mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Oh.. Another What I've Done map! xD. Let's check this out.

[Flask's Easy:]

• 00:29:989 (2) - I find the usage of 1/2 unnecesary here, I think that a simple 1/1 pattern fits here properly too. So, replace this in a simple 1/1 Slider. In addition if you want to use a 1/2 here you should you use a 1/2 Slider in 00:25:990 as well.
• 00:46:982 (1) - Add a Finish at the Slider beginning to emphasize the cymbals
• 01:04:974 (T) - This is technically wrong, the music doesn't dissapear at all, so using 5% in this Slider is a bad thing. Btw, doing that you are silencing the Sliderslide + Sliderticks at the same time that it is unrankable stuff. I highly suggest you to increase the volume till 25-30%
• 01:07:473 (2) - Try adding a New Combo in this Note, it emphisize a bit more the chorus
• 01:35:461 (4) - Follow better your patterns if you reduce the Slider length in 1/2. If you do that, add a Clap at the slider end as well.
• 01:43:458 - 01:44:458 - Why is this space in blank? I mean, you have music to map. At least, you could add a Note in 01:43:458 and other one in 01:43:958 as you did before, in the 1st previous pre-chorus.
• 01:44:957 (T) - Same as 01:04:974
• 01:47:456 (2) - As I said before, add a New combo to emphasize the chorus
• 02:34:935 (3) - Unsnapped Slider end (by 2ms). You must fix that.
• 02:46:430 (2) - (^)
• 02:57:177 (Spin) - Move this Spinner 1/4 back. The long vocal start at 02:56:927 but in this place you already have the Slider end, moving the spinner 1/4 back will make much more sense, and it'll not be a problem to newbies because the Spinner is really long
• 03:05:174 (Spin) - (^)

Last thing in this diff: The Normal Samplset sections sounds a bit high to me, I'd reduce the volume in 10% at least on each section

- Sometimes the hitsounding sounds monotonus, just Claps, nonsound, Claps and some finishes. I'd vary a bit more the hitsounds, using some soft whistles at least

[Normal:]

Settings:
--> Hmm.. I'd increase the Overall difficulty by 1 Tick (OD+1)

• 00:25:990 (2,3,4) - Actually, the 1/2 pattern is not well placed in my opinion. Follow better the music if you add a Note in 00:26:240 and remove the Note in 00:26:740
• 00:27:989 (1,2,3) - (^)
• 00:41:484 (Break) - Drag the Break end till this place, it makes sense because in this point the singer start to sing again
• 00:42:983 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - I didn't like this pattern that much, you used a lot of 1/2 here and you don't do that in general. Maybe you can re-arrange a bit this pattern reducing the 1/2 usage or remove some of the notes and adding Sliders instead, would be better for the difficult of the map
• 00:50:980 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - (^) I don't want to fix this part ._.
• 01:04:974 (T) - As I said in Easy, this 5% is technically wrong, I highly suggest you to increase the volume till 25-30%
• 01:22:717 (4) - I don't find this note really necessary here, sounds better if you remove it from here
• 01:44:957 (T) - Same as 01:04:974
• 01:57:952 (1,2,3) - As I said before, the 1/2 3-plet works better if you add a Note in 01:58:202 and remove the Note in 01:58:702
• 02:04:199 (2,3) - *Kinda nazi*- Looks better if you move (2) to x:256 y:20 and (3) to x:204 y:52
• 02:09:947 (Break) - Drag the Break start till this time due to the change in the music pitch
• 02:42:933 (1) - Fits better with the music + your symetry if you remove this New Combo
• 03:05:424 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Meh.. This square, looks bad and it is not a creative thing sincerely, I'm sure you can make a much more enjoyable pattern
• 03:13:171 (Spin) - Move this Spinner 1/4 back, I explained that in the Easy diff.

[Hard:]

• 01:04:974 (T) - Same thing as previous difficulties.
• 01:44:957 (T) - Same as previous difficulties
• 02:38:683 (4) - Unsnapped Slider end (by 2ms). You must fix that

- This is not a full mod in this difficulty, I'm kinda tired to complete it right now. Anyways the diff. looks good in general.

Well, That's all for now.
I have to pop due to the Unsnapped Sliders in Easy and Hard.
Call me back after to check my mod.

Gabe wrote:

I have set the Genre and the Language and the map is pretty good.

Good luck on the ranking~!

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Recheck Time:

Flask's Easy:

• 01:05:974 - Add a Green Line here with 80% in volume as you did in the next pre-chorus. This idea sounds pretty fine in my opinion, would be better if you keep consistent that too.
• 02:41:434 (2) - meh.. I forget to mention this. As I said in your previous kiai sections start, add a New Combo in this Note please

Normal:

• 02:09:947 (T) - This 5% is not acceptable either. You must increase the volume as you did with the other timing points.

Hard:

• 02:09:947 (T) - This 5% is not acceptable either. You must increase the volume as you did with the other timing points.
• 02:09:947 (Break) - Drag the break start till here, as you did in Normal. It makes sense to me.
• 03:05:174 (Spin) - Move this Spinner 1/4 (and made it 1/4 longer then)
• 03:13:171 (Spin) - (^)
• 03:12:921 (1) - The finish sounds kinda loud to me, I'd remove it from here.

The rest looks in order to me..
Call me back again..

-Bakari- wrote:

Congrats, finally!