1. Hard (4,28 stars, 364 notes)
2. Normal (2,37 stars, 240 notes)

1. offset 377

1. 00:30:666 - Add note here?

1. 00:30:944 (4) - Ctrl+r

KayeSara wrote:

[Timing]

1. offset 377

[Normal]

1. 00:30:666 - Add note here?

[Hard]

1. 00:30:944 (4) - Ctrl+r

Preety nice map and song :3 I can't find anything more. Orz

Katty Pie wrote:

hi)

Hard

00:44:265(7) - The ugly form slider, maybe make this http://puu.sh/l8Ye i tried to fix it, i can't see the sliderpoints on the picture >.<
01:00:654 - add note no
01:02:321(8) - remove note no
01:06:765(8) - ^ no
01:07:043(1,2) - Inconvenient place, Turn the second slider http://puu.sh/l901 ok
01:26:765 - add note no
02:12:321(4) - new kombo ok
02:12:877(6) - make this slider not double no
02:25:099(5) - new kombo ok
02:25:932 - add note no
02:29:265 - nk ok
02:33:710 - ^ ok
02:36:210 - add note no
02:37:043 - ^ no
02:42:599 - nk ok
03:52:182 - add note no
03:57:738 - ^ no
03:58:015 - ^ no

last break need a notes, i'ts here superfluous i like it

Normal

00:28:154 - add note no
00:31:210 - remove note no
00:31:488 - this kombo make http://puu.sh/l94g no
00:36:488(1) - make this slider double no
00:37:321(2) - remove this note no
00:39:265 - add 2 notes on white and red sections no
00:40:932 - make this http://puu.sh/l95g no
00:45:932 - add note no
00:48:154 - ^ no
00:50:377 - ^ no
00:51:210 - ^ no
00:55:654 - ^ no
00:59:265 - ^ and next red section no
01:05:377 - make this slider double fixed
01:08:432 - add note no
01:15:099 - ^ no
01:21:488 - ^ no
01:22:599 - ^ no
01:26:765 - ^ no
01:32:599 - ^ no
01:34:821 - ^ no
01:35:932 - ^ no
01:37:043 - ^ no
01:40:099 - ^ no
01:45:932 - ^ no
01:52:599 - ^ no
01:59:265 - ^ no
02:02:877 - ^ no
02:03:710 - ^ no
02:04:543 - remove note no
02:15:932 - add note no
02:16:488(4) - make this slider double no
02:17:599 - put note and next slider put on big white section fixed
02:25:932 - add note no
02:30:377 - ^ no
02:32:877 - remove tis slider and make (1) double no
02:35:099(5) - put this note on white section no
02:46:765 - add note no
02:51:210 - add note no
02:56:765 - remove this note and next note put on white section no
03:25:932 - add note no
03:30:377 - ^ no
03:37:043 - ^ no
03:40:099 - ^ no
03:48:154 - ^ no
03:54:821 - ^ no
03:56:210 - ^ no
03:57:877 - ^ no
04:03:710 - ^ no
04:05:099 - ^ no
04:07:043(3,4) - http://puu.sh/l9cs this better sound no

good luck with map :3

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]

Kiai Times Not On Downbeat
Kiai #5: Starts on 03:33:722, ends on 04:09:127 fixed
Unused Image Files
sparkle.png fixed
You'd better put all SB image in a SB folder. no
Breaks
04:09:465 - The break here is 16528 ms long, which is longer than the recommended 15000 ms. no

[Normal]

Fine~
02:18:988 (2) - ds fixed

[Hard]

I think 0.5x SV is for 03:29:265 (1). It is good to change most of 0.5x SV part to 0.75x fixed
00:32:877 (3,4,5,1) - make a diamond fixed
00:44:265 (7) - Music doesn't change here, so I think it is not good to use this pattern fixed
01:38:154 (1,2) - copy them from 01:36:765 (7) fixed
02:32:321 (2,3) - nazi - 1 grid right. do same to 02:31:210 (4) fixed

GL~

Ch1ka wrote:

Hi, kurohana. Mod request from my queue.

[General]
Remove Hachimitsu-Lemon from source and add in tags, it's publisher. Also add in tags Aizawa http://vgmdb.net/album/31249. Source must be empty, I guess. yes, i fixed that ^^
sparkle.png unused? hm, i deleted this already, but i can full submit it again

[Normal]
Nothing found. good ^^

[Hard]
00:27:877 (2,3) - Maybe make (3) the same as (2)? That will be better. fixed
00:49:265 (1,2) - Maybe make (2) the same as (1)? fixed

That's all. Very good map and relaxing song, great. Star~ aww, thanks x33
GL and bye!

• 00:18:154 (1,2) - these look fine standing alone but imo, it'd fit better to adjust them to 3's approach circle (+ they're little asymmetric); please change that since it's pretty obvious it's meant to be such a pattern
  00:20:377 (1) - adjust it a little more to 2's approach circle (I assume that was your plan)
  
  this

  
  00:22:599 (1,2) - the overlap is pretty, though i think the change of direction is a bit flowbreaking, try to let 1 lead more to 2's start and then rearrange so it still keeps its overlap (hope you understand what i mean by that)
  00:24:265 (3) - adjust it a little more to 2's end (for that, add a note on it and use its approach circle for adjusting, then delete it again)
  00:31:488 (1) - that curve is too harsh imo (+ the red point is... kinda pointless >.<)
  00:35:377 (4) - parts of it poke out when compared to 3's approach circle, adjust/align these please
  
  to show you what i'm talking about, try to let the red border get hidden below the approach circle

  
  00:38:154 (5) - curve is little imbalanced imo, move the first sliderpoint (not the beginning) a little to the left and adjust the rest of the slider a bit
  00:40:377 (1) - move the sliderpoint 1 grid to the right and 3 to the top, right now the curve is too sharp to the bottom
  
  this

  
  00:41:210 (2) - adjust it to 1 then
  00:42:599 (5) - adjust the shape to 6's approach circle
  00:43:432 (6) - mirror 5 again when you're done with it
  00:49:265 (1,2) - the distance between these slidertracks is incosistent, try to adjust this, it'll feel and look better
  00:50:932 (3) - it's not properly aligned to 2's track; redesign this after adjusting previous ones
  00:54:265 (2,3) - that overlap... is meh... make 3 go a little around 2 so it has no overlap and a little space in between but do it very careful please
  00:55:932 (6,7) - these feel too close to 5 with their slidertracks
  00:58:988 (2) - overlap with 1's ending is meh, put a little difference between the track and the end
  01:03:432 (2) - move sliderpoint a grid down and a grid to the right, makes the overlap more consistent and thus less irritating (even though this doesn't affect the play itself much, it feels better)
  01:04:543 (4) - the overlap between the start of this, 2's end and 3 feels awkward, please put more distance (at least not let 2 and 4 overlap)
  01:05:654 (6) - similar thing here
  01:06:765 (8) - put it 2-4 grids to the left (if you pick 4 grids, move it 1 up aswell)
  01:07:043 (1) - overlap to 6 feels awkward, same for following 2
  01:08:710 (3) - 1 grid down and 1 to the right
  01:08:988 (4) - 1 down, 3 right
  01:11:488 (1) - the curve is not perfectly aligned to 2
  01:12:877 (3) - feels too close to 1's track, move it a grid down
  01:13:710 (5,6) - even though there's not much of a problem with these, they feel weird due to not being a curve and not being a straight line, do them more curvy
  01:15:377 (7) - i don't think building this one as a symmetric curve is the best choice (since symmetric sliders with just 1 feel mostly awkward)
  01:16:210 (8) - overlap, please change this
  01:18:154 (4,5) - same as 01:13:710
  01:28:710 (3,4,5) - feels better on close spacing, a stack would fit aswell
  01:31:488 (4) - this one doesn't fit in; a) it's straight, b) it has a sharp edge where all your other sliders are built on flowing curves - please change this
  01:34:265 (2) - too close to 3's slidertrack, since one will automatically compare it to the distance between previous 6 and this combo's 1, this'll feel weird and awkward; please move 3 a bit and/or readjust the slidershape so it has a similar distance as 6 and 1
  01:40:377 (5,6) - these... are too straight in the beginning and have a too sharply done curve to the end... please change it to a more balanced form (no symmetric one though)
  01:45:654 (4) - try making the early part of this slider go more around 3, that'd feel better
  01:47:877 (2) - adjust more to 1's approach circle
  01:53:154 (3,4) - these will hide 5's slidertrack massively and give the combo a weird feeling due to the track being hidden/hard to read and just going the way back with 5... i suggest rearranging these
  01:55:377 (7) - too sharp when compared to 5 and 6, will give a weird feeling (especcially since it doesn't take the flow from 6 into it)
  01:56:765 (2) - MUCH too sharp curve, use 2 sliderpoints and make it more calm here
  01:59:821 (7) - adjust it little more to 6's ending
  02:05:654 (2,3,4,5) - don't do that to me, we're not in 2007; no straight line of circles please... and especcially.. not that angle of 4 and 5, please, no
  02:06:488 (5,6) - overlap is too harsh
  02:07:321 (7) - needs more distance to 6, the tracks overlap
  02:07:877 (8) - feels too close up to 7 aswell
  02:10:099 (2) - a mirrored version on same heigth feels meeh here... come up with a new shape to lead the player to the top again
  02:15:654 (4,5,6) - the straight line of 4's end-5-6 feels unfitting, move 5 to the right (4 grids) and 6 to the left (2 grids left, 1 down)
  02:18:154 (1) - adjust it more to 7/8's approach circles
  02:22:599 (1) - adjust more to 2's
  02:24:265 (4) - looks like it was meant to end in 1's ending, adjust please
  02:41:210 (2) - adjust more to 3's approach circle, then replace 1 by a mirrored version
  02:42:599 (1,2) - these don't feel or look like balanced curves, rebuild them please
  02:45:654 (3) - don't put it on same heigth as 1; also adjust the curve, it's too harsh how it is
  02:47:043 (1,2) - too close to each other, no consistent distance between slidertracks & such; rebuild
  02:50:932 (3) - feels a) too close to slidertrack, b) doesn't take the slider's flow, c) too much of going-the-way-back imo
  02:53:710 (1) - adjust more to 4's approach circle
  02:54:543 (2) - adjust to 1 then
  02:57:738 (5) - move it a grid to the left, a straight line is unfitting to the slidershape
  02:58:293 (1) - you might get an echoing version of the soft-hitfinish for this ending (use 20-35% volume) or the normal-hitfinish (20-25%)
  03:22:321 (5) - overlap between this and 3's track is meeh; you also better start this slider from a higher position than 4 since it goes downwards and the curve feels awkward when you have to go like this; the way of going down should build a consistent curvy flow-movement
  03:26:488 (4) - don't feel like there should be a mirrored version of 3
  03:28:988 (9,10) - the overlap between these... nhnhnganghagnaghg
  03:35:932 (5,6) - not-balanced curves again
  03:40:376 (6) - feels quite okay, even though you could try to adjust it to 7's approach circle (and after that adjust 7 the same way)
  03:44:821 (5,6) - i guess you know what i'm going to say here? rebuild
  03:47:043 (1,2) - inconsistent distance between tracks, awkward feeling (+ 2 should start more to the right to take a bit of 1's flow)
  03:48:710 (3) - curve is too sharp
  03:51:488 (1,2) - the space in between these feels so... duh... give it a shape by adjusting the sliders
  03:53:710 (5,6) - curves, unbalanced, redo, thanks
  04:00:376 (1,2) - same as 3:40:376
  04:03:432 (6) - not perfectly adjusted to 5's track; also, start it more to the top-left to take a bit of 5's flow
  04:04:821 (1,2) - same as 3:40:376
  04:27:182 (1) - make the spinner fade out from 30% to 10% volume, set only the end on 5%

- Dis where I come from, it's all Ono's fault /o/

Hard

Normal

OnosakiHito wrote:

Ich komme von hier~

Mod

[Normal]
00:45:377 (1,2) - leichte Überlappung der borderlines. Kann man verhindern.
00:49:821 (1,2) - ^
00:53:710~01:11:488 - {Dies könnte Neulinge verwirren(das hat es mich auch) weswegen ich vorschlage in der [Normal] keine timelines unter x1.0 zu haben.
00:54:821 - Das mappen der vocals kann neulinge auch verwirren. Wie wäre es hiermit? (auch bei den folgenden parts würde das folgen der Musik vorschlagen)

}
02:04:821 - Diese Stelle hier ist kritisch. Das wilrd neulinge vollkommen aus dem tackt bringen weil es vn x1.00 -> x0.50 springt. Ich schlage auch hier vor es bei x1.00 zu belassen dafür jedoch weniger circles/slider zu nutzen.
02:15:377 - das overlapping ist wegen den x0.50 nun schwerer
03:16:488 (2,3,4) - Das ist echt zusammen gekniffen. Ein anderer Weg ist denke ich besser.
03:28:710 (5,6,7) - ^ - Ansonsten ist x0,50 da hier wenig noten genutzt wurden.

[Hard]
Generel:
AR + 1? Manchmal ist verwirrt es wegen den overlaps.
Hitcircles:
01:16:210 (8) - wow, das war etwas verwirrend da der hitcircles so nah am slider ist und sich treffen. Bissen mehr abstand eventuell?
(So wie hier z.b. 02:50:932 (3) - )

Das ist alles, ich hoffe ich konnte dir helfen.
Hier hast du einen Stern von mir. Viel Glück~!

SkyDevil wrote:

Moddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

What a quiet song o_o

Normal
00:20:377 no new combo here >W<
00:24:821 ^
00:55:932 moar distance XD
01:05:377 ^
02:14:821 ^
03:26:488 ^

Hard
01:02:599 hmm, this slider closer to last one... xD
02:36:488 Moar distance :3

Jenny wrote:

Hard:

Set drain to 6 (8 is too high for such a map + song), AR to 7 and OD to either 5 or 6.

Hardcore-naziing inc, I hope you find it reasoned, I do.

• 00:18:154 (1,2) - these look fine standing alone but imo, it'd fit better to adjust them to 3's approach circle (+ they're little asymmetric); please change that since it's pretty obvious it's meant to be such a pattern
  00:20:377 (1) - adjust it a little more to 2's approach circle (I assume that was your plan)
  
  this

  
  00:22:599 (1,2) - the overlap is pretty, though i think the change of direction is a bit flowbreaking, try to let 1 lead more to 2's start and then rearrange so it still keeps its overlap (hope you understand what i mean by that)
  00:24:265 (3) - adjust it a little more to 2's end (for that, add a note on it and use its approach circle for adjusting, then delete it again)
  00:31:488 (1) - that curve is too harsh imo (+ the red point is... kinda pointless >.<)
  00:35:377 (4) - parts of it poke out when compared to 3's approach circle, adjust/align these please
  
  to show you what i'm talking about, try to let the red border get hidden below the approach circle

  
  00:38:154 (5) - curve is little imbalanced imo, move the first sliderpoint (not the beginning) a little to the left and adjust the rest of the slider a bit
  00:40:377 (1) - move the sliderpoint 1 grid to the right and 3 to the top, right now the curve is too sharp to the bottom
  
  this

  
  00:41:210 (2) - adjust it to 1 then
  00:42:599 (5) - adjust the shape to 6's approach circle
  00:43:432 (6) - mirror 5 again when you're done with it
  00:49:265 (1,2) - the distance between these slidertracks is incosistent, try to adjust this, it'll feel and look better
  00:50:932 (3) - it's not properly aligned to 2's track; redesign this after adjusting previous ones
  00:54:265 (2,3) - that overlap... is meh... make 3 go a little around 2 so it has no overlap and a little space in between but do it very careful please
  00:55:932 (6,7) - these feel too close to 5 with their slidertracks
  00:58:988 (2) - overlap with 1's ending is meh, put a little difference between the track and the end
  01:03:432 (2) - move sliderpoint a grid down and a grid to the right, makes the overlap more consistent and thus less irritating (even though this doesn't affect the play itself much, it feels better)
  01:04:543 (4) - the overlap between the start of this, 2's end and 3 feels awkward, please put more distance (at least not let 2 and 4 overlap)
  01:05:654 (6) - similar thing here
  01:06:765 (8) - put it 2-4 grids to the left (if you pick 4 grids, move it 1 up aswell)
  01:07:043 (1) - overlap to 6 feels awkward, same for following 2
  01:08:710 (3) - 1 grid down and 1 to the right
  01:08:988 (4) - 1 down, 3 right
  01:11:488 (1) - the curve is not perfectly aligned to 2
  01:12:877 (3) - feels too close to 1's track, move it a grid down
  01:13:710 (5,6) - even though there's not much of a problem with these, they feel weird due to not being a curve and not being a straight line, do them more curvy
  01:15:377 (7) - i don't think building this one as a symmetric curve is the best choice (since symmetric sliders with just 1 feel mostly awkward)
  01:16:210 (8) - overlap, please change this
  01:18:154 (4,5) - same as 01:13:710
  01:28:710 (3,4,5) - feels better on close spacing, a stack would fit aswell
  01:31:488 (4) - this one doesn't fit in; a) it's straight, b) it has a sharp edge where all your other sliders are built on flowing curves - please change this
  01:34:265 (2) - too close to 3's slidertrack, since one will automatically compare it to the distance between previous 6 and this combo's 1, this'll feel weird and awkward; please move 3 a bit and/or readjust the slidershape so it has a similar distance as 6 and 1
  01:40:377 (5,6) - these... are too straight in the beginning and have a too sharply done curve to the end... please change it to a more balanced form (no symmetric one though)
  01:45:654 (4) - try making the early part of this slider go more around 3, that'd feel better
  01:47:877 (2) - adjust more to 1's approach circle
  01:53:154 (3,4) - these will hide 5's slidertrack massively and give the combo a weird feeling due to the track being hidden/hard to read and just going the way back with 5... i suggest rearranging these
  01:55:377 (7) - too sharp when compared to 5 and 6, will give a weird feeling (especcially since it doesn't take the flow from 6 into it)
  01:56:765 (2) - MUCH too sharp curve, use 2 sliderpoints and make it more calm here
  01:59:821 (7) - adjust it little more to 6's ending
  02:05:654 (2,3,4,5) - don't do that to me, we're not in 2007; no straight line of circles please... and especcially.. not that angle of 4 and 5, please, no
  02:06:488 (5,6) - overlap is too harsh
  02:07:321 (7) - needs more distance to 6, the tracks overlap
  02:07:877 (8) - feels too close up to 7 aswell
  02:10:099 (2) - a mirrored version on same heigth feels meeh here... come up with a new shape to lead the player to the top again
  02:15:654 (4,5,6) - the straight line of 4's end-5-6 feels unfitting, move 5 to the right (4 grids) and 6 to the left (2 grids left, 1 down)
  02:18:154 (1) - adjust it more to 7/8's approach circles
  02:22:599 (1) - adjust more to 2's
  02:24:265 (4) - looks like it was meant to end in 1's ending, adjust please
  02:41:210 (2) - adjust more to 3's approach circle, then replace 1 by a mirrored version
  02:42:599 (1,2) - these don't feel or look like balanced curves, rebuild them please
  02:45:654 (3) - don't put it on same heigth as 1; also adjust the curve, it's too harsh how it is
  02:47:043 (1,2) - too close to each other, no consistent distance between slidertracks & such; rebuild
  02:50:932 (3) - feels a) too close to slidertrack, b) doesn't take the slider's flow, c) too much of going-the-way-back imo
  02:53:710 (1) - adjust more to 4's approach circle
  02:54:543 (2) - adjust to 1 then
  02:57:738 (5) - move it a grid to the left, a straight line is unfitting to the slidershape
  02:58:293 (1) - you might get an echoing version of the soft-hitfinish for this ending (use 20-35% volume) or the normal-hitfinish (20-25%)
  03:22:321 (5) - overlap between this and 3's track is meeh; you also better start this slider from a higher position than 4 since it goes downwards and the curve feels awkward when you have to go like this; the way of going down should build a consistent curvy flow-movement
  03:26:488 (4) - don't feel like there should be a mirrored version of 3
  03:28:988 (9,10) - the overlap between these... nhnhnganghagnaghg
  03:35:932 (5,6) - not-balanced curves again
  03:40:376 (6) - feels quite okay, even though you could try to adjust it to 7's approach circle (and after that adjust 7 the same way)
  03:44:821 (5,6) - i guess you know what i'm going to say here? rebuild
  03:47:043 (1,2) - inconsistent distance between tracks, awkward feeling (+ 2 should start more to the right to take a bit of 1's flow)
  03:48:710 (3) - curve is too sharp
  03:51:488 (1,2) - the space in between these feels so... duh... give it a shape by adjusting the sliders
  03:53:710 (5,6) - curves, unbalanced, redo, thanks
  04:00:376 (1,2) - same as 3:40:376
  04:03:432 (6) - not perfectly adjusted to 5's track; also, start it more to the top-left to take a bit of 5's flow
  04:04:821 (1,2) - same as 3:40:376
  04:27:182 (1) - make the spinner fade out from 30% to 10% volume, set only the end on 5%

- Dis where I come from, it's all Ono's fault /o/

L i d a N wrote:

Hey, ich bin von hier~

Hard

1. HP & OD -1
2. 00:30:932 (4) - Finish am Ende passt imo nicht.
3. 00:54:543 (3) - Versuch den Slider so zu machen, dass er nicht mit 00:54:265 (2) überlappt.
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 02:07:877 (8) - Überlappt mit 02:06:765 (6,7).

Normal

1. HP & AR -1
2. Die kleinen Slider sehen sehr gequetscht aus, ich fänds besser wenn du die durch Circle ersetzt.
3. Solltest evtl., wie Ono schon sagte, kein x0.5 benutzen, es verwirrt Neulinge und sieht teilweise recht komisch aus wegen der SV von 1,1.

Schöne Map, viel Glück

LKs wrote:

From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

General

fine o o

http://puu.sh/mTu1 better BG pic, make it’s size 1024x768 fixed

Normal

00:33:710 (1) - I was supposing this slider will be set on the lower left quarter. Now it is covered by previous notes. I'd suggest not using overlap on this diff what do you mean with this?
00:52:321 (1) - no need to whistle fixed
02:58:432 (1) - ^ fixed
04:03:432 (4) - 1 grid left fixed

Hard

01:31:488 (4) - missing clap? fixed

like this song, I think I'll add this as my online favorite if this can be mapped better(and have a higher diff)

star'd

Gabex3 wrote:

Goodluck on your map. o/

[Normal]

1. I think you can do 04:09:265 ~04:27:043 , not a long break time
   
   
2. 00:42:599 (3,4) - cover completely
3. 00:59:821 (1) - ctrl+J and 12 grid up ?!
4. 01:31:488 (2,3) - cover completely
5. 01:38:988 (2,3) - ^
6. 01:51:488 (1,2) - ^
7. 02:24:821 (2,3) - ^
8. 02:27:876 (2,3) - ^
9. 02:40:376 (1) - this ?!
   

   184,108,160376,6,0,B|156:152|184:192|184:192|216:232|184:260,2,165,4|2|8

10. 02:54:543 (4,5) - cover completely
11. 03:26:488 (3,4) - ^
12. 03:47:043 (1,2) - ^
13. 03:58:154 (3,4) - ^

[Hard]

1. I think you can do 04:09:265 ~04:27:043 , not a long break time
   
   
2. 00:27:599 (1,3) - cover completely
3. 00:55:377 (4,7) - let (7) cover (4) ?
4. 03:28:154 (8,9) - cover completely

l1106188 wrote:

Request from my modding queue.

Here are just suggestion ~OAO
If you do not like , you can skip it .

[Normal]

1. I think you can do 04:09:265 ~04:27:043 , not a long break time no, sorry >.<
   
   
2. 00:42:599 (3,4) - cover completely fixed
3. 00:59:821 (1) - ctrl+J and 12 grid up ?! hum, don't know what you mean >.<
4. 01:31:488 (2,3) - cover completely fixed
5. 01:38:988 (2,3) - ^ fixed
6. 01:51:488 (1,2) - ^ fixed
7. 02:24:821 (2,3) - ^ fixed
8. 02:27:876 (2,3) - ^ fixed
9. 02:40:376 (1) - this ?! fixed
   

   184,108,160376,6,0,B|156:152|184:192|184:192|216:232|184:260,2,165,4|2|8

10. 02:54:543 (4,5) - cover completely fixed
11. 03:26:488 (3,4) - ^ fixed
12. 03:47:043 (1,2) - ^ fixed
13. 03:58:154 (3,4) - ^ fixed

[Hard]

1. I think you can do 04:09:265 ~04:27:043 , not a long break time no, sorry >.<
   
   
2. 00:27:599 (1,3) - cover completely fixed
3. 00:55:377 (4,7) - let (7) cover (4) ? fixed
4. 03:28:154 (8,9) - cover completely

good song,star~
This song has treated me, lol .
and sorry to my poor English

Kuma-san wrote:

[Hard]
00:18:988 (2) - add clap on end of slider? no
00:20:099 - note pls no
00:21:210 (2) - change to slider? no
00:22:321 - note fixed
00:36:210 - ^ no
00:39:265 - ^ no
00:45:099 - note ? no
01:02:321 (7,1) - >_> move 1 fixed
01:04:265 (3,4) - move 4 fixed
01:05:377 (5,6) - C'mooon.Just use 1.1 spacing i used 1.1 on every 0.75 part
02:07:877 (8) - 1 grid left ^
02:10:099 (2) - ^ ^
02:10:932 (3) - rly,1.1 will better ^

[Normal]
00:39:543 - note? fixed
02:34:543 (4) - looks not good in game fixed
02:35:099 (5) - >_> fixed

That's all
Star~

P.s. i have not hitsounds on my map.so please don't write about it

nich95 wrote:

Hi, kurohana

From my modding queue

[Normal]

01:23:988 (x) - Add a note? yes
01:27:043 (1) - Add finish yes
02:15:654 (3,4) - The distance is too close. fixed
03:21:310 (7) - Add clap no
04:09:265 (1) - Remove NC? fixed

[Hard]

00:36:765 (2) - Move this to overlap with begin of slider at 00:35:377 (4). (Don't forget move 00:37:599 (3,4,5).) fixed
01:02:599 (1) - Add whistle in end of slider fixed
02:16:765 (6) - Move to up 1 grid fixed
02:40:377 (1) - Same as 01:02:599 (1) fixed
03:22:043 (4) - Add whistle fixed
03:26:488 (4) - Add whistle in begin of slider fixed
03:57:599 (4) - Add clap fixed
04:09:265 (1) - Remove NC? fixed

That's all, that I can find them.
nice map and song, give a star

Good luck~

Xavier18488 wrote:

My mod!

..::NORMAL::..
00:30:099 - Delete Hitsound Whistle Add Hitsound Clap no
01:02:321 (3,4) - Transform Into Slider fixed
01:05:377 - Delete Hitsound Whislte, For Me, Sounds Better no
01:37:599 - There Is Dificult To See Put Like This i can't see this picture now >.< but i think you mean this overlapp? i changed it

..::HARD::..
01:55:377 - 1 Grind Left 1 Grind Up (Stays In The End Of The Other Slider) fixed

I like this map Star!

1. Song Setup - Colors - combo color - 2 and 3 combo colors are too similar. i think better to change the order ↓ propose the order
   

   Combo1 : 145,64,242
   Combo2 : 255,128,192
   Combo3 : 210,129,254
   Combo4 : 0,122,157

1. 00:58:154~01:08:988 - I think better to match the vocal or drum, the rhythm was a little more simple, and easy to play for beginners.
   fro ex: drum follow: 00:58:154~01:01:488 http://puu.sh/nnqD , 01:02:599~01:05:932 http://puu.sh/nnr6
   vocal follow: 00:58:154~01:02:043 http://puu.sh/nnta , 01:02:599~01:06:488 http://puu.sh/nntB
2. 01:10:932 - suggestion: add green line. S:C1 vol30%. i feel loud sound ><
3. 01:27:043 (1) - remove NC
4. 01:35:654 (3,4) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/nnEE
5. 02:22:043 - same suggestion 01:10:932
6. 02:31:210 (7) - add clap
7. 02:35:376 (6) - add NC and 02:38:154 (1) - remove NC ( i think too long NC in normal diff)
8. 03:19:821 (5) - add NC and 03:20:376 (1) - remove NC. ( In the same combo HP will continue to decrease. It is not easy for beginners )
9. 03:22:043 (3) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/nnPf
10. 03:51:488 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
11. 04:03:988 (5) - add note. fit well to vocal imo
12. 04:27:321 (1) - In the same way as harddiff, gradually lower the volume is better
    
    There are a lot of stack note. many stack is not easy for a beginner

1. 00:30:932 (4) - add finish to end of the slider. ( same normal diff )
2. 00:38:154 (5) - Suggestion of the form: http://puu.sh/nnWK such one has good flow
3. 00:53:988 (1) - remove note. I prefer to stop the momentum once
4. 01:10:932 - same suggestion normal diff
5. 01:16:210 (8) - add NC and 01:16:765 (1) - remove NC
6. 01:24:821 (8) - add NC
7. 02:12:321 (1) - remove NC
8. 02:22:043 - same suggestion normal diff
9. 02:22:599~03:02:599 - Why does only this kiaitime is different placement of the NC? ( The NC of this kiatime is short but others long ) I recommend that you unify it to short NC like this kiaitime.
10. 03:02:599 - green line. volume is small, the customhitsound(soft-hitfinish2) does not have a meaning. Why is volume different from normal diff?
11. 03:42:321 (9) - add clap

1. cotton.png , twinkle snow.png - Is it intentional that time for fading is different?
   others fine

kosiga wrote:

hi~ kurohana

from m4m queue ~

here my mod ~

[General]

1. Song Setup - Colors - combo color - 2 and 3 combo colors are too similar. i think better to change the order ↓ propose the order
   

   Combo1 : 145,64,242
   Combo2 : 255,128,192
   Combo3 : 210,129,254
   Combo4 : 0,122,157

   fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:58:154~01:08:988 - I think better to match the vocal or drum, the rhythm was a little more simple, and easy to play for beginners.
   fro ex: drum follow: 00:58:154~01:01:488 http://puu.sh/nnqD , 01:02:599~01:05:932 http://puu.sh/nnr6 fixed
   vocal follow: 00:58:154~01:02:043 http://puu.sh/nnta , 01:02:599~01:06:488 http://puu.sh/nntB
2. 01:10:932 - suggestion: add green line. S:C1 vol30%. i feel loud sound >< fixed
3. 01:27:043 (1) - remove NC fixed
4. 01:35:654 (3,4) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/nnEE fixed
5. 02:22:043 - same suggestion 01:10:932 fixed
6. 02:31:210 (7) - add clap fixed
7. 02:35:376 (6) - add NC and 02:38:154 (1) - remove NC ( i think too long NC in normal diff) fixed
8. 03:19:821 (5) - add NC and 03:20:376 (1) - remove NC. ( In the same combo HP will continue to decrease. It is not easy for beginners ) fixed
9. 03:22:043 (3) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/nnPf fixed
10. 03:51:488 (1) - add finish to start of the slider fixed
11. 04:03:988 (5) - add note. fit well to vocal imo fixed
12. 04:27:321 (1) - In the same way as harddiff, gradually lower the volume is better fixed
    
    There are a lot of stack note. many stack is not easy for a beginner no

[Hard]

1. 00:30:932 (4) - add finish to end of the slider. ( same normal diff ) fixed
2. 00:38:154 (5) - Suggestion of the form: http://puu.sh/nnWK such one has good flow fixed
3. 00:53:988 (1) - remove note. I prefer to stop the momentum once fixed
4. 01:10:932 - same suggestion normal diff fixed
5. 01:16:210 (8) - add NC and 01:16:765 (1) - remove NC fixed
6. 01:24:821 (8) - add NC fixed
7. 02:12:321 (1) - remove NC fixed
8. 02:22:043 - same suggestion normal diff fixed
9. 02:22:599~03:02:599 - Why does only this kiaitime is different placement of the NC? ( The NC of this kiatime is short but others long ) I recommend that you unify it to short NC like this kiaitime. fixed
10. 03:02:599 - green line. volume is small, the customhitsound(soft-hitfinish2) does not have a meaning. Why is volume different from normal diff? fixed
11. 03:42:321 (9) - add clap fixed

[SB]

1. cotton.png , twinkle snow.png - Is it intentional that time for fading is different?
   others fine fixed

good map :3 star☆ and good luck

Jebok wrote:

Wao, I like this song! And the beatmap I'll star~!

Normal
00:33:710 (1,2) - I'd love to see a spinner here. Remove (1) and (2) and place a spinner from 00:33:710 untill 00:35:932 (4 bars long) fixed
00:40:932 (1,2) - A bit higher slope of the sliders? Ending squares up 3 on the grid, if u agree. fixed
01:02:599 (1,2,3) - Don't really like how this combo goes. (3) is a bit over (1) and (2) so how about moving (1) to x:152 and y:224 and then snapping (2) to x:56 y:280 and then distance snapping the rest? fixed
01:41:210 (5) - Move it so that y:312, distance snap the fallowing notes. fixed
02:31:488 (1) - In places such as this, you might like this little jump where distance snap is x1.6 (alt+mouse wheel). a 'jump' in normal? 'im not sure about this...
03:29:265 (1) - ^ ^
03:51:488 (1) - Turn horizontally then vertically, so that the curve is on the other side, looks nicer. sorry, i don't know what you mean
03:56:488 (1,2,..) - A bit confusing crowding here for a newbie. try to get this new combo further away from the beginning of (5)? fixed
04:05:377 (1,2,..) - Pretty much the same as ^, (5) is (6) now. fixed

Hard
00:23:432 (2) - Try not to make a slider on another slider. Turn the curve of this slider to the other side. Slider over slider is getting pretty standard for a lot of beatmaps, but in my opinions looks horrible ): fixed
00:54:265 (1,1,1,1) - A bit of jumping on this part maybe? Highlight each combo, distance snap to x1.6 (alt+mouse wheel) fixed
01:25:654 (2) - Same as for 00:23:432 no
02:29:265 (1) - No new combo no
02:47:043 (1) - ^ no
03:40:377 (1) - ^ no
03:58:154 (1) - ^ no
04:07:877 (1) - I don't like this colour so ^ no
04:27:182 - Difficulty shouldn't change you spinner length... Move this 1/4 forward? no

Sun Rainbow wrote:

Hello~Mod Requeue from my queue~
Sorry for my bad english
[General]
Song Setup:
General:
Tag:Prologue album Hachimitsu-Lemon circle Aizawa and composer What's this?0.0
Diffculty:
Overall Diffculty+1 or +2 ok
Audio:
I think it's fine
Colors:
Background colour please change: fixed
R:225
G:128
B:255
StroyBoreding:
Fine~
Advanced:
Stack Leniency change 5~ what's this?

[Normal]
I think Slider Tick Rate is 2(Timing) fixed
00:57:599 Add Note fixed
01:08:988 ^ no
03:16:488 Please change volume to 40% fixed
04:27:599 I think spinner should start here fixed

[Hard]
I think Slider Tick Rate is 2(Timing) fixed

[StoryBored]
Fine It's Good SB~

Good Song ~Why don't find MAT?

1. 02:35:376 (1) - last point move to (364,276)

1. 00:45:654 (2) - move 3rd point 1 grid left and last point 1 grid up
2. 01:46:488 (2,3,4) - here? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/281348
3. 01:53:432 (4) - stack with 5's head? I think it's better in this way
4. 02:56:210 (1,2) - move (1) 1 grid left and (2) 1 grid down and right, it stacks and looks bad now
5. 04:09:404 - spinner?
6. 04:24:821 (1) - place notes like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/281352

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

from my queue

nice map ^^

Normal

1. 02:35:376 (1) - last point move to (364,276) fixed

Hard

1. 00:45:654 (2) - move 3rd point 1 grid left and last point 1 grid up fixed
2. 01:46:488 (2,3,4) - here? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/281348 no
3. 01:53:432 (4) - stack with 5's head? I think it's better in this way no
4. 02:56:210 (1,2) - move (1) 1 grid left and (2) 1 grid down and right, it stacks and looks bad now no
5. 04:09:404 - spinner? fixed
6. 04:24:821 (1) - place notes like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/281352 fixed

that's all

Good luck~

Philippines wrote:

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXxXXXXGENERAL

SPOILER

1. Cute and Simple SB. Love the intro. :3 thanks :3
   
   
2. Great, a lot of errors! You deserve a star, but I ran out. DD: error?

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXXXXXXNORMAL

SPOILER

1. 01:49:265 (3,4) - I think this is better if it's a straight slider, but that's just me. no, i like it this way x3
   
   
2. 01:59:543 (5,1) - Try to make these sliders parallel? fixed
   
   
3. 03:26:488 (3) - This doesn't really mix with the song. Try following the vocals. fixed

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXxXXXXXHARD

SPOILER

1. 00:43:432 (6) - One grid up. Try turning off Distance Snap if you can't move it up. fixed
   
   

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello! Mod request from My Queue

The map is great, I enjoyed playing it especially with mods :3 I like it as it is :3

About the Normal, try:
01:22:599 x:320 y:88 - Add a circle no
02:27:321 x:365 y:59 - Add a circle no
02:32:321 - Make this slider shorter and put a circle (fits to the lyric) no
03:22:321 till 03:23:432 - use x0.75 Slider Velocity multiplier fixed
03:23:710 - Add a circle at x:200 y:288 no

^ Just suggestions, In my opinion slow songs should be a little more cimplicated :3

regards~

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what I can find

Bold: Unrankable/must fix
Red: you should take a look but that's up to you
Italic: Suggestion

[General]
Since you're using a SB, disable the letterbox during breaks fixed

[Normal]
00:36:488 (1) - the end of the slider is being covered by the hitburst. players might think that this is a circle and not a slider. I suggest that you move it somewhere else so that it'd look fully visible for players. no
00:37:321 (2,3) - move this somewhere else because the spinner-osu is covering these 2 notes. IMO this might make players nervous because they might hit 1 but not (2,3) because of the spinner-osu. no
00:42:599 (3,4,5) - your gonna have to space out (4) because this is a bad blanket as the sliders are touching. it should look like this. fixed
00:54:821 (1) - this note is being covered by the spinner-osu and the hitburst which makes it hard for beginners to find. same as my 1st suggestion, move it somewhere else where it can be fully visible. no
00:59:265 (2) - this slider should start at 00:58:988. also remove the repeat and add a circle at 01:00:377. IMO this flows better to the vocals. fixed
01:07:043 (1) - add a finish at the beginning to match the vocals and the guitar, but reduce the volume if you do so. 30 or 40% should be fine as it matches with the vocals. if that doesn't work, set it to 20% no
01:11:488 (1) - same as 00:36:488 but just move this somewhere else. no
01:19:821 (5) - remove the clap at the repeat arrow because it sounds bad and it ruins the consistency. no
01:37:321 (5,6) - to make this easier, replace this for 1 full slider? this looks too hard for players as they're not used to alternating yet. no
01:55:932 (1,2) - this looks like a bad overlap because it gets in the way during gameplay. either change the direction of (2) to make it easier for players or make (1) a curved slider for a nice flow to the next note. no
02:04:821 (1) - same as 01:07:043. no
02:09:265 (1) - ^ no
02:13:710 (1) - ^ no
02:18:154 (1) - ^ no
02:30:654 (6,7) - replace this for a 1/1 slider to make it easier for players? fixed
02:40:377 (1) - this slider is being covered by spinner-osu, which makes it hard for players too see. move it somewhere else so that it'd look fully visible for beginners. no
02:42:599 (2,3) - same as 01:55:932. no
03:33:710 (1) - same as 01:11:488. no


[Hard]
increase the OD by +2. you're making this hard diff way too easy for players. fixed
00:22:321 (5) - IMO going back and forth on the same spot looks boring. i suggest that you stack this on (1) to challenge players in the beginning. no
00:30:932 (4) - remove the finish at the end because it sounds weird. it'd sound a lot better if you can move the finish to the beginning of the next note. no
01:52:321 (2) - ooh this slider looks ugly. it'd look better if this looks symmetrical. no

This is the best I can do. IMO this diff needs more finishes. this many finishes isn't enough. i've seen a lot of opportunities and ik you can find places where you can add finishes. anyways GL

• Hi hi~ request from my queue~
  　
  Red : I think you must to fix.
  Blue : Need to discuss.
  Black : Just suggest or nazi.
  　
  [ General ]
  　

1. I am very worried about last Break time , Because after break , Only a few note or others . >_<
2. About the fountain, combined with the SB in some part, almost left me blind . I suggest removing those fountain, the SB is more than enough imo.
   　
   [ Normal ]
   　
3. 00:31:210 (4) - Add a green with 20% volume please , this sounds too loud
4. 00:52:321 (1) - Finish
5. 01:27:321 (1) - Start at 01:27:182 - to follow the vocal , it means start at blue tick
6. 02:38:432 (1) - Same as above ^
7. 02:58:432 (1) - Same as above too
8. 03:31:765 (1) - Start at blue tick
9. 03:49:543 (1) - ^
10. 04:08:988 (5,6) - Change to slider is more comfortable while play xD
    　
    [ Hard ]
    　
11. 00:30:932 (4) - Same suggetion as Normal
12. 00:35:377 (4) - Use clap instead of whistle sounds more good to me xD
13. 01:28:988 (5) - Remove clap to follow the music
14. 02:39:821 (5) - ^
15. 03:41:210 (2) - Slider's tail is covered by HP Bar , try to move to other place
    　
    　　--------------------------------------------------------

bossandy wrote:

• Hi hi~ request from my queue~
  　
  Red : I think you must to fix.
  Blue : Need to discuss.
  Black : Just suggest or nazi.
  　
  [ General ]
  　

1. I am very worried about last Break time , Because after break , Only a few note or others . >_< i tried it, but i have no ideo how to map it TTATT
2. About the fountain, combined with the SB in some part, almost left me blind . I suggest removing those fountain, the SB is more than enough imo. changed
   　
   [ Normal ] fixed all
   　
3. 00:31:210 (4) - Add a green with 20% volume please , this sounds too loud
4. 00:52:321 (1) - Finish
5. 01:27:321 (1) - Start at 01:27:182 - to follow the vocal , it means start at blue tick
6. 02:38:432 (1) - Same as above ^
7. 02:58:432 (1) - Same as above too
8. 03:31:765 (1) - Start at blue tick
9. 03:49:543 (1) - ^
10. 04:08:988 (5,6) - Change to slider is more comfortable while play xD
    　
    [ Hard ] fixed all
    　
11. 00:30:932 (4) - Same suggetion as Normal
12. 00:35:377 (4) - Use clap instead of whistle sounds more good to me xD
13. 01:28:988 (5) - Remove clap to follow the music
14. 02:39:821 (5) - ^
15. 03:41:210 (2) - Slider's tail is covered by HP Bar , try to move to other place
    　
    　　--------------------------------------------------------

wow! Awesome song and good map!!!
Good Luck :3

Philippines wrote:

kurohana, this map is so great. D: <3

1. 04:09:127 - 04:09:404 - what is the purpose of these 3 green sections? just wondering
2. 01:46:904 - 01:47:182 - ^
3. 03:02:460 - 03:02:738 - ^
4. 03:33:710 - ^
5. I think you could add a few breaks, because you play about 3 minutes without them. On the other hand the song is slow and not exhausting so you probaly don't have to
6. I would add a whistle to spinner end at last spinner

1. I think slow slider that overlap themself are ugly but increasing the velocity would mean to edit all sliders again. Guess you can ignore this either

bomber34 wrote:

General:
Just a few minor things

1. 04:09:127 - 04:09:404 - what is the purpose of these 3 green sections? just wondering i forgot to remove them, thanks for saying ^^
2. 01:46:904 - 01:47:182 - ^ ^
3. 03:02:460 - 03:02:738 - ^ ^
4. 03:33:710 - ^ ^
5. I think you could add a few breaks, because you play about 3 minutes without them. On the other hand the song is slow and not exhausting so you probaly don't have to i like it ^^
6. I would add a whistle to spinner end at last spinner i added soft-hitfinish

Normal:

1. I think slow slider that overlap themself are ugly but increasing the velocity would mean to edit all sliders again. Guess you can ignore this either i like it ^^

Yeah, there is nothing really to mod here i guess
sry :3
really nice map

LKs wrote:

do not let this go graveyard ;_;

like it