Loli Cjj wrote:

Aku tak layak ngemod beatmap seepik ini ;w; tapi mari kita lakukan demi persahabatan ;w;

=General=
Nope.

=Easy=
1. 00:43:872 (3) - Karena not sebelumnya udah diberi delay, imo stack kurang kusetujui. Oh, ini, gw justru ngerasa stack disini malah bagus :3 intinya sih... gw nggak ada ide lagi mau ditaruh di mana orz

=Normal=
Nope.

=Hard=
Nope.

=SB=
Nope.

Terlalu banyak nope sehingga sepertinya tak layak untuk kudosu.
Semuanya bagus ;3; Thanks~ Gpp kok, yang penting kan udah dicek (:

0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:

~mod4mod request~

[General]
add silence soft-sliderslide? It's so loud
It's fine (:

[Easy]
00:43:872 (3) - move out of stack? Uh... Can't get a good pattern to use if unstacked >_<
01:03:158 (2) - maybe, off screen? It's not (: - Moved upward a bit, though
01:33:801 (2) - stack like other diff? I don't think a stack with 3/2 delay is good for beginners...


[Normal]
00:41:301 (1) - maybe, off-screen? Not off-screen on play mode as well ^^
nice


[Hard]
00:44:301 (4) - add whistle tail? sound better Yes :3
00:51:372 (5) - Oh, nc here and remove nc 00:51:586 (1) - Uh, I prefer a NC on downbeat >_<
01:32:301 (8) - copy from (7) and Ctrl + H ? Oh, my bad, fixed
01:33:158 (1) - error spacing? Anti-jump ^^


great map Star xD
GL~ :3

1. Some of the jumps are quit on the extreme side and to be frank, they didn't fit the atmosphere of the song at all. The jumps that I mean are the ones with 4x DS. I think 3x DS are pretty much the limit of distance that can fit the song, bigger than that is outright not good.
2. Another thing is about the sharp jumps. This can work good in some song/music but in this case it's disrupting the flow of your map. For example 00:07:658 (4,1) this jump will flow better if the direction of the slider will continue the clockwise movement from the previous object, another one is 00:21:372 (4,1) which is almost the same as above. 00:25:658 (2,3) is also a very sharp one, but seeing this is a mirror of the prev object I guess you'll keep this no mater what.
3. 01:28:658 (5) - Cut this slider to 01:28:872, to sync the end of the slider with the water sound? you've did with spinner before so maybe do it again with slider here

Sallad4ever wrote:

ok then, just a little bit

[Hardl]

1. Some of the jumps are quit on the extreme side and to be frank, they didn't fit the atmosphere of the song at all. The jumps that I mean are the ones with 4x DS. I think 3x DS are pretty much the limit of distance that can fit the song, bigger than that is outright not good.
2. Another thing is about the sharp jumps. This can work good in some song/music but in this case it's disrupting the flow of your map. For example 00:07:658 (4,1) this jump will flow better if the direction of the slider will continue the clockwise movement from the previous object, another one is 00:21:372 (4,1) which is almost the same as above. 00:25:658 (2,3) is also a very sharp one, but seeing this is a mirror of the prev object I guess you'll keep this no mater what.
   
   I reduced some jumps which are possible for its distance to be reduced >< (no matter what I do, the star rating is always 4.96 orz - also, gatitoneku SS'd this in his first try (when I asked him to playtest this back then ><)
   
3. 01:28:658 (5) - Cut this slider to 01:28:872, to sync the end of the slider with the water sound? you've did with spinner before so maybe do it again with slider here Yep~ Fixed with my own arrangement, though~

That's all, I don't mind if you don't fix the 2 last things but consider to reduce those extreme jumps that I mention.
Yup, call me back after fixing it