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Mizuki Nana - Eternal Blaze (TV Size)

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Kawayi Rika
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Kawayi Rika
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012년 9월 21일 금요일 at 오전 3:54:20

Artist: Mizuki Nana
Title: Eternal Blaze (TV Size)
Source: Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha A's
Tags: Melophobia Breeze opening maho fate
BPM: 105.4
Filesize: 18088kb
Play Time: 01:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. Breeze's Normal (3.14 stars, 126 notes)
  2. Melo's Hard (4.64 stars, 191 notes)
  3. Rika (5 stars, 304 notes)
Download: Mizuki Nana - Eternal Blaze (TV Size)
Download: Mizuki Nana - Eternal Blaze (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 32nd Ranked beat map.

Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha A's Ima hajimarimasu <3

Rika(Insane) by me.

Hard by Melophobia.

Normal by Breeze.
Last edited by Kawayi Rika , edited 25 times in total.
Melophobia
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Melophobia
irc mod~
SPOILER
07:57 Kawayi Rika: ohayo meloc chan ><
07:57 Melophobia: oha~
07:57 Kawayi Rika: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/58976
07:57 Kawayi Rika: I finished insane
07:57 Melophobia: k
07:57 Melophobia: will finish my diff soon
07:58 Kawayi Rika: you can try test play :D
07:58 Melophobia: ah okay
08:03 Kawayi Rika: :D
08:03 Melophobia: good ><b
08:03 Kawayi Rika: >< arigato
08:03 Melophobia: maybe timing is good too
08:03 Kawayi Rika: yep :D
08:05 Melophobia: 00:59:057 (4) - would be more exciting if there's a finish here
08:05 Melophobia: 01:00:605 (2) - ^
08:06 Kawayi Rika: :D sound better
08:06 Melophobia: =3=
08:07 Melophobia: 01:04:960 (2,3) - maybe finishes too?
08:07 Melophobia: i can hear cymbal in the music
08:08 Kawayi Rika: yep :D
08:08 Melophobia: 01:24:799 (1,2) - use 1.1x here?
08:08 Melophobia: more consistent and looks better to me
08:09 Kawayi Rika: yep
08:09 Kawayi Rika: 1.1 fit
08:10 Melophobia: 00:12:285 (1) - start this at 00:12:143 - instead
08:10 Melophobia: more readable imo
08:12 Melophobia: 00:46:089 - also finish
08:12 Kawayi Rika: yep
08:12 Melophobia: 00:50:541 (5,6) -
08:12 Melophobia: 00:50:928 - clap
08:12 Melophobia: 00:51:121 - finish?
08:12 Melophobia: more fitting with music
08:13 Kawayi Rika: yep :3
08:14 Melophobia: 01:07:573 (3) - maybe remove whistle?
08:14 Melophobia: sounds a bit odd to me
08:14 Kawayi Rika: oh i forgot remove orz
08:14 Melophobia: ;w;
08:15 Melophobia: 01:29:444 - finish~
08:16 Kawayi Rika: k
08:17 Melophobia: that's all~
08:17 Kawayi Rika: ><
08:18 Kawayi Rika: yep ~ post and kd ><
08:18 Melophobia: ok
No_Gu
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No_Gu
SPOILER
13:11 Kawayi Rika: 谷子
13:11 No_Gu: 在
13:11 Kawayi Rika: 求试图+球星 ;w;
13:11 No_Gu: 啥图
13:11 No_Gu: 求泡
13:11 *Kawayi Rika is editing (Mizuki Nana - Eternal Blaze (TV Size))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/58976]
13:23 No_Gu: 需要IRC mod么
13:23 Kawayi Rika: 看看
13:24 No_Gu: soft的hitnormal感觉声音有点大了
13:24 No_Gu: 特别开头那段
13:25 Kawayi Rika: soft的normal?
13:25 No_Gu: hitnormal
13:25 No_Gu: 就是什么音效也不加的那个声音
13:25 Kawayi Rika: 哪？
13:25 No_Gu: 00:17:444 (3,5,1) - 3,5，还有1的开头加上whistle
13:26 No_Gu: 就是你放个note，那个note的声音就是hitnormal
13:26 No_Gu: 整张图里面感觉hitnormal声音都有点大
13:26 Kawayi Rika: 不大了...我都调整了 加了好多线
13:26 No_Gu: 那你习惯也行。。
13:26 No_Gu: 00:23:638 (3) - 开头whistle
13:27 No_Gu: 00:30:605 (3,4) - 这个有遮盖感觉不太好看
13:27 Kawayi Rika: 这整首没加whistle 那样的部分
13:28 No_Gu: 那也随你。。
13:28 Kawayi Rika: 00:30:605 (3,4) - 这没法弄 ;w;
13:28 No_Gu: 00:33:315 (4) - 这里slider结尾没clap，然后00:33:605应该有一个clap的音
13:29 No_Gu: 你试试这样对称
13:29 No_Gu: 00:30:605 (3) -
13:29 No_Gu: 错
13:29 No_Gu: 这个http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/429048
13:29 Kawayi Rika: ..
13:30 No_Gu: 00:48:412 (3) - 这个感觉ctrl+r感觉更好
13:30 Kawayi Rika: 我试试　　
13:30 Kawayi Rika: 也想过这个　ｃｔｒｌ＋Ｒ
13:30 No_Gu: 打起来比较顺手
13:30 No_Gu: 也不是太难
13:30 Kawayi Rika: 　嗯　改了
13:31 No_Gu: 00:55:380 (10) - 这个还是像前面那个一样换成soft吧，因为音乐里这里没鼓音你放normal听着不舒服
13:31 No_Gu: 其实前面4个也没鼓音
13:31 No_Gu: 都改成soft然后加几个whistle比较好
13:31 Kawayi Rika: 是吗;w;
13:31 No_Gu: 音效我只是个人看法，你要是觉得不喜欢或者不太弄细节的话可以无视
13:32 Kawayi Rika: 这先保留 ;w;
13:32 No_Gu: 00:56:734 (4) - 这个加个35%的finish
13:32 No_Gu: 音乐里有音
13:33 Kawayi Rika: 35？
13:33 No_Gu: 绿线
13:33 No_Gu: 音量
13:33 Kawayi Rika: 35 听不见。。
13:33 No_Gu: 为什么咱们电脑差距这么大。。
13:33 No_Gu: 那你自己稍微加一点
13:33 Kawayi Rika: 60 好了
13:33 Kawayi Rika: 你音量弄低了吧 ;w;
13:34 No_Gu: 01:13:960 (1,2,3) - 1和2不顺手，但是2ctrl+r之后2和3又不太顺手
13:34 No_Gu: 看着自己改改吧，或者等等别人意见
13:34 Kawayi Rika: 嗯。。
13:34 Kawayi Rika: 我打着 这 还可以
13:35 No_Gu: 01:16:476 (7,8,9) - 这里我推荐跳一下
13:35 No_Gu: 类似这样
13:35 No_Gu: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/429050
13:35 No_Gu: 01:18:412 (1,3) - 感觉开头finish比whistle好听
13:36 No_Gu: 01:29:444 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这一段感觉特别不好读T T你再看看别人意见吧
13:36 Kawayi Rika: 嗯;w;
13:36 No_Gu: 01:30:992 (1) - 结尾我觉得用whistle代替舒服点
13:37 No_Gu: 01:32:154 (4) - 这里开头的clap听起来也不是很舒服
13:37 No_Gu: 行了没了
IRC mod
Kawayi Rika
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Kawayi Rika
Thanks both IRC mod ~ ;)
Breeze
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Breeze
http://puu.sh/14orP
3.23星 显示是三星，我已经不能再减了:/
Melophobia
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Melophobia
(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ http://puu.sh/14CgX
Aldwych
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Aldwych
Hello Kawayi Rika!

[General]

Nothing important

[Breeze's normal]

00:38:347 remove NC?
00:41:444 ^
00:44:541 ^
00:44:541 Why not making the same slider like the previous and make it symetrical?
00:54:025 Imo, the slider is too small to make a spiral.
01:03:121 Remove nc?
01:15:896 In hard there's no NC so maybe a fix here.
01:30:412 It missing a circle here.
01:38:928 Finish the spiner at the same time like the other diff.

[Melo's hard]

00:59:928 Add circle?
01:05:638 Can you make something beter with these 3 circles?
01:37:186 This blank, could something too?

[Rika]

00:17:251 Why clap here?
00:31:380 Delete NC?
01:12:412 ^

That's all i can really fine hope it could help you! :)

Ps : Can we make a M4M for it?
Melophobia
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Melophobia

Aldwych wrote:

[Melo's hard]

00:59:928 Add circle? i'd rather make jump here than follow vocal
01:05:638 Can you make something beter with these 3 circles? why? i prefer the current one though
01:37:186 This blank, could something too? blank is fine because no instrument here
thanks~
DarknessAngel
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DarknessAngel
come from your request in-game ~ :)





Red words = Unrankable stuff
Blue words = It is the best way that you fix it
Black words = If I were you,I would do that.
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice





Rika

  1. 01:30:218 (4) - add new combo.作為01:29:444 (1,2,3)跟01:30:218 (4,5,6)間距變換的提示
  2. 01:05:638 (1,2,3) - 我覺得這裡有必要加大間距，有強調人聲的效果，更有感覺
  3. 01:12:412 (1) - 這短NC看起來不需要:O，如果你想做短NC強調效果那就把(1)移到(176,132)
    這樣NC的作用才明顯。不然的話就刪掉NC吧/w\
  4. 01:18:412 (1,3) - 這2個長條頭上都加上finish ? 我是覺得挺合人聲的(其實細聽的話有一些鑼聲)
  5. 01:36:412 (2,3,4,5,6) - 我個人會在這裡做一個大一點的跳，畢竟這些音都很強啊.../w\
  6. 我認為間距是要依據音樂來調整的，像00:32:154 (1,2,3,4)跟01:36:412 (2,3,4,5,6)對照一下
    我就會覺得，為什麼後面那個更強的音的間距會這麼小，打起來略無感覺這樣
  7. 能提到的就這些了。這難度做的真好呢 ~ =w=b

Melo's Hard

  1. 00:04:600 (4) - delete the note ? I have no idea how I explain the reason,I feel not good with that.
  2. 01:05:638 (2,3,4) - increace the spacing for these notes since the vocal are powerful ?
  3. 01:35:928 - add a green line here,set it as "N 50%" and remove those whistles for 01:35:638 (1,2,3) ?
    I think it fits the voices a bit more.

Breeze's Normal

  1. 01:40:283 - Kiai在01:40:089結束
  2. 好有個性的Normal :O



that's it ~
have a star
(大概很快就ranked所以good luck就不用了xD)
:)
Breeze
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Breeze

Aldwych wrote:

[Breeze's normal]

00:38:347 remove NC?
00:41:444 ^
00:44:541 ^ :arrow: nah, I have my own step for NC
00:44:541 Why not making the same slider like the previous and make it symetrical? :arrow: I'm not mean to make this map symmetric
00:54:025 Imo, the slider is too small to make a spiral. :arrow: why?
01:03:121 Remove nc?
01:15:896 In hard there's no NC so maybe a fix here. :arrow: Hard is not made by me
01:30:412 It missing a circle here. :arrow: I think this is fine, there are many rhythm you can follow here
01:38:928 Finish the spiner at the same time like the other diff. :arrow: k

DarknessAngel wrote:

Breeze's Normal

  1. 01:40:283 - Kiai在01:40:089結束 :arrow: k
  2. 好有個性的Normal :O
[/notice]
To rika, 帮我把那两个我说了k的改了好了, 都是些小地方我也就不再传一个osu文件了:s
alacat
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alacat
Hi:3 from My queue.

[General]
●fine :3

[Breeze's Normal]
●HP Drain Rate -1 ? I think this is a little difficult for beginners >.<
●00:19:767 (1,2,3) - Make the spacing equal here
●00:45:509 (2) - some-repeats-sliders are confusing for beginners .Try this ?
●00:54:025 (4) - Try this? like a your pattern at here.00:57:121 (4,5) -
●01:32:541 (1) - spinner start from here ?

[Melo's Hard]
●00:36:412 (9) - spacingを0.00xに
●01:38:734 (1) - 折りかえりにwhistle追加
●00:54:799 - note削除？00:51:702 - ここがあいていたので。
または00:51:702 - にnoteをついかしてみてはいかかでしょうか
●01:31:380 (5) - 終点にwhistle追加？

[Rika]
●00:20:347 (4) - add clap on the slider's head ? like a your pattern at here.00:16:670 (1,2) -
●00:23:444 (2) - add clap
●00:24:025 (4) - remove clap on the slider's end
●00:32:154 (1) - remove New combo ?
●00:54:412 (3) - follow the back sound here?
same as here~ 00:57:702 (7) -
●01:38:638 - gradually add volume? Try 60% volume . after here is 70% volume.01:39:315 -


good map set all diff (ﾉ･ˇ∀ˇ･)ﾉ ~ ♪

go go rank ~ ! Good luck rika-chan :)
Kawayi Rika
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Topic Starter
Kawayi Rika
Aldwych

Aldwych wrote:

Hello Kawayi Rika!

[Rika]

00:17:251 Why clap here?　 :arrow: sound better to me
00:31:380 Delete NC? :arrow: nope
01:12:412 ^

That's all i can really fine hope it could help you! :)

DarknessAngel

DarknessAngel wrote:

come from your request in-game ~ :)



[notice]Red words = Unrankable stuff
Blue words = It is the best way that you fix it
Black words = If I were you,I would do that.
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice


Rika

  1. 01:30:218 (4) - add new combo.作為01:29:444 (1,2,3)跟01:30:218 (4,5,6)間距變換的提示 :arrow: ok
  2. 01:05:638 (1,2,3) - 我覺得這裡有必要加大間距，有強調人聲的效果，更有感覺 :arrow: 这先保留看别人怎么说
  3. 01:12:412 (1) - 這短NC看起來不需要:O，如果你想做短NC強調效果那就把(1)移到(176,132) :arrow: 移到(176,132) 了 :D
    這樣NC的作用才明顯。不然的話就刪掉NC吧/w\
  4. 01:18:412 (1,3) - 這2個長條頭上都加上finish ? 我是覺得挺合人聲的(其實細聽的話有一些鑼聲) :arrow: 换成finish了
  5. 01:36:412 (2,3,4,5,6) - 我個人會在這裡做一個大一點的跳，畢竟這些音都很強啊.../w\ :arrow: 加大艰巨了
  6. 我認為間距是要依據音樂來調整的，像00:32:154 (1,2,3,4)跟01:36:412 (2,3,4,5,6)對照一下
    我就會覺得，為什麼後面那個更強的音的間距會這麼小，打起來略無感覺這樣     :arrow: / \ 囧
  7. 能提到的就這些了。這難度做的真好呢 ~ =w=b :arrow: 谢谢:D
that's it ~
have a star
(大概很快就ranked所以good luck就不用了xD)
:)

alacat

alacat wrote:

Hi:3 from My queue.

[Rika]
●00:20:347 (4) - add clap on the slider's head ? like a your pattern at here.00:16:670 (1,2) - :arrow: ok
●00:23:444 (2) - add clap :arrow: not fit here,because 00:24:218 - here have clap
●00:24:025 (4) - remove clap on the slider's end
●00:32:154 (1) - remove New combo ? :arrow: new vocal and parttern start to here :arrow: sound better :D
●00:54:412 (3) - follow the back sound here?

same as here~ 00:57:702 (7) - :arrow: i guess here is fne ><
●01:38:638 - gradually add volume? Try 60% volume . after here is 70% volume.01:39:315 - :arrow: ok :3


good map set all diff (ﾉ･ˇ∀ˇ･)ﾉ ~ ♪

go go rank ~ ! Good luck rika-chan :)

Thanks everyone's mod ~ update ~ ;)
Konei
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Joined March 2012
Konei
From my 12 seconds too late Queue~ xD


[General]

* Delete osb file and full submit~


[Breeze's Normal]

00:24:025 (7) - Correct spacing~


[Melo's Hard]

01:01:380 (9) - straight line slider plays better imo~


[Rika]

* OD - 1? Plays bettter imo~
Perfect~


Neat and cool Mapset as allways Rika~

Good luck :3~~
Melophobia
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Melophobia

DarknessAngel wrote:

Melo's Hard

  1. 00:04:600 (4) - delete the note ? I have no idea how I explain the reason,I feel not good with that.　somewhat i can understand your feeling but meh no reason to change this.
  2. 01:05:638 (2,3,4) - increace the spacing for these notes since the vocal are powerful ? nice catch. fixed
  3. 01:35:928 - add a green line here,set it as "N 50%" and remove those whistles for 01:35:638 (1,2,3) ? sounds great <3
    I think it fits the voices a bit more.

alacat wrote:

[Melo's Hard]
●00:36:412 (9) - spacingを0.00xに DS使うとどうもズレるので手動で修正
●01:38:734 (1) - 折りかえりにwhistle追加　ok
●00:54:799 - note削除？00:51:702 - ここがあいていたので。 バスドラ的な意味で意図的に違うリズムにしてます
または00:51:702 - にnoteをついかしてみてはいかかでしょうか　
●01:31:380 (5) - 終点にwhistle追加？ このsectionは笛無くていいんじゃないかな～と

Konei wrote:

[Melo's Hard]
01:01:380 (9) - straight line slider plays better imo~　the current one flows better imo, wont make much difference though
Thanks!

http://puu.sh/15n5I
Kawayi Rika
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OK ~ Update ~ thanks melo chan <3
JoJo
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JoJo
From ingame PM~~

  1. Purple - Unrankable stuff OAQ
  2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this >_>
  3. Black - Just suggestion for reference OvO
[General]
  1. BG太大了...纯吐槽,尤其normal的BG都快1MB了不堪入墓 =A=
  2. 建议你做一个easy,因为微风的normal有3.23星而且出现了很多我觉得不应该出现在最简单难度的元素...
[Rika]
  1. 00:30:412 (1,2) - 1去掉clap，2加上clap，带感多了=A=
  2. 00:39:799 (5) - 同上这里补个clap好赞（捂脸
  3. 00:45:509 (1,5) - 交换new combo. 这边3,4也可以交换clap,看你喜欢了
  4. 01:20:154 (1,2) - 这里我觉得跳这么大毫无道理...虽然能打 >_>
[Melo]
  1. perfect o.o!
[Breeze]
  1. 开头用的默认soft我觉得那slide音效好吵>_> 不用S2么..
  2. 00:24:412 (1) - 这里照应前面更好些吧~放到大概x:339 y:88的位置?
  3. 另外..像00:33:702 (1)，01:06:605 (1)这种slider出现在最简单难度没问题么=。=
啊啊也写不出什么东西了/ \ 就这样了~ Star~
Kawayi Rika
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Topic Starter
Kawayi Rika

JoJo wrote:

From ingame PM~~

  1. Purple - Unrankable stuff OAQ
  2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this >_>
  3. Black - Just suggestion for reference OvO
[General]
  1. BG太大了...纯吐槽,尤其normal的BG都快1MB了不堪入墓 =A= :arrow: =A=
  2. 建议你做一个easy,因为微风的normal有3.23星而且出现了很多我觉得不应该出现在最简单难度的元素... :arrow: 我觉的挺简单的 不需要Easy
[Rika]
  1. 00:30:412 (1,2) - 1去掉clap，2加上clap，带感多了=A= :arrow: 听起来好怪 ;w;
  2. 00:39:799 (5) - 同上这里补个clap好赞（捂脸 :arrow: ^
  3. 00:45:509 (1,5) - 交换new combo. 这边3,4也可以交换clap,看你喜欢了 :arrow: NC 换到这里了00:45:896,
  4. 01:20:154 (1,2) - 这里我觉得跳这么大毫无道理...虽然能打 >_> :arrow: 还好
啊啊也写不出什么东西了/ \ 就这样了~ Star~
Thanks for mod and star~ :)
Breeze
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Breeze
fixed some, thx
http://puu.sh/15Yuz
Kawayi Rika
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Thanks Breeze ~ update ~ ;)
Sonnyc
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Sonnyc
안녕하세요 ^^ Random mod.

General:
-- I suggest making all kiai times the same.. Melo's Hard is re-kiaied at 01:20:154, so fix this or change the others.

Breeze's Normal:
No problem~

Melo's Hard:
00:16:670 (4) - NC
00:19:767 (4) - ^
01:00:025 (6) - ^
01:11:928 (2) - Whistling in 1/4 doesn't sound well for me.
01:17:057 (3) - ^
01:24:025 (2) - ^
01:25:573 (5,6) - How about 3 beats and a 1/2 slider?
SPOILER
01:27:896 (5) - NC?
01:31:380 (5) - ^

Rika:
00:08:585 (2,3) - 2 Grids up
00:21:025 (6,7,8) - All whistles sound a bit noisy.. I would put whistles only in (5,7)
00:55:283 (6) - Spacing error. 1Grid left and down
01:24:992 (2) - Distance between (3).. is a jump or an error? Maybe moving (2) 2 Grids right will help

Good luck~ :D
Melophobia
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Melophobia

Sonnyc wrote:

General:
-- I suggest making all kiai times the same.. Melo's Hard is re-kiaied at 01:20:154, so fix this or change the others. up to Rika

Melo's Hard:
00:16:670 (4) - NC no reason to change
00:19:767 (4) - ^ ^
01:00:025 (6) - ^ ^
01:11:928 (2) - Whistling in 1/4 doesn't sound well for me. ok
01:17:057 (3) - ^ ^
01:24:025 (2) - ^ ^
01:25:573 (5,6) - How about 3 beats and a 1/2 slider? nope. i like how it looks
SPOILER
01:27:896 (5) - NC? same as above
01:31:380 (5) - ^ ^
Thanks!
http://puu.sh/164Sw
Kawayi Rika
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Sonnyc wrote:

안녕하세요 ^^ Random mod.

General:
-- I suggest making all kiai times the same.. Melo's Hard is re-kiaied at 01:20:154, so fix this or change the others. :arrow: all diff changed same kiai time.

Rika:
00:08:585 (2,3) - 2 Grids up :arrow: i don't know why? i following DS here
00:21:025 (6,7,8) - All whistles sound a bit noisy.. I would put whistles only in (5,7) :arrow: ok
00:55:283 (6) - Spacing error. 1Grid left and down :arrow: oh,nice... i missing this ;w;
01:24:992 (2) - Distance between (3).. is a jump or an error? Maybe moving (2) 2 Grids right will help :arrow: ok

Good luck~ :D
Thanks for mod and update ~ ;)
giO-
giO-
Hello, from #modreqs

General

Delete .osb file if you don't need it.

Breeze's Normal

00:54:025 (4) - move the last point on x:164 y:268
01:20:541 (2) - overlap with 01:19:186 (4) - :P http://puu.sh/16bvS
01:21:315 (4,5) - also here http://puu.sh/16bwG (sorry for nazi)

Melo's Hard

00:50:154 (3) - try to move here x:248 y:168

Rika

00:09:724 (1,1) - what about using only one spinner?
00:30:121 (9,10,11) - try Distance Snap 1.0x and make this triple like this one http://puu.sh/16bJQ
00:30:412 (1,2) - same here, looks better at least for me
00:35:638 (2,4) - CTRL+R?
01:03:121 (5,6,7) - is this overlap intentional? http://puu.sh/16bM7


That's all,nice mapset and good luck! ;)
Kawayi Rika
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giO- wrote:

Hello, from #modreqs

General

Delete .osb file if you don't need it. :arrow: This is not issue.

Rika

00:09:724 (1,1) - what about using only one spinner? :arrow: it's fine imo
00:30:121 (9,10,11) - try Distance Snap 1.0x and make this triple like this one http://puu.sh/16bJQ :arrow: 0.8 is fine
00:30:412 (1,2) - same here, looks better at least for me
00:35:638 (2,4) - CTRL+R? :arrow: Current flow is fine
01:03:121 (5,6,7) - is this overlap intentional? http://puu.sh/16bM7 :arrow: ok fixed


That's all,nice mapset and good luck! ;)
Thanks for mod ~ :)
wantuole
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Joined December 2010
wantuole
Hello ~,from my queue
[General]
It's ok
[Nor]
00:24:896 (2) - start at 00:25:186
00:30:605 (1) - 00:31:186 this place use this?
[Hard]
00:33:509 (1,2,3) - 3 is new cb
[Rika]
nice map~
*01:26:154 (1,2,3) - a little strange, maybe not here is butter

that's all
lol, nice map~ good luck
Lami
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Joined June 2011
Lami
hi~

[Breeze's Normal]
fine to me

[Melo's Hard]

00:44:154 (4) -
01:29:444 (1,2,3) -

[Rika]

00:30:025 (9,10,11,1,2,3,4) -
1.00:30:218 (11,1) - unsuitable long jump... x1.3 ~ x2.0 is better.(imo)
2.00:30:605 (3,4) - overlap slider
3.00:30:121 (10) - consider to remove this note. this sound is more good for me > <
00:45:315 (3) - x304 y196 (just suggestion zigzag shape :3)
becosz, straight shape is bored
01:04:670 (1,2,3) - how about decrease this space? it's a little suddenly jump.
01:10:089 (7) - suggestion
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
Kawaii Rika! :) Here is my mod:
  • General
    -> All Clear!
  • Breeze's Normal
    00:02:893 (1) - Something optional: Adjust this slider in a way so the slider tick is on the red anchor. For example:
    SPOILER
    00:25:960 (1,2) - Spacing. Try moving this slider 2 at x:136 y:336 to fix this problem.
    00:26:928 (3) - If fixed above, try moving this slider at x:100 y:172 for spacing consistency.
    00:27:509 (1,2) - If fixed above, fix this spacing as well. Also a better semi-blanklet could make this pattern a bit nicer.
    00:54:025 (4) - Nazi: Move last anchor 1 grid down to make it a perfect spiral slider.
    01:25:186 (6) - Nazi: Move red anchor point 1 grid down, so it snaps exactly to the slider tick.
    01:26:928 (3,4,5) - Be cafeful. This pattern has a bad polarity. Novice players could get a miss here.
    01:37:960 (2) - Another Nazi (sorry XD): Adjust the slider so the red sanchor point snaps exactly to the slider tick:
    SPOILER
    80,192,97960,2,0,B|140:144|188:192|188:192|236:240|296:192,1,240,0|4
  • Melo's Hard
    -> Very Good!
  • Rika
    -> I recommend HP Drain and Overall Difficulty to be 7. Just a suggestion!
    00:03:462 (5) - A whistle at the beginning of this slider looks nice here. It also makes it consistent with the piano sounds.
    00:08:585 (2) - Remove this whistle since there is no piano sounds here. It would make your hitsounds a bit more consistent. It seems that you are trying to follow the most prominent piano sounds, which is the reason why I suggested this.
    01:10:476 (8) - Add a clap here? Well, for clap consistency I guess XD.
    01:13:283 (2,3) - I can hear claps on the music here. Consider adding claps here as well. :D
    01:18:412 (1) - Add a whistle at the beginning of this slider since the piano sounds is still playing here. Do not remove the finish since you can hear finish as well.
    01:19:186 (3) - Same as above. Add whistle here, but do not remove the finish.
Good Map indeed! Keep up the good work! :D
Kawayi Rika
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wantuole

wantuole wrote:

Hello ~,from my queue

nice map~
*01:26:154 (1,2,3) - a little strange, maybe not here is butter :arrow: I don't know why?

that's all
lol, nice map~ good luck

intoon

intoon wrote:

hi~

[Rika]

00:30:025 (9,10,11,1,2,3,4) -
1.00:30:218 (11,1) - unsuitable long jump... x1.3 ~ x2.0 is better.(imo) :arrow: it's fine imo
2.00:30:605 (3,4) - overlap slider :arrow: ^
3.00:30:121 (10) - consider to remove this note. this sound is more good for me > < :arrow: Triple circle more fit.
00:45:315 (3) - x304 y196 (just suggestion zigzag shape :3) :arrow: nope,i don't like.
becosz, straight shape is bored
01:04:670 (1,2,3) - how about decrease this space? it's a little suddenly jump. not really so i added nc.
01:10:089 (7) - suggestion

BeatofIke

BeatofIke wrote:

Kawaii Rika! :) Here is my mod:

  • Rika
    -> I recommend HP Drain and Overall Difficulty to be 7. Just a suggestion! :arrow: 7 is too easy x.x
    00:03:462 (5) - A whistle at the beginning of this slider looks nice here. It also makes it consistent with the piano sounds. :arrow: sound fine added
    00:08:585 (2) - Remove this whistle since there is no piano sounds here. It would make your hitsounds a bit more consistent. It seems that you are trying to follow the most prominent piano sounds, which is the reason why I suggested this. hmm,sound fine imo.
    01:10:476 (8) - Add a clap here? Well, for clap consistency I guess XD. :arrow: piano have here , so i use whistle
    01:13:283 (2,3) - I can hear claps on the music here. Consider adding claps here as well. :D :arrow: sound weird to me
    01:18:412 (1) - Add a whistle at the beginning of this slider since the piano sounds is still playing here. Do not remove the finish since you can hear finish as well. :arrow: I guess finish is more fit
    01:19:186 (3) - Same as above. Add whistle here, but do not remove the finish. :arrow: added
Good Map indeed! Keep up the good work! :D

Thanks for mod ~ :)
spboxer3
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spboxer3

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
 Black is just suggestion.

general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. looks it's fine~

Breeze's Normal



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  1. 01:19:186 (4,2) - why do you let those overlaps? 01:20:154 (1,3) - & 01:20:541 (2,4) - haven't do it~ so I think you should avoid it.

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:06:023 - add whistle? and 00:06:308 - 00:06:877 - 00:08:016 - 00:09:154 - remove whistle. Umm... you used too many inappropriate whistle in this sentence.

  2. 00:20:541 - add whistle?

  3. 01:21:702 - finish?

  4. 01:24:799 (5) - ^ (mirrored)
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:21:702 (1,3,5,7) - I'm just confuse. why those spacing are not consistency? used identical spacing it's clean to read imo.

  2. 00:22:089 (2,4,6,1) - ^

  3. 00:24:412 (1,2) - Umm... make the smooth slider (pattern). just a suggestion

  4. 00:54:025 (4) - oh well~ move the last node to cover sliderborder. the original one was kinda awkward pattern shape.

  5. 01:23:251 (1,3,5) - uneven spacing~ it should be fixed imo.

  6. 01:32:347 (1,1) - too close rhythm when this map is easiest diff. perhaps end at 01:34:863 - it's a possible solution.


Melo's Hard



  • Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 01:05:638 (2) - or 01:05:831 (3) - add whistle? ((01:05:638 (2) - follow drum 01:05:831 (3) - follow pitch.
nice mapping ;)

Rika



  • mapping
    (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:42:121 - add note. seems it's too easy and empty rhythm here.
  2. 00:55:380 (7) - remove this note ((It isn't have any voice/sound at here. so it's unnecessary note imo.

  3. 01:30:412 - to 01:30:992 - Umm... because it's hardest diff. I think you can used stream (follow the drum) to mapping this part.

  4. 01:29:734 (2,3,1,2,3) - (if you don't want to change this rhythm ^.) why don't you make those vertical symmetry with 01:29:444 (1) -
    code
    16,172,89444,5,4
    124,106,89734,1,2
    124,238,90025,1,2
    180,170,90218,5,2
    356,66,90509,1,2
    356,278,90799,1,2
    356,278,90896,1,0
    356,278,90992,6,0,B|296:354|204:366,1,176,4|8
    124,338,91573,1,0
    68,270,91767,2,0,B|32:238|34:190,1,88
    180,126,92154,2,0,B|216:158|214:206,1,88,8|0
    124,198,92541,1,4


OK~ cell me back when you fix my mod~ but please reply my mod post and used 2 color to reply it
Blue: you accept my mod item
Red: you deny my mod item and please reply the reason.
:arrow: go~
Melophobia
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Melophobia

giO- wrote:

Melo's Hard
00:50:154 (3) - try to move here x:248 y:168 i prefer the current one

wantuole wrote:

[Hard]
00:33:509 (1,2,3) - 3 is new cb dislike how it looks so i put the newcombo there

intoon wrote:

[Melo's Hard]
00:44:154 (4) - wont make much difference
01:29:444 (1,2,3) - it will be kinda boring

spboxer3 wrote:

Melo's Hard



  • Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 01:05:638 (2) - or 01:05:831 (3) - add whistle? ((01:05:638 (2) - follow drum 01:05:831 (3) - follow pitch. okay!
nice mapping ;)
Thanks guys for modding~
Breeze
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Breeze
http://puu.sh/16TkM
fixed some, thanks, too lazy to reply all, sorry
Kawayi Rika
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spboxer3

spboxer3 wrote:

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
 Black is just suggestion.


Rika



  • mapping
    (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:42:121 - add note. seems it's too easy and empty rhythm here. :arrow: sound odd to me
  2. 00:55:380 (7) - remove this note ((It isn't have any voice/sound at here. so it's unnecessary note imo. :arrow: ^

  3. 01:30:412 - to 01:30:992 - Umm... because it's hardest diff. I think you can used stream (follow the drum) to mapping this part. :arrow: sorry,i just following vocal

  4. 01:29:734 (2,3,1,2,3) - (if you don't want to change this rhythm ^.) why don't you make those vertical symmetry with 01:29:444 (1) -
    :arrow: ok looks fine :) 

    16,172,89444,5,4
    124,106,89734,1,2
    124,238,90025,1,2
    180,170,90218,5,2
    356,66,90509,1,2
    356,278,90799,1,2
    356,278,90896,1,0
    356,278,90992,6,0,B|296:354|204:366,1,176,4|8
    124,338,91573,1,0
    68,270,91767,2,0,B|32:238|34:190,1,88
    180,126,92154,2,0,B|216:158|214:206,1,88,8|0
    124,198,92541,1,4


OK~ cell me back when you fix my mod~ but please reply my mod post and used 2 color to reply it
Blue: you accept my mod item
Red: you deny my mod item and please reply the reason.
:arrow: go~

Thanks for mod and update :)
spboxer3
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spboxer3
Recheck log:
[Breeze's Normal]
01:21:702 (5) - & 01:23:638 (2,4,6) - move down 1 grid ((about spacing and overlaps issue~
01:32:347 (1) - end at 01:35:251 -

:arrow: fine~
Andrea
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Andrea
[Breeze's Normal]

Use the same kiai time of the other difficulties.

OD -1 would be much better.

[Melo's Hard]

01:00:025 (6) - New combo here would be nice imo.

That's all (:
Melophobia
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Melophobia

Andrea wrote:

[Melo's Hard]

01:00:025 (6) - New combo here would be nice imo. okay~
Thanks <3
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