h-728 wrote:

Hi~
From mod req

General

1. Bit rate of mp3 file should be between 128 to 192 kbps.Changed, thanks !
2. Reconsider spacing of hitcircles and sliders.

Used distance snap more than i previously did ^^

Normal

1. I think slider velocity(2.00, same as hard diff) a little difficult for normal.
   Consider to reduce it.(If you accept this suggestion, it means you have to change length of all sliders...) Changed to 1,70 !
2. 02:45:945 (1) to 03:00:734 (5) - Copy paste, feeling boring.

Well as it's following the same lyrics & ruthm all the time, i thought it woul de weird to change the "pattern". But i'll think about it !

Hard

1. I think spacing a little confusing, just like 00:09:818(1,2,3,4,5)
   Rhythm ⇒ http://puu.sh/yHEt
   In your map ⇒ http://puu.sh/yHEn
   But according to the space of 00:09:818(1,2) ⇒ http://puu.sh/yHNp

Done !

Frostmourne wrote:

Hi , From my queue

Normal
It has over 3.0 star for the easiest diff, It's unrankable. I will add an easy diff soon !
mono tone in this diff isn't good while playing , it's a bit boring , adding clap follows this pattern would be opportunity.
Done, thank you !
the slider is kinda fast for normal diff though Changed to 1,70
00:26:086 (3) - left 1 grid because the of the distance (1) overlap (2) then (2) should overlap (3) too
00:52:072 (3) - down 1 grid ^ reason same as above
00:57:776 (4,5,6) - you should use 0.7 same as 00:56:297 (1,2) -
01:18:058 (4,1) - huge jump for this diff
01:27:353 (4,5) - spacing , (5) should be far from (4) , player will miss (5) slider

As I completly changed all the spacing following the distance snap (x0,6 now), I think it's ok !

Hard
00:33:480 (3) - left 1 grid , spacing is error Done !
01:37:705 (1,2) - move these 2 notes about 2 left grid will be better because it did overlapping with 01:37:072 (8) - Done !

Good luck ~
Thank you !

h-728 wrote:

Hi~

Thanks for modding

[General]

1. Set tags and source Done !
2. Add kiai time Done !

[Easy]

1. 00:08:551 (1,2,3,1) - same as normal Changed !
2. 00:48:269 (3) - end at 00:49:114 Done !
3. 01:04:114 (2) - start at 01:04:325 and end at 01:05:381 Done !
4. 01:22:705 (1) - end at 01:23:429 Done !
5. 01:28:832 add note Done !
6. 01:59:465 (4) - end at 02:00:100 Done !
7. 02:07:706 (3) - end at 02:08:551 Done !
8. 02:23:551 (2) - start at 02:23:762 Done !
9. 02:42:142 (1) - end at 02:43:198 Done !

[Nomal]

1. 00:40:874~00:42:987 Delete break time and add some notes
2. 01:59:889~02:02:424 ^ Done !
3. 02:43:410~02:45:945 ^

[Insane]

1. HD-2 AR-1 OD-1 Just did HR-1 ^^
2. 00:20:170~00:22:494 add some notes
3. 00:40:874~00:42:987 ^
4. 01:23:973~01:26:508 ^
5. 01:59:889~02:02:424 ^ and add some notes Done !
6. 02:43:410~02:45:945 ^
7. 03:03:480~03:06:227 ^

Sorry I did not follow all your advices concerning adding some notes, beacause i found some of those breaks like... empty, with no lyrics (wich I am following for mapping), or bass ^^

good luck
Thanks

Cilvery wrote:

Hi~ <request from my queue>

[Easy]
00:11:720 - add whistle

00:18:269 - add clap

00:18:480 - remove clap

00:28:410 - add whistle

00:28:621 - ^

00:35:170 - ^

01:41:086 - ^

01:47:846 - ^

01:54:607 - ^

All done !

[Normal]
00:11:720 - add whistle Sounded a little bit aggressive for me so i didn't add it ^^

02:04:959 - add clap Done !

[Hard]
00:08:973 - add whistle

00:09:818 - ^

00:10:663 - ^

00:33:480 - ^

01:18:480 - 3grid left

All done

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Thanks for your mod !

CDFA wrote:

Kawaii!~

Overall:
Claps on 2 and 4~ Well i prefer to follow Clivery's pattern about hitsounds, as all my combos don't always finish by an even number ^^
Hitsounds too loud Tried to lower them, dunno if i made the right change XD
Mostly for notes with 2 or more repeats, the pattern is generally very boring~. Try avoiding that. Well i don't really see what you mean, could you give me an exemple ?
The mp3 cuts out a bit suddenly ;~;. Make it fade out or something~ Does it ? O_o Weird, it's from the CD...
00:42:987 - Remove kiai Done !
02:02:424 - Remove kiai Done !

Hard:
00:17:635 (2) - Make this symmetrical ;~; Done !
00:24:396 (8) - This note gets hidden in the pattern ;~;. Probably move it outward somewhere. Well it's an hard diff, people should be able to see it, shouldn't they ?
00:43:832 (4) - Make this symmetrical ;~; Done !
00:47:424 (6) - Make this into 2 sliders Sorry i did not liked how it sounded ^^
02:06:860 (6) - Make this into 2 sliders ^

Normal:
00:23:551 (4) - Make this symmetrical Done !
00:33:903 (4) - Make this more of an S shape~ I think the slider is too short to make a proper S

Easy:
00:18:903 (1) - Not very moe! Probably think of a different shape to make this :> You're right XD Changed ^^
00:45:311 (2) - Just make this ~ shaped :> Tried to do it a bit more ~ than previously ^^
00:48:269 (3) - ^ ^
01:38:339 (3) - No XD Yes, changed ^^
02:04:748 (2) - ~ shaped Same like the other one ^^
02:07:705 (3) - ^ ^

Behonkiss wrote:

I liked how this song sounded, so here's a mod.


Easy:
This feels a little too relient on repeating sliders. Might want to mix things up a little for variety's sake. Add some more finishes as well.
Too many claps, too. Get rid of some of them or replace them with other sound effects.
00:18:480 (5) - Putting this so soon after the slider end on an Easy difficulty seems a bit wrong. Maybe get rid of this circle and extend the slider to end at this point instead? There are actually a lot of these 1/2 circles right after sliders here; you might want to get rid of some of them.
01:19:748 (1) - Move this to 01:19:959
01:26:508 (1) - Move this to 01:26:720
02:39:184 (1) - Move this to 02:39:396

I did all of this, tried to add more circle while removing some sliders, I hope it's more enjoyable now !

Normal:
Slider speed seems overly fast for a Normal.
Same problem with overuse of claps and repeating sliders.

Tried to solve the problem of sliders, and changed slider velocity to 1,60 instead of 1,70 (I rechecked all my map after this ofc)

I also tried my best to change everything about the hitsounds to make it look better in those 2 diffs

Hard:
I see more normal hitcircles here. That's good.
00:17:635 (2) - Try to make this slider look more symmetrical.
00:45:522 (5) - Move this down 1 grid square to make this group of circles more neat-looking, and again symmetrical.
02:57:353 (5) - Move this up 1 grid square so it's on the same horizontal plane as 4.

All done !

This is a good job for your first map, and I hope you'll make more.
Thank you very much once again !

Marcin wrote:

[Easy]
REALLY boring diff, I'd suggest usage of more patterns and add more curved sliders (I mean change existing with ctrl) I'll think about it even though i won't curve them all i think the song is more made for laned sliders than curved.
00:18:903 (1) - You can remove last curve point and move red one
00:56:297 (1) - Start is not on the same line as end :c Done
01:04:325 (2) - ??? i mean, start and end... do something to make more normal... Heee lol, this one shocked you so much for 1 grid up in the end ?
02:23:762 (2) - ^ ^
01:38:339 (3) - Remake, it's ugly (more space between start and circle than end and circle):( Instead of ugly i think you could have just said that i could make it more symmetrical.
02:15:734 (1) - ugly ^
[Normal]
00:33:903 (4) - ??? maybe red curve at the end? No, it's not symmetrical if i do so
00:39:607 (3) - You know you can make this better...
00:42:987 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing Nop ^^
00:50:170 (2) - https://dl.dropbox.com/u/21125662/compi ... _00381.jpg Yours is not symmetrical, mine is.
02:04:748 (2) - it's too hidden... Well i don't think so
02:33:691 (5) - one grid down? Done
[Hard]
02:33:691 (5) - https://dl.dropbox.com/u/21125662/compi ... _00382.jpg Same as the previous image Plus, sorry about that but it's the wrong diff and time XD
00:51:438 (1,2,3,4) - spacing Nop ^^
01:04:536 (5,6) - ^ ^
01:10:874 (4) - remove clap? Done for this one and the 8
01:29:466 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing? (i don't mention jump) This one was right, done
01:38:339 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ Nop ^^
01:49:959 (5,6,7) - ^ ^
02:46:156 (2,3) - ^ ^
02:49:536 (2,3) - ^ ^
Too much copy and pase

ot: bass :*

Pereira006 wrote:

Hello~~

Imo - > my opinion

[General]

The combo 1 is not make sense IMO just remove IMO Well i think it's a great intro for the song so I'll keep it ^^

[Easy]

00:10:663 (6) - add clap the start slider and end slide most better (if you don't how do it ask me in-game i can teach you if you wanna) Done !
00:16:156 (3) - add clap only middle slider Done !
00:18:903 (1) - this slider is bad symentric i can see try this http://puu.sh/A4Wv most perfect symentric Done !
00:22:494 (1,2) - bad symentric try better symentric (need grid 1 up only (2)) Done !
00:25:663 (1,2,3,4) - this is very hard for this diff easy just remove all note and add slider repeat or non-repeat this http://puu.sh/A4YC just newbie can pass it or try you owm remap this part to easy this diff is not hard or normal Done ! I did not follow your pattern but still I made something easier
00:29:255 (1) - add clap only end slider Done !
00:31:367 (2) - ^ same Done !
00:32:001 (3) - remove clap Done !
00:32:635 (1) - add clap only start slider Done !
00:33:480 (3) - add clap start and end Done !
00:36:015 (1) - add clap start slider Done !
00:36:649 (2) - add clap only middle Done !
00:37:705 (1) - add clap start and end Done !
00:39:184 (3) - I feel need new combo because this lyrics is change Done !
00:41:086 (5) - add clap Done !
00:44:889 (1) - thid clap is not make sense IMO just remove Done !
00:45:311 (2,3) - lot points pleasse less points Ahh sorry i don't wanna lower my tick rate just for these sliders, I think it's fine ^^
00:48:269 (3) - same happened 00:44:889 (1) Done !
00:56:297 (1) - 00:56:297 (1) - remove clap only end slider. I gonna stop mod hitsound, because some not make sense i can teach you. When you find BPM aswome you will listen at 00:08:973 and at 00:09:818 they are drums if you listen "Tsih" that need add clap like you did. So you need hitsound consciecnty exameple this http://puu.sh/A5cY that most better because they have drums spam always if you random hitsound this http://puu.sh/A5eN is bad. So i suggest you remap all hitsound just make hitsound conscienty most better.also if you listen not have drums just don't add clap and red tick too
Thank you very much for your explanations, I'll work on it !
01:29:466 (1,2) - I not big fan this most better if you do this http://puu.sh/A5ib Done !
03:02:424 (1,2) - ^ same Done !

not bad you did follow lyrics very well is good, but you need really study lot hitsound if you don't get it my mod because my eng is suck just ask me i can explain better if you wanna


[Normal]

again hitsound random some notes not make sense Working on it !

01:07:494 (5) - bad align slider Done !
01:45:100 (3,4) - is make me confuse because the repeat is hard try this http://puu.sh/A5no most better to gameplay Done !

not bad is fine play for me

[Hard]

HP, OD and AR need -1 most better Just did AR -1 because I think the rest is fine, and yes it looks better !

00:58:198 (6) - IMO that slider is unread for me by default skin you need remap at 00:56:720 (3,4,5,6) like this http://puu.sh/A5rf or try remap you owm Done ! Thank you very much for the pattern which really fits the lyrics well ^^
01:38:973 (6,7,8,9) - grid 1 right to fix spacing Done !
02:16:156 (3,4,5,6) - again same happened 00:58:198 (6) Done !

really good
[]
The gameplay is really fine for me but you need really study hitsound, ask me in-game if you need help or difficulty
that all i think pleasse some mod you can't understand because my eng is suck pleasse ask me in-game i will try explain better
good luck and bye bye
Star you work hard and follow lyrics is great just keep it work !
Thank you very much once again !

Fenya wrote:

Hi~

Easy:
No kiai? It's not mandatory is it ?
00:18:269 (6) - Sounds bad... Replace the slider for a circle, move next slider (1) to 00:18:691 and add a slider of 00:20:381 to 00:20:804 in my opinion, sound better http://puu.sh/Akja Extended the (6) slider and added a circle in the end of the circle but that's all
00:23:339 (3) - I think this slider sound bad in this part, please fix it~ Changed this part a bit
00:25:241 (4) - Remove ^
00:25:452 (1,2,3) - 1 tick left... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/339904 Done
00:26:297 (2) - Move to x:162 y:214 Removed it
00:26:508 (3) - Move to x:196 y:248 ~
00:27:142 (x) - Add note Done
00:28:198 (5) - D: :D
00:37:705 (4) - Remove clap in reverse arrow Right, done ^^
00:38:762 (5) - Remove note Done
00:38:973 (1) - Move 1 tick to left http://puu.sh/Akpr Nop Done but extended the slider
00:42:987 (1,2,3) - Move 1 tick to left, sounds better Doesn't fit the lyrics at all
00:44:889 (4) - Replace for a circle Nope
00:49:536 (1) - 1 tick left Moved 1 tick right
01:03:058 (1) - Remove a repeat Nope, I like it that way so it fits the "Cmon"
01:03:903 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/Aksh Does not fit the lyrics
01:10:874 (4) - Put like this: http://puu.sh/AksK ^
01:12:775 (1,2,3,4) - Move 1 tick to left ^
01:14:043 (5) - These sliders don't go to the song, this is a Easy D: Well they'll learn then :p
Well... The rest of diff are same problems... Please, fix it... See notes to match your pace. Dx
Generally the rhythm are in the tick white and not red, Check it~
But i'm mapping following the lyrics, and it makes no sense for me to map everything in a way I don't like. Few red ticks won't kill the new player, that's a way for him to learn.
Anyway I changed some of them due to some remarks, but I can't and don't want to delete all my red-ticks notes.

Normal:
Your distance spacing is the x0,6... I suggest change to x1,0 x1 Would be waaaay too big, But I'll consider changing it to 0,7 or 0,8
Please, fix the spacing and rhythm ;A; ^
00:37:494 (1) - I can't find the rhythm to this. Then listen to the lyrics ^^
01:00:734 (5) - Spacing This ain't a huge "jump" ( I doubt you could even call it this way) XD It'll stay like this for now
01:07:494 (5) - SPACING D: Is a normal, no hard, no insane D:!! ^
01:10:874 (4) - spacing Done
01:13:832 (4) - ^ ^
01:14:255 (5,6,7) - Sounds bad, I suggest fix this I don't think so
01:29:466 (1,2) - ^ ^

Sorry, but, I can't mod the hard Dx
Sorry for my poor English, Good luck~
Thanks !

-Bakari- wrote:

hi there! request from queue

[General]
where's kiai times? It's not mandatory and didn't think it would fit a song like this
many overlaps ~_~ Due to the distance spacing, so for now i'll keep it this way but I'll consider changing the Normal's one ^^
title is "Walking on a Line" http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pony_Pony_Run_Run Right, thanks



[Easy]
so many short breaks. really confusing. Removed
also i suggest to avoid 1/2 notes! it's [Easy]! Not Normal ~_~ Can't avoid them all because of the lyrics that I'm following, but changed the ones i could
sliders are too fast, imo I think they're ok, I don't like too slow sliders even for new players, but they're not really fast as well, so I'll keep it this way
try to put new combos for every big white line or every second big white line http://puu.sh/ArBP I prefer to change them when the lyrics are changing, sounds more logical for me ^^

[Normal]
practically the same.sliders are too fast, imo Same remark as for Easy ^^
and many short breaks. Removed

[Hard]
the same short breaks Removed

~~~~~
just note: try to kkep flow in your mapping. it will plays better, imo.
meh. just a quick check, anyway
Thanks !

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Hello. Sorry for sooo long delay :<

General

1. I heard that the name of albums is better to put to the tags, not to the source. So, replace it? Done !
2. Maybe add PPRR to the tags? Done !
3. Your .osb-file name is different from the name of the map, so delete it and do full submit. Done !
4. Also, you changed the title of the map but forgot to change the name of the topic. Change it to Pony Pony Run Run - Walking on a line. You can do this while submitting.Done !

Easy

1. There is too high Slider Velocity for Easy. Try to reduce it. Changed to 1,30 instead of 1,40
2. 00:09:818 (4) - put new combo here as long comboes are not good for Easy. 3-4 long comb is good. (Also, it's better to put new combo on downbeats, so 00:10:241 (5) - here, but putting on (4) make symmetry C:) Ok I understand ! Done !
3. 00:11:931 ~ 00:15:311 - why it's not mapped? I don't see the reason. Also, it's bad choice for break time. Map it, please. Done !
4. 00:17:424 (4) - Put new combo here, you know why! Done !
5. 00:18:269 (6) - Clap on the beginning, you missed it. Also (nazi) move it 1 grid up and right Done !
6. 00:19:114 (1) - maybe move it to the middle? 2 grids right for better symmetry. Also, add clap to the beginning Tried to do something more symmetric !
7. 00:21:649 - add a note here with clap to fill the blank space Done !
8. 00:23:339 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - You missed claps in this part! Also, check up all your maps and add missed claps. I will work on it ^^
9. 00:28:198 (5) - It's not good to have 1/2 rhythm in Easy diffs, you know? It's hard to read and play for newbies. So, remove this slider and add circle on 00:28:410 - Well it's here to follow the "ouhouhouh" lyrics, and as I don't have much 1/2 and as it is mapped on smthg, i'll keep it this way for now
10. 00:29:255 (1) - Make it more symmetrical as on this screenshot:
    
    SPOILER

    
    Oh damn how did i miss this one it looked terrible XD Thanks !
11. 00:32:635 (1) - again, 1/2 slider. Make simple 1/1 slider from 00:32:635 till 00:33:058 - Done !
12. 00:34:959 (3) - as 00:28:198 (5) - Same as previous ouhouhou thing
13. 00:38:973 (1) - reduce it to 00:39:396 - (1/2 rhythm >:O) Done !
14. 00:39:818 (2) - I don't like finishes on this slider. Remove? Done ! Didn't even know why i put one here XD
15. 00:41:931 - add a note with clap! Done !
16. 00:42:987 (1) - Too bad too bad! Firstly, 1/2 rhythm, secondly too much repeats is hard to read for newbies. I suggest this:
    
    SPOILER

    
    Done ! I did not used exactly the same pattern because I did not place the (4) where you did but i followed the same beat placement
17. 00:45:311 (4) - then new combo here! Done !
18. 00:49:959 (1) - symmetry, whatch your symmetry!
    
    SPOILER

    
    Oh god, yes XD
19. 00:51:649 (2) - reduce to 00:52:072 - Done !
20. 00:55:874 - add a note with finish Done !
21. 00:56:297 (1) - symmetry
    
    SPOILER

    
    Done !
22. 00:57:776 (2) - remove this note Done !
23. 00:58:198 (3) - start from 00:58:410 till 00:58:832 - Done !
24. 01:03:058 (1) - remove this and put circles on 01:03:058 - and 01:03:480 -
25. 01:03:903 (2) - also, extend this slider to 01:05:170 - and make it symmetrical C:
    
    SPOILER

    
    Done !Thank you very much for the pattern !
26. 01:10:029 (2) - remove
27. 01:10:874 (4) - buuu! Make this:
    
    SPOILER

    
    Done !
28. 01:12:987 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - again, very hard for Easy. I recommend you:
    
    SPOILER

    
    Done ! Not the same pattern but i made smthg way easier !
29. 01:17:634 (2) - remove it! Done !
30. 01:18:057 (3) - move to 01:18:269
31. 01:21:225 (4) - finish on the beginning Done !
32. 01:22:915 (5) - extend to 01:23:762 - Done !
33. 01:29:466 (1,2) - it's better to make this:
    
    SPOILER

    
    Done ! And added one too on the white tick before
34. 01:35:170 (1,2) - make one slider from 01:35:170 - till 01:35:593 - Done !
35. 01:37:705 (1) - make just one circle on 01:37:705 - Done !
36. 01:38:128 (2) - extend to 01:39:818 - Already was this way ^^
37. 01:40:874 (4) - You remembeer? Add just a circle to 01:41:086 - Ouhouhouh !
38. 01:43:832 (2,3,4,1,2) - haaaaard :< Make this!
    
    SPOILER

    
    Thanks, done !
39. 01:47:635 (4) - as 01:40:874 (4) - Same !
40. 01:48:691 (1) - whatch your symmetry!
    
    SPOILER

    
    Done !
41. 01:52:071 (1) - circles on 01:52:072 - and 01:52:494 - Done !
42. 01:52:705 (2) - start from 01:52:917 - and end on 01:53:762 - Done !
43. 01:54:396 (3) - you know what to do! Ahah well !
44. 01:55:240 (1) - start from 01:55:029 - Can't because of ^, but i placed it a tick later then
45. 01:55:874 (2) - make slider :< I'll let it this way for now, I like how it sounds =/ But if I have another remark about this Ill change it !
46. 02:01:790 - add a note? Done !
47. 02:02:635 (1) - make two circles on 02:02:635 - and 02:03:058 - or one slider Done, 2 circles !
48. 02:03:269 (2) - start from 02:03:480 - and end on 02:04:325 - Done !
49. 02:09:396 (1) - again, symmetry (like on 00:49:959 (1) - ) 00:49:959 (1) - Done !
50. 02:11:086 (2) - end on 02:11:508 - Done !
51. 02:14:889 - add a note with clap? Well I prefer just to add the next one ^^
52. 02:15:311 - ^ but with finish? D: Done !
53. 02:15:734 (1) - symmetry (like on 00:56:297 (1) - ) Done !
54. 02:17:213 (2) - delete this note Done !
55. 02:17:635 (3) - start from 02:17:846 - and end 02:18:269 - here Done !
56. 02:22:495 (1) - remove it and add notes on 02:22:494 - and 02:22:917 - Done !
57. 02:23:551 (2) - start from 02:23:339 - and extend to 02:24:607 - Done !
    
    SPOILER

    
    Done !
58. 02:29:466 (2) - remove Done !
59. 02:30:311 (4) - uh... make this:
    
    SPOILER

    
    Done !
60. 02:32:424 (1) - move to 02:32:212 - Done !
61. 02:32:846 (3,4,5) - gah, make this:
    
    SPOILER

    
    Done !
62. 02:37:071 (2) - remove this note Done !
63. 02:37:494 (4) - move to 02:37:705 - Done !
64. 02:42:353 (5) - extend to 02:43:198 - Done !
65. 02:45:945 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I see, these comboes have the same rhythm. It's good, but move all this notes 1/2 later.02:45:945 (1,2,3) - this must start from 02:46:156 - and so on. Even though I prefered the way it sounds on red ticks, I did it cause you're not the first one to tell it to me ^^
66. 03:02:424 (1,2) - make this:
    
    SPOILER

    
    Done !
67. 03:07:283 (2) - remove this note, then move 03:06:227 (1) - to 03:06:438 - and 03:07:494 (2) - to 03:07:705 - Done !
68. 03:11:297 (1) - remove this note. Done !
69. 03:11:508 (2) - and maybe remove finishes? Done !

Normal

1. At first, I think 1,6 slider velocity is too high for Normal D: Reduce it? Changed to 1,50 instead of 1,60
2. OD +1? Yes !
3. 00:10:241 (4,5,6) - watch your spacing! >:O and you forgot claps~ Check out all your claps, please Done !
4. 00:11:931 - again, map this break please Done !
5. 00:39:818 (4) - reduce to 00:41:086 - and make more symmetrical~
   
   SPOILER

   
   Done !
6. 00:41:931 (5) - clap! Done !
7. 00:42:353 (6) - finish here and new combo Done !
8. 00:42:987 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - hm... this is quite hard D: Maybe try this?
   
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   Done, thanks !
9. 00:47:847 (2) - I don't like that it's overlapped by 00:46:579 (1) - . Rearrange? Done !
10. 00:56:508 (2) - remove it, please. Doing this you make rhythm easier. Done !
11. 00:58:198 (6) - remove repeat and add note on 00:58:832 - Done !
12. 00:59:255 - and here note, please Done !
13. 00:59:466 (1) - then remove it. Done !
14. 01:02:212 - add a circle! Done !
15. 01:02:635 - this need a circle too Done !
16. 01:05:593 - ^ Done !
17. 01:19:536 - You'd better add here a note and remove 01:19:748 (1) - Done !
18. 01:23:762 (5) - change this slider by circle on 01:23:762 - Done !
19. 01:28:832 - note! Done !
20. 01:29:466 (1) - I don't like whistles here. They are unexpected and don't fit :< Removed ^^
21. 01:54:396 (1) - remove nc, there is no need to put it Done !
22. 02:09:607 (2) - whatch your symmetry as earlier Tried to make it look better !
23. 02:16:156 (3) - maybe remove one repeat and add a circle on 02:17:001? To make it easier
    
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    Well i did not do this but as you adviced me like 00:58:198 (6) ^^
24. 02:21:649 - circle! Done !
25. 02:28:410 - ^ Done !
26. 02:35:170 - ^ Done !
27. 02:43:198 (5) - change to one circle on 02:43:198 - ? Done !
28. 03:02:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you know, that's quite hard D: Maybe this:
    
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    Done; thanks for the pattern !
29. 03:11:508 (2) - remove finishes? Done !

Hard

1. HP drain -2, please -1 !
2. 00:11:931 - map this break! Done !
3. 00:17:635 (2) - me casts symmetry on it!! Ahah XD I'm not even able to say if it worked perfeclty XD
4. 00:20:381 - what? again, map this. Done !
5. 00:30:945 (5) - make it neater:
   
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   Done, thanks !
6. 00:32:001 (6) - (nazi) 1 grid left to line it with 00:30:311 (3) - Done !
7. 00:40:029 (4) - xD funny followpoints. Make this:
   
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   Ahah thanks !
8. 00:47:424 (6) - maybe some grids down to avoid touching circles? Done !
9. 00:50:593 (5) - followpoints :3 (just like it, haha) Well yes, I do have problems with sliders XD
10. 00:56:720 (3) - looks ugly. Make something like this:
    
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    Done !
11. 00:58:198 (6) - ^ Done !
12. 01:02:212 - add a note Done !
13. 01:19:114 - ^ Done !
14. 01:20:593 (4) - move it to the middle of x? :O Yes done !
15. 01:24:184 - note with clap!! Clap-clap! Sounds great
16. 01:24:607 - map it, huh! Done !
17. 01:53:762 - note? Done !
18. 02:16:157 (3) - shape~ Done !
19. 02:17:635 (6) - ^ Done !
20. 02:21:649 - note? Done !
21. 02:26:931 (5) - again, move it to the middle Done !
22. 03:11:508 (2) - remove finishes?

Oh, you really must work on your Easy and Normal. More and more. But your Hard diff is REALLY GOOD!
Good luck!

Kokatsu wrote:

M4M from my queue

[General]
Consider adding Kiaitime on all diffs. Suggestions would be the chorus parts:
00:55:874 - 01:23:762
02:15:311 - 02:43:198
Thank you for the suggestion ! If more people want a Kiak Time I'll add one, but isn't 30sec x2 a lottle bit long for a Kiai Time ?
You should also consider adding (at least one) Spinner in each diff to ensure different max-scores. (The End of the map would fit well for a Spinner 03:07:705 - 03:11:931)
Well I have to say I like maps without spinners even though i didn't think about this aspect, if I get more reflexions about it I'll add one
Remove "Pony Pony Run Run" from the Tags, as it is the artist, lol (Tags only add new search options and since you already get this map if you search for pony pony run run, you don't need to add this as a tag)
"You Need Pony Pony Run Run" is the name of the album, so I guess I have to keep it in the tags, no ?

[Easy]
This Diff still needs a lot of work, I will focus mainly on things you should reming yourself of when reworking the diff
Generally, an Easy diff should have a lot of breaks, especially on 1/1 basis (meaning that you leave out 1/2 sometimes to get a short break). Try to leave out notes whereever possible.
Well I had many breaks at the begenning and people told me to map them, so as I still have a few I won't, because I don't feel like removing notes as I think it fits the map where they are ^^
Your SV is too high. Reduce to x1.0 max (with that many notes and that "high" SV, it feels more like a Normal)
I already reduced it due to the same remarks, I'm afraid it can be boring with a lower SV s for now I'll keep it this way ^^
Also consider reduceing the Distance Spacing (0,7 seems fine at 1.00 SV, but you can also go for 0,6)
Ehh sorry I will look a lot stubborn but I don't think it's too hard this way XD
Since you should rework all sliders when changeing the SV, I cannot mod sliders in this mod. Please call me back when you reworked the sliders so I can take a look ath them~ I will mention some of them anyways.
Well if I finally decide to change it I'll call you for sure ! Thanks !
01:21:225 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start). Done !
00:19:114 (1) - Okay, some basic stuff about easy diffs: since they are not hard, there are not many notes and there are close to no patterns, all you should check is the lookout, Easydiffs must look good and for this, you should rework sliders like this one to be more symmetrically. Tried to !
00:28:198 (5) - please avoid starting on a red tick on Easy, red ticks should only be used for Sliderreverses or 1/2 "streams" Replaced by a circle on the white tick for this one and all the others ^^
00:34:959 (3) - ^ PLUS the reversepart of the slider is closer to the previouse note than the sliderstart, which should be avoided in an Easy diff. Changed as I changed ^
01:38:128 (2) - okay, that's it, I tolerated this kind of sliders b4, but now I'm getting mad This kind of slider, without a real "center" in the whirl/curve/idk how to call it is confuseing for new players, they just see a slider with a big middlepart and since there is no real sliderpath that they can follow, because it's lapping with itself, this is unnacceptable. Make sure that - if you rework Sliders - there is always a clearly visible path of the slider to follow. Ok I understand, I will work on it !
01:57:142 (3,1) - Overlap, as already mentioned, Easys should look nice (and with nice I mean VERY NICE D:). Avoid all overlaps in Easy-diffs Oh yeah I did not see this one, thanks !
02:04:748 (1) - okay, getting angry again :< Sliders should be worked out with as less waypoints as possible to guarantee the best shape possible. Maybe you should check out this thread for some slider-basicknowledge~ Ahah y I know I have probs with sliders and followpoints, but this one doesn't look ugly for me, so are the followpoints really a problem as players won't see them ?

Sorry that this was no real mod, but the diff just needs a lot of rework <__<

[Normal]
A lot better than the Easy, here I can actually mod something \:D/
This looks more like a normal+/somewhat hard-ish for me ;_;
I would however recommend you to take a closer look at the sliders you used, once you've read the thread I mentioned in Easy-mod and dat SV. q__q XD I will look again yes ^^
00:30:311 (4) - shouldn't be overlapping with 6 Changed !
00:39:818 (4) - needs a clearly visible centerpoint Will work on it !
01:29:466 (1,2) - new players are not able to read this. remove 2 and let 1 repeat 2more times. Replaced it by 2 circles instead, I hope it's better now, beacause I don't like sliders with too many reverse on Normal, so I think it's a good in-between change ^^
02:17:635 (5) - remove clap from sliderstart? D: Done !

You should probably rename it to Normal+ to match the actual difficulty..
Well as it has quite easy settings, I guess it's ok !

[Hard]
This map actually is fun to play! :O Didn't expect that x__x
Settings are more Insane-ish than Hard
SV is too high q__q
AR-2
CS-1 and HP/OD -1 or HP -1 and OD -2 (would recommend the second version)
Wel if I reduce the settings it's only have 4 stars, and as it is playable like this (and I prefer it this way too ^^) sorry but I won't change the settings ^^

This looks fine

Good luck anyways~
Thanks !