Sun Rainbow wrote:

Hello~Mod Requeue from my queue~
Sorry for my bad english
[General]
Song Setup:
General:
Tag:Prologue album Hachimitsu-Lemon circle Aizawa and composer What's this?0.0
Diffculty:
Overall Diffculty+1 or +2 ok
Audio:
I think it's fine
Colors:
Background colour please change: fixed
R:225
G:128
B:255
StroyBoreding:
Fine~
Advanced:
Stack Leniency change 5~ what's this?

[Normal]
I think Slider Tick Rate is 2(Timing) fixed
00:57:599 Add Note fixed
01:08:988 ^ no
03:16:488 Please change volume to 40% fixed
04:27:599 I think spinner should start here fixed

[Hard]
I think Slider Tick Rate is 2(Timing) fixed

[StoryBored]
Fine It's Good SB~

Good Song ~Why don't find MAT?

1. 02:35:376 (1) - last point move to (364,276)

1. 00:45:654 (2) - move 3rd point 1 grid left and last point 1 grid up
2. 01:46:488 (2,3,4) - here? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/281348
3. 01:53:432 (4) - stack with 5's head? I think it's better in this way
4. 02:56:210 (1,2) - move (1) 1 grid left and (2) 1 grid down and right, it stacks and looks bad now
5. 04:09:404 - spinner?
6. 04:24:821 (1) - place notes like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/281352

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

from my queue

nice map ^^

Normal

1. 02:35:376 (1) - last point move to (364,276) fixed

Hard

1. 00:45:654 (2) - move 3rd point 1 grid left and last point 1 grid up fixed
2. 01:46:488 (2,3,4) - here? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/281348 no
3. 01:53:432 (4) - stack with 5's head? I think it's better in this way no
4. 02:56:210 (1,2) - move (1) 1 grid left and (2) 1 grid down and right, it stacks and looks bad now no
5. 04:09:404 - spinner? fixed
6. 04:24:821 (1) - place notes like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/281352 fixed

that's all

Good luck~

Philippines wrote:

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SPOILER

1. Cute and Simple SB. Love the intro. :3 thanks :3
   
   
2. Great, a lot of errors! You deserve a star, but I ran out. DD: error?

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SPOILER

1. 01:49:265 (3,4) - I think this is better if it's a straight slider, but that's just me. no, i like it this way x3
   
   
2. 01:59:543 (5,1) - Try to make these sliders parallel? fixed
   
   
3. 03:26:488 (3) - This doesn't really mix with the song. Try following the vocals. fixed

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SPOILER

1. 00:43:432 (6) - One grid up. Try turning off Distance Snap if you can't move it up. fixed
   
   

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello! Mod request from My Queue

The map is great, I enjoyed playing it especially with mods :3 I like it as it is :3

About the Normal, try:
01:22:599 x:320 y:88 - Add a circle no
02:27:321 x:365 y:59 - Add a circle no
02:32:321 - Make this slider shorter and put a circle (fits to the lyric) no
03:22:321 till 03:23:432 - use x0.75 Slider Velocity multiplier fixed
03:23:710 - Add a circle at x:200 y:288 no

^ Just suggestions, In my opinion slow songs should be a little more cimplicated :3

regards~

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what I can find

Bold: Unrankable/must fix
Red: you should take a look but that's up to you
Italic: Suggestion

[General]
Since you're using a SB, disable the letterbox during breaks fixed

[Normal]
00:36:488 (1) - the end of the slider is being covered by the hitburst. players might think that this is a circle and not a slider. I suggest that you move it somewhere else so that it'd look fully visible for players. no
00:37:321 (2,3) - move this somewhere else because the spinner-osu is covering these 2 notes. IMO this might make players nervous because they might hit 1 but not (2,3) because of the spinner-osu. no
00:42:599 (3,4,5) - your gonna have to space out (4) because this is a bad blanket as the sliders are touching. it should look like this. fixed
00:54:821 (1) - this note is being covered by the spinner-osu and the hitburst which makes it hard for beginners to find. same as my 1st suggestion, move it somewhere else where it can be fully visible. no
00:59:265 (2) - this slider should start at 00:58:988. also remove the repeat and add a circle at 01:00:377. IMO this flows better to the vocals. fixed
01:07:043 (1) - add a finish at the beginning to match the vocals and the guitar, but reduce the volume if you do so. 30 or 40% should be fine as it matches with the vocals. if that doesn't work, set it to 20% no
01:11:488 (1) - same as 00:36:488 but just move this somewhere else. no
01:19:821 (5) - remove the clap at the repeat arrow because it sounds bad and it ruins the consistency. no
01:37:321 (5,6) - to make this easier, replace this for 1 full slider? this looks too hard for players as they're not used to alternating yet. no
01:55:932 (1,2) - this looks like a bad overlap because it gets in the way during gameplay. either change the direction of (2) to make it easier for players or make (1) a curved slider for a nice flow to the next note. no
02:04:821 (1) - same as 01:07:043. no
02:09:265 (1) - ^ no
02:13:710 (1) - ^ no
02:18:154 (1) - ^ no
02:30:654 (6,7) - replace this for a 1/1 slider to make it easier for players? fixed
02:40:377 (1) - this slider is being covered by spinner-osu, which makes it hard for players too see. move it somewhere else so that it'd look fully visible for beginners. no
02:42:599 (2,3) - same as 01:55:932. no
03:33:710 (1) - same as 01:11:488. no


[Hard]
increase the OD by +2. you're making this hard diff way too easy for players. fixed
00:22:321 (5) - IMO going back and forth on the same spot looks boring. i suggest that you stack this on (1) to challenge players in the beginning. no
00:30:932 (4) - remove the finish at the end because it sounds weird. it'd sound a lot better if you can move the finish to the beginning of the next note. no
01:52:321 (2) - ooh this slider looks ugly. it'd look better if this looks symmetrical. no

This is the best I can do. IMO this diff needs more finishes. this many finishes isn't enough. i've seen a lot of opportunities and ik you can find places where you can add finishes. anyways GL

• Hi hi~ request from my queue~
  　
  Red : I think you must to fix.
  Blue : Need to discuss.
  Black : Just suggest or nazi.
  　
  [ General ]
  　

1. I am very worried about last Break time , Because after break , Only a few note or others . >_<
2. About the fountain, combined with the SB in some part, almost left me blind . I suggest removing those fountain, the SB is more than enough imo.
   　
   [ Normal ]
   　
3. 00:31:210 (4) - Add a green with 20% volume please , this sounds too loud
4. 00:52:321 (1) - Finish
5. 01:27:321 (1) - Start at 01:27:182 - to follow the vocal , it means start at blue tick
6. 02:38:432 (1) - Same as above ^
7. 02:58:432 (1) - Same as above too
8. 03:31:765 (1) - Start at blue tick
9. 03:49:543 (1) - ^
10. 04:08:988 (5,6) - Change to slider is more comfortable while play xD
    　
    [ Hard ]
    　
11. 00:30:932 (4) - Same suggetion as Normal
12. 00:35:377 (4) - Use clap instead of whistle sounds more good to me xD
13. 01:28:988 (5) - Remove clap to follow the music
14. 02:39:821 (5) - ^
15. 03:41:210 (2) - Slider's tail is covered by HP Bar , try to move to other place
    　
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bossandy wrote:

• Hi hi~ request from my queue~
  　
  Red : I think you must to fix.
  Blue : Need to discuss.
  Black : Just suggest or nazi.
  　
  [ General ]
  　

1. I am very worried about last Break time , Because after break , Only a few note or others . >_< i tried it, but i have no ideo how to map it TTATT
2. About the fountain, combined with the SB in some part, almost left me blind . I suggest removing those fountain, the SB is more than enough imo. changed
   　
   [ Normal ] fixed all
   　
3. 00:31:210 (4) - Add a green with 20% volume please , this sounds too loud
4. 00:52:321 (1) - Finish
5. 01:27:321 (1) - Start at 01:27:182 - to follow the vocal , it means start at blue tick
6. 02:38:432 (1) - Same as above ^
7. 02:58:432 (1) - Same as above too
8. 03:31:765 (1) - Start at blue tick
9. 03:49:543 (1) - ^
10. 04:08:988 (5,6) - Change to slider is more comfortable while play xD
    　
    [ Hard ] fixed all
    　
11. 00:30:932 (4) - Same suggetion as Normal
12. 00:35:377 (4) - Use clap instead of whistle sounds more good to me xD
13. 01:28:988 (5) - Remove clap to follow the music
14. 02:39:821 (5) - ^
15. 03:41:210 (2) - Slider's tail is covered by HP Bar , try to move to other place
    　
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wow! Awesome song and good map!!!
Good Luck :3

Philippines wrote:

kurohana, this map is so great. D: <3

1. 04:09:127 - 04:09:404 - what is the purpose of these 3 green sections? just wondering
2. 01:46:904 - 01:47:182 - ^
3. 03:02:460 - 03:02:738 - ^
4. 03:33:710 - ^
5. I think you could add a few breaks, because you play about 3 minutes without them. On the other hand the song is slow and not exhausting so you probaly don't have to
6. I would add a whistle to spinner end at last spinner

1. I think slow slider that overlap themself are ugly but increasing the velocity would mean to edit all sliders again. Guess you can ignore this either

bomber34 wrote:

General:
Just a few minor things

1. 04:09:127 - 04:09:404 - what is the purpose of these 3 green sections? just wondering i forgot to remove them, thanks for saying ^^
2. 01:46:904 - 01:47:182 - ^ ^
3. 03:02:460 - 03:02:738 - ^ ^
4. 03:33:710 - ^ ^
5. I think you could add a few breaks, because you play about 3 minutes without them. On the other hand the song is slow and not exhausting so you probaly don't have to i like it ^^
6. I would add a whistle to spinner end at last spinner i added soft-hitfinish

Normal:

1. I think slow slider that overlap themself are ugly but increasing the velocity would mean to edit all sliders again. Guess you can ignore this either i like it ^^

Yeah, there is nothing really to mod here i guess
sry :3
really nice map

LKs wrote:

do not let this go graveyard ;_;

like it

244,136,73710,6,0,B|248:204|312:224,2,110,0|8|0

184,108,160383,6,0,B|152:152|180:184|208:216|176:268,2,165,4|2|8

1. 00:42:599 (3) - NC here, because of the new vocal~
2. 00:47:043 (3) - ^
3. 00:58:988 (2) - move this whistle to here 01:00:377 (3) - sounds much better~
4. 01:23:432 (4) - unstuck this so it'll be easy to notice >A</ because it's the easiest diff after all
5. 01:29:265 (1) - remove the whistle because it's really sounds off to me~
6. 01:32:884 (4) - add a note here so it'll sound and play better~
7. 01:40:377 (4) - NC here, because of the new vocal ~
8. 01:45:377 (4) - ^
9. 01:50:099 (4) - straight line dont look good to me :< maybe like this, it'll be playable better~
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 02:29:272 (4) - same what i said here 01:40:377 (4) -
11. 02:50:099 (2) - 1 grids down, to lined with the 02:49:265 (1) - :3
12. 03:38:988 (2) - 2 grids down to blanket the 03:40:376 (3) -
13. 04:07:877 (4) - same what i said here 01:50:099 (4)

1. 00:47:050 (5) - NC because of the new vocal~
2. 01:32:328 (2) - this slider looks so bad maybe make like this~
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:50:939 (7) - add finish at the end of this slider so it'll sounds much better~
4. 02:07:328 (7) - NC here, because of the new vocal~
5. 02:22:606 (1) - same what i said here 01:32:328 (2) - but use ctrl+j o.o
6. 03:47:050 (1) - add finish because it's sounds off to me~

LKs wrote:

check.

[General]

fine I guess offest 378? fixed

[Hard]

Spinner New Combo
01:09:272 (5) - This spinner lacks a new combo. fixed
02:20:384 (5) - ^ fixed
03:49:411 (4) - ^ fixed
01:05:384 (5) - 1 grid right fixed
04:24:822 (1,2,3) - a bit too loud, try to use 45% fixed

[Normal]

too many unsnapped hitobjects fixed
00:41:765 (2) - spacing. move to x380 y168 fixed
01:13:710 (1) - slight change

244,136,73710,6,0,B|248:204|312:224,2,110,0|8|0

fixed
01:51:495 (1) - move the center node a bit up what do you mean with this?
04:01:217 (2) - ^ but a bit down ^
02:40:383 (1) -

184,108,160383,6,0,B|152:152|180:184|208:216|176:268,2,165,4|2|8

fixed

-Sekai- wrote:

i liked this song so i'm gonna mod it =3=/

General:
Fine owo/

Normal:
there so much unsnapped points >A</ plz fix it~ fixed

1. 00:42:599 (3) - NC here, because of the new vocal~ fixed
2. 00:47:043 (3) - ^ fixed
3. 00:58:988 (2) - move this whistle to here 01:00:377 (3) - sounds much better~ fixed
4. 01:23:432 (4) - unstuck this so it'll be easy to notice >A</ because it's the easiest diff after all fixed
5. 01:29:265 (1) - remove the whistle because it's really sounds off to me~ fixed
6. 01:32:884 (4) - add a note here so it'll sound and play better~ fixed
7. 01:40:377 (4) - NC here, because of the new vocal ~ fixed
8. 01:45:377 (4) - ^ fixed
9. 01:50:099 (4) - straight line dont look good to me :< maybe like this, it'll be playable better~ fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 02:29:272 (4) - same what i said here 01:40:377 (4) - fixed
11. 02:50:099 (2) - 1 grids down, to lined with the 02:49:265 (1) - :3 fixed
12. 03:38:988 (2) - 2 grids down to blanket the 03:40:376 (3) - fixed
13. 04:07:877 (4) - same what i said here 01:50:099 (4) fixed

Hard:

1. 00:47:050 (5) - NC because of the new vocal~ fixed
2. 01:32:328 (2) - this slider looks so bad maybe make like this~ fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:50:939 (7) - add finish at the end of this slider so it'll sounds much better~ fixed
4. 02:07:328 (7) - NC here, because of the new vocal~ fixed
5. 02:22:606 (1) - same what i said here 01:32:328 (2) - but use ctrl+j o.o fixed
6. 03:47:050 (1) - add finish because it's sounds off to me~ fixed

overall nice map :3 good luck with ranking it~

LKs wrote:

I can't refuse this map

Bubbled (Bubble quantity is around 5 page again, but I don't wanna get away from this map. The vocal blends with BG and SB so great, map is decent and compact too. Maybe not the map with best technical content, but extremely harmonious)

Philippines wrote:

Oh my god <3 kurohana, let's rank this. NOW!

Loctav wrote:

Let me contribute a star, since bubble modding focuses on SP now ~

108,200,214544,2,0,B|56:120|108:44,1,165,0|8
212,72,215933,2,0,B|184:128|212:176,1,110,0|8
212,177,216766,1,0

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
Boundary case for me but better switch on the flashy warning... Since you have several seconds before the song start, it won't hurt if you have a warning there. fixed

[Normal]
00:51:489 - spinners might be a bit short. How about putting a single note here and start spinner 1/2 later? fixed
03:24:266 (6) - whistle as you've done in hard and refer to music fixed
03:34:544 (2,3,4) - [Nazi] minor fix so that (2,3) curves in the more similar way fixed

108,200,214544,2,0,B|56:120|108:44,1,165,0|8
212,72,215933,2,0,B|184:128|212:176,1,110,0|8
212,177,216766,1,0

generally spinners are a bit short and the coming note is quite close but I consider as ok because the song is qutie slow. Only pointed out one spinner because it's the shortest and has room to extend it.

Fix them and call me back.

LKs wrote:

I saved the map (/slap)

Dark_Ai wrote:

Herzlichen Glückwunsch >A</
Endlich ranked, wa? :3
die map is wirklich toll~

Philippines wrote:

OH MY GOD! <3

xXxLegendxXx wrote:

pls make some more maps, <3 how u make them, cograts !!!