
yurunneram
Once I get kudosu for this I'll hit 100 kudosu~ ^^ Better do a good job <3

GENERAL

White isn't a very recommended combo colour o.o since it makes the kiai time rather blinding. If you can, change the colours.

EASY

I think the approach rate should be lower since this is Easy..

00:22:720 (1) - The slider just ended. Have at least a two beat rest for noobs.

00:28:657 (2,3) - Have the same rhythm as 00:26:470 (2,3) for the sake of consistency.

Deekane's NORMAL

00:31:782 (2) - I suggest it to end at 00:32:407 instead and put a stub slider on 00:32:720 (comb with the next note)

Not much here

Hard

01:07:720 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Cool but a little confusing :T

01:11:157 (5) - delete

Zat's all~ ^^

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~
Momochikun
1,944 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Momochikun
Thanks for mod :D
Kin
2,622 posts
Joined August 2010
Kin
gogo bubble \o
Alarido
1,744 posts
Joined September 2012
Alarido
Hi :)
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue

Legenda wrote:

:!: → Unrankable things, must fix
:?: → My human doubts, things to consider
:idea: → Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
* No General issues to point.

♥ [Easy] and [Dekaane's Normal] are nice.

[Hinely's Hard]
♥ Nice diff too.
♥ It's a collab ♥

[Mochi]
00:30:063 (6,7) - These notes feels overmapped, especially (7), because has no sound (in truth, bursty/pulsing sounds) that justify them. Just for the flow, keep the note (6) and delete the (7) please (:
00:47:798 (5) - Felt there is no sound for justify keeping this note.

Aaand that's it ^^

GO GO LET'S RANK this map as soon as possible, dear BATs ♥

And take a Star !

Att.
Momochikun
1,944 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Momochikun
Thx for mod.. updated :D
DakeDekaane
osu! Alumni
3,500 posts
Joined February 2012
DakeDekaane
Took the suggestion in yurunneram's mod, thanks :3
http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=KZBhvjKZ
Momochikun
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Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Momochikun
Okay updated (again) :D
MMzz
Elite Mapper
3,979 posts
Joined June 2009
MMzz
[Insane]
00:45:220 (5) - Add a new combo here and remove combo from 00:45:845 (1) - . This combo sequence makes much more sense with the music. You can also NC here too: 00:46:157 (2) - .
01:09:282 (2,3,4) - This triplet is out of place, it should start at the end of 01:08:970 (1) - if you listen to the music. So you can make the 1/4 go off the slider end, or make 1 a sing note then move the triplet back.
01:10:532 (2,3,4) - ^
01:11:782 (2,3,4) - ^

[Hard]
01:25:688 (1,1) - Looks like you have two notes ontop of each other, might want to fix that.
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
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Joined December 2011
Hinsvar

MMzz wrote:

[Hard]
01:25:688 (1,1) - Looks like you have two notes ontop of each other, might want to fix that. LOL. Fixed.
Momochikun
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Topic Starter
Momochikun
Fixed all.. thx for mod :v
Azure
771 posts
Joined November 2010
Azure
Hello, from popner and Azure's modding

[Hard]
  1. 00:15:063 spinner start form 00:14:985 - 00:16:470 end
  2. 00:19:907 add note and change spinner start from 00:19:985 - 00:21:782
  3. 00:22:720 (1) -clap +finish
    00:22:876 (2) -clap
  4. 00:41:470 NC
  5. 01:00:688 (3) change to this http://puu.sh/3A8Xn.jpg
[Insane]
  1. 00:11:470 I think changing Volume to 80% will be better
  2. 00:14:907 (3) change this slider to http://puu.sh/3A8vp.jpg flow is better for me
  3. 00:18:657 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) use ctrl+shift+D to make it more beautiful
that's all
Exw
931 posts
Joined July 2012
Exw
Hello.

[Easy]
00:18:970 (1) - i think you shouldn't put new combo here.
01:12:563 (4,5) - hm http://puu.sh/3AeUK.jpg?

[Dekaane's Normal]
00:41:626 (2) - ctrl + G

[Hinely's Hard]
00:12:720 (6) - new combo
00:41:470 (6) - ^
00:58:813 (4) - http://puu.sh/3Affh.jpg this is not too bad.

[Mochi]
00:11:470 (1) - http://puu.sh/3AftD.jpg?
00:15:376 (4) - put on the end of slider 00:14:907 (3) shouldn't bad. http://puu.sh/3AfvP.jpg

Sorry if my mod sucks.
Thanks.
Good luck.
Momochikun
1,944 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Momochikun
Fixed.. i'm also remapped some part
Thx for mod :D
waiting for GD'ers ~
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
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Hinsvar

Azure wrote:

[Hard]
  1. 00:15:063 spinner start form 00:14:985 - 00:16:470 end Done.
  2. 00:19:907 add note and change spinner start from 00:19:985 - 00:21:782 ^
  3. 00:22:720 (1) -clap +finish The instrument here doesn't indicate a need for some finishes.
    00:22:876 (2) -clap It already uses a clap...
  4. 00:41:470 NC Done.
  5. 01:00:688 (3) change to this http://puu.sh/3A8Xn.jpg Will keep this for now; not touching.

Subaru Takamaru wrote:

[Hinely's Hard]
00:12:720 (6) - new combo
00:41:470 (6) - ^
00:58:813 (4) - http://puu.sh/3Affh.jpg this is not too bad.
Did all.
Thanks for modding! :D

Hard
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pieguyn
2,020 posts
Joined May 2009
pieguyn
hi, from my queue :D
8 pages +82 OTL, hopefully this is helpful

[General]
offset 10220 plz to avoid having notes behind red line

[Easy]
00:18:970 (1) - remove NC? no need to put combo with just 1 note in it
01:20:220 (4) - too far from (3)
01:20:220 (4) - add finish on start to match cymbal

[Dekaane's Normal]
fine

[Hinely's Hard]
00:29:282 (2) - add whistle on both ends? feels weird cause the other ones had more whistles, but on this one, there isn't
01:08:345 .(1,2,3,4) - spacing seems too close, I thought it was a 1/4 stream o.o maybe space it out a bit more?
01:19:595 (2) - add finish on end to match cymbal
01:25:376 (4) - IMO add finish sounds fine here

[Mochi]
01:08:657 (4,1) - not centered? not necessary to change this if you don't want to cause it's not something people will notice, I just randomly saw it when I paused in the editor 0.0
01:15:845 (3) - move it a bit more down to make 01:15:220 (1,2,3) - equidistant?
01:18:032 - pause here sounds weird, try this rhythm http://puu.sh/3BM2W.jpg
01:23:032 (1,2,3) - make it equidistant? just move (2) down a bit

that's it, hope it helps :D
nice map, good luck ~
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,804 posts
Joined December 2011
Hinsvar
Don't think the first one is necessary, and I'm sure enough they're readable for the second one. Did the third, but for the fourth, there isn't anything in the song that supports the finish.

Thanks for modding! :D

yeah
osu file format v12

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Momochikun
1,944 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Momochikun
Updated orz~
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
sheela
Hi! From my queue~ Sorry for the late mod

[Mochi]
00:58:345 (2) - Move to 00:58:188 and add a circle at 00:58:657

Sorry if it's just one thing. Good Luck and star!
DakeDekaane
osu! Alumni
3,500 posts
Joined February 2012
DakeDekaane

Subaru Takamaru wrote:

[Dekaane's Normal]
00:41:626 (2) - ctrl + G
Sorry for the late orz, but if I do this the spacing will mess up and my pattern too, thanks anyway.
Momochikun
1,944 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Momochikun
Okay :v
Mismagius
9,268 posts
Joined July 2008
Mismagius
IRC mod log
15:08 *Blue Dragon is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/214394 Nomizu Iori - Black + White (TV Size) [Easy]]
15:09 Momochikun: ~
15:09 Blue Dragon: 00:19:282 (1) - add a finish in this spinner?
15:10 Momochikun: hm.. sounds good, okay
15:10 Blue Dragon: 00:35:220 (3) - add a new combo since you added it on everytime the song did this
15:10 Momochikun: fixed
15:11 Blue Dragon: 00:50:220 (3,4) - spacing is weird here
15:12 Momochikun: oh wait.. it's 1.04 orz.. fixed
15:13 Blue Dragon: 01:00:220 (5) - I think you should make this slider less curved, plays weird now
15:13 Momochikun: changed it to straight maybe ?
15:14 Blue Dragon: ok
15:14 Momochikun: fixed
15:16 Blue Dragon: 01:23:970 (1,2) - rhythm is kinda unpredictable here, maybe do this? http://puu.sh/3SQVz.png
15:17 Momochikun: hmm..
15:18 Blue Dragon: that's all for easy
15:18 Blue Dragon: you gonna fix Normal and Hard yourself?
15:18 Momochikun: okay.. fixed all
15:18 Blue Dragon: do you have mapper's permission?
15:18 Blue Dragon: :o
15:18 Momochikun: don't worry.. my GD'ers are friendly :V
15:19 Blue Dragon: okay then
15:19 Momochikun: or you want to irc them ? the normal GD is online right now
15:19 Blue Dragon: yeah, better
15:19 Momochikun: DakeDekaane
15:22 Blue Dragon: well, he can't check
15:22 Momochikun: orz.. my bad
15:22 Blue Dragon: I'm talking to him
15:23 Blue Dragon: if you can change things in his diff
15:23 Blue Dragon: just asked
15:23 Momochikun: ok
15:23 Blue Dragon: okay, he agreed
15:24 Momochikun: nice
15:24 Blue Dragon: 00:58:970 (3) -
15:24 Blue Dragon: move the second point of this slider to x:88 y:88
15:24 Blue Dragon: flows better with previous/next note
15:25 Momochikun: fixed
15:27 Blue Dragon: 01:16:938 (2) - add a sliderpoint on x116 y200?
15:27 Blue Dragon: less linear
15:27 Momochikun: did you mean remake this slider ?
15:30 Momochikun: oh i got it.. fixed
15:31 Blue Dragon: oh sorry
15:31 Blue Dragon: osu! didn't send me notification PM
15:31 Momochikun: nvm
15:33 Blue Dragon: okay
15:33 Blue Dragon: did you fix it?
15:33 Blue Dragon: or didn't understand
15:33 Blue Dragon: :p
15:34 Momochikun: fixed..
15:34 Blue Dragon: ok
15:34 Blue Dragon: about hard
15:34 Blue Dragon: Xinely isn't online..
15:34 Momochikun: i've got the permissions earlier..
15:34 Blue Dragon: oh
15:35 Momochikun: All hard diff on my mapset is made by her anyway
15:35 Blue Dragon: 00:18:657 (6) -
15:35 Blue Dragon: select this note then hold shift
15:35 Blue Dragon: to align it perfectly with 5
15:35 Blue Dragon: if you didn't understand, you can just move it to x385 y308
15:36 Momochikun: i know..
15:36 Blue Dragon: oh sorry
15:36 Blue Dragon: xD
15:37 Momochikun: sry for being stupid-look :V
15:37 Blue Dragon: lol, no
15:37 Blue Dragon: it's just that often people don't know about this
15:37 Momochikun: haha
15:37 Blue Dragon: it took me like 3 years of mapping
15:37 Blue Dragon: to find it out
15:37 Momochikun: i'm new to the mapping world.. you know OwO
15:38 Blue Dragon: your insane is awesom
15:38 Blue Dragon: awesome*
15:38 Blue Dragon: especially for a new mapper
15:38 Momochikun: thanks ^^
15:42 Momochikun: hmm ?
15:42 Blue Dragon: checking currently
15:42 Blue Dragon: hard
15:42 Blue Dragon: 01:07:720 (1,2,1,2,3,4) -
15:42 Blue Dragon: i have a problem with this
15:42 Blue Dragon: but hinsvar says in the thread
15:42 Blue Dragon: he won't change it
15:42 Momochikun: the anti jump huh ?
15:42 Blue Dragon: yes
15:43 Momochikun: if he says he won't change it.. i can't help it
15:44 Momochikun: i'll talk to him later.. maybe
15:46 Blue Dragon: well yeah, tell me when he's online
15:46 Blue Dragon: i will talk to him directly
15:46 Blue Dragon: anyways, nothing else in this diff
15:46 Blue Dragon: moving to insane
15:46 Momochikun: okay
15:47 *Blue Dragon is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/218021 Nomizu Iori - Black + White (TV Size) [Mochi]]
15:47 Blue Dragon: 00:28:032 (3) - looks better like this http://puu.sh/3SS7X.png
15:48 Momochikun: hmmm
15:48 Momochikun: okay fixed
15:48 Momochikun: i just assume change the slider into U letter
15:48 Blue Dragon: it usually flows good but
15:49 Blue Dragon: not in this case
15:49 Momochikun: yeah
15:50 Blue Dragon: 00:35:532 (2,3) -
15:50 Blue Dragon: spacing, wtf?
15:50 Blue Dragon: xD
15:50 Momochikun: orz.. wrong spacing, fixed
15:51 Blue Dragon: hmmm, nothing else
15:52 Momochikun: hm.. yes ?
15:52 Blue Dragon: wait
15:52 Blue Dragon: i'm gonna check with other BATs
15:52 Blue Dragon: if stuff in hinsvar's diff is fine
15:52 Momochikun: okay
15:55 Blue Dragon: yeah, definitely must be changed
15:55 Momochikun: orz
15:56 Blue Dragon: i'll talk to him when he's online
15:56 Blue Dragon: for now i'll savelog
15:56 Blue Dragon: update and i'll recheck later

stuff in Hinely's Hard is fixed, so this is ready for a bubble~

good luck!
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Thanks Blue Dragon <3 ~
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yay \o/
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oh... i remember modding this map long time ago... nice that is bubbled... go for rank now \:D/
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you are pro than me. Let 2nd ranked :o
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finally! i remember how you rejected my gd. xDDD
go for rank now :D
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Let see This will ranked by Fasut. Let believe me maybe ^^"

EDIT : @@. Wrong wrong. Sorry~ :?
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Faust
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Nope.
Nymph
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[Hard]
01:25:688 (1) - I would suggest to change this slider to a note, or at least silence the end of the slider, it would fit the music better imo

nothing else.
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Nymph wrote:

[Hard]
01:25:688 (1) - I would suggest to change this slider to a note, or at least silence the end of the slider, it would fit the music better imo

nothing else.
Nah, sorry, but there is actually some sort of sound from an instrument. I won't map that (and even speed up the slider) if I didn't hear anything there. In fact, I feel unfomfortable leaving that unmapped lol

Feel free to counter my opinion though if you think that really needs to be changed :D
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it's ok. take this.
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Thanks a lot ~ <3
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nice ! Gratz !
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CDFA wrote:

finally, gratz mochi
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Congratz!~ ^^. Pro than me :o
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RAAANKEEEOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOUUUUU ^^

Congratz Momochikun, DakeDekaane, Xineli & Hinsvar ^^

Thanks BD & Nymph ^.^

Que legaaaal ^.^
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Ranked on the same day, yay :D Nymph, we love you

gz gz ~
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Congratulations everyone <:
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gratz! :D
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Gratz!!! Mochi-Mochi!!!
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Thanks everyone ~ :)
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gratz! \:D/
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Congrats~ Momochi :)
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Congrats (:
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grats~ :)
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10nya bumped this thread..
anyway, thanks everyone ~ xD
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