Kiai should be consistent throughout difficulties of your mapset.

Kiai should start on a white tick of a measure.

Flower wrote:

[Xin]
00:11:587 (1) - not need a NC. btw, you can stack it. - Maybe my idea is use a anitjump , only aplicate a NC for the moment

• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[Easy]

1. Useless green line:
   00:27:348 -
   
   
2. maybe fine >~<

[Normal]

1. Useless green line:
   00:27:348 -
   
   
2. 00:10:326 (1) - how about this? flow will be more smooth
3. 00:59:501 (4,1,2) - swap NC and (2) NC ?

[Hard]

1. 00:03:391 (1) - 2nd point on x:164 y:224
2. 00:05:597 (3) - NC because 00:15:054 (1) -
3. 00:27:190 - if you want to follow vocal , i think there should have a note ...
4. 00:41:848 (4) - 2nd point on x:144 y:180 , but I yet think it is not pretty
5. 01:19:675 (1) - NC because 01:17:469 (1,2,3) -

[Xin's Hard]

1. Useless green line:
   01:05:805 -
   
   
2. 01:23:931 (3) - x:228 y:112 ?~

Gabe wrote:

Hi Tur00, here's a mod from my modding queue.
Reply to what you haven't fixed, thanks.

Why there's two Hard...

[General]

• The BPM is 190,32. Screenshot. As you can see on the picture, the real bpm is 95.16 and I did *2, so it equals 190,32.
• So if the BPM is changing, the offfet must change too. For here, I have 1494 so (-6) on the current one.
• 01:16:917 - This timing should be moved to 01:16:838, at least...

[Easy]

Hitsounds mod

This box is for hitsounds. When I look for hitsounds, I am mostly looking for the consistency. Sometimes I may give some suggestions
•00:01:494 (1) - This slider shouldn't have a whistle on both start and end. It sound weird because the consistance will be killed after. So replacing the whistle by a finish on the start will be better.
•00:11:582 - A finish will fit alot here since the song is kindof restarting. I mean't, the 4 times is finished and starting a new "chorus/vocal". If you understand..
•00:18:517 - It's really recommended to add a whistle here to keep the consistency. If you're not adding a whistle, it could sound empty at 00:17:885 (1,2) - .
•00:36:168 (3) - A whistle could be added here to keep the consistency you did with "Whistle to the third line and a Clap to the fourth line"
•00:41:216 - Same as the point above.
•00:42:792 - You have a custom slider-tick sound, why not adding a clap here?
After that, I think the rest is consistent.

Objects mod

This box means that I am looking at flows and useless circle/slider that doesn't sound really good or even, doesn't fit well for the difficulty.
•00:04:646 (3) - I think this circle should be between the two previous sliders, not like this x but like this o After, make sure to fix the next slider so the spacing won't break.
•00:07:168 (2,1) - I don't really like the transition from the slider (2) to the slider (1) since the slider (1) is at the end of the previous slider, (2).
•00:12:842 (1,2,3) - There's a spacing problem right here because of the circle. Just do the same thing, but with the distance snap.
•00:28:288 (2,3,4) - You could make something more enjoyable here. Having these three objects all aligned in the same axis, is too much. So to make it more fun, you could move the circle (3) to x:256 y:360
•00:35:853 (2,3,4) - Almost as I said above. But this is worst xD... Anyways. Maybe you could do something like this?
•00:42:158 (1,2) - The flow here is not really good since the slider (1) is really curved and then when you're going to the next slider, you're doing a straight line. By doing this, is already way more better.
•01:07:060 (1,2) - The same thing I said on 00:07:168 about transition.

Combo mod

This box is for new combos. If new combos are fitting well with the vocals or if they aren't too big (ex: 23combos)
•00:12:217 (4) - For the vocal, this circle should have a new combo here and the next object, delete it.
•00:15:369 (3) - To fit with the vocal, add a new combo here and delete the new combo to the next object.
•00:30:185 (1) - Add a new combo here. After that delete the new combo to the next note.
•00:33:022 (1) - For the vocal, it should be better if you add a new combo here and delete the new combo to 00:34:283 (3) - .
•01:20:936 (1) - To mostly fit with the vocal, add a new combo here and delete the new combo to 01:23:458 (3) - . It will be better since 01:20:936 (1) - was too much for the combo..

[Normal]

AR/OD -1

Hitsounds mod

This box is for hitsounds. When I look for hitsounds, I am mostly looking for the consistency. Sometimes I may give some suggestions
•00:01:500 (1) - As said for the Easy difficulty, having two whistle on both start and end do not sound good. So replace the whistle by a Finish on the Start of the slider.
•00:32:864 (1) - why is there a clap here? First, delete this slider, it doesn't fit well for a Normal difficulty and add a circle at 00:33:022. k, for the hitsound, add a clap at 00:32:707 so it will keep the consistency with your claps.
•00:37:750 (2,3,4) - For this, look at the next box about objects. But for the hitsound add a clap to the circle (2) and as said for the next box, delete the circle (3). For the clap, it will be consistent with your claps.
•01:01:392 - Since you have a custom slider-tick hitsound, add a clap here to keep the consistency with the previous combo.

Objects mod

This box means that I am looking at flows and useless circle/slider that doesn't sound really good or even, doesn't fit well for the difficulty.
You do not have any spinner here! Like the other difficulty, add one at 01:24:719
•00:37:750 (2,3,4) - Do not add any streams on Normal difficulty. Delete the circle (3) please and try to move the circle (2) somewhere else.
•00:16:630 (5) - Make this slider more curved? Like this.

Combo mod

This box is for new combos. If new combos are fitting well with the vocals or if they aren't too big (ex: 23combos)
•00:44:370 (4) - Add a new combo here because of the song.
•00:51:936 (1) - Add a new combo here because the song here is more calm.

Not too much to say here...

[Hard]

Hitsounds mod

This box is for hitsounds. When I look for hitsounds, I am mostly looking for the consistency. Sometimes I may give some suggestions
•00:01:500 (1) - As said for the other difficulty, do not add one whistle to the beginning and another to the end. Replace the beginning's one by a Finish.
•00:42:164 - You have custom slider-tick hitsounds, so you should add a clap here an another clap to the other tick, so it will be consistent.

For the consistency, that's all I have to say.

Objects mod

This box means that I am looking at flows and useless circle/slider that doesn't sound really good or even, doesn't fit well for the difficulty.
•00:02:760 (3,4,5) - This triplets here doesn't sounds good. Well, I mean't, it's not placed in a good place. My suggestion here, is to delete 00:02:918 (4) - and add a circle somewhere at 00:02:603. The song here is better to have this kind of triplets.
•00:05:913 (2,3,4) - The same thing as above. The triplets here doesn't sound good/should be deplaced. So delete the circle at 00:06:070 (3) - and add a circle to 00:05:755.
•00:08:434 (3,4,5) - The same thing as these two points above. 00:08:592 (4) - Delete; 00:08:277 - Add.
I will stop here about tiplets' all the triplets that look like these looks and sounds wrong..
•00:31:761 (3,4) - These circles should be deleted and be replaced by a slider.
•00:27:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - This part sounds really weird... Try to do some pattern that suit with the vocal.
•01:26:926 (4,5,6) - This is just a suggestion, but I would like to see this. To make the Hard a bit more challenging, I would like to see a slider just like this > 1|2. If you do that, add a finish to the end and on the beginning, add a clap to keep the consistency.

Combo mod

This box is for new combos. If new combos are fitting well with the vocals or if they aren't too big (ex: 23combos)
•00:12:217 (1) - Add a new combo here and delete the new combo to the next note.
•01:25:980 (4,5) - It's obvious that these two notes should be with the next combo..

[Xin's Hard] MOD IS NOT FINISHED FOR THIS DIFFICULTY. I actually have to go, so yeah..

This difficulty could be recalled "Xin's Insane" since the Slider Velocity is more high than "Hard" and also doing AR+1 & OD+1 will make all the differance.

Hitsounds mod

This box is for hitsounds. When I look for hitsounds, I am mostly looking for the consistency. Sometimes I may give some suggestions
•00:01:500 (1) - Like I said on every other difficulty, do not add two whistle on the same slider. Mostly in this circonstance. So, Delete the whistle on the beginning and replace it by a Finish. It will be better since the song it's starting there.
•00:04:021 - To make your whistles consistent, add a whistle here.

Objects mod

This box means that I am looking at flows and useless circle/slider that doesn't sound really good or even, doesn't fit well for the difficulty.
•00:08:277 (2,4) - I will suggest you to stack both circles in these two slider's ending, like this: http://puu.sh/1bbmH . It will make it more chanllenging.
•00:09:695 (2,3) - These sliders are not aligned and has a weird spacing. Move the slider (2) to x:300 y:172 and move the slider (3) to x:352 y:264. when doing this, make sure to move 00:11:271 (4,5) - to keep the same spacing.

Combo mod

This box is for new combos. If new combos are fitting well with the vocals or if they aren't too big (ex: 23combos)

Well, good luck!

Tur00 wrote:

I only not fixed anythings in Objects mod the rest Fixed
UPDATED~

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[Easy]
00:32:702 - Add note and add clap? It feels empty for me.... Fixed
01:04:543 (3) - I don't see why hitsound slidertick is on long white tick...... It doesn't follow the music.... but Make a new Rhythm in the Song and sound good :c


[Normal]
* AR +1. Your current approach rate are pretty slow Fixed

01:17:784 (4,1,2,3,4,1) - Why some claps are appear at upbeat (1st and 3rd white tick)? Listen the song there sound the Beats of the clap


[Hard]
00:27:500 (2) - It should snap at 00:27:343, since it follows vocal Fixed
00:51:933 (1) - While the default skin of spinner is red-orange-yellow, this might be hidden for players. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/464810 I dont understand but i change the colour of the 3rd combo .-.
01:02:021 (1) - ^ ^


Good luck~

Thank you for the mod

Deni wrote:

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General

Folder seems fine

Easy

00:28:919 (4) - Slider seems a bit strange.. i like how are .
00:33:096 - to 00:33:569 - Why so empty here? Fixed
00:51:933 (1) - imo this spinner doesn't fit and it ends suddenly because his voice actually stops here 00:56:662 i stop it there because "it ends suddenly" if i finish it where you say ...then i put it there

Normal

Not much to say here, only: ok..

1. You could try to improve some slider..
2. Improve your spacing because sometimes it feels strange to play, use the whole grid more and not only the middle...

Hard

Pretty much the same like in Normal...

00:41:845 (4) - This slider doesn't look that awesome, maybe just make a wiggle --> Don't Like

Xin

00:29:865 (8) - Make this slider symmetrical, you can see that the head and the foot of the slider are not on the same level.. Fixed
01:27:242 - Use a spinner here? no.

Good diff!

If you have any questions contact me ingame or via pm.

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

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XinCrin wrote:

Por favor reemplaza esto hize algunos cambios

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2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions

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Snowy Dream wrote:

[Xin's Hard]
hmm? It is a hard diff ,isnt it? So make the jump [such as 00:08:427 (3)] easier or just change the diff name into "Xin's Insane"
00:11:580 (5) - Too loud here, lower the volume to 45%
00:52:879 (4) - It makes me feel uncomfortable ,try stack with 00:52:721 (3,5)
01:17:784 (9) - Clap since the drum is here
01:18:099 (1) - Then I think that the clap here is not good.
01:23:143 (1) - Weird spacing :< You could add a note at 01:22:986 then I feel better
01:27:242 - Maybe a bit loud,lower the volume to 45%
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Nice Mapset :3
GL

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256,208,81882,1,8,0:0:0
315,350,82198,2,0,B|280:304|292:240|344:208|432:224|440:304,1,260,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,304,82986,1,0,0:0:0
368,304,83143,6,0,B|308:188,1,130,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,40,83774,1,8,0:0:0
228,100,83932,1,0,0:0:0
200,160,84089,2,0,B|140:276,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
252,352,84720,6,0,B|308:234,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
372,228,85193,1,0,0:0:0
356,292,85350,1,0,0:0:0
452,204,85666,2,0,B|480:144|440:80,1,130,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
320,60,86296,2,0,B|292:48|256:48,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
168,60,86611,5,0,0:0:0
76,72,86769,1,0,0:0:0
40,156,86927,1,8,0:0:0
116,208,87084,1,0,0:0:0
192,156,87242,5,4,0:0:0

whymeman wrote:

Hmmm.... better than before and got more time to actually look at it. The map itself flows and plays smooth as well so i'll give it a bubble then.

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Popping bubble due unrankable stuff ~

You can not silence both slider ticks and slider slides together ~

Also fix Unicode in Easy diff pls ~

Don't ask me recheck ~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Map is not really good for me ~ but ok if you really need me rebblue ~

Getting 5+ more mod and trying improve map ~

You can ask me recheck ~ if you think ready ~

Scorpiour wrote:

glance at the map.

To be honest i can't say the map is ready:

Beats is okay. Placement still needs more works and hitsounds.... i recommend to remake because it is mess...

and another issue is the diff spread. try to make it more smooth~

1. 00:36:485 (4) - I think like this is better then the other one, dont forget to fix the spacing~
2. 00:44:997 (4) - remove the whistle on the end it's really dont fit at all~
3. 01:17:154 (1,2) - switch the NC here?

1. 00:31:441 (1,5) - switch this nc sounds better. Because the vocal was still going ><
2. 00:34:278 (1) - remove this nc ^ with same reason above~
3. 01:25:350 (1) - remove this short nc >< dont look so good to me~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

I'm really don't like map,so i don't mod this ~

But ok,bubble back ~ due fixed unrankable stuff ~

SC-DrawerX3 wrote:

Request from my Modding Queue~

[Easy]

00:05:275 (1) - Maybe diffrent placement? Kinda annoys me
00:30:495 (2,4) - Claps on the ticks are louder than the rest of the claps
01:03:282 (2) - clap on tick sounds weird to me, maby just the slider begin and end with clap
01:20:937 (1) - move first sliderpoint one grid up so it's symmetical

I did not like the placement so much but it's not a big problem

[Normal]

00:32:860 (1) - playing this felt awkward, maybe remove slider and add silce on 00:33:017 ?
00:42:790 Tick needs clap
00:45:312 (2) - clap on begin
00:56:977 (1) - Finish sound on 80%?
01:20:937 (1) - clap instead of whistle on begin
01:19:991 (3) - whistle

[Hard]

The spacing could be greater.

00:27:027 add circle with clap, this is where beat starts
00:32:702 add note with clap
00:32:860 (1) - remove clap on begin

[Xin's Hard]

The spacing could be greater. The first part of kiai had a really good spacing.

00:13:787 (4,5) - meh no flow
00:52:721 (3,4,5,6,7) - Stops flow and is not so good to play, but this may be my personal preference
00:54:455 (3) - move one grid down
00:58:711 (5,6) - not perfect but acceptable
01:12:740 (1,2,3) - Spacing? why jump?
01:14:001 (5,1) - ^
01:26:611 (1,2,3,4,1) - make more like a circle, looks ugly to me >:

The maps are pretty neat, not perfect but almost :3

Good luck~

Andrea wrote:

Good enough.

Ranked~