1. ...Fix the artists' name. I recommend this: Tomatsu Haruka, Hanazawa Kana, Sanpei Yuuko. If you have fixed this, resubmit with the full submission.
2. Remove the two .osb files inside the song folder and then resubmit fully.

Hinsvar wrote:

Aww yea. Let's mod now

*Usual note: Gold ones are a must-do. Yes, I'm playing with my avatar. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler.

>General

1. ...Fix the artists' name. I recommend this: Tomatsu Haruka, Hanazawa Kana, Sanpei Yuuko. If you have fixed this, resubmit with the full submission.
2. Remove the two .osb files inside the song folder and then resubmit fully.

The difficulties themselves... I can't comment on them. They have no need to be fixed, IMO. That, if I didn't miss something. And since I'm not good at the improvement department, I'll leave that to the other modders.

Good luck on the way

mega_mac wrote:

I try to help you modding...

[General]

delete osb file

[Normal]

03:24:882 (1) - finish

03:58:870 (1) - ^

03:58:870 (1) - finish

04:02:339 (1) - delete nc

[Insane]

00:21:761 (1) - make curve slider

01:15:171 (1) - delete nc

01:18:466 (7) - add note

01:41:356 (2) - spacing

02:39:622 (6) - spacing

02:44:477 (5,6) - change


03:24:882 (1) - finish head of slider

04:00:605 (10) - finish (delete 04:00:691 (11,12) ) (add note04:00:344)

good luck ~

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what I can find.

General:
ooh the title is incorrect. isnt it supposed to be Tomatsu Haruka?
03:35:980 maybe add a green line here to end the kiai time and start the kiai again at 03:38:755 because it picks up.

Easy:
00:51:587 (4,1) - spacing error. it's at 0.99 and the default DS is 1.20.
00:59:217 (1) - can you move this down a bit or move it somewhere else. i don't like the overlapping here.
01:24:882 (1,2) - make (1) a repeat slider like the last slider at 01:22:801, and remove the repeat for (2) and move it at 01:26:963 and end it at 01:27:657. it should be like this. the reason is that it'd look like (1) or players might expect that this slider repeats as well.
02:30:431 (4) - instead if being at the white tick, move it to 02:30:605 and end it till 02:31:125 to follow the long pause in vocals.

Normal:
00:24:535 (4) - maybe filp it like this so that it can form a blanket sort of around (2)?
02:17:425 (5) - I don't like the overlapping here. it'd look nice if it's moved here
03:13:784 (3) - hmm maybe add a finish and reduce the volume? i think 35% would be fine. if you do this, remember to put another line back to 70%
03:24:882 (1) - add a finish? it sounds empty without 1.
04:02:339 (1) - remove the NC because the vocals are still going.

Hard:
I think AR7 plays nicely.
01:22:108 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - only keep the whistles at (2,6) the rest needs to be removed because they sound weird
02:17:946 (6) - maybe make this a NC because it's following instrumental?
02:31:645 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - in this stream the whistles sound weird. remove the whistles at (5,7). the whistle pattern sounds a lot better IMO
04:00:431 (8) - a NC here because it's following instrumental.

This is the best I can do. GL

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ mjw5150 ~

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Hard]

1. 01:57:310 (3) - Move 2 gird right.
2. 02:08:408 (4,5) - Move 2 gird left.

[Normal]

1. Maybe AR+1 with much better play.
2. 00:53:842 (5,1) - Try like this rhythm,sound much better.
   

That's all ~ pretty nice mapset ~

Good luck ~

B2IN wrote:

[General]

delete osb file

[Normal]

03:24:882 (1) - finish

03:58:870 (1) - ^

03:58:870 (1) - finish

04:02:339 (1) - delete nc

[Insane]

00:21:761 (1) - make curve slider

01:15:171 (1) - delete nc

01:18:466 (7) - add note

01:41:356 (2) - spacing

02:39:622 (6) - spacing

02:44:477 (5,6) - change


03:24:882 (1) - finish head of slider

04:00:605 (10) - finish (delete 04:00:691 (11,12) ) (add note04:00:344)

good luck ~

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[Easy]

skip因为超出total time限制

[Normal]

00:35:460 (1) - 第一个break略长，可以考虑从这里开始map
01:22:108 (1,2,3) - 前面用了不少1/2拍的stack，尽量就不要用1/1拍的stack了，因为是Normal
01:39:449 (1,2) - ctrl r再换一下位置？
03:38:061 (1,2,3) - 1/1stack
04:00:951 (1,2) - 没对齐

[Hard]

我感觉可以标Insane了。。 有I没H不让rank 你懂的233
00:20:200 (5) - 加note?
02:07:888 (1,2,3,4) - 正方形？
02:42:396 (5) - ctrl h j r?
02:44:477 (5,6) - 时间轴上换一下位置
02:56:616 (2,4) - 2和4叠在一起，再调整一下1和3的位置？
03:35:980 (1) - 建议这里结束Kiai，03:49:853 (1)再开始。其他难度也是一样。

That's all I can find. GL~

mjw5150 wrote:

i need a hard GD lol

Hinsvar wrote:

Just passing by (again).

Since the BGs you use explicitly says that the game's name is "THE iDOLM@STER Dearly Stars", you should really add that second 's' letter to the "Star" word

Also,

mjw5150 wrote:

i need a hard GD lol

Challenge accepted (Oh wait.)

It's okay if you don't want to use this though

1. Fine~

1. 01:21:414 (1,2,3) - I like spacing1.8 this jump if you like change~
2. 02:36:327 (8) - beginning finish
3. 02:42:396 sound like if you like use this

1. You can add more finish like mjw diff
2. 00:16:905 - sound like if you like use this
3. 01:22:801 (1) - beginning finish
4. 02:18:292 (7) - finish
5. 02:43:264 (1) - ^
6. 02:48:813 (1) - ^
   

1. start slider01:21:414 repeat 01:21:587 end 01:21:761 if you like use this
2. 02:30:778 - same as 01:21:414
3. 02:48:813 (1) - beggining finish
4. 04:03:726 (4) - slider end 04:04:073
5. last spinner start 04:04:246 end same as it

1. Fine
   

S o r d a wrote:

[Hard]:

1. You can add more finish like mjw diff Fine; added a few of them, still mixed with Whistles sometimes.
2. 00:16:905 - sound like if you like use this Okay.
3. 01:22:801 (1) - beginning finish Will do.
4. 02:18:292 (7) - finish ^
5. 02:43:264 (1) - ^ ^
6. 02:48:813 (1) - ^ ^

those wrote:

You've got four minutes of a linear map. This isn't unrankable; it's just very uninteresting.

Makar8000 wrote:

Hello, from my queue

[General]

1. Fine~

[Easy]

1. 03:22:107 (1) - Finish at start?
2. 03:23:495 (3) - ^
3. Nice~ nothing to point out

[Normal]

1. 01:16:558 (1,2) - Swap NC
2. I really like this~ nothing to point out

[Insane]

1. 00:20:287 (5) - Remove this note please. It doesn't fit the music imo
2. 00:39:449 (5) - CTRL+R this for better flow
3. 01:26:876 (4) - Remove this note for the same reason I mentioned before
4. 01:37:975 (5) - ^
5. 03:53:928 (4) - ^

Makar8000 wrote:

[Hinsvar's Hard]
Okay, so I counted the number of curves in this map. This includes curvy sliders, mouse movements, patterns, etc. This number came out to be 3 (your small curve sliders at the end). There are no patterns in this map that have good flow. Everything is straight, linear, and has unpredictable repeat sliders. It just gets boring. Im sorry but I suggest going back over this and make this map more fun by using flowy patterns and curve sliders to make this more interesting. There is a subforum that helps mappers out with this, and you can see it here. If you would like assistance, I can help if I have time. Just send me a PM in-game.

-Bakari- wrote:

[Hard]
~~~~

-Bakari- wrote:

lol. call me when you finish remap if you want nazi-mod

-Bakari- wrote:

yo~

[General]
clear

[Insaane]
overall diff -2 (or -1)
00:22:454 (2,3) - just no
00:51:587 (4,3) - overlap
just avoid crossing sliders

[Easy]
00:25:229 (1) - spinner appears too fast
00:41:183 (2,1) -curve them in this way
00:47:772 (2,3) - overlap
01:15:171 (2) - end point 5-7 grids right to cover (4) (don't forget to chnge 01:17:252 (3) for avoiding overlap)
01:22:801 (1,1) - not ymmetrical
01:30:084 (3) - confusing for beginners
02:14:131 (3,2) - overlap
02:39:448 (3) - confusing for beginners
03:21:067 (2) - ^ or add reverse arrow ;_;
03:49:853 (1,2) - overlap? lol
03:58:870 (1) - appears too fast

[Normal]
00:24:535 (4) - make symmetrical! ;_;
00:54:362 - put something here
01:56:096 (1,2) - just add one reverse to (1)
02:24:535 (3,4) - try to cover less then 40% of start point :O
02:55:055 (1,3) - almost overlap. i don't like it
03:25:576 (3) - this for better looking
03:47:772 (2) - curve it a bit more
03:22:107 (1) - mhm

code for better slider

296,144,202107,6,0,B|312:72|244:36,2,110,6|8|0

03:54:015 (5) - almost overlap ;_;

gl~

mjw5150 wrote:

uploaded

-Bakari- wrote:

[Hard]
00:17:599 (6,2) - avoid overlap This is intentional.
00:18:986 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - to foloow your pattern try this Made something similar \:D/
00:21:761 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/vxgC (note! i'm using lower approach rate at all screenshots. it's just to show you what i want! don't worry ) Okay, but with 1.2x DS (which is far wider). Also, I think that AR8 will be the best thing for this diff.
00:51:934 (1,2,3,4) - stack them? Intentionally placed like this.
00:58:871 (2,3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/vxho (kinda jumpy) I wanna keep the current one.
01:20:894 (3,7) - stack them? Looks slightly overlapped, yes, but I think it looks nice for now.
01:42:223 (4) - http://puu.sh/vxi9 Will do.
02:07:194 (1,1) - stack them? Oh, okay.
02:21:761 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/vxiF (don't forget to fix stacks) Fine.
02:55:055 (1) - a bit not symmetrical ~_~ That one can't be helped. It's not really noticeable though, but I would like a code for a perfectly symmetrical slider \:D/
03:55:055 (6) - 1/2 earlier? Pretty good already.
04:00:951 (1,2,3,4) - stack? Nope, intentionally (yeah) placed like this.