1. Easy (1.91 stars, 91 notes)
2. Hard (4.96 stars, 232 notes)
3. Normal (4.13 stars, 146 notes)

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what I can find.

General:
I guess it's clear.

Easy:
hmm is there a reason why the beat snap is at 1/8? It's not a big problem actually (: - plus this song is 70 BPM, it's easier to edit with 1/8 snap~
00:13:872 (1) - Ctrl+J so that it can form a blanket around the previous slider. beginners might think that this is a 1/2 slider and not a 1/1 slider because the slider end of (3) is covering the middle of (1) It's fine imo, especially along the previous rhythms :3 - made this slider tidier anw
00:28:443 (2) - i guess that this is your mapping style so i won't bother with this.
00:34:872 (1) - ooh at this rate, you're gonna make beginners nervous because it's fully touching the Hp bar. suggest that you move it down a bit. It's fine imo~
00:43:872 (3) - hmm how about spacing this out? beginners might hit this too early. Not changed, but made sliders around here tidier
00:47:301 (5) - same as 00:13:872^
00:51:586 (1) - move this somewhere else. the hitburst is covering this note and beginners might not know where this slider is. I suggest that you move it here so that it can form a blanket around (4) Ah yes- fixed it my way though~

Normal:
same as easy about the beat snap.
00:29:086 (4) - delete this note. sounds like it's not following anything. Sure~
00:47:943 (6) - ^ I still think this note is needed, well, leaving as is for now though

Hard:
same as easy about the beat snap
other than that i don't see any problems

This is the best I can do. GL

Hinsvar wrote:

Another instrumental song? Okay... Let's just mod now.

*Usual note: Gold ones are a must-do. Yes, I'm playing with my avatar. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler.

>General

1. Everything looks fine on the block.

>Easy

1. You used 1/8 beat snap divisor, and yet you didn't place (time) anything on the yellow line... Huh? As stated previously, these 1/8 snap is for editing purpose only
2. 00:25:872 (3) - Isn't this object placed a bit too high?
3. 00:28:443 (2) - ^
4. 00:34:872 (1) - ^ It's fine, they're not unrankable, plus I don't feel like altering this part's flow :3

>Normal

1. This one's fine.

>Hard

1. 00:05:086 (2,3) - Is this kind of jump fine for a Hard diff?
2. 00:06:158 (5,6) - ^
3. 00:08:515 (2,3) - ^
4. 00:09:586 (5,6) - ^ (And I guess I'll stop pointing this out, since there's too much of them, and I think no one will complain about this anyway ) It's only 70 BPM ><
5. 01:25:658 (8) - Remove this? Don't know why, but this feels... a bit useless. Sure
6. 01:25:872 (1) - Isn't this spinner a bit too fast? I know, Auto (barely) got 3000 there, but... It's fine I suppose (:

Okay, maybe just that. Music was calming and nice.

Good luck on the way

1. Everything looks fine on the block.

1. You used 1/8 beat snap divisor, and yet you didn't place (time) anything on the yellow line... Huh?
2. 00:25:872 (3) - Isn't this object placed a bit too high?
3. 00:28:443 (2) - ^
4. 00:34:872 (1) - ^

1. This one's fine.

1. 00:05:086 (2,3) - Is this kind of jump fine for a Hard diff?
2. 00:06:158 (5,6) - ^
3. 00:08:515 (2,3) - ^
4. 00:09:586 (5,6) - ^ (And I guess I'll stop pointing this out, since there's too much of them, and I think no one will complain about this anyway )
5. 01:25:658 (8) - Remove this? Don't know why, but this feels... a bit useless.
6. 01:25:872 (1) - Isn't this spinner a bit too fast? I know, Auto (barely) got 3000 there, but...

1. Fine~

1. Circle Size -1
2. 00:29:301 (1) - Turn the volume up gradually? (00:29:729 55% 00:30:158 60% 00:30:586 65% and then Turn the volume to be 50% at 00:31:015)
3. 00:49:872 (4) - Move to x:244 y:124
4. 01:25:015 (1,2) - Like this? More curve~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/265899
5. Remove whistle and change to finish is better to me (If you fix this, plz fix Normal & Hard too :>)

1. 00:25:015 (2) - 1 grid right
2. 00:29:301 (1) - Same as Easy
3. 00:33:586 (3,4) - Try to make it better!! Like this :3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/265921
4. 01:22:443 (1) - The third white point move to x:72 y:88 and the fourth white point move to x:132 y:80
   Then it will looks better with (2) ^^
5. 01:33:801 (2) - Move to x:400 y:200 to be a triangle?

1. Circle Size -1
2. 00:20:301 (6) - Like this? I think It looks better than before :> (Ctrl +H Ctrl +J) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/265912
3. 00:29:301 (5) - Same as Easy too @@"
4. 00:47:301 (4) - 1 grid up
5. 01:31:872 (7) - Reverse~
6. 01:33:158 (1,2) - Change to anti-jump?? (DS 0.1x) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/265923

12BARRY21 wrote:

Hi!!~~ Niva :>

General

1. Fine~

[Easy]

1. Circle Size -1 That's intentional~
2. 00:29:301 (1) - Turn the volume up gradually? (00:29:729 55% 00:30:158 60% 00:30:586 65% and then Turn the volume to be 50% at 00:31:015) Brilliant suggestion, fixed!
3. 00:49:872 (4) - Move to x:244 y:124 Done ^^
4. 01:25:015 (1,2) - Like this? More curve~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/265899 Ah, wanna keep symmetry there
5. Remove whistle and change to finish is better to me (If you fix this, plz fix Normal & Hard too :>) Decided to keep my finish here (:

[Normal]

1. 00:25:015 (2) - 1 grid right Ah yes, fixed
2. 00:29:301 (1) - Same as Easy Done~
3. 00:33:586 (3,4) - Try to make it better!! Like this :3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/265921Fixed, I hope it's tidier now~
4. 01:22:443 (1) - The third white point move to x:72 y:88 and the fourth white point move to x:132 y:80
   Then it will looks better with (2) ^^ Redid this slider
5. 01:33:801 (2) - Move to x:400 y:200 to be a triangle? Ah, wanna keep it like this~

[Hard]

1. Circle Size -1 It's my intention to use normal circle size here >_<
2. 00:20:301 (6) - Like this? I think It looks better than before :> (Ctrl +H Ctrl +J) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/265912 I want to stack (6,2) ><
3. 00:29:301 (5) - Same as Easy too @@" Done~
4. 00:47:301 (4) - 1 grid up Nice catch :3 - done xD
5. 01:31:872 (7) - Reverse~ Eh... Not changed for this one
6. 01:33:158 (1,2) - Change to anti-jump?? (DS 0.1x) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/265923 Want to keep it as is...

Awesome map!!~~
Sorry for my Bad mod >_<
But that is all from me~
Good luck!! Double star!!~~

1. wait... why when I downloaded this, the folder and .osz file is like this? <--I mean "%231"
2. Add "water" in the Tags? I think 'Aqua' is mean water

1. Difficulty Setting: Why not use large Circle Size? that more easier to read by newbie players since the spacing is a bit huge in this difficulty o:
2. 00:24:158 (1) - why whistle in slider's beginning? add finish more better instead the whistle, since you add in 00:17:301 (1)
3. 00:43:872 (3) - don't stack this with (2)'s tail, more easier to read if use normal spacing in here imo

1. 00:24:158 (1) - same think as in Easy difficulty

1. 01:11:301 (9) - add new combo?
2. 01:28:443 (4) - change the clap with whistle? more better imo
3. 01:30:158 (3) - same as above, but in slider's beginning

1. fine

1. 00:54:158 (6) - end 1/4 earlier, and add slider at 00:54:801?
2. 01:33:801 (2) - use slider here?

1. 00:10:443 (1,2) - use slider plz..
2. 01:00:801 (6,7,8) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot275-0.jpg this is better I think
3. 01:28:658 (5) - maybe stack with the prevoius note here? jumping doesn't fit here, I think
4. 01:33:801 (2) - change this to 35% volume
5. 01:34:015 (3) - add a note here with 25% volume
6. 01:34:229 (4) - add a note here with 15% volume um

Loli Cjj wrote:

Aku tak layak ngemod beatmap seepik ini ;w; tapi mari kita lakukan demi persahabatan ;w;

=General=
Nope.

=Easy=
1. 00:43:872 (3) - Karena not sebelumnya udah diberi delay, imo stack kurang kusetujui. Oh, ini, gw justru ngerasa stack disini malah bagus :3 intinya sih... gw nggak ada ide lagi mau ditaruh di mana orz

=Normal=
Nope.

=Hard=
Nope.

=SB=
Nope.

Terlalu banyak nope sehingga sepertinya tak layak untuk kudosu.
Semuanya bagus ;3; Thanks~ Gpp kok, yang penting kan udah dicek (:

0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:

~mod4mod request~

[General]
add silence soft-sliderslide? It's so loud
It's fine (:

[Easy]
00:43:872 (3) - move out of stack? Uh... Can't get a good pattern to use if unstacked >_<
01:03:158 (2) - maybe, off screen? It's not (: - Moved upward a bit, though
01:33:801 (2) - stack like other diff? I don't think a stack with 3/2 delay is good for beginners...


[Normal]
00:41:301 (1) - maybe, off-screen? Not off-screen on play mode as well ^^
nice


[Hard]
00:44:301 (4) - add whistle tail? sound better Yes :3
00:51:372 (5) - Oh, nc here and remove nc 00:51:586 (1) - Uh, I prefer a NC on downbeat >_<
01:32:301 (8) - copy from (7) and Ctrl + H ? Oh, my bad, fixed
01:33:158 (1) - error spacing? Anti-jump ^^


great map Star xD
GL~ :3

1. Some of the jumps are quit on the extreme side and to be frank, they didn't fit the atmosphere of the song at all. The jumps that I mean are the ones with 4x DS. I think 3x DS are pretty much the limit of distance that can fit the song, bigger than that is outright not good.
2. Another thing is about the sharp jumps. This can work good in some song/music but in this case it's disrupting the flow of your map. For example 00:07:658 (4,1) this jump will flow better if the direction of the slider will continue the clockwise movement from the previous object, another one is 00:21:372 (4,1) which is almost the same as above. 00:25:658 (2,3) is also a very sharp one, but seeing this is a mirror of the prev object I guess you'll keep this no mater what.
3. 01:28:658 (5) - Cut this slider to 01:28:872, to sync the end of the slider with the water sound? you've did with spinner before so maybe do it again with slider here

Sallad4ever wrote:

ok then, just a little bit

[Hardl]

1. Some of the jumps are quit on the extreme side and to be frank, they didn't fit the atmosphere of the song at all. The jumps that I mean are the ones with 4x DS. I think 3x DS are pretty much the limit of distance that can fit the song, bigger than that is outright not good.
2. Another thing is about the sharp jumps. This can work good in some song/music but in this case it's disrupting the flow of your map. For example 00:07:658 (4,1) this jump will flow better if the direction of the slider will continue the clockwise movement from the previous object, another one is 00:21:372 (4,1) which is almost the same as above. 00:25:658 (2,3) is also a very sharp one, but seeing this is a mirror of the prev object I guess you'll keep this no mater what.
   
   I reduced some jumps which are possible for its distance to be reduced >< (no matter what I do, the star rating is always 4.96 orz - also, gatitoneku SS'd this in his first try (when I asked him to playtest this back then ><)
   
3. 01:28:658 (5) - Cut this slider to 01:28:872, to sync the end of the slider with the water sound? you've did with spinner before so maybe do it again with slider here Yep~ Fixed with my own arrangement, though~

That's all, I don't mind if you don't fix the 2 last things but consider to reduce those extreme jumps that I mention.
Yup, call me back after fixing it