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Suirenji Ruka starring Yamazaki Haruka - Bokura, Kakeyuku So

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No_Gu
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年4月6日 星期六 at 20:21:13

Artist: Suirenji Ruka starring Yamazaki Haruka
Title: Bokura, Kakeyuku Sora e (Movie EDIT)
Source: Hayate no Gotoku! -Heaven is a Place on Earth-
Tags: ハヤテのごとく！ Pokie
BPM: 158
Filesize: 14019kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.77 stars, 98 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 264 notes)
  3. Pokie's Hard (4.85 stars, 233 notes)
  4. Pokie's Normal (4.37 stars, 122 notes)
Download: Suirenji Ruka starring Yamazaki Haruka - Bokura, Kakeyuku Sora e (Movie EDIT)
Download: Suirenji Ruka starring Yamazaki Haruka - Bokura, Kakeyuku Sora e (Movie EDIT) (no video)
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#33 水蓮寺ルカ starring 山崎はるか - 僕ら、駆け行く空へ

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Last edited by No_Gu , edited 27 times in total.
Pokie
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（`･ω･´）
wcx19911123
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wcx19911123
1. Offset: 471ms BPM: 175.986
00:00:471 - 00:05:925 - 这一段我不十分确定要不要加线，你想map的话在找我好了
No_Gu
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wcx19911123 wrote:

1. Offset: 471ms BPM: 175.986
00:00:471 - 00:05:925 - 这一段我不十分确定要不要加线，你想map的话在找我好了
前阵试了下这个感觉还是BPM略快，我测了下在175.77左右。。但是还是不顺，换坑好了。
Kotone
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沒事了
查清楚了
哭哭
Pokie
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Pokie


我覺得有必要把這賣萌title留個紀錄

no more say
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No_Gu
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Pokie wrote:



我覺得有必要把這賣萌title留個紀錄
fu..fu...fu*k you!
Flask
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Flask
哇2kd

Red: Must be fixed.
Blue: Highly recommended.
Black: Just suggestion/nazi stuff.

[General]
  1. tags好少 BG那邊的幾行字要不要入tag
  2. 記事本第一行還是v10...啊我也不知道行不行
  3. 有video就untick letterbox 反正也沒break 233
[ Easy]
  1. 00:07:150 (1) - (begin)這裡應該要whistle吧前面那四個都有
  2. 00:25:758 (2) - nazi到爆 最後一個點下移1gird讓blanket好看點 你現在的到sliderend包就有點偏差
  3. 01:04:872 (1) - 感覺沒必要nc也
[ Pokie's Normal]
  1. 00:08:290 (2) - 有點nazi 這個spacing最好一樣不然很容易看出來差別就很醜 像是(1,2)比較近 (2,1)比較遠這樣
  2. 00:15:505 (4) - (end) 看來你忘了clap 因為其他diff都有 (而且看不出來是故意的=_=")
  3. 00:19:872 (2) - (end) 感覺需要finish 我有聽到很響的音 而且股子的diff都有+finish...啊還是加上比較fit啦
[ Pokie's Hard]
  1. 00:04:872 (2) - (begin) 為啥這裡有whistle?! 我看00:01:834 (2,2) - 這裡都沒有可是明明是相同的 ._.
  2. 00:06:391 (2) - spacing增大的很莫名 會讓人覺得你變回原本的速度了 所以就還是擺回原本的那種吧o.o
  3. 00:14:556 (1) - nazi不過放x:144, y:36會更包
  4. 00:16:834 (4,5,6) - 試試這個節奏 我覺得比較對音樂
  5. 00:39:809 (1,4) - swap nc? 我覺得nc應該在(4) (1)有點太早了
[ Insane]
  1. 00:13:226 (7,1) - (7)要NC 跟00:19:302 (1) - 一樣吧 阿要是NC的話(1)就順便Remove NC
  2. 01:04:872 (1) - (begin) finish請
射
2012最後mod
Pokie
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Flask wrote:

[ Pokie's Normal]
  1. 00:08:290 (2) - 有點nazi 這個spacing最好一樣不然很容易看出來差別就很醜 像是(1,2)比較近 (2,1)比較遠這樣 　Done
  2. 00:15:505 (4) - (end) 看來你忘了clap 因為其他diff都有 (而且看不出來是故意的=_=")　你和我世界線不同, 我這裡看有clap的
  3. 00:19:872 (2) - (end) 感覺需要finish 我有聽到很響的音 而且股子的diff都有+finish...啊還是加上比較fit啦　Done
[ Pokie's Hard]
  1. 00:04:872 (2) - (begin) 為啥這裡有whistle?! 我看00:01:834 (2,2) - 這裡都沒有可是明明是相同的 ._.　從音效上看 00:01:074 (1,2,1,2) - 這兩一組, 00:04:112 (1,2,1,2) - 這兩又是一組, 感覺沒什麼不妥…
  2. 00:06:391 (2) - spacing增大的很莫名 會讓人覺得你變回原本的速度了 所以就還是擺回原本的那種吧o.o　這邊和00:02:593 (1,2) - 有分別麼!
  3. 00:14:556 (1) - nazi不過放x:144, y:36會更包　Done
  4. 00:16:834 (4,5,6) - 試試這個節奏 我覺得比較對音樂　說實話糾結了挺久, 不過還是跟著00:10:188 (1,2,3,4) - 的節奏走了
  5. 00:39:809 (1,4) - swap nc? 我覺得nc應該在(4) (1)有點太早了　將來回點的三個改成一組了
http://puu.sh/1HO4a
NewRulerNA
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NewRulerNA
hi

[General]
  1. "BG.png" is too large. you should adjust file size.
    use this
  2. change TitleUnicode to "僕ら、駆け行く空へ".
  3. change ArtistUnicode to "水蓮寺ルカ starring 山崎はるか".
    http://www.hayate-project.com/music/index.html
[Easy]
  1. 00:03:353 - mistake? add whistle here. it has large vocal volume. so should highlight it imo.
  2. 00:06:391 - ^
  3. 00:09:809 - change volume to 50~60%. this clap is too loud imo.
  4. 00:20:062 (2) - move to 00:19:872 ?
    I think this note is little late.
  5. 00:47:783 - this is mistake. too loud.....
    65% fit.
  6. 00:49:302 - I felt loud here. same as ^
  7. 00:50:821 - ^
  8. 00:52:340 - ^
  9. 00:55:378 - ^
  10. 00:56:897 - ^
  11. 01:05:252 (1) - remove NC
    I did not think 01:04:872 (1) should be highlight.
  12. 01:28:037 - why did you greatly reduced down volume?
    need more volume imo. change to 70~80%
many volume have also problem in Insane.
I did not write it in Insane, you should adjust it.

[Pokie's Normal]
  1. 00:09:049 - この緑線を00:08:669に移動
    00:08:669 で曲調が変わるので、そこに移した方が曲と合います
  2. 00:24:239 - この箇所のslidertickの音量がhitnormalよりも少し大きく、それが悪く思えました
    tickの部分の音量を10%下げてください
    これは他のtickにも言えることです
  3. 00:23:859 (3,1) - [nazi] distance
    00:23:480 (2,1) でスタックさせる配置がベターです
    注意してプレイをすれば気付きますが、まず気付かないのでスタックさせなくても構いません
  4. 00:47:783 - same as Easy
  5. 00:49:302 - ^
  6. 00:53:859 - ここも音量が大きいので65%に下げてしまおう
  7. 01:17:783 (3) - 01:17:593が曲を聞く限りではスタートではないでしょうか？
    01:18:163 で間が開いてリズムが良くなりますし、1/2前にそのまま移動させるのが良いと思います
音量はHardでも同じ問題があります
こちらで修正したものはHardでも修正してください

[Pokie's Hard]
  1. 00:07:910 (2) - bgmをフォローしているnoteですが、00:05:631 (1) のような3/2スライダーがボーカルを既にフォローしているので、00:07:720 をフォローしたほうが分かりやすく素直なリズムになるように思えました
  2. 00:17:024 (5) - 00:16:264 (1,2,3,4,5)で綺麗な六角形を作ってみてはどうでしょうか
    (5)をx288 y310に移動させると形をある程度は整えることができます
    ですがこれは完全ではないので、Ctrl+Shitf+Dで綺麗な六角形を作るのがベストです
  3. 00:36:581 (2,3,4) - [nazi] スタックにズレがあります
    プレイするとこのズレが気になるので修正するのが良いです
  4. 00:59:935 (4) - こういった速度の変わるスライダーはより直感的な形（もしくは特徴のある形のスライダー）にして、配置を見るだけでも分かるようなスライダーにするのがベターです
    Hardでは曲を聞いて区別ができないプレイヤーがいます
    他のSV 1.5xのスライダーにも言えることです
[Insane]
  1. 00:20:631 (1) - Ctrl+H
    I felt good, when add little jump between 00:20:062 (3,1) - .
that's all!


gl
RikiH_
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Ohai. m4m from Pokie's queue.

Easy

00:20:062 (2) - Maybe curved would be better
00:55:758 (1,2) - Try a better blanket, like this
01:04:872 (1) - Why this NC?
01:28:131 - Add a spinner and end it in 01:30:695 ? You don't have any spinner in this diff...

Pokie's Normal

00:46:454 (6) - I'm not sure about this note, it can be a bit confusing here...

I can't find other in this diff, it is really welld one, gratz

Pokie's Hard

00:29:556 (4) - Ctrl+g?
00:36:581 (2,3,4) - These notes are stacked badly, please check them
01:18:923 (4) - Ctrl+g?
01:27:467 (1,2) - I'd prefer this way but it's only me

Insane

00:07:150 (3) - This is odd, you put the repeat on the blue tick but the sound is on the white tick!
00:24:239 (2) - Ctrl+g? If you do this, please use Ctrl+g on 00:24:619 (3) too
01:13:037 (3) - A bit more curved for blanketting better with the previous slider
01:28:321 - Add a spinner and end it in 01:30:695 for the same reason in Easy, it's important!

Very good map, gratz. I hope someone will mod my map :P
rezoons
rezoons
Hi ^^,

M4M from Pokie's queue.

******************************************************************

General
Remove letterbox during breaks because there is no break.
There isn't any spinner in the "easy" diff and the "Insane" one. Maybe you could add one at the end.

Easy
00:20:631 (1) - Move it one grid up. It's better aligned with the previous slider.
00:25:378 (1) - Bad distance snapping.
00:10:188
00:55:758 (1) - You should start the slider 1/2 beat earlier.
01:04:872 (1) - Remove the NC.
01:18:543 (3) - The overlapping isn't really good. And i think it would be better if the start and the end of the slider are on the same axis. Maybe something like:
if you want to keep the overlapping.
Otherwise something like:

Pokie's Normal
Slider Tick rate of 2 seems better to me.
00:16:264 (1) - I think it's better at x=144 y=260.
00:19:872 (2) - Remove the finish at the beggining of the slider and put it at the end. (as you did at 00:54:809)
00:45:125 (5) - Move it in order to avoid the overlapping. (maybe a star shape?)
01:06:391 (1) - If you follow the lyrics start it 1/2 beat earlier.
01:16:644 (1) - Remove the arrow and start it 1/2 beat later.
01:27:847 (5) - Again, a star-shape seems better.


Pokie's Hard
00:20:631 (3) - Finish.
00:50:062 (3) - You follow the back ground music? Then it should be 1/2 beat later.
00:50:631 (1) - Put it at the same place as 00:49:682 (1).
01:09:239 (1,2,3) - They aren't aligned very well and they are closer than at 01:13:416 or 01:18:353.
01:27:467 (1) - At the end a clap sounds better than a whistle. (and the hitsounds are differents from your Normal)

Insane
01:10:188 (4) - I don't see the point of the arrow.
01:27:467 (1) - Same suggestion as "Pokie's Hard"
01:28:037 (1) - A clap with the finish like in "Hard" sounds better.

**********************************************************

I'm still a beginner modder so i hope it's enough. :o

Anyway, good luck getting it ranked, i love it. :)
LunarSakuya
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hi

General
- Use the Japanese characters of the song artist for ArtistUnicode and the song title.
- You should probably recompress your bg so it's under 1mb

no kudosu
Natsu
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Natsu
Hi Some suggestions

Easy:

01:10:188 add finish
01:09:429 ^
01:09:714 whistle
01:09:999 ^
01:28:226 add a spinner here since other diff have it and for score variation
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 01:09:073 - snap to 01:09:049

Normal:

00:46:454 remove this circle so hard for a normal diff imo
00:52:720 stack it with 00:54:239 look better
01:09:239 same as 00:46:454

Hard:

00:23:669 whistle
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 01:09:073 - snap to 01:09:049
00:32:593 (4,5) - stack they? whith 00:33:543
00:39:999 add circle
01:09:049 x:496 y:164 look better :3
01:18:448 x:496 y:204 ^

Insane:

00:00:695 whistle
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 01:09:073 - snap to 01:09:049
01:28:226 add a spinner here since other diff have it and for score variation
01:13:416 remove clap sound so weird
yanlu
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yanlu
Hi >.</

[Insane]
00:07:910 (4) - note+slider感覺比較適合o.o
00:12:277 (3) - x484/y316 比較順flow
00:20:631 (1) - ..我覺得 它好像是歪的
00:26:707 (3) - +nc 00:27:087 (1) - 去掉nc (為了配合前面的00:23:859 (1,2) - )
00:35:631 (3) - 旋轉-3度 ><
00:50:252 (3) - nc?
00:56:707 - 故意的嗎..?有點太小聲了..
01:00:695 (2) - 轉一下包覆3這樣?
01:01:264 (1) - 放在x263/y186 然後slider改一下中間的紅點?
01:03:923 (4) - x128/y160?
01:04:777 (7) - 坑阿....OAQ 放x83/y353啦
01:05:821 (1) - 微調一點不要讓頭尾撞到?
01:11:707 (3) - x86/y89
01:15:885 (2) - 跟1近些
01:23:005 (7) - 不stack(同前面OAQ

[BakaPokie's Hard]
00:30:695 (3) - 尾巴的點x176/y322?
01:09:334 (2) - x495/y166

[MoePokie's Normal]
HP OD-1?
00:13:037 (5) - 改成note 在00:13:226 - ?
00:32:783 (3) - dele?
01:07:340 (3) - e..跟2一樣一點點弧?
01:09:239 (3) - dele?

[Easy]
00:24:999 (2,1) - snap ><
01:05:252 (1) - dele nc
沒什麼可說的=A=.. 好圖就是好~~

good luck~
No_Gu
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thanks
Rizia
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Rizia
oh movie version
wcx19911123
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wcx19911123
as your request

[General]
fine

[Pokie's Normal]
00:08:669 (1) - 建议把这个slider往上挪点增大点spacing，music从这个slider开始就已经变激烈了
00:32:214 (2,1) - 这里的spacing感觉也可以大一点
01:03:923 - 建议这里换成circle，然后从01:04:112 - 到01:04:492 - 加个slider，更合曲
01:25:188 (2,1) - 这里的spacing最好小点，有点难读

[Pokie's Hard]
00:27:847 - 这里的hitnormal感觉可以调低点volume，有点吓人
01:07:530 (4) - 这个slider可以顺时针转一点，flow会更好

[Insane]
00:20:631 (1) - 这个ctrl+h一下其实flow更好点0.0
感觉最后加个spinner好点，Easy同

0.0
No_Gu
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都改了 update
wcx19911123
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wcx19911123
we changed some patterns/hitsounds in Normal, Hard and Insane, added spinner at the end of the song in Easy and Insane
bubbled
Niva
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(don't kd)

Pokie's Normal and Pokie's Hard : 00:57:182 - There's a 5% inherit section here, is it intentional? (it doesn't fit well considering it's in the middle of the spinner though)

Also on Pokie's Hard, 00:20:726 (1) - please set the inherit section RIGHT on spinner's start, else it'll sound abrupt due to the volume change...

----------------------------------------------

EDIT : I've discussed with Pokie herself about the sudden speed-up in Insane and some of my friends has testplayed the map, one of my friend said he can't read the sudden fast slider on Insane, one of my friend said he can read it without problem, and another one doesn't give a clear answer whether he can read or not...

I'm not really sure with sending this to rank instantly, I'd just rebubble it for now (the speed-up in Pokie's Hard is perfectly catchable though), sorry No_Gu ._.

Rebubbled ~
Pokie
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Thanks for checking, Niva ;)

http://puu.sh/2oimT
No_Gu
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update
NoHitter
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[General]
- Is the title to the song really (Movie EDIT)? It's not written in the video. Rename it to (Movie Edit)?

[Easy]
- 00:20:631 (1) - Having both silenced sliderticks and sliderslide is unrankable. I know you didn't technically silence the ticks, but the volume is too low for it to be heard anyway.
- 00:46:644 (1,2) - Same as above.
- 00:54:999 (3) - Same as above.

[Insane]
- 00:01:834 (4) - Having both silenced sliderticks and sliderslide is unrankable. Same reason as in Easy.
- 00:03:353 (2) - Same as above.
- 00:20:631 (1) - Same as above.
- 01:22:720 (6,7) - The spacing change here is kind of sudden given that you spaced your streams compressed in that same combo. I suggest you space them similarly to what you did in the combo.
No_Gu
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No_Gu

NoHitter wrote:

[General]
- Is the title to the song really (Movie EDIT)? It's not written in the video. Rename it to (Movie Edit)?
This is the booklet of this OST.see the 2nd track http://puu.sh/2uTg5
[Easy]
- 00:20:631 (1) - Having both silenced sliderticks and sliderslide is unrankable. I know you didn't technically silence the ticks, but the volume is too low for it to be heard anyway. increse to 15%..if I go on turning up it,it sounds really bad
- 00:46:644 (1,2) - Same as above.change to 65%
- 00:54:999 (3) - Same as above.^

[Insane]
- 00:01:834 (4) - Having both silenced sliderticks and sliderslide is unrankable. Same reason as in Easy.increse to 15%..if I go on turning up it,it sounds really bad
- 00:03:353 (2) - Same as above.^
- 00:20:631 (1) - Same as above.^
- 01:22:720 (6,7) - The spacing change here is kind of sudden given that you spaced your streams compressed in that same combo. I suggest you space them similarly to what you did in the combo.ok,did a little change
thank you
NoHitter
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As the changes only involved changing the pattern a little, and increasing the volume on some inherited sections:

Ranked!
Pokie
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人性
Nemis
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gratz :D
Kyouren
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Kyouren
gratz!!!!! :) :) :) :)
Satellite
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congratz~
yoshilove
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おめでとう　Congratulations.
NewRulerNA
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gratz~ :3
eveless
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又rank是人
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin
human sex?
No_Gu
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kanpakyin wrote:

human sex?
小贤哥哥又装作很正常的样子说这么色的单词...
Flask
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Flask

kanpakyin wrote:

human sex?
x847606653
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x847606653
what?
Kotone
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Kotone

No_Gu wrote:

kanpakyin wrote:

human sex?
小贤哥哥又装作很正常的样子说这么色的单词...
小贤哥哥好色 :)
S o r d a
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S o r d a
ハヤテのごとく<3
Natteke
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Natteke
such a cool map!
xxdeathx
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xxdeathx
treasure this 6666 moment

No_Gu
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Natteke wrote:

such a cool map!
wow so surprised
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such a cool map!
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