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.:Let those mod those maps:.[General]
If you would like, you can delete all your bookmarks to decrease the size of your .osz file by a little since you won't be needing them by the time this gets put on the server.
Consider adding "serment", "opening", "single", "insert", and "song" to the tags, since it comes from the OP Single titled "Serment", and this was also
heard on episode 15 as an insert song.Also, since a short version does not actually exist in any of the soundtracks, perhaps (Cut Ver.) would be more appropriate for the title name - that is, unless you'd like to show me where you found this short version, since I can't find it anywhere; that would be greatly appreciated too :3
In regards to the timing point you used at 23799 to double the bpm: I'm not sure if you're potentially "manipulating slider ticks" or anything, but the intro should probably be mapped to 184 bpm as well, comparing the frequency of the guitar strums.
You should consult a MAT/BAT about this.[Easy]
01:38:152 (1) - Inherited points aren't added to "fix" sliderticks; was this intentional?
[Normal]
00:37:826 (2) - this pic shows what you have right now:
http://puu.sh/ssksand this shows what I've done to it to blanket better. If you'll accept it, here's the code:
http://puu.sh/ssmb416,172,36848,6,0,B|440:216|412:252|412:252|416:340|320:360,1,240
320,264,37826,1,8
232,300,38152,2,0,B|222:264|230:229|250:203|250:203|188:132|236:60,1,240
01:12:881 - perhaps make the tick here S:C1?
01:35:544 (1,2) - blanket has obvious bend in the slider as seen here
http://puu.sh/ssoi. If you'll fix it:
240,316,95544,6,8,B|312:348|376:320|376:320|380:280|404:248|436:232,1,240
[Hard]
00:10:430 (2,3) - If you compare these to 00:07:495 (2,3) - (and almost everywhere else), you'll see that these don't follow the vocals as closely. You may want to start 00:10:756 (3) - at 00:10:593 instead. Of course, spacing will need to be fixed, too, if you do this.
00:21:517 (5,6) - This as well - it might be better if you started 00:21:843 (6) - at 00:21:680.
[Insane]
00:38:641 (3,4) - Was expecting curved sliders here, since you don't use bent sliders like these anywhere else (I don't think).
01:17:935 (5) - Since you're no longer mapping to "sekai", NC here might be appropriate.
01:30:652 (1) - This feels a bit awkward; you're nearing the end of the song and this part should feel more climatic, yet this note is preceded and followed by a 1/2 break, which makes this feel a bit discontinuous.
01:39:294 (14) - This circle in the stream is dropped to a low of 0.91x spacing. It's not completely unnoticeable, and it won't have a negative effect on the map if it was spaced to 1.00x (you can just highlight 01:39:294 (14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and drag it over to x:268 y:236). This actually goes for all of this stream; it's pretty round, and you've done a good job at that, but a more consistent spacing would require a player to have a steady streaming movement speed, and would be a bit better.
01:39:864 (4) - This circle is mapped to nothing - the two snare hits are very clear. In addition, removing it will further enhance the roll that you have mapped with 01:40:272 (7) -.
Good luck :3