1. Hard (4.67 stars, 301 notes)
2. Lunatic (5 stars, 402 notes)
3. Normal (3.14 stars, 188 notes)

296,112,136764,2,0,B|248:88|184:116|176:168,2,150

• Keep in mind that the most mapset must have "Easy/Normal/Hard/Insane"
  You may need an Easy diff.

• Since Normal is the most easy diff in this mapset, here are my suggestions.
  HP -1
  AR -1
  OD -1
  00:57:176 (3) For a Easy/Normal diff, is hard to hit this note since is covered by 00:56:470 (1) Hitburst. This could be better http://puu.sh/JGZw
  01:16:235 (1) 1 grid down to make a perfect blanket.
  02:54:352 (4) Sorry for being so nazy, but to keep consistency with the previous note, you could move this note 1 grid left.
  03:09:882 (2) Is this intentional? http://puu.sh/JHap

• 00:55:764 (3) Whistle in consistency with Lunatic Diff
  00:56:029 (4) ^
  00:56:294 (5) ^

• 01:49:411 (3) Nazi big big yeah. 1 grid left looks better.

Stefan wrote:

Let's see what I can find.

[General]
01:44:647 - 01:52:941 - This part laggs a bit with SB. I just want to point this. Maybe it is just my osu! what laggs.

[Normal]
01:09:882 (3) - I would remove Clap, it sounds better without it. // No
01:12:705 (2) - Set it on 464;168.
01:13:058 (3) - ^ on 416;240.
01:17:470 (4) - The tick should not "hit" at 01:17:647 (You know what I mean), because it could irritate here and it sounds bad here. // NO, otherwise, it doesn't follow the music
01:31:588 (1) - The Tick Hit should be at the Start Point, it sounds better IMO. // ^
01:33:000 (1) - The Middle Part fits not good with the Music. It's still hearable // ^
01:35:294 (4,5,6,1) - What I really would perfer is to remove from (1) the Reverse Arrow and move it to 01:35:999. The reason is that on 01:35:823 is actually nothing to hear and should be like a short break. However, this part feels too fast and you also could do this with my suggestion above. // ^
01:36:705 (2) - Same what I said about 01:31:588 (1). // ^
01:42:705 - It would be really neat to add a Circle with Clap.
02:22:941 (4) - Remove Clap at the Start Point. // ^
02:48:705 (1) - Remove NC and set it at 02:49:411 (3). // ^
03:13:058 - Same as 01:42:705.

Diffs looks clear and fine, some parts feels out of rhythm because you don't have Clap for the Ticks, but it's not so bad. // If I don't have clap for the ticks, Tenshi-nyan will destroy this map (joke)

[Hard]
01:17:470 (3) - You should move it for one grid at right. It lays better with 01:16:941 (2).
01:37:941 (3) - Add Whistle at the End Point. // It doesn't follow the music, and it's weird to add it
02:31:058 (6) - NC would be pretty.
03:08:294 (3) - Add Whistle at the End Point. // ^

Very nice Diff, the good thing is that you can use more Hitobjects, so the Hitsounding is much better and easier.

[Lunatic]
01:21:882 (1,1,1,1) - The Positions are very boring.. You could do something with it, or? Also: You could add at all other white Ticks in this Area Circles, it sounds really good. // Since I follow the vocal, I think it's fine. Maybe I'll change it if someone say this again
01:34:411 (5) - NC it here and remove it from 01:34:941 (1). // No, it messed up the combo pattern
02:30:705 (4) - Maybe something like this?

03:04:764 (5) - Same as 01:34:411 (5). // ^

Also, nice Diff, but I really would say it's "just" an Insane. But nvm, it's Touhou, so. orz

iMercurial wrote:

Hi Leorda-sama

General

• Keep in mind that the most mapset must have "Easy/Normal/Hard/Insane" // Maybe Normal/Hard/Insane is fine, the diff spread looks fine for me
  You may need an Easy diff. // No

Normal

• Since Normal is the most easy diff in this mapset, here are my suggestions.
  HP -1
  AR -1
  OD -1
  00:57:176 (3) For a Easy/Normal diff, is hard to hit this note since is covered by 00:56:470 (1) Hitburst. This could be better http://puu.sh/JGZw // Yeah, you're right, maybe I should point these out to for other map.....
  01:16:235 (1) 1 grid down to make a perfect blanket. // Adjust the slider than the circle
  02:54:352 (4) Sorry for being so nazy, but to keep consistency with the previous note, you could move this note 1 grid left. // What for?
  03:09:882 (2) Is this intentional? http://puu.sh/JHap // This is how the grid snap work

Hard

• 00:55:764 (3) Whistle in consistency with Lunatic Diff
  00:56:029 (4) ^
  00:56:294 (5) ^

Lunatic

• 01:49:411 (3) Nazi big big yeah. 1 grid left looks better. // No, just want to make a curve pattern

Very nice mapset and what an AWESOME storyboard you have there, Leorda.


Good Luck and I hope this gets ranked soon.

asgardv wrote:

hi
May i make Taiko diff? // No, sorry

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  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 230,145,227
  Combo2 : 86,46,160
  Combo3 : 255,207,64

  • Why don't you make an Easy difficulty? If you could make it, that will be awesome.

• • 01:29:647 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 01:33:000 (1) - End this slider at 01:33:529 (white tick). Add a circle at 01:34:235 (white tick).
  • 01:35:823 (1) - Remove the repetition. Move this slider 1/2 later and add a circle at 01:36:529 (red tick).
  • 02:59:999 (x) - Add a circle.

• • HP Drain Rate: 5 (or 6)
  • Overall Difficulty: 5
  • Approach Rate: 7
  • 01:29:647 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 01:29:823 (x) - ^
  • 01:40:941 (7) - Add NC.
  • 01:41:647 (1) - Remove NC.
  • 02:59:999 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 03:00:176 (x) - ^
  • 03:11:294 (7) - Add NC.
  • 03:12:000 (1) - Remove NC.

• • HP Drain Rate: 7

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
• You must fix this.
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[General]

• • Preview Time: 89650
  • Open all .osu files and change...
  

  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 230,145,227
  Combo2 : 86,46,160
  Combo3 : 255,207,64

  • Why don't you make an Easy difficulty? If you could make it, that will be awesome. // No, I think that's enough

[Normal]

• • 01:29:647 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 01:33:000 (1) - End this slider at 01:33:529 (white tick). Add a circle at 01:34:235 (white tick).
  • 01:35:823 (1) - Remove the repetition. Move this slider 1/2 later and add a circle at 01:36:529 (red tick).
  • 02:59:999 (x) - Add a circle.

[Hard]

• • HP Drain Rate: 5 (or 6) // You HPD, OD, and AR makes the star rating is high and it's makes unbalanced through this diff. If someone say this, I'll change
  • Overall Difficulty: 5
  • Approach Rate: 7
  • 01:29:647 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 01:29:823 (x) - ^
  • 01:40:941 (7) - Add NC.
  • 01:41:647 (1) - Remove NC.
  • 02:59:999 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 03:00:176 (x) - ^
  • 03:11:294 (7) - Add NC.
  • 03:12:000 (1) - Remove NC. // I ignore these all, sorry

[Hard]

• • HP Drain Rate: 7

Awesome beatmap, good job.

Saten wrote:

Hai Leo~~

[General]
Nice SB! // Thx
Make the overall volume 80% instead of 100%? // If someone say this again, i'll change

[Lunatic]
01:24:705 (1) - Finish on the head
01:25:411 (1) - whistle on the tail
01:26:823 (1) - ^
02:55:058 (1) - Finish in the head
02:55:764 (1) - Whistle on the tail
02:57:176 (1) - ^
03:20:470 (1) - add a clap here // I don't see why clap should be here

[Hard]
AR+1 (with the current speed AR 7 is much better imo)
01:24:705 (1,2,3,4,1) - This part sounds kinda weird compared to the rest of the map (try to make the hitsound pattern similar to Lunatic)
02:55:058 (1,2,3,4,1) - as above
03:20:470 (1) - clap~ // I don't see why clap should be here

[Normal]
AR+1 (seems to be easier to read your patterns)
00:52:235 (2,3) - this part sounds abit weird, replace with a slider instead?
01:24:705 (1,2) - custom hitsounds here too?
02:55:058 (1,2) - ^
03:20:470 (1) - clap~~ // I don't see why clap should be here


Goodluck! /o/

Melophobia wrote:

As requested~

[Normal]
AR5 is really fast for the easiest diff imo, AR4 would work very well // I think AR5 is not fast for normal diff
00:50:823 (1,3,5) - partial overlapping doesnt look great, and it may be confusing for beginners. it's better to avoid it
01:09:882 (3,4) - what's point of (3)? it follows nothing and hard to get rhythm imo, replacing them with a slider might help beginners to make it easier to hit them
01:11:823 (7) - i preger put this note at 01:11:999 - for consistent 1/1 rhythm and follow the percussion.
01:27:529 (1) - this sipinner really makes me sad >_> i'd change this into a slider because of your nice SB effect // Nah, it's follow the accelerate sound
01:43:058 (3) - remove whistle from the end please, it doesnt follow anything and sounds kinda bad to me..
02:57:882 (1) - same as 01:27:529 (1) - // Nah, it's follow the accelerate sound
03:11:294 (4) - remove whistle please
03:14:117 - ^

[Hard]
00:55:764 (3,4) - nice hitsound arrangement. but volume is too loud imo. try to use 70%~80% for them. // I don't think it's too loud
01:13:411 (1) - this blanket can be a bit better to me. try to adjust 2nd way point // It's already blanket
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/390011
01:24:705 (1,2,3,4) - use same hitsounds as 02:55:058 (1,2,3,4) - ? i just wonder why you didnt for this one.
01:41:117 (8) - wrong spacing? it would looks much better if you correct it.
02:43:058 (3) - this note should be at 02:43:235 - imo. sounds better to me

[Lunatic]
00:55:764 (3,4) - same as Hard, try lower volume // I don't think it's too loud
01:45:705 (1) - 03:16:058 (1) - hit CTRL+R twice for it in order to make its shape same as (3)(currently they're different)
02:26:117 (3,4,5,6,7) - why not use your nice hitsound like 00:55:764 (3,4,5) - ;_;
02:30:352 (3,4) - i found it weird that they have different shape from each others. try to use same shape // Nope, if someone say this again, i'll fix
03:11:647 - custom tick sound here? i wonder why it's not here because there's it at 01:41:294 -
03:16:058 (1) - hit CTRL+R twice for it in order to make its shape same as (3)(currently they're different)

that's all, good luck ><

Animation,Foreground,Centre,"SB\rain.png",320,240,2,200,LoopForever

1. 01:16:941 (3) - switch to 4-grid level view and move to x:228 y:180 so it is in the middle of 1 and 2
2. 01:26:117 (2) - remove the finish, it's kinda loud for this part
3. 01:43:058 (3) - NC (so that it matches the NC parts at 01:37:411 - and 01:31:588 - )
4. 02:48:705 (1) - remove NC here and NC at 02:49:411 (3) - (b/c new vocal section starts there)
5. 02:56:470 (2) - if you followed the suggestion at 01:26:117 (2) - , then remove the finish here also
6. 03:09:882 (2) - move one grid down (in 3-grid lvl view)? that way, you can form a nice square with 03:10:941 (3,4,5) -
7. 03:13:411 (3) - NC , same reason as 01:43:058 (3) -

1. 00:47:294 (2) - ctrl+r plays well too if you want
2. 00:58:411 - add note to keep flow consistent?
3. 01:16:941 (2) - i fixed the blanket around 3 a little if u want, not too big of a deal though:
   

   480,200,76941,2,0,B|416:128|328:192,1,150,0|8

4. 01:35:117 (1) - remove NC and NC here at 01:36:000 (3) -
5. 01:47:117 (1) - remove NC and NC at next note (new instrument section or w/e starts at that next note)
6. 03:17:470 (1) - ^

1. 01:18:000 (1) - remove NC
2. 02:42:529 (2,3,4,5,6) - make evenly spaced stream
3. 02:43:235 (2,3,4,5,6) - same here..but i guess you can keep them if that's what you intended to do in the first place
4. 03:06:882 (3) - ctrl+r

1. 01:30:352 - Over SB Load
2. 02:15:529 - ^
3. 02:16:764 - ^
4. 02:26:823 - ^

1. 01:17:470 (4) - curve it a bit?
2. 01:44:470 (5) - NC
3. 02:30:000 (5) - ^
4. 02:41:294 (5) - ^
5. 02:51:176 (6) - ^
6. 03:14:823 (5) - ^

1. 01:17:470 (3) - weird and boring, reduce 1 or 2 arrow and add some more notes
2. 01:40:941 (7) - NC
3. 01:47:294 (2) - start combo from here
4. 03:11:294 (7) - copy/pasted stuff, NC
5. 03:17:647 (2) - ^, start combo from here

1. 02:43:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too far, i'd give a chance for DT players by reducing the distance