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Yakushimaru Etsuko and the Metro Orchestra - Shounen yo Ware

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kurohana
520 posts
Joined October 2010
kurohana


General

  1. Inconsistency in tags: There is 1 space too much in Hard after 'Genesis'. Fix this.
  2. Spinner circle has to be 666x666
  3. There is a SB-file but no file in the folder. If it's right this way, fill in the missing file, otherwise delete the .osb-file in the folder
  4. Offset is 273, you only have to set it to the beginning to the song. And you don't have to use 3/4 on the timeline, this isn't a Waltz-song ;)

Easy

  1. 00:06:939 - 00:12:273 - You use spacing 0,9x, afterwards you always use 1,0x. I suggest you to change the first part to 1,0x, because the music doesn't change at 00:12:273.
  2. 00:18:939 (3) - Move this note 2 grids down and 1 grid left to make a straight line between (2) and (3)
  3. 00:22:939 (4) - NC
  4. 00:23:939 (1) - Remove NC
  5. 00:25:939 (4) - NC
  6. 00:30:940 (1) - Make this blanket perfect by copy+paste 00:32:940 (2) and flip it horizontally.
  7. 00:32:606 (1) - Remove NC
  8. 00:32:940 (2) - This slider doesn't fit in here, please change ><
  9. 00:34:606 - Set note
  10. 00:34:939 - Set note
  11. 00:37:607 (4) - Remove finish, it doesn't fit with the music
  12. 00:39:940 (3) - Move 2 grids down and 1 frid left to make a straight line between the begiinings of slider (3) and (4)
  13. 00:48:607 (3) - Move this note on the timeline on the red tick and longer it up to 00:48:939, that fits the music very well :3
  14. 00:49:272 - Set note
  15. 00:49:607 (4) - Finish at the beginning and the end of the slider sounds good, try it
  16. 00:50:607 (1) - Set finish
  17. 00:54:606 - Set note
  18. 00:54:940 (1) - Set clap
  19. 00:55:607 (2) - Set clap
  20. 00:57:607 (1) - Clap at the beginning of the slider
  21. 00:58:940 (3) - Clap at the beginning and at the ending, remove finish
  22. 00:39:940 (3) - Move 1 grid down to make a straight line between (2) and (3)
  23. 01:02:940 (1) - Set clap
  24. 01:03:607 (2) - Set clap
  25. 01:04:940 (4) - Remove finish and move 1 grid down to make a straight line between the end of slider (3) and circle (4)
  26. 01:05:607 (1) - Move 1 grid down to make the straight above complete
  27. 01:06:273 (2) - Move 1 grid left to make a straight line
  28. 01:06:773 (3) - Move 1 grid down for the straight above
  29. 01:07:607 (4) - 2 grids down for above
  30. 01:08:272 - Try to use this rhythm
  31. 01:12:606 - Set note
  32. 01:13:272 - Set note
  33. 01:20:606 - Set note
  34. 01:23:272 - Set note
  35. 01:25:272 - Set note
  36. 01:26:940 (1,2) - They don't fit in very well... You could set a spinner from 01:26:939 to 01:28:772

Normal

  1. 00:10:273 (3) - Remove finish, the music doesn't allow this ><
  2. 00:10:606 - Maybe set a note here
  3. 00:18:606 (2) - Move 1 grid down to fix spacing, 00:19:939 (1) too, to stack them correctly
  4. 00:32:773 - Consider setting a note here, it sounds really empty.
  5. 00:37:607 (8) - Remove finish
  6. 00:40:606 - Set note
  7. 00:43:439 - Set note
  8. 00:45:939 - Set note
  9. 00:50:107 (3) - Remove finish and set whistle
  10. 00:50:440 (1) - This spinner should end at 00:52:273 to fit the music
  11. 00:53:440 (3) - Remove finish at the end
  12. 01:04:273 (2) - Change rhythm to , fit's better to the music, use at 01:06:940 (5) too
  13. 01:08:273 (7) - NC
  14. 01:08:773 - Set note
  15. 01:09:940 (1) - Remove NC
  16. 01:19:606 (2) - Set this note to 01:19:439 or remove finish to make this fit to the music
  17. 01:19:939 - Set note
  18. 01:26:940 (1,2,3) - Same as Easy, spinner from 01:26:939 to 01:28:772 fits better

Hard

  1. 00:10:606 (4) - Try this
  2. 00:11:939 (1) - Remove NC
  3. 00:12:606 (2) - NC
  4. 00:16:606 (4) - Stack correctly with (2)
  5. 00:25:606 (6) - NC
  6. 00:26:439 (1) - Remove NC
  7. 00:27:606 (4) - 2 grids left and 1 grid up to get (2) and (4) in a straight line
  8. 00:30:273 (1) - Remove NC
  9. 00:30:940 (2) - NC
  10. 00:32:607 (1) - Remove NC
  11. 00:33:607 (5) - NC
  12. 00:35:273 (1) - Remove NC
  13. 00:36:273 (5) - NC
  14. 00:37:940 (1) - Remove NC
  15. 00:43:273 (1) - Remove NC
  16. 00:49:773 (9) - NC
  17. 00:50:440 (1) - Remove NC
  18. 00:57:607 (5) - NC
  19. 00:58:440 (1) - Remove NC
  20. 01:09:440 (1) - Remove NC
  21. 01:11:773 (3) - Remove this note and set one at 01:11:939
  22. 01:12:273 (1) - Remove NC
  23. 01:26:440 (3) - This slider is out of the playfield, please move it

Please PM me for re-check, then I suggest some hitsound-placings ^-^
luxoDeh
1,497 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

kurohana wrote:



General

  1. Inconsistency in tags: There is 1 space too much in Hard after 'Genesis'. Fix this.
  2. Spinner circle has to be 666x666
  3. There is a SB-file but no file in the folder. If it's right this way, fill in the missing file, otherwise delete the .osb-file in the folder
  4. Offset is 273, you only have to set it to the beginning to the song. And you don't have to use 3/4 on the timeline, this isn't a Waltz-song ;)

Easy

  1. 00:06:939 - 00:12:273 - You use spacing 0,9x, afterwards you always use 1,0x. I suggest you to change the first part to 1,0x, because the music doesn't change at 00:12:273.
  2. 00:18:939 (3) - Move this note 2 grids down and 1 grid left to make a straight line between (2) and (3)
  3. 00:22:939 (4) - NC
  4. 00:23:939 (1) - Remove NC
  5. 00:25:939 (4) - NC
  6. 00:30:940 (1) - Make this blanket perfect by copy+paste 00:32:940 (2) and flip it horizontally.
  7. 00:32:606 (1) - Remove NC
  8. 00:32:940 (2) - This slider doesn't fit in here, please change ><
  9. 00:34:606 - Set note
  10. 00:34:939 - Set note
  11. 00:37:607 (4) - Remove finish, it doesn't fit with the music
  12. 00:39:940 (3) - Move 2 grids down and 1 frid left to make a straight line between the begiinings of slider (3) and (4)
  13. 00:48:607 (3) - Move this note on the timeline on the red tick and longer it up to 00:48:939, that fits the music very well :3
  14. 00:49:272 - Set note
  15. 00:49:607 (4) - Finish at the beginning and the end of the slider sounds good, try it
  16. 00:50:607 (1) - Set finish
  17. 00:54:606 - Set note
  18. 00:54:940 (1) - Set clap
  19. 00:55:607 (2) - Set clap
  20. 00:57:607 (1) - Clap at the beginning of the slider
  21. 00:58:940 (3) - Clap at the beginning and at the ending, remove finish
  22. 00:39:940 (3) - Move 1 grid down to make a straight line between (2) and (3)
  23. 01:02:940 (1) - Set clap
  24. 01:03:607 (2) - Set clap
  25. 01:04:940 (4) - Remove finish and move 1 grid down to make a straight line between the end of slider (3) and circle (4)
  26. 01:05:607 (1) - Move 1 grid down to make the straight above complete
  27. 01:06:273 (2) - Move 1 grid left to make a straight line
  28. 01:06:773 (3) - Move 1 grid down for the straight above
  29. 01:07:607 (4) - 2 grids down for above
  30. 01:08:272 - Try to use this rhythm
  31. 01:12:606 - Set note
  32. 01:13:272 - Set note
  33. 01:20:606 - Set note
  34. 01:23:272 - Set note
  35. 01:25:272 - Set note
  36. 01:26:940 (1,2) - They don't fit in very well... You could set a spinner from 01:26:939 to 01:28:772

Normal

  1. 00:10:273 (3) - Remove finish, the music doesn't allow this ><
  2. 00:10:606 - Maybe set a note here
  3. 00:18:606 (2) - Move 1 grid down to fix spacing, 00:19:939 (1) too, to stack them correctly
  4. 00:32:773 - Consider setting a note here, it sounds really empty.
  5. 00:37:607 (8) - Remove finish
  6. 00:40:606 - Set note
  7. 00:43:439 - Set note
  8. 00:45:939 - Set note
  9. 00:50:107 (3) - Remove finish and set whistle
  10. 00:50:440 (1) - This spinner should end at 00:52:273 to fit the music
  11. 00:53:440 (3) - Remove finish at the end
  12. 01:04:273 (2) - Change rhythm to , fit's better to the music, use at 01:06:940 (5) too
  13. 01:08:273 (7) - NC
  14. 01:08:773 - Set note
  15. 01:09:940 (1) - Remove NC
  16. 01:19:606 (2) - Set this note to 01:19:439 or remove finish to make this fit to the music
  17. 01:19:939 - Set note
  18. 01:26:940 (1,2,3) - Same as Easy, spinner from 01:26:939 to 01:28:772 fits better

Hard

  1. 00:10:606 (4) - Try this
  2. 00:11:939 (1) - Remove NC
  3. 00:12:606 (2) - NC
  4. 00:16:606 (4) - Stack correctly with (2)
  5. 00:25:606 (6) - NC
  6. 00:26:439 (1) - Remove NC
  7. 00:27:606 (4) - 2 grids left and 1 grid up to get (2) and (4) in a straight line
  8. 00:30:273 (1) - Remove NC
  9. 00:30:940 (2) - NC
  10. 00:32:607 (1) - Remove NC
  11. 00:33:607 (5) - NC
  12. 00:35:273 (1) - Remove NC
  13. 00:36:273 (5) - NC
  14. 00:37:940 (1) - Remove NC
  15. 00:43:273 (1) - Remove NC
  16. 00:49:773 (9) - NC
  17. 00:50:440 (1) - Remove NC
  18. 00:57:607 (5) - NC
  19. 00:58:440 (1) - Remove NC
  20. 01:09:440 (1) - Remove NC
  21. 01:11:773 (3) - Remove this note and set one at 01:11:939
  22. 01:12:273 (1) - Remove NC
  23. 01:26:440 (3) - This slider is out of the playfield, please move it

Please PM me for re-check, then I suggest some hitsound-placings ^-^
thanks a lot for mod! very usefull! :) quite all fixed. for the spinner graphic a friend of mine will fix it, i'm not very good on skinning, but i hope it'll be fine soon ;) anyway thanks!
kurohana
520 posts
Joined October 2010
kurohana

Re-check~

General

  1. Still an missing SB-file :'(
  2. Artist: Yakushimaru Etsuko ( said in wiki)

Easy

  1. 00:28:274 (1) - Unsnapped circle Fix this, it's unrankable ><
  2. 00:17:273 (1) - Remove NC
  3. 00:17:606 (2) - NC
  4. 00:20:939 (2) - Move 1 grid right to make a straight line
  5. 00:30:939 (4) - NC
  6. 00:32:939 (6) - Set on 00:32:772
  7. 00:33:272 - Add note (if you do so, set clap ><)
  8. 00:36:272 (4) - NC
  9. 00:45:607 (2) - Make a straight line, move the note 9 grids down and 2 left (remember fix spacing ><)
  10. 01:02:273 (2) - You could set a slider at 01:01:939 - 01:02:606
  11. 01:09:606 (1) - Remove NC
  12. 01:10:606 - Set note
  13. 01:13:607 (1) - Spinner ending at 01:17:439 would sound better, what do you think?
    Hitsounds
    1. 00:06:939 (1) - Finish
    2. 00:12:273 (1) - Clap at the end of the slider
    3. 00:13:273 (2) - Clap at the beginning of the slider
    4. 00:13:939 (3) - Clap
    5. 00:14:606 (4) - Clap
    6. 00:15:939 (2) - Clap
    7. 00:22:939 (1) - Clap at the end of the slider
    8. 00:24:606 (3) - Clap
    9. 00:25:939 (1) - Clap
    10. 00:26:939 (3) - Clap at the end of the slider
    11. 00:28:274 (1) - Clap at the end of the slider
    12. 00:30:273 (3) - Remove finish
    13. 00:30:939 (4) - Set clap on the end
    14. 00:33:606 (1) - Set clap on the end
    15. 00:35:606 (3) - Clap at the end of the slider
    16. 00:36:272 (4) - Set clap on the end
    17. 00:38:607 (1) - Clap
    18. 00:40:940 (4) - Clap at the ending of the slider
    19. 00:42:607 (2) - Clap on beginning, middle and ending of this slider
    20. 00:44:273 (1) - Set clap on the end
    21. 00:49:272 (4) - Finish
    22. 00:53:439 (2) - Maybe whistle at the beginning
    23. 00:54:939 (1) - Remove clap
    24. 00:55:607 (2) - Remove clap
    25. 00:56:107 (3) - Maybe whistle at the beginning
    26. 00:57:273 (4) - Clap
    27. 00:57:607 (1) - Remove clap at the beginning, maybe set a whistle?
    28. 00:58:940 (3) - Same like above ^^
    29. 01:00:273 (1) - Remove clap in the middle
    30. 01:02:940 (1) - Remove clap
    31. 01:03:607 (2) - Remove clap
    32. 01:04:107 (3) - Remove clap at the beginning, set clap at the ending of the slider and maybe whistle at the beginning
    33. 01:06:773 (3) - Remove clap on the beginning
    34. 01:08:272 (1) - Set clap at the end of the slider and maybe a whistle on the beginning
    35. 01:09:606 (1) - Same like above ^^
    36. 01:10:606 (2) - Clap
    37. 01:12:606 (4) - Clap
    38. 01:13:272 (5) - Clap
    39. 01:18:940 (1) - Whistle at the ending too
    40. 01:19:940 (2) - Remove clap on the end
    41. 01:20:606 (3) - Clap
    42. 01:21:607 (1) - Whistle at the end too
    43. 01:22:607 (2) - Remove clap at the end
    44. 01:23:272 (3) - Clap
    45. 01:24:273 (1) - Whistle at the end too
    46. 01:25:272 (2) - Clap
    47. 01:25:607 (3) - Whistle at the end too
    48. 01:26:939 (1) - Soft-Whistle at the end fits good, try it ^^

Normal

  1. 00:28:274 (1) - Unsnapped circle
  2. 00:14:606 (1) - Remove NC
  3. 00:14:939 (2) - NC
  4. 00:16:273 (1) - Remove NC
  5. 00:19:939 (1) - Remove NC
  6. 00:20:273 (2) - NC
  7. 00:30:940 (5) - NC
  8. 00:33:273 (1) - Remove NC
  9. 00:33:607 (2) - NC
  10. 00:36:273 (7) - NC
  11. 00:38:106 - Set note
  12. 00:40:940 (1) - Remove NC
  13. 00:41:607 (2) - NC
  14. 00:43:940 (1) - Remove NC
  15. 00:44:273 (2) - NC
  16. 00:48:940 (1) - Remove NC
  17. 01:04:106 (3) - Sorry, I think I was wrong yesterday v.v" Set rhythm to , I don't know why I suggested an off-slider yesterday >.< So sorry .______. Change at 01:06:773 (7) too ><
  18. 01:05:607 (5) - NC
  19. 01:13:607 (1) - Same as Easy, try end at 01:17:439
  20. 01:26:940 (1,2,3) - You could change them this way Fits better :3
    Hitsounds
    1. 00:07:273 (2) - Remove clap at the end and set clap on the beginning
    2. 00:08:606 (4) - Same as above
    3. 00:10:606 (4) - Clap
    4. 00:10:939 (5) - Clap at the ending of the sliderr
    5. 00:12:606 (2) - Clap at the beginning of the slider
    6. 00:13:273 (3) - Clap at the beginning of the slider
    7. 00:13:939 (4) - Clap at the beginning of the slider
    8. 00:14:606 (1) - Clap
    9. 00:16:606 (2) - Clap at the beginning
    10. 00:17:106 (3) - Clap at the ending
    11. 00:22:606 (5) - Clap at the beginning
    12. 00:23:106 (1) - Clap in the middle of the slider
    13. 00:23:773 (2) - Clap at the ending
    14. 00:24:606 (4) - Clap
    15. 00:24:772 (5) - Remove clap at the beginning
    16. 00:25:939 (2) - Clap
    17. 00:26:439 (3) - Clap at the ending
    18. 00:26:939 (4) - Clap on the second reverse and the ending
    19. 00:28:274 (1) - Clap at the ending of the slider
    20. 00:29:939 (3) - Clap
    21. 00:30:940 (5) - Clap in the middle
    22. 00:32:273 (6) - Remove finish
    23. 00:33:273 (1) - Clap
    24. 00:33:607 (2) - Clap at the end of the slider
    25. 00:35:606 (6) - Same as above
    26. 00:36:273 (7) - Clap at the end of the slider
    27. 00:38:607 (1) - Clap at the beginning and remove the finish at the end
    28. 00:39:940 (3) - Clap at the beginning
    29. 00:40:606 (4) - Clap
    30. 00:43:940 (1) - Clap
    31. 00:45:273 (3) - Clap at the beginning
    32. 00:46:607 (5) - Clap
    33. 00:46:940 (6) - Remove finish
    34. 00:47:773 (2) - Remove clap at the beginning
    35. 00:48:272 (3) - Remove clap in the middle and set clap on the end
    36. 00:48:940 (1) - Clap at the end
    37. 00:49:607 (2) - Remove whistle on both and set finish at the beginning
    38. 00:50:106 (3) - Finish
    39. 00:50:272 (1) - Finish
    40. 00:52:940 (1) - Remove Clap
    41. 00:53:440 (2) - Whistle at the beginning
    42. 00:55:273 (4) - Clap
    43. 00:55:607 (5) - Remove finish
    44. 00:56:107 (6) - Remove finish at the end and set whistle to the beginning
    45. 00:57:607 (2) -
    46. 00:58:940 (3) - Remove finish and set whistle
    47. 00:59:440 (4) - Whistle at the beginning
    48. 00:59:939 (5) - Clap
    49. 01:02:607 (4) - Remove finish and set clap
    50. 01:02:939 (1) - Remove clap at the beginning and set clap in the middle
    51. 01:03:939 (2) - Clap
    52. 01:05:607 (4) - Remove clap at the beginning
    53. 01:06:606 (5) - Clap
    54. 01:07:940 (7) - Clap
    55. 01:08:273 (1) - Remove finish and set whistle
    56. 01:08:772 (2) - Whistle
    57. 01:09:107 (3) - Remove finish at the end and set whistle at the end
    58. 01:10:940 (1) - Remove clap at the beginning
    59. 01:11:940 (2) - Clap
    60. 01:12:272 (3) - Remove clap at the beginning
    61. 01:13:273 (4) - Clap
    62. 01:19:439 (2) - Whistle
    63. 01:19:939 (3) - Clap
    64. 01:20:273 (4) - Remove clap at the beginning and set clap at the end
    65. 01:20:940 (5) - Remove finish
    66. 01:21:607 (1) - Set whistle at the end
    67. 01:24:273 (1) - Set whistle at the end
    68. 01:25:607 (3) - Set whistle at the end

Hard

  1. 00:28:274 (1) - Unsnapped circle
  2. 00:28:774 (3) - Unsnapped circle
  3. 00:29:774 (6) - Unsnapped circle
  4. Try HP-Drainrate -1, in my opinion this fits better
  5. 00:10:106 (3) - Some little beauty-tipp xD Copy+paste 00:09:773 (2) and flip horizontally and reverse selection and arrange like this
  6. 00:30:273 (1) - Remove NC
  7. 00:33:940 (2) - Move 2 grids right to make a straight line and fix spacing afterwards
  8. 00:36:773 (2) - Fix this spacing to reduce this overlap
  9. 00:37:772 - Set note to highlight the music in the background
  10. 00:38:772 - Same as above
  11. 00:46:607 (9) - Again a beauty-tipp: Form a nice bow of (5), (6), (7), (8) and (9), move (9) a bit up
  12. 00:51:773 (5) - Move this note to remove the overlap with (4) (maybe rotate by 60°)
  13. 00:53:273 (2,3) - This is a bad placing, because (2) overlaps with (1). Maybe place like
    Timeline
  14. 00:59:107 (5,6,7) - Make a smoother curve, like
  15. 01:02:107 (8) - This slider sounds weird, you could use a rhythm like
  16. 01:05:939 (2) - Try to form this slider more curvy like
  17. 01:26:940 (1,2,3,4,5) - You could arrange it like
    Hitsounds
    1. 00:06:939 (1) - Clap at the end
    2. 00:07:939 (3) - Clap at the beginning
    3. 00:09:273 (6) - Clap
    4. 00:09:773 (2) - Clap at the end
    5. 00:10:606 (4) - Clap
    6. 00:11:273 (6) - Clap
    7. 00:11:939 (8) - Clap at the beginning and remove finish at the end
    8. 00:13:939 (3) - Clap at the beginning
    9. 00:14:606 (4) - Clap
    10. 00:14:939 (1) - Clap at the end
    11. 00:16:273 (3) - Remove whistle
    12. 00:18:606 (3) - Clap
    13. 00:23:106 (2) - Remove whistle and set clap in the middle
    14. 00:23:772 (3) - Remove whistle and set clap at the end
    15. 00:24:273 (4) - Clap at the end
    16. 00:24:939 (5) - Clap at the end
    17. 00:26:439 (4) - Clap at the end
    18. 00:28:274 (1) - Remove finish
    19. 00:29:940 (7) - Clap
    20. 00:31:439 (2) - Remove clap at the end
    21. 00:32:273 (4) - Remove finish
    22. 00:33:106 (8) - Clap at the end
    23. 00:33:607 (1) - Remove finish
    24. 00:35:273 (5) - Clap
    25. 00:35:607 (7) - Remove clap
    26. 00:36:273 (1) - Remove clap at the beginning and set clap at the end
    27. 00:36:773 (2) - Remove clap at the beginning
    28. 00:37:273 (3) - Remove finish and set clap
    29. 00:38:940 (1) - Remove clap at the beginning and set clap at the end
    30. 00:39:440 (2) - Remove clap at the beginning
    31. 00:39:940 (3) - Clap
    32. 00:40:273 (4) - Remove Clap
    33. 00:40:606 (5) - Set clap on the beginning
    34. 00:41:106 (6) - Set clap at the ending
    35. 00:41:606 (1) - Remove clap at the beginning and set clap on the ending
    36. 00:42:107 (2) - Remove clap at the ending
    37. 00:42:940 (4) - Remove finish
    38. 00:43:272 (5) - Clap
    39. 00:45:107 (4) - Clap at the ending
    40. 00:45:606 (5) - Remove clap at the beginning and set clap on the ending
    41. 00:46:607 (9) - Clap
    42. 00:47:273 (2) - Remove clap on the end and set clap on the beginning
    43. 00:48:607 (6) - Clap
    44. 00:48:940 (8) - Set clap in the middle and finish at the end
    45. 00:49:773 (1) - Remove finish at the beginning
    46. 00:51:440 (4) - Remove whistle
    47. 00:52:273 (1) - Set finish on the beginning
    48. 00:53:440 (3) - Set whistle at the beginning
    49. 00:54:440 (4) - Clap on the end
    50. 00:55:940 (2) - Clap
    51. 00:56:107 (3) - Whistle on the beginning
    52. 00:57:607 (1) - Whistle
    53. 00:58:440 (3) - Remove finish
    54. 00:58:607 (4) - Clap at the beginning and whistle at the end
    55. 00:59:440 (7) - Remove whistle and set clap
    56. 00:59:773 (8) - Remove finish at the end and set clap on the end
    57. 01:00:607 (3) - Clap
    58. 01:01:273 (6) - Clap
    59. 01:01:607 (7) - Remove finish at the beginning and set clap on the end
    60. 01:02:440 (9) - Remove finish at the end and set clap on the end
    61. 01:03:273 (3) - Clap
    62. 01:03:607 (4) - Remove clap on the beginning and set clap at the ending
    63. 01:04:107 (5) - Remove clap on the beginning and set whistle
    64. 01:04:606 (6) - Clap
    65. 01:04:940 (7) - Remove finish
    66. 01:05:106 (8) - Remove finish at the end and set clap at the end
    67. 01:05:939 (2) - Set clap at the beginning
    68. 01:06:607 (3) - Clap
    69. 01:06:773 (4) - Whistle
    70. 01:07:273 (6) - Clap
    71. 01:08:772 (2) - Set whistle at the beginning and remove clap at the ending
    72. 01:08:773 (2) - Remove finish at the end and clap at the end and set clap at the beginning
    73. 01:09:607 (4) - Set whistle at the beginning
    74. 01:10:939 (1) - Set clap at the end
    75. 01:11:439 (2) - Remove clap at the beginning
    76. 01:11:939 (3) - Clap
    77. 01:12:272 (4) - Remove clap at the beginning
    78. 01:12:606 (5) - Clap
    79. 01:12:939 (7) - Remove clap at the beginning
    80. 01:13:273 (8) - Clap
    81. 01:19:940 (3) - Clap at the beginning and remove clap at the end
    82. 01:20:607 (5) - Clap
    83. 01:22:439 (3) - Remove finish at the end but leave clap
    84. 01:22:940 (4) - Set clap at the end
    85. 01:23:607 (7) - Remove finish
    86. 01:26:440 (3) - Remove finish at the beginning and set clap at the end

Ok, long re-check :/ Mostly hitsoundmod ^^
I will look again if you're finished, so call me again ><
luxoDeh
1,497 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
luxoDeh
SPOILER

kurohana wrote:


Re-check~

General

  1. Still an missing SB-file :'(
  2. Artist: Yakushimaru Etsuko ( said in wiki)

Easy

  1. 00:28:274 (1) - Unsnapped circle Fix this, it's unrankable ><
  2. 00:17:273 (1) - Remove NC
  3. 00:17:606 (2) - NC
  4. 00:20:939 (2) - Move 1 grid right to make a straight line
  5. 00:30:939 (4) - NC
  6. 00:32:939 (6) - Set on 00:32:772
  7. 00:33:272 - Add note (if you do so, set clap ><)
  8. 00:36:272 (4) - NC
  9. 00:45:607 (2) - Make a straight line, move the note 9 grids down and 2 left (remember fix spacing ><)
  10. 01:02:273 (2) - You could set a slider at 01:01:939 - 01:02:606
  11. 01:09:606 (1) - Remove NC
  12. 01:10:606 - Set note
  13. 01:13:607 (1) - Spinner ending at 01:17:439 would sound better, what do you think?
    Hitsounds
    1. 00:06:939 (1) - Finish
    2. 00:12:273 (1) - Clap at the end of the slider
    3. 00:13:273 (2) - Clap at the beginning of the slider
    4. 00:13:939 (3) - Clap
    5. 00:14:606 (4) - Clap
    6. 00:15:939 (2) - Clap
    7. 00:22:939 (1) - Clap at the end of the slider
    8. 00:24:606 (3) - Clap
    9. 00:25:939 (1) - Clap
    10. 00:26:939 (3) - Clap at the end of the slider
    11. 00:28:274 (1) - Clap at the end of the slider
    12. 00:30:273 (3) - Remove finish
    13. 00:30:939 (4) - Set clap on the end
    14. 00:33:606 (1) - Set clap on the end
    15. 00:35:606 (3) - Clap at the end of the slider
    16. 00:36:272 (4) - Set clap on the end
    17. 00:38:607 (1) - Clap
    18. 00:40:940 (4) - Clap at the ending of the slider
    19. 00:42:607 (2) - Clap on beginning, middle and ending of this slider
    20. 00:44:273 (1) - Set clap on the end
    21. 00:49:272 (4) - Finish
    22. 00:53:439 (2) - Maybe whistle at the beginning
    23. 00:54:939 (1) - Remove clap
    24. 00:55:607 (2) - Remove clap
    25. 00:56:107 (3) - Maybe whistle at the beginning
    26. 00:57:273 (4) - Clap
    27. 00:57:607 (1) - Remove clap at the beginning, maybe set a whistle?
    28. 00:58:940 (3) - Same like above ^^
    29. 01:00:273 (1) - Remove clap in the middle
    30. 01:02:940 (1) - Remove clap
    31. 01:03:607 (2) - Remove clap
    32. 01:04:107 (3) - Remove clap at the beginning, set clap at the ending of the slider and maybe whistle at the beginning
    33. 01:06:773 (3) - Remove clap on the beginning
    34. 01:08:272 (1) - Set clap at the end of the slider and maybe a whistle on the beginning
    35. 01:09:606 (1) - Same like above ^^
    36. 01:10:606 (2) - Clap
    37. 01:12:606 (4) - Clap
    38. 01:13:272 (5) - Clap
    39. 01:18:940 (1) - Whistle at the ending too
    40. 01:19:940 (2) - Remove clap on the end
    41. 01:20:606 (3) - Clap
    42. 01:21:607 (1) - Whistle at the end too
    43. 01:22:607 (2) - Remove clap at the end
    44. 01:23:272 (3) - Clap
    45. 01:24:273 (1) - Whistle at the end too
    46. 01:25:272 (2) - Clap
    47. 01:25:607 (3) - Whistle at the end too
    48. 01:26:939 (1) - Soft-Whistle at the end fits good, try it ^^

Normal

  1. 00:28:274 (1) - Unsnapped circle
  2. 00:14:606 (1) - Remove NC
  3. 00:14:939 (2) - NC
  4. 00:16:273 (1) - Remove NC
  5. 00:19:939 (1) - Remove NC
  6. 00:20:273 (2) - NC
  7. 00:30:940 (5) - NC
  8. 00:33:273 (1) - Remove NC
  9. 00:33:607 (2) - NC
  10. 00:36:273 (7) - NC
  11. 00:38:106 - Set note
  12. 00:40:940 (1) - Remove NC
  13. 00:41:607 (2) - NC
  14. 00:43:940 (1) - Remove NC
  15. 00:44:273 (2) - NC
  16. 00:48:940 (1) - Remove NC
  17. 01:04:106 (3) - Sorry, I think I was wrong yesterday v.v" Set rhythm to , I don't know why I suggested an off-slider yesterday >.< So sorry .______. Change at 01:06:773 (7) too ><
  18. 01:05:607 (5) - NC
  19. 01:13:607 (1) - Same as Easy, try end at 01:17:439
  20. 01:26:940 (1,2,3) - You could change them this way Fits better :3
    Hitsounds
    1. 00:07:273 (2) - Remove clap at the end and set clap on the beginning
    2. 00:08:606 (4) - Same as above
    3. 00:10:606 (4) - Clap
    4. 00:10:939 (5) - Clap at the ending of the sliderr
    5. 00:12:606 (2) - Clap at the beginning of the slider
    6. 00:13:273 (3) - Clap at the beginning of the slider
    7. 00:13:939 (4) - Clap at the beginning of the slider
    8. 00:14:606 (1) - Clap
    9. 00:16:606 (2) - Clap at the beginning
    10. 00:17:106 (3) - Clap at the ending
    11. 00:22:606 (5) - Clap at the beginning
    12. 00:23:106 (1) - Clap in the middle of the slider
    13. 00:23:773 (2) - Clap at the ending
    14. 00:24:606 (4) - Clap
    15. 00:24:772 (5) - Remove clap at the beginning
    16. 00:25:939 (2) - Clap
    17. 00:26:439 (3) - Clap at the ending
    18. 00:26:939 (4) - Clap on the second reverse and the ending
    19. 00:28:274 (1) - Clap at the ending of the slider
    20. 00:29:939 (3) - Clap
    21. 00:30:940 (5) - Clap in the middle
    22. 00:32:273 (6) - Remove finish
    23. 00:33:273 (1) - Clap
    24. 00:33:607 (2) - Clap at the end of the slider
    25. 00:35:606 (6) - Same as above
    26. 00:36:273 (7) - Clap at the end of the slider
    27. 00:38:607 (1) - Clap at the beginning and remove the finish at the end
    28. 00:39:940 (3) - Clap at the beginning
    29. 00:40:606 (4) - Clap
    30. 00:43:940 (1) - Clap
    31. 00:45:273 (3) - Clap at the beginning
    32. 00:46:607 (5) - Clap
    33. 00:46:940 (6) - Remove finish
    34. 00:47:773 (2) - Remove clap at the beginning
    35. 00:48:272 (3) - Remove clap in the middle and set clap on the end
    36. 00:48:940 (1) - Clap at the end
    37. 00:49:607 (2) - Remove whistle on both and set finish at the beginning
    38. 00:50:106 (3) - Finish
    39. 00:50:272 (1) - Finish
    40. 00:52:940 (1) - Remove Clap
    41. 00:53:440 (2) - Whistle at the beginning
    42. 00:55:273 (4) - Clap
    43. 00:55:607 (5) - Remove finish
    44. 00:56:107 (6) - Remove finish at the end and set whistle to the beginning
    45. 00:57:607 (2) -
    46. 00:58:940 (3) - Remove finish and set whistle
    47. 00:59:440 (4) - Whistle at the beginning
    48. 00:59:939 (5) - Clap
    49. 01:02:607 (4) - Remove finish and set clap
    50. 01:02:939 (1) - Remove clap at the beginning and set clap in the middle
    51. 01:03:939 (2) - Clap
    52. 01:05:607 (4) - Remove clap at the beginning
    53. 01:06:606 (5) - Clap
    54. 01:07:940 (7) - Clap
    55. 01:08:273 (1) - Remove finish and set whistle
    56. 01:08:772 (2) - Whistle
    57. 01:09:107 (3) - Remove finish at the end and set whistle at the end
    58. 01:10:940 (1) - Remove clap at the beginning
    59. 01:11:940 (2) - Clap
    60. 01:12:272 (3) - Remove clap at the beginning
    61. 01:13:273 (4) - Clap
    62. 01:19:439 (2) - Whistle
    63. 01:19:939 (3) - Clap
    64. 01:20:273 (4) - Remove clap at the beginning and set clap at the end
    65. 01:20:940 (5) - Remove finish
    66. 01:21:607 (1) - Set whistle at the end
    67. 01:24:273 (1) - Set whistle at the end
    68. 01:25:607 (3) - Set whistle at the end

Hard

  1. 00:28:274 (1) - Unsnapped circle
  2. 00:28:774 (3) - Unsnapped circle
  3. 00:29:774 (6) - Unsnapped circle
  4. Try HP-Drainrate -1, in my opinion this fits better
  5. 00:10:106 (3) - Some little beauty-tipp xD Copy+paste 00:09:773 (2) and flip horizontally and reverse selection and arrange like this
  6. 00:30:273 (1) - Remove NC
  7. 00:33:940 (2) - Move 2 grids right to make a straight line and fix spacing afterwards
  8. 00:36:773 (2) - Fix this spacing to reduce this overlap
  9. 00:37:772 - Set note to highlight the music in the background
  10. 00:38:772 - Same as above
  11. 00:46:607 (9) - Again a beauty-tipp: Form a nice bow of (5), (6), (7), (8) and (9), move (9) a bit up
  12. 00:51:773 (5) - Move this note to remove the overlap with (4) (maybe rotate by 60°)
  13. 00:53:273 (2,3) - This is a bad placing, because (2) overlaps with (1). Maybe place like
    Timeline
  14. 00:59:107 (5,6,7) - Make a smoother curve, like
  15. 01:02:107 (8) - This slider sounds weird, you could use a rhythm like
  16. 01:05:939 (2) - Try to form this slider more curvy like
  17. 01:26:940 (1,2,3,4,5) - You could arrange it like
    Hitsounds
    1. 00:06:939 (1) - Clap at the end
    2. 00:07:939 (3) - Clap at the beginning
    3. 00:09:273 (6) - Clap
    4. 00:09:773 (2) - Clap at the end
    5. 00:10:606 (4) - Clap
    6. 00:11:273 (6) - Clap
    7. 00:11:939 (8) - Clap at the beginning and remove finish at the end
    8. 00:13:939 (3) - Clap at the beginning
    9. 00:14:606 (4) - Clap
    10. 00:14:939 (1) - Clap at the end
    11. 00:16:273 (3) - Remove whistle
    12. 00:18:606 (3) - Clap
    13. 00:23:106 (2) - Remove whistle and set clap in the middle
    14. 00:23:772 (3) - Remove whistle and set clap at the end
    15. 00:24:273 (4) - Clap at the end
    16. 00:24:939 (5) - Clap at the end
    17. 00:26:439 (4) - Clap at the end
    18. 00:28:274 (1) - Remove finish
    19. 00:29:940 (7) - Clap
    20. 00:31:439 (2) - Remove clap at the end
    21. 00:32:273 (4) - Remove finish
    22. 00:33:106 (8) - Clap at the end
    23. 00:33:607 (1) - Remove finish
    24. 00:35:273 (5) - Clap
    25. 00:35:607 (7) - Remove clap
    26. 00:36:273 (1) - Remove clap at the beginning and set clap at the end
    27. 00:36:773 (2) - Remove clap at the beginning
    28. 00:37:273 (3) - Remove finish and set clap
    29. 00:38:940 (1) - Remove clap at the beginning and set clap at the end
    30. 00:39:440 (2) - Remove clap at the beginning
    31. 00:39:940 (3) - Clap
    32. 00:40:273 (4) - Remove Clap
    33. 00:40:606 (5) - Set clap on the beginning
    34. 00:41:106 (6) - Set clap at the ending
    35. 00:41:606 (1) - Remove clap at the beginning and set clap on the ending
    36. 00:42:107 (2) - Remove clap at the ending
    37. 00:42:940 (4) - Remove finish
    38. 00:43:272 (5) - Clap
    39. 00:45:107 (4) - Clap at the ending
    40. 00:45:606 (5) - Remove clap at the beginning and set clap on the ending
    41. 00:46:607 (9) - Clap
    42. 00:47:273 (2) - Remove clap on the end and set clap on the beginning
    43. 00:48:607 (6) - Clap
    44. 00:48:940 (8) - Set clap in the middle and finish at the end
    45. 00:49:773 (1) - Remove finish at the beginning
    46. 00:51:440 (4) - Remove whistle
    47. 00:52:273 (1) - Set finish on the beginning
    48. 00:53:440 (3) - Set whistle at the beginning
    49. 00:54:440 (4) - Clap on the end
    50. 00:55:940 (2) - Clap
    51. 00:56:107 (3) - Whistle on the beginning
    52. 00:57:607 (1) - Whistle
    53. 00:58:440 (3) - Remove finish
    54. 00:58:607 (4) - Clap at the beginning and whistle at the end
    55. 00:59:440 (7) - Remove whistle and set clap
    56. 00:59:773 (8) - Remove finish at the end and set clap on the end
    57. 01:00:607 (3) - Clap
    58. 01:01:273 (6) - Clap
    59. 01:01:607 (7) - Remove finish at the beginning and set clap on the end
    60. 01:02:440 (9) - Remove finish at the end and set clap on the end
    61. 01:03:273 (3) - Clap
    62. 01:03:607 (4) - Remove clap on the beginning and set clap at the ending
    63. 01:04:107 (5) - Remove clap on the beginning and set whistle
    64. 01:04:606 (6) - Clap
    65. 01:04:940 (7) - Remove finish
    66. 01:05:106 (8) - Remove finish at the end and set clap at the end
    67. 01:05:939 (2) - Set clap at the beginning
    68. 01:06:607 (3) - Clap
    69. 01:06:773 (4) - Whistle
    70. 01:07:273 (6) - Clap
    71. 01:08:772 (2) - Set whistle at the beginning and remove clap at the ending
    72. 01:08:773 (2) - Remove finish at the end and clap at the end and set clap at the beginning
    73. 01:09:607 (4) - Set whistle at the beginning
    74. 01:10:939 (1) - Set clap at the end
    75. 01:11:439 (2) - Remove clap at the beginning
    76. 01:11:939 (3) - Clap
    77. 01:12:272 (4) - Remove clap at the beginning
    78. 01:12:606 (5) - Clap
    79. 01:12:939 (7) - Remove clap at the beginning
    80. 01:13:273 (8) - Clap
    81. 01:19:940 (3) - Clap at the beginning and remove clap at the end
    82. 01:20:607 (5) - Clap
    83. 01:22:439 (3) - Remove finish at the end but leave clap
    84. 01:22:940 (4) - Set clap at the end
    85. 01:23:607 (7) - Remove finish
    86. 01:26:440 (3) - Remove finish at the beginning and set clap at the end

Ok, long re-check :/ Mostly hitsoundmod ^^
I will look again if you're finished, so call me again ><

I think I love you! :D finally the hitsounds are perfect! thank you veeery veery much! there are only two things i don't understand... i delate the .osb fils... or i thougt i did it... so... what are exactly these .osb files? and what do you mean when you say unsnapped note? i can't find what's wrond whit the note you noticed :/ anyway thanks, thanks, thanks!
kurohana
520 posts
Joined October 2010
kurohana

Re-check ~

Easy

  1. 00:16:273 (3) - Set clap at the ending
  2. 00:17:273 (4) - Clap
  3. 00:22:939 (1) - Remove clap at the beginning
  4. 00:24:939 (4) - Remove clap at the beginning
  5. 00:28:272 (1) - Remove clap at the beginning and set finish at the beginning
  6. 00:38:940 (2) - Set finish at the beginning
  7. 00:39:940 (3) - Set clap at the beginning
  8. 00:41:607 (1) - Set clap at the ending
  9. 00:46:940 (1) - Finish at the beginning
  10. 00:49:272 (4) - Remove finish and set clap
  11. 01:01:939 (2) - Clap at the beginning and the ending
  12. 01:06:772 (3) - Whistle at the beginning
  13. 01:07:607 (4) - Remove finish

Normal

  1. 00:06:939 (1) - Set finish like in Easy
  2. 00:09:606 (1) - Remove clap
  3. 00:10:273 (3) - Fix spacing
  4. 00:10:939 (5) - Remove finish at the beginning
  5. 00:24:273 (3) - Remove clap
  6. 00:26:939 (4) - Remove all hitsounds and set clap on the red
  7. 00:28:274 (1) - Set finish on the beginning
  8. 00:50:106 (6) - Remove whistle
  9. 00:57:607 (2) - Set clap on the ending
  10. 01:04:106 (3) - Set clap on the ending
  11. 01:05:607 (1) - Set clap in the middle
  12. 01:06:772 (3) - Set clap on the ending
  13. 00:38:607 (1) - Set finish at the ending
  14. 01:08:772 (2) - Remove whistle and set clap
  15. 01:09:940 (4) - Remove whistle and set clap
  16. 01:10:273 (5) - Move 3 grids down and 3 grids left to make a straight line
  17. 01:10:607 (6) - Remove whistle and set clap
  18. 01:27:939 (3) - Set whistle on the beginning

Hard

  1. 00:06:939 (1) - Set finish at the beginning
  2. 00:10:106 (3) - Remove clap at the ending
  3. 00:23:106 (2) - Remove clap at the beginning
  4. 00:23:773 (3) - Remove clap at the beginning
  5. 00:24:272 (4) - Remove clap at the beginning
  6. 00:32:607 (5) - Clap
  7. 00:44:773 (3) - Remove clap
  8. 00:48:940 (8) - Remove clap at the beginning and the ending and set finish to the end
  9. 00:57:940 (2) - Set clap at the beginning and remove clap in the middle
  10. 00:59:273 (6) - Clap
  11. 00:59:440 (7) - Remove Clap
  12. 01:02:106 (8) - Set clap at the ending
  13. 01:09:607 (4) - Remove whistle at the end and set clap at the end
  14. 01:10:607 (6) - Remove whistle and set clap
  15. 01:20:773 (6) - Remove clap
  16. 01:27:772 (5) - Flip horizontally and reverse selection (press ctrl+g and ctrl+h), then move it to x:240 Y:288 (The yellow numbers in the upper right corner)
  17. 01:28:272 (6) - Remove this and (7) and copy+paste 01:27:772 (5) after changing the fixes above. Then flip it horizontally (press ctrl+h) and move it to x:176 y:288
  18. 01:28:772 (8) - Move to x:208 y:352
    Hitsounds for the new part
  19. 01:26:939 (1) - Whistle
  20. 01:27:439 (4) - Whistle
  21. 01:27:772 (5) - Set whistle in the middle
  22. 01:28:272 (6) - Set whistle on the beginning
  23. 01:28:772 (7) - Whistle

luxoDeh wrote:

I think I love you! :D finally the hitsounds are perfect! thank you veeery veery much! there are only two things i don't understand... i delate the .osb fils... or i thougt i did it... so... what are exactly these .osb files? and what do you mean when you say unsnapped note? i can't find what's wrond whit the note you noticed :/ anyway thanks, thanks, thanks!
The .osb-file is an OsuStoryboard-File, it's to edit the storyboard like flashing bgs in nightcore maps or other bgs. And your map doesn't have a storyboard, so you don't need the file :)
Unsnapped notes are notes, that doesn't fit the timing. They aren't snapped on the timeline. When you change Offset or BPM the notes don't resnap automatically, you have to do that manually. Click on Timing and Resnapp all notes to fix that ;D


Ok, I think that's all :3 I would like to look again, but I think I listed all here, if you fix everything I can't find something then xD So call me again, when you're finished~
luxoDeh
1,497 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
luxoDeh
SPOILER

kurohana wrote:


Re-check ~

Easy

  1. 00:16:273 (3) - Set clap at the ending
  2. 00:17:273 (4) - Clap
  3. 00:22:939 (1) - Remove clap at the beginning
  4. 00:24:939 (4) - Remove clap at the beginning
  5. 00:28:272 (1) - Remove clap at the beginning and set finish at the beginning
  6. 00:38:940 (2) - Set finish at the beginning
  7. 00:39:940 (3) - Set clap at the beginning
  8. 00:41:607 (1) - Set clap at the ending
  9. 00:46:940 (1) - Finish at the beginning
  10. 00:49:272 (4) - Remove finish and set clap
  11. 01:01:939 (2) - Clap at the beginning and the ending
  12. 01:06:772 (3) - Whistle at the beginning
  13. 01:07:607 (4) - Remove finish

Normal

  1. 00:06:939 (1) - Set finish like in Easy
  2. 00:09:606 (1) - Remove clap
  3. 00:10:273 (3) - Fix spacing
  4. 00:10:939 (5) - Remove finish at the beginning
  5. 00:24:273 (3) - Remove clap
  6. 00:26:939 (4) - Remove all hitsounds and set clap on the red
  7. 00:28:274 (1) - Set finish on the beginning
  8. 00:50:106 (6) - Remove whistle
  9. 00:57:607 (2) - Set clap on the ending
  10. 01:04:106 (3) - Set clap on the ending
  11. 01:05:607 (1) - Set clap in the middle
  12. 01:06:772 (3) - Set clap on the ending
  13. 00:38:607 (1) - Set finish at the ending
  14. 01:08:772 (2) - Remove whistle and set clap
  15. 01:09:940 (4) - Remove whistle and set clap
  16. 01:10:273 (5) - Move 3 grids down and 3 grids left to make a straight line
  17. 01:10:607 (6) - Remove whistle and set clap
  18. 01:27:939 (3) - Set whistle on the beginning

Hard

  1. 00:06:939 (1) - Set finish at the beginning
  2. 00:10:106 (3) - Remove clap at the ending
  3. 00:23:106 (2) - Remove clap at the beginning
  4. 00:23:773 (3) - Remove clap at the beginning
  5. 00:24:272 (4) - Remove clap at the beginning
  6. 00:32:607 (5) - Clap
  7. 00:44:773 (3) - Remove clap
  8. 00:48:940 (8) - Remove clap at the beginning and the ending and set finish to the end
  9. 00:57:940 (2) - Set clap at the beginning and remove clap in the middle
  10. 00:59:273 (6) - Clap
  11. 00:59:440 (7) - Remove Clap
  12. 01:02:106 (8) - Set clap at the ending
  13. 01:09:607 (4) - Remove whistle at the end and set clap at the end
  14. 01:10:607 (6) - Remove whistle and set clap
  15. 01:20:773 (6) - Remove clap
  16. 01:27:772 (5) - Flip horizontally and reverse selection (press ctrl+g and ctrl+h), then move it to x:240 Y:288 (The yellow numbers in the upper right corner)
  17. 01:28:272 (6) - Remove this and (7) and copy+paste 01:27:772 (5) after changing the fixes above. Then flip it horizontally (press ctrl+h) and move it to x:176 y:288
  18. 01:28:772 (8) - Move to x:208 y:352
    Hitsounds for the new part
  19. 01:26:939 (1) - Whistle
  20. 01:27:439 (4) - Whistle
  21. 01:27:772 (5) - Set whistle in the middle
  22. 01:28:272 (6) - Set whistle on the beginning
  23. 01:28:772 (7) - Whistle

luxoDeh wrote:

I think I love you! :D finally the hitsounds are perfect! thank you veeery veery much! there are only two things i don't understand... i delate the .osb fils... or i thougt i did it... so... what are exactly these .osb files? and what do you mean when you say unsnapped note? i can't find what's wrond whit the note you noticed :/ anyway thanks, thanks, thanks!
The .osb-file is an OsuStoryboard-File, it's to edit the storyboard like flashing bgs in nightcore maps or other bgs. And your map doesn't have a storyboard, so you don't need the file :)
Unsnapped notes are notes, that doesn't fit the timing. They aren't snapped on the timeline. When you change Offset or BPM the notes don't resnap automatically, you have to do that manually. Click on Timing and Resnapp all notes to fix that ;D


Ok, I think that's all :3 I would like to look again, but I think I listed all here, if you fix everything I can't find something then xD So call me again, when you're finished~

oook! thanks a lot again! XD all fixed now :3 really, thanks for all the time you spent on my map! :D
kurohana
520 posts
Joined October 2010
kurohana
Normal: 00:10:939 (5) - Remove the clap on the beginning :3
00:12:606 (2) - Remove the clap on the ending
00:24:772 (5) - Clap on the ending

Hard: 00:28:272 (1) - Finish
and 00:38:939 (1) - Finish at the beginning

Ok, do them and then the hitsounds are perfect <33
in my opinion *cough*

One little tipp:

Blue circle: There is a long white line , there you should set hitsound 'Finish', because that's a heavy beat (that's explained here viewtopic.php?f=10&t=20998) and mostly it fits best
Pink circle: I setted them on the small short white lines before and after the long white line. Here's a picture You should set hitsound 'Clap' on them, mostly it fits with the music :) If you can't set clap there, because there is no note or a note wouldn't fit with the music or would be too hard for Easy or Normal like in your diffs and especially here (00:28:272 (1) in your Easy :3) you can leave it empty or try to set a clap on a red line after that white line, but you should hear it first. If it sounds good you can leave it :D
White circle: I leave it often empty, but sometimes it sounds good to set a whistle there :3 But i use Soft-Hitsounds the most and that whistle is other then the normal xD

You don't have to set it always like this, the main thing is to set hitsounds at all xD
I hope this helped you a bit >< I can't explain things very good v.v" ...

luxoDeh wrote:

oook! thanks a lot again! XD all fixed now :3 really, thanks for all the time you spent on my map! :D
That's my job as a modder ♥ I'm here to help, and i really love it ^^
I really love to help newbies get their maps ranked, because that's really hard X____x I know by myself |D And I saw that at my best friend too, getting mods as a newbie is hard... Most modders want to mod good beatmaps by popular mappers (there isn't a lot to check...) to get kudosu easily (It's my thought of this...) I did that first too, but helping the one that needs help makes more fun <33
And I have to thank you that you'd fixed everything :D I wrote a lot, I wasn't sure if that wasn't too long sometimes Dx But thank you, really :) You are really nice ^^

And now, take this :D
luxoDeh
1,497 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

kurohana wrote:

Normal: 00:10:939 (5) - Remove the clap on the beginning :3
00:12:606 (2) - Remove the clap on the ending
00:24:772 (5) - Clap on the ending

Hard: 00:28:272 (1) - Finish
and 00:38:939 (1) - Finish at the beginning

Ok, do them and then the hitsounds are perfect <33
in my opinion *cough*

One little tipp:

Blue circle: There is a long white line , there you should set hitsound 'Finish', because that's a heavy beat (that's explained here http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=10&t=20998) and mostly it fits best
Pink circle: I setted them on the small short white lines before and after the long white line. Here's a picture You should set hitsound 'Clap' on them, mostly it fits with the music :) If you can't set clap there, because there is no note or a note wouldn't fit with the music or would be too hard for Easy or Normal like in your diffs and especially here (00:28:272 (1) in your Easy :3) you can leave it empty or try to set a clap on a red line after that white line, but you should hear it first. If it sounds good you can leave it :D
White circle: I leave it often empty, but sometimes it sounds good to set a whistle there :3 But i use Soft-Hitsounds the most and that whistle is other then the normal xD

You don't have to set it always like this, the main thing is to set hitsounds at all xD
I hope this helped you a bit >< I can't explain things very good v.v" ...

luxoDeh wrote:

oook! thanks a lot again! XD all fixed now :3 really, thanks for all the time you spent on my map! :D
That's my job as a modder ♥ I'm here to help, and i really love it ^^
I really love to help newbies get their maps ranked, because that's really hard X____x I know by myself |D And I saw that at my best friend too, getting mods as a newbie is hard... Most modders want to mod good beatmaps by popular mappers (there isn't a lot to check...) to get kudosu easily (It's my thought of this...) I did that first too, but helping the one that needs help makes more fun <33
And I have to thank you that you'd fixed everything :D I wrote a lot, I wasn't sure if that wasn't too long sometimes Dx But thank you, really :) You are really nice ^^

And now, take this :D
*_____* thanks!!!!! :D also thanks for your explanation about the hitsounds! :3
I'm happy that you modded my map! as you sayed not all the modders are happy to help newbie, i had a little experience also whit another of my maps... anyway you're really nice too! so... I really hope to rank this map and...thank you very mutch again! :)
Nanika133
192 posts
Joined August 2012
Nanika133
After one week, here is my mod :D

Easy:
00:12:273 (1,2) - Remove the points in the slider With this slider velocity and this circle size, it doesn't look good
00:22:939 (1,2) - Straighten them with 00:21:606 (3)?
00:57:273 (4) - Use distance snap


Normal:
01:08:606 - Add a note
01:08:773 (2,3) - Move by one half beat

Hard:
01:03:606 (4,5) - Maybe Ctrl+H
01:20:606 (5) - 3 grids up
01:23:522 (6) - Remove
01:23:772 - Add a note

Nicely mapped :D
kurohana
520 posts
Joined October 2010
kurohana

luxoDeh wrote:

*_____* thanks!!!!! :D also thanks for your explanation about the hitsounds! :3
I'm happy that you modded my map! as you sayed not all the modders are happy to help newbie, i had a little experience also whit another of my maps... anyway you're really nice too! so... I really hope to rank this map and...thank you very mutch again! :)
As I said, I do it because I ♥ it <33 If you need help at mapping feel free to ask me, I'm here to help :3
luxoDeh
1,497 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Nanika133 wrote:

After one week, here is my mod :D

Easy:
00:12:273 (1,2) - Remove the points in the slider With this slider velocity and this circle size, it doesn't look good
00:22:939 (1,2) - Straighten them with 00:21:606 (3)?
00:57:273 (4) - Use distance snap


Normal:
01:08:606 - Add a note
01:08:773 (2,3) - Move by one half beat

Hard:
01:03:606 (4,5) - Maybe Ctrl+H
01:20:606 (5) - 3 grids up
01:23:522 (6) - Remove
01:23:772 - Add a note

Nicely mapped :D
thanks for mod! :) quite all fixed u.u

kurohana wrote:

As I said, I do it because I ♥ it <33 If you need help at mapping feel free to ask me, I'm here to help :3
:D
Pereira006
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined October 2010
Pereira006
Hi !! thank m4m ! here my mod also kurohana is good person because this map is sexy lol anyway here

[Easy]

Hitsound:

good

Gameplay:

  1. 00:10:939 (3) - this slider really need align with 00:09:606 (1) that would good to gameplay if you fix this you need fix spacing after
  2. 00:17:273 (4) - need align with 00:15:939 (2) because i can see you style patterns after you have too many good align and this no? should align IMO to fix you patterns also if you fix this, carefully spacing
  3. 00:55:606 (2) - need grid 1 up to perfect align with 00:54:939 (1)
  4. 00:58:439 (2,3) - can grid 1 left ? because the (2) will be better align with 00:57:606 (1) in end slider and the (3) in start will be align with (1) in start so this would be good to gameplay IMO
  5. 01:20:939 (4) - lol grid 1 down to align with 01:20:606 (3)

simple, stuff cool

[Normal]

Hitsound:

  1. 01:08:606 (2) - you have the clap in end slider change to start slider to be consistency hitsound other diff's and you patterns previsou

cool

Gameplay:

  1. 00:57:606 (2) - try be more blanket with 00:58:939 (3) like this http://puu.sh/239jd would be nice to gameplay
  2. 01:00:273 (1,3) - i can see this are different shape and different align try delete (3) and copy the (1) then do it CTRL+H and CTRL+G and fix that align would be nice to gameplay like this http://puu.sh/239nV if you fix this you have carefully spacing and stack at 01:02:939 (1,2,3,4)
  3. 01:04:106 (3) - try more nice blanket with 01:04:939 (4)
  4. 01:09:939 (4,5,6) - boring this flow, try awesome flow like this http://puu.sh/239uV IMO
  5. 01:10:939 (1,3) - again this sliders are different is same happened at 01:00:273 (1,3) try same shape and fix align
  6. 01:17:606 - 01:18:939 (b) - this break is useless, remove it

stuff cool

[Hard]

hitsound:

perfect

Gameplay:

  1. 00:23:772 (3) - this broke visual my eyes, try align with 00:23:106 (2) because i can see this was almost align so better align if you do that you have carefully spacing at 00:24:272 (4,5)
  2. 00:27:606 (7) - grid 1 left to align with 00:26:939 (5) in start slider and fix spacing with 00:27:439 (6) so would be good when i test play
  3. 00:48:939 (8,1) - i can see they are different shape try same shape
  4. 01:04:106 (5) - grid 1 up to align with 01:03:606 (4)
  5. 01:17:606 - 01:18:939 (b) - again, useless, remove it

many check times, is stuff cool

Opinion about this map:

Simple map, they consistency, good job, star

Kurohana pro
[]
Nice map
Any question? ask me in-game i can explain better
Good luck and Bye bye !
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible
Hey!
You're the lucky one with the ticket ;D

Finally going to mod your map.

[Easy]

00:15:939 (2) - Place this straight to the begin of 3.
00:42:606 (2) - Don't really like the reverse of this, split it !
01:04:939 (4) - Press shift while placing it -> straight
01:20:939 (4) - ^

This diff seems nice!

[Normal]

00:08:606 (4) - Make this slider look the same as 2?
00:09:606 (1) - stack?
00:26:939 (4) - these reverses doesn't fit that much xD
00:34:606 (4) - delete this, and place this pattern instead: 00:33:606 (1,2) -
00:54:939 (3) - nc
01:03:939 (2) - stack on 3

On this diff, i suggest some more stacking. Also i don't always agree with the beat! Make it more repetitive, like i suggested once.

[Hard]

00:04:606 - penguinsss :DD
xDD

00:13:106 - Why don't you make this slider (00:12:606 (1) - ) again?
00:15:439 (2) - http://puu.sh/23yuP make them touch
01:23:439 (5,6,7) - you never used triplets in the whole song, why do you use them here?

In this diff, the beat is kinda weird. I really recommend to remap some parts, especially where you have things like 01:00:273 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this. They really don't fit the song. You could 1) change it, so it fits, or 2) add a circle, so it gets a stream. I recommend checking the whole diff, of course you can call me for a recheck, after you've done this. I like the placing though! Also, you can ask me if you need further help.

Also the spinner is very nice!

good luck x3
luxoDeh
1,497 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
luxoDeh
SPOILER

Pereira006 wrote:

Hi !! thank m4m ! here my mod also kurohana is good person because this map is sexy lol anyway here

[Easy]

Hitsound:

good

Gameplay:

  1. 00:10:939 (3) - this slider really need align with 00:09:606 (1) that would good to gameplay if you fix this you need fix spacing after
  2. 00:17:273 (4) - need align with 00:15:939 (2) because i can see you style patterns after you have too many good align and this no? should align IMO to fix you patterns also if you fix this, carefully spacing
  3. 00:55:606 (2) - need grid 1 up to perfect align with 00:54:939 (1)
  4. 00:58:439 (2,3) - can grid 1 left ? because the (2) will be better align with 00:57:606 (1) in end slider and the (3) in start will be align with (1) in start so this would be good to gameplay IMO
  5. 01:20:939 (4) - lol grid 1 down to align with 01:20:606 (3)

simple, stuff cool

[Normal]

Hitsound:

  1. 01:08:606 (2) - you have the clap in end slider change to start slider to be consistency hitsound other diff's and you patterns previsou

cool

Gameplay:

  1. 00:57:606 (2) - try be more blanket with 00:58:939 (3) like this http://puu.sh/239jd would be nice to gameplay
  2. 01:00:273 (1,3) - i can see this are different shape and different align try delete (3) and copy the (1) then do it CTRL+H and CTRL+G and fix that align would be nice to gameplay like this http://puu.sh/239nV if you fix this you have carefully spacing and stack at 01:02:939 (1,2,3,4)
  3. 01:04:106 (3) - try more nice blanket with 01:04:939 (4)
  4. 01:09:939 (4,5,6) - boring this flow, try awesome flow like this http://puu.sh/239uV IMO
  5. 01:10:939 (1,3) - again this sliders are different is same happened at 01:00:273 (1,3) try same shape and fix align
  6. 01:17:606 - 01:18:939 (b) - this break is useless, remove it

stuff cool

[Hard]

hitsound:

perfect

Gameplay:

  1. 00:23:772 (3) - this broke visual my eyes, try align with 00:23:106 (2) because i can see this was almost align so better align if you do that you have carefully spacing at 00:24:272 (4,5)
  2. 00:27:606 (7) - grid 1 left to align with 00:26:939 (5) in start slider and fix spacing with 00:27:439 (6) so would be good when i test play
  3. 00:48:939 (8,1) - i can see they are different shape try same shape
  4. 01:04:106 (5) - grid 1 up to align with 01:03:606 (4)
  5. 01:17:606 - 01:18:939 (b) - again, useless, remove it

many check times, is stuff cool

Opinion about this map:

Simple map, they consistency, good job, star

Kurohana pro
[]
Nice map
Any question? ask me in-game i can explain better
Good luck and Bye bye !

thanks for mod! all fixed, nothing to ask! good mod! :) and thanks for star! :D

SPOILER

Irreversible wrote:

Hey!
You're the lucky one with the ticket ;D

Finally going to mod your map.

[Easy]

00:15:939 (2) - Place this straight to the begin of 3.
00:42:606 (2) - Don't really like the reverse of this, split it !
01:04:939 (4) - Press shift while placing it -> straight
01:20:939 (4) - ^

This diff seems nice!

[Normal]

00:08:606 (4) - Make this slider look the same as 2?
00:09:606 (1) - stack?
00:26:939 (4) - these reverses doesn't fit that much xD
00:34:606 (4) - delete this, and place this pattern instead: 00:33:606 (1,2) -
00:54:939 (3) - nc
01:03:939 (2) - stack on 3

On this diff, i suggest some more stacking. Also i don't always agree with the beat! Make it more repetitive, like i suggested once.

[Hard]

00:04:606 - penguinsss :DD
xDD

00:13:106 - Why don't you make this slider (00:12:606 (1) - ) again?
00:15:439 (2) - http://puu.sh/23yuP make them touch
01:23:439 (5,6,7) - you never used triplets in the whole song, why do you use them here?

In this diff, the beat is kinda weird. I really recommend to remap some parts, especially where you have things like 01:00:273 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this. They really don't fit the song. You could 1) change it, so it fits, or 2) add a circle, so it gets a stream. I recommend checking the whole diff, of course you can call me for a recheck, after you've done this. I like the placing though! Also, you can ask me if you need further help.

Also the spinner is very nice!

good luck x3

thanks for mod! some fixed, some not, in normal diff i left some unstacked... i liked it more and in some points it was intentional u.u
anyway the hard diff had something strange in some part, right, I still have to check it, but maybe I'll call you for recheck when i've done! ;)
good mod anyway, thank you!
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,528 posts
Joined April 2012
neonat
Mod queue

Normal

Just some suggestions for rhythm
00:07:939 - add a note
00:35:272 - add a note here and 00:35:439, the gap there is quite empty
00:54:606 - add a note - lead-in to the subsequent 3 notes
01:28:439 - a possible note here


Hard

00:21:439 - add a note
00:24:272 (4,5) - let the rhythm be the same as 00:22:939 (1,2,3): let 00:24:272 (4) repeat one more time till 00:24:772, move 00:24:939 (5) so that it starts at 00:25:106 and ends at 00:25:272
01:01:606 (6) - looks too close to 01:01:272 (5)


Just take a look, it's not a must to change, just suggestions. I felt that the rhythm and flow at some parts were halted sometimes, with gaps with no notes placed. Good luck on your 1st map.
luxoDeh
1,497 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

neonat wrote:

Mod queue

Normal

Just some suggestions for rhythm
00:07:939 - add a note
00:35:272 - add a note here and 00:35:439, the gap there is quite empty
00:54:606 - add a note - lead-in to the subsequent 3 notes
01:28:439 - a possible note here


Hard

00:21:439 - add a note
00:24:272 (4,5) - let the rhythm be the same as 00:22:939 (1,2,3): let 00:24:272 (4) repeat one more time till 00:24:772, move 00:24:939 (5) so that it starts at 00:25:106 and ends at 00:25:272
01:01:606 (6) - looks too close to 01:01:272 (5)


Just take a look, it's not a must to change, just suggestions. I felt that the rhythm and flow at some parts were halted sometimes, with gaps with no notes placed. Good luck on your 1st map.
thanks for mod! :) some fixed, some not, in some parts, especially in normal, i'm afraid to make it too difficoult... nayway thank you!
Yuki-kun
568 posts
Joined December 2010
Yuki-kun
Star~ :p
Good luck :p
luxoDeh
1,497 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Yuki-kun wrote:

Star~ :p
Good luck :p
oh, thanks! *___*
Yuki-kun
568 posts
Joined December 2010
Yuki-kun

luxoDeh wrote:

Yuki-kun wrote:

Star~ :p
Good luck :p
oh, thanks! *___*
Actually your map is a bit square imo, but ignore it since i think it's your style :p
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Poggo
Hi from my modding queue~

[General]

• For full spin skin you shound add files: spinner-clear.png, spinner-spin.png, spinner-osu.png
• Spinner-circle.png's dimensions must be exactly 666x666 (currently 666x664)
• Plz use 30% volume, sounds much better

[Hard]

AR +1
DR +1

00:15:439(2,4) - stack it better
00:17:106 - add note here
00:26:272 - here better use triple too~ http://puu.sh/25B54 sounds more rhythmically
01:07:439 -add note here~ Sounds better for me

[Normal]

HD -2

00:12:606 - 1 grid down
00:26:939 - better remove 1 repeat and add note, or replace on 2 sliders 1/1 will be more playable
00:32:272(2,3,4) - uff better replace this notes on double slider, now it very hard to read
00:37:606 - here sounds better slider 1/1
00:39:272 - http://puu.sh/25BiV here should be this rhythm
00:42:939(4,5,6) - same on 00:32:272
00:47:439 - put this note on 00:47:272
00:52:939 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
01:01:606(3,1) - stack it better

Oh on this diff you have so many mistakes with rhythm~ Plz check it and better follow for music~

[Easy]

00:13:939(3,4) - it's hard to read for beginners, better replace on slider
00:14:939(1) - end slider here 00:15:606
00:16:939 - end slider here
00:25:939(1,2) - same on 00:13:939
00:32:272 - same on normal, replace on double slider
00:37:606 - here slider 1/1
00:38:939 - end on next white tick
00:41:606 - ^
00:46:939 - ^
00:48:272 - put here slider 2/1
00:49:606 - ^

oh plz check all kiai time~ Don't put and don't start or end notes and sliders on red ticks, it's not readable, and not playable for beginners~ It can confused~

Good luck~
luxoDeh
1,497 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Yuki-kun wrote:

Actually your map is a bit square imo, but ignore it since i think it's your style :p
yeah, i know, I hope to improve in my mapping style, but for now it's so... anyway thank you for the star :D
luxoDeh
1,497 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
luxoDeh
SPOILER

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi from my modding queue~

[General]

• For full spin skin you shound add files: spinner-clear.png, spinner-spin.png, spinner-osu.png
• Spinner-circle.png's dimensions must be exactly 666x666 (currently 666x664)
• Plz use 30% volume, sounds much better

[Hard]

AR +1
DR +1

00:15:439(2,4) - stack it better
00:17:106 - add note here
00:26:272 - here better use triple too~ http://puu.sh/25B54 sounds more rhythmically
01:07:439 -add note here~ Sounds better for me

[Normal]

HD -2

00:12:606 - 1 grid down
00:26:939 - better remove 1 repeat and add note, or replace on 2 sliders 1/1 will be more playable
00:32:272(2,3,4) - uff better replace this notes on double slider, now it very hard to read
00:37:606 - here sounds better slider 1/1
00:39:272 - http://puu.sh/25BiV here should be this rhythm
00:42:939(4,5,6) - same on 00:32:272
00:47:439 - put this note on 00:47:272
00:52:939 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
01:01:606(3,1) - stack it better

Oh on this diff you have so many mistakes with rhythm~ Plz check it and better follow for music~

[Easy]

00:13:939(3,4) - it's hard to read for beginners, better replace on slider
00:14:939(1) - end slider here 00:15:606
00:16:939 - end slider here
00:25:939(1,2) - same on 00:13:939
00:32:272 - same on normal, replace on double slider
00:37:606 - here slider 1/1
00:38:939 - end on next white tick
00:41:606 - ^
00:46:939 - ^
00:48:272 - put here slider 2/1
00:49:606 - ^

oh plz check all kiai time~ Don't put and don't start or end notes and sliders on red ticks, it's not readable, and not playable for beginners~ It can confused~

Good luck~

ook! thank you! :) quite all fixed... the spinner should be ok now... i think... and for easy diff... maybe you're right thet in some parts is not good to use red thik whit some nots but, I feel that if not there them don't follow the time... hm... i'll think on how to solve this... anyway thanks a lot! ;)
VTC
767 posts
Joined October 2010
VTC
HELLO ^_^

MODDING START ~


[Easy]


00:07:606 (2) - add clap sound

00:10:234 - ^

00:20:939 (2) - ^

00:30:272 (3) - ^

00:30:272 (3) - ^ ( add on tail. )

00:46:273 (3) - ^

00:46:606 - add circle (?)

00:52:939 (1) - add clap

00:54:606 - add slider to 00:55:606 - like this - > delete ( 00:54:939 (1) - ) , ( 00:55:606 (2) - )

00:55:606 (2) - add clap

01:03:606 (2) - ^

01:06:273 (2) - ^

01:11:606 (3) - position change - > x412 y360

[Normal]

00:06:939 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this - >
SPOILER

00:09:606 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ->
SPOILER

pretty good

[Hard]


00:08:439 (4) - use Ctrl + G

00:23:772 (3) - ^

00:34:439 (3) - ^

00:47:773 (3) - ^

00:48:439 (5) - add clap

00:49:272 - ^

00:50:606 - ^

00:51:272 - ^

00:51:939 - ^

01:09:272 - add circle



^_^ GO FOR IT
luxoDeh
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Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
luxoDeh
SPOILER

VocaloidTACU wrote:

^_^ GO FOR IT

thanks for mod... qiote all fixed u.u
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
General:

This folder's size is 24,5 MB, which is greater than the allowed size of 20.0 MB with video. o.o! im not sure if this a problem

Easy:

00:55:606 (2,4) - stack they perfect
01:13:606 this should finish here 01:17:606 if you are following vocals
01:18:939 add finish
01:26:939 this should finish here 01:28:939

Normal:

01:18:939 add finish
00:45:939 add circle so weird pause
00:52:939 overlap with spinner hitburst move it to other place
01:01:606 (3,1) - stack they perfect
01:13:606 same as easy

Hard:

00:14:939 (1,2) - distance error i dont know if you do this on purpose but i feel weird when i play it

Nice map :3
luxoDeh
1,497 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Natsu wrote:

General:

This folder's size is 24,5 MB, which is greater than the allowed size of 20.0 MB with video. o.o! im not sure if this a problem

Easy:

00:55:606 (2,4) - stack they perfect
01:13:606 this should finish here 01:17:606 if you are following vocals
01:18:939 add finish
01:26:939 this should finish here 01:28:939

Normal:

01:18:939 add finish
00:45:939 add circle so weird pause
00:52:939 overlap with spinner hitburst move it to other place
01:01:606 (3,1) - stack they perfect
01:13:606 same as easy

Hard:

00:14:939 (1,2) - distance error i dont know if you do this on purpose but i feel weird when i play it

Nice map :3
thanks for mod! fixed the most. and in hard diff it was on purpose u.u
Aurele
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Aurele
Easy
The easy is pretty good as it is. Further work by yourself can be done.

Normal
  1. 00:17:606 (1,3) - These sliders are not aligned, make sure to make them aligned.
  2. 00:33:272 - A clap should be added here to keep the consistency with the previous upbeats sounds, which are claps.
  3. 00:37:606 (2) - Reverse the sounds from the beginning to the end, the clap is supposed to be placed on an upbeat, not a downbeat.
  4. 01:02:939 - I think a finish would sound better here to emphasize the louder sounds in this part of the song.
Pretty nice difficulty.

Hard
  1. 00:11:939 (8,1) - You've placed a slider on an upbeat and finishes on a downbeat, but on 00:12:106 there's a strong noise and you're missing it. I am suggesting you to make something else like, replace the slider (8) by two circles and a slider that will start on 00:12:272 and finishes on 00:12:606, also delete the slider (1) and add circles to 00:12:772 and 00:13:106
    Example
  2. 00:24:772 (5) - It would be looking better if this circle was making a curve with the previous/next objects. Right now, it's looking.. straight and since the next object is a curved slider, I think it would fit better. Move this circle to x:232 y:208
  3. 00:25:939 (3,1) - You've added a clap on the circle 1, which you shouldn't since most of your claps were added on upbeats, to keep the consistency, it's preferred if you delete it. Also, It would be sounding better if these circles were replaced by a simple slider.
  4. 00:26:939 (4,6) - Are they supposed to be aligned? If yes, make sure to make them aligned on the same x:axis.
  5. 00:53:772 - Since you have added a clap on 00:56:439, I think you could bbe adding one here too.
  6. 01:04:106 (5) - You should be moving this slider one grid up, to make sure to align it with the end of the previous slider.
  7. 01:09:272 - I think you're missing a clap here to keep the consistency with your previous upbeats sounds.
  8. 01:22:939 (4,5,6,7) - This is sounding and playing awkwardly. I am suggesting you to delete the reverse arrow of the slider 4 and delete these three triplets since they aren't fitting the music and it's the only place where you've added triplets. Also, by doing this, you could be adding a slider that starts on 01:23:272 and finishes on the next white line. For an example, like this
    Example
  9. 01:25:106 - You aren't keeping the polarity in here, which makes it sounds weird. Add an object to 01:25:106, for an example, stack a circle with the next circle or delete the circle (3) and replace it with a slider, replace the slider (2) with a slider, you can do anything here.
  10. 01:27:772 (5) - I am suggesting you to add a new combo here to make it fit with the background sounds.
This map is pretty solid, get some more mods and try to look at the whole mapset by yourself, when you really think it's worthy to be bubbled, catch me.
luxoDeh
1,497 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Gabe wrote:

Easy
The easy is pretty good as it is. Further work by yourself can be done.

Normal
  1. 00:17:606 (1,3) - These sliders are not aligned, make sure to make them aligned.
  2. 00:33:272 - A clap should be added here to keep the consistency with the previous upbeats sounds, which are claps.
  3. 00:37:606 (2) - Reverse the sounds from the beginning to the end, the clap is supposed to be placed on an upbeat, not a downbeat.
  4. 01:02:939 - I think a finish would sound better here to emphasize the louder sounds in this part of the song.
Pretty nice difficulty.

Hard
  1. 00:11:939 (8,1) - You've placed a slider on an upbeat and finishes on a downbeat, but on 00:12:106 there's a strong noise and you're missing it. I am suggesting you to make something else like, replace the slider (8) by two circles and a slider that will start on 00:12:272 and finishes on 00:12:606, also delete the slider (1) and add circles to 00:12:772 and 00:13:106
    Example
  2. 00:24:772 (5) - It would be looking better if this circle was making a curve with the previous/next objects. Right now, it's looking.. straight and since the next object is a curved slider, I think it would fit better. Move this circle to x:232 y:208
  3. 00:25:939 (3,1) - You've added a clap on the circle 1, which you shouldn't since most of your claps were added on upbeats, to keep the consistency, it's preferred if you delete it. Also, It would be sounding better if these circles were replaced by a simple slider.
  4. 00:26:939 (4,6) - Are they supposed to be aligned? If yes, make sure to make them aligned on the same x:axis.
  5. 00:53:772 - Since you have added a clap on 00:56:439, I think you could bbe adding one here too.
  6. 01:04:106 (5) - You should be moving this slider one grid up, to make sure to align it with the end of the previous slider.
  7. 01:09:272 - I think you're missing a clap here to keep the consistency with your previous upbeats sounds.
  8. 01:22:939 (4,5,6,7) - This is sounding and playing awkwardly. I am suggesting you to delete the reverse arrow of the slider 4 and delete these three triplets since they aren't fitting the music and it's the only place where you've added triplets. Also, by doing this, you could be adding a slider that starts on 01:23:272 and finishes on the next white line. For an example, like this
    Example
  9. 01:25:106 - You aren't keeping the polarity in here, which makes it sounds weird. Add an object to 01:25:106, for an example, stack a circle with the next circle or delete the circle (3) and replace it with a slider, replace the slider (2) with a slider, you can do anything here.
  10. 01:27:772 (5) - I am suggesting you to add a new combo here to make it fit with the background sounds.
This map is pretty solid, get some more mods and try to look at the whole mapset by yourself, when you really think it's worthy to be bubbled, catch me.
thank you very much for mod! I see you also changed your profiule image XD (penguins :3 ) anyway all fixed! I'll get some more mods and then I'll call you back as you sayd! thanks!! :D
japan0413
43 posts
Joined June 2012
japan0413
nice song :)
luxoDeh
1,497 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
luxoDeh
*____* oww! I'm really happy you played my map! :D :D
jyu
1,336 posts
Joined August 2012
jyu
Hi ^^ m4m from your mod queue
I hope this will helps

General
The audio lead-in is unnecessary, imo, since you didn't map the intro

Hard
OD +1

00:25:939 (1) - remove nc
00:26:939 (6) - add nc (big white line)
00:30:272 (7) - move up one grid

Normal
00:08:272 (4) - move up one grid

this diff is great ^^

Easy
00:54:606 (1) - i found this kinda weird, imo. How about this

anyway this diff is also great =w=

useless bonus

this was my second try actually because i forgot to export my first replay fkhjdk

if you bother to download the replay http://puu.sh/2hwZd

Anyway, star!!
Good luck with your ranking~
luxoDeh
1,497 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

Hi ^^ m4m from your mod queue
I hope this will helps

General
The audio lead-in is unnecessary, imo, since you didn't map the intro

Hard
OD +1

00:25:939 (1) - remove nc
00:26:939 (6) - add nc (big white line)
00:30:272 (7) - move up one grid

Normal
00:08:272 (4) - move up one grid

this diff is great ^^

Easy
00:54:606 (1) - i found this kinda weird, imo. How about this

anyway this diff is also great =w=

useless bonus

this was my second try actually because i forgot to export my first replay fkhjdk

if you bother to download the replay http://puu.sh/2hwZd

Anyway, star!!
Good luck with your ranking~
thank you very much! :D also for the star and the replay (so happy ^.^) :3 I'll mod your map today but before I have some school stuff to do too DD: (sad story :( )
Entreal
136 posts
Joined July 2011
Entreal
OMG M4M QUEUE FROM YOURS LETS GO, caps :D

Easy
00:08:272 - Put this slider in symmetry in the y-axis
00:21:606 - Move to 324|204, makes it to the middle of those two circles
00:32:772 - Clap here, just like the the way you did in the previous
00:38:106 - ^
Overall, Pretty good.

Normal
00:32:772 - Clap, just like the way you did in the previous
00:46:939 - Move a pixel down, makes it look symmetric to previous note


Hard
00:25:939 - Clap, following the pattern you're doing
00:26:606 - ^

Dang, i don't feel like theres anything more that i need to say. Good map. and Good luck!
luxoDeh
1,497 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Entreal wrote:

OMG M4M QUEUE FROM YOURS LETS GO, caps :D

Easy
00:08:272 - Put this slider in symmetry in the y-axis
00:21:606 - Move to 324|204, makes it to the middle of those two circles
00:32:772 - Clap here, just like the the way you did in the previous
00:38:106 - ^
Overall, Pretty good.

Normal
00:32:772 - Clap, just like the way you did in the previous
00:46:939 - Move a pixel down, makes it look symmetric to previous note


Hard
00:25:939 - Clap, following the pattern you're doing
00:26:606 - ^

Dang, i don't feel like theres anything more that i need to say. Good map. and Good luck!
thank you for mod! :) all fixed exept for the claps on easy and normal... i don't feel they follow the ritch :/ aniway I'll mod you map now ;)
AsprikaQ
AsprikaQ
I'm not really good at this but okay I'll try my best! :)

All suggestion! Overall map is well done so sorry if my mod is too less.

[Easy]

HP and AR both -1 (?)

00:08:272 (3) - Switch clap from reverse to tail
00:30:272 (3) - Add Clap (?)
00:30:939 (1) - Add Finish on slider head
00:48:273 (3) - Clap looks awkward here
00:54:606 (1) - Start at 00:54:939 (1) - is better
01:11:606 (3) - 1 Grid to right
01:12:273 (4) - Make 2/1 slider is better http://puu.sh/2npSU

[Normal]

Normal with 4 star is enough. Try CS: 3 HP: 3 AR: 4 OD: 3

00:10:606 (4) - How about make it like this http://puu.sh/2npms
00:45:939 (3) - Maybe move to x:464 y:356
00:47:273 (1) - Switch clap from tail to head
00:50:273 (1) - For normal, imo, start too fast. At least, start from 00:50:439 (1) please.
00:53:272 (2) - Add note (?)
00:54:772 (4) - Add note (?)
00:55:939 (4) - Add note (?)
01:02:939 (1) - Stack here is not really good. I suggest move below (4) with vertical slider.
01:09:939 (4) - Change to this http://puu.sh/2npGw (?)


[Hard]

00:10:106 (3) - Clap slider head (?)
00:10:772 (5) - Clap slider tail (?) and remove Clap from head
00:17:606 (1) - Add Finish slider head (?)
00:27:606 (3) - All clap at reverse (?)
00:33:606 (1) - Add Finish (?)
00:36:272 (1) - Finish on slider head (?)
00:43:439 (6) - Clap (?)
00:43:773 (8) - Clap (?)
00:46:106 (6) - Clap (?)
00:46:439 (8) - Clap (?)
01:10:106 (6) - Better add 1/1 slider here and delete 01:10:273 (6)
01:26:939 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - How about move to the centre so it looks more beautiful.

P.S. I think if you mute slider-slide sound, it might sounds better 8-)
luxoDeh
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Topic Starter
luxoDeh
SPOILER

AsprikaQ wrote:

I'm not really good at this but okay I'll try my best! :)

All suggestion! Overall map is well done so sorry if my mod is too less.

[Easy]

HP and AR both -1 (?)

00:08:272 (3) - Switch clap from reverse to tail I prefere leave the hitsound as they are, I think they are ok in this way
00:30:272 (3) - Add Clap (?)
00:30:939 (1) - Add Finish on slider head
00:48:273 (3) - Clap looks awkward here
00:54:606 (1) - Start at 00:54:939 (1) - is better this is ok, also other people suggested this
01:11:606 (3) - 1 Grid to right ok
01:12:273 (4) - Make 2/1 slider is better http://puu.sh/2npSU I prefere leave it as it is

[Normal]

Normal with 4 star is enough. Try CS: 3 HP: 3 AR: 4 OD: 3 that's good

00:10:606 (4) - How about make it like this http://puu.sh/2npms not bad, but I'll keep it as it is
00:45:939 (3) - Maybe move to x:464 y:356 that's ok
00:47:273 (1) - Switch clap from tail to head here too, I prefere leave hitsounds as they are, but sometimes there are good suggestions ^.^
00:50:273 (1) - For normal, imo, start too fast. At least, start from 00:50:439 (1) please. ok
00:53:272 (2) - Add note (?) I prefere to don't add more notse, I don't want to make it more difficult
00:54:772 (4) - Add note (?)
00:55:939 (4) - Add note (?)
01:02:939 (1) - Stack here is not really good. I suggest move below (4) with vertical slider. I don't really understand this
01:09:939 (4) - Change to this http://puu.sh/2npGw (?) good suggestion, I'll change it if someone other say it


[Hard]

00:10:106 (3) - Clap slider head (?) for hitsounds the same as normal
00:10:772 (5) - Clap slider tail (?) and remove Clap from head
00:17:606 (1) - Add Finish slider head (?)
00:27:606 (3) - All clap at reverse (?)
00:33:606 (1) - Add Finish (?)
00:36:272 (1) - Finish on slider head (?)
00:43:439 (6) - Clap (?)
00:43:773 (8) - Clap (?)
00:46:106 (6) - Clap (?)
00:46:439 (8) - Clap (?)
01:10:106 (6) - Better add 1/1 slider here and delete 01:10:273 (6)
01:26:939 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - How about move to the centre so it looks more beautiful. ok, let's see if it's ok like this

P.S. I think if you mute slider-slide sound, it might sounds better 8-) hm... I don't really know how to change this XD

thank you for modding! :) I'll mod your map as soon as possible ;)
AsprikaQ
AsprikaQ

luxoDeh wrote:

P.S. I think if you mute slider-slide sound, it might sounds better 8-) hm... I don't really know how to change this XD
Same with when you add custom hitsound. :D

http://puu.sh/2nQu8 : Add this file to your song's folder (I adjusted the name already so just simply add it)

No KD please.

P.S. if you want to used it in kiai time too, change Inheriting Section to Normal Custom 2 and then make one more of the file i gave you and rename it to normal-sliderslide2
luxoDeh
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Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

AsprikaQ wrote:

luxoDeh wrote:

P.S. I think if you mute slider-slide sound, it might sounds better 8-) hm... I don't really know how to change this XD
Same with when you add custom hitsound. :D

http://puu.sh/2nQu8 : Add this file to your song's folder (I adjusted the name already so just simply add it)

No KD please.

P.S. if you want to used it in kiai time too, change Inheriting Section to Normal Custom 2 and then make one more of the file i gave you and rename it to normal-sliderslide2
Oh! thank you very much! :D I'm still not sure if keeping it or not, maybe I only have to get familiar with the new sound XD I'll see also what other people say u.u Anyway it will be very usefull also for other maps, so, thank you! :)
buhei
567 posts
Joined February 2012
buhei
hi luxoDeh~ from your modding queue

[Easy]
00:52:939 (1,2,1,2,3) - the rhythm is so strange, add a note at 00:54:606 ?
00:59:772 - add a note
i think kiai part need revising..

[Normal]
00:14:939 (1,2) - don't look good
add a note at 00:39:606 or 00:39:772 plz
00:53:272 - add a note
add a note at 00:54:606 or 00:54:772
the same as Easy

[Hard]
00:15:439 (2) - keep the spacing
00:34:439 (3) - Ctrl+G and let it be farther from (2)
add notes at 00:53:939 , 00:54:272 , 00:56:939 and 00:57:439
kiai part can be harder than other parts so don't be afraid to add notes

good luck~
luxoDeh
1,497 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

buhei wrote:

hi luxoDeh~ from your modding queue

[Easy]
00:52:939 (1,2,1,2,3) - the rhythm is so strange, add a note at 00:54:606 ? hm... I'll keep it
00:59:772 - add a note that's ok
i think kiai part need revising..

[Normal]
00:14:939 (1,2) - don't look good no, I'll keep it as it is
add a note at 00:39:606 or 00:39:772 plz I changed this
00:53:272 - add a note ok
add a note at 00:54:606 or 00:54:772 I tryed something
the same as Easy

[Hard]
00:15:439 (2) - keep the spacing no, it was ok this way
00:34:439 (3) - Ctrl+G and let it be farther from (2) ok
add notes at 00:53:939 , 00:54:272 , 00:56:939 and 00:57:439 hm... I prefer leave it as it is or the spacing and pattern will be too different :/
kiai part can be harder than other parts so don't be afraid to add notes

good luck~
thank you for mod! I'll mod your map as soon as possible ;)
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