LuigiHann wrote:

Looks good to me. Finally restoring that bubble

Edit: Wait, no. Easy is still using the old timingpoints. Easy needs this timing too so I can re-bubble it

LuigiHann wrote:

Everything seems to be in order now. Snapping, breaks, all okay.

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Hard]
04:22:81 (1,1,1) - why????

AdvanceBoy wrote:

Fixed. Thanks!

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Hard]
04:22:81 (1,1,1) - why????

I really like that part, but for no apparent reason, a lot of people have a problem with that

LuigiHann wrote:

AdvanceBoy wrote:

Fixed. Thanks!

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Hard]
04:22:81 (1,1,1) - why????

I really like that part, but for no apparent reason, a lot of people have a problem with that

I think they're okay. Although now that I look at them again, looks like you need to resnap them so they end properly on red ticks. I also think it would be better if they started on red ticks as well, because the 1/8 snap is a bit icky all around.

eee wrote:

I've seen this around for a while now, about time to mod, ya know
this song is cool, yeah
eeemod GO!!!

[All Difficulties]
There are some unused timing sections. My observations may be incorrect, but it seems to me like they are unused.
Examples Include: 19,460 [no kiai, no volume change, and land on no correct tick???(as in a volume change that is supposed to land before a tick)] ~ 19,950 ~ 50,670 ~~~
if there is a reason, please let me know, maybe it's some special technique or some rule I'm forgetting.
not sure if judging somebody's "useless" timing sections is necessarily a problem with a map. So probably you don't have to change a thang. Hmmm... Yes, those timing sections are useless, I change the volume but I forgot delete then, sorry, but also... LuigiHann don't delete all those timing sections when he's fix the Ki Times, but anyway, Fixed!

eeedit: seems like somebody tagged those along with the SB. . . . . . . idk why? or supposedly intentional kiai

[Easy]
the "break" problem in [Normal] is not a big problem in either difficulties, but here, I don't think it matters as much as [Normal], since the map is 2 minutes so?

01:40:41 (3) - new combo? Sure

[Normal]
you can probably use one more break here for a 3 minute map, in my opinion, here's a suggestion: 01:50:165 (x) and/or 02:55:514 (x) Sure, why not?

02:58:68 (2) - I guess this can pass, I think it should go 1/4 later though, but I had no problem with it in play Sounds good
03:00:63 (2) - ^ ^


[Hard]
01:46:50 (2) - does this go 1/4 tick later? Hmmm... Sounds good not sure, I hate blue ticks as much as the next guy.
01:54:798 (x) - note here. . . . . . "When birds went flyin' at THE speeed of sound." I think it goes with the "The" Added
02:26:25 (2) - finish on the first hit? naz-eee imo, note that I'm am not the best at hitsounds Here... Yes
02:41:85 (2) - ^? Here... I don't think so...


I like it, any objections are welcome, ya know
it's good for a first map, that is, it's been modded tons of times.
star*

Mafiamaster wrote:

Your notes are terribly early.
Try adding +40ms to the offset. (3,646)
Map seems good.
Nice light SB.
Good Job!

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

[Easy]:
Nothing truly wrong with it...But in my opinion, it's a bit dull. Then again, not many people can make great easy difficulties. xD If you have some free time, maybe you can make it look a bit nicer. The song really don't help, buut, I will try!

[Normal]:
00:19:00 (1,2) - Space (2) more far out. Fix
01:56:78 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - A bit confusing for a [Normal], don'tcha think? Awww.... ok... fix

[Hard]:
04:23:31 (1,1,1,1) - Overlapping spinners? No thanks. D: T.T... (this is ridiculous...)

I think I was supposed to say more...But I kind of had some other thinking in my mind. x3

It's pretty good now. I guess we should get this a bit overwith and have you get some cooler mappin'~

Timing is a bit fishy for me...Well, except for the end maybe. I'm sorry I can't help more there. Hmm... maybe the map needs multiples timing seccions... I don't know, this timing it's very strange! At the end, fit perfecly, but in the rest of the song is pretty weird... I guest I try to find a better BPM for rest of the song...

[Hard]:
04:23:31 (1,1,1,1) - Overlapping spinners? No thanks. D: T.T... (this is ridiculous...)

AdvanceBoy wrote:

LuigiHann wrote:

I think they're okay. Although now that I look at them again, looks like you need to resnap them so they end properly on red ticks. I also think it would be better if they started on red ticks as well, because the 1/8 snap is a bit icky all around.

...There are where I put that's spinners... IN THE FIRST PLACE!!!!!! But of course... Everybody have to give me another way to put 'em, right!?!

LuigiHann wrote:

AdvanceBoy wrote:

LuigiHann wrote:

I think they're okay. Although now that I look at them again, looks like you need to resnap them so they end properly on red ticks. I also think it would be better if they started on red ticks as well, because the 1/8 snap is a bit icky all around.

...There are where I put that's spinners... IN THE FIRST PLACE!!!!!! But of course... Everybody have to give me another way to put 'em, right!?!

I think I see what happened here. I must have been high when I said "red ticks." Each spinner at the end of Hard should start on a blue tick, and end on a white tick. There should be a 1/4 gap between any two spinners. I never meant to make it sound like the spinners should start and end on the same ticks.

soradg123 wrote:

7 MONTH OLD BEATMAP STARRED

RemmyX25 wrote:

Bah. I hate to pop this again.

Hard:
01:56:77 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Don't make these all new combos. These would be better off as one combo.

RemmyX25 wrote:

Bah. I hate to pop this again.

Hard:
01:56:77 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Don't make these all new combos. These would be better off as one combo. Aww... I feel that like a remote-epic-part-not-enough-for-Ki Time, but anyway is not a such great thing, :< fixed... But I will no change the hitsounds
01:59:94 (3) - This I would recommend making a new combo because it feels like a new musical "phrase" No, it's not IMO beacuse is just right there when ends off the vocal phrase, just like a slider what ends there
02:59:19 (2,5,1,2,3,4) - I dunno. It doesn't really look great when the hit circles cover the slider like that, and then the hitcircles underneath that... yea. My recommendation would be to move the slider over a tad or something so its not one giant clusterfuck. Ok, I think I'll fix the problem, but I expect don't create other one

I promise to rebubble this when you look at it.

1. End the Map earlier (Probably end it somewhere here [03:34:55] That will leave it at 8.5 mil)
2. Lower overall Difficulty by one tick (This will leave the score at around 9.8 mil)

m980 wrote:

One problem I have with this map

The score for [Hard]

It isn't thaaaat hard to get. Ways to fix -

1. End the Map earlier (Probably end it somewhere here [03:34:55] That will leave it at 8.5 mil)
2. Lower overall Difficulty by one tick (This will leave the score at around 9.8 mil)

If you plan on lowering the Overall Difficulty, change these patterns (You could also do this with the other suggestion, since these patterns are pretty gay)

[Hard]
04:05:27 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) -
04:13:32 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) -

I'll keep the bubble, but if you're going to change the map with my suggestion, the bubble will pop, just a heads up.

Agent Spin Here wrote:

Easy
00:38:02 (3) - New combo please Sure

Normal
Fine

Hard
04:00:41 (5,6,7,8) - Strange spacing here, can you even it out by moving 5 up a grid? Ok..
04:23:31 (1,1,1,1) - Oh come on. Can you please just make these 1 big spinner? NOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Cool map, starred.

Remco32 wrote:

? - up to you/suggestion
(?) - not entirely sure myself

Easy
00:35:09 (2) - Finish hitsound at end ? Nah
00:50:46 (1) - Delete ? What? Why?
00:50:70 (1) - New combo + finish hitsound ? hitsound yes
I personally like a structure in these things. Especially in the 2 combo notes I find this disturbing. *Sight..*

Normal
An extra break somewhere would be nice. (?) I don't think it need it, there's a lot of mini-breaks everywhere

Hard
03:15:67 (5) - Add a clap here, or else you'll have zero feedback if you've hit it or not. Sorry, that sounds not-cool

Remco32 wrote:

Easy

Placing of notes seems really random. Especially in the 2 combo notes I find this disturbing.

LuigiHann wrote:

Bubbling again. You guys are wusses, the map is fine.

minyeob wrote:

Stop nazzzzzing
Let's end this long journey.
BATs and AdvanceBoy thanks for not giving this map up.
Frankly speaking, when I modded this, I guessed that this map would be graveyard D:

Do you remember this?
[quote=minyeob]I'll remod it... Star'd

*Checked Multiple times*
Map looks fine.

BOOM.

And Grats for your 1st ranked beatmap <3
You worked harder than my 1st ranked map lol

<1st rank exprience>
I wish this would not be unranked......

And please let me know this song's genre~