Hi.
Title: "Junsuina Aijou"
Both difficulties lack a preview point, by the way. And I'd recommend adding more audio lead-in.
n y a's Normal:
Good placement of those anti-jumps. Just some small suggestions for touching up.
- 01:03:263 (3) - Don't really understand why having slider points would make much of a difference when they're already this stubby.
The angle at which it points towards also makes the one at - 01:03:930 (4) - look out of direction
- 01:05:930 (3,4) - Identical to above. Try this?
- 01:08:263 (2) - Seems kinda bumpy. Move it up maybe 4 grids ?
- 01:30:596 (3,1) - Here's my suggestion:
- 01:58:596 (1) - Why not have the slider-end point straight to the next note ?
- 02:01:263 - Onwards. You don't really need a break here.
Hard:
- 00:16:220 (4) - You're missing 1 more repeat for this.
- 01:17:263 (5) - Shift this 1 grid right.
- 02:18:596 (5) - Hmm, try having a repeat, then start the spinner at - 02:20:013 (1) - (1/8 snapping)
That's about it. Try to acquire more SP for this in the meantime. (More modding is definitely welcome, in any case)
Title: "Junsuina Aijou"
Both difficulties lack a preview point, by the way. And I'd recommend adding more audio lead-in.
n y a's Normal:
Good placement of those anti-jumps. Just some small suggestions for touching up.
- 01:03:263 (3) - Don't really understand why having slider points would make much of a difference when they're already this stubby.
The angle at which it points towards also makes the one at - 01:03:930 (4) - look out of direction
- 01:05:930 (3,4) - Identical to above. Try this?
- 01:08:263 (2) - Seems kinda bumpy. Move it up maybe 4 grids ?
- 01:30:596 (3,1) - Here's my suggestion:
- 01:58:596 (1) - Why not have the slider-end point straight to the next note ?
- 02:01:263 - Onwards. You don't really need a break here.
Hard:
- 00:16:220 (4) - You're missing 1 more repeat for this.
- 01:17:263 (5) - Shift this 1 grid right.
- 02:18:596 (5) - Hmm, try having a repeat, then start the spinner at - 02:20:013 (1) - (1/8 snapping)
That's about it. Try to acquire more SP for this in the meantime. (More modding is definitely welcome, in any case)