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Mitani Nana - Shiroi Yuki no Princess ha ...

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Kotone
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, 14 December, 2011 at 21:50:13

Artist: Mitani Nana
Title: Shiroi Yuki no Princess ha ...
Source: Noboru-P
Tags: noboru vocaloid vocaloid2 hatsune miku bakabaka
BPM: 200
Filesize: 7321kb
Play Time: 04:14
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab (5 stars, 821 notes)
Download: Mitani Nana - Shiroi Yuki no Princess ha ...
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FOR APPROVAL

Collab with awesome mapper bakabaka
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JoJo
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JoJo
沙了个发=A=

小莹妹妹赛高=A=//

EDIT:鬼畜图真不适合我这种叒B来mod啊...=//=

  1. Red-You must fix it.
  2. Blue-You'd better to fix it.
  3. Black-Suggestion only.
[General]
  1. hit300g.png位置偏高了，微调一下? ._.
  2. pause-back.png图片上写的是"back to meun"????? lol~~~
[bakaying]
  1. HD-2吧...不减分...至少-1吧喂..(恳求状
  2. Try slider tick rate 2 ? ._. 到变速的地方会容易读些..
  3. 00:06:478 (x) - 本来想吐槽礼花时间点的，结果发现效果不错呢..=//=
  4. 00:20:128 (3) - Useless Timing Section.
  5. 00:51:328 (3,4) - 这是要毁灭人类啊..
  6. 00:58:828 (10,1) - 喏~这里用了STR2的话就会很容易读哦~ =。=
  7. 01:44:128 (2) - 没叠好..
  8. 04:03:178 (2,3) - .......
[bakabaka]
  1. 01:01:828 (1) - 这里有2根线？删掉一根..
  2. 02:57:028 (3,1,3,1) - 真心无法接受啊...
  3. 03:06:928 (2,1) - 增大DS?
做为一个叒B我有很多无法接受的DS想吐槽...
算了..神组合神图无雾...=//= 再扔颗星..
逃..
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bakabaka
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bakabaka
:3
Kotone
2,402 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Kotone

JoJo wrote:

沙了个发=A=

小莹妹妹赛高=A=//

EDIT:鬼畜图真不适合我这种叒B来mod啊...=//=

  1. Red-You must fix it.
  2. Blue-You'd better to fix it.
  3. Black-Suggestion only.
[General]
  1. hit300g.png位置偏高了，微调一下? ._.
  2. pause-back.png图片上写的是"back to meun"????? lol~~~
這樣的._. skin我刪了...因為很花

[bakaying]
  1. HD-2吧...不减分...至少-1吧喂..(恳求状 好
  2. Try slider tick rate 2 ? ._. 到变速的地方会容易读些.. 好
  3. 00:06:478 (x) - 本来想吐槽礼花时间点的，结果发现效果不错呢..=//=
  4. 00:20:128 (3) - Useless Timing Section. deleted
  5. 00:51:328 (3,4) - 这是要毁灭人类啊..哈哈哈哈哈
  6. 00:58:828 (10,1) - 喏~这里用了STR2的话就会很容易读哦~ =。=
  7. 01:44:128 (2) - 没叠好..ok~
  8. 04:03:178 (2,3) - ....... XDDDD
做为一个叒B我有很多无法接受的DS想吐槽...嘛ds的存在也是為了讀圖,能讀就行了XD
算了..神组合神图无雾...=//= 再扔颗星..
逃..
謝謝JoJo哥哥>//<
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin
僕のKaren >~<

[Storyboard]
  1. 00:000:028~00:06:028 - 用white把整個畫面?如果在00:06:478才開是白色得話有點怪怪的.
  2. 01:00:628 - 我覺得這裏太快變回正常..因為01:00:628 - 01:01:528 的音樂都很弱,所以我建議在01:01:528 - 才變回正常
  3. 03:00:628 - 03:01:828 - 在每一個重音上都加上white的effect?
[collab]
Issue/unrankable stuff
(Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
  1. 03:07:378 (1) - (bad gameplay)間距!因為整張MAP都是跳來跳去的,而且在這裏也不適合突然縮短間距,所以造成了誤到的情況,強烈建議把間距放大.
Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
  1. 00:08:428 (6) - (design)把這個作成00:07:678 (4) - 這樣的slider?用2個折點,會好看一點.
  2. 00:14:428 (4) - 這個沒和(1)-的尾重疊好!
  3. 00:39:028 (1,2,3,4,5) - (design)感覺在這裏放一個和之前相似的星形會比較好?像下面的差不多
    Example
    code就不給你..星我自己也作不漂亮 :<
  4. 00:51:328 (3,4) - (design)這個slider的形狀拉成(1.2)-的樣子?
  5. 00:53:878 (5) - (design)因為你00:53:428 (4) - 是用2個折點的,所以我建議這個也用2個,看起來會平衡一點
  6. 01:11:428 (4) - 換著是我,我寧願放一個正規的正方形也不要疊在01:10:828 (7) - 上面
  7. 01:39:028 (1) - (design)噗,略醜了,直接用彎的/直的slider就好了
  8. 02:00:328 (1) - 放在(124,116)? grid lv.4 那就剛好和(3.4)-成了個很好看的3角形 :3
  9. 02:05:128 (x) - 為了平衡難度,在這裡加note?不要忘記在了note之後要加clap喔!
  10. 03:11:203 (x) - 加note?為了和音樂對上
Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
  1. 00:52:678 (2) - 這裏加個whistle?在slider的開頭和結尾,千萬不要直接加在slider上面,不然會多加了一層噪音
  2. 01:03:628 (2) - 加whistle?因為在高音位.
  3. 01:06:328 (2) - ^同.
  4. 02:15:928 (2) - 強烈建議刪了clap之後在加上whistle.不知道為甚麼加了clap有一股詭異感
  5. 02:51:628 (3) - 加whistle.
  6. 03:04:828 (1) - 在slider的中間加上whistle?
  7. 03:07:978 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 為甚麼不直接用Normal sound?反正你都是全用clap.而且normal clap也比較有爆發力
  8. 04:03:178 (2) - 加whistle?
Pretty good at all!Star'd
Kotone
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Kotone

kanpakyin wrote:

僕のKaren >~< 哼=A=...笨蛋

[Storyboard]
  1. 00:000:028~00:06:028 - 用white把整個畫面?如果在00:06:478才開是白色得話有點怪怪的. //不覺得._.
  2. 01:00:628 - 我覺得這裏太快變回正常..因為01:00:628 - 01:01:528 的音樂都很弱,所以我建議在01:01:528 - 才變回正常//先保留
  3. 03:00:628 - 03:01:828 - 在每一個重音上都加上white的effect?//閃死了
[collab]
Issue/unrankable stuff
(Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
  1. 03:07:378 (1) - (bad gameplay)間距!因為整張MAP都是跳來跳去的,而且在這裏也不適合突然縮短間距,所以造成了誤到的情況,強烈建議把間距放大.// leave to baka
Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
  1. 00:08:428 (6) - (design)把這個作成00:07:678 (4) - 這樣的slider?用2個折點,會好看一點.//不要
  2. 00:14:428 (4) - 這個沒和(1)-的尾重疊好!好吧...雖然不重疊也沒什麼的
  3. 00:39:028 (1,2,3,4,5) - (design)感覺在這裏放一個和之前相似的星形會比較好?像下面的差不多// leave to baka,不過我覺得原本的比較好
    Example
    code就不給你..星我自己也作不漂亮 :<
  4. 00:51:328 (3,4) - (design)這個slider的形狀拉成(1.2)-的樣子?//不要
  5. 00:53:878 (5) - (design)因為你00:53:428 (4) - 是用2個折點的,所以我建議這個也用2個,看起來會平衡一點//不要
  6. 01:11:428 (4) - 換著是我,我寧願放一個正規的正方形也不要疊在01:10:828 (7) - 上面// leave to baka,btw我還是覺得原本的比較好
  7. 01:39:028 (1) - (design)噗,略醜了,直接用彎的/直的slider就好了好吧fixed...雖然我不覺得醜
  8. 02:00:328 (1) - 放在(124,116)? grid lv.4 那就剛好和(3.4)-成了個很好看的3角形 :3// leave to baka
  9. 02:05:128 (x) - 為了平衡難度,在這裡加note?不要忘記在了note之後要加clap喔!// leave to baka,btw我覺得不加好
  10. 03:11:203 (x) - 加note?為了和音樂對上//fixed
Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
  1. 00:52:678 (2) - 這裏加個whistle?在slider的開頭和結尾,千萬不要直接加在slider上面,不然會多加了一層噪音頭加了,别當我笨蛋!
  2. 01:03:628 (2) - 加whistle?因為在高音位.//fixed
  3. 01:06:328 (2) - ^同.//不要
  4. 02:15:928 (2) - 強烈建議刪了clap之後在加上whistle.不知道為甚麼加了clap有一股詭異感//fixed
  5. 02:51:628 (3) - 加whistle.//fixed
  6. 03:04:828 (1) - 在slider的中間加上whistle?//fixed
  7. 03:07:978 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 為甚麼不直接用Normal sound?反正你都是全用clap.而且normal clap也比較有爆發力//fixed
  8. 04:03:178 (2) - 加whistle?//不要
Pretty good at all!Star'd
謝謝~
EDIT:baka fixed something of his part~updated~
Nymph
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BAKA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
KanaRin
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karenying wrote:

我是公主(喂
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btw gd song
S h i o n
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S h i o n
karenying 俺の嫁~~~


Collab
01:10:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里的加速很棒! 但是给我的感觉是后面应该不再空出1/2的停顿的，01:12:628 (1,2,3) - 这里1/2补满?
01:15:628 (1,1) - 感觉这里不应该拖慢节奏 , vocal是明显加强的, 试试： 在01:15:478加个note 然后01:15:628这里开始来串连打~？
01:30:478 (1,2) - 休息过后的第一个音我个人总是很难找准的,后面倒可以多一些1/4的3连打，所以考虑下去掉这2个1/4 ?
01:52:153 (7) - 加一个note ?
02:29:278 (4) - 去掉这个 , 再在02:29:053加一个stack? 像原来那样最后来一下jump的话感觉有点不太适合
03:25:828 (10) - 这串10里面加个new combo ?
瞎了 音效什么的完全不会mod 写了些没什么用的东西 T.T


你的选歌都超赞啊~!!
Good luck~~
XD
bubble #1
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ranked
yay~!
Kotone
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S h i o n wrote:

karenying 俺の嫁~~~ >///<


Collab
01:10:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里的加速很棒! 但是给我的感觉是后面应该不再空出1/2的停顿的，01:12:628 (1,2,3) - 这里1/2补满?
01:15:628 (1,1) - 感觉这里不应该拖慢节奏 , vocal是明显加强的, 试试： 在01:15:478加个note 然后01:15:628这里开始来串连打~？
//lalala leave to baka
01:30:478 (1,2) - 休息过后的第一个音我个人总是很难找准的,后面倒可以多一些1/4的3连打，所以考虑下去掉这2个1/4 ?//好
01:52:153 (7) - 加一个note ?//好
02:29:278 (4) - 去掉这个 , 再在02:29:053加一个stack? 像原来那样最后来一下jump的话感觉有点不太适合//啦啦啦把JUMP改掉了
03:25:828 (10) - 这串10里面加个new combo ?//好好
瞎了 音效什么的完全不会mod 写了些没什么用的东西 T.T


你的选歌都超赞啊~!!
Good luck~~
XD
bubble #1
bubble #2
ranked
yay~!
lol~thanks~ :oops:
bakabaka
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bakabaka
:)

Download: Mitani Nana - Shiroi Yuki no Princess wa ... (karenying) [Collab].rar
wmfchris
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wmfchris
bakaying + bakabaka = triple baka!

- N:C1 is useless.

OD+1也可以

Some SB sections are covered by the notes like 0:53. Considering there's only one diff here try to switch the position of SB?

00:18:778 (1) - soft whistle here?
00:47:428 (1,3) - stack properly
01:08:878 (7) - 考慮到前後 (7,1)中間都是空的 放(392,208)會更好看
02:10:078 (5) - [Nazi] down 1 grid lv4
02:24:478 (1,2,3,4) - odd spacing: (1,2) 0.8x, (3,4) 1.0x
02:45:628 (1) - 向左移一點 使(1)正好在(2,3)中點

nice already.
某狼可以含笑九泉了, star.
Kotone
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wmfchris wrote:

bakaying + bakabaka = triple baka!
//you are 9999999999
- N:C1 is useless.
//added normal-sliderslide.wav

OD+1也可以
//no baka

Some SB sections are covered by the notes like 0:53. Considering there's only one diff here try to switch the position of SB?
//先保留

00:18:778 (1) - soft whistle here? //ok
00:47:428 (1,3) - stack properly //fixed
01:08:878 (7) - 考慮到前後 (7,1)中間都是空的 放(392,208)會更好看//不覺得
02:10:078 (5) - [Nazi] down 1 grid lv4 // leave to baka
02:24:478 (1,2,3,4) - odd spacing: (1,2) 0.8x, (3,4) 1.0x //fixed by shion's mod~
02:45:628 (1) - 向左移一點 使(1)正好在(2,3)中點 // leave to baka

nice already.
某狼可以含笑九泉了, star.我幫他完成遺願 :P
Kawayi Rika
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Hi ~ Karen 姐姐 ~ :)

MAP不能做的太好，会遭天神罚 ~_~

[Collab]

OD+1
AR9我也在做APP的时候用过，可是被好多人喷T_T.
01:28:228 - 第1个Break time 这里开始放NOTE怎么样？
02:01:528 (5,1) - 试下这样的节奏.
SPOILER
02:05:128 (2) - 我觉得这是多余的，建议删掉.
02:55:828 (3) - 这里应该加NC，后面删掉.
03:10:528 - 这里可以加1/2 NOTE 啊 为什么空掉呢？
03:53:578 (2) - 这个重叠到(3).
04:14:803 (1) - 加几条绿线降低音量吧,会好听 >_<


APP GO GO ~

送姐姐星星 >///<
Kotone
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Topic Starter
Kotone
OD+1了 AR9沒問題因為BPM高
我的部分沒東西要改 谢mod谢star~
Nymph
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Nymph
BAKA莹俺の馬鹿 =A=

BG不弄成1024 768么
……代码里面有空着的we.png代码……但是没那个文件 虽然感觉没什么大问题 不过还是删了好？

00:11:728 (2) - finish有点多余
01:05:128 (3) - newcombo一个？跳满大的
01:10:378 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 玩起来感觉太近了 总感觉jump更好
01:36:478 (1) - nc同上
02:18:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - jump同上
02:42:328 (3,4) - 这里叠起来我1pc觉得超不爽 4往左放玩起来就舒服的多 2pc又没所谓了 囧……
04:09:928 (5) - nc？

都是1PC的感想=A= 不NAZI了（话说不删SB完全没法打……SB又杯具了
safawu
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Joined September 2009
safawu
好图,AR9 200bpm打起来很带感,赞一个O(∩_∩)O

----------------------
一些note的建议(原来的已经很好了)

[karenying part]
00:47:053 (5) - 这个去掉可能比较好?
00:58:528 (9,10,11) - AR9中这里会不会有点难读
00:59:728 - 从这开始垫3拍怎么样?感觉有点空
01:32:278 (3) - 3改成单向,在01:32:728放个circle,然后在1:32:878放个2分拍slider试试看? 原来那个也挺好的就是下句话的第一个词落在那个slider上面有那么点不适应..大概是个人的关系,无视吧...._.
01:35:428 - 垫个circle怎么样?
01:43:828 (1,2) - 合成一个slider呢?
02:25:828 (1) - 去掉NC改在后面的2或者3?
03:17:428 (3,4,5) - 3长度减小1/3,到3:18:028,在原来的4上面叠上一个circle(3:18:478)试试看?
03:12:628 (6,7) - 6,7之间,7之后各垫一拍?
03:13:828 (8) - 这里感觉没必要拉1.5拍,前后都没呼应的样子..
03:20:428 (1) - 同样,剪短到3:20:428然后在21478和21628还有22078放上circle怎么样?同前面呼应 :3

[bakabaka part]
00:22:228 (1) - 变成折返slider试试?
00:27:853 (3) - 这个去掉可能比较好?
01:06:628 (1,2,3) - 2感觉放上来点比较好,前面慢后面突然跳会被坑大概...._.
01:08:503 (4) - 同27853手感打起来可能有点别..
01:58:078 (4) - 为什么不在这起个NC?
02:04:828 (1,2) - 同上面的1:43:828,这个后面还有跳,感觉略别扭
02:42:778 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - (纯吐槽)好恐怖/.\
02:47:428 (stream) - (纯吐槽)爽,瞬挂._.
03:07:228 - 垫个circle怎么样,和后面的蓝3呼应?
03:10:528 - 垫2个一分拍circle怎么样?
03:49:678 (4) - NC提到这儿试试
-----------------------
ps:有些跳突然DS差的很多的感觉容易被坑,跳起来略有些不适,总体来说跳的还是很爽
ps2:有些note藏得好坑爹,不过挺好玩:3
ps3:连打好鬼畜/.\
psp:三连五连连续出手会断掉的 QAQ
psv:好图一只,作为新人表示KD只有一个射不起星星 :(
ps998(好吃吗?):没有了._.
Kotone
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Topic Starter
Kotone
fixed some
Updated
JauiPlaY
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JauiPlaY
HI~ :)
一些建議:

[General]
Perfect for me~

[Collab]
00:10:978 (2) - clap.
00:22:678 (2) - 尾加clap.
00:58:528 (9,10,11) - 有點太吵了...
01:20:128 (2) - 頭finish?
01:20:878 (4) - 換成spinner比較好,在01:20:878結束.
01:39:778 (x) - 加個帶clap的note在01:40:528 (2)的尾巴上?
01:39:928 (x) - ^
01:50:428 (3) - 沒被覆蓋好,挺難看的...
02:08:578 (6) - clap.
02:24:028 (4) - 頭finish.
02:59:428 (1) - 誒...在02:59:878結束不好嗎?

我的Bakaying不可能這麼鬼畜
Nice map, good luck! :lol:
Kotone
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Topic Starter
Kotone
fixed some
thank you JPY~love you ♥
NatsumeRin
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NatsumeRin
00:20:353 - 加音?
00:37:528 (2) - 这里我还是觉得把slider后放1/2然后补个circle?
00:41:578 (2) - 这里因为歌词速度加快,我觉得是不是节奏略微变一下,这拍删掉/后挪1/4如何?
01:31:228 (3,4) - 重叠到开头会不会略单调,无良一点的话...这样?

01:39:028 (1) - 好像不太平滑?
02:13:078 - 加拍?和前后比略空
02:55:828 (3) - 这里弄成这样?(4给clap)

03:09:028 (1,2) - 索性弄成1/3怎样

Kotone
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fixed some~Thanks moe Rin
hoLysoup
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吃掉karenying+bakabaka
吃掉的話, 我也可以變成神麻婆嗎?

以下都是建議~
00:44:578 (6) - NC?
00:53:428 (4) - 　要不要再圓一點? http://puu.sh/8AZo
00:57:778 (6) - NC? 覺得有點長
01:09:478 (2) - 因為jump在這裡 所以NC?
01:14:878 (1) - 要不要變成slider? 像這樣 http://puu.sh/8B5n
02:09:928 (8) - 這裡再NC
02:10:228 (1) - remove NC
02:10:828 (1) - ^
02:27:628 - 再加一個beat? 有個洞感覺有點.. 奇怪?
03:03:028 (1,2,3) - 我覺得這裡的節奏這樣打比較好 http://puu.sh/8B5F
03:09:028 (1,2) - 這兩個.. 有點奇怪? 好像沒跟甚麼.. (是我而已嗎?)

沒了~ 神圖跟曲子
第2顆星!!
越來越窮
Kotone
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謝謝萌萌holysoup~我的部分基本上都改了~ :>
還有我不是神麻婆:< 不過baka是:>
bakabaka
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fix :)

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eveless
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eveless
title

白い雪のプリンセスは

Shiroi Yuki no Princess wa ... x

Shiroi Yuki no Princess ha... O

or Snow White is...?

嘛反正我以前做的时候使用了Snow White is lol 哭了这个好喜欢的 当初第一张正经作图坑这个的时候还想着以后要remap这个翻唱版本呢 哭了都这么久了TAT

超喜欢实谷奈奈的:3

(虽然本来想说要个gd...
Colin Hou
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00:59:128 (1,2) - 这个(2)貌似丢歪了 XD
02:14:128 (2,4) - ^ 不过是(4)
03:03:028 (1,2) - 节奏这里跟前面有点不照了 考虑(2)移到前面红线然后后面加note?
04:13:078 (3,4) - 略违和 跟鼓点的话是5连而不是3

这里的きみ考虑是不是该间距再大点，毕竟是要盖到三个字头上的 XD

baka找我测试来着 结果两秒死 ;w; 胡乱打点东西好了
NatsumeRin
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NatsumeRin


蛤蛤蛤
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Ｐｒｅｔｔｙ　Ｎｉｃｅ　 Ｃｏｌｌａｂ
bakabaka
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bakabaka
lol
Pokie
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General
  • - BG大小大丈夫? 1000*700


baka&ying
  • - 噢噢AR9好快好快
00:33:928 (4) - 建議 :http://puu.sh/8EdD
01:45:628 (4) - new combo? 會按快
02:22:078 (5) - 好位置, 不移嗎? :http://puu.sh/8Eei
02:24:478 (1) - 不移嗎?! 好靠近前一slider XD


貌似只能挑挑細節的, 做的很好
手速不夠打啊 XD
Kotone
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goodbye wrote:

title

白い雪のプリンセスは

Shiroi Yuki no Princess wa ... x

Shiroi Yuki no Princess ha... O

or Snow White is...?

嘛反正我以前做的时候使用了Snow White is lol 哭了这个好喜欢的 当初第一张正经作图坑这个的时候还想着以后要remap这个翻唱版本呢 哭了都这么久了TAT

超喜欢实谷奈奈的:3

(虽然本来想说要个gd...
嗯title改了:> 謝謝e姐~ 我也超喜歡实谷奈奈~
gd的話~可以的 反正我SB沒做好~要的話就pm我吧 ;)

Colin Hou wrote:

00:59:128 (1,2) - 这个(2)貌似丢歪了 XD fixed
02:14:128 (2,4) - ^ 不过是(4) fixed
03:03:028 (1,2) - 节奏这里跟前面有点不照了 考虑(2)移到前面红线然后后面加note?fixed by another way
04:13:078 (3,4) - 略违和 跟鼓点的话是5连而不是3 唔 這個嘛先保留

这里的きみ考虑是不是该间距再大点，毕竟是要盖到三个字头上的 XD 嗯~日後再改

baka找我测试来着 结果两秒死 ;w; 胡乱打点东西好了
謝謝科林 :D

Pokie wrote:

General
  • - BG大小大丈夫? 1000*700 1024*768以內 & 4:3,大丈夫


baka&ying
  • - 噢噢AR9好快好快
00:33:928 (4) - 建議 :http://puu.sh/8EdD 給baka~
01:45:628 (4) - new combo? 會按快 好
02:22:078 (5) - 好位置, 不移嗎? :http://puu.sh/8Eei 改了
02:24:478 (1) - 不移嗎?! 好靠近前一slider XD 改了


貌似只能挑挑細節的, 做的很好
手速不夠打啊 XD
謝謝Pokie姐 :D

And Thank you RuRu~xD
Anshi_old
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Anshi_old
:) I love Mitani Nana

就做个有点脸疼的建议好了...
[Collab]
  • 02:29:428 (1,1) - 这个我觉得扭得不是很好看...虽然说是要跟着调子...然后试试这样吗
    336,104,141028,6,0,B|328:52|280:20|232:28,1,140,4|8
    03:13:828 (8) - 这里感觉漏拍...啥的 试着缩短两格格子然后在03:14:278加个note吗？
    03:17:428 (3) - ^ 然后在03:17:803 和 03:18:028加个Note吗？采用了的话给03:18:028 (5) - 加个whistle
    03:26:428 (2) - 建议缩短3格
Kotone
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Kotone
nothing change...thanks anyway
wcx19911123
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wcx19911123
from in-game pm

[General]
OD-1
HD+1
stack leniency不知道会不会太小了0.0

[sb]
苹果跟miku直接出来跟消失就好我觉得，没必要渐入渐出的感觉
标题感觉可以在16078加个放大+消失的效果
最后不加个thanks for playing之类的么0.0

[Collab]
00:14:428 (4) - 这个可以试试ctrl+r，flow好点
00:16:978 (2) - 这节奏有点违和，这个移到00:16:828 - ，然后加个slider从00:16:978 - 到00:17:278 - ，感觉好很多
00:19:678 (2) - 加个NC？
00:37:528 (2) - 换成折返slider？00:37:678 - 这地方有个vocal音
00:55:228 (2,3) - 我感觉这里spacing要小点，不然有点难读出是1/4，毕竟SV不高但是DS比较大
01:02:728 (1) - 试试这个节奏，感觉好很多 http://puu.sh/a2GA http://puu.sh/a2Gu
224,124,62278,1,0
280,256,62428,2,0,B|272:212|292:172,1,70
01:07:228 (4) - 试试ctrl+r，flow好点而且多点跳更好玩
01:18:628 (4) - 用点红色锚点拉个拉风的shape出来吧。。这个太软了orz
01:43:828 (1) - 这个对准下一个circle逆时针 rotate 90°试试，感觉这地方弄个跳好点
02:05:278 (3) - 这个往左下移点？感觉跳有点大了
02:12:328 (4) - 跟01:02:728 (1) - 一样的建议
02:47:278 (4) - 我感觉吧这个移动到02:46:378 - x:312 y:280，然后02:46:378 (1,2,3) - 往后挪1/2，打起来顺手点
03:17:428 (3) - 结束在03:17:728 - ，然后03:18:028 (4) - 移动到03:17:878 - 试试？
03:38:803 (5) - 这个删掉好点，我感觉这里三连的话有点违和

神图QAQ
edit：之前忘了射星了orz
bakabaka
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bakabaka
fixed :)

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Roddie
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Roddie
Requested by kanpakyin to mod your map~

And also, hi.

Well, it looks like I couldn't find anything wrong with this map.

Very nice work.

Good luck getting your map approved.
SapphireGhost
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NatsumeRin wrote:

This changes everything.

[Collab]
- I suppose some people might complain that the Stack Leniency is too low and makes the map harder to play on Hidden, but it's your choice as to whether you'd like to raise it or not.
00:43:828 (4) - This wave would probably look better if it was a bit smoother.
02:29:428 (1,2) - These aren't really unrankable, but they don't look very good and are sort of out of place. As in, there aren't any other sliders like this in the rest of the map. So perhaps choose a simpler curve shape.
04:07:228 (3,4) - Possibly adjust this so the end of (4) doesn't touch the body of (3)?

Map is pretty solid, should be an easy bubble after fixes.
Kotone
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All fixed~:> Thank you
EDIT : Change the source to Noboru-P and tag noboru~since some one tell me that's true
SapphireGhost
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Alright then, things are fixed. Sorry for being late. This will be MAT bubble #1 for approval.
Bubbled!
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哇，总算有一个能RANK/APP的白雪公主了，刚打OSU的时候就找过一次这歌啊有木有
bakaying GJ
我只会闲扯╮(╯_╰)╭
Kotone
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gone with wind wrote:

哇，总算有一个能RANK/APP的白雪公主了，刚打OSU的时候就找过一次这歌啊有木有
bakaying GJ
我只会闲扯╮(╯_╰)╭
哎呀 隨公公,最近和水娘娘可好？
Breeze
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Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

General

  1. Shouldn't title be "Shiroi Yuki no Princess wa ..."? "は" read to "wa" :/ According to other ranked maps

Only this
Send me a forum PM when you have reply then
Kotone
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Breeze wrote:

Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

General

  1. Shouldn't title be "Shiroi Yuki no Princess wa ..."? "は" read to "wa" :/ According to other ranked maps

Only this
Send me a forum PM when you have reply then
I asked my Japanese friend,she said wa=X ha = O desu!
btw wa or ha is also ok
So no change~Thank you Breeze
Breeze
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OK, then, bubble#2
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awesome
S h i o n
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wa
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thank you Sorda
and wa tsundere shion
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好圖
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