1. Hard (4.3 stars, 240 notes)
2. n y a's Normal (1.93 stars, 144 notes)

mathi747 wrote:

Hi Gloria,
Saw this beautiful song in #Modreqs.

All suggestions

General

Nothing to say maybe add sana to the tags and not really important but make the bg ~500 kb
Love the hitsounds sorry need to say it

Normal

01:03:263 (3,4) - and 01:05:930 (3,4) - those sliders plays bad imo, maybe finish them in the red tick or add a reverse arrow in 01:03:263 (3,3) - I'll keep mine, I'll change it if there's a lot of dislike at this part =w=)b
01:46:596 (3) - i would like this slider like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650243 plays better for me, but its just my opinion I'll keep mine, it'll make variety of this song part
02:19:263 (3) - i dont think this slider need to be curvy for variety ;;n;;
02:20:096 (1) - end it at 02:26:596 - like in hard changed

The song make me cry T.T but still beautiful!
Im a newbie at modding hope it was useful, good luck with the rank and sorry if you dont underestand something, ask me ingame
Have my star!

scanter wrote:

Hi ~ accepted mod request sorry my poor English & mod quality

[General]
I think, this song's end has different bpm. sounds are not fit each ticks.
노래 끝 부분에 변속이 있는거 같아요. 틱에 소리가 안 맞음.

[n y a's Normal]
00:18:886 - How about makes turn down volume at 5%? ok
00:38:596 (3) - Move to x:212, y:130. not perfect stacked. my netbook not allowed me to move this into y130 idk why ;w;
00:40:596 (4) - Change auto Addition and add whistle. ok, also lowing the volume to 40%
00:50:596 (4) - Clear whistle. ok
01:04:596 (5) - Is it intentionally unstacked? unless, how about move to x:256, y:208? I keep current one
01:04:596 (5,5) - How about add whistles on? how can I forget this added!
01:22:596 (2) - Add whistle on slider's end. added
01:29:263 (1) - Add clap on slider's end. added
01:39:263 (2) - Add whistle. added
01:49:263 (2) - Move to x:41, y:26. not perfect stacked. changed
02:09:263 (1,2,3,4,5) - How about makes more pentagonal? can I req the code?
02:26:596 - I think, volume 20% a little big. so, I recommend turn down 5% ok

Moway wrote:

Hello M4M from your queue.

[General]

I don't know this game so I don't know if the music is character specific, but a smiling character in the background doesn't really fit the music to me XD

[nya's Normal]
00:29:930 (4) - nazi, but make this symmetrical changed
00:38:596 (3) - nazi again, but this is slightly off a perfect stack with 00:35:930 (1). can I req the code?
00:51:263 (5,1,2,3) - Don't know if like these stacking on the easiest difficulty. I keep mine
01:02:596 (1,2,3,4) - I think this part is a bit cluttered to read. I'd prefer if you unstacked (1,2) and didn't stack 4 on any of those and I think it would look better.
01:05:263 (1,2,3,4) - ^ I'll keep current
01:09:930 (4) - I'd say either just make this a circle or add a repeat to it. If you add a repeat you follow the music better, if you add a circle you make this more straightforward.
01:12:596 (2) - ^ I'll keep current sorry
01:23:930 (1) - move this to (344,196) so that it is the same distance from the middle as 01:21:930 (1) for better symmetry.
01:26:596 (3) - then adjust this to match that changed
01:49:930 (3) - make this so it is not overlapped by 01:47:930 (1) ok
02:09:263 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe clean this up into a perfect pentagon?can I req the code?

[Hard]

00:16:220 (4) - a 1/8 repeating slider fits better here with 4 repeats fix
01:15:929 (3,4,5) - these don't blanket (4) perfectly, if you go to 01:16:513 - you can see that (3) and (5) aren't perfectly blanketing it, so maybe fix that.
01:01:930 - maybe have 01:01:263 (4) no repeat then add a 1/1 slider here and delete 01:02:596 (1) so that it is consistent. no change

• • Set the same timing on both difficulties.
  • This song is very relaxing and kiai doesn't fit it at all, remove it. (or just add some kiai fountains)
  • Try to use these combo colors, they fit better with your BG:
  
  SPOILER

  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 168,138,255
  Combo2 : 138,255,197

• • 00:10:886 (1,2,3) - Try this spacing:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:16:220 (1) - Delete this spinner then start a slider here and end it at 00:16:553.
  • 00:38:596 (3) - Stack the start of this slider perfectly under the end of the previous one.
  • 00:41:263 (1) - Flip this slider vertically and move it at x:212 y:88.
  • 01:03:263 (3,4) - End these slider 1/4 later, there are only 6 1/4 sliders and I don't really understand why you added them, I mean they follow the music but you should keep using 1/2 sliders. (or use them not only in this part of the song)
  • 01:23:930 (1) - Try this spacing:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:34:596 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:47:930 (1) - Flip this slider vertically and move it at x:212 y:52.
  • 02:09:263 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern can be improved, try to make it like this:
  
  SPOILER

  

• • 00:48:596 (5,6) - Convert these circles into a slider.
  • 00:53:263 (4,5) - ^
  • 00:59:263 (5,6) - ^
  • 01:39:930 (1) - End this spinner 1/1 earlier then add a circle at 01:44:596.
  • 01:57:930 (6,1) - Why this jump? Keep the spacing consistent.
  • 02:04:596 (3,4) - Same thing here, jumps look horrible with this song, try to keep always the same spacing.
  • 02:09:263 (1,2,3,4,5) - You know what to do, also don't focus too much on which pattern you want to do, listen the song and try to understand which pattern fits better with the current melody.
  • 02:14:596 (1,2,3,4) - ^

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
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General

• • Set the same timing on both difficulties.
  • This song is very relaxing and kiai doesn't fit it at all, remove it. (or just add some kiai fountains)
  • Try to use these combo colors, they fit better with your BG:
  
  SPOILER

  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 168,138,255
  Combo2 : 138,255,197

I'll leave this to Gloria-kun c:

n y a's Normal

• • 00:10:886 (1,2,3) - Try this spacing:
  
  SPOILER

  
  
  somehow fixed
  • 00:16:220 (1) - Delete this spinner then start a slider here and end it at 00:16:553.
  ok
  • 00:38:596 (3) - Stack the start of this slider perfectly under the end of the previous one.
  done
  • 00:41:263 (1) - Flip this slider vertically and move it at x:212 y:88.
  done and moved to x200 y88 cause if I put it at x212 next note would be 0.90
  • 01:03:263 (3,4) - End these slider 1/4 later, there are only 6 1/4 sliders and I don't really understand why you added them, I mean they follow the music but you should keep using 1/2 sliders. (or use them not only in this part of the song)
  ..somehow fixed
  • 01:23:930 (1) - Try this spacing:
  
  SPOILER

  
  done
  • 01:34:596 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
  
  SPOILER

  
  done
  • 01:47:930 (1) - Flip this slider vertically and move it at x:212 y:52.
  somehow fixed
  • 02:09:263 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern can be improved, try to make it like this:
  
  SPOILER

  

I'll keep current sorry><

Get a few more mods and call me again for a recheck.

Hard

• • 00:48:596 (5,6) - Convert these circles into a slider.
  • 00:53:263 (4,5) - ^
  • 00:59:263 (5,6) - ^
  • 01:39:930 (1) - End this spinner 1/1 earlier then add a circle at 01:44:596.
  • 01:57:930 (6,1) - Why this jump? Keep the spacing consistent.
  • 02:04:596 (3,4) - Same thing here, jumps look horrible with this song, try to keep always the same spacing.
  • 02:09:263 (1,2,3,4,5) - You know what to do, also don't focus too much on which pattern you want to do, listen the song and try to understand which pattern fits better with the current melody.
  • 02:14:596 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Hard:

00:04:220 (3) - 끝의 사운드 5%로 하세요. ok
00:09:553 (3) - ^ ok
00:26:930 (6) - 1칸 오른쪽? ok
00:43:263 (5) - 노트로 바꾸는게 나을듯. 그대로 슬라 하실거면 끝의 휘슬 제거 ok
00:48:930 (6) - 휘슬 제거 ok
00:53:930 (6) - ^ ok
00:59:596 (6) - ^ ok
01:21:930 (2,3) - 좀 먼데 어울리나 모르겠네요 한번더 언급되면 수정할게요
01:57:930 (6,1) - 별로 좋은 점프는 아닌듯요. 일단 좀 좁히는 걸로,, ok
02:07:930 (3) - 끝 휘슬 제거? ok
02:13:263 (5) - ^? ok
02:18:596 (5) - 리버스 제거가 나을듯요 ok

• i don't like Kai should i have a little comments
  if's me
  01:02:596 - start Kiai
  01:21:263 - end
  01:23:930 - start
  01:45:263 - end

1. in two diff, if you change the code like here
   

   //Background and Video events
   0,0,"b1.png",1,1

   To
   

   //Background and Video events
   0,0,"b1.png",0,0

   will bette, it is not the problem big

1. 00:40:596 (6) - it can better
   
   IMG

   
2. 01:03:930 (5) -model not good with 01:02:596 (1) -

1. i want CS + 1
2. 01:09:930 (4) - why it as so
   
   IMG

   
   try make it better, i think is add a note
3. 01:12:596 (2) - same ^
4. 01:49:263 (2) - 02:13:263 (2) - can hard for player

Zejky wrote:

Hi Gloria chan~~~~
i like songs, and i have a little support XD
[Garenal]

• i don't like Kai should i have a little comments
  if's me
  01:02:596 - start Kiai
  01:21:263 - end
  01:23:930 - start
  01:45:263 - end I know remove kiai time

1. in two diff, if you change the code like here
   

   //Background and Video events
   0,0,"b1.png",1,1

   To
   

   //Background and Video events
   0,0,"b1.png",0,0

   will bette, it is not the problem big

[Hard]

1. 00:40:596 (6) - it can better No
   
   IMG

   
2. 01:03:930 (5) -model not good with 01:02:596 (1) - No

Sonnyc wrote:

n y a's Normal:

00:59:596 (3) - Imo, deleting will be better ok
01:12:596 (2) - Moving to 01:12:263 will be better. ok
01:25:930 (2) - Whistle ok
01:43:596 (4) - 1 Grid left ok
01:47:930 (1,2) - Not quite sure if this kind of pattern is allowed in normal. Make them something like 01:53:263 (1,2) moved
02:10:263 (4) - Spacing ok

Zejky wrote:

[n y a's Normal]

1. i want CS + 1 current one is ok
2. 01:09:930 (4) - why it as so
   
   IMG

   
   try make it better, i think is add a note somehow fixed
3. 01:12:596 (2) - same ^
4. 01:49:263 (2) - 02:13:263 (2) - can hard for player this is normal diff when added double time it'll be 135 bpm and for me its ok for current one, since the star rating is low :3