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Silver Forest - A Song of Gathering Dreams

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Topic Starter
-Napoleon-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on quarta-feira, 11 de Julho de 2012 at 23:24:07

Artist: Silver Forest
Title: A Song of Gathering Dreams
Source: Touhou
Tags: Broken Moon Ylinestra44 Suika OnosakiHito
BPM: 134
Filesize: 9417kb
Play Time: 03:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab (4,98 stars, 707 notes)
  2. Ono's Taiko Oni (4,94 stars, 1130 notes)
Download: Silver Forest - A Song of Gathering Dreams
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Map for approval!
Collab betwen me and Ylinestra44.
SB By me!
Thanks OnosakiHito for making me a taiko!
Last full submition:
20/06/2012
So have fun and enjoy this map!
KayeSara
0.0.0.0.0.0
Topic Starter
-Napoleon-

KayeSara wrote:

0.0.0.0.0.0
?-?
SkyDevil
Le mod Requested by Yli xD

Collab
In general: AR is way too high x.x change it to 8 or 9
00:42:707 Odd part, change something about it >w<
00:47:185 Put it closer to the last circle :3
00:59:275 okay now i want distance in it xD Or else it will look like you need to clap it right after the 6th circle
01:10:693 Lovable jump <3
01:43:155 Weird part X.x make something else out of it >w<
02:10:021 Don't stack those 6 circles at one >w< Please put some distance in it
02:34:200 New combo here for le extra effect x3
02:40:693 Another lovable part <3, but the distance is way too big x_x
02:55:469 remove note
02:58:827 Same as at 00:42:707
03:18:081 Same as at 02:34:200 :3

I'm looking forward too see this awesome map ranked :3 (omg next time invite me for a collab like this XD jkjkjkjk XD)
Star~!
Barney Stinson
General: 134 bpm are not supposed to have 9 ar. Decrease it.

00:20:767 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - This anti-jump is evil. Make it like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/260963
02:10:021 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - feels overmapped, find a better way. two triples in a row aren't good
02:40:693 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - No. jump+ streams are not playble. They are very ugly, put spacing, please
02:55:693 (1,2) - Barely playble for cookiezi too ahahahah
03:31:066 (4) - Add reverse arrow

Thanks for playing is not correct. I think is better thank you for playing. Ask around anyway.

Such a nice map!
Topic Starter
-Napoleon-

SkyDevil wrote:

Le mod Requested by Yli xD

Collab
In general: AR is way too high x.x change it to 8 or 9
00:42:707 Odd part, change something about it >w<
00:47:185 Put it closer to the last circle :3
00:59:275 okay now i want distance in it xD Or else it will look like you need to clap it right after the 6th circle
01:10:693 Lovable jump <3
01:43:155 Weird part X.x make something else out of it >w<
02:10:021 Don't stack those 6 circles at one >w< Please put some distance in it
02:34:200 New combo here for le extra effect x3
02:40:693 Another lovable part <3, but the distance is way too big x_x
02:55:469 remove note
02:58:827 Same as at 00:42:707
03:18:081 Same as at 02:34:200 :3

I'm looking forward too see this awesome map ranked :3 (omg next time invite me for a collab like this XD jkjkjkjk XD)
Star~!
Thanks for all! Kudo
Topic Starter
-Napoleon-

Barney Stinson wrote:

General: 134 bpm are not supposed to have 9 ar. Decrease it.

00:20:767 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - This anti-jump is evil. Make it like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/260963
02:10:021 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - feels overmapped, find a better way. two triples in a row aren't good
02:40:693 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - No. jump+ streams are not playble. They are very ugly, put spacing, please
02:55:693 (1,2) - Barely playble for cookiezi too ahahahah
03:31:066 (4) - Add reverse arrow

Thanks for playing is not correct. I think is better thank you for playing. Ask around anyway.

Such a nice map!
Thanks for all! Kudo
cadeira_old
i love this map :P
Topic Starter
-Napoleon-

cadeira wrote:

i love this map :P
:)
R e d
Boas!

Acho que nos streams devias quase sempre manter a mesma distância entre os beats

00:21:327 - Parece mais rápido do que realmente é ;o deve ter a mesma distancia do que os triplets em 00:29:051.

O problema seria então caber tudo naquele espaço (em 00:21:327)
Eu faria da seguinte maneira: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/271355
Tem mais haver com a musica do que encher isso de streams durante esse periodo de tempo (00:21:327 to 00:22:110)
aumentas o slider se for preciso
Topic Starter
-Napoleon-

Xaves2 wrote:

Boas!

Acho que nos streams devias quase sempre manter a mesma distância entre os beats

00:21:327 - Parece mais rápido do que realmente é ;o deve ter a mesma distancia do que os triplets em 00:29:051.

O problema seria então caber tudo naquele espaço (em 00:21:327)
Eu faria da seguinte maneira: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/271355
Tem mais haver com a musica do que encher isso de streams durante esse periodo de tempo (00:21:327 to 00:22:110)
aumentas o slider se for preciso
Rejeitado! O som da harpa lembra stream então não posso encher com slider sem reverses arrows desculpa...
R e d

Xavier18488 wrote:

Xaves2 wrote:

Boas!

Acho que nos streams devias quase sempre manter a mesma distância entre os beats

00:21:327 - Parece mais rápido do que realmente é ;o deve ter a mesma distancia do que os triplets em 00:29:051.

O problema seria então caber tudo naquele espaço (em 00:21:327)
Eu faria da seguinte maneira: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/271355
Tem mais haver com a musica do que encher isso de streams durante esse periodo de tempo (00:21:327 to 00:22:110)
aumentas o slider se for preciso
Rejeitado! O som da harpa lembra stream então não posso encher com slider sem reverses arrows desculpa...
Foi só uma sugestão, não tens de perdir desculpa. Como sou noob mapper nao tenho muito peso na palavra, mas eu faria como mostrei. Cumprimentos!
Topic Starter
-Napoleon-

Xaves2 wrote:

Foi só uma sugestão, não tens de perdir desculpa. Como sou noob mapper nao tenho muito peso na palavra, mas eu faria como mostrei. Cumprimentos!
:)
kurohana
Mod Request from My Queue ✿
I haven't modded a approval map before, but i will try (it's against my rules from queue, but you modded my map and shoot a star, so i mod your map too ^^ and i like the song :3)

-Collab-

00:58:379 (4) - new combo?
00:59:275 (7) - new combo?
02:46:290 (1) - uhh, what a nice slider x33 sorry, i had to call it out :D

yes, that's all ^^ very nice song and map, good luck and star :D
Topic Starter
-Napoleon-

kurohana wrote:

Mod Request from My Queue ✿
I haven't modded a approval map before, but i will try (it's against my rules from queue, but you modded my map and shoot a star, so i mod your map too ^^ and i like the song :3)

-Collab-

00:58:379 (4) - new combo?
00:59:275 (7) - new combo?
02:46:290 (1) - uhh, what a nice slider x33 sorry, i had to call it out :D

yes, that's all ^^ very nice song and map, good luck and star :D
I think You haven't broekn your queue because I, after start my ask, saied "M4M Req:" .

Thanks for all! :D Kudo! :D
Aeonnen
Request from my modding queue ^^

Collab:
00:07:110 (2,3) - Switch places for jump for 1,2,3,4
02:17:297 (5,6) - Align ends nicer
02:46:290 (1) - I love this slider ^^

Other than these 3 suggestions, good map ^^ Just wish I could play this xD
Ylinestra44

Aeonnen wrote:

Request from my modding queue ^^

Collab:
02:46:290 (1) - I love this slider ^^ Thaanks! I'm so proud others love it, too :3

Other than these 3 suggestions, good map ^^ Just wish I could play this xD
Topic Starter
-Napoleon-

Aeonnen wrote:

Request from my modding queue ^^

Collab:
00:07:110 (2,3) - Switch places for jump for 1,2,3,4
02:17:297 (5,6) - Align ends nicer
02:46:290 (1) - I love this slider ^^

Other than these 3 suggestions, good map ^^ Just wish I could play this xD
All fixed! Thanks! Kudo
Aeonnen
I'm also giving a star, just because I love the song :P
Topic Starter
-Napoleon-

Aeonnen wrote:

I'm also giving a star, just because I love the song :P
:)
Cygnus
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXxXXXXxXXXXCOLLAB
SPOILER
  1. 02:19:200 (Whole Combo) - So hard to read. Please make a new pattern for this one.

  2. 02:46:290 - Oh god, the best sliders i've seen.

  3. 03:08:230 - You call this part a break. lol (:

  4. 03:24:125 - Please try to move this one away from the previous note.
Topic Starter
-Napoleon-

Philippines wrote:

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXxXXXXxXXXXCOLLAB
SPOILER
  1. 02:19:200 (Whole Combo) - So hard to read. Please make a new pattern for this one.

  2. 02:46:290 - Oh god, the best sliders i've seen.

  3. 03:08:230 - You call this part a break. lol (:

  4. 03:24:125 - Please try to move this one away from the previous note.
Thanks for all Kudo! :)

About
03:24:125 - Please try to move this one away from the previous note.
I'll not put because there i'll stay 5 notes on the same place so, as normal, the last notes i'll up in the grind when playing...
haha5957
[Overall]

beats are too mid-center oriented.
Idk what I should say.. I feel like there are too many ctrl+<, ctrl+H, ctrl+J, stars which are midpoint-centered .
maybe try some different patterns?

this is preety much everything i should say. the map itself doesnt seems to have error or something like that,
but i feel like the map lacks of creative, or fun patterns.

This might be fine if this is going for rank, but since you are going for approval, and approval maps are usually much more creative and well-made compared to ranked maps, you should try more creative and nice pattern. well, Just opinion, but think why there are not much approval maps, and why approval maps usually has high star raitings.

[Collab]
00:18:304 (3,4) - this jump doesnt fit here;
00:42:707 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 6 ~1 looks like it is 1/4 stream, space them out
Topic Starter
-Napoleon-

haha5957 wrote:

[Overall]

beats are too mid-center oriented.
Idk what I should say.. I feel like there are too many ctrl+<, ctrl+H, ctrl+J, stars which are midpoint-centered .
maybe try some different patterns?

this is preety much everything i should say. the map itself doesnt seems to have error or something like that,
but i feel like the map lacks of creative, or fun patterns.

This might be fine if this is going for rank, but since you are going for approval, and approval maps are usually much more creative and well-made compared to ranked maps, you should try more creative and nice pattern. well, Just opinion, but think why there are not much approval maps, and why approval maps usually has high star raitings.

[Collab]
00:18:304 (3,4) - this jump doesnt fit here;
00:42:707 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 6 ~1 looks like it is 1/4 stream, space them out
Thanks! All fixed! Kudo! :D
yanlu
I mod after playing~> _</

it's my some advice.



[Collab-]

00:21:215 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - and 00:22:782 (4,1) - is too close
02:19:424 (2) - and 02:19:648 (3,4,5) - hmm..I read hard.
03:25:916 (4,5,6) - 03:26:364 (1,2,3) - too far..?
00:58:379 (1,2,3) - and 00:59:275 (1,2,3) - no same far O.O"

[set-]

Colours ...green blue red red orange ._. (two red...!?


I like this song~ cheer up!!
oh and your SB is good :D

(sorry english isn't good ;3/
Ylinestra44

yanlu wrote:

I mod after playing~> _</

it's my some advice.



[Collab-]

00:21:215 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - and 00:22:782 (4,1) - is too close
02:19:424 (2) - and 02:19:648 (3,4,5) - hmm..I read hard.
03:25:916 (4,5,6) - 03:26:364 (1,2,3) - too far..?
00:58:379 (1,2,3) - and 00:59:275 (1,2,3) - no same far O.O" I know, it's on purpose --> no changes

[set-]

Colours ...green blue red red orange ._. (two red...!?


I like this song~ cheer up!!
oh and your SB is good :D

(sorry english isn't good ;3/
Topic Starter
-Napoleon-

yanlu wrote:

I mod after playing~> _</

it's my some advice.



[Collab-]

00:21:215 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - and 00:22:782 (4,1) - is too close
02:19:424 (2) - and 02:19:648 (3,4,5) - hmm..I read hard.
03:25:916 (4,5,6) - 03:26:364 (1,2,3) - too far..?
00:58:379 (1,2,3) - and 00:59:275 (1,2,3) - no same far O.O"

[set-]

Colours ...green blue red red orange ._. (two red...!?


I like this song~ cheer up!!
oh and your SB is good :D

(sorry english isn't good ;3/
Thanks all things in my part fixed! About:

yanlu wrote:

Colours ...green blue red red orange ._. (two red...!?[/size][/color]
I think that two reds are of your skin look:
OnosakiHito
Sorry for taking so long, but exams are coming and I need to learn really much.
aabc271 is helping me with mapping the taiko to make the progress faster.
Topic Starter
-Napoleon-

OnosakiHito wrote:

Sorry for taking so long, but exams are coming and I need to learn really much.
aabc271 is helping me with mapping the taiko to make the progress faster.
Like a Taiko collab?
riffy
hi~
quck check

[General]

[Collab]
00:04:872 (1) - new combo
00:18:304 (3,4) - place them like this
00:22:782 (4,1) - move NC from (1) to (4)
00:26:364 (4,5) - hard to read
00:28:379 (6) - new combo
00:46:961 (3,4) - x256 y40
00:56:812 (1,2) - hard to read
01:01:513 (4,5,6) - just trust me/ this pattern looks messy! use bigger distance to make space between notes
01:09:349 (5) - new combo
01:11:812 (6) - i hate this 2-repeats-sliders. it's just me
01:36:215 (3,4,5,6) - confusing for me
01:38:230 (8) - whydon't you make this slider follow 7's approach circle's shape?
02:01:961 (5) - replace with better shape!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

just a quick check

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

looks clear. star!
Topic Starter
-Napoleon-

-Bakari- wrote:

hi~
quck check

[General]

[Collab]
00:04:872 (1) - new combo
00:18:304 (3,4) - place them like this
00:22:782 (4,1) - move NC from (1) to (4)
00:26:364 (4,5) - hard to read
00:28:379 (6) - new combo
00:46:961 (3,4) - x256 y40
00:56:812 (1,2) - hard to read
01:01:513 (4,5,6) - just trust me/ this pattern looks messy! use bigger distance to make space between notes
01:09:349 (5) - new combo
01:11:812 (6) - i hate this 2-repeats-sliders. it's just me
01:36:215 (3,4,5,6) - confusing for me
01:38:230 (8) - whydon't you make this slider follow 7's approach circle's shape?
02:01:961 (5) - replace with better shape!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

just a quick check

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

looks clear. star!

Thanks In my part all excluding "01:11:812 (6) - i hate this 2-repeats-sliders. it's just me" In Ylinestra44's part I don't know...
YunBora
*O* SB VERY COOL


Collab
02:02:857 (1,2,3) - small overlap
03:34:424 (x) - add note
03:38:230 (3,4,1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/sS9I
03:46:066 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - http://puu.sh/sSa1
00:01:513 (1,2) - small overlap
01:14:722 - add note here
03:08:606 maybe add it on 01:20:431

NC suggestions
03:10:245 (8) - reNC and 03:10:469 (1) - NC
03:19:200 (6) - reNC 03:20:096 (1) - reNC
00:06:215 (4) - nc 00:06:887 (1) - renc
00:08:230 (7) - nc 00:08:678 (1) - renc
00:45:842 (3) - NC 00:46:514 (1) - renc
01:02:185 (5) - nc 01:03:081 (1) - renc
01:08:454 (1) - renc
01:34:424 (7) - nC
02:13:155 (1) - renc
Topic Starter
-Napoleon-
On my part all changed minun this:
03:08:606 maybe add it on 01:20:431
and "NC suggestions"
cox5
APROVE IT!!!!
Topic Starter
-Napoleon-

cox5 wrote:

APROVE IT!!!!
NO DON'T DO THIS YET! I need ono's taiko ;_;
cox5
this map is awesome :)
OnosakiHito
Okay, finnaly I found time to finish the taiko diff. I really hope that you like it and once again sorry for such long period of waiting.
If you need a mod or another diff. just tell me, I will do it for you as compensation.

Download: http://puu.sh/ClDz
Topic Starter
-Napoleon-

OnosakiHito wrote:

Okay, finnaly I found time to finish the taiko diff. I really hope that you like it and once again sorry for such long period of waiting.
If you need a mod or another diff. just tell me, I will do it for you as compensation.

Download: http://puu.sh/ClDz
So thank you for doing a taiko for for my map!!

EDIT: Sorry forgot to give kudo
716 Girl
COOL map cool song.
I give you 2 stars.
Good Luck in approve. :)
Topic Starter
-Napoleon-

3er123 wrote:

COOL map cool song.
I give you 2 stars.
Good Luck in approve. :)
Thanksss!!!!! :)
Pereira006
Olá desculpa ser atrasado grande

[General]

O tag está desigual porque o collab tem "Ylinestra44 Suika" e taiko tem "Ylinestra44 Suika OnosakiHito" por isso é precisa ser igual
O taiko tem ligado sb que é inutil o taiko é precisa desligar mesmo SB porque dar desconcentrar jogar taiko se tu nao sabe como desliga sb ao taiko avisa mim no jogo posso ensinar
não tem Preview time é necessario adicionar, adiciona no 00:51:663 e taiko tambem ser igual

[Collab]

antes vai usar meu mod porque os circles tem unsnapped que é unrank aibat avisou

AIBAT 3.0

01:09:126 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:10:917 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:48:417 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:48:529 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:50:544 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
02:12:932 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
02:14:947 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
02:59:723 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
02:59:835 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
02:59:947 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
03:00:059 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
03:00:171 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
03:00:283 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
03:00:395 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
03:00:507 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
03:00:619 (9) - Unsnapped circle.
03:26:141 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
03:26:589 (3) - Unsnapped circle.

Tenta resnapp all note

Xavier18488:

vou por hitsound aqui primeiro porque falta consistência e esqueceste adicionar:

00:01:513 (1) - Adicionao whistle em inicio de slider porque faze sentir a parte musica
00:03:304 (5) - ^ tambem
00:04:872 (1) - ^ tambem mas em no fim slider só
00:06:887 (1) - adicionar whistle faze sentir musica
00:09:573 (3) - mesmo aconteca explicado no 00:01:513 (1)
00:10:469 (2) - adicionar whistle
00:12:036 (1) - adicionar whistle no fim de slider
00:12:931 (3) - ^ tambem
00:40:245 (4,5) - elimina os whistle que nao faze sentir
00:44:722 (1) - elimina o whistle no inicio de slider porque nao faze sentir
00:45:170 (2) - ^ tambem
00:48:528 (2) - adiciona o clap
00:48:976 (3,4) - elimina os claps que nao faze sentir
01:43:603 (3) - elimina finish nao faze sentir imo
01:44:275 (6) - ^ tambem
01:45:842 (2) - elimina o whistle no fim slider
01:53:006 (2) - adicionar o clap
01:53:454 (3,4) - elimina os claps
02:26:588 (3) - adiciona whistle
02:56:140 (3) - elimina o finish
02:56:588 (4) - elimina o finish e clap
02:56:812 (5,6) - elimina os whistles
03:00:842 (1) - elimina o whistle no inicio
03:01:290 (2) - ^ tambem
03:03:304 (2) - elimina o whistle no inicio e adiciona o finish para fikar consistência como 00:47:185 (4) e 01:51:663 (3)
03:04:648 (4) - adiciona o clap
03:05:096 (5,6) - elimina os claps
03:36:887 (1) - adiciona whistle

Gameplay é para coisa melhorar jogar e ler facil:

00:12:036 (1,2,3,4) - Não estão igual formas de slider por favor tenta 100% igual formas de sliders
00:20:767 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - isso slider mais perto do stream fika mau jogar é bom mais espaço como este http://puu.sh/Hc0B
00:22:334 (11,12,13) - 1 grid para esquerda para corrigir o symentrico
00:42:260 (4,5) - tenta bom stack como este http://puu.sh/Hc8u
00:42:707 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - juntos é mau, mais espaço e verdade se tu corrigir isso tem cuidado spacing no 00:44:722 (1,2)
00:46:737 (2) - mexe no x:100 y:264 para corrigir o symentric com o 00:46:514 (1)
00:48:528 (2) - 1 grid para baixo para corrigir o symentric e stack
02:58:827 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - mais espaço e se tu corrigir isso vai tentar corrigi os spacing no 03:00:842 (1,2)
03:31:737 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - confusao jogar e dificil perceber isso tenta mais facil como outros kiai

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Ylinestra44:

I gonna put hitsound here because some missing to consistency or fit song:

00:25:693 (3) - the end finish is not make sense imo remove finish and add clap
you kiai have lot stream the red tick with whistle is don't sense this music imo example this 01:56:364 (3) - the whistle is don't sense this music and many more don't sense imo i just i don't get it why..

Gameplay:

01:03:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i don't like because inconsistent spacing and bad jump try perfect Star with good jump
the gameplay look great for me
[]
desculpa atrasado. estou gostar e continua trabalho acredito isso uma dia vai ser approved!
e verdade alguma nao percebeste meu mod ou dificil corrigir avisa mim posso explicar melhor se quiser
Here star ! good luck
Topic Starter
-Napoleon-

Pereira006 wrote:

Olá desculpa ser atrasado grande

[General]

O tag está desigual porque o collab tem "Ylinestra44 Suika" e taiko tem "Ylinestra44 Suika OnosakiHito" por isso é precisa ser igual
O taiko tem ligado sb que é inutil o taiko é precisa desligar mesmo SB porque dar desconcentrar jogar taiko se tu nao sabe como desliga sb ao taiko avisa mim no jogo posso ensinar
não tem Preview time é necessario adicionar, adiciona no 00:51:663 e taiko tambem ser igual

[Collab]

antes vai usar meu mod porque os circles tem unsnapped que é unrank aibat avisou

AIBAT 3.0

01:09:126 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:10:917 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:48:417 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:48:529 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:50:544 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
02:12:932 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
02:14:947 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
02:59:723 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
02:59:835 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
02:59:947 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
03:00:059 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
03:00:171 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
03:00:283 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
03:00:395 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
03:00:507 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
03:00:619 (9) - Unsnapped circle.
03:26:141 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
03:26:589 (3) - Unsnapped circle.

Tenta resnapp all note

Xavier18488:

vou por hitsound aqui primeiro porque falta consistência e esqueceste adicionar:

00:01:513 (1) - Adicionao whistle em inicio de slider porque faze sentir a parte musica
00:03:304 (5) - ^ tambem
00:04:872 (1) - ^ tambem mas em no fim slider só
00:06:887 (1) - adicionar whistle faze sentir musica
00:09:573 (3) - mesmo aconteca explicado no 00:01:513 (1)
00:10:469 (2) - adicionar whistle
00:12:036 (1) - adicionar whistle no fim de slider
00:12:931 (3) - ^ tambem
00:40:245 (4,5) - elimina os whistle que nao faze sentir
00:44:722 (1) - elimina o whistle no inicio de slider porque nao faze sentir
00:45:170 (2) - ^ tambem
00:48:528 (2) - adiciona o clap
00:48:976 (3,4) - elimina os claps que nao faze sentir
01:43:603 (3) - elimina finish nao faze sentir imo
01:44:275 (6) - ^ tambem
01:45:842 (2) - elimina o whistle no fim slider
01:53:006 (2) - adicionar o clap
01:53:454 (3,4) - elimina os claps
02:26:588 (3) - adiciona whistle
02:56:140 (3) - elimina o finish
02:56:588 (4) - elimina o finish e clap
02:56:812 (5,6) - elimina os whistles
03:00:842 (1) - elimina o whistle no inicio
03:01:290 (2) - ^ tambem
03:03:304 (2) - elimina o whistle no inicio e adiciona o finish para fikar consistência como 00:47:185 (4) e 01:51:663 (3)
03:04:648 (4) - adiciona o clap
03:05:096 (5,6) - elimina os claps
03:36:887 (1) - adiciona whistle

Gameplay é para coisa melhorar jogar e ler facil:

00:12:036 (1,2,3,4) - Não estão igual formas de slider por favor tenta 100% igual formas de sliders
00:20:767 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - isso slider mais perto do stream fika mau jogar é bom mais espaço como este http://puu.sh/Hc0B
00:22:334 (11,12,13) - 1 grid para esquerda para corrigir o symentrico
00:42:260 (4,5) - tenta bom stack como este http://puu.sh/Hc8u
00:42:707 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - juntos é mau, mais espaço e verdade se tu corrigir isso tem cuidado spacing no 00:44:722 (1,2)
00:46:737 (2) - mexe no x:100 y:264 para corrigir o symentric com o 00:46:514 (1)
00:48:528 (2) - 1 grid para baixo para corrigir o symentric e stack
02:58:827 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - mais espaço e se tu corrigir isso vai tentar corrigi os spacing no 03:00:842 (1,2)
03:31:737 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - confusao jogar e dificil perceber isso tenta mais facil como outros kiai

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Ylinestra44:

I gonna put hitsound here because some missing to consistency or fit song:

00:25:693 (3) - the end finish is not make sense imo remove finish and add clap
you kiai have lot stream the red tick with whistle is don't sense this music imo example this 01:56:364 (3) - the whistle is don't sense this music and many more don't sense imo i just i don't get it why..

Gameplay:

01:03:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i don't like because inconsistent spacing and bad jump try perfect Star with good jump
the gameplay look great for me
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desculpa atrasado. estou gostar e continua trabalho acredito isso uma dia vai ser approved!
e verdade alguma nao percebeste meu mod ou dificil corrigir avisa mim posso explicar melhor se quiser
Here star ! good luck
On my part everything fixed! About Ylinestra44 IDK...
Ylinestra44

Pereira006 wrote:

Ylinestra44:

I gonna put hitsound here because some missing to consistency or fit song:

00:25:693 (3) - the end finish is not make sense imo remove finish and add clap Removed
you kiai have lot stream the red tick with whistle is don't sense this music imo example this 01:56:364 (3) - the whistle is don't sense this music and many more don't sense imo i just i don't get it why.. If you ask me now, I can't remember why I've put them there, but in my ears, they sound okay.

Gameplay:

01:03:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i don't like because inconsistent spacing and bad jump try perfect Star with good jump
the gameplay look great for me It doesn't look like a good star, because it's not supposed to be one. I made this on porpuse, and that's why I'll keep it.
SkyDevil
second part of refrain: -clapclapclapclap- o3o

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