Vivi_Alhazerd wrote:

自分もこの曲作ってましたーω`)/

完成頑張ってください！

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NewRulerNA wrote:

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Rankedがんばって

MiLu wrote:

遅くなりました（´(ｪ)｀）ﾉ

Melophobia wrote:

[Hard]
00:04:225 (1) - Insaneに同じ
00:16:230 (6) - 左右対称に？
00:59:378 - normal soundに
01:01:442 (4,5) - ここはDS使った方がいいとような
01:01:629 (5) - newcombo?
01:09:508 (1) - 始点finish
01:21:515 (1) - ^
01:30:520 (1) - hidden reverse arrow
一瞬見えるけどこれは通らないと思う
02:15:544 (1) - 音量低めでfinish？
02:20:046 - 音量-10

Melophobia wrote:

As promised

[General]
tagsに"もっと評価されるべき"を 朝一発目の大笑い頂きました

NormalとEasyにかなりfinishが抜けてる箇所があったんですが仕様ですか...? Insaneにあわせて増やした

[Insane]
00:04:225 (1) - 00:05:350 - から音量上げてみては 全Diff音量up
00:55:626 (5,1) - switch newcombos? 速度下がるのでこっちのが良い気がします changed
01:08:883 (2,3) - 繋げた方が読みやすいかも 配置近くなりました
01:30:520 (1,2,3) - backの音がないからここはfinish無い方が聞こえが良いかとおもいます changed
01:53:032 (5,1) - switch newcombos fixed
02:00:536 (1) - 01:37:836 - を考えるとちょっと変に聞こえます やばいミスだった ノート置きなおした
始点を02:00:348に もしくは始点のfinishを外して02:00:160 (6) - の終点に追加？
02:20:046 - 音量-10 全Diff変更


神譜面すぎてふぁぼった ひ、ひぇぇ

MiLu wrote:

最初のところはKitsuneko先生にお任せします

Byakugan249 wrote:

alright let's see what I can find.

Bold: Unrankable/Must fix.
Red: You should take a look but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion.

[General]
set the lead in to 1500. i find it odd that the lead in time is at 1496. fixed

[Easy]
00:00:482 (1) - add a finish at the beginning but reduce the volume to match the vocals. added
00:07:983 (1) - and i think adding a finish at the beginning would be effective as it goes well with the piano sort of but reduce the volume of the finish. i suggest 20% because 30% is too loud. nice suggestion, changed~
00:10:984 (1) - remove the NC because it'd be hard for beginners to read since (1) has its own combo. in other words, it'd be easier for beginners if you do this. and here too. add the finish at the beginning. same reason as above. ok
00:13:986 (1) - same as 00:07:983. ok
00:16:987 (1) - ^ ok
00:19:989 (1) - ^ ok
basically for every first downbeat in the combo, add a finish at the beginning as it goes well with the piano till 00:28:994. done
00:48:504 (1) - I think the finish here is too loud. i suggest reducing it to 30%. yes it has the same volume as the finish at 00:45:503 but the one at 00:45:503 is a soft finish and this one is a normal finish. reduced for 20%
00:53:382 (2) - *nazi* i don't like the look of this slider. make this slider symmetrical. i think it looks ugly during gameplay. changed to straight
01:34:279 (3) - make this a curved slider to form somewhat of a blanket around the next slider. changed
01:50:037 (1) - i suggest putting this above (3) to avoid the slight overlap. ok, moved up
02:15:551 (4) - the path would be hard for beginners to get to. either move this somewhere else, or Ctrl+J to make the path easier for beginners. fixed

[Normal]
00:00:482 (1) - same as easy. ok
00:03:482 (3) - this note would be hard to see because it's so close together. move this above (2) so that it'd be easier to read. changed
00:07:983 (1) - same as easy. but replace the whistle for a finish because the whistle sounds a bit quiet. like i said about the piano, i think the finish sounds better with the piano. done ~
00:10:984 (1) - ^ ok
00:13:986 (1) - ^ ok
00:16:987 (1) - ^ ok
same as easy but till 00:28:994.
this diff is pretty good.

[Insane]
00:00:482 (1) - [/i]same as easy.[/i] ok
same as easy about the finishes. ok!
other than that everything looks good thanks :3

This is the best i can do. 2 stars because this mapset is pretty solid and GL . if you're having trouble understanding, pm me in-game and i'll try my best to explain or i'll give you a screenshot of what i mean.

Byakugan249 wrote:

MiLu's Hard:
alright mouse user with dem movements xD
00:00:482 (1) - same as easy. added
same as normal about the finishes.
00:34:997 (1) - move this slider up to blanket the next note. no
01:25:274 (3) - *nazi* move this up a bit to avoid the overlap. it gets in the way during gameplay. no
01:42:345 (7) - i think that this wave slider can look a lot smoother. IMO this wave slider as it stands is ugly. try to make it like this or something similar to this. fixed~
02:03:544 (3) - ooh make this symmetrical. i don't like this slider as it stands. hmm...no changed
02:08:609 (6) - if you want to make a nice v-shaped slider, make it like this. if you ignore this then make this a curved slider to blanket the end of (1). no

MiLu wrote:

Byakugan249 wrote:

MiLu's Hard:
alright mouse user with dem movements xD

00:34:997 (1) - move this slider up to blanket the next note. no if you do this,then there would be a triangle jump like this
01:25:274 (3) - *nazi* move this up a bit to avoid the overlap. it gets in the way during gameplay. no see how the notes are touching? i don't want to see that when i play ranked maps, so move it up above (2) so that it doesn't happen
02:03:544 (3) - ooh make this symmetrical. i don't like this slider as it stands. hmm...no changed ohh this is blanketing (1). alright i see.
02:08:609 (6) - if you want to make a nice v-shaped slider, make it like this. if you ignore this then make this a curved slider to blanket the end of (1). no tbh i don't see why there's so many points used for this slider. making my v-shaped slider will blanket the beginning of (5)

thx~

Mystica wrote:

Here comes my mod. thank you for accept my request~

[Easy]
00:30:494 (3) - a little ugly to see changed to simple slider

[Normal]
02:14:800 (3) - 1/2 reverse slider may fit well good idea, it's beautiful also as placement. changed!

[Insane]
Nothing to say.

Great map XD.Star for you

Mystica wrote:

[MiLu's Hard]
00:07:983 (1) - add whistle every two white lines may fit well　no. I feel that it is a little noisy....
00:22:615 (4) - whistle at end　It's the same reason.
00:25:617 (3) - ^
00:28:618 (3) - ^
01:54:352 (6) - It's better not to hide the end of slider sorry,I dont want to change this.

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Hello

[General]

Bpm = 79.989 and 159.915. Are you sure it is correct? Or 80 and 160 ??
If you don't know, ask a BAT, Let him help you to check a timing I had been feeling BPM is a bit off. I tried some patterns again, then I got BPM. Probably 159.910 is right! thank you :3

[Easy]

00:02:357 - unless green line oh, ok
00:03:107 - ^ ok
00:08:358 - ^ ok

[Normal]

okay~

[Insane]

00:00:857 - unless green line ok

That all

ertyukjh010 wrote:

[MiLu's Hard]

01:12:517 (1) - some weird of Shape. No need to surround here. fixed~

those wrote:

From .:Let those mod those maps:.

[General]
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[Insane]
02:15:747 - I'd recommend an even softer volume. 40% -> 30%, and 30% -> 20%. reduced volume

[MiLu's Hard]
-

[Normal]
01:47:043 (1) - Did a great job up til now, setting the red anchor at the right time. This one should be placed so that it bends at 01:47:418. fixed

[Easy]
01:06:520 (1) - I feel it would be more effective if the slider bends at 01:07:083 - set a red point at 01:07:083 and curved both sides

Great mapset. Good luck, I hope this gets ranked soon! I hope too... where are MATs >.<

1. OD+1or2 AR+1 current situation is too pain to play with. (up to you, it depends on people's playing habit

Colin Hou wrote:

[Hard]

1. OD+1or2 AR+1 current situation is too pain to play with. (up to you, it depends on people's playing habit

ok tell me your decision.

Colin Hou wrote:

that stacking for 1/4 notes makes me sad, but OK

bubbled

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Oh,it's already got bubble ~ sorry for the later ~

Good luck with rank ~

Breeze wrote:

OK, it's a solid mapset, everything fine here
RANKED