This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年4月25日 at 18:38:55

Artist: Linkin Park
Title: What I've Done
Tags: flask transformers minutes to midnight Chester Bennington Rob Bourdon Brad Delson Dave Farrel Joe Hahn Mike Shinoda
BPM: 120.05
Filesize: 4835kb
Play Time: 03:10
Difficulties Available:

1. Flask's Easy (0.75 stars, 105 notes)
2. Hard (4.6 stars, 288 notes)
3. Normal (2.53 stars, 183 notes)

Download: Linkin Park - What I've Done
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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https://osu.ppy.sh/s/857987

好吧先佔沙發~~~

Flask wrote:

好吧先佔沙發~~~

OWO

前排围观

围观围观~

OH WOW! Shooting star? Can you see it? Make a wish! :3

~

-Bakari- wrote:

OH WOW! Shooting star? Can you see it? Make a wish! :3

~

OwO :3 baka bakari <333

#modhelp

Timing Check

BPM: 120.05

This is my first mod, so it might not be that useful. Feel free to ignore any of my suggestions!

Overall: I found the black combo color annoying (not so distinctive on the black parts) on the black-and-white background, maybe change it to dark gray?

Easy:
01:32:463 (2,3) - Maybe change these two into 1 slider (starting at the time position of 2). Now it sounds (to me) like the slider starts to late (w.r.t. the lyrics)
01:34:462 (4,1) - ^

Hard:
02:39:934 (5,6,7) - maybe unstack these? I read it as if there was a quarter beat between them.

Insane:
00:55:478 (4) - I fail to spot this note until the last moment (more than once). Maybe it is resolved when you adjust the black combo color.
01:16:969 (1,2) - I find these sliders awkward w.r.t. the lyrics. Although maybe it's just me.
02:31:938 (1) - remove new combo(?)

That's it. Good map btw!

florrat wrote:

This is my first mod, so it might not be that useful. Feel free to ignore any of my suggestions!

Overall: I found the black combo color annoying (not so distinctive on the black parts) on the black-and-white background, maybe change it to dark gray? fixed~

Easy:
01:32:463 (2,3) - Maybe change these two into 1 slider (starting at the time position of 2). Now it sounds (to me) like the slider starts to late (w.r.t. the lyrics) disagree._.
01:34:462 (4,1) - ^ ^

Hard:
02:39:934 (5,6,7) - maybe unstack these? I read it as if there was a quarter beat between them. good>w<

Insane:
00:55:478 (4) - I fail to spot this note until the last moment (more than once). Maybe it is resolved when you adjust the black combo color. hmm..fix the color
01:16:969 (1,2) - I find these sliders awkward w.r.t. the lyrics. Although maybe it's just me. fix
02:31:938 (1) - remove new combo(?) no._.

That's it. Good map btw!

thx for modding~

Hi~ moe mod from #modreqs :3

Insane

00:26:490 -this stream better replace on slider 1/2 better follow the music
00:42:983 - put here volume 65% bcz music quiet here
00:45:482(2) - I think better put this note in centre http://puu.sh/17MtA
00:56:353 - better remove this note, sounds better
00:58:977 - here volume 65%
01:07:973 - here better put slider 1/1 It's better folow for *done* or http://puu.sh/17MwT this sounds good too (and the same moments too)
01:14:970 - ^ 01:15:345 -this beat not follow fot anything~ http://puu.sh/17Mzu This better variant (and the same moment too)
01:20:218 - replace on slider 1/2
02:00:951 - this spins better remove and add notes here http://puu.sh/17MCI It's better follow the music and put spin 02:04:949 - 02:10:447
02:22:942 - Put here volume 55%
02:30:938 - 65%
02:46:307 - remove this note, not sound here
03:03:425 - this notes better replace on notes http://puu.sh/17MFA
03:13:046 - 03:16:919 - add spin here,It will be logic end~

Hard

00:24:991(1,2,3) - stack better
01:00:726(5) - better put this note in onother place bcz repeat hides http://puu.sh/17MJs
01:03:475(3,5) - make this sliders more roundish http://puu.sh/17MJZ
01:15:470 - maybe ctrl+J ? looks better
01:17:469 - ctrl+R

so many straight sliders looks very boring ;w; make some sliders more roundish~

Good luck~

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi~ moe mod from #modreqs :3

Insane

00:26:490 -this stream better replace on slider 1/2 better follow the music
00:42:983 - put here volume 65% bcz music quiet here
00:45:482(2) - I think better put this note in centre http://puu.sh/17MtA
00:56:353 - better remove this note, sounds better
00:58:977 - here volume 65%
01:07:973 - here better put slider 1/1 It's better folow for *done* or http://puu.sh/17MwT this sounds good too (and the same moments too)
01:14:970 - ^ 01:15:345 -this beat not follow fot anything~ http://puu.sh/17Mzu This better variant (and the same moment too) i want to maintain this ._.
01:20:218 - replace on slider 1/2
02:00:951 - this spins better remove and add notes here http://puu.sh/17MCI It's better follow the music and put spin 02:04:949 - 02:10:447 fixed~ but the spinner is tooooo long cuz some long spinners at the end ._.
02:22:942 - Put here volume 55%
02:30:938 - 65%
02:46:307 - remove this note, not sound here
03:03:425 - this notes better replace on notes http://puu.sh/17MFA
03:13:046 - 03:16:919 - add spin here,It will be logic end~

Hard

00:24:991(1,2,3) - stack better
01:00:726(5) - better put this note in onother place bcz repeat hides http://puu.sh/17MJs oh i forgot this..fixed~
01:03:475(3,5) - make this sliders more roundish http://puu.sh/17MJZ
01:15:470 - maybe ctrl+J ? looks better
01:17:469 - ctrl+R

so many straight sliders looks very boring ;w; make some sliders more roundish~

Good luck~

others all fixed :3 thx~

Katty Pie wrote:

Maybe spinners long, but it good follow the music~

hmm..ok~

Hi o/

[General]
- maybe use this hitsound: http://puu.sh/17Q4T sounds cool with this map ;D

[Easy]
- You used too many new combos; remove a few or maybe add a new combo color
- 00:48:481 (2) - doesn`t fit the beat; double the sliders lenght or add a repeat
- 03:00:926 (4,1) - add a note between them
- 03:09:422 (1,2) - replace the finish-hitsounds with claps
- 03:10:922 (1) - replace the clap at the repeat with a finish

[Normal]

not finished ~

[Hard]
- don`t that much notes:
- 00:54:728 (6) - too hard to see for hard
- 01:16:469 (5) - same here
- 01:34:462 (5) - ^
- 01:36:711 (5) - ^
- 01:50:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part is confusing with that low AR
- 02:54:928 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - this one too

[Insane]
- 00:30:488 (4) - remove clap
- 00:45:982 (5,6) - try make them round
- 01:11:846 (3,4) - maybe remove them and add a repeat at the previous slider instead
- 01:34:962 (1,2,3) - maybe rotate them 60° anti-clockwise; looks better I think
- 02:52:554 (4) - remove this one and resnap 02:52:679 (5)

Awesome song of an awesome band \:D/
Good luck for getting ranked ;D

poke me when it's okay to mod it

Reyden wrote:

Hi o/

[General]
- maybe use this hitsound: http://puu.sh/17Q4T sounds cool with this map ;D i'll try

[Easy]
- You used too many new combos; remove a few or maybe add a new combo color this is ok
- 00:48:481 (2) - doesn`t fit the beat; double the sliders lenght or add a repeat ok
- 03:00:926 (4,1) - add a note between them ~
- 03:09:422 (1,2) - replace the finish-hitsounds with claps ~
- 03:10:922 (1) - replace the clap at the repeat with a finish ~

[Normal]

not finished ~

[Hard]
- don`t that much notes: i think this is such easy stacks that they are readable
- 00:54:728 (6) - too hard to see for hard
- 01:16:469 (5) - same here
- 01:34:462 (5) - ^ fix
- 01:36:711 (5) - ^
- 01:50:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part is confusing with that low AR
- 02:54:928 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - this one too

[Insane]
- 00:30:488 (4) - remove clap fix
- 00:45:982 (5,6) - try make them round i use so many round slider that i wanna have a try ._.
- 01:11:846 (3,4) - maybe remove them and add a repeat at the previous slider instead no._.
- 01:34:962 (1,2,3) - maybe rotate them 60° anti-clockwise; looks better I think good~
- 02:52:554 (4) - remove this one and resnap 02:52:679 (5) ~

Awesome song of an awesome band \:D/
Good luck for getting ranked ;D

thx~~

hey!

as promised <3

[General]
o.o add more tags: Chester Bennington Rob Bourdon Brad Delson Dave Farrel Joe Hahn Mike Shinoda
colours are really odd. try something close to default colours but add some shades of gray example note: bright colours may hurt players' eyes
hitsounds are too loud for me (-5%-10% volume)
no breaks during kiai time. it's unrankable
some claps feels off vocals/music. please check them all! o3o


[Easy]
sometimes yourr comboing feels random but it fits with song. i don't know why. ~.~
01:07:973 (1) - vocals apper right in the middle of this slider. it feels quite confusing and looks random. try something closer to vocals? i'd like to suggest you this example
01:15:969 (2) - i guess you forgot to add reverse for this slider :< it fits here and 01:16:469 - feels empty
01:32:962 (3) - according to your pattern there's missed new combo.
01:56:952 (1) - confusing shape for beginners. strongly not recommended for Easiest diff. (if you rename this diff to Normal it probably will be okay)

[Normal+]
looks a bit messy because of low AR :<
sometimes spacing feels inconsistent because of big grid level. agree? 00:27:989 (2,3,4) - x0.06 difference for example. switch to lowwer grid lvl (4) or disable grid snapp to fix it.
00:28:989 (1) - it looks weird to have blanket slider and not using it :/ so.. here's ultra-nazzi example for you orz
01:07:973 (2) - covered by spinner's hitburst highly not recommended fr Normal but it's okay for Hard diff.
01:15:969 (2) - same as above.
01:45:957 - normal section with some LOUD claps to make this part more awesome! >.</

[Hard]
personally i think that spacing changes here are overused and makes your flow hard to understand, anyway, it's just me. feel free to ignore.
note: patterns like this will looks "OMG TOO MESY AND HARD AS HELL TO READ" for players (and with hidden it'll looks terrible, imo (02:25:940 (1,2,3,4) - here for axample)
02:54:928 (4) - new combo to separate this pattern from previous. also fits with vocals.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
conclusion: actually this is a really good beatmap and awesome song. but sme general probleams (tags, diff names, colours) makes this map looks bad. fix it and you'll get a good map. ~

What I've done~

-Bakari- wrote:

hey!

as promised <3

[General]
o.o add more tags: Chester Bennington Rob Bourdon Brad Delson Dave Farrel Joe Hahn Mike Shinoda added
colours are really odd. try something close to default colours but add some shades of gray example note: bright colours may hurt players' eyes roddie's in the end......icebean's from the inside......>w<
hitsounds are too loud for me (-5%-10% volume) fixed
no breaks during kiai time. it's unrankable fixed
some claps feels off vocals/music. please check them all! o3o

rename diffs? (Based on your Slider Velocity)

Easy => Actually this diff is Normal.
Make AR , OD and HP Drain higher (about 4-5) and feels free to rename this diff to normal

Normal+ => this kind of diff names is outdated. It's better to rename Normal+ to Hard
Make AR , OD and HP Drain higher (about 5-6) and feels free to rename this diff to Hard.

[Hard]
meh. Actually you're able to rename this diff to Insane
because it fels as Insane. Maybe not extremly hard insane but still Insane.(AR - 8) (others - 7)

i made easy and normal+ hard and renamed ._.

[Easy]
sometimes yourr comboing feels random but it fits with song. i don't know why. ~.~ vocal?no..drum?no..wtf..
01:07:973 (1) - vocals apper right in the middle of this slider. it feels quite confusing and looks random. try something closer to vocals? i'd like to suggest you this example
01:15:969 (2) - i guess you forgot to add reverse for this slider :< it fits here and 01:16:469 - feels empty
01:32:962 (3) - according to your pattern there's missed new combo.
01:56:952 (1) - confusing shape for beginners. strongly not recommended for Easiest diff. (if you rename this diff to Normal it probably will be okay)
fixed~

[Normal+]
looks a bit messy because of low AR :< ar=7 after rename
sometimes spacing feels inconsistent because of big grid level. agree? 00:27:989 (2,3,4) - x0.06 difference for example. switch to lowwer grid lvl (4) or disable grid snapp to fix it. ASH is very pro T.T fixed
00:28:989 (1) - it looks weird to have blanket slider and not using it :/ so.. here's ultra-nazzi example for you orz
01:07:973 (2) - covered by spinner's hitburst highly not recommended fr Normal but it's okay for Hard diff.
01:15:969 (2) - same as above.
01:45:957 - normal section with some LOUD claps to make this part more awesome! >.</
fixed~

[Hard]
personally i think that spacing changes here are overused and makes your flow hard to understand, anyway, it's just me. feel free to ignore.
note: patterns like this will looks "OMG TOO MESY AND HARD AS HELL TO READ" for players (and with hidden it'll looks terrible, imo (02:25:940 (1,2,3,4) - here for axample) >_< i still don't know why i did this orz
02:54:928 (4) - new combo to separate this pattern from previous. also fits with vocals.
fixed~

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
conclusion: actually this is a really good beatmap and awesome song. but sme general probleams (tags, diff names, colours) makes this map looks bad. fix it and you'll get a good map. ~
0.0 ok

What I've done~

thx for mod~

"Give kudosu star" button is broken. orz
what i've done D:

-Bakari- wrote:

"Give kudosu star" button is broken. orz
what i've done D:

wtf(my userpage button is broken 2 orz

Edit:

哇又一个LP饭。。

Strawberry wrote:

哇又一个LP饭。。

0.0

EDIT: the 233rd post wwwwwww

Cool map and song!

D:

先占mod位 (??


Edit: 你先用這mapset 我有空給你個easy

Flask wrote:

D:

先占mod位 (??

0.0

Hi x3
mod from #modresq

[Normal]
00:42:983 - if you could change this because I see spin symmetry
00:44:982 - ^
02:26:940 - http://puu.sh/1cdMl Maybe something because 02:23:941 - did that

[Hard]
01:07:723 - add note
01:12:221 - maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/1cdDb
01:15:720 - add note
03:12:921 - delete note and put here the spin up 03:16:919 -

I'm not very good at modding because I'm just starting. But I hope I've helped a bit.
Good luck with your map.

sorry if my English is bad

[Yue] wrote:

Hi x3
mod from #modresq

[Normal]
00:42:983 - if you could change this because I see spin symmetry no 0.0
00:44:982 - ^ ^
02:26:940 - http://puu.sh/1cdMl Maybe something because 02:23:941 - did that no ._.

[Hard]
01:07:723 - add note ok~
01:12:221 - maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/1cdDb no, but delete the spinner and change 0.0
01:15:720 - add note ok~
03:12:921 - delete note and put here the spin up 03:16:919 - i don't like it 0.0

I'm not very good at modding because I'm just starting. But I hope I've helped a bit.
Good luck with your map.

sorry if my English is bad

thx for mod~

[Normal]

1. 00:50:980 (1) - Finish?
2. 00:42:983 - 这段开始的soft音效部分不去在鼓点加点音效有点可惜, 考虑用normal hitsound当做custom clap来用来对应鼓点试试? 默认clap当然也还是可以...
3. 01:16:219 (2) - 这个clap的地方有点奇怪, 我觉得在01:16:469 slider尾再加个或者去掉这个只在slider尾加都会更好些
4. 01:43:958 (3,4) - 都加上finish和前面两个finish形成四连finish听起来感觉更好? 如果这么弄的话把01:44:458 (4)的clap去掉
5. 01:47:456 (1) - clap?
6. 02:05:074 - 这里我觉得还可以再加个spinner, 持续到02:10:447或者02:10:947结束
7. 02:24:941 (2,3,4) - (nazi)不知道你是不是想摆直线, 这三个不在一条直线上

[Hard]

1. 01:01:475 (1) - clap?
2. 01:07:973 (3) - 这个slider感觉短了半拍, 不应该在01:08:473结束么?
3. 01:15:969 (3) - ^
4. 01:41:459 (1) - clap?
5. 01:44:208 (3) - ^
6. 01:44:957 (1,2,3,4) - 我感觉这四个不加finish也不加clap, 单纯用normal音效逐渐加大音量感觉就很棒
7. 02:05:074 - 同normal
8. 02:23:441 (2) - spinner后的note不加NC么
9. 02:54:928 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个如果边缘一点都不重叠的话看起来会更好看

[Insane]

1. 01:10:472 (3) - clap?
2. 01:41:459 (1) - ^
3. 01:42:208 (2) - ^
4. 02:04:449 (8) - 这个突然减速有点突然, 而且没有nc也不太好预判

整体还是不错的

Breeze wrote:

[Normal]

1. 00:50:980 (1) - Finish?
2. 00:42:983 - 这段开始的soft音效部分不去在鼓点加点音效有点可惜, 考虑用normal hitsound当做custom clap来用来对应鼓点试试? 默认clap当然也还是可以...
3. 01:16:219 (2) - 这个clap的地方有点奇怪, 我觉得在01:16:469 slider尾再加个或者去掉这个只在slider尾加都会更好些 这个clap只能这样
4. 01:43:958 (3,4) - 都加上finish和前面两个finish形成四连finish听起来感觉更好? 如果这么弄的话把01:44:458 (4)的clap去掉 不喜欢
5. 01:47:456 (1) - clap?
6. 02:05:074 - 这里我觉得还可以再加个spinner, 持续到02:10:447或者02:10:947结束
7. 02:24:941 (2,3,4) - (nazi)不知道你是不是想摆直线, 这三个不在一条直线上

[Hard]

1. 01:01:475 (1) - clap?
2. 01:07:973 (3) - 这个slider感觉短了半拍, 不应该在01:08:473结束么?
3. 01:15:969 (3) - ^
4. 01:41:459 (1) - clap?
5. 01:44:208 (3) - ^
6. 01:44:957 (1,2,3,4) - 我感觉这四个不加finish也不加clap, 单纯用normal音效逐渐加大音量感觉就很棒
7. 02:05:074 - 同normal
8. 02:23:441 (2) - spinner后的note不加NC么
9. 02:54:928 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个如果边缘一点都不重叠的话看起来会更好看

[Insane]

1. 01:10:472 (3) - clap?
2. 01:41:459 (1) - ^
3. 01:42:208 (2) - ^
4. 02:04:449 (8) - 这个突然减速有点突然, 而且没有nc也不太好预判

整体还是不错的

其他都fix了~ thxformod

Hello, Sorry for the delay,,

General

-- I prefer Disabling Countdowns
-- 03:13:046 (1) - Delete Finish
-- Add a timeline of increasing the hit sound at 01:05:974 - ?

Flask's Easy

-- Delete the time line here 02:09:947 -

01:20:967 (4) - Add Finish at the Head
01:48:955 (4) - Just 1 Grid Right
01:52:954 (3) - Add Finish at the Head
01:59:951 (3,4) - 1 Grid up
03:10:921 (2) - Finish at the Head

Normal

00:24:741 (4) - 1 Grid Left
00:30:488 (3) - Delete Clap at the Start
00:49:980 (2,3) - Delete Clap
00:56:977 (3) - 1 Grid up
01:17:469 (2) - Add Clap
02:31:938 (3) - Distance Check
02:54:179 (3) - 1 Grid down (If this breaks a line, then maybe you should work once again..)

Hard

00:47:231 (2) - 1 Grid down, overlap with (1) doesn't look good
00:54:228 (5) - Distance Check
01:17:969 (5) - Add Clap at the End
01:39:959 (3) - 1 Grid up, overlap with (1) also doesn't look good
02:32:937 (1) - It feels like a space error to me
02:33:937 (3,4) - Put whistle in the head of (4), and delete the one in (3)
02:34:937 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Hit sounds,,?
02:36:686 ( ) - Add a note, beat exists in the song and adding here will maintain your flow
02:51:929 (3) - Add clap at the end
02:54:428 (4) - Distance?
03:09:422 (1,2,3,4) - IMO, Finishes here sounds loud

Insane

00:30:238 (4) - Though here is Stacked properly, testing makes a weird stack. Just to note you..
01:04:974 (1) - Add Finish
01:12:971 (1,3) - IMO, whistle in the slider doesn't fit.. If you disagree, still delete Whistle in the head of (3)
01:39:460 (2) - Ctrl+G?
01:52:954 (1,3) - Same opinion.
01:57:452 (1,2) - Delete Finish
02:00:951 (1) - Add Finish at the head
02:04:449 (1) - Add finish at the end
02:56:927 (9) - Add Finish
03:02:925 (1,4) - Same opinion. For here, don't forget to delete the whistle in (4)
03:09:422 (1,2,3) - Finishes here sounds loud

Good luck~

Sonnyc wrote:

Hello, Sorry for the delay,,

General

-- I prefer Disabling Countdowns who cares ;w;
-- 03:13:046 (1) - Delete Finish no ._.
-- Add a timeline of increasing the hit sound at 01:05:974 - ? ok

Normal

all fixed
00:24:741 (4) - 1 Grid Left
00:30:488 (3) - Delete Clap at the Start
00:49:980 (2,3) - Delete Clap
00:56:977 (3) - 1 Grid up
01:17:469 (2) - Add Clap
02:31:938 (3) - Distance Check
02:54:179 (3) - 1 Grid down (If this breaks a line, then maybe you should work once again..)

Hard

00:47:231 (2) - 1 Grid down, overlap with (1) doesn't look good
00:54:228 (5) - Distance Check
01:17:969 (5) - Add Clap at the End
01:39:959 (3) - 1 Grid up, overlap with (1) also doesn't look good
02:32:937 (1) - It feels like a space error to me
02:33:937 (3,4) - Put whistle in the head of (4), and delete the one in (3)
02:34:937 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Hit sounds,,?
02:36:686 ( ) - Add a note, beat exists in the song and adding here will maintain your flow
02:51:929 (3) - Add clap at the end
02:54:428 (4) - Distance?
03:09:422 (1,2,3,4) - IMO, Finishes here sounds loud climax? 0.0 imo these finished are needed
others all fixed~

Insane

00:30:238 (4) - Though here is Stacked properly, testing makes a weird stack. Just to note you..
01:04:974 (1) - Add Finish
01:12:971 (1,3) - IMO, whistle in the slider doesn't fit.. If you disagree, still delete Whistle in the head of (3)
01:39:460 (2) - Ctrl+G?
01:52:954 (1,3) - Same opinion.
01:57:452 (1,2) - Delete Finish
02:00:951 (1) - Add Finish at the head
02:04:449 (1) - Add finish at the end
02:56:927 (9) - Add Finish
03:02:925 (1,4) - Same opinion. For here, don't forget to delete the whistle in (4)
03:09:422 (1,2,3) - Finishes here sounds loud same
others all fixed
Good luck~

thx for mod (/> <)/

All fix thanks

Flask wrote:

osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: Linkin Park - What I've Done.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 64956
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:What I've Done
TitleUnicode:
Artist:Linkin Park
ArtistUnicode:
Creator:384059043
Version:Flask's Easy
Source:
Tags:flask transformers minutes to midnight Chester Bennington Rob Bourdon Brad Delson Dave Farrel Joe Hahn Mike Shinoda
BeatmapID:182877
BeatmapSetID:59347

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.PNG"
//Break Periods
2,83166,89523
2,125148,139002
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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All fix thanks

updated~ thx

Hi~ mod from the queue~

[Easy]
00:22:991 (1,1) - 这两个可以用新版蠢slider重画一下变对称
00:54:978 (1) - 把红色的slider节点拉到00:55:478 - 处 来体现节奏感
00:58:976 (1,2,3) - 不是很推荐互相遮挡 毕竟是easy
01:04:974 (1) - 用新版蠢slider重画一下
01:20:967 (4) - 同00:54:978 (1) -
01:44:957 (1) - 同01:04:974 (1) - （怀疑你复制粘贴）
02:00:950 (1) - ^
02:36:935 (1) - 有点建议减小V字的角度，增大圆度（嘛长slider我也不会做，你怎么舒服怎么摆吧）
02:54:928 (4) - 同01:20:967 (4) -
03:02:925 (1) - ^

[Normal]
01:07:473 (1) - 建议和中心偏移1个DS的距离以防止被转盘的300遮盖
01:23:216 - 把break的开始时间拉回去 （其实没什么关系 吧）
01:47:456 (1) - 同01:07:473 (1) -
02:00:951 - Finish
02:46:932 (1) - 这个有点突兀 毕竟突然出现一个直角拐的slider 这歌也不是16bit……
02:57:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 建议Ctrl+Shift+D重做一个8边形

[Hard]
怀疑你的Grid是3……好多歪掉的 干脆关掉grid snap多好
00:54:228 (5) - 有点歪
01:51:705 (2) - ^
01:52:454 (4) - ^
02:54:428 (4) - ^

[Insane]
跳针即视感……
00:38:985 (1) - 建议和00:38:235 (4,6) - 放在一条直线上
00:57:477 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 虽然明显是故意的我还是觉得直接stack好看些
01:46:207 (2) - 因为2倍变速所以+NC
02:03:450 (4,5,6) - Ctrl+Shift+D做正三角
02:39:934 (5,6,7) - 可以这三个都加finish 然后绿线渐强音量
02:40:934 - finish
02:46:932 - ^
02:54:928 - ^
03:09:422 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 放到屏幕中间 因为堆在下面有点像被地球引力击垮的感觉

最后加油~

Flower wrote:

Hi~ mod from the queue~


[Normal]
01:07:473 (1) - 建议和中心偏移1个DS的距离以防止被转盘的300遮盖
01:23:216 - 把break的开始时间拉回去 （其实没什么关系 吧）
01:47:456 (1) - 同01:07:473 (1) -
02:00:951 - Finish
02:46:932 (1) - 这个有点突兀 毕竟突然出现一个直角拐的slider 这歌也不是16bit……
02:57:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 建议Ctrl+Shift+D重做一个8边形

[Hard]
怀疑你的Grid是3……好多歪掉的 干脆关掉grid snap多好
00:54:228 (5) - 有点歪
01:51:705 (2) - ^
01:52:454 (4) - ^
02:54:428 (4) - ^

[Insane]
跳针即视感…… 喵？
00:38:985 (1) - 建议和00:38:235 (4,6) - 放在一条直线上
00:57:477 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 虽然明显是故意的我还是觉得直接stack好看些
01:46:207 (2) - 因为2倍变速所以+NC
02:03:450 (4,5,6) - Ctrl+Shift+D做正三角
02:39:934 (5,6,7) - 可以这三个都加finish 然后绿线渐强音量
02:40:934 - finish
02:46:932 - ^
02:54:928 - ^
03:09:422 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 放到屏幕中间 因为堆在下面有点像被地球引力击垮的感觉

最后加油~

thx~这次是全部fix了

'ello~

[General]

1. do you really want countdown to be enabled?

[Flask's Easy]

1. 00:57:977 (2,2) - this overlap is kinda confusing for beginners. So it'll be great if you will fix it somehow.
2. 02:24:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - didn't like comboing here. It feels like you forgot NC at (4).

[Normal]

1. 02:57:427 (2) - forgot new combo here. I guess it's unrankable.
2. 02:09:947 - don't silence it! Pleeeeease! end it at 02:08:947 - and add finish. - for all diffs with similar spinner

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

doesn't worth kd. it's not even a real mod

-Bakari- wrote:

'ello~

[General]

1. do you really want countdown to be enabled?

[Flask's Easy]

1. 00:57:977 (2,2) - this overlap is kinda confusing for beginners. So it'll be great if you will fix it somehow.
2. 02:24:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - didn't like comboing here. It feels like you forgot NC at (4).

[Normal]

1. 02:57:427 (2) - forgot new combo here. I guess it's unrankable. i forgot it orz
2. 02:09:947 - don't silence it! Pleeeeease! end it at 02:08:947 - and add finish. - for all diffs with similar spinner

0.0 sounds good
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

doesn't worth kd. it's not even a real mod no it's worth

so moe <3

Flower wrote:

Hi~ mod from the queue~

[Easy]
00:22:991 (1,1) - 这两个可以用新版蠢slider重画一下变对称 懶
00:54:978 (1) - 把红色的slider节点拉到00:55:478 - 处 来体现节奏感 不想破壞blanket >_> ...

SPOILER

00:58:976 (1,2,3) - 不是很推荐互相遮挡 毕竟是easy 好吧NC了
01:04:974 (1) - 用新版蠢slider重画一下 k 雖然有點蠢
01:20:967 (4) - 同00:54:978 (1) - 唉沒差嘛
01:44:957 (1) - 同01:04:974 (1) - （怀疑你复制粘贴） 沒錯
02:00:950 (1) - ^ k
02:36:935 (1) - 有点建议减小V字的角度，增大圆度（嘛长slider我也不会做，你怎么舒服怎么摆吧）k
02:54:928 (4) - 同01:20:967 (4) -
03:02:925 (1) - ^

-Bakari- wrote:

'ello~

[General]

1. do you really want countdown to be enabled?

[Flask's Easy]

1. 00:57:977 (2,2) - this overlap is kinda confusing for beginners. So it'll be great if you will fix it somehow. NC so I think that's not bad :\
2. 02:24:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - didn't like comboing here. It feels like you forgot NC at (4). k

Thanks~
http://puu.sh/1wiq8

Flask wrote:

Flower wrote:

Hi~ mod from the queue~

[Easy]
00:22:991 (1,1) - 这两个可以用新版蠢slider重画一下变对称 懶
00:54:978 (1) - 把红色的slider节点拉到00:55:478 - 处 来体现节奏感 不想破壞blanket >_> ...

SPOILER

00:58:976 (1,2,3) - 不是很推荐互相遮挡 毕竟是easy 好吧NC了
01:04:974 (1) - 用新版蠢slider重画一下 k 雖然有點蠢
01:20:967 (4) - 同00:54:978 (1) - 唉沒差嘛
01:44:957 (1) - 同01:04:974 (1) - （怀疑你复制粘贴） 沒錯
02:00:950 (1) - ^ k
02:36:935 (1) - 有点建议减小V字的角度，增大圆度（嘛长slider我也不会做，你怎么舒服怎么摆吧）k
02:54:928 (4) - 同01:20:967 (4) -
03:02:925 (1) - ^

-Bakari- wrote:

'ello~

[General]

1. do you really want countdown to be enabled?

[Flask's Easy]

1. 00:57:977 (2,2) - this overlap is kinda confusing for beginners. So it'll be great if you will fix it somehow. NC so I think that's not bad :\
2. 02:24:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - didn't like comboing here. It feels like you forgot NC at (4). k

Thanks~
http://puu.sh/1wiq8

updated~ thx~

Take some stars in apologize for my poor mod.

From my queue


What i done~~~ i love this song xD
should be ranked! i know you can, good luck!

-Bakari- wrote:

Take some stars in apologize for my poor mod.

nyan~ thanks~

HelloSCV wrote:

From my queue

SPOILER

Normal
00:50:730 (5) - delete note
00:54:728 (4) - add here
02:04:699 (4) - delete note X._.
02:52:929 (1) - add finish on start
03:00:926 (8) - add finish
03:08:922 (8) - ^

hard
00:36:486 (3) - 00:38:485 (5) - 45% volume here? like 00:30:488 (5) - this
02:04:949 (7) - add finish
03:12:171 (5) - 1 more repeat?
03:10:922 (1) - here and 03:11:421 (3) - slider's start 03:11:921 (4) - here and 03:12:421 - here add finish?

Insane
00:38:485 (5) - same as Hard diff
01:54:953 (1) - i think some notes and sliders plays funny!
02:09:947 - this inheritied point not used please delte this
02:22:192 (3,4,5) - reduce distance? suddnely high jump maybe
02:22:942 (1,2) - ^
03:10:922 (1,3,5,7) - add finish? and delete clap added finishs but didn't delete claps

What i done~~~ i love this song xD
should be ranked! i know you can, good luck!

others all fixed thx for modding~

:3 英文歌好评!

Flask's Easy

我觉得slider tick rate 1就可以了哦

Normal

01:22:967(5)-可加NC
02:04:949(5)-^

Hard

音效参照insane >_> 我觉得线4上加clap应该效果不错=A=!
01:14:970(6)-add NC 后面remove NC
02:04:949(7)-可 add NC


Insane

00:22:992(1)-add finish? 音量可以调轻点
00:24:241(3)-remove clap 我觉得这个地方下clap真的有点奇怪啊! 你可以加个和mp3鼓点差不多的customhitsound?
00:24:491(4)-add clap 虽然有点nazi 不过还是按照常规的把clap加在2 4白线上比较好哦
00:24:991(1)-add finish?
00:26:240(3,4)-和上面修改方法相同 后面类似问题一样
00:26:990(1)-add finish 后面(1)也可以加finish 自己看看吧
00:44:233(3)-你应该找个与鼓点差不多的音效来替换这个clap音..总之我听起来觉得很奇怪= =! 一般clap加在白线上比较多吧 XC 我也不是很懂音效 建议再问问专业人士~
01:19:718(2,3,4)- http://up.ppy.sh/files/1-163.jpg 这样比较好看0.0?

部分part不错 slider也拉的挺好的 继续加油/

BakaHuang wrote:

:3 英文歌好评!


Normal

01:22:967(5)-可加NC k
02:04:949(5)-^ 这里NC的话感觉这条线就不好看了OAO

Hard

音效参照insane >_> 我觉得线4上加clap应该效果不错=A=!
01:14:970(6)-add NC 后面remove NC 这里不想弄，在后面一段加了OwO
02:04:949(7)-可 add NC no._.好


Insane

00:22:992(1)-add finish? 音量可以调轻点 k
00:24:241(3)-remove clap 我觉得这个地方下clap真的有点奇怪啊! 你可以加个和mp3鼓点差不多的customhitsound?
00:24:491(4)-add clap 虽然有点nazi 不过还是按照常规的把clap加在2 4白线上比较好哦
00:24:991(1)-add finish?
00:26:240(3,4)-和上面修改方法相同 后面类似问题一样
00:26:990(1)-add finish 后面(1)也可以加finish 自己看看吧 嗯
00:44:233(3)-你应该找个与鼓点差不多的音效来替换这个clap音..总之我听起来觉得很奇怪= =! 一般clap加在白线上比较多吧 XC 我也不是很懂音效 建议再问问专业人士~
01:19:718(2,3,4)- http://up.ppy.sh/files/1-163.jpg 这样比较好看0.0? 好

部分part不错 slider也拉的挺好的 继续加油/

其实我还是不想24clap和customhitsound 或者试试加哨子会怎么样OAO

thx for modding~

Hi Banana here from 百度pending吧

[Insane]
00:48:231 - 这里缺个clap..嗯虽然用1/1的滑条没问题 不过clap缺一个的话我还是建议把滑条换了 （或者滑条尾巴加个clap 看到后面也是用的这个节奏.. 原来的24clap听着也还可以接受
01:03:475 (3) - 我的话会把这三个滑条分别Ctrl+G（说实话kiai段我想ctrl+G一堆...）
01:56:203 (3,4) - 这两个再往边上去点 正五边形的pattern摆起来
01:57:452 (1) - 只是建议 因为虽然间距一样但是读图没问题，嗯 这个可以放到上一个combo的(2)的尾巴上 上一个combo下去 这个combo回来什么的
02:03:575 (5) - 这里原曲没有鼓点..而且听着也有点奇怪 个人观点

[Hard]
01:18:718 (3) - 这种能看出来不一样的spacing最好还是把gs关了修一下..
02:23:941 (2) - 和(3)stack?
03:12:921 (1) - spacing

[Normal]
02:31:438 (2) - 我觉得这里就可以开始加clap了 然后这边既然用的是s音效 可以考虑在白线上再来几个whistle
02:35:936 (2) - 个人感觉 (2,3)的clap 要么都有 要么都去掉

[Flask's Easy]
00:54:978 (1) - 我也就会修slider了...示意图

yours: 372,104,54978,6,0,B|432:116|448:188|448:188|504:232|484:312,2,250,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
mine: 372,104,54978,6,0,B|442:112|449:189|449:189|510:234|488:311,2,250,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

good luck

Banana wrote:

Hi Banana here from 百度pending吧

[Insane]
00:48:231 - 这里缺个clap..嗯虽然用1/1的滑条没问题 不过clap缺一个的话我还是建议把滑条换了 （或者滑条尾巴加个clap 看到后面也是用的这个节奏.. 原来的24clap听着也还可以接受
01:03:475 (3) - 我的话会把这三个滑条分别Ctrl+G（说实话kiai段我想ctrl+G一堆...）
01:56:203 (3,4) - 这两个再往边上去点 正五边形的pattern摆起来
01:57:452 (1) - 只是建议 因为虽然间距一样但是读图没问题，嗯 这个可以放到上一个combo的(2)的尾巴上 上一个combo下去 这个combo回来什么的
02:03:575 (5) - 这里原曲没有鼓点..而且听着也有点奇怪 个人观点 就这样吧233

[Hard]
01:18:718 (3) - 这种能看出来不一样的spacing最好还是把gs关了修一下..
02:23:941 (2) - 和(3)stack?
03:12:921 (1) - spacing

[Normal]
02:31:438 (2) - 我觉得这里就可以开始加clap了 然后这边既然用的是s音效 可以考虑在白线上再来几个whistle
02:35:936 (2) - 个人感觉 (2,3)的clap 要么都有 要么都去掉

good luck

others all fixed thx for modding!

[Easy]
Placment:

nothing:)

Hitsounding:

00:31:488 (2) - the claps are toooo loud. you cant here the "real" drum there so an easy-player get confused when playing it. either remove them or make the the hitsounds to drum by "additions" or make them more silence. i recommend this everytime when the claps follow the drum
[Normal]
Placment:

fine too

Hitsounding:

00:30:988 to 00:33:987 - because of these sliders the hitsounding inconsistent. i recommend to remove every second clap before and after the long sliders
0:30:363 - make the difference not sooo high
00:30:613 - move it to 00:30:738 so te clap is more silence
00:30:988 - if you did ^ add clap to make it more interesting
02:22:942 - move it to 02:23:941 so you have a "normal-finish" on the spinner. sounds better imo
[Hard]
Placment:

01:08:722 - i think you need a beat here
01:09:972 (6) - you start here with following the guitar so add nc?
01:16:719 - would add circle here
01:21:717 (4) and 01:22:717 (7) - they really play weird because they start on the red tick. do it like this this, here (72°, (7) stacked on (6))

Hitsounding:

00:30:363 - you did here in another way than in normal :O (why?)
01:22:217 (5) - remove clap
01:22:467 (6) - add clap
[Insane]
Placment:

01:12:471 (4,5) - switch them. they destroy the flow
01:56:702 (1) - add nc
01:57:952 (1) - remove nc
01:59:201 (1) - add nc
01:59:451 (2) - remove
01:57:452 (4,1) - that anti-jump doesnt fit
01:56:952 (2,3) - make sliders http://puu.sh/1Dv5D
02:03:450 (4,5,6) - meh http://puu.sh/1Dv7T
02:26:940 (1,2,3,4) - the music is not so loud. the jumps doesnt fit here so lower distance maybe

Hitsounding:

00:30:363 - again in aother way :O
->make it more epic:D

phaZ wrote:

[Normal]
Placment:

fine too

Hitsounding:

00:30:988 to 00:33:987 - because of these sliders the hitsounding inconsistent. i recommend to remove every second clap before and after the long sliders

SPOILER

mremove them at: 00:24:491, 00:26:490, 00:28:489, 00:35:486

0:30:363 - make the difference not sooo high finally i choose to remove the timing line XD
00:30:613 - move it to 00:30:738 so te clap is more silence
00:30:988 - if you did ^ add clap to make it more interesting
02:22:942 - move it to 02:23:941 so you have a "normal-finish" on the spinner. sounds better imo
[Hard]
Placment:

01:08:722 - i think you need a beat here
01:09:972 (6) - you start here with following the guitar so add nc?
01:16:719 - would add circle here
01:21:717 (4) and 01:22:717 (7) - they really play weird because they start on the red tick. do it like this this, here (72°, (7) stacked on (6))

Hitsounding:

00:30:363 - you did here in another way than in normal :O (why?)
01:22:217 (5) - remove clap
01:22:467 (6) - add clap
[Insane]
Placment:

01:12:471 (4,5) - switch them. they destroy the flow
01:56:702 (1) - add nc
01:57:952 (1) - remove nc
01:59:201 (1) - add nc
01:59:451 (2) - remove
01:57:452 (4,1) - that anti-jump doesnt fit
01:56:952 (2,3) - make sliders http://puu.sh/1Dv5D
02:03:450 (4,5,6) - meh http://puu.sh/1Dv7T
02:26:940 (1,2,3,4) - the music is not so loud. the jumps doesnt fit here so lower distance maybe

Hitsounding:

00:30:363 - again in aother way :O
->make it more epic:D

thx~ fixed almost all!~

[hard]
基本上问题不大,只不过这种图要做的漂亮一定要做的很有匀称的美感,note与note的位置都要细细推敲,gird lever4的情况下就算开着DS可能前后三个note都有很细微的间距的问题,下面是我感觉你要修一下的note
00:23:991 右移一小格
00:24:491 这个note下压一点来和前后note形成匀间距 http://puu.sh/1EpoS
00:26:490 上移一小格
00:28:489 2,3,4 这三个note要修
00:29:989 2,3,4,5 这四个note和后面一个note的间距还有这个弧线都要修一下
00:47:231 这个slide和上面那个靠太近了，推荐移到相同垂线上http://puu.sh/1EpL9
00:48:981 上移一小格
00:50:580 右移一小格
00:55:728 这个blanket没做好,而且和2太近,也压到了1
后面我就不找了,你自己慢慢找吧,记得要看要不要带着前后的note整体微调,最好存一下原档,以免改坏掉
音效
01:12:971 可以上个clap
01:17:469 换成finish
[insane]
有点没看懂你的思路,就不mod了
[easy]
fine
[nomal]
03:09:422 前面几个note摆的很正这个突然歪过来不太好,你再看一下吧

Just a little mod, especially aestheticism.
You can ignore any of my suggestions.

General:
Nothing to say .

Flask's easy:
00:59:476 (2) - Move it away or stack it with the end of 00:57:977 (2) (even if I think it'll be unrankable like that)
01:19:968 (3) - 2/3 grids down
02:00:951 (1) - 5/6 grids down

Normal:
00:28:739 (3) - Either move it 2/3 grids right, or move 00:28:989 (1) 2/3 grids left.
00:30:488 (3) - 2/3 grids up
00:44:982 (1) - ^ left
01:00:976 (1) - ^ down
01:22:967 (1) - Remove NC


Hard:
00:26:490 (4) - 3 grids up
02:41:934 (3) - Make it symmetric

angelfix wrote:

[hard]
基本上问题不大,只不过这种图要做的漂亮一定要做的很有匀称的美感,note与note的位置都要细细推敲,gird lever4的情况下就算开着DS可能前后三个note都有很细微的间距的问题,下面是我感觉你要修一下的note 谢谢~
00:23:991 右移一小格
00:24:491 这个note下压一点来和前后note形成匀间距 http://puu.sh/1EpoS
00:26:490 上移一小格
00:28:489 2,3,4 这三个note要修
00:29:989 2,3,4,5 这四个note和后面一个note的间距还有这个弧线都要修一下
00:47:231 这个slide和上面那个靠太近了，推荐移到相同垂线上http://puu.sh/1EpL9
00:48:981 上移一小格
00:50:580 右移一小格
00:55:728 这个blanket没做好,而且和2太近,也压到了1
后面我就不找了,你自己慢慢找吧,记得要看要不要带着前后的note整体微调,最好存一下原档,以免改坏掉
音效
01:12:971 可以上个clap no._.
01:17:469 换成finish ok
[insane]
有点没看懂你的思路,就不mod了 OAO
[nomal]
03:09:422 前面几个note摆的很正这个突然歪过来不太好,你再看一下吧 fixed

thx for modding! 万年渣spacing压力山大

Nanika133 wrote:

Just a little mod, especially aestheticism.
You can ignore any of my suggestions.

General:
Nothing to say .

Normal:
00:28:739 (3) - Either move it 2/3 grids right, or move 00:28:989 (1) 2/3 grids left.
00:30:488 (3) - 2/3 grids up
00:44:982 (1) - ^ left
01:00:976 (1) - ^ down
01:22:967 (1) - Remove NC
this diff..all fixed!

Hard:
00:26:490 (4) - 3 grids up k
02:41:934 (3) - Make it symmetric just for blanket the previous one ._.

thx for modding!

First of all, your beatmap is amazing! But I managed to find some things that seemed odd to me. Most of them are just sugestions though. You can just ignore these.
I like setting up the beat sounds in a way that they form their own drum patern. Usualy sounds pritty good.

-- Insane

-Suggestions
00:58:727 (6) - Try adding a clap sound.
00:59:976 (3) - Maybe you should add a finish at the beginning. The clap at the end is fine.
01:00:726 (5) - Also add a clap here. (indeed, i love beatsounds!)
01:03:974 (4) - Finish on the first beat again.
01:04:474 (5) - Same thing here. Finish on the first beat
01:22:467 (4) - Maybe full in clap sounds. It sounds pritty cool.
03:09:422 (1) - I'm not a fan of finish, and especially not the one from the normal sampleset. You might consider changing this a bit. *not necessary*
I think you get the point of where I would put my hit sounds.

-Fixes
02:01:700 (2) - Random and unexpected stream. If you are playing you are just relaxing and tapping and suddenly out of the blue is a stream. So I guess or remove it, or add more stream throughout the song.
02:23:441 (2) - A lot of spacing between this note and the previous. I do not say this is wrong, but it makes the map pritty unpredictable.
03:03:675 (2) - Again, I'm not saying that it does not fit, but there are just 4 streams in the entire song.
03:04:674 (5) - Insert a note after this one. Makes it sound and feel better

-- Hard
I quite like hard It is easy to read and play. But again, try some awsome things with the hitsounds! Some cool kick-clap paterns, some variations on the song's drum patern.

--Normal
-Fixes
01:04:974 (1) - The inherited point halfway through the spinner makes the spinner sound AWFULL. At first you do not here a thing and suddenly you hear the sound of a spinner started half way through. Move this timing point somewhere else, Maybe at the beginning of the spinner, or at the end. Not half way through. (Timing point is at 1:05:974)
01:44:957 (1) - Same here. (timing point at 1:45:957

For the rest it is pritty good. You can't make nice kick-clap patern if you have this small amount of notes, so I'm happy with these hitsounds.

--Easy
Nothing to say. It is pritty good.

flokkie wrote:

First of all, your beatmap is amazing! But I managed to find some things that seemed odd to me. Most of them are just sugestions though. You can just ignore these.
I like setting up the beat sounds in a way that they form their own drum patern. Usualy sounds pritty good.

-- Insane

-Suggestions
00:58:727 (6) - Try adding a clap sound. good
00:59:976 (3) - Maybe you should add a finish at the beginning. The clap at the end is fine. ok
01:00:726 (5) - Also add a clap here. (indeed, i love beatsounds!) ^
01:03:974 (4) - Finish on the first beat again. ^
01:04:474 (5) - Same thing here. Finish on the first beat x
01:22:467 (4) - Maybe full in clap sounds. It sounds pritty cool. i use finishes
03:09:422 (1) - I'm not a fan of finish, and especially not the one from the normal sampleset. You might consider changing this a bit. *not necessary* changed a bit
I think you get the point of where I would put my hit sounds.

-Fixes
02:01:700 (2) - Random and unexpected stream. If you are playing you are just relaxing and tapping and suddenly out of the blue is a stream. So I guess or remove it, or add more stream throughout the song. k
02:23:441 (2) - A lot of spacing between this note and the previous. I do not say this is wrong, but it makes the map pritty unpredictable. fixed
03:03:675 (2) - Again, I'm not saying that it does not fit, but there are just 4 streams in the entire song. delete the first one
03:04:674 (5) - Insert a note after this one. Makes it sound and feel better fixed

-- Hard
I quite like hard It is easy to read and play. But again, try some awsome things with the hitsounds! Some cool kick-clap paterns, some variations on the song's drum patern. Thanks!

--Normal
-Fixes
01:04:974 (1) - The inherited point halfway through the spinner makes the spinner sound AWFULL. At first you do not here a thing and suddenly you hear the sound of a spinner started half way through. Move this timing point somewhere else, Maybe at the beginning of the spinner, or at the end. Not half way through. (Timing point is at 1:05:974)
01:44:957 (1) - Same here. (timing point at 1:45:957
fixed
For the rest it is pritty good. You can't make nice kick-clap patern if you have this small amount of notes, so I'm happy with these hitsounds.

thx for modding!

Threw a Star.
osu! needs moar Linkin Park! (and Fort Minor, but w/e)

Stefan wrote:

Threw a Star.
osu! needs moar Linkin Park! (and Fort Minor, but w/e)

thx for star!

btw, 弗拉斯克我这里帮你把mod整理好了来改吧\:D/

HelloSCV wrote:

Flask's Easy
00:50:980 (1) - add finish on start
00:54:978 (1) - ^
01:04:974 (1) - add finish on end
01:42:958 (3) - finish
01:44:957 (1) - you know this
01:52:954 (3) - delete finish
02:04:449 - 0.5x inherited point? delete this plz

BakaHuang wrote:

:3 英文歌好评!

Flask's Easy

我觉得slider tick rate 1就可以了哦

Banana wrote:

Hi Banana here from 百度pending吧

[Flask's Easy]
00:54:978 (1) - 我也就会修slider了...示意图

yours: 372,104,54978,6,0,B|432:116|448:188|448:188|504:232|484:312,2,250,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
mine: 372,104,54978,6,0,B|442:112|449:189|449:189|510:234|488:311,2,250,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

good luck

phaZ wrote:

[Easy]
Placment:

nothing:)

Hitsounding:

00:31:488 (2) - the claps are toooo loud. you cant here the "real" drum there so an easy-player get confused when playing it. either remove them or make the the hitsounds to drum by "additions" or make them more silence. i recommend this everytime when the claps follow the drum

Nanika133 wrote:

Just a little mod, especially aestheticism.
You can ignore any of my suggestions.

Flask's easy:
00:59:476 (2) - Move it away or stack it with the end of 00:57:977 (2) (even if I think it'll be unrankable like that)
01:19:968 (3) - 2/3 grids down
02:00:951 (1) - 5/6 grids down

加油吧

LP的歌太少了，沙包只能支持了

C_Venn wrote:

LP的歌太少了，沙包只能支持了

谢谢！

http://puu.sh/1HBac

說真的我改完才發現你幫我整理了→＿→

Flask wrote:

http://puu.sh/1HBac

說真的我改完才發現你幫我整理了→＿→

lol thx

Flask's Easy

Normal

Hard

Insane

Other than those I really find no problem with the map. The spinner has to start in red tick because of the emergence of mania. :<

Good map \o/

I threw a Star! I really love your beatmap.

I hope it will get ranked soon.

Entozer wrote:

Normal

SPOILER

02:05:074 (1) - Start this spinner to red tick please :< It plays bad in mania
03:13:046 (1) - ^

Hard

SPOILER

02:05:074 (1) - Start in red tick too?
03:05:049 (1) - ^
03:13:046 (1) - ^

Insane

SPOILER

02:05:074 (1) - Start in red tick
03:13:046 (1) - ^

Other than those I really find no problem with the map. The spinner has to start in red tick because of the emergence of mania. :<

Good map \o/

fixed all~ thx

bump
waiting for modding plz>.<

osu! needs more Linkin Park.

[General]
- Letterboxes ruins the Background. http://puu.sh/21YZp (The lower Part of Park is cutted up)

[Easy]
00:30:988 (1) - Please add Finish. It sounds so empty here without it.
00:31:488 (2) - Move the 2nd white Sliderpoint at 352,288 and the red one at 300,308. You'll have a better blanket here. http://puu.sh/21Y9E
00:35:486 (1) - Move the 2nd white Sliderpoint at 372,276 and the red one at 352,216. Same reason as above. http://puu.sh/21Yg4
00:38:985 (1) - I honestly do not get the logic here: You set a lower Volume while you spin but making the End lower and even with Whistle. This is kinda random imo. I suggest to remove Whistle at least. And you should set the same Volume as you use it while you spin.
00:50:980 - 00:58:977 - I find it too bad that you didn't used the same rhythm and pattern as 01:30:963 (1,2,3,4). These would fit more.
00:52:979 (3) - 2nd white Sliderpoint one grid down for a better curve.
00:57:977 (2,1,2) - I am not very sure about this pattern. Beginner could be irritated since the Hitburst hides 00:59:476 (2) for a big Part.
01:36:461 - Add a Circle here, I find this break here a bit awkward and a Circle here would fulfill it with Awesomeness. Also add clap on it.
01:43:958 - ^
02:25:940 (3) - imo it does not really fit here. I do not hear anything at the red Tick. I will give you an example how you could change the part from 02:24:941 - 02:30:938: http://puu.sh/220ia - http://puu.sh/220jk (Personally I find this so much better as your pattern :l)
02:28:939 (3) - Remove Finish from the Begin.
02:36:935 (1) - ^

[Normal]
01:00:976 (1) - Maybe Whistle at the Middle Point?
01:15:720 - Add a Circle here, it sounds dreamful with a Circle here.
01:40:959 (1) - Maybe Whistle at the Middle Point?
01:50:205 - A Circle would be cool.
02:04:449 (3) - Clap here please, it sounds empty without it.
02:33:937 (3) - Clap at the End?
02:49:680 - Circle here would fit nice.
02:52:179 - ^
03:09:422 (1) - Errr.. Clap+Finish sounds here weird.. remove Finish at the Begin.
03:10:422 (2) - ^
03:13:171 (1) - There is really no Finish neccessary.

[Hard]
00:31:738 - Add Circle.
00:35:736 - ^
01:05:974 - Please remove this Line, it's totally useless and making the Spinner Sound very random and annoying.
01:11:721 - Add Circle.
01:16:969 (1) - Add Clap instead of Finish at the End.
01:17:719 - Add Circle.
01:22:467 (6) - The Finish at the End does not really fit at all.
01:55:703 - Add Circle.
02:04:949 (1) - The NC makes it kinda random, remove it.
03:12:921 (1) - ^

At all, it's a "cute" Mapset. Nothing special but nothing bad too. Sometimes the Kiai Times in Hard lacks on Beats imo.

Stefan wrote:

osu! needs more Linkin Park. yeah!

[General]
- Letterboxes ruins the Background. http://puu.sh/21YZp (The lower Part of Park is cutted up)

[Normal]
01:00:976 (1) - Maybe Whistle at the Middle Point? i don't want to add more custom hitsound
01:15:720 - Add a Circle here, it sounds dreamful with a Circle here.
01:40:959 (1) - Maybe Whistle at the Middle Point? same as above
01:50:205 - A Circle would be cool.
02:04:449 (3) - Clap here please, it sounds empty without it.
02:33:937 (3) - Clap at the End?
02:49:680 - Circle here would fit nice.
02:52:179 - ^
03:09:422 (1) - Errr.. Clap+Finish sounds here weird.. remove Finish at the Begin.
03:10:422 (2) - ^
03:13:171 (1) - There is really no Finish neccessary.
others all fixed!
[Hard]
00:31:738 - Add Circle.
00:35:736 - ^
01:05:974 - Please remove this Line, it's totally useless and making the Spinner Sound very random and annoying.
01:11:721 - Add Circle.
01:16:969 (1) - Add Clap instead of Finish at the End.
01:17:719 - Add Circle.
01:22:467 (6) - The Finish at the End does not really fit at all.
01:55:703 - Add Circle.
02:04:949 (1) - The NC makes it kinda random, remove it.
03:12:921 (1) - ^
fix all!
At all, it's a "cute" Mapset. Nothing special but nothing bad too. Sometimes the Kiai Times in Hard lacks on Beats imo.
there was 2 insane diffs in the past, they have their own styles. but both of them are destroyed after some useless criticisms (as a result, NTR gave me only 62 points on this map). finally i decided to delete them

EDIT: Thx for modding and waiting for Flask's change

i need mods ww(but i'll fix them after 4/22(maybe) if there're some mods

其實怎麼還沒泡

Flask wrote:

其實怎麼還沒泡

别墅奥尔良..这是一个值得思♂考的问题（喂我什么时候也开始恶俗了

Hello. Random modding. High sp and lots of mods. Old map, what else?

I highly suggest you to change what I've wrote in red. It doesn't mean they're unrankable, they're just things that are very recommended.

*This mod will contain multiple nazi stuff, small aesthetical stuff that would make the map look better if you apply them all (imo).

• [Flask's Easy]

1. 00:31:488 (2) - Try improving this blanket a bit by moving the white point of this slider. :>
2. 00:41:984 - This empty space seems like too big imo. You can try adding a note here to fill it up a bit. This is very optional though. I like the current way too, but it may also be a good idea to add a note. It's up to you!
3. 00:44:233 (2) - This is the only slider at red tick of this diff. It would be good if you keep consistency in your rhythm. Try to make this slider 1/1. Move it to 00:43:983 and make it end at 00:44:982. You should end up with this:
   
4. 00:52:979 (3) - Very nazi, again. Move this slider a biiiit to the right to make properly this blanket.
5. 00:58:976 (1,2) - This note placement is a no-no for an Easy. 00:59:476 (2) gets covered by 00:57:977 (2), and 00:58:976 (1) doesn't even flow well with 00:57:977 (2)!! Please rearrange this pattern. I recomend you to try this pattern, good flow, and looks more readable than your current. You'll have to rearrange a bit your next notes but you should do it anyways, to improve this:
   
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6. 01:35:461 (4) - A single note here sounds awful imo. The singer keeps singing so why ignore it? Better replace this note with a slider, with end at 01:36:461. I know you're making small pauses for beginners but here isn't an appropiate part of the song to do it.
7. 01:42:958 (3) - Here you can try replacing it with a long slider, with end at 01:44:458. Sounds much better since it follows the voice, instead of ignoring it to leave an empty space. I like those spacings, but they also feel .. weird when playing. If you don't agree with me, you can try improving the placement of this note, because it is odd imo. Better align it with the previous slider end, so it flows better.
   
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8. 02:27:939 (1) - This note sounds too empty without hitsounds imo. Try removing whistle to 02:28:439 (2) and adding it to this note 02:27:939 (1). Follows more the vocals and feels less empty imo.
9. 02:31:438 (1) - Replace this with a slider to follow the vocals like i've suggested you to do in similar cases?
10. 02:34:436 (3) - How about adding hitfinish at the end of this slider? a hitfinish-like sound can be heard here so it would sound good.

• [Normal]
  
  *OD -1? The settings are a bit to high for a normal. I think it would be better if you leave the HP drain as it is, and decrease overall difficulty by 1 only to compensate the hp drain.

1. 00:28:989 (1) - Here's missing a hitfinish according to your hitsounds.
2. 00:30:988 (1) - Very nazi: try moving this slider a couple of grids down so it is aligned to 00:30:488 (3)'s end. Looks odd right now imo, small detail but still.~
3. 00:42:983 (1) - This slider looks bad. Doesn't fit with the music and looks bad compared to the rest of the map. You used only two sliders like this one. This one, and 00:44:982 (1). I highly recommend you to make them simply curved to fit with the rest of the map, to make this look better and to make it fit more with the music. Something like this works pretty good:
4. 00:44:982 (1) - Messed up NCs to follow properly the music, remove nc here, add nc to 00:46:482 (5), and remove nc of 00:46:982 (1).
5. 00:50:730 (5) - This note isn't really necessary. Here's not a important beat and it plays a bit too difficult for a Normal. Better leave this kind of patterns for the Hard diff.
6. 00:52:729 (4) - ^
   
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7. 01:03:475 (1) - Another unnecessary nc! Try to avoid single slider/notes with nc if it isn't necessary. Please consider removing it!
8. 01:11:971 (2,3,4) - Kinda nazi again, it would be better if you move these three notes a tad down, over here if possible to improve the flow a bit:
   
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9. 01:15:969 (3) - How about making this curved? it would fit with the pattern and also make a blanket with 01:16:969 (1):
   
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10. 01:20:967 (1) - I suggest you to add a hitfinish here to emphasize the vocals.
11. 01:32:962 (1) - The combos are kinda messed up here. To follow properly the music/vocals, remove nc here, add nc to 01:34:462 (4) and remove nc to 01:34:962 (1).
12. 01:39:460 (1) - I think this nc isn't necessary here, so better remove it. A combo of 2 notes only is too short, unnecessary and also inconsistent with the rest of ncs in this case.
13. 01:55:453 (1) - Again, unnecessary nc, and this time is worst since it's a single slider with nc. The rest of notes 01:55:453 (1,2) are part of the same melody as 01:52:954 (1) so please remove NC of 01:55:453 (1).
14. 01:58:952 (1) - Hitfinish here like you've done before in other patterns?
15. 02:02:950 (1) - ^ this is to emphasize!
16. 02:04:699 (4) - This note isn't really necessary. It sounds good, yeah, but this part plays a bit too difficult for a Normal. Better leave this kind of patterns for the Hard diff.
17. 02:25:440 (3) - This part sounds too excessive with whistles. Like, you added too many whistles. Try removing whistle of this note to follow better the voice. :3
18. 02:28:939 (1) - The repeat of this slider sounds too empty. Whistle to follow the vocals?
19. 02:33:937 (3) - ^ At the start.
20. 02:35:936 (2) - ^ And also here! These sound too monotonous and would sound better with hitsounds.
21. 02:44:433 (2,3,4) - This note placement doesn't play good, because they flow badly imo. Try this placement for a better flow, I recommend you to do it~:
    
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22. 02:52:179 (2,3) - ^
    
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23. 02:59:926 (6) - This combo is too long! try adding nc here to follow the "lalala" vocals. After this for consistency, you should remove nc of 03:01:425 (1).
24. 03:07:923 (6) - ^
25. 03:13:171 (1) - A hitfinish here sounds way too loud for this calm part with again "lalala" vocals. Try decreasing gradually the volume of the spinner, or add a single green line at the end of the spinner with less volume to make it sound less noisy.
    
    A lot of NC suggestions! don't worry. The diff is good! you messed up ncs a bit at some parts and added not so necessary notes.

• [Hard]

1. 00:24:741 (4) - Try moving this note to x160 y156 if possible. It improves the flow and also makes the pattern look good imo
   
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2. 00:26:490 (4) - Align this with (3)'s end? yeah very nazi bleh bleh.
3. 00:52:729 (1) - Another ultra nazi thing lmao: move this slider 1 grid down to make a perfect blanket. Right now looks ugly :<
4. 00:53:479 (2,3,4) - This part feels weird to play for me, at least :p that zig-zag thing doesn't flow good. I personally prefer this way, i think it flows better and looks clean:
   
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5. 01:08:722 (4) - Messed up combos ;_; Since the vocals change here, i suggest you to add a nc here. After this, you have to remove nc of 01:09:972 (1). Fits much better imo.
6. 01:11:721 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same suggestion as with 00:24:741 (4) but the difference is that this one plays worst than that one.
7. 01:14:720 (5,6) - The blanket looks good but these two notes flow bad imo. Try selecting them and press CTRL+G. Flows much better that way.
8. 01:20:967 (1) - To emphasize the vocals, add hitfinish here. :3
9. 01:39:959 (3) - Please try moving this slider a grid up, it looks ugly how it touches the other slider's border.
10. 01:58:452 (4) - Another cool blanket but it ruins the flow a bit imo. If you look at 01:58:952 (1) it flows bad with 01:58:452 (4) curve. To improve the flow i recommend you to try this pattern instead:
    
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11. 02:00:951 (1) - Hitfinish to emphasize the vocals :p?
12. 02:24:441 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This looks too squareish. It's not bad.. but.. it's so boxy :<
13. 02:35:936 (4) - Again, nazi, but useful believe me. It would improve the flow if you adjust a bit the end of this slider. Move it a bit up, like this so it is aligned with 02:36:436 (5). Sounds like it may be confusing my explaination. If you don't understand, just align (5) with (4)'s end:
    
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14. 02:39:934 (5) - Too many finishes! Soudns too noisy. Instead of that finish at the end of this slider, replace it with a clap of normal-custom hitsounds, the one you use for kiai times.
15. 03:02:925 (1) - Hitfinish at the start of this slider sounds good, to emphasize vocals.
    03:09:422 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Okay this is tooooooo much. Too many finishes, it ends up sounding annoying. Please remove hitfinish of 03:09:922 (3,4), 03:11:421 (3), 03:12:171 (5) and consider adding hitfinish to 03:12:921 (1) so it doesn't sound too empty of hitsounds.
16. 03:13:171 (1) - Same thing about decreasing volume at the end of this spinner (as i mentioned already in your normal)
    
    Again, don't worry. The difficulty is fine, you messed up combos like in your normal. Also, most of these are nazi-ish (but useful) and hitsounds.
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Well, call me back for a recheck! if you apply flow suggestions, and (if you agree) the suggestions in red, I think we're ready.