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Natsu
General:

This folder's size is 24,5 MB, which is greater than the allowed size of 20.0 MB with video. o.o! im not sure if this a problem

Easy:

00:55:606 (2,4) - stack they perfect
01:13:606 this should finish here 01:17:606 if you are following vocals
01:18:939 add finish
01:26:939 this should finish here 01:28:939

Normal:

01:18:939 add finish
00:45:939 add circle so weird pause
00:52:939 overlap with spinner hitburst move it to other place
01:01:606 (3,1) - stack they perfect
01:13:606 same as easy

Hard:

00:14:939 (1,2) - distance error i dont know if you do this on purpose but i feel weird when i play it

Nice map :3
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Natsu wrote:

General:

This folder's size is 24,5 MB, which is greater than the allowed size of 20.0 MB with video. o.o! im not sure if this a problem

Easy:

00:55:606 (2,4) - stack they perfect
01:13:606 this should finish here 01:17:606 if you are following vocals
01:18:939 add finish
01:26:939 this should finish here 01:28:939

Normal:

01:18:939 add finish
00:45:939 add circle so weird pause
00:52:939 overlap with spinner hitburst move it to other place
01:01:606 (3,1) - stack they perfect
01:13:606 same as easy

Hard:

00:14:939 (1,2) - distance error i dont know if you do this on purpose but i feel weird when i play it

Nice map :3
thanks for mod! fixed the most. and in hard diff it was on purpose u.u
Gabe
Easy
The easy is pretty good as it is. Further work by yourself can be done.

Normal
  1. 00:17:606 (1,3) - These sliders are not aligned, make sure to make them aligned.
  2. 00:33:272 - A clap should be added here to keep the consistency with the previous upbeats sounds, which are claps.
  3. 00:37:606 (2) - Reverse the sounds from the beginning to the end, the clap is supposed to be placed on an upbeat, not a downbeat.
  4. 01:02:939 - I think a finish would sound better here to emphasize the louder sounds in this part of the song.

Pretty nice difficulty.

Hard
  1. 00:11:939 (8,1) - You've placed a slider on an upbeat and finishes on a downbeat, but on 00:12:106 there's a strong noise and you're missing it. I am suggesting you to make something else like, replace the slider (8) by two circles and a slider that will start on 00:12:272 and finishes on 00:12:606, also delete the slider (1) and add circles to 00:12:772 and 00:13:106
  2. 00:24:772 (5) - It would be looking better if this circle was making a curve with the previous/next objects. Right now, it's looking.. straight and since the next object is a curved slider, I think it would fit better. Move this circle to x:232 y:208
  3. 00:25:939 (3,1) - You've added a clap on the circle 1, which you shouldn't since most of your claps were added on upbeats, to keep the consistency, it's preferred if you delete it. Also, It would be sounding better if these circles were replaced by a simple slider.
  4. 00:26:939 (4,6) - Are they supposed to be aligned? If yes, make sure to make them aligned on the same x:axis.
  5. 00:53:772 - Since you have added a clap on 00:56:439, I think you could bbe adding one here too.
  6. 01:04:106 (5) - You should be moving this slider one grid up, to make sure to align it with the end of the previous slider.
  7. 01:09:272 - I think you're missing a clap here to keep the consistency with your previous upbeats sounds.
  8. 01:22:939 (4,5,6,7) - This is sounding and playing awkwardly. I am suggesting you to delete the reverse arrow of the slider 4 and delete these three triplets since they aren't fitting the music and it's the only place where you've added triplets. Also, by doing this, you could be adding a slider that starts on 01:23:272 and finishes on the next white line. For an example, like this
  9. 01:25:106 - You aren't keeping the polarity in here, which makes it sounds weird. Add an object to 01:25:106, for an example, stack a circle with the next circle or delete the circle (3) and replace it with a slider, replace the slider (2) with a slider, you can do anything here.
  10. 01:27:772 (5) - I am suggesting you to add a new combo here to make it fit with the background sounds.


This map is pretty solid, get some more mods and try to look at the whole mapset by yourself, when you really think it's worthy to be bubbled, catch me.
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Gabe wrote:

Easy
The easy is pretty good as it is. Further work by yourself can be done.

Normal
  1. 00:17:606 (1,3) - These sliders are not aligned, make sure to make them aligned.
  2. 00:33:272 - A clap should be added here to keep the consistency with the previous upbeats sounds, which are claps.
  3. 00:37:606 (2) - Reverse the sounds from the beginning to the end, the clap is supposed to be placed on an upbeat, not a downbeat.
  4. 01:02:939 - I think a finish would sound better here to emphasize the louder sounds in this part of the song.

Pretty nice difficulty.

Hard
  1. 00:11:939 (8,1) - You've placed a slider on an upbeat and finishes on a downbeat, but on 00:12:106 there's a strong noise and you're missing it. I am suggesting you to make something else like, replace the slider (8) by two circles and a slider that will start on 00:12:272 and finishes on 00:12:606, also delete the slider (1) and add circles to 00:12:772 and 00:13:106
  2. 00:24:772 (5) - It would be looking better if this circle was making a curve with the previous/next objects. Right now, it's looking.. straight and since the next object is a curved slider, I think it would fit better. Move this circle to x:232 y:208
  3. 00:25:939 (3,1) - You've added a clap on the circle 1, which you shouldn't since most of your claps were added on upbeats, to keep the consistency, it's preferred if you delete it. Also, It would be sounding better if these circles were replaced by a simple slider.
  4. 00:26:939 (4,6) - Are they supposed to be aligned? If yes, make sure to make them aligned on the same x:axis.
  5. 00:53:772 - Since you have added a clap on 00:56:439, I think you could bbe adding one here too.
  6. 01:04:106 (5) - You should be moving this slider one grid up, to make sure to align it with the end of the previous slider.
  7. 01:09:272 - I think you're missing a clap here to keep the consistency with your previous upbeats sounds.
  8. 01:22:939 (4,5,6,7) - This is sounding and playing awkwardly. I am suggesting you to delete the reverse arrow of the slider 4 and delete these three triplets since they aren't fitting the music and it's the only place where you've added triplets. Also, by doing this, you could be adding a slider that starts on 01:23:272 and finishes on the next white line. For an example, like this
  9. 01:25:106 - You aren't keeping the polarity in here, which makes it sounds weird. Add an object to 01:25:106, for an example, stack a circle with the next circle or delete the circle (3) and replace it with a slider, replace the slider (2) with a slider, you can do anything here.
  10. 01:27:772 (5) - I am suggesting you to add a new combo here to make it fit with the background sounds.


This map is pretty solid, get some more mods and try to look at the whole mapset by yourself, when you really think it's worthy to be bubbled, catch me.
thank you very much for mod! I see you also changed your profiule image XD (penguins :3 ) anyway all fixed! I'll get some more mods and then I'll call you back as you sayd! thanks!! :D
japan0413
nice song :)
Topic Starter
luxoDeh
*____* oww! I'm really happy you played my map! :D:D
jyu
Hi ^^ m4m from your mod queue
I hope this will helps

The audio lead-in is unnecessary, imo, since you didn't map the intro
OD +1

00:25:939 (1) - remove nc
00:26:939 (6) - add nc (big white line)
00:30:272 (7) - move up one grid
00:08:272 (4) - move up one grid

this diff is great ^^
00:54:606 (1) - i found this kinda weird, imo. How about this

anyway this diff is also great =w=

this was my second try actually because i forgot to export my first replay fkhjdk

if you bother to download the replay http://puu.sh/2hwZd

Anyway, star!!
Good luck with your ranking~
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

Hi ^^ m4m from your mod queue
I hope this will helps

The audio lead-in is unnecessary, imo, since you didn't map the intro
OD +1

00:25:939 (1) - remove nc
00:26:939 (6) - add nc (big white line)
00:30:272 (7) - move up one grid
00:08:272 (4) - move up one grid

this diff is great ^^
00:54:606 (1) - i found this kinda weird, imo. How about this

anyway this diff is also great =w=

this was my second try actually because i forgot to export my first replay fkhjdk

if you bother to download the replay http://puu.sh/2hwZd

Anyway, star!!
Good luck with your ranking~
thank you very much! :D also for the star and the replay (so happy ^.^) :3 I'll mod your map today but before I have some school stuff to do too DD: (sad story :( )
Entreal
OMG M4M QUEUE FROM YOURS LETS GO, caps :D

Easy
00:08:272 - Put this slider in symmetry in the y-axis
00:21:606 - Move to 324|204, makes it to the middle of those two circles
00:32:772 - Clap here, just like the the way you did in the previous
00:38:106 - ^
Overall, Pretty good.

Normal
00:32:772 - Clap, just like the way you did in the previous
00:46:939 - Move a pixel down, makes it look symmetric to previous note


Hard
00:25:939 - Clap, following the pattern you're doing
00:26:606 - ^

Dang, i don't feel like theres anything more that i need to say. Good map. and Good luck!
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Entreal wrote:

OMG M4M QUEUE FROM YOURS LETS GO, caps :D

Easy
00:08:272 - Put this slider in symmetry in the y-axis
00:21:606 - Move to 324|204, makes it to the middle of those two circles
00:32:772 - Clap here, just like the the way you did in the previous
00:38:106 - ^
Overall, Pretty good.

Normal
00:32:772 - Clap, just like the way you did in the previous
00:46:939 - Move a pixel down, makes it look symmetric to previous note


Hard
00:25:939 - Clap, following the pattern you're doing
00:26:606 - ^

Dang, i don't feel like theres anything more that i need to say. Good map. and Good luck!
thank you for mod! :) all fixed exept for the claps on easy and normal... i don't feel they follow the ritch :/ aniway I'll mod you map now ;)
AsprikaQ
I'm not really good at this but okay I'll try my best! :)

All suggestion! Overall map is well done so sorry if my mod is too less.

[Easy]

HP and AR both -1 (?)

00:08:272 (3) - Switch clap from reverse to tail
00:30:272 (3) - Add Clap (?)
00:30:939 (1) - Add Finish on slider head
00:48:273 (3) - Clap looks awkward here
00:54:606 (1) - Start at 00:54:939 (1) - is better
01:11:606 (3) - 1 Grid to right
01:12:273 (4) - Make 2/1 slider is better http://puu.sh/2npSU

[Normal]

Normal with 4 star is enough. Try CS: 3 HP: 3 AR: 4 OD: 3

00:10:606 (4) - How about make it like this http://puu.sh/2npms
00:45:939 (3) - Maybe move to x:464 y:356
00:47:273 (1) - Switch clap from tail to head
00:50:273 (1) - For normal, imo, start too fast. At least, start from 00:50:439 (1) please.
00:53:272 (2) - Add note (?)
00:54:772 (4) - Add note (?)
00:55:939 (4) - Add note (?)
01:02:939 (1) - Stack here is not really good. I suggest move below (4) with vertical slider.
01:09:939 (4) - Change to this http://puu.sh/2npGw (?)


[Hard]

00:10:106 (3) - Clap slider head (?)
00:10:772 (5) - Clap slider tail (?) and remove Clap from head
00:17:606 (1) - Add Finish slider head (?)
00:27:606 (3) - All clap at reverse (?)
00:33:606 (1) - Add Finish (?)
00:36:272 (1) - Finish on slider head (?)
00:43:439 (6) - Clap (?)
00:43:773 (8) - Clap (?)
00:46:106 (6) - Clap (?)
00:46:439 (8) - Clap (?)
01:10:106 (6) - Better add 1/1 slider here and delete 01:10:273 (6)
01:26:939 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - How about move to the centre so it looks more beautiful.

P.S. I think if you mute slider-slide sound, it might sounds better 8-)
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

AsprikaQ wrote:

I'm not really good at this but okay I'll try my best! :)

All suggestion! Overall map is well done so sorry if my mod is too less.

[Easy]

HP and AR both -1 (?)

00:08:272 (3) - Switch clap from reverse to tail I prefere leave the hitsound as they are, I think they are ok in this way
00:30:272 (3) - Add Clap (?)
00:30:939 (1) - Add Finish on slider head
00:48:273 (3) - Clap looks awkward here
00:54:606 (1) - Start at 00:54:939 (1) - is better this is ok, also other people suggested this
01:11:606 (3) - 1 Grid to right ok
01:12:273 (4) - Make 2/1 slider is better http://puu.sh/2npSU I prefere leave it as it is

[Normal]

Normal with 4 star is enough. Try CS: 3 HP: 3 AR: 4 OD: 3 that's good

00:10:606 (4) - How about make it like this http://puu.sh/2npms not bad, but I'll keep it as it is
00:45:939 (3) - Maybe move to x:464 y:356 that's ok
00:47:273 (1) - Switch clap from tail to head here too, I prefere leave hitsounds as they are, but sometimes there are good suggestions ^.^
00:50:273 (1) - For normal, imo, start too fast. At least, start from 00:50:439 (1) please. ok
00:53:272 (2) - Add note (?) I prefere to don't add more notse, I don't want to make it more difficult
00:54:772 (4) - Add note (?)
00:55:939 (4) - Add note (?)
01:02:939 (1) - Stack here is not really good. I suggest move below (4) with vertical slider. I don't really understand this
01:09:939 (4) - Change to this http://puu.sh/2npGw (?) good suggestion, I'll change it if someone other say it


[Hard]

00:10:106 (3) - Clap slider head (?) for hitsounds the same as normal
00:10:772 (5) - Clap slider tail (?) and remove Clap from head
00:17:606 (1) - Add Finish slider head (?)
00:27:606 (3) - All clap at reverse (?)
00:33:606 (1) - Add Finish (?)
00:36:272 (1) - Finish on slider head (?)
00:43:439 (6) - Clap (?)
00:43:773 (8) - Clap (?)
00:46:106 (6) - Clap (?)
00:46:439 (8) - Clap (?)
01:10:106 (6) - Better add 1/1 slider here and delete 01:10:273 (6)
01:26:939 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - How about move to the centre so it looks more beautiful. ok, let's see if it's ok like this

P.S. I think if you mute slider-slide sound, it might sounds better 8-)hm... I don't really know how to change this XD

thank you for modding! :) I'll mod your map as soon as possible ;)
AsprikaQ

luxoDeh wrote:

P.S. I think if you mute slider-slide sound, it might sounds better 8-)hm... I don't really know how to change this XD
Same with when you add custom hitsound. :D

http://puu.sh/2nQu8 : Add this file to your song's folder (I adjusted the name already so just simply add it)

No KD please.

P.S. if you want to used it in kiai time too, change Inheriting Section to Normal Custom 2 and then make one more of the file i gave you and rename it to normal-sliderslide2
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

AsprikaQ wrote:

luxoDeh wrote:

P.S. I think if you mute slider-slide sound, it might sounds better 8-)hm... I don't really know how to change this XD
Same with when you add custom hitsound. :D

http://puu.sh/2nQu8 : Add this file to your song's folder (I adjusted the name already so just simply add it)

No KD please.

P.S. if you want to used it in kiai time too, change Inheriting Section to Normal Custom 2 and then make one more of the file i gave you and rename it to normal-sliderslide2
Oh! thank you very much! :D I'm still not sure if keeping it or not, maybe I only have to get familiar with the new sound XD I'll see also what other people say u.u Anyway it will be very usefull also for other maps, so, thank you! :)
buhei
hi luxoDeh~ from your modding queue

[Easy]
00:52:939 (1,2,1,2,3) - the rhythm is so strange, add a note at 00:54:606 ?
00:59:772 - add a note
i think kiai part need revising..

[Normal]
00:14:939 (1,2) - don't look good
add a note at 00:39:606 or 00:39:772 plz
00:53:272 - add a note
add a note at 00:54:606 or 00:54:772
the same as Easy

[Hard]
00:15:439 (2) - keep the spacing
00:34:439 (3) - Ctrl+G and let it be farther from (2)
add notes at 00:53:939 , 00:54:272 , 00:56:939 and 00:57:439
kiai part can be harder than other parts so don't be afraid to add notes

good luck~
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

buhei wrote:

hi luxoDeh~ from your modding queue

[Easy]
00:52:939 (1,2,1,2,3) - the rhythm is so strange, add a note at 00:54:606 ? hm... I'll keep it
00:59:772 - add a note that's ok
i think kiai part need revising..

[Normal]
00:14:939 (1,2) - don't look good no, I'll keep it as it is
add a note at 00:39:606 or 00:39:772 plz I changed this
00:53:272 - add a note ok
add a note at 00:54:606 or 00:54:772 I tryed something
the same as Easy

[Hard]
00:15:439 (2) - keep the spacing no, it was ok this way
00:34:439 (3) - Ctrl+G and let it be farther from (2) ok
add notes at 00:53:939 , 00:54:272 , 00:56:939 and 00:57:439 hm... I prefer leave it as it is or the spacing and pattern will be too different :/
kiai part can be harder than other parts so don't be afraid to add notes

good luck~
thank you for mod! I'll mod your map as soon as possible ;)
MillhioreF
testplay as requested in my queue~

[General]
* The whole map seems overly quiet compared to most of the songs in osu!. I'd double the MP3's volume and raise the hitsounds to 80%.
* The spinner graphic doesn't have a clear indicator of where the center is, I'd suggest adding a little marker in the middle.

[Easy]
Major complaints:
* None, good job!

Minor complaints:
* I actually don't have any... very solid Easy diff, nice pattern/time variety and good flow!

Awesomeness:
* 00:30:939 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - This blanketing is really nice

[Normal]
Major complaints:
* None, good job!

Minor complaints:
* 00:09:606 (1,2) - This is the only time in the map notes are completely stacked... nothing wrong per se, but it stood out to me. Perhaps you can design around it.

Awesomeness:
* Really nice blanketing throughout the map. 00:57:273 (1,2,3) and 01:00:273 (1,2,3) really stood out as being awesome.

[Hard]
Major complaints:
* None, good job!

Minor complaints:
* 01:19:939 (3,4,5,6) - These notes felt somewhat out of place when I was playing; the music it's mapped to is very subtle, and the note pattern feels strange on it.

Awesomeness:
* 00:20:272 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This whole combo flows really nicely, it was a blast to play.
* 01:26:939 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this pattern <3


Great map, great mapping! I could definitely see this being ranked with not much change.
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

MillhioreF wrote:

testplay as requested in my queue~

[General]
* The whole map seems overly quiet compared to most of the songs in osu!. I'd double the MP3's volume and raise the hitsounds to 80%. I thought a lot about that. in reality I tryed to find a better mp3 file but I failed every time :( I don't know if there is a way to double the mp3 volume without changing it.
* The spinner graphic doesn't have a clear indicator of where the center is, I'd suggest adding a little marker in the middle. that's right, I always noticed it and always forget it XD now it's time to add this center (the new osu graphic also changed something of this custom spinner and I think in some way made it a bit worse anyway :/)

[Easy]
Major complaints:
* None, good job!

Minor complaints:
* I actually don't have any... very solid Easy diff, nice pattern/time variety and good flow!

Awesomeness:
* 00:30:939 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - This blanketing is really nice

[Normal]
Major complaints:
* None, good job!

Minor complaints:
* 00:09:606 (1,2) - This is the only time in the map notes are completely stacked... nothing wrong per se, but it stood out to me. Perhaps you can design around it. tryed to change this

Awesomeness:
* Really nice blanketing throughout the map. 00:57:273 (1,2,3) and 01:00:273 (1,2,3) really stood out as being awesome.

[Hard]
Major complaints:
* None, good job!

Minor complaints:
* 01:19:939 (3,4,5,6) - These notes felt somewhat out of place when I was playing; the music it's mapped to is very subtle, and the note pattern feels strange on it. I listened to it carefully and the notes fit with the music, I tryed to make something different but I always ended up with something that made me change also part of the following pattern :/ so I kept it as it is

Awesomeness:
* 00:20:272 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This whole combo flows really nicely, it was a blast to play.
* 01:26:939 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this pattern <3


Great map, great mapping! I could definitely see this being ranked with not much change.
thanks a lot for testplaying my map :) good suggestion anyway. the only thing is the mp3 volume, I really don't know how to change it :/ . anyway, I hope to find a mat soon for this map, but it's very difficult :(
Moon Dancer
Ciao!
I'm a member in -Cloudchaser's Modding Queue, so I'll be taking your request.
Let's go!

General
Careful when following the vocals. I'd recommend to emphasize both instrumental and vocal parts. I was very uncomfortable when playing the kiai's in Easy and Normal, since there aren't much notes to hit.

Easy
00:28:272 (1) - Consider moving a grid up to match with 00:26:939 (2) - .
00:38:939 (2) - Hm, I would change the slider to improve flow, doesn't play good since they are on a straight line imo. Something like this.
01:12:273 (4) - Add an arrow to match with vocals? http://puu.sh/2uXGl.

Normal
00:47:773 (2) - Highly suggest ctrl+g here to improve flow.
01:12:273 (3) - Move a grid up to match with 01:10:939 (1) -
01:13:022 (4) - Move a grid left to be on center with 01:10:939 (1,2,3) - .
01:19:439 (2) - Try placing this circle a bit more below, so it will improve flow with previous slider 01:18:939 (1) - http://puu.sh/2uY9X

Hard
00:18:939 (4,5,6) - Try to avoid placing triplets this way. How about something like this?
00:20:272 (1,2,3) - ^
00:22:272 (7,8,9) - ^
00:25:939 (3) - Is there by any change you can lower this slider on the grid in specific? Even though it's not a problem when playing, it still feels quite harsh to play.
01:04:106 (5) - You should replace this slider for exact same copy of 01:03:606 (4) - to improve visuals. http://puu.sh/2uYIz
Nice ending here.

Good luck there!
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Wolf wrote:

Ciao!
I'm a member in -Cloudchaser's Modding Queue, so I'll be taking your request.
Let's go!

General
Careful when following the vocals. I'd recommend to emphasize both instrumental and vocal parts. I was very uncomfortable when playing the kiai's in Easy and Normal, since there aren't much notes to hit.

Easy
00:28:272 (1) - Consider moving a grid up to match with 00:26:939 (2) - . I keep it as it is because then the previous slider is not symmetric, if someone other tell me this I'll change it
00:38:939 (2) - Hm, I would change the slider to improve flow, doesn't play good since they are on a straight line imo. Something like this. good
01:12:273 (4) - Add an arrow to match with vocals? http://puu.sh/2uXGl. that's ok

Normal
00:47:773 (2) - Highly suggest ctrl+g here to improve flow. I prefere keep it as it is
01:12:273 (3) - Move a grid up to match with 01:10:939 (1) - ok
01:13:022 (4) - Move a grid left to be on center with 01:10:939 (1,2,3) - . I changed it
01:19:439 (2) - Try placing this circle a bit more below, so it will improve flow with previous slider 01:18:939 (1) - http://puu.sh/2uY9X that's good

Hard
00:18:939 (4,5,6) - Try to avoid placing triplets this way. How about something like this? in this one is ok
00:20:272 (1,2,3) - ^
00:22:272 (7,8,9) - ^ I tryed to change this but I felt strange with flow, so I kept is as it is
00:25:939 (3) - Is there by any change you can lower this slider on the grid in specific? Even though it's not a problem when playing, it still feels quite harsh to play. maybe but I leave this as it if for now
01:04:106 (5) - You should replace this slider for exact same copy of 01:03:606 (4) - to improve visuals. http://puu.sh/2uYIz
Nice ending here. thank you! I didn't replaced it well some time ago, now i got the problem XD I'm stupid XD

Good luck there!
thank you for good mod! ;)
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