1. 5957 style (4.9 stars, 946 notes)

• ...pretty unmodable tbh

Jenny wrote:

...what...is...this... val made some korean gurl a sammich I guess...

• ...pretty unmodable tbh

1. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/3198 artist is ok?

1. 00:55:397 (3) - remove this note
2. 00:55:563 (4) - add here i think it's better
3. 00:56:813 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/285794
4. 01:00:730 (2) - this note is not needed
5. 01:22:480 (1) - 1/4 longer this slider like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/285796 it sounds better imo
6. 02:21:812 (5,6,7,8) - arrange them like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/285797
7. 02:27:145 (5,6) - ^
8. 02:57:146 (5,6) - ctrl+r?
9. 02:57:479 (7,8) - ^ feels better i think...
10. 03:03:145 (1,2,3,4,5) - this part is so crowded 0.0
11. 03:08:812 (2) - can't see this clearly
12. 03:23:145 (8) - new combo...
13. 03:53:478 - add note 0.0
14. 04:11:145 (1) - volume too low, how about this: http://up.ppy.sh/files/timing001.jpg

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

from my queue


General

1. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/3198 artist is ok?

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rhapsody_of_Fire

5957 style

1. 00:55:397 (3) - remove this note
   
2. 00:55:563 (4) - add here i think it's better
3. 00:56:813 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/285794
4. 01:00:730 (2) - this note is not needed
5. 01:22:480 (1) - 1/4 longer this slider like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/285796 it sounds better imo
   
6. 02:21:812 (5,6,7,8) - arrange them like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/285797
7. 02:27:145 (5,6) - ^
8. 02:57:146 (5,6) - ctrl+r?
9. 02:57:479 (7,8) - ^ feels better i think
10. 03:03:145 (1,2,3,4,5) - this part is so crowded 0.0
11. 03:08:812 (2) - can't see this clearly
12. 03:23:145 (8) - new combo...
13. 03:53:478 - add note 0.0
14. 04:11:145 (1) - volume too low, how about this: http://up.ppy.sh/files/timing001.jpg

Also there is a very nice Emerald Sword ctb map, maybe you can take it for some reference = =... http://puu.sh/4euK

Good map overall, just some sliders don't fit to the music 0.0

Good luck~

• General

1. Please, capitalize Rhapsody of Fire. That's the correct name of the Artist/Band.
   
   
2. Remove from Tags "Rhapsody" because that word is already written at the Artist's name. (Source/Artist/Song's Name words count as tags). I suggest you to add to Tags: "sinfonic" "power" "metal", etc etc..you know.
   
   
3. Why did you choose that BG image? Looks like an screenshot of a game. Search for a better image. I'm feeling soooo lazy that I don't wanna search one for you, but I think that it is not difficult to find a better BG than this one.

• [5957 style]

1. 01:00:258 (1,1,1) - What's the point of adding New Combo to these 3 notes? It's unnecesary. I suggest you to remove them.
2. 01:37:812 (2) - Finish? Sounds good to me.
3. 00:54:730 (2) - Overmap. There's no "sound" so I find this note very unnecesary.
4. 01:31:146 (3,4,5,6) - I'm not sure of pointing out things about playability, because I'm not good playing Standard, but I'll say it anyways. I find this spacing way too.. ... big? .-.
5. 01:39:646 (4,5) - Overmap~ Delete this notes?
6. 02:01:146 (1) - Finish at the start of this slider?
7. 02:10:479 - Drag the start of the break here?
8. 02:21:146 (1) ~ 02:31:812 (1) - That's a really excessive overmap. This is impossible. Don't make so many streams to make everything harder and insane. They also end up covering the music.
9. 02:34:479 (1,2) - Impossible to click, to be honest.
10. 03:01:312 (6) - This note sounds off, and it doesn't seems like following something.
11. 03:07:062 (4,1) - This spacing is really.. troll. Seriously. It looks like it's placed at the next red tick instead of here. I think that it would be better if you delete this jump.
12. 03:12:312 (5) - This note isn't visible. Move it somewhere else..
    
    ..I don't want to desmotivate you in any way. I really like this song, and it would be nice if you rank this map but... uhm.. I feel a bit sad of what I'm going to say but well.. here I go: I highly recommend you a re-map. This is reaaaaaaally overmapped and that's not fun to play. Most of the sliders that you have done have really weird and ugly shapes (example: 00:55:647 (5).. 00:58:147 (1)). I have to admit that this is a really creative map. In some cases, you use those weird sliders in a more intuitive way (example: 01:23:813 (1,2)) and I like that. I like how you used the hitsounds. Sounds nice. Just try to avoid unnecessary streams.. they cover the music.
    _________________________________

Kei wrote:

Hello~ Uhm.. well.. I checked this map 'cause I like this song. Here's my "voluntary" mod.

• General

1. Please, capitalize Rhapsody of Fire. That's the correct name of the Artist/Band.
   
   
2. Remove from Tags "Rhapsody" because that word is already written at the Artist's name. (Source/Artist/Song's Name words count as tags). I suggest you to add to Tags: "sinfonic" "power" "metal", etc etc..you know.
   
   
3. Why did you choose that BG image? Looks like an screenshot of a game. Search for a better image. I'm feeling soooo lazy that I don't wanna search one for you, but I think that it is not difficult to find a better BG than this one.

• [5957 style]

1. 01:00:258 (1,1,1) - What's the point of adding New Combo to these 3 notes? It's unnecesary. I suggest you to remove them.
2. 01:37:812 (2) - Finish? Sounds good to me.
   
3. 00:54:730 (2) - Overmap. There's no "sound" so I find this note very unnecesary.
4. 01:31:146 (3,4,5,6) - I'm not sure of pointing out things about playability, because I'm not good playing Standard, but I'll say it anyways. I find this spacing way too.. ... big? .-.
5. 01:39:646 (4,5) - Overmap~ Delete this notes?
6. 02:01:146 (1) - Finish at the start of this slider?
7. 02:10:479 - Drag the start of the break here?
8. 02:21:146 (1) ~ 02:31:812 (1) - That's a really excessive overmap. This is impossible. Don't make so many streams to make everything harder and insane. They also end up covering the music.
9. 02:34:479 (1,2) - Impossible to click, to be honest.
10. 03:01:312 (6) - This note sounds off, and it doesn't seems like following something.
11. 03:07:062 (4,1) - This spacing is really.. troll. Seriously. It looks like it's placed at the next red tick instead of here. I think that it would be better if you delete this jump.
12. 03:12:312 (5) - This note isn't visible. Move it somewhere else..
    
    ..I don't want to desmotivate you in any way. I really like this song, and it would be nice if you rank this map but... uhm.. I feel a bit sad of what I'm going to say but well.. here I go: I highly recommend you a re-map. This is reaaaaaaally overmapped and that's not fun to play. Most of the sliders that you have done have really weird and ugly shapes (example: 00:55:647 (5).. 00:58:147 (1)). I have to admit that this is a really creative map. In some cases, you use those weird sliders in a more intuitive way (example: 01:23:813 (1,2)) and I like that. I like how you used the hitsounds. Sounds nice. Just try to avoid unnecessary streams.. they cover the music.
    _________________________________

That's all. I wish you good luck ranking this map. Keep going and improving :3

Regou wrote:

I can't download the autio file. Maybe you should do a full upload? :O

CXu wrote:

Well, yeah the map is probably overmapped. Doesn't mean the map can't be fun anyway \o\ A lot of the map is actually fairly fun to play, so yeah, good luck with the map, and here's my random kinda bad and fast ircmod thing:

SPOILER

12:51 <CXu> : 00:01:813 - this silence made think I missed the first time I played ;_;
12:52 <CXu> : 00:05:480 (4) - 1 less repeat? just because xD
12:52 <haha5957> : (looking at the editor with smile face)
12:53 <CXu> : \:D/
12:53 <haha5957> : eh, so......
12:53 <haha5957> : did the map looked likt haha0108's map?
12:53 <haha5957> : lol
12:54 <CXu> : 00:29:480 (12) - these sliders xD
12:54 <haha5957> : actually i'm fan of val
12:54 <haha5957> : so my maps must look like his
12:54 <CXu> : yeah thought so from the look of this map :p
12:54 <haha5957> : except that i'm not good as 0108 T.T
12:55 <haha5957> : btw, someone suggested me AR10 on this
12:55 <haha5957> : how do you think of it ;o;?
12:55 <CXu> : 00:22:397 (2,3) - these are very close and for me it kinda breaks the flow a bit (since the map itself is pretty fast
12:55 <CXu> : paced, having to almost stop for a triple feels a bit weird). Maybe try 0.6x?
12:55 <CXu> : also I think the AR right now is fine :p I'm not too much a fan of AR10 anyway xD
12:56 <haha5957> : same, i don't like AR10
12:56 <haha5957> : therefore i'm not fan of BD
12:56 <haha5957> : (..)
12:56 <CXu> : + it's easier to spot shapes and patterns with lower AR, making the map look prettier \:D/
12:56 <CXu> : haha BD maps are way overmapped
12:57 <haha5957> : first 3 people looked at my map and told me to remap due to it's overmapity(?)
12:57 <haha5957> : btw, post on the thread so i can kudos you
12:58 <CXu> : 00:34:147 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - this part feels a bit slow compared to the rest. maybe add a note at 00:34:063 -
12:58 <CXu> : 00:35:063 - 00:35:730 - ?
12:58 <CXu> : well I dont really mind if I dont get kudos
12:58 <CXu> : :p
12:59 <CXu> : well or I can just post the chatlog later
12:59 <haha5957> : ok O.O it's just i wanna give kudos to you ;o;
12:59 <CXu> : 00:42:147 (4) - maybe new combo? since it's kind of an anti-jump
13:00 <CXu> : 00:55:647 (5) - should probably start at 00:55:480 -
13:00 <CXu> : 01:03:147 (6) - move this away? It's hard to read because it's not really a stack here
13:01 <CXu> : oh right I forgot to say, but everything I say now are random suggestions
13:01 <CXu> : feel free to ignore whatever xD
13:02 <CXu> : 01:40:479 (5,6,7,8) - this feels overmapped
13:03 <haha5957> : O.O!!
13:03 <CXu> : 02:54:396 (5) - Kinda unecessary, remove?
13:03 <haha5957> : all fixed, O.O/
13:04 <CXu> : 03:20:478 (1) - this slider with the compressed stream and shortsliders <3
13:04 <CXu> : 03:25:812 - add a note here, and make the spinner begin a bit later
13:05 <CXu> : 03:41:812 - ^
13:06 <CXu> : 03:47:812 (5) - you have a lot of these sliders with 2 repeats. Maybe make some of them sliders with 1 repeat
13:06 <CXu> : and a note?
13:06 <CXu> : the last part is overmapped and I kinda can't play it so idk what to say about it xD

iroseka wrote:

modding advice:

SPOILER

00:55:147 (1,2) - Distancing error (maybe put the #2 just beneath #1?) (these are spaced properly)
01:16:313 (4,5,6,7) - Doesn't sound too cool here. well just personal feeling :p
01:53:812 (5) - new combo? looks better
03:10:479 (1,2,3) - here. i hear a strong rapid hit in this one second. may be a series of circles can represent the feeling better. ( O.O? I don't understand T.T)

the notes separate too much that the screen is full of notes. please consider change some note's place to make it more compact and aggresive. => big spacing is concept of the map


btw, I did not actually finish the song but could only pass with no fail + half time...

Kanon wrote:

IRC MOD

12:43 <haha5957> : um, hello 'o'...?
12:44 <Kanon> : hi
12:44 <haha5957> : uh, i wish this doesnt bother you..
12:44 <haha5957> : may i ask for a test-play if possible?
12:44 <Kanon> : sure
12:44 <Kanon> : link
12:44 *haha5957 is listening to (Rhapsody of Fire - Emerald Sword)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/48207]
12:44 <haha5957> : 'o';;
12:44 <Kanon> : wow
12:44 <Kanon> : old song
12:44 <Kanon> : dling
12:44 <haha5957> : O.O/
12:48 <haha5957> : you can just tell me the honest feeling of the map 'o'; if it sucked a lot, or was ok, etc..
12:49 <Kanon> : um
12:50 <Kanon> : the slider is pretty nice
12:50 <haha5957> : i need honest feelings of advanced players
12:50 <Kanon> : but spacing is not very comfortable
12:50 <haha5957> : like, streams?
12:50 <Kanon> : rhthym is a little overmapped but i think is fine
12:51 <Kanon> : w8 a sec
12:52 <Kanon> : 00:11:647 (2,3,4) -
12:52 <Kanon> : i dont quite like this kind of stack
12:52 <haha5957> : oh~~
12:53 <Kanon> : especially in mid of the stream
12:54 <haha5957> : so you don't like anti-jumps in stream?
12:54 <Kanon> : i just dont like the stack of this kind
12:54 <Kanon> : and
12:54 <Kanon> : 00:56:813 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) -
12:54 <Kanon> : i think this is very insane
12:55 <Kanon> : even for skilled player
12:55 <haha5957> : ok/
12:55 <Kanon> : 01:16:313 (4,5,6,7) -
12:55 <Kanon> : the double here imo is overmapped
12:56 <haha5957> : (works on it)
12:57 <haha5957> : btw, thanks for doing this, do you want to post this? I wanna give kudosu for this
12:57 <Kanon> : nah i am not active on mapping anymore
12:57 <Kanon> : so i dont need kudoso now..
12:58 <haha5957> : T.T
12:58 <Kanon> : if you need posted mod to reach MAT 's standard
12:58 <Kanon> : i can post for you
12:59 <haha5957> : you don't have to do it if it bothers you
12:59 <haha5957> : I just wanted give you kudosu O.O/
12:59 <Kanon> : fine
12:59 <haha5957> : to*
12:59 <Kanon> : i ll post irc mod later
12:59 <haha5957> : ok O.O/
13:00 <Kanon> : 02:22:146 (7,8) -
13:01 <Kanon> : i think this two note shouldn't be normal spaced
13:01 <Kanon> : should be stress
13:01 <Kanon> : ed
13:01 <haha5957> : stress..ed?
13:01 <haha5957> : like, almost stacked?
13:01 <haha5957> : sorry for my poor english xD
13:02 <Kanon> : yes
13:02 <Kanon> : 02:27:479 (7,8) -
13:02 <Kanon> : ……
13:02 <Kanon> : ^
13:02 <haha5957> : ...?
13:03 <Kanon> : ^ represent for same with last mod
13:03 <haha5957> : oh/
13:04 <Kanon> : 03:00:479 (1,2,3,4,5) -
13:04 <Kanon> : at least you should make 03:01:145 (5) - not stacked
13:05 <Kanon> : anyway i don't quite like this kind of slider stack
13:05 <haha5957> : (works on it)
13:05 <Kanon> : 03:21:478 (7,8) -
13:06 <Kanon> : it's very hard to read which come first
13:07 <Kanon> : so maybe you should make it more easy to read here?
13:07 <haha5957> : hm.....
13:08 <haha5957> : just keep doing 1/4 on there will give you all 300
13:08 <haha5957> : so i guess that doesnt matter O.O/
13:09 <Kanon> : 04:05:395 (7,8,9) -
13:10 <Kanon> : maybe unstack the note with the slider?
13:11 <haha5957> : O.O//
13:12 <Kanon> : ok i think that's all
13:12 <haha5957> : thanks very much <3
13:12 <Kanon> : i'll post this irc log in your map thread :3

IRC modded

Frostmourne wrote:

:D

SPOILER

21:37 <Frostmourne> : 00:07:647 (4) -
21:37 <Frostmourne> : this seems to be confused
21:38 <Frostmourne> : from its speed but repeat more than 1 time
21:38 <Frostmourne> : do you mind me If i want to mod :3 ?
21:38 <haha5957> : I would even thanks a lot xD
21:38 <Frostmourne> : no kd just some point
21:38 <haha5957> : but if you mod me, you MUST have your kudosu from me :3
21:38 <haha5957> : xD
21:39 <Frostmourne> : haha If it useful enough
21:39 <Frostmourne> : 00:16:147 (7) -
21:39 <Frostmourne> : end this at 16 480
21:39 <Frostmourne> : no need to make a repeat more than this if it has no sound
21:40 <haha5957> : ok O.O/
21:40 <Frostmourne> : 00:18:813 (5) - nc here ? looks better for me >.>
21:40 <haha5957> : also ok O.O/
21:40 <haha5957> : the first one (the 00:07:647 (4) , i will keep this //)
21:40 <Frostmourne> : oh ok you can
21:41 <Frostmourne> : if i were you I will nc here too 00:24:147 (1) -
21:41 <Frostmourne> : because it changed form of playing
21:41 <Frostmourne> : to 4 slider
21:41 <haha5957> : (works on it)
21:42 <Frostmourne> : 00:25:480 (5) - I'm kinda get trouble from this repeat slider
21:42 <Frostmourne> : over 1 time
21:42 <Frostmourne> : may be you end at 25 813 and add note after that
21:42 <Frostmourne> : might be better
21:43 <haha5957> : good idea
21:44 <Frostmourne> : 00:52:813 (5) - here too
21:44 <Frostmourne> : it cuts its flow
21:44 <Frostmourne> : and can get miss slider
21:45 <Frostmourne> : slider end at the top
21:45 <Frostmourne> : but jumping swap to down suddenly
21:45 <Frostmourne> : it is not good run for me nah =_=''
21:46 <haha5957> : ya actually i don't like repeating sliders
21:46 <haha5957> : if it repeats more then once....
21:46 <Frostmourne> : ahh yes
21:46 <haha5957> : but i used those kinds for kind of...rest for your finger?
21:46 <haha5957> : xD
21:46 <Frostmourne> : it's better if just 1 repeat and add next note instead
21:47 <Frostmourne> : oh I think not =_=
21:47 <Frostmourne> : finger will get rest but you will get annoy from that unusual slider
21:47 <Frostmourne> : I judge it as player not mapper for now haha
21:48 <haha5957> : yeah, what i need is player's opinion...
21:48 <Frostmourne> : hehe
21:48 <Frostmourne> : ok
21:48 <haha5957> : because most mappers comes to this map and REMAP!!
21:48 <Frostmourne> : 01:02:730 (1) -
21:48 <haha5957> : (saids*)
21:48 <Frostmourne> : no need to remap
21:48 <haha5957> : (says*)
21:48 <Frostmourne> : I think this can improve more
21:48 <Frostmourne> : 01:02:730 (1) - < new combo here
21:49 <haha5957> : oh yeah
21:49 <Frostmourne> : distance between (3) and (4) doesn't match
21:49 <Frostmourne> : if compared with (1) (2)
21:49 <Frostmourne> : 01:19:396 (3) - add note here
21:50 <Frostmourne> : people can get miss from this stack that looks like on blue tick
21:51 <haha5957> : um?
21:51 <haha5957> : already is a note there i think
21:51 <Frostmourne> : ohwait me
21:51 <Frostmourne> : 01:19:396 (3) - I mean this point ya
21:51 <Frostmourne> : emm
21:51 <haha5957> : oh~
21:51 <Frostmourne> : add on blue tick also keep red tick too
21:51 <Frostmourne> : will be 3 stream here
21:52 <Frostmourne> : 01:23:147 (3) - this slider again =_= sorry
21:52 <haha5957> : haha xD 2 repeats
21:52 <haha5957> : i will change some, and keep some about those
21:53 <Frostmourne> : haha it depends on you
21:53 <Frostmourne> : oh I forgot it
21:53 <Frostmourne> : 00:28:147 (4) -
21:53 <Frostmourne> : new combo here
21:53 <Frostmourne> : 00:28:647 (1) - here too
21:53 <Frostmourne> : 1 2 3 1 2 3 looks better so much
21:53 <Frostmourne> : 00:29:147 (1) - same
21:54 <Frostmourne> : 01:31:146 (1) - same because of this note is the first note to run 1 2 3 4 different from last (1) (2)
21:56 <Frostmourne> : add here too 01:58:479 (5) - for notice this is not 1/4 note this is anti jump
21:56 <Frostmourne> : 02:04:479 (3) - same reason
21:56 <haha5957> : all excepted :O
21:58 <Frostmourne> : 03:12:312 (5) -
21:58 <Frostmourne> : look hard from that hiding
21:58 <Frostmourne> : try move 3 a bit
21:58 <Frostmourne> : move up
21:59 <haha5957> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/287962
21:59 <haha5957> : would this be better?
21:59 <Frostmourne> : actually , it's ok for insane
22:00 <Frostmourne> : and that's better too
22:00 <Frostmourne> : oh i feel it
22:00 <Frostmourne> : while playing that
22:00 <Frostmourne> : 03:55:145 (1) - after this note
22:00 <Frostmourne> : you quite overmapped it
22:00 <Frostmourne> : imo
22:01 <Frostmourne> : it doesn't follow its sound much
22:01 <Frostmourne> : only this part that notice me
22:01 <Frostmourne> : rest note more than this would be good :3
22:01 <haha5957> : ah ..that last part
22:01 <Frostmourne> : but , you want last part to be kiai part
22:02 <Frostmourne> : I think it's ok for now
22:02 <haha5957> : everyone agreed about the last kiai's overmap
22:02 <haha5957> : but I would like to keep that untill any BAT comes and calls it unapprovable or something
22:02 <Frostmourne> : hmm I think because that isn't follow music much
22:02 <haha5957> : cuz i usually map last parts much harder then rest of the parts

Jenny wrote:

...what...is...this... val made some korean gurl a sammich I guess...

• ...pretty unmodable tbh

haha5957 wrote:

It's funny to call me creative, but don't step on mappers creativity. I feel like most of osu!standard maps are like all the same these days.
There is no variaty, but they are all the same. compressed stream, triple along with slider, some kind of jump, etc.

1. At first, I really cannot agree with sliders like 00:03:147 (5) - or 00:26:813 (5) - or 00:58:147 (1) - or something else. Despite u're free to choose slider shape, it's not fun. And then, overuse 1/4 beats to only make a map "hard enough" but not "follow the beats of music/vocal" doesn't make any sense to me. Yes we may say there's Big Black or Holyshit Airman or some similar maps but i also cannot agree with them also. anyway, it's just my opinion and understand about mapping
2. 00:01:647 (4,5) - maybe a long slider is better
3. 00:02:313 (7,8) - ^
4. 00:03:147 (5) - opposite to above, i suppose it could be devide to a slider and then a note on downbeat for next bar.
5. 00:04:313 (5,6) - actually i don't think silent a 3/4 slider and add a 1/4 note reluctantly is a good choice, why not just use a 1/1 slider? many similar issues so won't mentioned more
6. 00:06:730 (5) - there's no triplet beat in music here, so consider to remove it please.
7. 00:07:397 (2) - ^
8. 00:11:480 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - all right...i seldom say overmapped...but...r u sure it's 1/4 beats here?
9. 00:53:813 (8,9,10,11) - i'd like to remove (9) & (11)
10. 00:56:813 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - i cant find 1/3 beats here -- both music and vocal.
11. 01:03:063 - u may miss a note here
12. 02:25:146 (1,2,3,4) - are u serious....? it's 1/4 jump here!
13. 02:30:479 (1,2,3,4) - ^
14. 02:42:812 - please consider to map this break because no change in music
15. 03:20:478 (1) - it's unrankable
16. 03:53:812 (1) - ^

Mustaash wrote:

Tick Rate : 4
r u srs?
It fits the song A LOT BETTER if you're setting the Tick Rate to 2.

Dark Fang wrote:

hi~
Random modding~~
Let's mod!

[General]

osb파일이 두개입니다. 한개를 삭제하시고 서브밋하십시오.
개인적인생각이겠지만
점프범위가 좀.. 넓은것같습니다... [color=#0000FF]
[5957 style]

HP Drain-1?
OD-1?

00:08:813 (1) -

SPOILER

이부분을




이렇게 약간 각도를 주면 어떨까.. 합니다

00:15:480 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - awesome...
00:23:480 (1,2,3,4) - 이부분을 이렇게 하면 어떨까요?
00:37:813 (3,4) - 점프범위가 너무 넓은것같습니다. 일반 유저들이 치기 매우 힘들군요...

아... 한계입니다...
더 찾아보려다가 더이상 보이질않아요... 죄송합니다 ;A;
(괜한 기대를하심)

Have a good time

Banana wrote:

Hi~ Banana here form my queue~

general

maybe you can put your understandings to creater's words, few people will cover all the posts before mod one's map
i suggest you to use normal-hitnormal in SC1, or start to use NC2, for soft-hitnormal hears weak and not suit this song well imo


5957 style

00:22:480 (2) - jump here in consistency with (6)?
00:23:480 (1,2,3) - try to make some nice pattern, for example
00:24:480 (6,7,1) - you make this three notes in a circle, and i think (1) here start a new combo and have a different tune, so i suggest you to make here an anti-jump, starting at the center of 00:24:147 (5)(you may also need to change the pattern following)
00:27:647 (2) - string here has no sound, and i don't know why you use a jump, it should be a stack or a slider linked with (1) imo
00:31:813 (5,6) - pattern 00:30:480 (5,6) is better than that at here, make them same?
00:50:147 (1,2) - as you have use jump here, you can change the sliders to avoid unnecessary overlap at tails
00:51:647 (2) - pitch here is high, and you can place a small jump hidden under 00:51:147 (5) (you may need to change the following(4))
01:25:812 (1) - same issue as 00:50:147
01:33:479 - pattern suggestion (i don't like small overlaps)
01:36:146 (3) - it will be decent if you stack this with 01:36:896 (2)
02:22:396 (6) - it's not necessary to cover every drum beats, for better play, i suggest you to remove it
02:33:812 (5,6) - stack this two and make them a small jump?
02:40:479 - rhythm is simple around here.. try this?
02:53:812 (4) - it will be nice if you use jump along with finish
03:18:062 (2) - overlap... and as the same sliders have showed up at 03:16:478 (1,2), it may not be confusing if you use jump here
03:21:145 (3) - somewhat strange... repeat or add a circle at 03:21:395?

seems to be all

1. There are 2 .osb files in the folder that you don't need,since there isn't any storyboard in there. Please,delete them and Full Submit.

1. First of all, the green line on 01:37:140 is unsnapped - you have to resnap it to 1:37:146
2. 00:15:813 (3) - Place this here:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:23:647 (2,3) - Lower the spacing between this slider to make it pretty much the same spacing between 1 and 2?
4. 00:34:813 (3) - 1 grid right
5. 00:46:647 (3) - CTRL+R?
6. 01:21:479 (2) - Put this note here?
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:22:146 (5) - ^
8. 01:35:812 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - It would be better to make a pattern composed by a square and a triangle,just like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 02:36:479 (1) - Stack this with 02:36:312 (4) - ?
10. 03:36:312 (6) - Put this in x: 352 y:196?

-kevincela- wrote:

Hi \o/

[General]

1. There are 2 .osb files in the folder that you don't need,since there isn't any storyboard in there. Please,delete them and Full Submit.

[5957 Style]

1. First of all, the green line on 01:37:140 is unsnapped - you have to resnap it to 1:37:146
2. 00:15:813 (3) - Place this here:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:23:647 (2,3) - Lower the spacing between this slider to make it pretty much the same spacing between 1 and 2?
4. 00:34:813 (3) - 1 grid right
5. 00:46:647 (3) - CTRL+R?
6. 01:21:479 (2) - Put this note here?
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:22:146 (5) - ^
8. 01:35:812 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - It would be better to make a pattern composed by a square and a triangle,just like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 02:36:479 (1) - Stack this with 02:36:312 (4) - ?
10. 03:36:312 (6) - Put this in x: 352 y:196?

Sorry for the short mod, unfortunately since I don't have much time left I didn't spend much time on modding this map.