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07th Expansion - worldenddominator

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Natteke
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on December-04-12 at 01:02:55

Artist: 07th Expansion
Title: worldenddominator
Source: Umineko no Naku Koro ni
Tags: zts Rue La Cataline LC
BPM: 142
Filesize: 6127kb
Play Time: 02:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.96 stars, 156 notes)
  2. Hard (4.94 stars, 665 notes)
  3. La Cataline (4.99 stars, 776 notes)
  4. Rue's Normal (4.26 stars, 237 notes)
Download: 07th Expansion - worldenddominator
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Cast:

Rue
La Cataline

❤❤❤Download MMzz's Taiko!❤❤❤
wowshakhov
в харде 03:03:380 (1) под хитберстами не видно
crabovan
Привет, мод из рашна.

General
Новое бг. Там по 1 пикселю наточность была (потом придираться будут).

Hard

01:08:450 (5,6,7) - ИМХО, хреновенько это. 6,7 перенеси хоть чуть дальше от 5.
01:15:000 (2) - Можно поставить на место начала слайдера 01:13:521 (3).
01:34:014 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Все зеленые точки можно сделать на 10%-20% громче для лучшего эффекта. Или первую-вторую сделать затихающими, а остальные нарастающими.
02:21:549 (4) - Лучше перенеси подальше от начала 02:21:971 (1) эдакой джампик сделай. А поставить можешь на начало 02:20:281 (1) если хочешь, конечно.
02:45:633 (1,2,1) - Некрасиво смотрится. переделай 02:45:633 (1) так, чтобы между <-- и 02:47:323 (1) был DS 0.00x-0.01x.
03:34:646 (4) - Куда-то перемести. После 03:33:273 (4,5,6,7) остается куча 300 и они закрывают большую часть пути слайдера.

Изик моддить не буду :с
-Nothing-To-Do-Here-
Несколько предложений :
[Hard]
01:36:760 (2) -
01:46:267 (1) -
02:21:971 (1) -
powpow9089
._." 2 osb file?

EDIT:
[General]
Worldenddominator or worldenddominator??
This mapset could have used another diff in-between Normal (which is more of an Easy) and Hard
add "visual" to tags, maybe??

[Easy]
00:18:380 (2) too hard for first try
01:46:267 (2) ^
ampzz
Random bits touched -
SPOILER
21:34 Natteke: : wanna mod? D;
21:34 ampzz: : Sure.
21:34 Natteke: : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/57032
21:34 ampzz: : Long time no see. :D
21:34 Natteke: : :D/
21:34 *ampzz is listening to (Nekomata Master feat. JUNE - being torn the sky)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/56583]
21:34 ampzz: : Funky map.
21:34 ampzz: : XD
21:35 *ampzz is editing (07th Expansion - worldenddominator)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/57032]
21:35 Natteke: : Lol
21:35 Natteke: : you've improved
21:37 ampzz: : First thing's first
21:37 ampzz: : play.
21:41 ampzz: : Hmmm
21:41 ampzz: : fun
21:41 ampzz: : but
21:41 ampzz: : some bits felt weird
21:41 ampzz: : 2 secs
21:43 ampzz: : Hmmm
21:43 ampzz: : thoughts on 00:38:873 (8) - becoming a 1/4 slide?
21:43 Natteke: : just post it all lol
21:44 ampzz: : 00:50:704 (1,2,3) - This just looked ugly when I got to it.
21:45 ampzz: : Would like the combo to look/play a little nicer.
21:48 ampzz: : Something like this - http://puu.sh/USQX
21:54 ampzz: : Some idiots will likely complain about this repeater being slightly covered - 02:01:056 (4) -
21:54 Natteke: : already fixed that
21:55 ampzz: : 02:21:971 (1) - Shorten by 1/1 and make it a repeat slider.
21:55 Natteke: : nah
21:55 Natteke: : it follows the beat
21:55 Natteke: : listen carefully
21:55 Natteke: : there's that fx
21:55 Natteke: : dum
21:55 Natteke: : DUUUUUHHH
21:56 ampzz: : Oh, the guy's voice in the background?
21:57 Natteke: : I don't know what it is
21:57 Natteke: : but yeah
21:57 ampzz: : Hmm
21:58 ampzz: : 02:27:746 (6,7) - Isn't the lead into this repeat slider a 1/6 then the 1/8th?
21:59 Natteke: : that would be confusing to play
22:00 ampzz: : 1/6 repeat slider for that then the 1/8 to rap it back to normal?
22:00 ampzz: : Like this - http://puu.sh/USY4
22:00 Natteke: : nah, I like 1/4 stream better ;
22:00 Natteke: : D;
22:00 ampzz: : kk
22:01 ampzz: : Need to make those hits louder then.
22:02 ampzz: : Slight request for hitsounds: Can the dog barks be whistles?
22:02 Natteke: : huuh?
22:03 *Natteke is listening to (Shiki mixed by Djsmalls - Air)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/13008]
22:03 Natteke: : ?
22:03 ampzz: : Stuff like this 02:55:563 (2) -
22:03 Natteke: : o
22:03 Natteke: : these are not dog barks D:
22:04 ampzz: : They're not?
22:04 Natteke: : nope
22:04 Natteke: : just some reversed fx
22:06 ampzz: : [Easy]
22:07 ampzz: : People do complain about hitbursts covering the slider ends
22:07 ampzz: : 00:38:028 (1) -
22:07 ampzz: : Which is silly..
22:07 Natteke: : wut
22:07 Natteke: : that's retarded
22:07 ampzz: : COnsidering it should all be gone by then.
22:07 ampzz: : Yes it is.
22:09 ampzz: : 01:20:704 (4) - Thoughts on a small 1/1 slider instead of the (4,5)
22:09 Natteke: : hmm, that'd fell like I forgot to map the rest
22:10 ampzz: : I was thinking more about having the slider ball look like its roll is that effect sound.
22:10 ampzz: : lol
22:12 ampzz: : 01:46:056 (2) - Move this back onto the white tick.
22:12 ampzz: : At 01:46:056 -
22:12 Natteke: : no it's intentional
22:12 Natteke: : for whistles
22:12 Natteke: : tam tam tam
22:12 ampzz: : Sounds odd on the red imo.
22:12 Natteke: : tam tam tadam tam
22:13 Natteke: : same on tieff's map
22:13 Natteke: : and my hard
22:15 ampzz: : Yeah those were the only things I could pick out.
22:15 Natteke: : good
22:15 ampzz: : I could go on about sliders but cbf'd.
22:15 ampzz: : lol
22:15 Natteke: : you can post the log
22:15 ampzz: : Would mean touching all of them.
Kotek-
Sup

[General]
Можно добавить киай тайм. (02:28:732 - 02:56:619)
Энивей тут нужен нормал. (Видимо, это будет чья-то гуэст диффа.)

[Hard]
00:37:816 (3) - Как насчёт x:232 y:144?
00:38:450 (6,7,8) - x:272 y:256?
00:46:478 (3) - Ctrl+R
01:19:014 (3) - ^
02:30:845 (2) - ^
03:08:450 (1) - ^
03:19:859 (4) - ^

Вот такой хреновый мод. К сожалению, это всё, что я могу.
Удачи с ранком.
Charsi
BPM: 142
Offset: 0
Kite
gave some suggestions in irc, map is amazing so not much to be modded

SPOILER
16:01 Kite: : 01:36:760 - why dont you add 1/3 here?
16:02 Kite: : imo gives a better feel for the music instead of that slider D:
16:06 Kite: : imo the break can be mapped really great with stack mapping on white ticks
16:07 Kite: : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/401293
16:13 Kite: : anyways, great map
Heatherfield
something to say before modding this...
SPOILER
I always thought tieff's version of this song is the beginning of setting his real mapping style, which we all loved so much. Though it's such a well done map, everytime I looked at it, I always thought it still could be better. I was so happy when he mapped the remix version of the song, which I was really amazed at. And now you mapped the original song with this mature mapping style, I really appriciate it, thank you!
[Easy]
many useless lines at the end of the map
[Hard]
basicly i think the map should be a little bit harder (bigger jumps to make it better looking and stuff lol
01:07:605 (1) - maybe move nc to next note?
01:09:295 (1) - ^ this makes a little bit more sense to me
01:11:830 (3,4) - 01:16:056 (5,6) - a little hard to read at first trial, maybe use new combo to show difference? Not anything big though
01:36:760 (2) - we need moaaaaaaaaaaar 1/3 notes, which is koooooooool
01:40:246 (2) - add note?
01:46:267 (1) - if you add note on 1:36, add note before here too for symmetry
02:24:929 (7) - maybe nc here instead of 02:25:352 (1) - ?
all of the above are suggestions, good luck
Topic Starter
Natteke
Thanks guys, fixed lots of stuff.

Rue's normal and LC's diff are yet to come.
Ulysses
Natteke welcome back and I love you,marry me.
Topic Starter
Natteke
I love you too, nold
Rue
wb teke

фыр

http://puu.sh/Vz0s
yeahyeahyeahhh
Ah guess you don't need my diff lol
DarknessAngel
welcome back ! \:D/
Topic Starter
Natteke
\:D/
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
meow
Frizz
Hello there.

[Rue's Normal]
AR-1 perhaps? I feel AR6 is a bit too fast here.

No kds for this. Can't find anything tbh loving your map as always.
Have a star \:D/
rockleejkooo
привет, теке, руе :о. как и обещал, вот

[General]
• отлично

[Easy]
• 00:17:957 - может, тут бит? как-то странно играется в том месте, да и в музыке бит слышен

[Rue's Normal]
• 00:39:929 (1,2,3) - может, заменить эту штуку на 1/3 биты? :О как в треке
• 00:58:521 - тут бит вставить? хорошо выглядит постепенное сокращение промежутка
• 02:40:563 (4,6) - такой некрасивый оверлап :С

[Hard]
• 02:21:549 (4,5,6) - тут стрим прям просится :о

всё. про. все про :О
Rue

Frizz925 wrote:

[Rue's Normal]
AR-1 perhaps? I feel AR6 is a bit too fast here. yup

rockleejkooo wrote:

[Rue's Normal]
• 00:39:929 (1,2,3) - может, заменить эту штуку на 1/3 биты? :О как в треке там 1/4, но все равно не стоит :D
• 00:58:521 - тут бит вставить? хорошо выглядит постепенное сокращение промежутка почему бы и нет
• 02:40:563 (4,6) - такой некрасивый оверлап :С этот норм, зато поправил соседний
http://puu.sh/XX6I
La Cataline
[DBF]

La Cataline wrote:

http://puu.sh/12hia
Epic diff is epic.

1 month is worth it.

Fav.

yongtw123
[Easy]
00:18:380 (2) - i really don't get this rhythm, the beat is strong so why skip the previous white tick?
00:50:281 (4) - clap?
00:54:084 (1,2,1,2) - putting claps at the end of these sliders may be a nice idea?
01:02:112 (2) - and perhaps this one too?
01:04:014 (5) - ^ ?
01:04:225 (1,2) - ^ (end of slider) ?
01:46:267 (2) - same as 00:18:380 (2) ...
01:59:577 (2) - clap?

[Rue's Normal]
:arrow: AR+1 due to density of rhythm and the large spacing
01:39:295 (2) - way too close to (1)
01:49:436 (3) - perhaps switch to soft whistle+finish at end of slider?
01:56:197 (2) - ^

[Hard]
01:06:971 (5) - perhaps NC since spacing changes after this
01:32:957 (1) - curve this better?
01:34:014 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - can you increase volume for these? i don't "feel" i'm hitting them
02:01:056 (4) - move this one further from (3) as to see the approaching circle
02:20:915 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - manually move this large stack further away so that in playmode they are correct spaced
03:56:830 (6) - same as 02:01:056 (4)

[La Cataline]
02:13:943 ~ 02:24:612 - i'm sorry but my ears fail to tell me why this section has such complex rhythm...

======================================

excellent difficulty progression
hitsounds are very good
very fluent flow too

definitely a star
tieff
It's amazing! Definitely will be making a diff to this piece of art. :D
Mercurial
Welcome back Natteke, I've missed you :3
Rue

yongtw123 wrote:

[Rue's Normal]
AR+1 due to density of rhythm and the large spacing nope
01:39:295 (2) - way too close to (1) yus
01:49:436 (3) - perhaps switch to soft whistle+finish at end of slider? aight
01:56:197 (2) - ^ ^
http://puu.sh/16m10
LKs
[general]

unify tags

according to the taiko creteria, you need another taiko muzukashii diff?

[La Ca]

00:24:931 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:06:760 (3,4,5,6) - 1/4 jump is kinda sudden and large. at least move to x120 y296 to have same spacing amonst these three 01:05:915 (1,2,3) - or use NC change
01:30:211 (3) - spacing is weird. try x40 y184
00:48:380 (2) - I would whistle the head but not the end
01:39:295 (5) - ^
00:52:393 (1) - whitle the end but not the head
01:43:943 (3) - move clap to the end and clap this 01:44:577 (6) -
02:28:098 (1) - Idk if the majority of the staff agree with this jump. this may be the most important issue you'd consider
02:30:000 (1) - x189 y234
03:50:280 (10) - overlap more like this?

[Taiko]

I see clear structure, reasonable rhythm changes which follows the song's original changes and flexible d k ratio

[Hard]

I want you to adjust these sliders
01:32:957 (1) -
00:48:169 (3) -
00:50:704 (1) -

[easy]

01:34:647 (1) -
67,91,94647,6,2,B|160:64|145:148|243:110,1,180,6|0
01:48:169 (1,2) -
408,272,108169,6,6,B|472:202|462:82|392:29,1,270,6|10
303,36,109859,2,2,B|208:54,1,90,2|10
Topic Starter
Natteke
Oookay

Tags ✓
Unsnapped Notes ✓
Taiko diff in progress

The rest:
The sliders look like that for a reason, I'm not after perfection.
LC didn't agree with anything so I just changed the unsnapped slider.

Thanks a lot!
Topic Starter
Natteke
bump

MMzz
Bubbled!
Topic Starter
Natteke

MMzz wrote:

Bubbled!
Charles445
This map is edgy
Let's rank it

~Ranked!~
Topic Starter
Natteke
Countdown for unrank begins!

thanks brah

also kudos for some changes on some diffs

also happy 40th me!! in 10 years I will make it to 50! maybe
Aurele

Natteke wrote:

Countdown for unrank begins!

thanks brah

also kudos for some changes on some diffs


Congratz Natteke!
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
hi natteke

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Aoriki
Yay, another Umineko map.

Congratz.
Stefan

Aoriki wrote:

Yay, another Umineko map.

Congratz.
Suimya

Aoriki wrote:

Yay, another Umineko map.

Congratz.
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