Hi ^^,
M4M from Pokie's queue.
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GeneralRemove letterbox during breaks because there is no break.
There isn't any spinner in the "easy" diff and the "Insane" one. Maybe you could add one at the end.
Easy00:20:631 (1) - Move it one grid up. It's better aligned with the previous slider.
00:25:378 (1) - Bad distance snapping.
00:10:188
00:55:758 (1) - You should start the slider 1/2 beat earlier.
01:04:872 (1) - Remove the NC.
01:18:543 (3) - The overlapping isn't really good. And i think it would be better if the start and the end of the slider are on the same axis. Maybe something like:
if you want to keep the overlapping.
Otherwise something like:
Pokie's NormalSlider Tick rate of 2 seems better to me.
00:16:264 (1) - I think it's better at x=144 y=260.
00:19:872 (2) - Remove the finish at the beggining of the slider and put it at the end. (as you did at 00:54:809)
00:45:125 (5) - Move it in order to avoid the overlapping. (maybe a star shape?)
01:06:391 (1) - If you follow the lyrics start it 1/2 beat earlier.
01:16:644 (1) - Remove the arrow and start it 1/2 beat later.
01:27:847 (5) - Again, a star-shape seems better.
Pokie's Hard00:20:631 (3) - Finish.
00:50:062 (3) - You follow the back ground music? Then it should be 1/2 beat later.
00:50:631 (1) - Put it at the same place as 00:49:682 (1).
01:09:239 (1,2,3) - They aren't aligned very well and they are closer than at 01:13:416 or 01:18:353.
01:27:467 (1) - At the end a clap sounds better than a whistle. (and the hitsounds are differents from your Normal)
Insane01:10:188 (4) - I don't see the point of the arrow.
01:27:467 (1) - Same suggestion as "Pokie's Hard"
01:28:037 (1) - A clap with the finish like in "Hard" sounds better.
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I'm still a beginner modder so i hope it's enough.
Anyway, good luck getting it ranked, i love it.