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DJ Sharpnel - SF-R

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http://peppy.chigau.com/files/DJ%20Sharpnel%20-%20SF-R.osz

Quite frustrating how this took so long to produce,as I'm generally too busy doing other things. However,finally finished it and I figuired I'd share it with you guys.

The first but hopefully not my final completed beatmap - it all depends what you guys think of it. Any and all feedback will be much appreciated as I have no idea whether this is a good or not.

ANYWAY, probably more sharpnel to follow if all goes well.

Comes in Normal and Insane difficulties.

p.s DJ Sharpnel's album's are well known for having questionnable content on the front covers - just a forewarning to any sensitive souls out there as the bg for this is one of those album covers. >_>


EDIT: Altered beatmap = new link
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Starrodkirby86
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DJ Sharpnel is cool, but why do you have the Yonderdome girl on there (I believe she's on the Yonderdome cover)? It's a little risque in my opinion...or too ecchi-ish. But oh well. Doesn't matter, kind of irrevelant to my reviewing. Here's the review.

Normal: I felt a little off somewhere. Perfect spacing, loved it, but the timing did feel funny. I don't know. The sliders were strange, the red one that did a diagonal was all right, but those green ones were very weird for their kind. Other than that, it's pretty great.

Insane: The small circles were the hardest part of the song. Makes it passable without it, of course I'm not saying it's unpassable. The guitar solo part was apparently difficult, which of course is supposed to be because of the fact it's Insane. Usually, I'm a bit lighter when there's more chaos involved, but I still feel funny at some areas.

I looked at this a little and I resnapped the notes to fill with the divider and such so the offset and such would be in harmony. It felt a little better but I did this on Insane and didn't help some notes. I can't verify if I feel anything off, especially because of DJ Sharpnel's difficult remix work and such, so it might be me. Who knows...

Other than that, I love the song, a little repetitive, but I'm not being a music critic right now considering you didn't make the song. Great map, nevertheless, if the timing were to be pretty nice, I would like it more. Whew, that was long. XD
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Thanks for such a long comment! I love feedback :)

Firstly - did a little looking and turns out you're right,it is the same chick from the Yonderdome album cover, but she features on both covers as both albums were released at the same time. I had no idea she was on Yonderdome's cover as I hadn't seen it till you pointed it out.

Anyway, the gory bits.
Looking back at the beatmap I see EXACTLY what you mean about the timings. I had no idea what I was thinking when I was cleaning it up. I had convinced myself it sounded better that way but quite obviously not.

I promptly fixed it (along with another little error mid-section) and have changed the link in the first post accordingly. Thanks for pointing the quite frankly massive error, I feel a little better about the whole thing now.

Still might not be to everyone's taste, and I know the circles are small but it's no fun without a little difficulty and irritation.
hunnykilla
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Good song. try not to use those picutres next time.
Extor
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The only bad thing I see at the beatmap is the tick in the slider at 1:44:60.

About the pic... we should ask peppy about what he thinks. =O

Anyways, I approve. =D
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