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Yakushimaru Etsuko and the Metro Orchestra - Shounen yo Ware

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Topic Starter
luxoDeh
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on mercoledì 3 luglio 2013 at 01:19:59

Artist: Yakushimaru Etsuko and the Metro Orchestra
Title: Shounen yo Ware ni Kaere (TV Size)
Source: Mawaru Penguindrum
Tags: Opening Genesis Kuma-san
BPM: 180
Filesize: 13488kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2,44 stars, 91 notes)
  2. Hard (4,92 stars, 205 notes)
  3. Normal (3,98 stars, 128 notes)


Download: Yakushimaru Etsuko and the Metro Orchestra - Shounen yo Ware ni Kaere (TV Size)
Download: Yakushimaru Etsuko and the Metro Orchestra - Shounen yo Ware ni Kaere (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first map! In reality i remapped it all XD it was in the graveyard for long time.
and... MY FIST RANKED MAP!! :D
Mawaru Penguindrum opening 2 (I really love the anime! :D
special thanks to:
kurohana for fixing my hitsounds
Gabe for bubble and for having resist to my annoying pm XD XD
Kethsar for the video
and dkun for rank :D
and of caurse to all the people who modded it :3
Difficultyes:
Easy: complete 100%
Normal: complete 100%
Hard: complete 100%
Hope you enjoy it ;)
SuperMoutarde
Hi, mod req from my queue ^^

[General]

Hitsounds are seriously lacking in all difficulties imo. You could use some claps and finish in a lot of spot, do whatever sounds good to you but you need to work on this

[Easy]

HP Drain Rate -1
Approach Rate -1
Overall Difficulty -1 or -2
I would also go for the biggest circle size

[Normal]

01:04:107 (2) - change for the same thing as 01:06:940 (4)


[Hard]

HP Drain Rate +1
Circle Size +1 or +2
Approach rate +2
Overall Diff +1 or +2


Don't have more comments, it is nicely mapped to the music, and your maps graphically look very good, such a good job for a first beatmap it's actually quite impressive oO. You only need to work on the hitsounds as I said ^^ Good luck with this!
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

SuperMoutarde wrote:

Hi, mod req from my queue ^^

[General]

Hitsounds are seriously lacking in all difficulties imo. You could use some claps and finish in a lot of spot, do whatever sounds good to you but you need to work on this

[Easy]

HP Drain Rate -1
Approach Rate -1
Overall Difficulty -1 or -2
I would also go for the biggest circle size

[Normal]

01:04:107 (2) - change for the same thing as 01:06:940 (4)


[Hard]

HP Drain Rate +1
Circle Size +1 or +2
Approach rate +2
Overall Diff +1 or +2


Don't have more comments, it is nicely mapped to the music, and your maps graphically look very good, such a good job for a first beatmap it's actually quite impressive oO. You only need to work on the hitsounds as I said ^^ Good luck with this!
thanks for mod! :) it was my first map but i remapped it all (i think before was quite bad XD) i tried to add hitsounds but it's very difficult whit this song :/ anyway now should be better u.u
JudgeTheDude
Hi, M4M from my queue ^^

[General]
I don't like the hitsounds, but I'm not enough inspired by the music to know how to place them, sorry :?
Your background is very small :/ (600*450) I found a larger version on the net and I could resize it, so it looks better: http://puu.sh/1SU4c
I don't think the .osb has an utility, unless it has a link with the Sound Samples. Delete it (if I'm wrong, keep it, of course)

[Easy]
00:38:607 (1,2) - These notes aren't aligned
00:38:607 (1) - Move this 1 grid left
00:45:607 (4) - 1 grid up (x:60 y:132)
00:46:273 (1) - 1 grid right (x:60 y:316)
01:12:940 (6) - 2 grid left (x:356 y:304)

[Normal]
No probs

[Hard]
No probs

Very impressive, the Hitsound are not perfect, but that's a very good mapping, for a beginner ^^

Good job, and good luck for rank ^^ You've done a very great job :)
Low
Please put a space between the title and "(TV Size)". Also, add "opening" to the tags since this is the opening song for an anime.

No kudosu. :oops:
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Hi, M4M from my queue ^^

[General]
I don't like the hitsounds, but I'm not enough inspired by the music to know how to place them, sorry :?
Your background is very small :/ (600*450) I found a larger version on the net and I could resize it, so it looks better: http://puu.sh/1SU4c
I don't think the .osb has an utility, unless it has a link with the Sound Samples. Delete it (if I'm wrong, keep it, of course)

[Easy]
00:38:607 (1,2) - These notes aren't aligned
00:38:607 (1) - Move this 1 grid left
00:45:607 (4) - 1 grid up (x:60 y:132)
00:46:273 (1) - 1 grid right (x:60 y:316)
01:12:940 (6) - 2 grid left (x:356 y:304)

[Normal]
No probs

[Hard]
No probs

Very impressive, the Hitsound are not perfect, but that's a very good mapping, for a beginner ^^

Good job, and good luck for rank ^^ You've done a very great job :)
thanks for mod! :) I think the hitsounds are strange too... but i found that it was very difficoult to make them on this beatmap... :/

Jacob wrote:

Please put a space between the title and "(TV Size)". Also, add "opening" to the tags since this is the opening song for an anime.

No kudosu.
thanks to you too :)
B2IN
o/ hi~ luxoDeh
from my q

  • [General]
  1. not ' Shounen Yo Ware Ni Kaere ' . plz change the title to ' Shounen yo Ware ni Kaere '.
  2. you must remove video sounds ~
  3. can you find high quality mp3 file ?
  4. i recommend you to start kiai time at 00:52:273 till 01:18:940 .
  5. add ' Genesis ' ' Kuma-san ' in tags .
  6. lead-in 1(1000) or 1.5(1500) will better.
    [Easy]
    :arrow: HP drain -1, AR -1, OD -1 will better.
  7. 00:35:607 (1) - increase the slider till 00:35:940 .
  8. 00:50:607 (1) - end the slider till 00:52:273 will better.
  9. 00:20:273 (3) - new combo here.
  10. 00:44:273 (3) - ^
  11. 00:46:273 (1) - if follow opinion, remove newcombo here. and add newcombo 00:46:940 (2)
    [Normal]
  12. 01:13:607 (1) - end spinner till 01:17:607. because too close with next slider .
  13. 01:22:773 (3) - remove finish on slider end.
    [Hard]
  14. 00:18:106 (2,3) - try this arrangement for a more naturally? like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/588113
  15. 00:27:606 (4) - remove finish on slider end will sounds better.

so cute song and map lol
is this really your first map ? wow nice :3
gl ~
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

B2IN wrote:

o/ hi~ luxoDeh
from my q

  • [General]
  1. not ' Shounen Yo Ware Ni Kaere ' . plz change the title to ' Shounen yo Ware ni Kaere '.
  2. you must remove video sounds ~
  3. can you find high quality mp3 file ?
  4. i recommend you to start kiai time at 00:52:273 till 01:18:940 .
  5. add ' Genesis ' ' Kuma-san ' in tags .
  6. lead-in 1(1000) or 1.5(1500) will better.
    [Easy]
    :arrow: HP drain -1, AR -1, OD -1 will better.
  7. 00:35:607 (1) - increase the slider till 00:35:940 .
  8. 00:50:607 (1) - end the slider till 00:52:273 will better.
  9. 00:20:273 (3) - new combo here.
  10. 00:44:273 (3) - ^
  11. 00:46:273 (1) - if follow opinion, remove newcombo here. and add newcombo 00:46:940 (2)
    [Normal]
  12. 01:13:607 (1) - end spinner till 01:17:607. because too close with next slider .
  13. 01:22:773 (3) - remove finish on slider end.
    [Hard]
  14. 00:18:106 (2,3) - try this arrangement for a more naturally? like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/588113
  15. 00:27:606 (4) - remove finish on slider end will sounds better.

so cute song and map lol
is this really your first map ? wow nice :3
gl ~
thanks for mod! and yes it's my first map, but i remapped it all recently u.u anyway, all fixed exept for: the mp3... i think it's ok as it is and i don't know if i can find a better file :/ and... i don't really know what you mean whit lead-in XD thanks! :D
Cancel
Hi. From my Modding Queue!

General

00:06:939 - Add bookmark there. It is easier for modders to get to.
TV Size is not allowed in the song title >t/89198< I suggest you to remove it from ttitle, and put it in the beatmap description instead.
Change volume to 70%.
Remove second BPM Point

Easy

00:32:273 (2) -

00:35:603 (1) - This slider is not perfectly on beat.

00:42:603 (2) - That looks better.

00:33:603 (2) - Maybe like that?

00:35:603 (1) - Like that.

Normal

00:52:273 (1,2) - Too fast after spinner!

Hard

Looks good.

Good luck!
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Cancel wrote:

Hi. From my Modding Queue!

General

00:06:939 - Add bookmark there. It is easier for modders to get to.
TV Size is not allowed in the song title >t/89198< I suggest you to remove it from ttitle, and put it in the beatmap description instead.
Change volume to 70%.
Remove second BPM Point

Easy

00:32:273 (2) -

00:35:603 (1) - This slider is not perfectly on beat.

00:42:603 (2) - That looks better.

00:33:603 (2) - Maybe like that?

00:35:603 (1) - Like that.

Normal

00:52:273 (1,2) - Too fast after spinner!

Hard

Looks good.

Good luck!
thanks for mod! :) all fixed, but i don't understand why lots of "TV size" ranked maps keep it in the title... i understand it's not allowed but i'm not really convinced to remove it :/
B2IN

luxoDeh wrote:

i don't really know what you mean whit lead-in XD thanks! :D
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

B2IN wrote:

luxoDeh wrote:

i don't really know what you mean whit lead-in XD thanks! :D
oh, thanks! now i found it! XDDD
Rotte
From queue

[General]

Timing is have some problems,plz find MAT/BAT to test it?
Plz close countdown and letterbox

skin
spinner-circle is not in circle point

[Easy]

00:12:439 - Why the place is blank?
00:23:106 - The same as 00:12:439

00:32:939 (1,2,3) - nove to 00:32:606 -
00:35:939 - add a circle
01:08:273 (1,2) - 1/2 slider is well
01:27:940 (2) - you can use 5/16 slider

[Normal]

HP-1 OD-1

00:12:439 - Why the place is blank?
00:23:106 - The same as 00:12:439

00:10:939 (1) - this slider's ending....
00:29:939 - add a circle
00:34:106 - add a circle
00:59:939 - add a circle

[Hard]

00:40:440 (5,1,2,3) - Rhythm is weird

00:45:607 (5,1) - Rhythm is weird

01:10:940 (1,2) - Rhythm is weird

01:12:273 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) -



I guess you are taiko player?I recommend you better mod some good mapsets and compared.
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Rotte wrote:

From queue

[General]

Timing is have some problems,plz find MAT/BAT to test it?
Plz close countdown and letterbox

skin
spinner-circle is not in circle point

[Easy]

00:12:439 - Why the place is blank?
00:23:106 - The same as 00:12:439

00:32:939 (1,2,3) - nove to 00:32:606 -
00:35:939 - add a circle
01:08:273 (1,2) - 1/2 slider is well
01:27:940 (2) - you can use 5/16 slider

[Normal]

HP-1 OD-1

00:12:439 - Why the place is blank?
00:23:106 - The same as 00:12:439

00:10:939 (1) - this slider's ending....
00:29:939 - add a circle
00:34:106 - add a circle
00:59:939 - add a circle

[Hard]

00:40:440 (5,1,2,3) - Rhythm is weird

00:45:607 (5,1) - Rhythm is weird

01:10:940 (1,2) - Rhythm is weird

01:12:273 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) -



I guess you are taiko player?I recommend you better mod some good mapsets and compared.
thanks for mod! all fixed... for the timing... i'll se if i can find someone to check it u.u and for the spinner skin a friend of mine is working on it, so i hope it'll be better soon ;)
BounceBabe
Hi, from the Queue!

Easy

00:23:939 (5,1) - Reverse this combo, should be on (5) and (1) is still part of the previous pattern
00:57:607 (5) - NC here for new vocal and pattern
01:10:940 (3) - ^

Normal

00:09:606 (5) - NC for new vocal and pattern
00:10:939 (1) - Remove NC, pattern still counts as previous part of 00:09:606 (5) -
00:12:273 (3) - NC again for consistance
00:54:940 (4,5,6) - Different spacing, fix this by using another grid level

Hard

00:15:439 (2,4) - These are not well stacked, fix this
00:19:606 (7,1) - To follow your own combo pattern remove NC here 00:22:273 (1) -

00:41:106 (1,2) - Reverse combo, the 1 is still part of the previous pattern and the 2 is where a new vocal starts
00:46:106 (1) - Remove NC to follow your own combo again
00:48:940 (8,9) - This jump isnt readable, move it so its obviously to see
01:08:273 (8,1) - Reverse this NC, the new vocal starts at 8
01:25:107 (3) - This slider doesnt fit soundwise, i suggest just deleting it and adding a circle at 01:25:273 -

GL
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi, from the Queue!

Easy

00:23:939 (5,1) - Reverse this combo, should be on (5) and (1) is still part of the previous pattern
00:57:607 (5) - NC here for new vocal and pattern
01:10:940 (3) - ^

Normal

00:09:606 (5) - NC for new vocal and pattern
00:10:939 (1) - Remove NC, pattern still counts as previous part of 00:09:606 (5) -
00:12:273 (3) - NC again for consistance
00:54:940 (4,5,6) - Different spacing, fix this by using another grid level

Hard

00:15:439 (2,4) - These are not well stacked, fix this
00:19:606 (7,1) - To follow your own combo pattern remove NC here 00:22:273 (1) -

00:41:106 (1,2) - Reverse combo, the 1 is still part of the previous pattern and the 2 is where a new vocal starts
00:46:106 (1) - Remove NC to follow your own combo again
00:48:940 (8,9) - This jump isnt readable, move it so its obviously to see
01:08:273 (8,1) - Reverse this NC, the new vocal starts at 8
01:25:107 (3) - This slider doesnt fit soundwise, i suggest just deleting it and adding a circle at 01:25:273 -

GL
thanks for mod! all fixed! have I to wait for a recheck?
kurohana


General

  1. Inconsistency in tags: There is 1 space too much in Hard after 'Genesis'. Fix this.
  2. Spinner circle has to be 666x666
  3. There is a SB-file but no file in the folder. If it's right this way, fill in the missing file, otherwise delete the .osb-file in the folder
  4. Offset is 273, you only have to set it to the beginning to the song. And you don't have to use 3/4 on the timeline, this isn't a Waltz-song ;)

Easy

  1. 00:06:939 - 00:12:273 - You use spacing 0,9x, afterwards you always use 1,0x. I suggest you to change the first part to 1,0x, because the music doesn't change at 00:12:273.
  2. 00:18:939 (3) - Move this note 2 grids down and 1 grid left to make a straight line between (2) and (3)
  3. 00:22:939 (4) - NC
  4. 00:23:939 (1) - Remove NC
  5. 00:25:939 (4) - NC
  6. 00:30:940 (1) - Make this blanket perfect by copy+paste 00:32:940 (2) and flip it horizontally.
  7. 00:32:606 (1) - Remove NC
  8. 00:32:940 (2) - This slider doesn't fit in here, please change ><
  9. 00:34:606 - Set note
  10. 00:34:939 - Set note
  11. 00:37:607 (4) - Remove finish, it doesn't fit with the music
  12. 00:39:940 (3) - Move 2 grids down and 1 frid left to make a straight line between the begiinings of slider (3) and (4)
  13. 00:48:607 (3) - Move this note on the timeline on the red tick and longer it up to 00:48:939, that fits the music very well :3
  14. 00:49:272 - Set note
  15. 00:49:607 (4) - Finish at the beginning and the end of the slider sounds good, try it
  16. 00:50:607 (1) - Set finish
  17. 00:54:606 - Set note
  18. 00:54:940 (1) - Set clap
  19. 00:55:607 (2) - Set clap
  20. 00:57:607 (1) - Clap at the beginning of the slider
  21. 00:58:940 (3) - Clap at the beginning and at the ending, remove finish
  22. 00:39:940 (3) - Move 1 grid down to make a straight line between (2) and (3)
  23. 01:02:940 (1) - Set clap
  24. 01:03:607 (2) - Set clap
  25. 01:04:940 (4) - Remove finish and move 1 grid down to make a straight line between the end of slider (3) and circle (4)
  26. 01:05:607 (1) - Move 1 grid down to make the straight above complete
  27. 01:06:273 (2) - Move 1 grid left to make a straight line
  28. 01:06:773 (3) - Move 1 grid down for the straight above
  29. 01:07:607 (4) - 2 grids down for above
  30. 01:08:272 - Try to use this rhythm
  31. 01:12:606 - Set note
  32. 01:13:272 - Set note
  33. 01:20:606 - Set note
  34. 01:23:272 - Set note
  35. 01:25:272 - Set note
  36. 01:26:940 (1,2) - They don't fit in very well... You could set a spinner from 01:26:939 to 01:28:772

Normal

  1. 00:10:273 (3) - Remove finish, the music doesn't allow this ><
  2. 00:10:606 - Maybe set a note here
  3. 00:18:606 (2) - Move 1 grid down to fix spacing, 00:19:939 (1) too, to stack them correctly
  4. 00:32:773 - Consider setting a note here, it sounds really empty.
  5. 00:37:607 (8) - Remove finish
  6. 00:40:606 - Set note
  7. 00:43:439 - Set note
  8. 00:45:939 - Set note
  9. 00:50:107 (3) - Remove finish and set whistle
  10. 00:50:440 (1) - This spinner should end at 00:52:273 to fit the music
  11. 00:53:440 (3) - Remove finish at the end
  12. 01:04:273 (2) - Change rhythm to , fit's better to the music, use at 01:06:940 (5) too
  13. 01:08:273 (7) - NC
  14. 01:08:773 - Set note
  15. 01:09:940 (1) - Remove NC
  16. 01:19:606 (2) - Set this note to 01:19:439 or remove finish to make this fit to the music
  17. 01:19:939 - Set note
  18. 01:26:940 (1,2,3) - Same as Easy, spinner from 01:26:939 to 01:28:772 fits better

Hard

  1. 00:10:606 (4) - Try this
  2. 00:11:939 (1) - Remove NC
  3. 00:12:606 (2) - NC
  4. 00:16:606 (4) - Stack correctly with (2)
  5. 00:25:606 (6) - NC
  6. 00:26:439 (1) - Remove NC
  7. 00:27:606 (4) - 2 grids left and 1 grid up to get (2) and (4) in a straight line
  8. 00:30:273 (1) - Remove NC
  9. 00:30:940 (2) - NC
  10. 00:32:607 (1) - Remove NC
  11. 00:33:607 (5) - NC
  12. 00:35:273 (1) - Remove NC
  13. 00:36:273 (5) - NC
  14. 00:37:940 (1) - Remove NC
  15. 00:43:273 (1) - Remove NC
  16. 00:49:773 (9) - NC
  17. 00:50:440 (1) - Remove NC
  18. 00:57:607 (5) - NC
  19. 00:58:440 (1) - Remove NC
  20. 01:09:440 (1) - Remove NC
  21. 01:11:773 (3) - Remove this note and set one at 01:11:939
  22. 01:12:273 (1) - Remove NC
  23. 01:26:440 (3) - This slider is out of the playfield, please move it

Please PM me for re-check, then I suggest some hitsound-placings ^-^
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

kurohana wrote:



General

  1. Inconsistency in tags: There is 1 space too much in Hard after 'Genesis'. Fix this.
  2. Spinner circle has to be 666x666
  3. There is a SB-file but no file in the folder. If it's right this way, fill in the missing file, otherwise delete the .osb-file in the folder
  4. Offset is 273, you only have to set it to the beginning to the song. And you don't have to use 3/4 on the timeline, this isn't a Waltz-song ;)

Easy

  1. 00:06:939 - 00:12:273 - You use spacing 0,9x, afterwards you always use 1,0x. I suggest you to change the first part to 1,0x, because the music doesn't change at 00:12:273.
  2. 00:18:939 (3) - Move this note 2 grids down and 1 grid left to make a straight line between (2) and (3)
  3. 00:22:939 (4) - NC
  4. 00:23:939 (1) - Remove NC
  5. 00:25:939 (4) - NC
  6. 00:30:940 (1) - Make this blanket perfect by copy+paste 00:32:940 (2) and flip it horizontally.
  7. 00:32:606 (1) - Remove NC
  8. 00:32:940 (2) - This slider doesn't fit in here, please change ><
  9. 00:34:606 - Set note
  10. 00:34:939 - Set note
  11. 00:37:607 (4) - Remove finish, it doesn't fit with the music
  12. 00:39:940 (3) - Move 2 grids down and 1 frid left to make a straight line between the begiinings of slider (3) and (4)
  13. 00:48:607 (3) - Move this note on the timeline on the red tick and longer it up to 00:48:939, that fits the music very well :3
  14. 00:49:272 - Set note
  15. 00:49:607 (4) - Finish at the beginning and the end of the slider sounds good, try it
  16. 00:50:607 (1) - Set finish
  17. 00:54:606 - Set note
  18. 00:54:940 (1) - Set clap
  19. 00:55:607 (2) - Set clap
  20. 00:57:607 (1) - Clap at the beginning of the slider
  21. 00:58:940 (3) - Clap at the beginning and at the ending, remove finish
  22. 00:39:940 (3) - Move 1 grid down to make a straight line between (2) and (3)
  23. 01:02:940 (1) - Set clap
  24. 01:03:607 (2) - Set clap
  25. 01:04:940 (4) - Remove finish and move 1 grid down to make a straight line between the end of slider (3) and circle (4)
  26. 01:05:607 (1) - Move 1 grid down to make the straight above complete
  27. 01:06:273 (2) - Move 1 grid left to make a straight line
  28. 01:06:773 (3) - Move 1 grid down for the straight above
  29. 01:07:607 (4) - 2 grids down for above
  30. 01:08:272 - Try to use this rhythm
  31. 01:12:606 - Set note
  32. 01:13:272 - Set note
  33. 01:20:606 - Set note
  34. 01:23:272 - Set note
  35. 01:25:272 - Set note
  36. 01:26:940 (1,2) - They don't fit in very well... You could set a spinner from 01:26:939 to 01:28:772

Normal

  1. 00:10:273 (3) - Remove finish, the music doesn't allow this ><
  2. 00:10:606 - Maybe set a note here
  3. 00:18:606 (2) - Move 1 grid down to fix spacing, 00:19:939 (1) too, to stack them correctly
  4. 00:32:773 - Consider setting a note here, it sounds really empty.
  5. 00:37:607 (8) - Remove finish
  6. 00:40:606 - Set note
  7. 00:43:439 - Set note
  8. 00:45:939 - Set note
  9. 00:50:107 (3) - Remove finish and set whistle
  10. 00:50:440 (1) - This spinner should end at 00:52:273 to fit the music
  11. 00:53:440 (3) - Remove finish at the end
  12. 01:04:273 (2) - Change rhythm to , fit's better to the music, use at 01:06:940 (5) too
  13. 01:08:273 (7) - NC
  14. 01:08:773 - Set note
  15. 01:09:940 (1) - Remove NC
  16. 01:19:606 (2) - Set this note to 01:19:439 or remove finish to make this fit to the music
  17. 01:19:939 - Set note
  18. 01:26:940 (1,2,3) - Same as Easy, spinner from 01:26:939 to 01:28:772 fits better

Hard

  1. 00:10:606 (4) - Try this
  2. 00:11:939 (1) - Remove NC
  3. 00:12:606 (2) - NC
  4. 00:16:606 (4) - Stack correctly with (2)
  5. 00:25:606 (6) - NC
  6. 00:26:439 (1) - Remove NC
  7. 00:27:606 (4) - 2 grids left and 1 grid up to get (2) and (4) in a straight line
  8. 00:30:273 (1) - Remove NC
  9. 00:30:940 (2) - NC
  10. 00:32:607 (1) - Remove NC
  11. 00:33:607 (5) - NC
  12. 00:35:273 (1) - Remove NC
  13. 00:36:273 (5) - NC
  14. 00:37:940 (1) - Remove NC
  15. 00:43:273 (1) - Remove NC
  16. 00:49:773 (9) - NC
  17. 00:50:440 (1) - Remove NC
  18. 00:57:607 (5) - NC
  19. 00:58:440 (1) - Remove NC
  20. 01:09:440 (1) - Remove NC
  21. 01:11:773 (3) - Remove this note and set one at 01:11:939
  22. 01:12:273 (1) - Remove NC
  23. 01:26:440 (3) - This slider is out of the playfield, please move it

Please PM me for re-check, then I suggest some hitsound-placings ^-^
thanks a lot for mod! very usefull! :) quite all fixed. for the spinner graphic a friend of mine will fix it, i'm not very good on skinning, but i hope it'll be fine soon ;) anyway thanks!
kurohana

Re-check~

General

  1. Still an missing SB-file :'(
  2. Artist: Yakushimaru Etsuko ( said in wiki)

Easy

  1. 00:28:274 (1) - Unsnapped circle Fix this, it's unrankable ><
  2. 00:17:273 (1) - Remove NC
  3. 00:17:606 (2) - NC
  4. 00:20:939 (2) - Move 1 grid right to make a straight line
  5. 00:30:939 (4) - NC
  6. 00:32:939 (6) - Set on 00:32:772
  7. 00:33:272 - Add note (if you do so, set clap ><)
  8. 00:36:272 (4) - NC
  9. 00:45:607 (2) - Make a straight line, move the note 9 grids down and 2 left (remember fix spacing ><)
  10. 01:02:273 (2) - You could set a slider at 01:01:939 - 01:02:606
  11. 01:09:606 (1) - Remove NC
  12. 01:10:606 - Set note
  13. 01:13:607 (1) - Spinner ending at 01:17:439 would sound better, what do you think?
    1. 00:06:939 (1) - Finish
    2. 00:12:273 (1) - Clap at the end of the slider
    3. 00:13:273 (2) - Clap at the beginning of the slider
    4. 00:13:939 (3) - Clap
    5. 00:14:606 (4) - Clap
    6. 00:15:939 (2) - Clap
    7. 00:22:939 (1) - Clap at the end of the slider
    8. 00:24:606 (3) - Clap
    9. 00:25:939 (1) - Clap
    10. 00:26:939 (3) - Clap at the end of the slider
    11. 00:28:274 (1) - Clap at the end of the slider
    12. 00:30:273 (3) - Remove finish
    13. 00:30:939 (4) - Set clap on the end
    14. 00:33:606 (1) - Set clap on the end
    15. 00:35:606 (3) - Clap at the end of the slider
    16. 00:36:272 (4) - Set clap on the end
    17. 00:38:607 (1) - Clap
    18. 00:40:940 (4) - Clap at the ending of the slider
    19. 00:42:607 (2) - Clap on beginning, middle and ending of this slider
    20. 00:44:273 (1) - Set clap on the end
    21. 00:49:272 (4) - Finish
    22. 00:53:439 (2) - Maybe whistle at the beginning
    23. 00:54:939 (1) - Remove clap
    24. 00:55:607 (2) - Remove clap
    25. 00:56:107 (3) - Maybe whistle at the beginning
    26. 00:57:273 (4) - Clap
    27. 00:57:607 (1) - Remove clap at the beginning, maybe set a whistle?
    28. 00:58:940 (3) - Same like above ^^
    29. 01:00:273 (1) - Remove clap in the middle
    30. 01:02:940 (1) - Remove clap
    31. 01:03:607 (2) - Remove clap
    32. 01:04:107 (3) - Remove clap at the beginning, set clap at the ending of the slider and maybe whistle at the beginning
    33. 01:06:773 (3) - Remove clap on the beginning
    34. 01:08:272 (1) - Set clap at the end of the slider and maybe a whistle on the beginning
    35. 01:09:606 (1) - Same like above ^^
    36. 01:10:606 (2) - Clap
    37. 01:12:606 (4) - Clap
    38. 01:13:272 (5) - Clap
    39. 01:18:940 (1) - Whistle at the ending too
    40. 01:19:940 (2) - Remove clap on the end
    41. 01:20:606 (3) - Clap
    42. 01:21:607 (1) - Whistle at the end too
    43. 01:22:607 (2) - Remove clap at the end
    44. 01:23:272 (3) - Clap
    45. 01:24:273 (1) - Whistle at the end too
    46. 01:25:272 (2) - Clap
    47. 01:25:607 (3) - Whistle at the end too
    48. 01:26:939 (1) - Soft-Whistle at the end fits good, try it ^^

Normal

  1. 00:28:274 (1) - Unsnapped circle
  2. 00:14:606 (1) - Remove NC
  3. 00:14:939 (2) - NC
  4. 00:16:273 (1) - Remove NC
  5. 00:19:939 (1) - Remove NC
  6. 00:20:273 (2) - NC
  7. 00:30:940 (5) - NC
  8. 00:33:273 (1) - Remove NC
  9. 00:33:607 (2) - NC
  10. 00:36:273 (7) - NC
  11. 00:38:106 - Set note
  12. 00:40:940 (1) - Remove NC
  13. 00:41:607 (2) - NC
  14. 00:43:940 (1) - Remove NC
  15. 00:44:273 (2) - NC
  16. 00:48:940 (1) - Remove NC
  17. 01:04:106 (3) - Sorry, I think I was wrong yesterday v.v" Set rhythm to , I don't know why I suggested an off-slider yesterday >.< So sorry .______. Change at 01:06:773 (7) too ><
  18. 01:05:607 (5) - NC
  19. 01:13:607 (1) - Same as Easy, try end at 01:17:439
  20. 01:26:940 (1,2,3) - You could change them this way Fits better :3
    1. 00:07:273 (2) - Remove clap at the end and set clap on the beginning
    2. 00:08:606 (4) - Same as above
    3. 00:10:606 (4) - Clap
    4. 00:10:939 (5) - Clap at the ending of the sliderr
    5. 00:12:606 (2) - Clap at the beginning of the slider
    6. 00:13:273 (3) - Clap at the beginning of the slider
    7. 00:13:939 (4) - Clap at the beginning of the slider
    8. 00:14:606 (1) - Clap
    9. 00:16:606 (2) - Clap at the beginning
    10. 00:17:106 (3) - Clap at the ending
    11. 00:22:606 (5) - Clap at the beginning
    12. 00:23:106 (1) - Clap in the middle of the slider
    13. 00:23:773 (2) - Clap at the ending
    14. 00:24:606 (4) - Clap
    15. 00:24:772 (5) - Remove clap at the beginning
    16. 00:25:939 (2) - Clap
    17. 00:26:439 (3) - Clap at the ending
    18. 00:26:939 (4) - Clap on the second reverse and the ending
    19. 00:28:274 (1) - Clap at the ending of the slider
    20. 00:29:939 (3) - Clap
    21. 00:30:940 (5) - Clap in the middle
    22. 00:32:273 (6) - Remove finish
    23. 00:33:273 (1) - Clap
    24. 00:33:607 (2) - Clap at the end of the slider
    25. 00:35:606 (6) - Same as above
    26. 00:36:273 (7) - Clap at the end of the slider
    27. 00:38:607 (1) - Clap at the beginning and remove the finish at the end
    28. 00:39:940 (3) - Clap at the beginning
    29. 00:40:606 (4) - Clap
    30. 00:43:940 (1) - Clap
    31. 00:45:273 (3) - Clap at the beginning
    32. 00:46:607 (5) - Clap
    33. 00:46:940 (6) - Remove finish
    34. 00:47:773 (2) - Remove clap at the beginning
    35. 00:48:272 (3) - Remove clap in the middle and set clap on the end
    36. 00:48:940 (1) - Clap at the end
    37. 00:49:607 (2) - Remove whistle on both and set finish at the beginning
    38. 00:50:106 (3) - Finish
    39. 00:50:272 (1) - Finish
    40. 00:52:940 (1) - Remove Clap
    41. 00:53:440 (2) - Whistle at the beginning
    42. 00:55:273 (4) - Clap
    43. 00:55:607 (5) - Remove finish
    44. 00:56:107 (6) - Remove finish at the end and set whistle to the beginning
    45. 00:57:607 (2) -
    46. 00:58:940 (3) - Remove finish and set whistle
    47. 00:59:440 (4) - Whistle at the beginning
    48. 00:59:939 (5) - Clap
    49. 01:02:607 (4) - Remove finish and set clap
    50. 01:02:939 (1) - Remove clap at the beginning and set clap in the middle
    51. 01:03:939 (2) - Clap
    52. 01:05:607 (4) - Remove clap at the beginning
    53. 01:06:606 (5) - Clap
    54. 01:07:940 (7) - Clap
    55. 01:08:273 (1) - Remove finish and set whistle
    56. 01:08:772 (2) - Whistle
    57. 01:09:107 (3) - Remove finish at the end and set whistle at the end
    58. 01:10:940 (1) - Remove clap at the beginning
    59. 01:11:940 (2) - Clap
    60. 01:12:272 (3) - Remove clap at the beginning
    61. 01:13:273 (4) - Clap
    62. 01:19:439 (2) - Whistle
    63. 01:19:939 (3) - Clap
    64. 01:20:273 (4) - Remove clap at the beginning and set clap at the end
    65. 01:20:940 (5) - Remove finish
    66. 01:21:607 (1) - Set whistle at the end
    67. 01:24:273 (1) - Set whistle at the end
    68. 01:25:607 (3) - Set whistle at the end

Hard

  1. 00:28:274 (1) - Unsnapped circle
  2. 00:28:774 (3) - Unsnapped circle
  3. 00:29:774 (6) - Unsnapped circle
  4. Try HP-Drainrate -1, in my opinion this fits better
  5. 00:10:106 (3) - Some little beauty-tipp xD Copy+paste 00:09:773 (2) and flip horizontally and reverse selection and arrange like this
  6. 00:30:273 (1) - Remove NC
  7. 00:33:940 (2) - Move 2 grids right to make a straight line and fix spacing afterwards
  8. 00:36:773 (2) - Fix this spacing to reduce this overlap
  9. 00:37:772 - Set note to highlight the music in the background
  10. 00:38:772 - Same as above
  11. 00:46:607 (9) - Again a beauty-tipp: Form a nice bow of (5), (6), (7), (8) and (9), move (9) a bit up
  12. 00:51:773 (5) - Move this note to remove the overlap with (4) (maybe rotate by 60°)
  13. 00:53:273 (2,3) - This is a bad placing, because (2) overlaps with (1). Maybe place like
    Timeline
  14. 00:59:107 (5,6,7) - Make a smoother curve, like
  15. 01:02:107 (8) - This slider sounds weird, you could use a rhythm like
  16. 01:05:939 (2) - Try to form this slider more curvy like
  17. 01:26:940 (1,2,3,4,5) - You could arrange it like
    1. 00:06:939 (1) - Clap at the end
    2. 00:07:939 (3) - Clap at the beginning
    3. 00:09:273 (6) - Clap
    4. 00:09:773 (2) - Clap at the end
    5. 00:10:606 (4) - Clap
    6. 00:11:273 (6) - Clap
    7. 00:11:939 (8) - Clap at the beginning and remove finish at the end
    8. 00:13:939 (3) - Clap at the beginning
    9. 00:14:606 (4) - Clap
    10. 00:14:939 (1) - Clap at the end
    11. 00:16:273 (3) - Remove whistle
    12. 00:18:606 (3) - Clap
    13. 00:23:106 (2) - Remove whistle and set clap in the middle
    14. 00:23:772 (3) - Remove whistle and set clap at the end
    15. 00:24:273 (4) - Clap at the end
    16. 00:24:939 (5) - Clap at the end
    17. 00:26:439 (4) - Clap at the end
    18. 00:28:274 (1) - Remove finish
    19. 00:29:940 (7) - Clap
    20. 00:31:439 (2) - Remove clap at the end
    21. 00:32:273 (4) - Remove finish
    22. 00:33:106 (8) - Clap at the end
    23. 00:33:607 (1) - Remove finish
    24. 00:35:273 (5) - Clap
    25. 00:35:607 (7) - Remove clap
    26. 00:36:273 (1) - Remove clap at the beginning and set clap at the end
    27. 00:36:773 (2) - Remove clap at the beginning
    28. 00:37:273 (3) - Remove finish and set clap
    29. 00:38:940 (1) - Remove clap at the beginning and set clap at the end
    30. 00:39:440 (2) - Remove clap at the beginning
    31. 00:39:940 (3) - Clap
    32. 00:40:273 (4) - Remove Clap
    33. 00:40:606 (5) - Set clap on the beginning
    34. 00:41:106 (6) - Set clap at the ending
    35. 00:41:606 (1) - Remove clap at the beginning and set clap on the ending
    36. 00:42:107 (2) - Remove clap at the ending
    37. 00:42:940 (4) - Remove finish
    38. 00:43:272 (5) - Clap
    39. 00:45:107 (4) - Clap at the ending
    40. 00:45:606 (5) - Remove clap at the beginning and set clap on the ending
    41. 00:46:607 (9) - Clap
    42. 00:47:273 (2) - Remove clap on the end and set clap on the beginning
    43. 00:48:607 (6) - Clap
    44. 00:48:940 (8) - Set clap in the middle and finish at the end
    45. 00:49:773 (1) - Remove finish at the beginning
    46. 00:51:440 (4) - Remove whistle
    47. 00:52:273 (1) - Set finish on the beginning
    48. 00:53:440 (3) - Set whistle at the beginning
    49. 00:54:440 (4) - Clap on the end
    50. 00:55:940 (2) - Clap
    51. 00:56:107 (3) - Whistle on the beginning
    52. 00:57:607 (1) - Whistle
    53. 00:58:440 (3) - Remove finish
    54. 00:58:607 (4) - Clap at the beginning and whistle at the end
    55. 00:59:440 (7) - Remove whistle and set clap
    56. 00:59:773 (8) - Remove finish at the end and set clap on the end
    57. 01:00:607 (3) - Clap
    58. 01:01:273 (6) - Clap
    59. 01:01:607 (7) - Remove finish at the beginning and set clap on the end
    60. 01:02:440 (9) - Remove finish at the end and set clap on the end
    61. 01:03:273 (3) - Clap
    62. 01:03:607 (4) - Remove clap on the beginning and set clap at the ending
    63. 01:04:107 (5) - Remove clap on the beginning and set whistle
    64. 01:04:606 (6) - Clap
    65. 01:04:940 (7) - Remove finish
    66. 01:05:106 (8) - Remove finish at the end and set clap at the end
    67. 01:05:939 (2) - Set clap at the beginning
    68. 01:06:607 (3) - Clap
    69. 01:06:773 (4) - Whistle
    70. 01:07:273 (6) - Clap
    71. 01:08:772 (2) - Set whistle at the beginning and remove clap at the ending
    72. 01:08:773 (2) - Remove finish at the end and clap at the end and set clap at the beginning
    73. 01:09:607 (4) - Set whistle at the beginning
    74. 01:10:939 (1) - Set clap at the end
    75. 01:11:439 (2) - Remove clap at the beginning
    76. 01:11:939 (3) - Clap
    77. 01:12:272 (4) - Remove clap at the beginning
    78. 01:12:606 (5) - Clap
    79. 01:12:939 (7) - Remove clap at the beginning
    80. 01:13:273 (8) - Clap
    81. 01:19:940 (3) - Clap at the beginning and remove clap at the end
    82. 01:20:607 (5) - Clap
    83. 01:22:439 (3) - Remove finish at the end but leave clap
    84. 01:22:940 (4) - Set clap at the end
    85. 01:23:607 (7) - Remove finish
    86. 01:26:440 (3) - Remove finish at the beginning and set clap at the end

Ok, long re-check :/ Mostly hitsoundmod ^^
I will look again if you're finished, so call me again ><
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

kurohana wrote:


Re-check~

General

  1. Still an missing SB-file :'(
  2. Artist: Yakushimaru Etsuko ( said in wiki)

Easy

  1. 00:28:274 (1) - Unsnapped circle Fix this, it's unrankable ><
  2. 00:17:273 (1) - Remove NC
  3. 00:17:606 (2) - NC
  4. 00:20:939 (2) - Move 1 grid right to make a straight line
  5. 00:30:939 (4) - NC
  6. 00:32:939 (6) - Set on 00:32:772
  7. 00:33:272 - Add note (if you do so, set clap ><)
  8. 00:36:272 (4) - NC
  9. 00:45:607 (2) - Make a straight line, move the note 9 grids down and 2 left (remember fix spacing ><)
  10. 01:02:273 (2) - You could set a slider at 01:01:939 - 01:02:606
  11. 01:09:606 (1) - Remove NC
  12. 01:10:606 - Set note
  13. 01:13:607 (1) - Spinner ending at 01:17:439 would sound better, what do you think?
    1. 00:06:939 (1) - Finish
    2. 00:12:273 (1) - Clap at the end of the slider
    3. 00:13:273 (2) - Clap at the beginning of the slider
    4. 00:13:939 (3) - Clap
    5. 00:14:606 (4) - Clap
    6. 00:15:939 (2) - Clap
    7. 00:22:939 (1) - Clap at the end of the slider
    8. 00:24:606 (3) - Clap
    9. 00:25:939 (1) - Clap
    10. 00:26:939 (3) - Clap at the end of the slider
    11. 00:28:274 (1) - Clap at the end of the slider
    12. 00:30:273 (3) - Remove finish
    13. 00:30:939 (4) - Set clap on the end
    14. 00:33:606 (1) - Set clap on the end
    15. 00:35:606 (3) - Clap at the end of the slider
    16. 00:36:272 (4) - Set clap on the end
    17. 00:38:607 (1) - Clap
    18. 00:40:940 (4) - Clap at the ending of the slider
    19. 00:42:607 (2) - Clap on beginning, middle and ending of this slider
    20. 00:44:273 (1) - Set clap on the end
    21. 00:49:272 (4) - Finish
    22. 00:53:439 (2) - Maybe whistle at the beginning
    23. 00:54:939 (1) - Remove clap
    24. 00:55:607 (2) - Remove clap
    25. 00:56:107 (3) - Maybe whistle at the beginning
    26. 00:57:273 (4) - Clap
    27. 00:57:607 (1) - Remove clap at the beginning, maybe set a whistle?
    28. 00:58:940 (3) - Same like above ^^
    29. 01:00:273 (1) - Remove clap in the middle
    30. 01:02:940 (1) - Remove clap
    31. 01:03:607 (2) - Remove clap
    32. 01:04:107 (3) - Remove clap at the beginning, set clap at the ending of the slider and maybe whistle at the beginning
    33. 01:06:773 (3) - Remove clap on the beginning
    34. 01:08:272 (1) - Set clap at the end of the slider and maybe a whistle on the beginning
    35. 01:09:606 (1) - Same like above ^^
    36. 01:10:606 (2) - Clap
    37. 01:12:606 (4) - Clap
    38. 01:13:272 (5) - Clap
    39. 01:18:940 (1) - Whistle at the ending too
    40. 01:19:940 (2) - Remove clap on the end
    41. 01:20:606 (3) - Clap
    42. 01:21:607 (1) - Whistle at the end too
    43. 01:22:607 (2) - Remove clap at the end
    44. 01:23:272 (3) - Clap
    45. 01:24:273 (1) - Whistle at the end too
    46. 01:25:272 (2) - Clap
    47. 01:25:607 (3) - Whistle at the end too
    48. 01:26:939 (1) - Soft-Whistle at the end fits good, try it ^^

Normal

  1. 00:28:274 (1) - Unsnapped circle
  2. 00:14:606 (1) - Remove NC
  3. 00:14:939 (2) - NC
  4. 00:16:273 (1) - Remove NC
  5. 00:19:939 (1) - Remove NC
  6. 00:20:273 (2) - NC
  7. 00:30:940 (5) - NC
  8. 00:33:273 (1) - Remove NC
  9. 00:33:607 (2) - NC
  10. 00:36:273 (7) - NC
  11. 00:38:106 - Set note
  12. 00:40:940 (1) - Remove NC
  13. 00:41:607 (2) - NC
  14. 00:43:940 (1) - Remove NC
  15. 00:44:273 (2) - NC
  16. 00:48:940 (1) - Remove NC
  17. 01:04:106 (3) - Sorry, I think I was wrong yesterday v.v" Set rhythm to , I don't know why I suggested an off-slider yesterday >.< So sorry .______. Change at 01:06:773 (7) too ><
  18. 01:05:607 (5) - NC
  19. 01:13:607 (1) - Same as Easy, try end at 01:17:439
  20. 01:26:940 (1,2,3) - You could change them this way Fits better :3
    1. 00:07:273 (2) - Remove clap at the end and set clap on the beginning
    2. 00:08:606 (4) - Same as above
    3. 00:10:606 (4) - Clap
    4. 00:10:939 (5) - Clap at the ending of the sliderr
    5. 00:12:606 (2) - Clap at the beginning of the slider
    6. 00:13:273 (3) - Clap at the beginning of the slider
    7. 00:13:939 (4) - Clap at the beginning of the slider
    8. 00:14:606 (1) - Clap
    9. 00:16:606 (2) - Clap at the beginning
    10. 00:17:106 (3) - Clap at the ending
    11. 00:22:606 (5) - Clap at the beginning
    12. 00:23:106 (1) - Clap in the middle of the slider
    13. 00:23:773 (2) - Clap at the ending
    14. 00:24:606 (4) - Clap
    15. 00:24:772 (5) - Remove clap at the beginning
    16. 00:25:939 (2) - Clap
    17. 00:26:439 (3) - Clap at the ending
    18. 00:26:939 (4) - Clap on the second reverse and the ending
    19. 00:28:274 (1) - Clap at the ending of the slider
    20. 00:29:939 (3) - Clap
    21. 00:30:940 (5) - Clap in the middle
    22. 00:32:273 (6) - Remove finish
    23. 00:33:273 (1) - Clap
    24. 00:33:607 (2) - Clap at the end of the slider
    25. 00:35:606 (6) - Same as above
    26. 00:36:273 (7) - Clap at the end of the slider
    27. 00:38:607 (1) - Clap at the beginning and remove the finish at the end
    28. 00:39:940 (3) - Clap at the beginning
    29. 00:40:606 (4) - Clap
    30. 00:43:940 (1) - Clap
    31. 00:45:273 (3) - Clap at the beginning
    32. 00:46:607 (5) - Clap
    33. 00:46:940 (6) - Remove finish
    34. 00:47:773 (2) - Remove clap at the beginning
    35. 00:48:272 (3) - Remove clap in the middle and set clap on the end
    36. 00:48:940 (1) - Clap at the end
    37. 00:49:607 (2) - Remove whistle on both and set finish at the beginning
    38. 00:50:106 (3) - Finish
    39. 00:50:272 (1) - Finish
    40. 00:52:940 (1) - Remove Clap
    41. 00:53:440 (2) - Whistle at the beginning
    42. 00:55:273 (4) - Clap
    43. 00:55:607 (5) - Remove finish
    44. 00:56:107 (6) - Remove finish at the end and set whistle to the beginning
    45. 00:57:607 (2) -
    46. 00:58:940 (3) - Remove finish and set whistle
    47. 00:59:440 (4) - Whistle at the beginning
    48. 00:59:939 (5) - Clap
    49. 01:02:607 (4) - Remove finish and set clap
    50. 01:02:939 (1) - Remove clap at the beginning and set clap in the middle
    51. 01:03:939 (2) - Clap
    52. 01:05:607 (4) - Remove clap at the beginning
    53. 01:06:606 (5) - Clap
    54. 01:07:940 (7) - Clap
    55. 01:08:273 (1) - Remove finish and set whistle
    56. 01:08:772 (2) - Whistle
    57. 01:09:107 (3) - Remove finish at the end and set whistle at the end
    58. 01:10:940 (1) - Remove clap at the beginning
    59. 01:11:940 (2) - Clap
    60. 01:12:272 (3) - Remove clap at the beginning
    61. 01:13:273 (4) - Clap
    62. 01:19:439 (2) - Whistle
    63. 01:19:939 (3) - Clap
    64. 01:20:273 (4) - Remove clap at the beginning and set clap at the end
    65. 01:20:940 (5) - Remove finish
    66. 01:21:607 (1) - Set whistle at the end
    67. 01:24:273 (1) - Set whistle at the end
    68. 01:25:607 (3) - Set whistle at the end

Hard

  1. 00:28:274 (1) - Unsnapped circle
  2. 00:28:774 (3) - Unsnapped circle
  3. 00:29:774 (6) - Unsnapped circle
  4. Try HP-Drainrate -1, in my opinion this fits better
  5. 00:10:106 (3) - Some little beauty-tipp xD Copy+paste 00:09:773 (2) and flip horizontally and reverse selection and arrange like this
  6. 00:30:273 (1) - Remove NC
  7. 00:33:940 (2) - Move 2 grids right to make a straight line and fix spacing afterwards
  8. 00:36:773 (2) - Fix this spacing to reduce this overlap
  9. 00:37:772 - Set note to highlight the music in the background
  10. 00:38:772 - Same as above
  11. 00:46:607 (9) - Again a beauty-tipp: Form a nice bow of (5), (6), (7), (8) and (9), move (9) a bit up
  12. 00:51:773 (5) - Move this note to remove the overlap with (4) (maybe rotate by 60°)
  13. 00:53:273 (2,3) - This is a bad placing, because (2) overlaps with (1). Maybe place like
    Timeline
  14. 00:59:107 (5,6,7) - Make a smoother curve, like
  15. 01:02:107 (8) - This slider sounds weird, you could use a rhythm like
  16. 01:05:939 (2) - Try to form this slider more curvy like
  17. 01:26:940 (1,2,3,4,5) - You could arrange it like
    1. 00:06:939 (1) - Clap at the end
    2. 00:07:939 (3) - Clap at the beginning
    3. 00:09:273 (6) - Clap
    4. 00:09:773 (2) - Clap at the end
    5. 00:10:606 (4) - Clap
    6. 00:11:273 (6) - Clap
    7. 00:11:939 (8) - Clap at the beginning and remove finish at the end
    8. 00:13:939 (3) - Clap at the beginning
    9. 00:14:606 (4) - Clap
    10. 00:14:939 (1) - Clap at the end
    11. 00:16:273 (3) - Remove whistle
    12. 00:18:606 (3) - Clap
    13. 00:23:106 (2) - Remove whistle and set clap in the middle
    14. 00:23:772 (3) - Remove whistle and set clap at the end
    15. 00:24:273 (4) - Clap at the end
    16. 00:24:939 (5) - Clap at the end
    17. 00:26:439 (4) - Clap at the end
    18. 00:28:274 (1) - Remove finish
    19. 00:29:940 (7) - Clap
    20. 00:31:439 (2) - Remove clap at the end
    21. 00:32:273 (4) - Remove finish
    22. 00:33:106 (8) - Clap at the end
    23. 00:33:607 (1) - Remove finish
    24. 00:35:273 (5) - Clap
    25. 00:35:607 (7) - Remove clap
    26. 00:36:273 (1) - Remove clap at the beginning and set clap at the end
    27. 00:36:773 (2) - Remove clap at the beginning
    28. 00:37:273 (3) - Remove finish and set clap
    29. 00:38:940 (1) - Remove clap at the beginning and set clap at the end
    30. 00:39:440 (2) - Remove clap at the beginning
    31. 00:39:940 (3) - Clap
    32. 00:40:273 (4) - Remove Clap
    33. 00:40:606 (5) - Set clap on the beginning
    34. 00:41:106 (6) - Set clap at the ending
    35. 00:41:606 (1) - Remove clap at the beginning and set clap on the ending
    36. 00:42:107 (2) - Remove clap at the ending
    37. 00:42:940 (4) - Remove finish
    38. 00:43:272 (5) - Clap
    39. 00:45:107 (4) - Clap at the ending
    40. 00:45:606 (5) - Remove clap at the beginning and set clap on the ending
    41. 00:46:607 (9) - Clap
    42. 00:47:273 (2) - Remove clap on the end and set clap on the beginning
    43. 00:48:607 (6) - Clap
    44. 00:48:940 (8) - Set clap in the middle and finish at the end
    45. 00:49:773 (1) - Remove finish at the beginning
    46. 00:51:440 (4) - Remove whistle
    47. 00:52:273 (1) - Set finish on the beginning
    48. 00:53:440 (3) - Set whistle at the beginning
    49. 00:54:440 (4) - Clap on the end
    50. 00:55:940 (2) - Clap
    51. 00:56:107 (3) - Whistle on the beginning
    52. 00:57:607 (1) - Whistle
    53. 00:58:440 (3) - Remove finish
    54. 00:58:607 (4) - Clap at the beginning and whistle at the end
    55. 00:59:440 (7) - Remove whistle and set clap
    56. 00:59:773 (8) - Remove finish at the end and set clap on the end
    57. 01:00:607 (3) - Clap
    58. 01:01:273 (6) - Clap
    59. 01:01:607 (7) - Remove finish at the beginning and set clap on the end
    60. 01:02:440 (9) - Remove finish at the end and set clap on the end
    61. 01:03:273 (3) - Clap
    62. 01:03:607 (4) - Remove clap on the beginning and set clap at the ending
    63. 01:04:107 (5) - Remove clap on the beginning and set whistle
    64. 01:04:606 (6) - Clap
    65. 01:04:940 (7) - Remove finish
    66. 01:05:106 (8) - Remove finish at the end and set clap at the end
    67. 01:05:939 (2) - Set clap at the beginning
    68. 01:06:607 (3) - Clap
    69. 01:06:773 (4) - Whistle
    70. 01:07:273 (6) - Clap
    71. 01:08:772 (2) - Set whistle at the beginning and remove clap at the ending
    72. 01:08:773 (2) - Remove finish at the end and clap at the end and set clap at the beginning
    73. 01:09:607 (4) - Set whistle at the beginning
    74. 01:10:939 (1) - Set clap at the end
    75. 01:11:439 (2) - Remove clap at the beginning
    76. 01:11:939 (3) - Clap
    77. 01:12:272 (4) - Remove clap at the beginning
    78. 01:12:606 (5) - Clap
    79. 01:12:939 (7) - Remove clap at the beginning
    80. 01:13:273 (8) - Clap
    81. 01:19:940 (3) - Clap at the beginning and remove clap at the end
    82. 01:20:607 (5) - Clap
    83. 01:22:439 (3) - Remove finish at the end but leave clap
    84. 01:22:940 (4) - Set clap at the end
    85. 01:23:607 (7) - Remove finish
    86. 01:26:440 (3) - Remove finish at the beginning and set clap at the end

Ok, long re-check :/ Mostly hitsoundmod ^^
I will look again if you're finished, so call me again ><

I think I love you! :D finally the hitsounds are perfect! thank you veeery veery much! there are only two things i don't understand... i delate the .osb fils... or i thougt i did it... so... what are exactly these .osb files? and what do you mean when you say unsnapped note? i can't find what's wrond whit the note you noticed :/ anyway thanks, thanks, thanks!
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