1. Hard (4.82 stars, 388 notes)
2. Kiiwa's Easy (1.5 stars, 123 notes)
3. Normal (4.14 stars, 210 notes)
4. Spinboxer (5 stars, 532 notes)

karenying wrote:

彩華...以前跟atk開過 現在人都不見了/-\

Kiiwa wrote:

Hard
01:07:139 (2) - Really badly into the health bar. It looks bad when playing... http://puu.sh/1yLRh D:
02:24:027 (1) - Use same position patterning to 01:27:138 (1) - ok
02:20:472 (1,2,1,2) - and 01:23:583 (1,1,1,1) - is inconsistant.ok

Normal
00:26:477 - Add whistle here like Hard.ok
Suggestion/Idea:

SPOILER

01:23:361 (1) - Remove new cobmo,
01:23:805 (2) - Add new combo,
01:26:249 (3) - Add new combo.

MerryGate wrote:

from your queue

[General]
-you should be set AudioLeadIn 1500 in Spinboxer
-consistent with Countdown and LetterboxInBreaks
Because same starting point in all diff yes
-Artist name change to "彩華"...? hmm why


[Normal]
Inherited Points 02:16:847 - snap to 02:16:916 yes
Drain -1 yes
00:20:477 (2,1) - Confuse the beginner? i think it's ok, not easiest diff

example

00:46:249 (1,2) - ^
00:55:138 (1,1) - ^
01:25:361 (2) - ^

[Hard]
I think very difficult as Hard diff...
AR-1 AR is low enough

Inherited Points

01:17:555 - snap to 01:17:583
01:19:333 - snap to 01:19:361
01:19:666 - snap to 01:19:583
02:16:847 - snap to 02:16:916

00:28:588 (1) - Unsnapped spinner end yes
00:38:694 (4,5) - Unnecessary jump slightly adjusted
00:50:916 (5,6) - ^
00:58:027 (1) - NC yes
01:20:027 (1) - ~ 01:27:138 (1) - It seems like the Insane diff
02:16:916 (1) - ~ 02:24:027 (1) - ^
02:19:138 (6) - snap yes

Gloria Guard wrote:

Hi m4m

[Normal]

00:26:699 (1) remove note and add spin?

00:56:027 (1,2) Followed the same as the time slider and add notes?

02:13:361 (7) remove note and 1/4 reserve slider 02:14:694 add note

gdeath wrote:

randomly pick up from map ocean.
dont kds this post as only two diffs got checked.

[Hard]
move the inherited timing section a quarter note back since it is directly on top of a note. Otherwise, the timing section wont work, if players hit them a bit faster. yep this issue was confusing in the past but luckily it's been resolved
Well, it might be a big project. but even if you dont wanna make any change, it doesnt matter.
Last word: hitsounds you bulit are great.

regenz wrote:

Mod4mod form your queue
Normal
00:08:922 (1) - i think this note is not fit for finish
00:24:922 (1) - move 1/2 beat early and end at old spot not following that track here, sry
01:05:138 (4) - made this return?

Hard
01:16:249 (1,2,1,2) - made this more interest shape than just straight line. sure
01:25:361 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - can made better? ..
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/541065

jonathanlfj wrote:

hi doing m4m~
really nice instrumental <3

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
Probably already mentioned, add lead in and close letter box on spinboxer diff~ yes
Why not make the spinner-circle.png this colour? it looks more fitting imo: hmm, how to say it. i don't think it needs to be all blue

SPOILER

[Normal]
00:31:583 (3) - aline it between 00:32:472 (1,2) so it looks better

SPOILER

sry it feels a bit to leaned if that
01:05:138 (4) - add repeat to this slider? there is a strong beat in the music
01:26:249 (3,4,5,6,1) - i suggest you take these out of stack, because slack leniency makes it very ugly and hard to read. Here is what I would do (swapped notes for repeat slider, last note is in stack):

SPOILER

01:56:027 (2) - take repeat off? It feels better also considering what you did at 02:03:138 (2,3) fixed NC, but still needs opinions

[Hard]
00:27:366 (3) - 1/6? I would prefer having 1/4 here to follow the heavy drums, since the string sound is not exactly 1/6 form what I hear at 25% playback speed lol ok, changed to 1/4
00:40:472 (4) - forgot whistle here? ok
01:21:138 (8) - NC
01:22:694 (4) - ^
02:09:805 (1) - make this blanket with symmetry?

SPOILER

yea

1. Add 1500ms audio lead-in to Spinboxer diff
2. Kiiwa's Easy diff misses a uninherited timing point at 00:30:250 - with bpm 135.000, please add it and resnap all notes/inherited timing points.
3. 另外title其实可以用中文名的…………

1. You must add a reversearrow.png into your folder
2. Storyboard code:
   

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"saika.png",320,240
    M,0,87144,,479,239

   合并成同一行并且放到Background层里，现在Foreground层的SB播放有问题很蛋疼……直接把上面那两行替换成我下面这行就好
   

   Sprite,Background,Centre,"saika.png",479,239

1. there're some unsnapped inherited timing points which may affect your hitsounds so.. please check them
2. 00:15:144 (4,5) - consider a stack here? this overlap may be too hard for an Easy diff...
3. 00:22:699 (2) - er...this position is...refer to LKs' words:" lead youself into a blind alley"....so about this part, i'd like to delete this slider, and make the beat like:
   
4. 00:36:922 (3,1) - the blanket here is weird a bit...
5. 01:19:810 (4,1) - also suggest a stack
6. 01:48:033 (5,1) - recommend a repeat slider here for difficulty issue
7. 02:13:588 (1) - a weird beat here... there's no 3/2 in the music and it heard terrible also... think about this:
   

1. 00:18:922 (2) - recommend to delete repeat and move to next white tick, head better imo
   
2. 00:24:477 (3,1,2,3,4,1) - 这里也是我认为节奏没有前面的好听……倾向于建议保持和前面连续的节奏，比如这样：
   
   而且同样的节奏梗其实你在图中已经反复用了……
3. 00:43:361 (3) - 移动到前面的白线？
4. 01:26:249 (1,2,3,4,1) - 有一点担忧这里的难度……
5. 01:41:361 (1,1,1,1) - 这4个建议在空间上错开一点……
6. 01:56:027 (2) - delete repeat to keep consistent beat as before
7. 02:12:472 (5,6) - 有点别扭，不如删掉然后把节奏做成和其他类似的地方相同
   
8. 02:16:916 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里有2个问题 -
   
   1. 1. 节奏错位，Slider头尾的位置刚好全压反了，所有应该是Slider头的节奏点都做成了Slider尾
   2. 2. Combo太长了，拆成2个combo会好很多。一般来说E/N里不建议6个以上的combo，前面有一处7的因为看没有太合适的拆分点所以才跳过
   然后这里收尾的Slider 02:19:583 (8) - 可以加一次折返，甚至前面的(6,7)都可以合并成同一个双次折返的Slider
9. 02:22:694 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 同样是有些让人担心的难度问题

1. 00:05:366 - 这一个空档HP下降了差不多1/3。。。
2. 00:13:144 (3) - 考虑把滑条方向弄成垂直的折返箭头在上方这样？
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:15:144 (1,2) - 其实这两个可以考虑把方向交换一下，即Slider头位置不变的同时，(1)变成左->右，(2)则做成右->左，这样和前面的一组Kick Slider跳放在一起会有移动上的连续感
4. 00:39:138 (1) - 我觉得没必要非用长滑条啦，一个note然后1/1空拍之后来个slider也不错～而且打击感和节奏感更好～你觉得呢～
   
5. 01:38:249 (1) - 这里，01:38:916 (1) - 以及01:40:249 (1) - 的NC去掉吧和前面保持一致

1. 00:15:366 (1,2,3,4) - 这个这个……我觉得你做一个平滑的5连都比这么摆好……当然如果是我的话我更倾向于在00:15:922 - 加note然后做个小弧线的5连比如
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:25:366 (3) - 按照你前面这一段节奏的话这里的折返有点无理…………
3. 00:28:477 (1,1,2,1,2,3,4) - 这一段我觉得用1/2stack带入1/4效果比这样放2连要更好～
   
4. 00:52:361 (2) - 这个太容易miss了…………
5. 00:54:139 (2) - ^
6. 00:56:805 (5) - ……………………这个实在是有些坑……
7. 00:57:805 (1) - 这里试下用1/6折返如何？形成一个逐渐加快的过渡感～
8. 01:03:916 - 放了那么多三连了这里也放过做过渡会比较好？
9. 01:06:583 (3) - …………把01:06:472 (2) - 删了把这个挪到红线上不是很好么……
10. 01:08:249 (2,3) - ^，实在不太明白你这里的节奏而且听起来也不是很舒服……
11. 01:19:361 (10,11) - 唔……跟着前面的1/4一口气做下来如何1/6放在后面段我觉得更好～
    
12. 01:35:805 (8,9,1) - 这里的遮挡还带了个很confused的NC实在是有些过分了……
13. 01:37:472 - 前面用三连了这里和01:37:694 - 和01:37:694 - 加note做个stream如何？
14. 01:37:805 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这里如果要用音乐重复做梗就干脆把几个(2)也放到一起去做的彻底些……要不就把Slider稍微错开点……
15. 01:58:138 (8) - 有些莫名也不是很好听的蓝线折返……
16. 02:02:249 (1,2,3,4) - 这个遮挡的起点感觉也不好……有种为了增加读图难度而故意这么放的感觉……
17. 02:03:472 (3) - 依然是不好听的蓝线折返，后面还有几处不反复说了……
18. 02:05:249 (3) - ^
19. 02:08:916 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 有必要…………么……这么放还不如4个slider来的干净……而且还把02:09:805 (1) - 完全给挡住了…………感觉看起来就像一团乱麻……

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~mod for request~~
中文好方便啊～

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]

1. Add 1500ms audio lead-in to Spinboxer diff yes
2. Kiiwa's Easy diff misses a uninherited timing point at 00:30:250 - with bpm 135.000, please add it and resnap all notes/inherited timing points. that's a mistake. removed red line 不过貌似-3更准于是我就变成1808了了
3. 另外title其实可以用中文名的………… okkk

[Storyboard & Skin]

1. You must add a reversearrow.png into your folder added
2. Storyboard code:
   

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"saika.png",320,240
    M,0,87144,,479,239

   合并成同一行并且放到Background层里，现在Foreground层的SB播放有问题很蛋疼……直接把上面那两行替换成我下面这行就好 ok
   

   Sprite,Background,Centre,"saika.png",479,239

[Normal]

1. 00:18:922 (2) - recommend to delete repeat and move to next white tick, head better imo
   
2. 00:24:477 (3,1,2,3,4,1) - 这里也是我认为节奏没有前面的好听……倾向于建议保持和前面连续的节奏，比如这样：
   
   而且同样的节奏梗其实你在图中已经反复用了…… 233看見第一條本來想改 但一看後面覺得有點害怕 因為我這裡00:17:363 (4) - 的節奏就無視了那個音 00:17:585 (5) - 於是算了
3. 00:43:361 (3) - 移动到前面的白线？ 00:40:251 (4) - 這裡貌似和這裡一樣的作用 起紅線
4. 01:26:249 (1,2,3,4,1) - 有一点担忧这里的难度…… 怒簡化
5. 01:41:361 (1,1,1,1) - 这4个建议在空间上错开一点…… 好
6. 01:56:027 (2) - delete repeat to keep consistent beat as before ok
7. 02:12:472 (5,6) - 有点别扭，不如删掉然后把节奏做成和其他类似的地方相同看了眼星神前面做的發現也是這樣的節奏 有點跪不改了
   
8. 02:16:916 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里有2个问题 -
   
   1. 1. 节奏错位，Slider头尾的位置刚好全压反了，所有应该是Slider头的节奏点都做成了Slider尾
   2. 2. Combo太长了，拆成2个combo会好很多。一般来说E/N里不建议6个以上的combo，前面有一处7的因为看没有太合适的拆分点所以才跳过
   然后这里收尾的Slider 02:19:583 (8) - 可以加一次折返，甚至前面的(6,7)都可以合并成同一个双次折返的Slider 有點服氣 蛋碎 果然不能靠別人23333 改了
9. 02:22:694 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 同样是有些让人担心的难度问题 這個感覺還好 不是stack

[Hard]

1. 00:05:366 - 这一个空档HP下降了差不多1/3。。。這個我覺得大丈夫
2. 00:13:144 (3) - 考虑把滑条方向弄成垂直的折返箭头在上方这样？ok
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:15:144 (1,2) - 其实这两个可以考虑把方向交换一下，即Slider头位置不变的同时，(1)变成左->右，(2)则做成右->左，这样和前面的一组Kick Slider跳放在一起会有移动上的连续感 那是另一種擺法 不過我覺得現在這種穿插式的挺好
4. 00:39:138 (1) - 我觉得没必要非用长滑条啦，一个note然后1/1空拍之后来个slider也不错～而且打击感和节奏感更好～你觉得呢～
   哭哭 這樣slidertick就無意義了 然後之前那個跳也得改 關鍵是不想錯過長白線的重音
5. 01:38:249 (1) - 这里，01:38:916 (1) - 以及01:40:249 (1) - 的NC去掉吧和前面保持一致

呃……大概先这样。。。？先弄着吧我觉得可能我们需要irc recheck...

Scorpiour wrote:

[Spinboxer]

1. 00:15:366 (1,2,3,4) - 这个这个……我觉得你做一个平滑的5连都比这么摆好……当然如果是我的话我更倾向于在00:15:922 - 加note然后做个小弧线的5连比如 我讓2,3,4反向 這樣應該會比較好點 這地方我認為不適合平滑式的pattern
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:25:366 (3) - 按照你前面这一段节奏的话这里的折返有点无理…………無理的不是折返處 是00:26:141 - 沒有加note所以感覺會怪怪的 於是我在這加上了note
3. 00:28:477 (1,1,2,1,2,3,4) - 这一段我觉得用1/2stack带入1/4效果比这样放2连要更好～ 好
   
4. 00:52:361 (2) - 这个太容易miss了…………改了點
5. 00:54:139 (2) - ^ ^
6. 00:56:805 (5) - ……………………这个实在是有些坑…… 位置改道中間
7. 00:57:805 (1) - 这里试下用1/6折返如何？形成一个逐渐加快的过渡感～ 好吧
8. 01:03:916 - 放了那么多三连了这里也放过做过渡会比较好？恩
9. 01:06:583 (3) - …………把01:06:472 (2) - 删了把这个挪到红线上不是很好么……本來我節奏就是設計成這樣的 因此我並不想改
10. 01:08:249 (2,3) - ^，实在不太明白你这里的节奏而且听起来也不是很舒服…… ^
11. 01:19:361 (10,11) - 唔……跟着前面的1/4一口气做下来如何1/6放在后面段我觉得更好～ 好
    
12. 01:35:805 (8,9,1) - 这里的遮挡还带了个很confused的NC实在是有些过分了……事實上我打過了 這地方沒問題的 不過我把NC改了
13. 01:37:472 - 前面用三连了这里和01:37:694 - 和01:37:694 - 加note做个stream如何？
14. 01:37:805 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这里如果要用音乐重复做梗就干脆把几个(2)也放到一起去做的彻底些……要不就把Slider稍微错开点…… no.不喜歡這樣 為什麼連2一定要重覆? 我認為不必要,2的間距是用來當蓄力用的 在最後一次時突破使用3連
15. 01:58:138 (8) - 有些莫名也不是很好听的蓝线折返…… 應該說這段算是創作的一部分 在我看來並沒有不適合只是很少人這麼做 因此感覺不習慣而已
16. 02:02:249 (1,2,3,4) - 这个遮挡的起点感觉也不好……有种为了增加读图难度而故意这么放的感觉……這麼說吧 本來我要做得徹底點 根本想完全覆蓋 這地方給我的聽覺就是頓,在迴轉回去 就是如此 跟音樂而已。我已經放開讓讀圖比較好讀點了;w;
17. 02:03:472 (3) - 依然是不好听的蓝线折返，后面还有几处不反复说了…… 同前面解釋 抱歉摟 我還是不想改
18. 02:05:249 (3) - ^ ^
19. 02:08:916 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 有必要…………么……这么放还不如4个slider来的干净……而且还把02:09:805 (1) - 完全给挡住了…………感觉看起来就像一团乱麻…… 好 改成slider

呃……大概先这样。。。？先弄着吧我觉得可能我们需要irc recheck...

Scorpiour wrote:

[Kiiwa's Easy]

1. there're some unsnapped inherited timing points which may affect your hitsounds so.. please check them Fix
2. 00:15:144 (4,5) - consider a stack here? this overlap may be too hard for an Easy diff... Stack is more confusing then space for Easy I think.
3. 00:22:699 (2) - er...this position is...refer to LKs' words:" lead youself into a blind alley"....so about this part, i'd like to delete this slider, and make the beat like:
   Fix
4. 00:36:922 (3,1) - the blanket here is weird a bit... Fix
5. 01:19:810 (4,1) - also suggest a stack Again, not stack.
6. 01:48:033 (5,1) - recommend a repeat slider here for difficulty issue Fixed in different way.
7. 02:13:588 (1) - a weird beat here... there's no 3/2 in the music and it heard terrible also... think about this:
   Not fixed, I think the current rhythm here is OK.

SliderBorder : 255,250,228

1. 00:01:808 - You can't stack inherit section and timing section except for slider speed changes ._.
   
   

   No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point. An inherited timing section may be placed on an uninherited timing section (but only to change the slider speed). Having two uninherited or two inherited sections on top of each other will cause problems within the beatmap

   (they're easily mergeable though)
2. 00:19:585 (1) - Missing clap on slider's end?
3. 00:36:918 (4) - How about making this slider more elbow-ish, like this:
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:01:808 - Again, you can't stack inherit section and timing section except for slider speed changes ._.
2. 00:48:474 (2) - CTRL + G for circular flow perhaps?

1. 00:58:251 (2) - Umm are you sure about this? I'd remove one repeat because of the reaction time with 00:58:696 (1)...
2. 01:12:696 (6) - Stack to previous (2)'s end instead? (umm idk why this anti-jump so sudden ._.)

Niva wrote:

(please don't kd... CYTUSSSSSSSSSSS) ;_;

[General]

-> Not really sure with white as slider-border, I'd use this color to compliment the skin:

SliderBorder : 255,250,228

ok done

-> Also with the skin, somehow I'm having trouble with reading purple approach circles on the current white BG... Maybe just me o.o (thickening the approach circle *may* help here, again maybe it's just me) orz I played it lots of times but I didn't feel it's hard to recognize so no change. background dim would help you;_;

[Normal]

1. 00:01:808 - You can't stack inherit section and timing section except for slider speed changes ._. oh ok, fixed
   
   

   No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point. An inherited timing section may be placed on an uninherited timing section (but only to change the slider speed). Having two uninherited or two inherited sections on top of each other will cause problems within the beatmap

   (they're easily mergeable though)
2. 00:19:585 (1) - Missing clap on slider's end? yep..but I remembered I added it ?.? anyway fixed
3. 00:36:918 (4) - How about making this slider more elbow-ish, like this:
   
   SPOILER

   

sry don't really like this shape

[Hard]

1. 00:01:808 - Again, you can't stack inherit section and timing section except for slider speed changes ._.fixed
2. 00:48:474 (2) - CTRL + G for circular flow perhaps? ok

[Spinboxer]

1. 00:58:251 (2) - Umm are you sure about this? I'd remove one repeat because of the reaction time with 00:58:696 (1)...
2. 01:12:696 (6) - Stack to previous (2)'s end instead? (umm idk why this anti-jump so sudden ._.) and sp3 said he changed everything you mentioned. check it plz :3

The rest is awesome, even the inventive 1/6s, sorry for the very rushing check >_<

LKs wrote:

try to enjoy sp3's new exploration ;_;