ayyyyyyooooooooooooooooo
general・the previewpoint is unsnapped!
・not sure if u need that widescreensupport for that source picture at the end lol
・"Standard" is suppose to be a diffname for Normal i thought.. while your standard is like legit Hard diff D:
novice・00:49:332 - it does really sounds pretty loud :c maybe you could lower the volume there like to -20%, for next spinner as well
・01:00:900 (1) - 01:15:360 (1) - 01:21:143 (3) - 01:26:927 (3) - 01:47:171 (3) - 01:52:954 (3) - 01:58:738 (3) - im really not sure about more than one reverse slider in easiest difficulty, since there was a situation with disqualification because of 2 reverses slider
normal・00:14:629 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - aaaaaaaaa thats really slow for such ar. i'd really recommend to higher the sv there like to 0.80 or something and make slider not toucher each other, as long as its a normal diff and 1/1 rhythm, make it clear o:
・00:39:934 (5) - bring some variety for 1/2. sliders with lots of reverses are really unpredictable and not really comfortable most of times, so there i'd suggest to make smth like that with a NC on downbeat:
00:58:008 (1) - about variety and readability again
01:37:772 (4) -
01:45:725 (3) -
・00:50:778 (2) - saaaaame thing about reverses. would be nice to divide this with 1/1 sliders etc, or something else but with a circle on the last downbeat, it would suit good, i think
・00:46:440 (1) - so there you followed
wtf vocal, and there 00:46:983 (2,3) - .. piano? i'd stick to something one to make this part easier to read
・00:49:332 (1,2) - i mentioned somewhere above about loooud finishers. these ones are really loud as well, would be nice to lower wolume a bit for those hitsounds
・01:17:528 (4) - you just had 1/2 slider with 1 reverse 01:15:360 (1,2) - and now BAM there are 2 reverses. i tetplayed all diffs and this one as well and kinda thought there will be 1 reverse as well. to prevent more sliderbreaks i'd really suggest to change this one to two sliders
01:19:697 (3) - same (01:25:481 (3,4) - like this rhytyhm would be good) BUT PLEASE
thats really clamped and moreover youre continuing this pattern back 01:26:566 (4) - where just 3 secs ago a slider was, could you move it like somewhere out of this corner?
・01:47:171 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - yeyeyeyeye copypasta master, everything above conserns this pattern as well e.e
standard・00:14:629 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - same thing about sv and spacing i mentioned in the previous diff >;
・and overall i'd highly recommend to remake the diff by 1.2x spacing, so every note is clearly visible, exactly like you did in your kiai part
to use a bit less circles. 01:24:216 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 01:50:243 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , such stuff etc might be pretty exhausting, baka. they are good for being using in insane instead;
keep in mind that thing about more than 1 repeat arrow and replace it with something iiiinnnnnteresting
nice diff, just try to keep it neat, with consistent spacing. if there was a logic a missed, you can explain to me, but now im just a bit asdghjkl;' on how kinda not really cute it looks /w\
1234567898758934054323.14・00:34:873 (1,2) - try swapping these objects,reverse slider fits that place better, cause of that BWEBWEBEWBEWBE sound
・00:35:776 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - try to be a bit
more SHY less generous .. with big spacing, make such (u have more later, yea) a biiiit smaller
00:44:814 (1,2) -
・00:43:910 (2,3) - PLEASE NO. JUST. DONT ;w;
・00:43:187 (4,5,1,2,3) -
00:45:717 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
^^^^^^^ sudden jumps from big spacing to small spacing feels pretty not comportable for a small part of like that, try to ummm, a bit lowering the spacing of big jumps and making a bit bigger the ones i mentioned above
・01:09:576 (1,2,3,4) - remake it with 2 sliders, and triplet please
i can undestand that the logic of lots of reverses are for following that BLABALABLABLA sounds but thats really confusing, especially when you see a triplet after a slider and that slider SUDDENLY goes back 2 times and you are break the slider and while messing up, also fucks up with the next, triplet pattern
・01:23:312 (1) - any reason for NC?
・01:25:300 (1) - somthing like circle-slider would fit there much better, youre silencing the downbeat with the reverse while there could something to click
・01:29:819 (1,2,3,4,5) - the "stream" is out of beats actually, its 1/6.. i could help with thinking of the pattern but cant, just this comes to my mind
you also could ignore those sounds and make something simple like you did there: 01:33:795 (3,4) - (just remember the thing about clickable downbeat)
・01:31:988 (1,2,3) - well, about consistent spacing once again
・same thing goes for your very last kiai. try to stick to one spacing, it should really look and feel better
and thats all