1. Purple - Unrankable stuff OAQ
2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this >_>
3. Black - Just suggestion for reference OvO

1. BG太大了...纯吐槽,尤其normal的BG都快1MB了不堪入墓 =A=
2. 建议你做一个easy,因为微风的normal有3.23星而且出现了很多我觉得不应该出现在最简单难度的元素...

1. 00:30:412 (1,2) - 1去掉clap，2加上clap，带感多了=A=
2. 00:39:799 (5) - 同上这里补个clap好赞（捂脸
3. 00:45:509 (1,5) - 交换new combo. 这边3,4也可以交换clap,看你喜欢了
4. 01:20:154 (1,2) - 这里我觉得跳这么大毫无道理...虽然能打 >_>

1. perfect o.o!

1. 开头用的默认soft我觉得那slide音效好吵>_> 不用S2么..
2. 00:24:412 (1) - 这里照应前面更好些吧~放到大概x:339 y:88的位置?
3. 另外..像00:33:702 (1)，01:06:605 (1)这种slider出现在最简单难度没问题么=。=

JoJo wrote:

From ingame PM~~

1. Purple - Unrankable stuff OAQ
2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this >_>
3. Black - Just suggestion for reference OvO

[General]

1. BG太大了...纯吐槽,尤其normal的BG都快1MB了不堪入墓 =A= =A=
2. 建议你做一个easy,因为微风的normal有3.23星而且出现了很多我觉得不应该出现在最简单难度的元素... 我觉的挺简单的 不需要Easy

[Rika]

1. 00:30:412 (1,2) - 1去掉clap，2加上clap，带感多了=A= 听起来好怪 ;w;
2. 00:39:799 (5) - 同上这里补个clap好赞（捂脸 ^
3. 00:45:509 (1,5) - 交换new combo. 这边3,4也可以交换clap,看你喜欢了 NC 换到这里了00:45:896,
4. 01:20:154 (1,2) - 这里我觉得跳这么大毫无道理...虽然能打 >_> 还好

啊啊也写不出什么东西了/ \ 就这样了~ Star~

Sonnyc wrote:

General:
-- I suggest making all kiai times the same.. Melo's Hard is re-kiaied at 01:20:154, so fix this or change the others. up to Rika

Melo's Hard:
00:16:670 (4) - NC no reason to change
00:19:767 (4) - ^ ^
01:00:025 (6) - ^ ^
01:11:928 (2) - Whistling in 1/4 doesn't sound well for me. ok
01:17:057 (3) - ^ ^
01:24:025 (2) - ^ ^
01:25:573 (5,6) - How about 3 beats and a 1/2 slider? nope. i like how it looks

SPOILER

01:27:896 (5) - NC? same as above
01:31:380 (5) - ^ ^

Sonnyc wrote:

안녕하세요 ^^ Random mod.

General:
-- I suggest making all kiai times the same.. Melo's Hard is re-kiaied at 01:20:154, so fix this or change the others. all diff changed same kiai time.

Rika:
00:08:585 (2,3) - 2 Grids up i don't know why? i following DS here
00:21:025 (6,7,8) - All whistles sound a bit noisy.. I would put whistles only in (5,7) ok
00:55:283 (6) - Spacing error. 1Grid left and down oh,nice... i missing this ;w;
01:24:992 (2) - Distance between (3).. is a jump or an error? Maybe moving (2) 2 Grids right will help ok

Good luck~

giO- wrote:

Hello, from #modreqs

General

Delete .osb file if you don't need it. This is not issue.

Rika

00:09:724 (1,1) - what about using only one spinner? it's fine imo
00:30:121 (9,10,11) - try Distance Snap 1.0x and make this triple like this one http://puu.sh/16bJQ 0.8 is fine
00:30:412 (1,2) - same here, looks better at least for me
00:35:638 (2,4) - CTRL+R? Current flow is fine
01:03:121 (5,6,7) - is this overlap intentional? http://puu.sh/16bM7 ok fixed


That's all,nice mapset and good luck!

Kawaii Rika! Here is my mod:

• General
  -> All Clear!

• Breeze's Normal
  00:02:893 (1) - Something optional: Adjust this slider in a way so the slider tick is on the red anchor. For example:
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:25:960 (1,2) - Spacing. Try moving this slider 2 at x:136 y:336 to fix this problem.
  00:26:928 (3) - If fixed above, try moving this slider at x:100 y:172 for spacing consistency.
  00:27:509 (1,2) - If fixed above, fix this spacing as well. Also a better semi-blanklet could make this pattern a bit nicer.
  00:54:025 (4) - Nazi: Move last anchor 1 grid down to make it a perfect spiral slider.
  01:25:186 (6) - Nazi: Move red anchor point 1 grid down, so it snaps exactly to the slider tick.
  01:26:928 (3,4,5) - Be cafeful. This pattern has a bad polarity. Novice players could get a miss here.
  01:37:960 (2) - Another Nazi (sorry XD): Adjust the slider so the red sanchor point snaps exactly to the slider tick:
  
  SPOILER

  

  80,192,97960,2,0,B|140:144|188:192|188:192|236:240|296:192,1,240,0|4

• Melo's Hard
  -> Very Good!

• Rika
  -> I recommend HP Drain and Overall Difficulty to be 7. Just a suggestion!
  00:03:462 (5) - A whistle at the beginning of this slider looks nice here. It also makes it consistent with the piano sounds.
  00:08:585 (2) - Remove this whistle since there is no piano sounds here. It would make your hitsounds a bit more consistent. It seems that you are trying to follow the most prominent piano sounds, which is the reason why I suggested this.
  01:10:476 (8) - Add a clap here? Well, for clap consistency I guess XD.
  01:13:283 (2,3) - I can hear claps on the music here. Consider adding claps here as well.
  01:18:412 (1) - Add a whistle at the beginning of this slider since the piano sounds is still playing here. Do not remove the finish since you can hear finish as well.
  01:19:186 (3) - Same as above. Add whistle here, but do not remove the finish.

Good Map indeed! Keep up the good work!

giO- wrote:

Melo's Hard
00:50:154 (3) - try to move here x:248 y:168 i prefer the current one

wantuole wrote:

[Hard]
00:33:509 (1,2,3) - 3 is new cb dislike how it looks so i put the newcombo there

intoon wrote:

[Melo's Hard]
00:44:154 (4) - wont make much difference
01:29:444 (1,2,3) - it will be kinda boring

spboxer3 wrote:

Melo's Hard

• 
  
  Hitsound
  (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  

1. 01:05:638 (2) - or 01:05:831 (3) - add whistle? ((01:05:638 (2) - follow drum 01:05:831 (3) - follow pitch. okay!

nice mapping

Andrea wrote:

[Melo's Hard]

01:00:025 (6) - New combo here would be nice imo. okay~

1. 00:30:025 (9,10,11,1,2,3) - Horribly large spacing just because of symmetry. Not worth it, especially since (9,10,11) is going upwards and it causes an uncomfortable jerk in motion. Try stacking each of the three triples for better effect.
2. 00:52:283 (5) - Mismapped. Nothing starts here; rather, (4) should be the start of the slider if you're using a slider.
3. 00:55:380 (7) - Here too.

1. 00:48:025 (5) - Clap missing, probably not intentional.

1. 00:44:928 - 00:43:380 - this
2. 00:54:025 (4) - Do like 00:57:121 (4,5) - 's rhythm.

those wrote:

[Rika]

1. 00:30:025 (9,10,11,1,2,3) - Horribly large spacing just because of symmetry. Not worth it, especially since (9,10,11) is going upwards and it causes an uncomfortable jerk in motion. Try stacking each of the three triples for better effect. I was find every player to test it, but nobady complain about this issue
2. 00:52:283 (5) - Mismapped. Nothing starts here; rather, (4) should be the start of the slider if you're using a slider. sound not bad really,It isn't interfere the rhythm
3. 00:55:380 (7) - Here too. ^

[Melo]

1. 00:48:025 (5) - Clap missing, probably not intentional. fixed

[Breeze]

1. 00:44:928 - 00:43:380 - this
2. 00:54:025 (4) - Do like 00:57:121 (4,5) - 's rhythm. nope,really no need same rhythm,it's feel boring (rhythm/pattern)

those wrote:

I recommend you try it and get other people to test to see if they complain about it.

Andrea wrote:

Ranked~