1. Easy (1,76 stars, 76 notes)
2. Hard (4,66 stars, 213 notes)
3. Normal (4,19 stars, 129 notes)
4. Xin's Insane (4,9 stars, 208 notes)

Gabe wrote:

/first.

Good luck with this one! c:

Kogure wrote:

I can do a guest diff if you want to

• unify the Kiai Time.
  
  SPOILER

  AIBat v2.0 wrote:

  Kiai
  Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
  
  - [Easy] :
  Kiai #1: Starts on 01:07:058, ends on 01:16:830
  Kiai #2: Starts on 01:17:146, ends on 01:25:972
  
  - [Hard] :
  Kiai #1: Starts on 01:07:058, ends on 01:16:909
  Kiai #2: Starts on 01:17:146, ends on 01:25:972
  
  - [Normal] :
  Kiai #1: Starts on 01:07:058, ends on 01:16:909
  Kiai #2: Starts on 01:17:146, ends on 01:25:972

  btw I think it's better if you put Kiai Time like this.
  #1: 01:07:058 ~ 01:17:067
  #2: 01:17:146 ~ 01:27:233

• 00:12:524 - I think there is a strong sound enough to put note. how about add a circle here?
  01:04:221 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - seems so hard to follow because you make stacking with 01:04:221 (1,2) and it makes hard to read the rhythm of (2).
  then, 2~4 is on red tick. using circles to follow them raises up the difficulty too. so I suggest to change the placement. how about this?
  SPOILER

  
  then if you like this, use this code.
  

  227,348,65009,6,0,B|183:348|159:324|159:280,2,110
  258,316,65797,1,8
  258,272,65955,1,0
  258,228,66113,1,8

  01:17:146 ~ 01:18:406 - too lonely. you start #2 Kiai Time from 01:17:146, so I want here swelling more.
  01:19:037 (3) - also, this hitsound raise lonely. you put claps on backbeat in #1 Kiai Time, but why you put on downbeat in #2?
  I recommend you to remove this clap and put on 01:18:722 (2) and 01:19:352 (4).

• 00:08:111 (2,3) - hm..I can understand why you want to stack these notes, but I think it isn't kind to newbie player.
  00:37:742 (2,3,4) - BPM is so fast, so it's hard to follow the circle which is on red just after the circle on white tick.
  how about stack them? it becomes easy to follow them imo.
  00:44:362 (3,4) - replace with a slider? it seems a little difficult to read the rhythm of (4), but it's up to you.
  00:47:357 (2,3,4) - how about replace with slider like as 00:57:444 (2) ?
  01:12:732 (1) - this slider doesn't follow the lyrics at all. you should listen the music better.
  01:17:146 ~ same as Hard, why so lonely?

• 00:02:752 (2,3) - the angle is too sharp and hard to follow. you should put (3) to the right side of (2) like this.
  SPOILER

  
  00:49:406 (2) - ctrl+H to make it easy to follow.

h-728 wrote:

[General]

• unify the Kiai Time.
  
  SPOILER

  AIBat v2.0 wrote:

  Kiai
  Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
  
  - [Easy] :
  Kiai #1: Starts on 01:07:058, ends on 01:16:830
  Kiai #2: Starts on 01:17:146, ends on 01:25:972
  
  - [Hard] :
  Kiai #1: Starts on 01:07:058, ends on 01:16:909
  Kiai #2: Starts on 01:17:146, ends on 01:25:972
  
  - [Normal] :
  Kiai #1: Starts on 01:07:058, ends on 01:16:909
  Kiai #2: Starts on 01:17:146, ends on 01:25:972

  btw I think it's better if you put Kiai Time like this.
  #1: 01:07:058 ~ 01:17:067
  #2: 01:17:146 ~ 01:27:233

Fixed

[Hard]

• 00:12:524 - I think there is a strong sound enough to put note. how about add a circle here? Fixed
  01:04:221 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - seems so hard to follow because you make stacking with 01:04:221 (1,2) and it makes hard to read the rhythm of (2).
  then, 2~4 is on red tick. using circles to follow them raises up the difficulty too. so I suggest to change the placement. how about this?
  SPOILER

  
  then if you like this, use this code.
  

  227,348,65009,6,0,B|183:348|159:324|159:280,2,110
  258,316,65797,1,8
  258,272,65955,1,0
  258,228,66113,1,8

  Fixed
  01:17:146 ~ 01:18:406 - too lonely. you start #2 Kiai Time from 01:17:146, so I want here swelling more. Fixed
  01:19:037 (3) - also, this hitsound raise lonely. you put claps on backbeat in #1 Kiai Time, but why you put on downbeat in #2?
  I recommend you to remove this clap and put on 01:18:722 (2) and 01:19:352 (4).

Sorry but no

[Normal]

• 00:08:111 (2,3) - hm..I can understand why you want to stack these notes, but I think it isn't kind to newbie player. For it i make a Easy diff ?
  00:37:742 (2,3,4) - BPM is so fast, so it's hard to follow the circle which is on red just after the circle on white tick.
  how about stack them? it becomes easy to follow them imo. Fixed
  00:44:362 (3,4) - replace with a slider? it seems a little difficult to read the rhythm of (4), but it's up to you. Fixed
  00:47:357 (2,3,4) - how about replace with slider like as 00:57:444 (2) ? Fixed
  01:12:732 (1) - this slider doesn't follow the lyrics at all. you should listen the music better. Fixed
  01:17:146 ~ same as Hard, why so lonely?Fixed

[Easy]
first of all, the distance between all notes are too wide.
also, the flow of cursor isn't kind imo. this is Easy, so you should consider about newbie players more. look that in the notes continues in white tick
have a percet distance then i cant change this distance and have other in 1/1 notes.
second, I can understand that you want to put claps on backbeat, but in this diff, there are less notes on backbeats.
how about put claps on second downbeats? I think it will go well. No thanks :C

• 00:02:752 (2,3) - the angle is too sharp and hard to follow. you should put (3) to the right side of (2) like this.Fixed
  SPOILER

  
  00:49:406 (2) - ctrl+H to make it easy to follow.Fixed

that's all.
good luck for rank.

Tur00 wrote:

we somos colombianos hablame en español xD y si quieres :/
Haz la diff xD
Insane o la que quieras xD

Kogure wrote:

Tur00 wrote:

we somos colombianos hablame en español xD y si quieres :/
Haz la diff xD
Insane o la que quieras xD

Perdona es que es la costumbre de hablar ingles xD
Bueno, entonces voy a hacer una Insane, la cual espero tener lista para el miercoles - viernes
Hasta entonces c:

1. try to cut the video's sound track~

1. 00:09:057 (1,2,3) - too close~move up 2 a little~
2. 00:20:720 (4,5) - too close....u know that.orz

1. 00:11:579 - NC?~
2. 00:12:209 - remove NC~if that add NC~
3. 00:12:524 - remove NC~if that add NC and remove NC~
4. 00:12:840 - add NC~~if that add NC and remove NC then remove NC again=w=.~im just boring....orz

1. 00:48:460 (3) - move to 00:48:302 - ~
2. 01:06:428 (9) - NC~
3. 01:06:743 (1) - remove NC~
4. 01:20:928 (2,4) - no beautiful~....and 01:22:189 (4,1) - ......try to wrapping the slider~

Tur00 wrote:

All diffs were made by me .

Kiai should be consistent throughout difficulties of your mapset.

Kiai should start on a white tick of a measure.

Flower wrote:

[Xin]
00:11:587 (1) - not need a NC. btw, you can stack it. - Maybe my idea is use a anitjump , only aplicate a NC for the moment

• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[Easy]

1. Useless green line:
   00:27:348 -
   
   
2. maybe fine >~<

[Normal]

1. Useless green line:
   00:27:348 -
   
   
2. 00:10:326 (1) - how about this? flow will be more smooth
3. 00:59:501 (4,1,2) - swap NC and (2) NC ?

[Hard]

1. 00:03:391 (1) - 2nd point on x:164 y:224
2. 00:05:597 (3) - NC because 00:15:054 (1) -
3. 00:27:190 - if you want to follow vocal , i think there should have a note ...
4. 00:41:848 (4) - 2nd point on x:144 y:180 , but I yet think it is not pretty
5. 01:19:675 (1) - NC because 01:17:469 (1,2,3) -

[Xin's Hard]

1. Useless green line:
   01:05:805 -
   
   
2. 01:23:931 (3) - x:228 y:112 ?~

Gabe wrote:

Hi Tur00, here's a mod from my modding queue.
Reply to what you haven't fixed, thanks.

Why there's two Hard...

[General]

• The BPM is 190,32. Screenshot. As you can see on the picture, the real bpm is 95.16 and I did *2, so it equals 190,32.
• So if the BPM is changing, the offfet must change too. For here, I have 1494 so (-6) on the current one.
• 01:16:917 - This timing should be moved to 01:16:838, at least...

[Easy]

Hitsounds mod

This box is for hitsounds. When I look for hitsounds, I am mostly looking for the consistency. Sometimes I may give some suggestions
•00:01:494 (1) - This slider shouldn't have a whistle on both start and end. It sound weird because the consistance will be killed after. So replacing the whistle by a finish on the start will be better.
•00:11:582 - A finish will fit alot here since the song is kindof restarting. I mean't, the 4 times is finished and starting a new "chorus/vocal". If you understand..
•00:18:517 - It's really recommended to add a whistle here to keep the consistency. If you're not adding a whistle, it could sound empty at 00:17:885 (1,2) - .
•00:36:168 (3) - A whistle could be added here to keep the consistency you did with "Whistle to the third line and a Clap to the fourth line"
•00:41:216 - Same as the point above.
•00:42:792 - You have a custom slider-tick sound, why not adding a clap here?
After that, I think the rest is consistent.

Objects mod

This box means that I am looking at flows and useless circle/slider that doesn't sound really good or even, doesn't fit well for the difficulty.
•00:04:646 (3) - I think this circle should be between the two previous sliders, not like this x but like this o After, make sure to fix the next slider so the spacing won't break.
•00:07:168 (2,1) - I don't really like the transition from the slider (2) to the slider (1) since the slider (1) is at the end of the previous slider, (2).
•00:12:842 (1,2,3) - There's a spacing problem right here because of the circle. Just do the same thing, but with the distance snap.
•00:28:288 (2,3,4) - You could make something more enjoyable here. Having these three objects all aligned in the same axis, is too much. So to make it more fun, you could move the circle (3) to x:256 y:360
•00:35:853 (2,3,4) - Almost as I said above. But this is worst xD... Anyways. Maybe you could do something like this?
•00:42:158 (1,2) - The flow here is not really good since the slider (1) is really curved and then when you're going to the next slider, you're doing a straight line. By doing this, is already way more better.
•01:07:060 (1,2) - The same thing I said on 00:07:168 about transition.

Combo mod

This box is for new combos. If new combos are fitting well with the vocals or if they aren't too big (ex: 23combos)
•00:12:217 (4) - For the vocal, this circle should have a new combo here and the next object, delete it.
•00:15:369 (3) - To fit with the vocal, add a new combo here and delete the new combo to the next object.
•00:30:185 (1) - Add a new combo here. After that delete the new combo to the next note.
•00:33:022 (1) - For the vocal, it should be better if you add a new combo here and delete the new combo to 00:34:283 (3) - .
•01:20:936 (1) - To mostly fit with the vocal, add a new combo here and delete the new combo to 01:23:458 (3) - . It will be better since 01:20:936 (1) - was too much for the combo..

[Normal]

AR/OD -1

Hitsounds mod

This box is for hitsounds. When I look for hitsounds, I am mostly looking for the consistency. Sometimes I may give some suggestions
•00:01:500 (1) - As said for the Easy difficulty, having two whistle on both start and end do not sound good. So replace the whistle by a Finish on the Start of the slider.
•00:32:864 (1) - why is there a clap here? First, delete this slider, it doesn't fit well for a Normal difficulty and add a circle at 00:33:022. k, for the hitsound, add a clap at 00:32:707 so it will keep the consistency with your claps.
•00:37:750 (2,3,4) - For this, look at the next box about objects. But for the hitsound add a clap to the circle (2) and as said for the next box, delete the circle (3). For the clap, it will be consistent with your claps.
•01:01:392 - Since you have a custom slider-tick hitsound, add a clap here to keep the consistency with the previous combo.

Objects mod

This box means that I am looking at flows and useless circle/slider that doesn't sound really good or even, doesn't fit well for the difficulty.
You do not have any spinner here! Like the other difficulty, add one at 01:24:719
•00:37:750 (2,3,4) - Do not add any streams on Normal difficulty. Delete the circle (3) please and try to move the circle (2) somewhere else.
•00:16:630 (5) - Make this slider more curved? Like this.

Combo mod

This box is for new combos. If new combos are fitting well with the vocals or if they aren't too big (ex: 23combos)
•00:44:370 (4) - Add a new combo here because of the song.
•00:51:936 (1) - Add a new combo here because the song here is more calm.

Not too much to say here...

[Hard]

Hitsounds mod

This box is for hitsounds. When I look for hitsounds, I am mostly looking for the consistency. Sometimes I may give some suggestions
•00:01:500 (1) - As said for the other difficulty, do not add one whistle to the beginning and another to the end. Replace the beginning's one by a Finish.
•00:42:164 - You have custom slider-tick hitsounds, so you should add a clap here an another clap to the other tick, so it will be consistent.

For the consistency, that's all I have to say.

Objects mod

This box means that I am looking at flows and useless circle/slider that doesn't sound really good or even, doesn't fit well for the difficulty.
•00:02:760 (3,4,5) - This triplets here doesn't sounds good. Well, I mean't, it's not placed in a good place. My suggestion here, is to delete 00:02:918 (4) - and add a circle somewhere at 00:02:603. The song here is better to have this kind of triplets.
•00:05:913 (2,3,4) - The same thing as above. The triplets here doesn't sound good/should be deplaced. So delete the circle at 00:06:070 (3) - and add a circle to 00:05:755.
•00:08:434 (3,4,5) - The same thing as these two points above. 00:08:592 (4) - Delete; 00:08:277 - Add.
I will stop here about tiplets' all the triplets that look like these looks and sounds wrong..
•00:31:761 (3,4) - These circles should be deleted and be replaced by a slider.
•00:27:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - This part sounds really weird... Try to do some pattern that suit with the vocal.
•01:26:926 (4,5,6) - This is just a suggestion, but I would like to see this. To make the Hard a bit more challenging, I would like to see a slider just like this > 1|2. If you do that, add a finish to the end and on the beginning, add a clap to keep the consistency.

Combo mod

This box is for new combos. If new combos are fitting well with the vocals or if they aren't too big (ex: 23combos)
•00:12:217 (1) - Add a new combo here and delete the new combo to the next note.
•01:25:980 (4,5) - It's obvious that these two notes should be with the next combo..

[Xin's Hard] MOD IS NOT FINISHED FOR THIS DIFFICULTY. I actually have to go, so yeah..

This difficulty could be recalled "Xin's Insane" since the Slider Velocity is more high than "Hard" and also doing AR+1 & OD+1 will make all the differance.

Hitsounds mod

This box is for hitsounds. When I look for hitsounds, I am mostly looking for the consistency. Sometimes I may give some suggestions
•00:01:500 (1) - Like I said on every other difficulty, do not add two whistle on the same slider. Mostly in this circonstance. So, Delete the whistle on the beginning and replace it by a Finish. It will be better since the song it's starting there.
•00:04:021 - To make your whistles consistent, add a whistle here.

Objects mod

This box means that I am looking at flows and useless circle/slider that doesn't sound really good or even, doesn't fit well for the difficulty.
•00:08:277 (2,4) - I will suggest you to stack both circles in these two slider's ending, like this: http://puu.sh/1bbmH . It will make it more chanllenging.
•00:09:695 (2,3) - These sliders are not aligned and has a weird spacing. Move the slider (2) to x:300 y:172 and move the slider (3) to x:352 y:264. when doing this, make sure to move 00:11:271 (4,5) - to keep the same spacing.

Combo mod

This box is for new combos. If new combos are fitting well with the vocals or if they aren't too big (ex: 23combos)

Well, good luck!

Tur00 wrote:

I only not fixed anythings in Objects mod the rest Fixed
UPDATED~

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[Easy]
00:32:702 - Add note and add clap? It feels empty for me.... Fixed
01:04:543 (3) - I don't see why hitsound slidertick is on long white tick...... It doesn't follow the music.... but Make a new Rhythm in the Song and sound good :c


[Normal]
* AR +1. Your current approach rate are pretty slow Fixed

01:17:784 (4,1,2,3,4,1) - Why some claps are appear at upbeat (1st and 3rd white tick)? Listen the song there sound the Beats of the clap


[Hard]
00:27:500 (2) - It should snap at 00:27:343, since it follows vocal Fixed
00:51:933 (1) - While the default skin of spinner is red-orange-yellow, this might be hidden for players. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/464810 I dont understand but i change the colour of the 3rd combo .-.
01:02:021 (1) - ^ ^


Good luck~

Thank you for the mod