1. Easy (4.25 stars, 118 notes)
2. Hard (4.95 stars, 298 notes)
3. Lunatic (5 stars, 510 notes)
4. Normal (4.73 stars, 189 notes)

ALL DONE

Takuma wrote:

This song was made by REDALiCE, not IOSYS.
Please rename the author to REDALiCE only.

Lokamp wrote:

I think I've already saw it in a Super Mario video on youtube... MAYBE it's not the same thing...

Easy
[00:32:010] in the yellow combo, switch all whistles into finish sounds might be a little too much for the intro, but done anyway
[00:40:934] a finish also here...done
[00:46:204] ... and here! done
[00:48:692] whistle here (or other sounds...) put a clap there
[00:51:587] another finish here done
[00:56:897] like upper! done
[01:12:924] finish here and whistle on the next beat not done
[01:18:337] whistle also here! not done
[01:44:685] clap on the final white beat done

Normal
[00:40:741] finish here... done
[00:46:028] ... and here... done
[00:51:388] ... and here... done
[00:56:738] ... and here! done

Hard
[00:57:169] make this spinner shorter... made it 1/2 shorter
[01:17:332] clap ALL the red combo series done

Insane
[01:45: 660] from now until the end, follow an ideal "rhythm chart" to cover the speedup section, like this:
normal, normal, clap, normal; normal, normal, clap, normal, and so on. (consider the elevate BPM!) done.

That's all! (whew, ...)

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Taboo tears me up. ;-;

[Normal]:
00:29:16 (1) - These claps sound lonely. They would be fine if there some claps around them or something. If not, then remove them (Even if it's inconsistent, but it's not that much because the claps really do kick in on the normal sound-set) removed
00:46:50 (1) - So why is this a new combo? ;o fixed, just 1 new combo now
01:42:50 (1) - Same as above. ^
01:56:00 (4) - Maybe you can put this below the (3) slider? If you do, the midpoint of that slider will do. (This is purely optional) ill keep it as is

[Insane]:
00:19:50 (6,7,8) - Lonely claps are lonely. removed
00:24:83 (6,7,8) - Same as above~ ^
00:32:00 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I wonder if I can argue about the absence of claps here. added them in th match the beats before
00:43:16 (4,8) - Move 1 to the right on Grid Level 3. fixed

Very creative on [Insane]. Props to you on that. ^^

Star <3

whymeman wrote:

Some of the errors that are posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to whichever suggestion seems fit.

[Easy](Done)

00:38:66 (1,2,3,4) - If you move this section back a bit, you'll be able to fix the angle of the slider (4). fixed?

Not sure if this could be called [Easy], but I guess its as easy as this map can get? im afraid it is.

[Normal] (Done)

Looks good so far. sweet

[Hard] (Done)

00:07:33 (5,6,7) - Linked or not linked? not linked i assume
00:51:16 (10,11) - Broken link. fixed
01:02:00 (5,6,7) - Is this supposed to be linked or unlinked as well? unlinked, yes

Make sure the Distance Snap didn't fool you when it comes to setting the shapes of the combos.

[Lunatic] (Done)

01:24:00 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Not sure if back-to-back spinners could be ranked. And the last 4 goes by quite fast.... it should be rankable
01:54:83 (1,1) - Fast spinners.... never realized auto couldn't +2000 them o.O

Sticky Note: Very epic map. Though [Lunatic] is very insane and I couldn't keep up even from watching in editor x_x . Nice map overall but might want to get the spinner thing checked out before pushing this map to be ranked. Most people would used the 300+2000 bonus rule with the spinners. Also, don't forget to add something for the Source and Tags. again, i never realized that auto couldn't +2000 them, so replaced with longer spinners, and short spinners at the end completely removed. also, source/tags added

Star for you. <3

Alace wrote:

offset +12ms
resnap all notes by 1/4 divisor

you use 1/6 divisors in 01:10~01:30 area
for example
<Lunatic>
01:10:66 (1,2,3) - they are 3/4 divisors
01:12:00 (1,2,3) - ^

Plz fix it in ALL DIFFs

really nice mapset

Alace wrote:

offset +12ms
resnap all notes by 1/4 divisor done

you use 1/6 divisors in 01:10~01:30 area
for example
<Lunatic>
01:10:66 (1,2,3) - they are 3/4 divisors
01:12:00 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed? i hope. personally i thought it was fine before

Plz fix it in ALL DIFFs

really nice mapset <3

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Timing]

Offset and BPM fine.

[Easy]

4,5 stars for an easy map argh, is a bit much. not sure how it managed to get a star rating so high

00:14:50 (3) - Move on other place this note, is hard to read for new players. done

This difficulty is normal , not easy T_T guess i made the diffs a bit too hard. too late now.

[Normal]

00:38:66 (3) - New combo. done
01:10:91 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - No jumps on normal please. i disagree. ill wait for more opinions on it before changing

[Hard]

00:38:66 (3) - See normal. done

[Lunatic]

00:38:66 (3) - See normal. done
01:12:66 (1) - Too close from (3). done

Symbolic wrote:

Mod on request :]

[Easy]

Too hard for Easy. too late to change it drastically. it'll just have to be a hard easy

00:14:51 (3) - Remove this note. done
00:48:01 (3,4,5,6,7) - Too hard for Easy imo. replaced with a slider
00:56:67 (4) - Extend this slider 1/2 beat. done
01:20:67 (2,3,4,5,6) - Too hard for Easy imo. replaced with slider
01:44:01 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ ^
01:52:67 (4) - Extend this slider 1/2 beat. done

[Normal]

Some parts are too hard for Normal imo. guess it'll just have to be a hard normal

[Hard]

00:10:34 (x) - Add a note here. done
00:50:01 (5) - Pretty invisible slider. moved it across a lil bit so the 2 slider ends meet. it looks more clear that its a slider now
01:05:01 (x) - Add a note here. done

[Lunatic]

01:45:34 (1) - Speed-up is out of place imo. i'll keep it as is.


Very nice map, starred <3

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Easy:
00:33:34 (5) - nazi post: move this up one notch (3) to make this beat the same distance from 4 that 3 is
I don't really like how 1/4 of this map is basically breaks, but it is way too late to change that. done, and yeah. but a lot of people who modded this said that easy was too hard anyway, which i disagree with

Normal:
00:10:01 (5) - can you make this vertical like the 5 in the previous combo that would screw the spacing up between this and the (1) ahead, so not done
00:12:67 (5) - (if you applied the previous one) make this horizontal ^
00:32:01 (1) - nazi post:make this parallel to 2 looks fine to me

Hard:
00:10:67 (1,2,3) - nazi post: the spacing between 1 and 2 is different than the spacing between 2 and 3 (note: the distance between 3 and 4 is is the same as the spacing between 2 and 3) done
00:49:01 (1) - align with 11? no. i'd rather keep it aligned with (2) and (3)
01:05:34 (1,2,3) - same as 00:10:67 (1,2,3) done

Lunatic:
01:55:17 (1,2,3) - make this like your hard? done

I think it is a little late to nazi, so I only pointed out a few things. Star. ^^

Shinde wrote:

Easy
Nothinggg.

Normal
01:14:67 (3) - What? It's off the map. D: fixed

Hard
00:07:34 (5) - New combo? Not sure how that new spacing-new combo rule works. no need for a new combo here, no spacing change
00:12:67 (5) - ^ ^
01:03:43 (5) - ^ ^
01:07:34 (5) - ^ ^
00:14:34 (3/4) - You pixel aligned 3, but not 4. Same applies to 01:09:01 if you decide to pixel align these. fixed
00:40:01 (5) - New combo? fixed
00:43:67 (6) - New combo starting here instead of following note? not done. i wanted it to start when the next segment started.
Also, some of the sliders are angled slightly different than others, even when they're slanting on the same direction. Ex. This 6 doesn't match up with next combo's 8, and 1 doesn't match up with 4, 7, or 9. Same advice applies at 00:54:34 and 01:45:345 as well. Copypasta would be cool here followed up with realign. not done. i don't think many people will notice that when they play the map unless they try.
00:49:01 - Could move this entire combo up and it'd be aligned with the end of previous combo. I think this looks slightly nicer. fixed
00:50:01 (5) - Right one? fixed
00:58:84 (1,2,3,4) - I think you could add whistle/clap hitsounds here, I was thinking whistle on all 4, to kind of give it a beat. i think adding finishes sound alright, so done
01:13:34 (1,2,5,6) - Realign this combo? Some things are a little off. im happy with it as is

Insane
00:00:00 to 01:56:012 - What? heh

I ran out of mod steam after I did hard because that took like half an hour, then I proceeded into learning to make a custom hitcircle/overlay for like two hours. Background inspired me to makeeee.. This. *points down* I dunno if you'd like it, but I grew rather fond of it on this map. Try it out and tell me what you think I suppose. I think that's it, I hope I didn't forget everything. Star'd. <3. i kinda like the hitcircles. a little bland, but they're nice. added

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
00:10:67 (1,2) - make these parallel done
song has too much break people have been telling me that this is too hard for an easy, so i don't wanna map too much more
01:18:34 (2) - whistle done


[Normal]
00:32:01 (1,2) - make these parallel done
00:34:51 (1) - hitsound plz put a finish on


[Hard]
i notice a lot of your "straight" sliders are slightly crooked - y'might wanna work on that took a look through. fixed a few that i noticed. tbh i don't think it'll be too noticable in gameplay though


[Lunatic]
00:36:01 (1) - hitsound plz put a finish on

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- Easy:
fine

- Normal:
00:10:67 (1) - i'd move that 1 square to the left (design matters ) done
01:34:67 (1,2,3) - I'd move that 1 square down (same design matter) this one's already perfectly aligned on my screen

- Hard:
01:55:01 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this stack looks so ugly... D: How about moving it a bit down and right? It would start at the center of the screen and look better moved so its as centre as i can get it

- Lunatic:
CRAZY xD ;)
01:12:67 (1) - why new combo here and 01:15:34 (4) - not also here? (Imo it's better to remove it from 01:12:67 (1)) removed
01:55:01 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - same as Hard

Cool map and nothing bad to report, Star'd ^^ <3