1. 00:23:842 (1) - remove the NC because the vocals is still going ></
2. 00:35:634 (2) - remove finish from the start, it's just dont fit here~
3. 00:39:795 (1) - remove finish in the middle ~ same reason as i said above~
4. 00:43:957 (3) - add finish at the start, sounds better~
5. 00:47:772 (2) - one grip up will look better imo~
6. 00:48:119 (1,3) - how about curving those slider a bit like this? it's looks much better to me while playing ><
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:51:934 (5) - add note here feels off really ;_;
8. 01:00:605 (5) - curve this slider a bit like this o.o? it looks much better like that tho, but it's up to you~
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:04:073 (1) - spacing error plz fix it~
10. 01:21:067 (4) - add a finish at the end, sounds better~
11. 01:30:084 (3) - make this slider revives then add a note after it like this it's sounds better tho ~ o.o
    
12. 02:04:420 (1) - this slider touches the 02:03:032 (3) - slider ends and it's looks bad to maybe you should fix it~
13. 02:09:622 (4) - NC here is better since she started new vocal~
14. 02:41:876 (3) - curve this slider more plz like i said here 01:00:605 (5) -
15. 02:48:813 (1,2) - like this looks much better to me :c
    
    SPOILER

    

1. 01:10:316 (3) - NC here and remove the NC from this 01:11:009 (1) -
2. 01:11:703 (4) - NC~
3. 03:29:044 (4) - ^

1. 00:40:662 (7) - fixed this curve plz it's dont look good~
2. 01:00:258 (6) - two grip down so it's lined up with the 00:59:564 (5) - :3
3. 01:02:686 (7) - add a finish here sounds better~
4. 01:18:292 (5) - stuck this on 01:17:252 (2) -
5. 02:09:622 (4) - fixed this slider like this o.o then do the same thing here 02:10:316 (5) -
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:12:223 (x) - how about adding a note here and let this weird space go away =3=/
7. 03:48:639 (x,x) - ^

-Sekai- wrote:

Hinsvar's Hard
OD+1 is better~ Nope, OD6 goes better, IMO.

1. 00:40:662 (7) - fixed this curve plz it's dont look good~ Eh... I guess I can make it a straight slider.
2. 01:00:258 (6) - two grip down so it's lined up with the 00:59:564 (5) - :3 I think it's already fine as is; I even copy-pasted (5) and Ctrl+H'd it, and it still looks fine.
3. 01:02:686 (7) - add a finish here sounds better~ It sounds a bit too... sudden, so no.
4. 01:18:292 (5) - stuck this on 01:17:252 (2) - I'm sure enough it was stacked... Anyway, fixed.
5. 02:09:622 (4) - fixed this slider like this o.o then do the same thing here 02:10:316 (5) - I'll stick with mine, I guess.
6. 02:12:223 (x) - how about adding a note here and let this weird space go away =3=/ Eh, okay.
7. 03:48:639 (x,x) - ^ Nope; I want to preserve my current pattern \:D/

1. 00:21:761 (1,1,2,3) - why its distance has changed? you should keep 0.54x, or you just need to arrange the 00:16:212 (1,2,3,4) -
2. 00:48:119 (1) - useless NC, to keep your combo thythm, remove this NC and add on 00:49:506 (3) -
3. 01:04:073 (1) - useless NC as well, remove it
4. 01:11:703 (1,2,3) - although you used sliders this rhythm is a bit hard for noob players, to make them to be played easier, maybe you can use this rhythm
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:22:108 - feels empty, you followed the mellody and stopping like this is weird, add a circle here
6. 01:35:980 (1,2,3) - how hard, i'd place them more soft with this sweet song, like this, also centering 01:38:755 (4) - from 01:36:674 (3) - plz
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:57:483 (1) - did you NC'd here to separate the long combo? if you did, remove this and add on 01:58:870 (3) -
8. 02:09:969 (5) - to separate the long combo, NC here
9. 02:31:472 - same as 01:22:108 -
10. 02:36:674 (3) - same as 01:35:980 (1,2,3) -
11. 02:41:876 (3) - move to (280,84) to avoid the annoying overlap
12. 02:44:651 (3) - 1 grid up to be symmetry with 02:43:264 (1) -
13. 03:26:963 (1) - same as 01:57:483 (1) - , NC on 03:28:003 (2) -
14. 03:32:859 (3) - same as 01:35:980 (1,2,3) -
15. 03:47:079 (1) - remove this useless NC
16. 03:52:281 (1,2) - switch NC due to down beat

1. 00:50:373 (2,3) - no, really looks not good at all, arrange them
2. 01:22:801 (3) - NC here due to starting kiai rhythm, like this 01:33:899 (1) -
3. 02:26:616 (2) - tbh, your NC rhythm is really random imo, if you want to follow the vocal, you'd better start the combo from here
4. 02:32:165 (3) - same as 01:22:801 (3) -
5. 03:02:685 (5) - NC?
6. 04:03:726 (4) - 1 grid right to be symmetry with 04:02:339 (2) -

1. 00:18:986 (3,4) - replace with a slider
2. 00:20:373 (6) - end point here 00:21:067 (7) -
3. 00:21:761 (1,2,3,4) - not fit at all, don't use arrow
4. 00:57:657 (6,7) - too hard to read, don't stack them
5. 01:11:703 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you may thought the notes are looks clean, you should know that it's really hard to hit
6. 01:13:957 (1) - hard to read, don't overlap..
7. 01:32:686 (3,4,5,6) - too hard to read, don't stack them
8. 01:39:449 (1,2,3,4) - replace with 2 sliders
9. 02:15:518 - ~ 02:30:431 (4) - suddenly, too monotonous and boring, why, add some more notes
10. 02:50:547 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - too hard to play
11. 02:55:055 (1) - hidden arrow, find other way
12. 02:57:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - what, they can be hard to play even as Insane diff
13. 03:00:605 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
    highly recommend to remap this diff

1. 00:24:535 (4) - NC due to changed melody?
2. try adding finish :
   01:39:449 -
   01:40:142 -
   01:40:836 -
   01:41:356 -
3. 02:12:570 (1,2,3) - this jump is not good to play, ctrl+h to make more soft movement
4. 02:48:813 - same as the finish sounds
5. 02:52:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - not fit with song, don't stream here
6. 03:02:339 (5) - NC
7. 03:15:865 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - too hard to read, arrange them plz
8. 03:36:674 (2) - Seven!

Star Stream wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:18:986 (3,4) - replace with a slider Fine enough.
2. 00:20:373 (6) - end point here 00:21:067 (7) - Nope, I think this should be fine.
3. 00:21:761 (1,2,3,4) - not fit at all, don't use arrow Remapped this spot.
4. 00:57:657 (6,7) - too hard to read, don't stack them Oh, okay.
5. 01:11:703 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you may thought the notes are looks clean, you should know that it's really hard to hit Remapped this part.
6. 01:13:957 (1) - hard to read, don't overlap.. ^
7. 01:32:686 (3,4,5,6) - too hard to read, don't stack them Eh, I wanted to make a back-and-forth pattern here, but I moved (4) anyway.
8. 01:39:449 (1,2,3,4) - replace with 2 sliders I think it's fine as is.
9. 02:15:518 - ~ 02:30:431 (4) - suddenly, too monotonous and boring, why, add some more notes Huh? I'm sure enough it's fine. I'll reconsider to remap this spot if needed, though.
10. 02:50:547 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - too hard to play Not for me; in fact, I think this is fun to play. Maybe a bit hard, but I'm sure enough not too hard.
11. 02:55:055 (1) - hidden arrow, find other way The arrow is still visible when I played this spot, so no.
12. 02:57:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - what, they can be hard to play even as Insane diff It's just a 1/2 stream of circles. Don't really think it's that hard. But I might consider changing this part, so wait for it.
13. 03:00:605 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ^
    highly recommend to remap this diff Already remapped a few spots; I WON'T fully remap this though, because this is actually a remapped version of my diff. It's going to be hard to make another one (I'll have an exam in one week, and even when in vacation, it'll still take 2-3 days to make a diff for me, so...), and from my experiences IRL, trying to fix something by retrying from scratch ends up making it WORSE anyways (this is an exception, miraculously), so I'll mod some spots, but not fully

backstep wrote:

Hinsvar's Hard

Fine for me xD

backstep wrote:

Relax song >3

General

- Cyan combo color it's similar, so I suggest you use other color. Maybe green like this ?

lol but i think they looks fine,no changed...

Easy

01:20:027 (3) - Add whistle to head of slider to follow lyrics. fixed
01:21:067 (4) - Change Whistle to clap. fixed
01:31:125 (1) - Add whistle at head of slider. fixed
01:33:899 (1) - Add whistle at reverse arrow. fixed
01:38:755 (4) - Whistle. no
02:12:743 (1) - Remove clap ;w; lol add finish instead

Normal

01:04:940 (4) - Tail of slider add finish. fixed
02:14:131 (4) - ^ fixed
02:31:818 (2) - Whistle fixed
03:48:986 (4) - Head of slider add finish. fixed

Hinsvar's Hard

Fine for me xD

Insane

01:08:668 (7,8) - Swap whistle of these note. i changed my mind to del the whistle in 7 so...
01:15:171 (6) - Head of slider add whistle. (Follow lyrics) fixed
01:16:558 (1) - ^ fixed
01:20:027 (3) - ^ fixed
01:23:668 (3) - ^ no
02:06:501 (3) - Add clap at reverse slider. no
02:24:535 (1) - Whistle. fixed
02:25:922 (1) - ^ no
02:29:391 (3) - Head of slider add whistle. fixed

That's all I can find good luck

1. 00:23:842(1) - 这里为什么加NC呢？
2. 01:04:766(5) - 感觉这个Slider在01:05:287结束更好一些?
3. 01:07:541(3) - 同上，在01:08:061结束
4. 01:30:084(3) - 建议不要在Easy里放1/2...
5. 01:32:859(2) - ^
6. 01:39:449(1) - 换成finish?
7. 02:16:905(3) - end at 02:17:425?
8. 03:23:148(2) - clap
9. 03:48:466(4) - end at 03:48:986?

1. 00:46:732(3) - Spacing
2. 04:00:951(1) - 即使是Normal，这个slider和spinner靠的也太近了吧...

1. 03:21:587(6) - Ctrl+R?

1. 01:25:576(2) - Ctrl+R?
2. 02:15:171(5) - 这跳略坑 送分图可不能这样
3. 02:26:443(6,7) - Spacing
4. 02:52:975(1) - whistle?

a3272509123 wrote:

[Hinsvar's Hard]

1. 03:21:587(6) - Ctrl+R? Nope; I rearranged the pattern here, instead.

Hi mjw5150

• General
  ● Good

• Easy
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 00:16:212 (1,2,3,4) - maybe use distance 1.2 (or 1.0) and change form to triangle
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  So simple slider form...maybe change some slider form

• Normal
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 00:16:212 (1,2,3,4) - some as Easy ^^
  ● 00:46:732 (3) - prev distance 1.0 maybe change to 0.8?
  ● 02:44:998 (4) - move to x:240 y:260 symmetry to 02:43:610 (2)
  ● 02:45:344 (1) - if you change ^ move to x:302 y:198 - distance 0.8 :3
  
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Looks good

• Hinsvar's Hard
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 02:03:379 (5) - grid snap and distance off...and move on x:169 y:203 - snap to 02:02:339 (3) :3
  ● 03:01:125 (3,4) - distance looks strange :3 maybe change it to 1.0?
  ● 03:27:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - please move it on center....like this http://puu.sh/yi6g
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Really good diff :3 so symmetric, i like it

• Insane
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● Good
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Interesting Insane looks good

Sorry for nazi mod, but I can't find more problems.
Starrrrr

IchiGUN wrote:

>Settings

● Good

>Mapping

● 02:03:379 (5) - grid snap and distance off...and move on x:169 y:203 - snap to 02:02:339 (3) :3 Oh, okay.
● 03:01:125 (3,4) - distance looks strange :3 maybe change it to 1.0? Fine.
● 03:27:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - please move it on center....like this http://puu.sh/yi6g Eh, I suppose that it should be fine for now. No changes.

>Hitsounds

● Good
___________________
Really good diff :3 so symmetric, i like it lol thx

a3272509123 wrote:

From the challenge queue~


[General]
Nothing found~


[Easy]

1. 00:23:842(1) - 这里为什么加NC呢？删掉了
2. 01:04:766(5) - 感觉这个Slider在01:05:287结束更好一些? 改了
3. 01:07:541(3) - 同上，在01:08:061结束 改了
4. 01:30:084(3) - 建议不要在Easy里放1/2... 唔 就先这样吧 暂时找不到更好的处理方式了lol
5. 01:32:859(2) - ^ 同上
6. 01:39:449(1) - 换成finish? 感觉finish音量大了 没改
7. 02:16:905(3) - end at 02:17:425? 改了
8. 03:23:148(2) - clap 改了
9. 03:48:466(4) - end at 03:48:986? 改了

[Normal]

1. 00:46:732(3) - Spacing 改了
2. 04:00:951(1) - 即使是Normal，这个slider和spinner靠的也太近了吧... 没改 感觉距离蛮合适

[Insane]

1. 01:25:576(2) - Ctrl+R? 改了 换了下排版
2. 02:15:171(5) - 这跳略坑 送分图可不能这样 233
3. 02:26:443(6,7) - Spacing 改了
4. 02:52:975(1) - whistle? 没加 感觉有点whistle不合

That's all!Really nice map~Good luck~

IchiGUN wrote:

Hi mjw5150

mod from Challenge Queue, so just suggestion ^^

• General
  ● Good

===========================

• Easy
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 00:16:212 (1,2,3,4) - maybe use distance 1.2 (or 1.0) and change form to triangle
  i don't want to use 1.0x here since the spacing is too large lol
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  So simple slider form...maybe change some slider form

===========================

• Normal
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 00:16:212 (1,2,3,4) - some as Easy ^^ same as easy
  ● 00:46:732 (3) - prev distance 1.0 maybe change to 0.8? fixed
  ● 02:44:998 (4) - move to x:240 y:260 symmetry to 02:43:610 (2) fixed
  ● 02:45:344 (1) - if you change ^ move to x:302 y:198 - distance 0.8 :3 fixed
  
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Looks good

===========================

• Hinsvar's Hard
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 02:03:379 (5) - grid snap and distance off...and move on x:169 y:203 - snap to 02:02:339 (3) :3
  ● 03:01:125 (3,4) - distance looks strange :3 maybe change it to 1.0?
  ● 03:27:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - please move it on center....like this http://puu.sh/yi6g
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Really good diff :3 so symmetric, i like it

===========================

• Insane
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● Good
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Interesting Insane looks good

Sorry for nazi mod, but I can't find more problems.
Starrrrr

Leorda wrote:

Oh hi there

[Easy]
00:51:587 (2) - Clap? fixed
01:04:073 (3) - New combo for your combo pattern? fixed
02:41:876 (3) - End at previous red tick for following vocal fixed
03:23:495 (3) - ^ fixed
04:01:645 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu. Sometimes, beginners are slowly to read this, so this possibly hidden for them sorry,but i think it is readable enough,no changed


[Normal]
00:39:102 (3) - Add clap at tail slider fixed
00:45:865 (2) - Add finish at head slider fixed
01:31:125 (1) - Add clap at repeating slider fixed
02:02:165 (2) - Extend this slider to next white tick for better rhythm? fixed
03:22:107 (1) - Add finish at repeating slider and end slider fixed


[Insane]
01:31:125 (3) - Add clap at tail slider fixed
02:05:807 (1,2) - Not stack correctly with head slider at gameplay fixed


Good luck

Leorda wrote:

[Hinsvar's Hard]
00:51:414 (8) - Add 1 repeating slider? Decided to remap that spot instead.

1. 01:13:264 (7) - add whistle at start?
2. 01:18:292 (6,7) - either fix this inconsistent spacing or add a note at 01:18:466
3. 01:38:061 (6) - forgot whistle at start?
4. 02:06:501 (3) - how about adding clap at start and reverse, sound better imo ^^
5. 03:13:784 (1) - whistle?
6. 03:16:558 (1) - ^
7. 03:16:558 (1) - ^

1. 00:17:599 (5) - whistle at start
2. 00:24:188 (6) - move this to x:232 y:244?
3. 00:39:795 (3,6) - add finish? (like Insane)
4. 00:41:183 (1) - finish?
5. 00:45:345 (6) - ^
6. 02:50:547 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - hmm this pattern here's not a good idea imo, especially when u used this with jump. How about coming up with a new pattern?
7. 02:55:055 (1) - remove nc here
8. 04:05:113 (1) - whistle?
   Kiai parts will be more lively if you add more finish ^^ just look at Insane =P
   here are just some suggestions of mine, apply for all kiai parts if u change ^^
9. 01:25:576 (3) - finish?
10. 01:28:350 (3) - finish at start?
11. 01:32:165 (2) - finish at end?
12. 01:33:032 (5,1) - finish

1. 01:42:223 (5) - finish at end?
2. 04:04:420 (1) - add whistle here? :>

1. 01:21:067 (4) - remove finish at end
2. things seem fine to me o3o

kazumikos wrote:

[Hinsvar's Hard]
whistle spamming... lol Yeah.
Why dont use more clap like Insane? It's really good o_o using clap only at the end of mapset like is such a waste =3= Well... I just can't see why should claps be used before them. It's just weird.

1. 00:17:599 (5) - whistle at start Oh great, I missed that one. Done.
2. 00:24:188 (6) - move this to x:232 y:244? Nope, I'm making a square here and I'm sure enough my calculations are correct.
3. 00:39:795 (3,6) - add finish? (like Insane) Only added one on (3).
4. 00:41:183 (1) - finish? k
5. 00:45:345 (6) - ^ Oh... okay, I guess.
6. 02:50:547 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - hmm this pattern here's not a good idea imo, especially when u used this with jump. How about coming up with a new pattern? You must be modding the old version. I've remapped that part. And it's a fun part, IMO \:D/
7. 02:55:055 (1) - remove nc here Remapped that part before.
8. 04:05:113 (1) - whistle? Used Finish instead.
   Kiai parts will be more lively if you add more finish ^^ just look at Insane =P
   here are just some suggestions of mine, apply for all kiai parts if u change ^^
9. 01:25:576 (3) - finish? k
10. 01:28:350 (3) - finish at start? Fine.
11. 01:32:165 (2) - finish at end? Done.
12. 01:33:032 (5,1) - finish Only at (1).

kazumikos wrote:

Hello~
[Insane]

1. 01:13:264 (7) - add whistle at start? fixed
2. 01:18:292 (6,7) - either fix this inconsistent spacing or add a note at 01:18:466 fixed the spacing,make it 1.6x as others
3. 01:38:061 (6) - forgot whistle at start? fixed
4. 02:06:501 (3) - how about adding clap at start and reverse, sound better imo ^^ no,sorry
5. 03:13:784 (1) - whistle? fixed
6. 03:16:558 (1) - ^ fixed
7. 03:16:558 (1) - ^

I enjoy the map very much ^^ (until u threw in bunches of streams ruthlessly lol) thx XD

[Normal]

1. 01:42:223 (5) - finish at end? fixed
2. 04:04:420 (1) - add whistle here? :> no

[Easy]

1. 01:21:067 (4) - remove finish at end fixed
2. things seem fine to me o3o

Nice done mjw ^^ have a good luck star

Hinsvar wrote:

Yo.

Modded my own diff by myself (sounds weird, I know), did stuff with Finishes, made a new green timing point, and other small things.

http://puu.sh/Fgd1

k

• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[Easy]

1. 00:49:506 (1) - x:144 y:84 ?
2. 01:10:316 (3) - 第2個點 x:172 y:76 ?~
3. 01:16:558 (1,3) - 交換NC ?~ 若有改的話 01:19:333 (1,3) - 也交換NC
4. 01:35:980 (1,3) - 交換NC~
5. 02:48:813 (1,2) - 拉好看一點>w<?
6. 03:26:963 (1,2) - 交換NC ~

[Normal]

1. 00:57:483 (1,2) - 交換NC
2. 01:19:333 (1,3) - ^
3. 02:15:171 (1,2) - ^
4. 02:28:697 (1,2) - ^
5. 03:13:784 (3) - NC
6. 03:16:559 (3) - ^
7. 03:38:755 (3) - ^

[Hinsvar's Hard]

1. Slider Tick Rate use "2" ?
   
   
2. 00:38:235 (3,4) - I feel confused there ;w; , how about let (4) on x:276 y:56
3. 02:13:784 (3) - last point on x:252 y:220
4. 02:47:425 (3) - re whistle change to finish ?~
5. 02:50:547 (4,5,6) - there are confused for me , i think not stack them

[Insane]

1. 00:39:449 (5) - ctrl+R 感覺flow比較順

l1106188 wrote:

[Hinsvar's Hard]

1. Slider Tick Rate use "2" ? Okay.
2. 00:38:235 (3,4) - I feel confused there ;w; , how about let (4) on x:276 y:56 It's still readable, so I decided to not change that.
3. 02:13:784 (3) - last point on x:252 y:220 k, the blanket actually looks better...
4. 02:47:425 (3) - re whistle change to finish ?~ Okay...
5. 02:50:547 (4,5,6) - there are confused for me , i think not stack them This one's readable and playable for me, just like 00:38:235 (3,4). I'll think of that again later, though...

l1106188 wrote:

Hi~
Request from Hinsvar.

• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[Easy]

1. 00:49:506 (1) - x:144 y:84 ? 改了
2. 01:10:316 (3) - 第2個點 x:172 y:76 ?~ 改了
3. 01:16:558 (1,3) - 交換NC ?~ 若有改的話 01:19:333 (1,3) - 也交換NC 没改
4. 01:35:980 (1,3) - 交換NC~ 没改
5. 02:48:813 (1,2) - 拉好看一點>w<? 稍微拉了下 不知道变好看没有lol
6. 03:26:963 (1,2) - 交換NC ~

没改

[Normal]

1. 00:57:483 (1,2) - 交換NC
2. 01:19:333 (1,3) - ^ 没改
3. 02:15:171 (1,2) - ^
4. 02:28:697 (1,2) - ^ 没改
5. 03:13:784 (3) - NC
6. 03:16:559 (3) - ^
7. 03:38:755 (3) - ^

其他都改了

[Insane]

1. 00:39:449 (5) - ctrl+R 感覺flow比較順

唔 还是觉得原来的好 没改~

就這些了~
good song & good luck~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ mjw5150 ~

Mod time for my luck Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Insane]

1. 00:59:217 (3) - Try change angle,-5 is better.
2. 03:35:980 - Add finish.
3. 03:38:755 - Remove clap and Add finish.

[Hinsvar's Hard]

1. AR-1 much better with play.
2. Reduce volume to 60% pls,since your use many finish hitsound.
3. 03:02:685 - Remove whistle.
4. 03:24:015 - Add finish and remove 03:24:188 (6).
5. 04:05:113 (1) - Remove finish,really no fit here.

[Normal]

1. 02:03:032 (1) - Remove short new combo.
2. 03:44:998 (1) - ^
3. 03:38:755 - Remove clap and Add finish.

[Easy]

1. 03:38:755 - Remove clap and Add finish.

That's all i can find ~ Nice map and song ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

1. 00:35:634 (2,3) - They have wider spacing than others.
2. 01:21:414 (x) - Uhm...a triple is really needed here imo...can you try?

1. 01:05:114 (3) - I felt something weird here. Consider to change a pattern to follow the music.
   
2. 01:30:258 (4) - Add a finish here? It fits the music.
3. 01:37:888 (1,2,3,4) - Uhm...I don't think this pattern is great...they look crowded and the flow isn't that good.
4. 02:29:564 (1,2,3,4) - Not bad, but please look them in testplay mode. The stack is broken, not beautiful. Can you rearrange them?
5. 02:50:547 (4,5,6,1) - It's really confusing pattern. Two-repeats-slider shouldn't be used in such a way, or at least avoid stacking 02:51:240 (5,6) with it.
6. 04:00:951 (1) - Remove a clap from the end. It doesn't fit.
7. 04:01:645 (2,3,4) - ^

1. 02:05:113 (3,1,2) - (nazi)The stack looks broken due to stack leniency. Try to move (1,2) right&below by 1grid?
2. 02:54:622 (2) - Listen the music carefully. The stream sound isn't here so just remove this note?
3. 02:55:749 (12) - Add a new combo to adjust it to the downbeat.(also remove from 02:56:096 (1))
4. 02:58:524 (9) - ^
5. 03:36:674 (2) - Where are 8 and 6!? (joke this slider looked like 7)

Suzully wrote:

876PRO! owo

[Normal]

1. 00:35:634 (2,3) - They have wider spacing than others. fixed
2. 01:21:414 (x) - Uhm...a triple is really needed here imo...can you try? ok,add it here and 02:30:778

[Insane]

1. 02:05:113 (3,1,2) - (nazi)The stack looks broken due to stack leniency. Try to move (1,2) right&below by 1grid? fixed
2. 02:54:622 (2) - Listen the music carefully. The stream sound isn't here so just remove this note? sorry,no changed here,i think it's fine
3. 02:55:749 (12) - Add a new combo to adjust it to the downbeat.(also remove from 02:56:096 (1)) fixed
4. 02:58:524 (9) - ^ fixed
5. 03:36:674 (2) - Where are 8 and 6!? (joke this slider looked like 7) XD

Suzully wrote:

[Hinsvar's Hard]

1. 01:05:114 (3) - I felt something weird here. Consider to change a pattern to follow the music. Done.
2. 01:30:258 (4) - Add a finish here? It fits the music. ^
3. 01:37:888 (1,2,3,4) - Uhm...I don't think this pattern is great...they look crowded and the flow isn't that good. Uh... I personally think that they look and play good, though.
4. 02:29:564 (1,2,3,4) - Not bad, but please look them in testplay mode. The stack is broken, not beautiful. Can you rearrange them? ^. Also, I'm sure enough the stack isn't broken.
5. 02:50:547 (4,5,6,1) - It's really confusing pattern. Two-repeats-slider shouldn't be used in such a way, or at least avoid stacking 02:51:240 (5,6) with it. ^
6. 04:00:951 (1) - Remove a clap from the end. It doesn't fit. A 1/1 clap pattern fits at the end of the song, IMO, so nope.
7. 04:01:645 (2,3,4) - ^^

makkura wrote:

is it just me or I can't download this map properly... osu says it doesn't know how to deal with this kind of file, doesn't even appear in .osz

Haya wrote:

If you click on the download button, you can only download the MP3 file >.<

Alduric wrote:

Omg another unpleasant shit... God, when we will have some great mappers? I still pray about it. :C