Aqua Timez - Alones (TV Size) · forum

Tur00

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Topic Starter

Tur00 2012-10-06T15:02:13+00:00

Modded all Diffs~
Updated~

Psdt:
Thanks Nagisawa for the star

Sylphi

osu! Alumni

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Joined February 2012

Sylphi 2012-10-06T17:10:53+00:00

and Shoot a Star =☆

Tur00

608 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Tur00 2012-10-06T19:20:57+00:00

Thanks owo

Tur00

608 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Tur00 2012-10-06T19:36:41+00:00

Full submition
please download again...

Dark Fang

1,981 posts

Joined February 2011

Dark Fang 2012-10-07T09:19:24+00:00

Hi~ Tur00
Let's mod~

[General]

Can you remove .osb file? you don't use SB now.
I think offset is 1485 (-7) just suggestion

[Easy]

00:37:116 (1,2) - 1 grid down?
01:16:208 (3,4,5) - 1 grid left. I think that's good

[Normal]

HP -1?
00:34:909 (4) - NC and 00:35:855 (1) - RNC?
00:48:780 (1) - RNC , 00:49:411 (3) - NC and 00:50:357 (1) - RNC
01:17:469 (3) - remove Clap?

[Hard]

00:32:860 (1,2,3,4) - why don't you use slider instead circle?

[Xin's Hard]

Why don't you rename 'Xin's Insane' and increase difficult? just suggestion
00:18:824 (4) - move to (244,272)?
00:37:582 (4,5,6) - 1 grid down?
01:24:082 (4) - move to (200,160)?

Have a nice day

Tur00

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Tur00 2012-10-09T00:38:33+00:00

updated~

Leorda

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Joined June 2009

Leorda 2012-10-17T15:42:16+00:00

Hi there

[Easy]
00:32:702 - Add note and add clap? It feels empty for me....
01:04:543 (3) - I don't see why hitsound slidertick is on long white tick...... It doesn't follow the music....

[Normal]
* AR +1. Your current approach rate are pretty slow

01:17:784 (4,1,2,3,4,1) - Why some claps are appear at upbeat (1st and 3rd white tick)?

[Hard]
00:27:500 (2) - It should snap at 00:27:343, since it follows vocal
00:51:933 (1) - While the default skin of spinner is red-orange-yellow, this might be hidden for players. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/464810
01:02:021 (1) - ^

Good luck~

Tur00

608 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Tur00 2012-10-17T18:08:12+00:00

Leorda wrote:
Hi there

[Easy]
00:32:702 - Add note and add clap? It feels empty for me.... Fixed
01:04:543 (3) - I don't see why hitsound slidertick is on long white tick...... It doesn't follow the music.... but Make a new Rhythm in the Song and sound good :c

[Normal]
* AR +1. Your current approach rate are pretty slow Fixed

01:17:784 (4,1,2,3,4,1) - Why some claps are appear at upbeat (1st and 3rd white tick)? Listen the song there sound the Beats of the clap

[Hard]
00:27:500 (2) - It should snap at 00:27:343, since it follows vocal Fixed
00:51:933 (1) - While the default skin of spinner is red-orange-yellow, this might be hidden for players. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/464810 I dont understand but i change the colour of the 3rd combo .-.
01:02:021 (1) - ^ ^

Good luck~

Thank you for the mod

Deni

Deni 2012-10-19T18:36:29+00:00

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General

Folder seems fine

Easy

00:28:919 (4) - Slider seems a bit strange..
00:33:096 - to 00:33:569 - Why so empty here?
00:51:933 (1) - imo this spinner doesn't fit and it ends suddenly because his voice actually stops here 00:56:662

Normal

Not much to say here, only:

You could try to improve some slider..
Improve your spacing because sometimes it feels strange to play, use the whole grid more and not only the middle...

Hard

Pretty much the same like in Normal...

00:41:845 (4) - This slider doesn't look that awesome, maybe just make a wiggle -->

Xin

00:29:865 (8) - Make this slider symmetrical, you can see that the head and the foot of the slider are not on the same level..
01:27:242 - Use a spinner here?

Good diff!

If you have any questions contact me ingame or via pm.

Tur00

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Topic Starter

Tur00 2012-10-20T00:30:16+00:00

Deni wrote:

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General

Folder seems fine

Easy

00:28:919 (4) - Slider seems a bit strange.. i like how are .
00:33:096 - to 00:33:569 - Why so empty here? Fixed
00:51:933 (1) - imo this spinner doesn't fit and it ends suddenly because his voice actually stops here 00:56:662 i stop it there because "it ends suddenly" if i finish it where you say ...then i put it there

Normal

Not much to say here, only: ok..

You could try to improve some slider..
Improve your spacing because sometimes it feels strange to play, use the whole grid more and not only the middle...

Hard

Pretty much the same like in Normal...

00:41:845 (4) - This slider doesn't look that awesome, maybe just make a wiggle --> Don't Like

Xin

00:29:865 (8) - Make this slider symmetrical, you can see that the head and the foot of the slider are not on the same level.. Fixed
01:27:242 - Use a spinner here? no.

Good diff!

If you have any questions contact me ingame or via pm.

Thanks.

XinCrin

2,846 posts

Joined January 2012

XinCrin 2012-10-22T05:05:23+00:00

Por favor reemplaza esto hize algunos cambios

SPOILER

osu file format v10

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AudioLeadIn: 1650
PreviewTime: 27348
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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Title:Alones (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Alones (TV Size)
Artist:Aqua Timez
ArtistUnicode:Aqua Timez
Creator:Tur00
Version:Xin's Hard
Source:Bleach
Tags:opening XinCrin
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[CSGA]Ar3sgice

4,298 posts

Joined July 2011

[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2012-10-22T05:58:54+00:00

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Tur00

608 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Tur00 2012-10-22T15:04:42+00:00

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
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Tur00

608 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Tur00 2012-10-22T15:53:34+00:00

XinCrin wrote:

Por favor reemplaza esto hize algunos cambios

SPOILER

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Ok~
Updated with the changes of the Xin's diff

SkyDevil

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

SkyDevil 2012-10-23T19:31:44+00:00

Moddiingg~~

Aqua Timez *3*

General
BPM 190 (not 190.32, alot of bats will complain about it later)

Easy
00:25:136 - Add a break here, the star rating won't increase

Normal
Nothing :O

Hard
00:05:590 (1) - Please don't stack this with 00:04:014 (2) -
00:53:509 (6) - I think this slider is ugly

01:18:099 (1) - No NC

Xin's Hard
01:27:242 (1) - Why NC?

Good map, I think its almost ready for ranking :3 Good luck~

Tur00

608 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Tur00 2012-10-23T20:51:15+00:00

updated~

Weez

2,318 posts

Joined February 2009

Weez 2012-10-25T16:38:26+00:00

mod time!!!

Easy

*Mapping Issues
00:10:319 (3,1) - 3 should really follow the same pattern as in 1 from the start of the combo. Try doing this: http://puu.sh/1iA7p http://puu.sh/1iA7Z
00:51:933 (1) - This slider is too long and tiring. This area is easily mappable, I strongly consider mapping it.
01:08:326 (2,3) - Between these notes is an empty beat, remove 3 and extend 2 to finish where 3 was to fill this void. http://puu.sh/1iAho

Normal

00:08:112 (2) - Slider doesn't work at all here, feels awkward during play. Change this into 3 hit circles works better.
00:31:756 (5,1) - Really hard for a normal diff. Instead just making it a hit circle on the white tick. http://puu.sh/1iAFz
*Hitsound Issues
00:42:475 (2) - The clap shouldn't be on the repeat but on the slider tick (make a new timing point like you did for others)
01:20:937 (2) - The hitsound pattern for this slider should be the same as 01:18:415 (2) -

Hard

Looks ok to me.

I'll mod the last diff later on tonight so be patient please.

Tur00

608 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Tur00 2012-10-25T18:36:07+00:00

updated~

whymeman

osu! Alumni

3,432 posts

Joined November 2008

whymeman 2012-10-27T04:48:58+00:00

Alright, here's how it's going to go. The map seems solid so far after enough test plays. The only thing I have to nit pick about is the need for a better background or a set of backgrounds. It's optional, but it would give a better feel from the map if you can find some more fitting Bleach BGs. Make sure to notify me of your choice when you're done.

Snowy Dream

2,195 posts

Joined September 2009

Snowy Dream 2012-10-27T06:20:16+00:00

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue

Red - Important or Issue
Blue - You'd better fix them
Black - Normal Suggestions

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[Easy]
00:21:826 (1) - Downbeat here(　00:24:190　),so try add finish
00:30:180 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - So many notes here? It seems too hard for beginners
00:54:455 (5) -

162,330,54455,2,0,B|125:301|125:235|170:207,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

01:27:242 - Maybe a bit loud,lower the volume to 45%

[Normal]
00:11:580 (3) - Too loud here, lower the volume to 45%
00:21:826 (1) - Downbeat here(00:24:190),so try add finish
01:20:621 (1) - Remove newcombo then add newcombo to 01:20:937 (6) instead
01:27:242 - Maybe a bit loud,lower the volume to 45%

[Hard]
00:11:580 (5) - Too loud here, lower the volume to 45%
00:21:826 (1) - Downbeat here(00:24:190),so try add finish
00:46:889 (1) - Add finish?
00:50:357 (1) - Continuous finish makes my ears feel bad :< Try use whistle instead.
01:27:242 - Maybe a bit loud,lower the volume to 45%

[Xin's Hard]
hmm? It is a hard diff ,isnt it? So make the jump [such as 00:08:427 (3)] easier or just change the diff name into "Xin's Insane"
00:11:580 (5) - Too loud here, lower the volume to 45%
00:52:879 (4) - It makes me feel uncomfortable ,try stack with 00:52:721 (3,5)
01:17:784 (9) - Clap since the drum is here
01:18:099 (1) - Then I think that the clap here is not good.
01:23:143 (1) - Weird spacing :< You could add a note at 01:22:986 then I feel better
01:27:242 - Maybe a bit loud,lower the volume to 45%
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Nice Mapset :3
GL

XinCrin

2,846 posts

Joined January 2012

XinCrin 2012-10-27T15:01:31+00:00

Snowy Dream wrote:
[Xin's Hard]
hmm? It is a hard diff ,isnt it? So make the jump [such as 00:08:427 (3)] easier or just change the diff name into "Xin's Insane"
00:11:580 (5) - Too loud here, lower the volume to 45%
00:52:879 (4) - It makes me feel uncomfortable ,try stack with 00:52:721 (3,5)
01:17:784 (9) - Clap since the drum is here
01:18:099 (1) - Then I think that the clap here is not good.
01:23:143 (1) - Weird spacing :< You could add a note at 01:22:986 then I feel better
01:27:242 - Maybe a bit loud,lower the volume to 45%
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Nice Mapset :3
GL

All Fixed , Thanks for Mod:

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whymeman

osu! Alumni

3,432 posts

Joined November 2008

whymeman 2012-11-03T22:14:04+00:00

Hmmm.... better than before and got more time to actually look at it. The map itself flows and plays smooth as well so i'll give it a bubble then.

Tur00

608 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Tur00 2012-11-03T23:55:02+00:00

whymeman wrote:
Hmmm.... better than before and got more time to actually look at it. The map itself flows and plays smooth as well so i'll give it a bubble then.

Thx *0*

Kryptogram

600 posts

Joined December 2010

Kryptogram 2012-11-04T00:00:53+00:00

Gogogogogogogo Tur00 !!!

Kawayi Rika

osu! Alumni

3,635 posts

Joined December 2010

Kawayi Rika 2012-11-04T00:17:32+00:00

Popping bubble due unrankable stuff ~

You can not silence both slider ticks and slider slides together ~

Also fix Unicode in Easy diff pls ~

Don't ask me recheck ~

Tur00

608 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Tur00 2012-11-04T01:50:54+00:00

Kawayi Rika wrote:
Popping bubble due unrankable stuff ~

You can not silence both slider ticks and slider slides together ~

Also fix Unicode in Easy diff pls ~

Don't ask me recheck ~

Ok...
Fixed ..
i will ask to other MAT/BAT for the recheck ..
Thanks -.-"

Kawayi Rika

osu! Alumni

3,635 posts

Joined December 2010

Kawayi Rika 2012-11-04T19:15:52+00:00

Map is not really good for me ~ but ok if you really need me rebblue ~

Getting 5+ more mod and trying improve map ~

You can ask me recheck ~ if you think ready ~

Last edited by Kawayi Rika 2012-11-04T19:20:20+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Scorpiour

2,633 posts

Joined May 2011

Scorpiour 2012-11-04T19:20:13+00:00

glance at the map.

To be honest i can't say the map is ready:

Beats is okay. Placement still needs more works and hitsounds.... i recommend to remake because it is mess...

and another issue is the diff spread. try to make it more smooth~

Tur00

608 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Tur00 2012-11-05T03:46:27+00:00

Kawayi Rika wrote:
Map is not really good for me ~ but ok if you really need me rebblue ~

Getting 5+ more mod and trying improve map ~

You can ask me recheck ~ if you think ready ~

pff
a condition to ask the check
No problem if you dont want do the recheck
i will talk with others to that
as i said..
Thank you --"

Scorpiour wrote:
glance at the map.

To be honest i can't say the map is ready:

Beats is okay. Placement still needs more works and hitsounds.... i recommend to remake because it is mess...

and another issue is the diff spread. try to make it more smooth~

thanks
for that words...
if you think that the map isn't ready you can : mod or ignored
Simple :3
i dont remake because i like how is the map :3
Thanks...

XinCrin

2,846 posts

Joined January 2012

XinCrin 2012-11-05T20:08:56+00:00

;Thanks;

Sekai

6,376 posts

Joined February 2011

Sekai 2012-11-06T18:54:06+00:00

Mod4Mod from your queue~

Easy:

00:36:485 (4) - I think like this is better then the other one, dont forget to fix the spacing~
00:44:997 (4) - remove the whistle on the end it's really dont fit at all~
01:17:154 (1,2) - switch the NC here?

Normal:
This normal is fine~

Hard:

00:31:441 (1,5) - switch this nc sounds better. Because the vocal was still going ><
00:34:278 (1) - remove this nc ^ with same reason above~
01:25:350 (1) - remove this short nc >< dont look so good to me~

Xin's Hard:
Fine diff ~~

Nice map and sorry for my poor mod ><~~ I hope this help you. Good luck~

Kawayi Rika

osu! Alumni

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Joined December 2010

Kawayi Rika 2012-11-07T18:54:40+00:00

I'm really don't like map,so i don't mod this ~

But ok,bubble back ~ due fixed unrankable stuff ~

Tur00

608 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Tur00 2012-11-07T19:04:40+00:00

Kawayi Rika wrote:
I'm really don't like map,so i don't mod this ~

But ok,bubble back ~ due fixed unrankable stuff ~

Thanks

SC-DrawerX3

76 posts

Joined March 2012

SC-DrawerX3 2012-11-07T19:56:53+00:00

Request from my Modding Queue~

[Easy]

00:05:275 (1) - Maybe diffrent placement? Kinda annoys me
00:30:495 (2,4) - Claps on the ticks are louder than the rest of the claps
01:03:282 (2) - clap on tick sounds weird to me, maby just the slider begin and end with clap
01:20:937 (1) - move first sliderpoint one grid up so it's symmetical

I did not like the placement so much but it's not a big problem

[Normal]

00:32:860 (1) - playing this felt awkward, maybe remove slider and add silce on 00:33:017 ?
00:42:790 Tick needs clap
00:45:312 (2) - clap on begin
00:56:977 (1) - Finish sound on 80%?
01:20:937 (1) - clap instead of whistle on begin
01:19:991 (3) - whistle

[Hard]

The spacing could be greater.

00:27:027 add circle with clap, this is where beat starts
00:32:702 add note with clap
00:32:860 (1) - remove clap on begin

[Xin's Hard]

The spacing could be greater. The first part of kiai had a really good spacing.

00:13:787 (4,5) - meh no flow
00:52:721 (3,4,5,6,7) - Stops flow and is not so good to play, but this may be my personal preference
00:54:455 (3) - move one grid down
00:58:711 (5,6) - not perfect but acceptable
01:12:740 (1,2,3) - Spacing? why jump?
01:14:001 (5,1) - ^
01:26:611 (1,2,3,4,1) - make more like a circle, looks ugly to me >:

The maps are pretty neat, not perfect but almost :3

Good luck~

Tur00

608 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Tur00 2012-11-07T23:52:23+00:00

SC-DrawerX3 wrote:
Request from my Modding Queue~

[Easy]

00:05:275 (1) - Maybe diffrent placement? Kinda annoys me
00:30:495 (2,4) - Claps on the ticks are louder than the rest of the claps
01:03:282 (2) - clap on tick sounds weird to me, maby just the slider begin and end with clap
01:20:937 (1) - move first sliderpoint one grid up so it's symmetical

I did not like the placement so much but it's not a big problem

[Normal]

00:32:860 (1) - playing this felt awkward, maybe remove slider and add silce on 00:33:017 ?
00:42:790 Tick needs clap
00:45:312 (2) - clap on begin
00:56:977 (1) - Finish sound on 80%?
01:20:937 (1) - clap instead of whistle on begin
01:19:991 (3) - whistle

[Hard]

The spacing could be greater.

00:27:027 add circle with clap, this is where beat starts
00:32:702 add note with clap
00:32:860 (1) - remove clap on begin

[Xin's Hard]

The spacing could be greater. The first part of kiai had a really good spacing.

00:13:787 (4,5) - meh no flow
00:52:721 (3,4,5,6,7) - Stops flow and is not so good to play, but this may be my personal preference
00:54:455 (3) - move one grid down
00:58:711 (5,6) - not perfect but acceptable
01:12:740 (1,2,3) - Spacing? why jump?
01:14:001 (5,1) - ^
01:26:611 (1,2,3,4,1) - make more like a circle, looks ugly to me >:

The maps are pretty neat, not perfect but almost :3

Good luck~

i check the things but i think that the hitsounds is good
Thanks for the mod too

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

Joined August 2008

Andrea 2012-11-12T09:51:57+00:00

~Normal~

OD +1 is much better.

01:06:435 (4) - New combo.
01:07:381 (1) - Remove new combo.

~Hard~

01:20:937 (2,3) - Stack them better.

~Xin's Hard~

Rename it to Insane.

00:50:357 (3) - New combo due to the slowdown.
01:26:296 (5) - New combo.
01:26:611 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:27:242 (1) - ^

Tur00

608 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Tur00 2012-11-12T15:35:30+00:00

everything fixed
Thanks for the mod .

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

Joined August 2008

Andrea 2012-11-12T16:16:28+00:00

Good enough.

Ranked~