(I wonder why "short" in the tags?)
- two of the diffs are short of lead-in time.
[Insane]
00:11:148 (4,5,6) -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/392128 if you intend to make a pentagon just consider this
00:13:989 - end the break here exactly?
00:43:456 - use triplet here instead of the 1/2 later to stress the vocal accent? Stack the triplet on (4) looks better too.
[Hard]
00:13:989 - again start the break exactly here
00:26:060 (3,4,5,6) - the turning point at (3) looks odd. Consider placing them like this?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/39213900:38:486 (5) - Again some minor fix to let the slider looks better (and fit the spacing)
144,108,38486,2,0,B|172:72|160:20,1,80,8|0
00:45:054 (2) - ^
344,264,45054,2,0,B|423:235|460:160,1,160,0|0
01:09:906 (1) - finish might sounds a bit loud to me as you can find that in the music the first chamber (this one) is softer than the second one (01:10:793 - ) so make this softer?
01:24:107 (3,4,5,6) - again try something like this
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/392145 ?
01:26:770 (2) - not very expected in a hard. Just stack on ending of (1)?
some good idea, but details can be improved =P
[Easy]
00:13:989 - same as the rest of the diff