Hello aabc <3
[Easy]
i agree with cRyo, AR2 is better
00:02:874 (3) - this is a bit unsymmetrical ><
01:29:985 (1) - awkward flow imo... maybe try this pattern instead? x_x
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/416106[Normal]
00:09:763 (4,1) - i dont think a partial overlapping looks that great, try to move (1) leftward
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/41608300:27:319 (4) - clap here too like what you did at 00:23:763 -
00:59:208 - this finish sounds odd to me ><
01:10:430 (1) - this can be stacked better imo~
01:29:541 - clap
01:29:985 (1,2) - spacing? o.o
[Hard]
00:24:874 (3,4,5) - i prefer something like this o.o
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/41610700:28:874 (4,5,6) - how about placing them like this~
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/41610800:41:541 (3,4) - these sliders are kinda messy imo. try to make them more symmetrical~
01:27:096 (3,4,5) - this pattern is not that beautiful for me~
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/416111[Insane]
00:13:319 (1) - add a note here like hard diff? i expected a finish here QAQ
00:16:652 (4,5,6) - this triplet is a bit late, it should be at 00:16:430 -
00:21:319 (3,5) - make these sliders more curved? these linear sliders make the jump uncomfortable imo
00:23:985 - in this section as you can see there's an extra percussion here, so you should add a note here imo
00:39:319 (3,4,5,6,7) - this is not so uncommon but i prefer lower spacing here like 01:00:652 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - cuz it's a bit hard to hit~
00:58:874 (3,4,5) - hard to read due to the previous jump. it'd be better to make these spacings bigger
01:08:208 (6) - cope paste from (5) ?
01:08:652 (1,2,3) - maybe make them symmetrical like this?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/41612268,136,68652,6,0,B|44:192|68:244,1,112.5
262,245,69096,2,0,B|228:292|168:300,1,112.5
168,84,69541,2,0,B|228:91|262:138,2,112.5
adjust hitsound/spacing by yourself please><
01:10:208 - same as 00:23:985 -
01:18:652 (3,4,5) - same as 00:16:652 (4,5,6) - Q_Q
moe map ><