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Aoba Ringo - Testament of Judgment (Short Ver.)

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Kitsuneko
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年5月6日 at 23:48:19

Artist: Aoba Ringo
Title: Testament of Judgment (Short Ver.)
Source: Shinigami no Testament ~menuet of epistula~
Tags: opening visual novel eroge 3rdEye MiLu
BPM: 79.95
Filesize: 17569kb
Play Time: 02:17
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.47 stars, 116 notes)
  2. Insane (4.89 stars, 454 notes)
  3. MiLu's Hard (4.7 stars, 329 notes)
  4. Normal (3.14 stars, 161 notes)
Download: Aoba Ringo - Testament of Judgment (Short Ver.)
Download: Aoba Ringo - Testament of Judgment (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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3rdEye 2nd project
~menuet of epistula~

Opening Song
Testament of Judgment / 青葉りんご


MiLu's Hard by MiLu
Naichatta
ダークなきつねこさんだ!
Topic Starter
Kitsuneko

kusano wrote:

ダークなきつねこさんだ!
しかし譜面の難易度はライトである

星ありがと!
早く完成させねば
-s u i r e n-
頑張って~:3
Topic Starter
Kitsuneko

suirenn05 wrote:

頑張って~:3
星までありがとー!
Nanakase Gizumo
そう……貴様も死神に魅入られた羊なのか :3
Topic Starter
Kitsuneko

Nanakase Gizumo wrote:

そう……貴様も死神に魅入られた羊なのか :3
足掻け、ヒューマン。それが貴様に残された唯一の権利だ

星ありがとー
完成までもう少し
Vivi_Alhazerd
自分もこの曲作ってましたーω`)/

完成頑張ってください!
Topic Starter
Kitsuneko

Vivi_Alhazerd wrote:

自分もこの曲作ってましたーω`)/

完成頑張ってください!
ありがとー
あとはゲストDiff待ちです( 'n' )
SakiK
                        クドス
「きつねこ君を助けるためだったら、”異能”を使っても許してくれるよね、お姉ちゃん」
Topic Starter
Kitsuneko

SakiK wrote:

                        クドス
「きつねこ君を助けるためだったら、”異能”を使っても許してくれるよね、お姉ちゃん」

「どうして……いったい何をしたんだ……?」

  モ ッ ダ ー
「"支配者"の力を使ったのか?」
NewRulerNA
【瑠依】
   コネ             マッパー
「"黒衣の書"なんてなくても、人は強い。どんな困難も乗り越えてきた。いままでも、そしてこれからも」

【結愛】
              Beatmap
「"信じなさい。あなたの 人生 は、あなたの思い描いたとおりになると"」
    Graveyard
「思い通りにならないこと も悪いことばかりじゃない。だってその方がロマンチックだもん」


Rankedがんばって
Topic Starter
Kitsuneko

NewRulerNA wrote:

【瑠依】
   コネ             マッパー
「"黒衣の書"なんてなくても、人は強い。どんな困難も乗り越えてきた。いままでも、そしてこれからも」

【結愛】
              Beatmap
「"信じなさい。あなたの 人生 は、あなたの思い描いたとおりになると"」
    Graveyard
「思い通りにならないこと も悪いことばかりじゃない。だってその方がロマンチックだもん」


Rankedがんばって
なんて素敵な言葉だろうか
いつもありがとう!
MiLu
Topic Starter
Kitsuneko

MiLu wrote:

遅くなりました(´(ェ)`)ノ
お疲れ様!
赤線修正してアップしたのでおかしい部分ないか確認お願いしまーす
Melophobia
As promised

[General]
tagsに"もっと評価されるべき"を

NormalとEasyにかなりfinishが抜けてる箇所があったんですが仕様ですか...?

[Insane]
00:04:225 (1) - 00:05:350 - から音量上げてみては
00:55:626 (5,1) - switch newcombos? 速度下がるのでこっちのが良い気がします
01:08:883 (2,3) - 繋げた方が読みやすいかも
01:30:520 (1,2,3) - backの音がないからここはfinish無い方が聞こえが良いかとおもいます
01:53:032 (5,1) - switch newcombos
02:00:536 (1) - 01:37:836 - を考えるとちょっと変に聞こえます
始点を02:00:348に もしくは始点のfinishを外して02:00:160 (6) - の終点に追加?
02:20:046 - 音量-10

[Hard]
00:04:225 (1) - Insaneに同じ
00:16:230 (6) - 左右対称に?
00:59:378 - normal soundに
01:01:442 (4,5) - ここはDS使った方がいいとような
01:01:629 (5) - newcombo?
01:09:508 (1) - 始点finish
01:21:515 (1) - ^
01:30:520 (1) - hidden reverse arrow
一瞬見えるけどこれは通らないと思う
02:15:544 (1) - 音量低めでfinish?
02:20:046 - 音量-10



神譜面すぎてふぁぼった
MiLu

Melophobia wrote:

[Hard]
00:04:225 (1) - Insaneに同じ
00:16:230 (6) - 左右対称に?
00:59:378 - normal soundに
01:01:442 (4,5) - ここはDS使った方がいいとような
01:01:629 (5) - newcombo?
01:09:508 (1) - 始点finish
01:21:515 (1) - ^
01:30:520 (1) - hidden reverse arrow
一瞬見えるけどこれは通らないと思う
02:15:544 (1) - 音量低めでfinish?
02:20:046 - 音量-10
最初のところはKitsuneko先生にお任せします
それ以外は全部直した~
thx

Download: Aoba Ringo - Testament of Judgment (Short Ver.) (Kitsuneko) [MiLu's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
Kitsuneko

Melophobia wrote:

As promised

[General]
tagsに"もっと評価されるべき"を 朝一発目の大笑い頂きました

NormalとEasyにかなりfinishが抜けてる箇所があったんですが仕様ですか...? Insaneにあわせて増やした

[Insane]
00:04:225 (1) - 00:05:350 - から音量上げてみては 全Diff音量up
00:55:626 (5,1) - switch newcombos? 速度下がるのでこっちのが良い気がします changed
01:08:883 (2,3) - 繋げた方が読みやすいかも 配置近くなりました
01:30:520 (1,2,3) - backの音がないからここはfinish無い方が聞こえが良いかとおもいます changed
01:53:032 (5,1) - switch newcombos fixed
02:00:536 (1) - 01:37:836 - を考えるとちょっと変に聞こえます やばいミスだった ノート置きなおした
始点を02:00:348に もしくは始点のfinishを外して02:00:160 (6) - の終点に追加?
02:20:046 - 音量-10 全Diff変更


神譜面すぎてふぁぼった ひ、ひぇぇ
めろちゃんmodありがとう助かった!


MiLu wrote:

最初のところはKitsuneko先生にお任せします
変更しておいたー 修正ご苦労様です
YTYuyu
alright let's see what I can find.

Bold: Unrankable/Must fix.
Red: You should take a look but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion.

[General]
set the lead in to 1500. i find it odd that the lead in time is at 1496.

[Easy]
00:00:482 (1) - add a finish at the beginning but reduce the volume to match the vocals.
00:07:983 (1) - and i think adding a finish at the beginning would be effective as it goes well with the piano sort of but reduce the volume of the finish. i suggest 20% because 30% is too loud.
00:10:984 (1) - remove the NC because it'd be hard for beginners to read since (1) has its own combo. in other words, it'd be easier for beginners if you do this. and here too. add the finish at the beginning. same reason as above.
00:13:986 (1) - same as 00:07:983.
00:16:987 (1) - ^
00:19:989 (1) - ^
basically for every first downbeat in the combo, add a finish at the beginning as it goes well with the piano till 00:28:994.
00:48:504 (1) - I think the finish here is too loud. i suggest reducing it to 30%. yes it has the same volume as the finish at 00:45:503 but the one at 00:45:503 is a soft finish and this one is a normal finish.
00:53:382 (2) - *nazi* i don't like the look of this slider. make this slider symmetrical. i think it looks ugly during gameplay.
01:34:279 (3) - make this a curved slider to form somewhat of a blanket around the next slider.
01:50:037 (1) - i suggest putting this above (3) to avoid the slight overlap.
02:15:551 (4) - the path would be hard for beginners to get to. either move this somewhere else, or Ctrl+J to make the path easier for beginners.

[Normal]
00:00:482 (1) - same as easy.
00:03:482 (3) - this note would be hard to see because it's so close together. move this above (2) so that it'd be easier to read.
00:07:983 (1) - same as easy. but replace the whistle for a finish because the whistle sounds a bit quiet. like i said about the piano, i think the finish sounds better with the piano.
00:10:984 (1) - ^
00:13:986 (1) - ^
00:16:987 (1) - ^
same as easy but till 00:28:994.
this diff is pretty good.

MiLu's Hard:
alright mouse user with dem movements :P
00:00:482 (1) - same as easy.
same as normal about the finishes.
00:34:997 (1) - move this slider up to blanket the next note.
01:25:274 (3) - *nazi* move this up a bit to avoid the overlap. it gets in the way during gameplay.
01:42:345 (7) - i think that this wave slider can look a lot smoother. IMO this wave slider as it stands is ugly. try to make it like this or something similar to this.
02:03:544 (3) - ooh make this symmetrical. i don't like this slider as it stands.
02:08:609 (6) - if you want to make a nice v-shaped slider, make it like this. if you ignore this then make this a curved slider to blanket the end of (1).

[Insane]
00:00:482 (1) - [/i]same as easy.[/i]
same as easy about the finishes.
other than that everything looks good

This is the best i can do. 2 stars because this mapset is pretty solid and GL :D. if you're having trouble understanding, pm me in-game and i'll try my best to explain or i'll give you a screenshot of what i mean.
Topic Starter
Kitsuneko

Byakugan249 wrote:

alright let's see what I can find.

Bold: Unrankable/Must fix.
Red: You should take a look but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion.

[General]
set the lead in to 1500. i find it odd that the lead in time is at 1496. fixed

[Easy]
00:00:482 (1) - add a finish at the beginning but reduce the volume to match the vocals. added
00:07:983 (1) - and i think adding a finish at the beginning would be effective as it goes well with the piano sort of but reduce the volume of the finish. i suggest 20% because 30% is too loud. nice suggestion, changed~
00:10:984 (1) - remove the NC because it'd be hard for beginners to read since (1) has its own combo. in other words, it'd be easier for beginners if you do this. and here too. add the finish at the beginning. same reason as above. ok
00:13:986 (1) - same as 00:07:983. ok
00:16:987 (1) - ^ ok
00:19:989 (1) - ^ ok
basically for every first downbeat in the combo, add a finish at the beginning as it goes well with the piano till 00:28:994. done
00:48:504 (1) - I think the finish here is too loud. i suggest reducing it to 30%. yes it has the same volume as the finish at 00:45:503 but the one at 00:45:503 is a soft finish and this one is a normal finish. reduced for 20%
00:53:382 (2) - *nazi* i don't like the look of this slider. make this slider symmetrical. i think it looks ugly during gameplay. changed to straight
01:34:279 (3) - make this a curved slider to form somewhat of a blanket around the next slider. changed
01:50:037 (1) - i suggest putting this above (3) to avoid the slight overlap. ok, moved up
02:15:551 (4) - the path would be hard for beginners to get to. either move this somewhere else, or Ctrl+J to make the path easier for beginners. fixed

[Normal]
00:00:482 (1) - same as easy. ok
00:03:482 (3) - this note would be hard to see because it's so close together. move this above (2) so that it'd be easier to read. changed
00:07:983 (1) - same as easy. but replace the whistle for a finish because the whistle sounds a bit quiet. like i said about the piano, i think the finish sounds better with the piano. done ~
00:10:984 (1) - ^ ok
00:13:986 (1) - ^ ok
00:16:987 (1) - ^ ok
same as easy but till 00:28:994.
this diff is pretty good.

[Insane]
00:00:482 (1) - [/i]same as easy.[/i] ok
same as easy about the finishes. ok!
other than that everything looks good thanks :3

This is the best i can do. 2 stars because this mapset is pretty solid and GL :D. if you're having trouble understanding, pm me in-game and i'll try my best to explain or i'll give you a screenshot of what i mean.
Thank you for stars and nice suggestions intelligibly <3
I do best!
MiLu

Byakugan249 wrote:

MiLu's Hard:
alright mouse user with dem movements :P xD
00:00:482 (1) - same as easy. added
same as normal about the finishes.
00:34:997 (1) - move this slider up to blanket the next note. no
01:25:274 (3) - *nazi* move this up a bit to avoid the overlap. it gets in the way during gameplay. no
01:42:345 (7) - i think that this wave slider can look a lot smoother. IMO this wave slider as it stands is ugly. try to make it like this or something similar to this. fixed~
02:03:544 (3) - ooh make this symmetrical. i don't like this slider as it stands. hmm...no changed
02:08:609 (6) - if you want to make a nice v-shaped slider, make it like this. if you ignore this then make this a curved slider to blanket the end of (1). no
thx~

Download: Aoba Ringo - Testament of Judgment (Short Ver.) (Kitsuneko) [MiLu's Hard].osu
YTYuyu

MiLu wrote:

Byakugan249 wrote:

MiLu's Hard:
alright mouse user with dem movements :P xD

00:34:997 (1) - move this slider up to blanket the next note. no if you do this,then there would be a triangle jump like this
01:25:274 (3) - *nazi* move this up a bit to avoid the overlap. it gets in the way during gameplay. no see how the notes are touching? i don't want to see that when i play ranked maps, so move it up above (2) so that it doesn't happen
02:03:544 (3) - ooh make this symmetrical. i don't like this slider as it stands. hmm...no changed ohh this is blanketing (1). alright i see.
02:08:609 (6) - if you want to make a nice v-shaped slider, make it like this. if you ignore this then make this a curved slider to blanket the end of (1). no tbh i don't see why there's so many points used for this slider. making my v-shaped slider will blanket the beginning of (5)
thx~
remember in the future that if you ignore any suggestions, put reasons on why you ignored them. there's people like me who won't take no for an answer. if you say that you don't speak English that good, try your best to explain why you ignored the suggestions.
MiLu
>Byakugan249
okay, all fixed

but
02:08:609 (6)
I changed a little this slider, seeing your suggestion.
simply , it's my liking...

thank you for modding and sorry my poor English :(

Download: Aoba Ringo - Testament of Judgment (Short Ver.) (Kitsuneko) [MiLu's Hard].osu
Mystica
Here comes my mod.

[Easy]
00:30:494 (3) - a little ugly to see

[Normal]
02:14:800 (3) - 1/2 reverse slider may fit well

[MiLu's Hard]
00:07:983 (1) - add whistle every two white lines may fit well
00:22:615 (4) - whistle at end
00:25:617 (3) - ^
00:28:618 (3) - ^
01:54:352 (6) - It's better not to hide the end of slider

[Insane]
Nothing to say.

Great map XD.Star for you
Topic Starter
Kitsuneko

Mystica wrote:

Here comes my mod. thank you for accept my request~

[Easy]
00:30:494 (3) - a little ugly to see changed to simple slider

[Normal]
02:14:800 (3) - 1/2 reverse slider may fit well good idea, it's beautiful also as placement. changed!

[Insane]
Nothing to say.

Great map XD.Star for you
Mystica san modding and star arigatou~!
MiLu

Mystica wrote:

[MiLu's Hard]
00:07:983 (1) - add whistle every two white lines may fit well no. I feel that it is a little noisy....
00:22:615 (4) - whistle at end It's the same reason.
00:25:617 (3) - ^
00:28:618 (3) - ^
01:54:352 (6) - It's better not to hide the end of slider sorry,I dont want to change this.
thank you >_<
ertyukjh010


Hello :)

[General]

Bpm = 79.989 and 159.915. Are you sure it is correct? Or 80 and 160 ??
If you don't know, ask a BAT, Let him help you to check a timing

[Easy]

00:02:357 - unless green line
00:03:107 - ^
00:08:358 - ^

[Normal]

okay~

[MiLu's Hard]

01:12:517 (1) - some weird of Shape. No need to surround here.

[Insane]

00:00:857 - unless green line

That all :)
Topic Starter
Kitsuneko

ertyukjh010 wrote:



Hello :)

[General]

Bpm = 79.989 and 159.915. Are you sure it is correct? Or 80 and 160 ??
If you don't know, ask a BAT, Let him help you to check a timing I had been feeling BPM is a bit off. I tried some patterns again, then I got BPM. Probably 159.910 is right! thank you :3

[Easy]

00:02:357 - unless green line oh, ok
00:03:107 - ^ ok
00:08:358 - ^ ok

[Normal]

okay~

[Insane]

00:00:857 - unless green line ok

That all :)
thanks ertyukjh010!
MiLu

ertyukjh010 wrote:

[MiLu's Hard]

01:12:517 (1) - some weird of Shape. No need to surround here. fixed~
thanks~ :)

Download: Aoba Ringo - Testament of Judgment (Short Ver.) (Kitsuneko) [MiLu's Hard].osu
those
From .:Let those mod those maps:.

[General]
-

[Insane]
02:15:747 - I'd recommend an even softer volume.

[MiLu's Hard]
-

[Normal]
01:47:043 (1) - Did a great job up til now, setting the red anchor at the right time. This one should be placed so that it bends at 01:47:418.

[Easy]
01:06:520 (1) - I feel it would be more effective if the slider bends at 01:07:083 -

Great mapset. Good luck, I hope this gets ranked soon!
Topic Starter
Kitsuneko

those wrote:

From .:Let those mod those maps:.

[General]
-

[Insane]
02:15:747 - I'd recommend an even softer volume. 40% -> 30%, and 30% -> 20%. reduced volume

[MiLu's Hard]
-

[Normal]
01:47:043 (1) - Did a great job up til now, setting the red anchor at the right time. This one should be placed so that it bends at 01:47:418. fixed

[Easy]
01:06:520 (1) - I feel it would be more effective if the slider bends at 01:07:083 - set a red point at 01:07:083 and curved both sides

Great mapset. Good luck, I hope this gets ranked soon! I hope too... where are MATs >.<
thanks those!
Colin Hou
[Hard]
  1. OD+1or2 AR+1 current situation is too pain to play with. (up to you, it depends on people's playing habit
ok tell me your decision.
MiLu

Colin Hou wrote:

[Hard]
  1. OD+1or2 AR+1 current situation is too pain to play with. (up to you, it depends on people's playing habit
ok tell me your decision.
hmm...
since this is a hard diff , I consider that it is better not to change.
thx >_<
Colin Hou
that stacking for 1/4 notes makes me sad, but OK

bubbled
Topic Starter
Kitsuneko

Colin Hou wrote:

that stacking for 1/4 notes makes me sad, but OK

bubbled
Colin sensei Thank you for bubble ~ :)
Kawayi Rika
Oh,it's already got bubble ~ sorry for the later ~

Good luck with rank ~
:)
Topic Starter
Kitsuneko

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Oh,it's already got bubble ~ sorry for the later ~

Good luck with rank ~
:)
Yay never mind!
Thanks Rika for your time~
Breeze
OK, it's a solid mapset, everything fine here
RANKED
Topic Starter
Kitsuneko

Breeze wrote:

OK, it's a solid mapset, everything fine here
RANKED
Thanks Breeze先生~<3
banvi
おおおおめです!
Ryafuka
yaaaaaaa
Congratz :D
NewRulerNA
おめでとう
Melophobia
やったあ
Akemi_Homura
gratz~ :3
terametis
おめでとーーーーーーーーーーーーー!!!
Hinacle
おめでと!
rui
おめでとう~ :)
jamxx
おめでとーーー!!
YTYuyu
Hurray Congratz on the rank Neko-nyan ;)
Thite
おめでとー :D
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