1. Easy (1.51 stars, 156 notes)
2. Hard (4.91 stars, 330 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 614 notes)
4. kosiga's Normal (3.7 stars, 291 notes)

Anchor wrote:

From Underground Queue.
我盡力來mod一下
初音真可愛

[general]
要不要考慮做個 Normal? kosiga做了
Easy和Hard的難度差太遠了

[Easy]
00:37:837 (1) - 由00:37:687開始比較好, 在00:38:737結束(不要return) 其实有些地方不必太过跟歌词，因为节奏感就在那里。。
然後加新slider在00:39:037開始, 00:39:937結束
新slider from 00:40:237 to 00:41:137
新slider from 00:41:437 , return at 00:41:737, end at 00:42:037
01:41:437 (3) - 因為歌詞在這裡中間有一次停頓.. 所以只用一條slider不太好 同意
01:47:437 (1) - 應該在01:47:287 便開始 跟第一条一样
00:46:237 (4) - 02:17:437 (2) - 02:27:037 (2) - 03:05:437 (4) - 03:24:037 (4) - 03:27:037 (2) - 雖然說這些slider跟歌詞, 但會突然破壞了節奏, 就是給人「!?」 的感覺...
比如可以試試把00:46:237 (4) - 拉到00:46:837才結束看看
其实注意听的话会发现这些slider的头和尾在音乐本身都有drum beat, 所以这节奏并不是我发明的，本身有了。
(主要是我寫了出來的這些才有節奏問題, 其他同類slider沒什麼問題)

[hard]
可以考慮 AP-1 不清楚你说哪个，我们有HP有AR没有AP 囧
一個circle也沒有!? 嗯
00:37:537 (2) - 在00:37:687才開始吧, end at 00:38:287 怎么一直给这种建议呢，作图并不是单靠vocal下note, 把slider拿到那个时间点会听到在 00:37:537 时有个“锵” 。 不会为了跟vocal做出这种节奏。。 而且听鼓声的话 slider应下在白线上，如果 end at 00:38:287 就奇怪了

00:37:237 (1) - no New Combo
00:37:687 (2) - New Combo
把00:38:287 (3) - 改成 Circle放在00:38:512 (如果一定要用slider的話, 那 start at 00:38:437 end at 00:38:587)
01:32:287 (4) - 不要return,
加入New Combo的slider 由01:32:887到01:33:187
01:33:337 (1) - 因此這個不用New Combo
02:51:037 (1) - 放在02:52:237才開始吧, 另外因為是hard, 可以試試改得難一點 嗯

[insane]
00:47:287 (1,2,3) - 突然出現的3連擊!? you dont say...
01:25:687 (1) - no new combo ok
01:32:587 (1) - 和( 8 ) 分開, 不用New Combo , 會不會看起來好一點? 可能会，但是这里mapper就是想做出停顿的效果，下次mod的时候小心不要mod到mapper的梗。。。
02:00:637 (1,2,3,4,1) - 分開? 不了这里我要player感觉深刻那个drum beat
02:09:037 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 分開? ^
03:04:462 (2) - delete this circle 其实我打这里时很顺

1. 还好吧:D

1. ar-1
2. 01:46:837 (5,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/345329 fits music better imo.
3. 01:49:837 (1,2) - make parallel?
4. 02:50:137 (3) - move a bit inside?

1. slider diff 好评
2. 那一大段soft:c1的部分音效感觉太不给力了, 加点claps?
3. 01:11:887 (2) - 这里没对准。。。
4. 01:24:037 (3) - slider的blanket不是很好。。
5. 02:50:437 (6,7) - sure? /.\
6. 话说如果都是slider的话, 因为判定简单, OD可以提一下, 有一个20圈160滑条的图, OD和AR一样高的

1. 00:22:687 (4) - 这里放whistle的话听不出来, 试试00:22:537 (3) clap, 00:22:687 (4) finish如何
2. 00:26:887 (1) - 头上fin?
3. 00:30:337 (4) - 这个做成和(3)对称的好点
4. 00:30:337 (4) - 换成clap?
5. 00:30:637 (1) - ^然后这里finish
6. 00:36:937 (2) - clap?
7. 00:36:937 (2) - 1/2的slider+单点连下去如何, 00:37:237 加个打击感 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/345162
8. 01:09:487 (3) - add finish?
9. 01:46:087 (1) - new combo?
10. 02:14:437 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/345283 ..?
11. 03:49:087 (2) - 这里往上点打着舒服点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/345295

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

哇白雪公主233

Easy

1. 还好吧:D

Kosiga

1. ar-1
2. 01:46:837 (5,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/345329 fits music better imo.
3. 01:49:837 (1,2) - make parallel?
4. 02:50:137 (3) - move a bit inside?

Hard

1. slider diff 好评
2. 那一大段soft:c1的部分音效感觉太不给力了, 加点claps? 一直以为我加了。。
3. 01:11:887 (2) - 这里没对准。。。 k
4. 01:24:037 (3) - slider的blanket不是很好。。 k
5. 02:50:437 (6,7) - sure? /.\ lolz 这不知道哪里来的。。
6. 话说如果都是slider的话, 因为判定简单, OD可以提一下, 有一个20圈160滑条的图, OD和AR一样高的 调高了一些 OD7 HP6

Insane

1. 00:22:687 (4) - 这里放whistle的话听不出来, 试试00:22:537 (3) clap, 00:22:687 (4) finish如何 clap的话加了，finish那里其实我有放SC2的声音是不是悲剧了 待会full submit一下
2. 00:26:887 (1) - 头上fin? 嗯
3. 00:30:337 (4) - 这个做成和(3)对称的好点 k
4. 00:30:337 (4) - 换成clap? 好
5. 00:30:637 (1) - ^然后这里finish 很好
6. 00:36:937 (2) - clap? 似乎已经clap了的
7. 00:36:937 (2) - 1/2的slider+单点连下去如何, 00:37:237 加个打击感 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/345162 这里我还不要放鼓感，跟vocal是为了强调后面的00:37:837 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这段 （也就是暴风雨前的宁静。。）
8. 01:09:487 (3) - add finish? k
9. 01:46:087 (1) - new combo? k
10. 02:14:437 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/345283 ..? 这里不了，感觉flow这样就很好了
11. 03:49:087 (2) - 这里往上点打着舒服点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/345295 很好

star~

真心好图 刚刚看了大概两个小时/.\ 感觉都看不出什么问题了lol

灰常感谢mod, 也谢star ， 这里拜个早年

加油rank~

STBlack wrote:

From ♪~♫≈♫ Fluffy Modding Queue :3

Ohai Miku
I suggest:
Easy
I suggest to make AR 2 ok
02:17:362 (2) make this slider a little bit longer to 02:17:962 no...we dont usually end at blue tick in easy diff. and it is not a problem at all
03:33:037 (1) this slider is put of zone a little no problem, next time in your mod, you dont need to mention these thing, only you need to look at is if it touches HP bar
just move it down a little

Kosiga
02:30:487 (1) i move that slider to the right a little

like this

03:51:937 maybe better to make here a spinner like in Easy diff ?

Hard
00:24:637 slider (3) is covering the start point of slider (4) (maybe move (4) up a little bit) not a problem at all, it is allowed
01:01:537 maybe note her ? no, the flow is vocal
02:16:537 and 02:16:687 need a note here so the palette will become as here 01:06:637 good
03:31:837 maybe add some notes here ?
instead of that i made a break

Insane
Yey! I like it :3

Good luck

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Kosiga

1. ar-1 I hear the opinion of other people
2. 01:46:837 (5,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/345329 fits music better imo. 01:47:137 - Here is a strong sound. It is strange when I do not put something to me.
3. 01:49:837 (1,2) - make parallel?　This is intentional
4. 02:50:137 (3) - move a bit inside?　it is not necessary to change it, because it is not a big problem.

STBlack wrote:

Kosiga
02:30:487 (1) i move that slider to the right a little no change

like this

03:51:937 maybe better to make here a spinner like in Easy diff ? I hear the opinion of other people. ( When the spinner, the end of the song is not so clear imo )

1. Song Setup - Source and Tags - http://osu.ppy.sh/s/38846 Why do you not match it with this? so Source: change to Noboru-P. and Tags: add noboru , vocaloid2. is better imo.
2. Song Setup - Advanced - There is no need to align with all the diff. easy,normal diff recommends what you do not set. ( easydiff does not have stack and I did not watch my diff...orz This is not necessary for my diff )

1. 00:21:037 ~ 00:42:637 - i think volume is too big. Clap sound so very different from normal softhitsound in particular, feels sense of incongruity very much to me
2. 00:46:237 (4) - slider end 00:46:837 is better. It matches a vocal, and rhythm is simple.
3. 00:51:037 (4) - remove whistle to start and end of the slider.( same as 02:00:637 (4)
4. 01:09:037 (3) - I think that the blue line does not fit ><. Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/D2d9
5. 01:49:837 (3,4,1,2,3) - I recommend simple rhythm like 00:42:637~ .01:57:037~ for ex: 01:49:837 (3)~ http://puu.sh/D2gP . 01:54:637~ http://puu.sh/D2h3
6. 02:17:437 (2) - end 02:18:037. It matches a vocal, and rhythm is simple.
7. 02:18:637 (3) - same suggestion:01:09:037 (3)
8. 02:23:437 (3,4,5) - I think that the difference in rhythm here is difficult for a beginner. so Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/D2lc or like rhythm:01:13:837 (3,4)
9. 02:24:487 (5) - add finish instead to clap to start of the slider. ( same as 01:14:887 (4)
10. 02:57:037 (2) - add NC
11. 03:05:437 (4) - slider end 03:06:037. It matches a vocal, and rhythm is simple.
12. 03:11:437~ - Volume is too small imo Even if it is small 40~50% is better ><
13. 03:28:237 (3) - add NC. rhythm change point
14. 03:33:037 (1) - I think it is better to put a little inside
15. 03:34:237 (2) - use copy 03:33:037 (1) is better (Ctrl+c,v,h
16. 03:40:237 (3) - same as 01:09:037 (3)
17. 03:43:837 (2,3) - 01:12:637 (2,3) - The same form, the same rhythm. but placement of different hitsound. Is this intentional?
18. 03:49:837 (5) - add NC ( same as 01:18:637 (1) -

1. 00:21:037~ . and 00:30:637~. Because difference in volume here is big, I feel sense of incongruity for me
2. 01:33:187(x) - add note. Rhythm improves when you put it imo so http://puu.sh/D2M5
3. 01:39:037 (4) - add NC? ( slider speed change point. same as 00:29:437 (1) ? )
4. 02:18:487 (5) - add NC
5. 03:00:637 (1,2) - i suggest use sv:0.75x
6. 03:11:437~ - same easy diff
7. 03:17:437 (2) - add repeat. or slider end 03:18:037 is better imo. it matches vocal and it is easy to take the rhythm, too
8. 03:22:237 (1) - remove NC and 03:23:437 (3) - add NC
9. 03:31:537~03:33:037 - remove break time. I think this is unnecessary because it is too short

1. 00:29:728 - Unnecessary green line
2. 00:30:637 - ^
3. 00:40:237 - ^ or maybe change to vol 95% ?
4. 00:47:437 (3,4) - i think spacing too close
5. 01:00:637 - Unnecessary green line
6. 01:09:337 (2) - add NC ? i think when you use such a pattern, it is easy to understand the person who put NC
7. 01:34:987 (5) - add NC and 01:35:287 (6) - add NC and 01:36:037 (1) - remove NC? ( same rhythm pattern as 01:32:587 (1) ? )
8. 02:28:237 (4,5) - Does not match the rhythm. suggest for ex: http://puu.sh/D33C
9. 02:53:437 (1) - remove NC. ( because you do not put it here 02:58:237 (3) )
10. 03:01:237 - green line move to 03:01:837. because i think as for the sv change, here is fit
11. 03:09:037 (4) - add NC ?

eikkaleyd wrote:

[kosiga]
01:48:637 (4) - x364は良いと思います（1-2と同じ ok~ fixed

eikkaleyd wrote:

跑去修了声卡lol
我和船长的mod水平没多大差距啊……你不要欺负船长lol【喂
船长的mod不是不好，只是太过嗯。。。依赖自我感觉（毕竟是别人的图嘛）不过大丈夫的

如果我言语太过分 跟船长道个歉orz

[Insane]
00:25:987 (1) - 既然有点anti-jump的感觉就再近一点，这种不近不远略难受，不过你全曲基本都这样也没啥好改的了？ 这。。因为我自己作图自己打。。所以DS比较差，改了
00:37:387 (3) - 往下拉，不要和2overlap，而且，间距可以和1 2之间那样大一些 ok
00:48:187 (5) - 推荐CTRL+R
00:49:387 (3) - 同上，这样这两句会和之前之后的两句都一样的flow
后面又有两句这样的就不用改了。
其实这里本来是下个梗的，现在看看会不会比较明朗。。
00:59:437 (1) - 略看不清这句话。不过没大碍，只是希望这个1能和2一个形状水平对称。 弄个角度了
01:09:037 (1,2,3,4) - = =……个人觉得23互换，4放远点好打 这里我挺喜欢他的感觉。。弄个NC了
01:45:187 (4) - 奇怪的间距，应该是CTRL+R后往左拉一段距离更好读 好
03:46:387 (1) - 这个似乎接不到，推荐把2改成reverse slider 嗯

[Hard]
00:30:637 - 不明白为什么这段音效用的和前一段不一样？ hard本来就比较容易无聊，这里换个音效提提神
01:05:437 (1) - 理由不明的忽然减速拖条，后面出现好几次，感觉你不会改，但我还是提一下好了。 嗯哈哈 这里主要是提醒被人有个铃声音效，如果后面很多人排队反对的话我会弄0.75吧
01:25:237 (6) - 尾部finish几乎听不见，感觉很闷的结束 不想弄个custom finish但是default的用在并不是很理想，所以干脆调小声。。。用它原本的音效。。
01:52:987 (2) - 这个不好读了，CTRL+R后拉远点 嗯

[kosiga]
01:48:637 (4) - x364は良いと思います（1-2と同じ

[Easy]
整体间距略大不过没什么特别的……

kosiga wrote:

L_P~

here my mod except me diff

[General]

1. Song Setup - Source and Tags - http://osu.ppy.sh/s/38846 Why do you not match it with this? so Source: change to Noboru-P. and Tags: add noboru , vocaloid2. is better imo.
2. Song Setup - Advanced - There is no need to align with all the diff. easy,normal diff recommends what you do not set. ( easydiff does not have stack and I did not watch my diff...orz This is not necessary for my diff )

[Easy]

1. 00:21:037 ~ 00:42:637 - i think volume is too big. Clap sound so very different from normal softhitsound in particular, feels sense of incongruity very much to me fixed
2. 00:46:237 (4) - slider end 00:46:837 is better. It matches a vocal, and rhythm is simple. actually here i follow bass beat
3. 00:51:037 (4) - remove whistle to start and end of the slider.( same as 02:00:637 (4) k
4. 01:09:037 (3) - I think that the blue line does not fit ><. Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/D2d9 id like to keep the rhythm simple, so instead of that i added green line..
5. 01:49:837 (3,4,1,2,3) - I recommend simple rhythm like 00:42:637~ .01:57:037~ for ex: 01:49:837 (3)~ http://puu.sh/D2gP . 01:54:637~ http://puu.sh/D2h3 yep
6. 02:17:437 (2) - end 02:18:037. It matches a vocal, and rhythm is simple. same
7. 02:18:637 (3) - same suggestion:01:09:037 (3) same
8. 02:23:437 (3,4,5) - I think that the difference in rhythm here is difficult for a beginner. so Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/D2lc or like rhythm:01:13:837 (3,4) agreed, fixed
9. 02:24:487 (5) - add finish instead to clap to start of the slider. ( same as 01:14:887 (4) it is...?
10. 02:57:037 (2) - add NC
11. 03:05:437 (4) - slider end 03:06:037. It matches a vocal, and rhythm is simple.
12. 03:11:437~ - Volume is too small imo Even if it is small 40~50% is better >< i think already good ... orz
13. 03:28:237 (3) - add NC. rhythm change point nice point
14. 03:33:037 (1) - I think it is better to put a little inside daijoubu
15. 03:34:237 (2) - use copy 03:33:037 (1) is better (Ctrl+c,v,h ok
16. 03:40:237 (3) - same as 01:09:037 (3)
17. 03:43:837 (2,3) - 01:12:637 (2,3) - The same form, the same rhythm. but placement of different hitsound. Is this intentional? yes, this one i use what insane used.
18. 03:49:837 (5) - add NC ( same as 01:18:637 (1) - ok

[Hard]

1. 00:21:037~ . and 00:30:637~. Because difference in volume here is big, I feel sense of incongruity for me yes
2. 01:33:187(x) - add note. Rhythm improves when you put it imo so http://puu.sh/D2M5 exactly what im thinking about! just made it before you mod
3. 01:39:037 (4) - add NC? ( slider speed change point. same as 00:29:437 (1) ? ) k
4. 02:18:487 (5) - add NC k
5. 03:00:637 (1,2) - i suggest use sv:0.75x no..
6. 03:11:437~ - same easy diff
7. 03:17:437 (2) - add repeat. or slider end 03:18:037 is better imo. it matches vocal and it is easy to take the rhythm, too if i end there i feel like closing too long..
8. 03:22:237 (1) - remove NC and 03:23:437 (3) - add NC k
9. 03:31:537~03:33:037 - remove break time. I think this is unnecessary because it is too short k

[Insane]

1. 00:29:728 - Unnecessary green line fixed
2. 00:30:637 - ^ fixed
3. 00:40:237 - ^ or maybe change to vol 95% ? fixed
4. 00:47:437 (3,4) - i think spacing too close i think it is still fine..
5. 01:00:637 - Unnecessary green line fixed
6. 01:09:337 (2) - add NC ? i think when you use such a pattern, it is easy to understand the person who put NC exactly what i fixed before you mod ha
7. 01:34:987 (5) - add NC and 01:35:287 (6) - add NC and 01:36:037 (1) - remove NC? ( same rhythm pattern as 01:32:587 (1) ? )
8. 02:28:237 (4,5) - Does not match the rhythm. suggest for ex: http://puu.sh/D33C no change for this...btw thanks for remind, i wanna try this
9. 02:53:437 (1) - remove NC. ( because you do not put it here 02:58:237 (3) ) fixed
10. 03:01:237 - green line move to 03:01:837. because i think as for the sv change, here is fit nice
11. 03:09:037 (4) - add NC ? fixed

Good luck~

1. AR+1?
2. 00:30:337 - 加個圈?
3. 00:33:937 - clap~~

1. 00:37:237 (4,1,2) - How about this beat?? @w@
   
2. 01:46:837 (5,1,2) - Same as ^
3. 03:29:437 (4,5) - Hmm.. I think here a bit ugly >~< try to change them to another shape??
4. 03:31:537 (1) - Change to a circle?? and the spinner start at 03:31:612 -
5. 03:40:237 (1,2,3) - How about this?? :>http://puu.sh/D4rV

1. 00:55:087 - 加個圈??
2. 01:10:987 (3) - clap!!
3. 02:04:687 - 加圈?
4. 02:20:587 (3) - clap~~
5. 02:30:337 (3) - 往右移個2格?? 這樣看起來1,2,3中間隔的間距比較一致... (真是超小Nazi阿...)
6. 02:50:287 - 加圈?
7. 02:50:437 (6,1) - 額..間距弄大些?? 不然可能會誤讀._.
8. 02:52:237 (1) - 要4折返!? 考慮分成2個slider唄~~
9. 03:00:637 (1) - 用這節奏吧!! 比較有fu~~
   
10. 03:30:637 (1) - 分成2個3折返的slider最後再補個圈如何ww??
11. 03:42:187 (3) - clap吧~
12. 03:52:087 (1) - 這邊改成圈~ 比較有感覺._. 轉盤改成03:52:162 - 再開始!! (真心建議!! 結尾還是要有個圈好些 >~<)

1. Fine!! XD~~
   其實是懶得mod了=w=b(喂喂!!

12BARRY21 wrote:

我來了!!~~~~~~~~~~

<Easy>

1. AR+1? k
2. 00:30:337 - 加個圈? 额
3. 00:33:937 - clap~~ 好

<kosiga>

1. 00:37:237 (4,1,2) - How about this beat?? @w@
   
2. 01:46:837 (5,1,2) - Same as ^
3. 03:29:437 (4,5) - Hmm.. I think here a bit ugly >~< try to change them to another shape??
4. 03:31:537 (1) - Change to a circle?? and the spinner start at 03:31:612 -
5. 03:40:237 (1,2,3) - How about this?? :>http://puu.sh/D4rV

<神Hard>

1. 00:55:087 - 加個圈?? 这里不了，感觉会比较难。。
2. 01:10:987 (3) - clap!! 这里不想clap, 想弄成白线下clap的效果
3. 02:04:687 - 加圈? no
4. 02:20:587 (3) - clap~~ 下在最后一个头
5. 02:30:337 (3) - 往右移個2格?? 這樣看起來1,2,3中間隔的間距比較一致... (真是超小Nazi阿...) 嗯 不错
6. 02:50:287 - 加圈?
7. 02:50:437 (6,1) - 額..間距弄大些?? 不然可能會誤讀._. 好
8. 02:52:237 (1) - 要4折返!? 考慮分成2個slider唄~~ 这里不用啦
9. 03:00:637 (1) - 用這節奏吧!! 比較有fu~~ 嗯 的确
   
10. 03:30:637 (1) - 分成2個3折返的slider最後再補個圈如何ww?? 不了，感觉现在就ok了，不过可能会再弄个什么东西之类的，现在还没有想法
11. 03:42:187 (3) - clap吧~ 不了
12. 03:52:087 (1) - 這邊改成圈~ 比較有感覺._. 轉盤改成03:52:162 - 再開始!! (真心建議!! 結尾還是要有個圈好些 >~<) 好吧。。。

<鬼觸Insane>

1. Fine!! XD~~
   其實是懶得mod了=w=b(喂喂!! 不要紧XD

好圖ww
Star~~~~~

12BARRY21 wrote:

<kosiga>

1. 00:37:237 (4,1,2) - How about this beat?? @w@ no change =w= 01:47:137 - Here is a strong sound. It is strange when I do not put something to me.
   
2. 01:46:837 (5,1,2) - Same as ^ ^
3. 03:29:437 (4,5) - Hmm.. I think here a bit ugly >~< try to change them to another shape?? change~
4. 03:31:537 (1) - Change to a circle?? and the spinner start at 03:31:612 - sorry, no change.
5. 03:40:237 (1,2,3) - How about this?? :>http://puu.sh/D4rV good :33 change~

iroseka wrote:

iroseka's m4m

图我想到了一个人
General：kiai需要一致，且要开始和结束在白线上
官方wiki说:


难道阿扁L_P错了吗

[Easy]
感觉难了些……滑条和间隔都相当快
SC2的clap有些吵 建议减小音量
02:09:637 (3) - 可以加一个note
02:12:637 (2) - 滑条头加个Whistle?

[Normal]
感觉不错……
03:08:287 (5) - 去掉滑条头的clap

[Hard]
全slider对一些音似乎把握比较不爽…… kiai的音效可以减到90，100有点吵
00:58:687 (4) - 去掉似乎也可以？ 跟drum
00:59:137 (1) - 改成circle，加上clap（为了全slider的话就把滑条头加上clap）
00:59:437 (2,3) - 可以用*0.75来提醒 这里可以，但是现在不想弄
01:39:037 (1) - 仍然使用1.0时的DS 即1.33 建议移动下
01:52:537 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - 加一些音效在这里： [/color]

368,108,112537,6,0,B|392:184,1,70,0|8
244,48,112987,2,0,B|272:132,1,70,0|8
148,208,113437,2,0,B|216:232|248:324,1,140,2|0
180,356,113887,2,0,B|336:336,1,140,8|0
384,296,114337,2,0,B|336:244|352:152,1,140,8|2
252,44,114937,6,0,B|164:80,1,70,0|8
96,196,115387,2,0,B|184:160,1,70,0|8
300,108,115837,2,0,B|360:168|448:140,1,140,2|0
452,72,116287,2,0,B|456:240,1,140,8|0
452,288,116737,2,0,B|448:356|448:356|388:332|352:348,1,140,8|6
240,272,117337,6,0,B|164:308,1,70,0|8
156,148,117787,2,0,B|80:180,1,70,0|8
244,184,118237,2,0,B|312:148|384:172,1,140,2|0
436,224,118687,2,0,B|388:84,1,140,8|0
364,20,119137,2,0,B|284:36|284:36|280:68|240:80,1,140,8|2
96,96,119737,6,0,B|152:164,1,70,0|8
196,296,120187,2,0,B|124:304,2,70,0|8|0

03:00:637 (1) - 这个开始的挺奇怪……建议在这里03:00:337 (1) - 加个note（或者slider 什么都好）

[Insane]
很棒 我觉得XD
每个kiai前的那一段都感觉有点歪歪斜斜 建议微调一下
00:22:687 (4,5,6) - 这个三连打起来不带感 建议放在 00:22:312 (2) - 好
00:32:287 (4,5,6) - 同
03:09:637 (2,1) - 这边和前后不搭略有不和谐 建议分开 这里想弄个梗，现在做不出来

iroseka wrote:

[Normal]
感觉不错……
03:08:287 (5) - 去掉滑条头的clap ok~ fixed

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Kosiga]
02:30:337 (5,1) - just stack? mainly for better looking I did not intentionally use the 1/2stack. Because thought it was a little difficult. I change it if you say that do not have problem :3
02:50:137 (3) - make the curve smaller a bit..? http://puu.sh/EQeR ok~ fixed
03:31:537 (1) - add a circle here and start the spinner 1/2 later? here's a heavy voice too. Because a spinner shortened, I did not change it. (barry's mod ) but if you do not have any problem, I change it :3

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
Disable letterbox in all diffs? (Now only in Easy) fixed
Insane's last kiai ends a bit different with the other diffs, any reasons? fixed orz(it was the last kiai)

[Easy]
01:08:437 (2) - change clap to the beginning? fixed
01:39:037 (4) - whistle (custom..?default..?) at the end? fixed(SC2)
03:30:637 (3) - increase volume here? fixed

[Kosiga]
02:30:337 (5,1) - just stack? mainly for better looking
02:50:137 (3) - make the curve smaller a bit..? http://puu.sh/EQeR
03:31:537 (1) - add a circle here and start the spinner 1/2 later? here's a heavy voice too.

[Hard]
00:55:237 (1) - 1/3 fixed
01:00:637 (3) - 4 circles here? (nearly stack) a slider seems a bit waste here. instead of circles i used 4 sliders with bunch of green lines
01:05:437 (1) - don't really get why 0.5x wanna feel the calm part in kiai, but yea eye yea received too much complains...orz changed to 0.75, plz..
01:39:037 (1) - whistle at the end? fixed
02:04:837 (3) - 1/3 fixed
02:15:037 (1) - don't get why 0.5x again + this could be misread as 1/2? ^
02:56:437 - a bit empty here.. 1~3 notes? remapped...
03:04:837 (1) - 1/3 again. fixed
03:30:637 (1) - 1/2*3+1/2*3+1/2 circle. a possible way http://puu.sh/EQln i used 1 repeat slider + 2 sliders
03:36:637 (1) - ...same fixed

[Insane]
00:37:537 - try to add a beat here to make the clap pace..? you may need to change some notes though. here, you and CSGA did the same mod 囧now fixed T.T
00:42:637 (7,1) - switch new combo fixed
00:55:237 (3) - 1/3 fixed
01:00:637 (1,2,3,4) - ehh try to make this group more organized in a "up" way..? 囧 fixed
01:39:037 (1) - whistle at the end? k
02:04:837 (3) - 1/3 yeah k
02:11:137 (6) - .is this needed? I noticed there is not a taiko diff and this is kinda impossible for taiko playing (or at least unreasonable) used 1/4
02:28:837 (5) - change to 1/1 slider? because the current clap at repeat is just out of place. nice
02:47:287 (4) - add finish like 02:45:937 (4) ? nice
03:04:837 (4) - hi hahahaha
03:10:537 & 03:11:137 - add notes? 这里想要制造慢下来的效果，不大想跟vocal
03:30:637 (1) - http://puu.sh/EQrW ? 嗯
03:31:837 (1,2,3,4) - another part that i want to be more organized... k
03:41:737 (2) - 为防傻逼，没理由别用 k

Generally very good map. I'm glad you improved so fast in only several months. Some stars.

因为MAT mod要用英文，所以万一有我表达不清的地方再问就好。
水平提高速度很给力，这个质量能撑住就够打进一线了我觉得，不过有些基础的（比如1/3……）还是自己注意下。 非常感谢！！
弄好了找我泡。

1. 03:37:837 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Huh? Copy-pasted from the first chorus, I suppose? I wouldn't mind copy-pasting if you at least flip them or did some small tweak so it will look different, but this is exactly the same as that one. It's allowed to do this, but can't we have... some variations? If you don't want, though, it's okay.

1. Huh? You usually name your diffs with the diff's type (Normal) too, right? Oh well, this is something I shouldn't even talk about in the first place.
2. 02:10:237 (1,2) - Remove the Whistle at the beginning of (1) and the end of (2)? The current one doesn't sound really good to me, and this is somehow better...
3. 02:17:737 (4,5) - Replace (4) with a 1/2 slider that repeats twice, move it to (392,132), add Claps to 02:17:737 and 02:18:037, then remove the one on (5)? I just can't explain this, but it's better than the previous state; try it first.
4. 03:39:037 (5) - Finish at the beginning of this slider?

1. 01:00:637 (1,2,3,4) - ...I can feel the overmapping here. It still plays fine though, so I don't really care, although making some 1/1 jumps might do better.
2. 03:00:337 (2,1) - The SV transition here feels a bit too sudden.

1. 01:41:887 (3,4) - NC them?
2. 01:44:887 (1) - ^
3. 02:19:087 (2,3,4,1) - I think you can make a good jump here by placing (3) on (248,68).
4. 02:47:512 (1,1,1) - Don't wanna make some streams here? It's a waste to only make three spinners here while the song 'allows' to make a stream. It will be a good addition to this diff. If you dislike them, though, I can understand.
5. 03:30:637 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - ...Don't you think this is a bit difficult to read, especially after hitting the 03:28:837 (2,3,4,5,6,7) stack?

Hinsvar wrote:

Yo.

Let's get started.

51315, I see.

*Note: Bolded gold ones are things you must do (or strongly recommended; usually about unrankable stuff or extreme/fatal errors). Everything in red are things that look awkward/wrong to me or something that can be improved (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.

>Easy

1. 03:37:837 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Huh? Copy-pasted from the first chorus, I suppose? I wouldn't mind copy-pasting if you at least flip them or did some small tweak so it will look different, but this is exactly the same as that one. It's allowed to do this, but can't we have... some variations? If you don't want, though, it's okay.

no change

>Kosiga

1. Huh? You usually name your diffs with the diff's type (Normal) too, right? Oh well, this is something I shouldn't even talk about in the first place.
2. 02:10:237 (1,2) - Remove the Whistle at the beginning of (1) and the end of (2)? The current one doesn't sound really good to me, and this is somehow better...
3. 02:17:737 (4,5) - Replace (4) with a 1/2 slider that repeats twice, move it to (392,132), add Claps to 02:17:737 and 02:18:037, then remove the one on (5)? I just can't explain this, but it's better than the previous state; try it first.
4. 03:39:037 (5) - Finish at the beginning of this slider?

>Hard

1. 01:00:637 (1,2,3,4) - ...I can feel the overmapping here. It still plays fine though, so I don't really care, although making some 1/1 jumps might do better.
   thus, no change though (could see i placed inherit points
2. 03:00:337 (2,1) - The SV transition here feels a bit too sudden. it flows with the music, and it is a kick slider...

>Insane

1. 01:41:887 (3,4) - NC them? k, will change after suzully come
2. 01:44:887 (1) - ^ same
3. 02:19:087 (2,3,4,1) - I think you can make a good jump here by placing (3) on (248,68). [/color]
4. 02:47:512 (1,1,1) - Don't wanna make some streams here? It's a waste to only make three spinners here while the song 'allows' to make a stream. It will be a good addition to this diff. If you dislike them, though, I can understand. some mappers love streams, some does not...unlucky im not the one who loves streams ;D
5. 03:30:637 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - ...Don't you think this is a bit difficult to read, especially after hitting the 03:28:837 (2,3,4,5,6,7) stack? bro..this is insane

k, just that. Looks pretty good. thanks

Good luck on the way

• 
  The title should be "Shiroi Yuki no Princess wa..."

1. 00:37:837 (1) - Consider to add a clap to the end of a slider.
2. 01:51:037 (4) - Add a finish too?
3. 02:07:837 (2) - Add a CS2-clap to the end to follow the strong sound of the guitar?
4. 03:35:437 (3) - Add a finish to the end. Seems you forgot

• 
  Since this is a normal diff, I recommend you to rename like "kosiga's Normal" to clarify which difficulty this is.

1. 00:24:637 (4) - Please avoid using the overlapped slider on normal diff.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:37:237 (4,1,2) - I heard a vocal at 00:37:687, I think the beginner expects there is a note there too. How about changing them like below? (I also recommend you to change 00:37:237 (4) to the non-repeat-slider because 1/2-repeat seems kind of hard here if changed.)
   
3. 01:46:837 (5,1,2) - ^
4. 03:33:637 (1,2) - A clap should be at (2).
5. 03:53:887 (T) - Remove a green line.

Suzully wrote:

From my modding queue.
Sorry for taking long time but I was quite busy glad that you came!!gwahahaha

[General]

• 
  The title should be "Shiroi Yuki no Princess wa..."

actually im fine with this, see t/65585/start=42 orz

[Easy]

1. 00:37:837 (1) - Consider to add a clap to the end of a slider. ok
2. 01:51:037 (4) - Add a finish too? forgot to do this aaa
3. 02:07:837 (2) - Add a CS2-clap to the end to follow the strong sound of the guitar? nice one
4. 03:35:437 (3) - Add a finish to the end. Seems you forgot T.T yes..

[Kosiga]

• 
  Since this is a normal diff, I recommend you to rename like "kosiga's Normal" to clarify which difficulty this is.

1. 00:24:637 (4) - Please avoid using the overlapped slider on normal diff.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:37:237 (4,1,2) - I heard a vocal at 00:37:687, I think the beginner expects there is a note there too. How about changing them like below? (I also recommend you to change 00:37:237 (4) to the non-repeat-slider because 1/2-repeat seems kind of hard here if changed.)
   
3. 01:46:837 (5,1,2) - ^
4. 03:33:637 (1,2) - A clap should be at (2).
5. 03:53:887 (T) - Remove a green line.

Call me back after fix both mine and Hinsvar's.

Suzully wrote:

[Kosiga]

• 
  Since this is a normal diff, I recommend you to rename like "kosiga's Normal" to clarify which difficulty this is. Leave it to L_P~

1. 00:24:637 (4) - Please avoid using the overlapped slider on normal diff. fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:37:237 (4,1,2) - I heard a vocal at 00:37:687, I think the beginner expects there is a note there too. How about changing them like below? (I also recommend you to change 00:37:237 (4) to the non-repeat-slider because 1/2-repeat seems kind of hard here if changed.) 00:37:537. 01:47:137. に大きなfinish音があるので、ここからリズム変えたいなぁということでこうしています。>< 私的には買えずにこのままいきたいのですが...
   
3. 01:46:837 (5,1,2) - ^
4. 03:33:637 (1,2) - A clap should be at (2). fixed~
5. 03:53:887 (T) - Remove a green line. ^