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ClariS - Anata ni FIT (Short Ver.)

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Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Andrea
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sabato 7 luglio 2012 at 19:35:15

Artist: ClariS
Title: Anata ni FIT (Short Ver.)
Source: Nendoroid Generation
Tags: PSP Opening Alice Clara Chewin cRyo[iceeicee] _Gezo_ osuplayer111 -Sekai- Sekai
BPM: 132
Filesize: 10063kb
Play Time: 01:33
Difficulties Available:
  1. Chewin's Normal (3,58 stars, 125 notes)
  2. cRyo's Hard (4,79 stars, 187 notes)
  3. Gezo's Taiko Oni (4,83 stars, 465 notes)
  4. Insane (4,98 stars, 239 notes)
  5. Sekai's Easy (2,45 stars, 96 notes)
Download: ClariS - Anata ni FIT (Short Ver.)
Download: ClariS - Anata ni FIT (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 156th Beatmap.

I hope you will like and enjoy it :3

Special thanks to lolcubes for the Taiko BG and to Vicho-kun for the video <3

Mapset:

Gezo's Taiko Oni - Done.
Insane - Done.
cRyo's Hard - Done.
Chewin's Normal - Done.
Sekai's Easy - Done.
Last edited by Andrea , edited 32 times in total.
Chewin
osu! Alumni
4,082 posts
Joined December 2010
Chewin
-w-/
suzutsukikanade
653 posts
Joined July 2011
suzutsukikanade
wow
Darksonic
Global Moderator
2,794 posts
Joined November 2010
Darksonic
O.o
Sure
4,219 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
ClariS <3
Some suggestions on IRC

Log
16:49 ykcarrot: : I suggest increasing stack leniency. because you used 1/2 stacks many times
16:49 osuplayer111: : how much should I increase it? :3
16:50 ykcarrot: : SL 4 works well?
16:51 osuplayer111: : ok, let me try :D
16:52 ykcarrot: : it seems there are no problem with 4
16:53 osuplayer111: : ok, changed :3
16:53 osuplayer111: : something else?
16:54 ykcarrot: : uhmm..
16:54 ykcarrot: : don't you use 1/8 slider at this time?
16:54 ykcarrot: : 01:03:605 -
16:55 osuplayer111: : do you suggest to use it there? :3
16:55 ykcarrot: : well.. it's up to you
16:56 ykcarrot: : 01:02:583 (2) - delete?
16:58 ykcarrot: : 01:12:242 (9) - add whistle to reverse arrow
16:59 ykcarrot: : 00:14:514 (1) - similar with above, but add it to head
17:00 ykcarrot: : that's all for now
17:01 osuplayer111: : thanks :D
Kawayi Rika
osu! Alumni
3,635 posts
Joined December 2010
Kawayi Rika
<3 Lovely
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
=w=/
Yuzeyun
7,622 posts
Joined September 2010
Yuzeyun
Hey hey !

Can I make a taiko for this map, please ? =w=/
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Andrea

_Gezo_ wrote:

Hey hey !

Can I make a taiko for this map, please ? =w=/
Sure, but I must like it ^^
Mercurial
Mercurial
Dunno.


General


  • I think the title (Short Ver.) is not allowed anymore.
    Nothing else to poke about.


Easy

  • OD +1 for consistency with other settings.
    00:07:014 (1,2) I'd add a NC in the second slider, it fits better imo http://puu.sh/FSON
    00:14:696 (2) Vocal/Rhythm changes deserves a NC.
    01:19:696 (1,2) Same as 00:07:014

Normal


Hard


Insane

  • 00:14:287 - Add a Note, fits better with the music and it has a better playability with the next slider.
    01:05:424 (6) Why not a NC? http://puu.sh/FT16
    01:33:378 - Same suggestion as Hard.

Good Job Everyone, specially Hard diff, it has the best patterns on the entire mapset.
rEdo
809 posts
Joined November 2008
rEdo
[Sekai's Easy]
00:18:605 (1) - looks a lot more neat when you move it by a grid to the left (along with the other notes, obviously)
00:53:151 (1,2) - swap combos
01:09:514 (1) - once again, would look better if moved a grid to the right
01:27:696 (1) - I don't think it's necessary to add a new combo just for two notes.

[Chewin's Normal]
00:16:787 (4) - maybe move that a little bit higher, so it would remind of a uncompleted pentagon along with previous notes?
00:20:424 (1) - not really sure if this new combo is necessary
00:25:878 (1) - doesn't look neat, you could try moving it around so it forms a perfect triangle along with 2, 3
00:41:787 (1) - unnecessary new combo?
00:58:605 (1,2,3,4,5) - these finishes are totally overused.
01:22:242 (1) - extend it by a 1/1?

[cRyo's Hard]
00:32:696 (6) - a little bit nazi here, but imo it plays a lot better when moved a bit lower ;)
00:34:514 (3,1,2,3) - spacing, these notes are too close to each other. maybe increase the distance between them while shortening the snap on the brown notes?
00:41:787 (3) - would look a lot better if moved a bit to the left.
01:32:696 (1) - maybe something like this instead?

[osubaka's Insane]
I said all the stuff on irc already, but lost the log, so I'm gonna just rewrite them here
00:12:696 (6) - I'll stick to my opinion that you should add a new combo here.
00:29:060 (8) - move it a bit higher, so the distance between (7) and (1) is the same?
00:31:560 (6,8) - either (8) is too high or (6) is too low
00:43:151 (3,4,5) - they play a lot better in a separate combo, oh come on!
01:31:333 (5) - add a new combo here?


it's been a while since I modded, huh.
Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Tenshi-nyan
inb4 rank in 7 days.

like always.
Yuzeyun
7,622 posts
Joined September 2010
Yuzeyun
Here is the taiko, I hope you'll like it ! =w=/

By the way, while testing it, I found a different offset than yours, 418 seems to be more on-beat on my side, proven by my accuracy : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/361502 (While I got around 98,5% with the old offset)

The offset I found is in the map with the inherited re-snapped : http://puu.sh/FTfB

Good luck for your 156th rank, gogo 200 \:D/
rEdo
809 posts
Joined November 2008
rEdo

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

inb4 rank in 7 days.

like always.
like always, I see you crying like this, just saying. u mad?
Mercurial
Mercurial

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

inb4 rank in 7 days.

like always.
Sadly, complaining will not do anything, you just need to do your best in your maps, and be happy.

This is just a game.
Low
2,006 posts
Joined July 2011
Low
Hello, Andrea.

General

- Your background is not in the correct dimensions. Because of this, you may want to find a better quality BG in order to avoid black letterboxes on the side for people using 1024x768 resolution.
- Remove (Short Ver.) from the song's title due to the new rule.
- Remove -Sekai- from the tags, it can't be searched on the osu website.
- I'm not sure, but the offset seems slightly off. (I think Gezo has fixed this by the time I post this.)

Sekai's Easy

- Add +1 to the OD. 1 for any stat is much too easy. You may also want to add +1 AR. The low AR makes some of the patterns feel really cluttered and slow.
00:42:242 (3,4) - Remove the redpoint towards the end of these sliders. They're barely noticeable and make the slider look less visually appealing.
00:46:333 (2) - This should be one grid to the right in order to be aligned with (1).
00:59:514 (2) - One grid to the left to be aligned with (4).
01:08:605 (5) - One grid up for the same reason.
- This difficulty has decent flow. In my opinion, you need to work on making your sliders better looking and making your patterns more aligned. It's only for the better!

Chewin's Normal

00:44:060 - Unused timing section here.
00:50:424 (4) - You should make the claps on this slider quieter just like they are in the music. Don't make them too quiet, though. It's nice to get hitsound feedback when you hit a note.

cRyo's Hard

00:33:833 (2) - This slider looks a bit odd to me. Something like this may fix the problem.
Well made. Flows very nicely and the sliders are pretty good.

Insane

00:34:969 (6) - This is hard to notice while playing because it blends in with the girl in the background's hair! Please unstack it.
00:58:605 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This pattern is extremely repetitive and boring. It would be nice to have some variation in it!
01:03:605 (11) - This 1/8th slider is complete overmap. It's not in the music and makes no sense.
01:26:560 (1) - Another map was unranked for having two sliders in the same place like this. For this one, it's with 01:25:424 (2). Please change it.

Good luck! Also, if you denied any of my suggestions, I would like to know why with a legitimate reason. If you don't, I shall hunt you down.
Milkshake
532 posts
Joined August 2011
Milkshake
let's map the same song in short ver. 358486 times!! yeahhhhhh
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
Thanks Jacob \o
Mercurial
Mercurial

Milkshake wrote:

let's map the same song in short ver. 358486 times!! yeahhhhhh
I lol'd.
Deif
Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon
3,564 posts
Joined April 2010
Deif
You should prolly add "osuplayer111" to tags now, right? lol don't kds this
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks everyone for modding, mostly fixed everything.

As for the title, please take a look here ^^

Oh, someone please make a Taiko BG for me T_T

Thank you lolcubes <3
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
DerekMcD
Just my own suggestions...

[Easy]

All sliderticks that used with a clap should be moved to the white tick and ends on the red tick, it's better. If you want to...

00:12:690 (5) - It's better if you move this to x:92 y:76
01:08:973 (5) - Unsnapped.
00:16:781 (3) - Fix the spacing.
00:17:236 (4) - ^
01:08:599 (5) - Fix this slider a little bit, to be like 01:07:236 (3).


[Normal]

01:15:872 (6) - Better if you move this to x:300 y:280?


[Hard]

00:08:145 (2,3) - It needs to be a little futher, like this spacing, 00:09:508 (1,2,3).
00:25:872 (1) - Is it better if you move to x:120 y:44?

Good luck and a star for you.
tutuhaha
3,000 posts
Joined October 2010
tutuhaha
Remove (Short Ver.)
PreviewTime: 65872
Don't use hitsound 5%, change to 10%

Easy:
SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999 ---> 1.00
^this is a bug
00:50:418 (1,2) - This part maybe is a litter bit hard in easy.
01:18:599 (3) - add whistle

Normal:
Don't use hitsound 5%, change to 10%

Insane
01:25:417 (2) - add whistle

no many things can talk Orz...Good map!
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks for mod, fixed some stuff.
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
ANTA NI FITO >w<
jossieP
1,875 posts
Joined May 2010
jossieP
nexus tag please *v*
Amyrina_old
Amyrina_old
so cute ><
Miya
2,690 posts
Joined June 2011
Miya
Sekai told me that i can make normal diff for this map. But it's been filled up by other people. Oh well, good luck with this map Andrea~
Chewin
osu! Alumni
4,082 posts
Joined December 2010
Chewin
Thanks http://puu.sh/G1cx
Chewin
osu! Alumni
4,082 posts
Joined December 2010
Chewin
Sorry for the double post.

[General]
http://puu.sh/G1Eo Taiko bar covers the font :\

[Sekai's Easy]
CS +1? o.o
00:13:145 (6) - You should reduce this slider by 1/2 to follow the voice.
00:43:145 (4) - x:432 y:192 to improve the blanket
01:11:327 (4) - Same. Reduce by 1/2
01:21:327 (3) - I think it's better if you move this slider on the next red tick, so it starts when the vocal starts. Much easier for beginners:

01:27:690 (1,2) - I don't like this blanket, you could fix in this way: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/361926
256,104,87690,6,0,B|184:104|184:104|152:72|88:72|56:132,1,200,4|0
132,160,89054,1,8

[cRyo's Hard]
00:18:599 (1) - Try to ctrl + r it? It flows better in my opinion
Awesome ;3

[Insane]
01:18:827 (5) - Userei NC qui e lo rimuoverei da 01:19:736 (1)
<3
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
Thanks Chewin >w<

Diff Code is here~
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: MP3.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 65764
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Anata ni FIT (Short Ver.)
Artist:ClariS
Creator:osuplayer111
Version:Sekai's Easy
Source:Nendoroid Generation
Tags:PSP Opening Alice Clara Andrea Chewin cRyo[iceeicee] Gezo Sekai

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg"
Video,1730,"Nendoroid Generation Opening.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

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