haha5957 wrote:

[Overall]

beats are too mid-center oriented.
Idk what I should say.. I feel like there are too many ctrl+<, ctrl+H, ctrl+J, stars which are midpoint-centered .
maybe try some different patterns?

this is preety much everything i should say. the map itself doesnt seems to have error or something like that,
but i feel like the map lacks of creative, or fun patterns.

This might be fine if this is going for rank, but since you are going for approval, and approval maps are usually much more creative and well-made compared to ranked maps, you should try more creative and nice pattern. well, Just opinion, but think why there are not much approval maps, and why approval maps usually has high star raitings.

[Collab]
00:18:304 (3,4) - this jump doesnt fit here;
00:42:707 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 6 ~1 looks like it is 1/4 stream, space them out

yanlu wrote:

I mod after playing~> _</

it's my some advice.


[Collab-]

00:21:215 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - and 00:22:782 (4,1) - is too close
02:19:424 (2) - and 02:19:648 (3,4,5) - hmm..I read hard.
03:25:916 (4,5,6) - 03:26:364 (1,2,3) - too far..?
00:58:379 (1,2,3) - and 00:59:275 (1,2,3) - no same far O.O" I know, it's on purpose --> no changes

[set-]

Colours ...green blue red red orange ._. (two red...!?

I like this song~ cheer up!!
oh and your SB is good

(sorry english isn't good ;3/

yanlu wrote:

I mod after playing~> _</

it's my some advice.


[Collab-]

00:21:215 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - and 00:22:782 (4,1) - is too close
02:19:424 (2) - and 02:19:648 (3,4,5) - hmm..I read hard.
03:25:916 (4,5,6) - 03:26:364 (1,2,3) - too far..?
00:58:379 (1,2,3) - and 00:59:275 (1,2,3) - no same far O.O"

[set-]

Colours ...green blue red red orange ._. (two red...!?

I like this song~ cheer up!!
oh and your SB is good

(sorry english isn't good ;3/

yanlu wrote:

Colours ...green blue red red orange ._. (two red...!?[/size][/color]

OnosakiHito wrote:

Sorry for taking so long, but exams are coming and I need to learn really much.
aabc271 is helping me with mapping the taiko to make the progress faster.

-Bakari- wrote:

hi~
quck check

[General]

AiBat

[Collab]

AiBat

00:04:872 (1) - new combo
00:18:304 (3,4) - place them like this
00:22:782 (4,1) - move NC from (1) to (4)
00:26:364 (4,5) - hard to read
00:28:379 (6) - new combo
00:46:961 (3,4) - x256 y40
00:56:812 (1,2) - hard to read
01:01:513 (4,5,6) - just trust me/ this pattern looks messy! use bigger distance to make space between notes
01:09:349 (5) - new combo
01:11:812 (6) - i hate this 2-repeats-sliders. it's just me
01:36:215 (3,4,5,6) - confusing for me
01:38:230 (8) - whydon't you make this slider follow 7's approach circle's shape?
02:01:961 (5) - replace with better shape!

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just a quick check

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looks clear. star!

cox5 wrote:

APROVE IT!!!!

OnosakiHito wrote:

Okay, finnaly I found time to finish the taiko diff. I really hope that you like it and once again sorry for such long period of waiting.
If you need a mod or another diff. just tell me, I will do it for you as compensation.

Download: http://puu.sh/ClDz

3er123 wrote:

COOL map cool song.
I give you 2 stars.
Good Luck in approve.

Pereira006 wrote:

Olá desculpa ser atrasado grande

[General]

O tag está desigual porque o collab tem "Ylinestra44 Suika" e taiko tem "Ylinestra44 Suika OnosakiHito" por isso é precisa ser igual
O taiko tem ligado sb que é inutil o taiko é precisa desligar mesmo SB porque dar desconcentrar jogar taiko se tu nao sabe como desliga sb ao taiko avisa mim no jogo posso ensinar
não tem Preview time é necessario adicionar, adiciona no 00:51:663 e taiko tambem ser igual

[Collab]

antes vai usar meu mod porque os circles tem unsnapped que é unrank aibat avisou

AIBAT 3.0

01:09:126 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:10:917 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:48:417 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:48:529 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:50:544 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
02:12:932 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
02:14:947 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
02:59:723 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
02:59:835 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
02:59:947 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
03:00:059 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
03:00:171 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
03:00:283 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
03:00:395 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
03:00:507 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
03:00:619 (9) - Unsnapped circle.
03:26:141 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
03:26:589 (3) - Unsnapped circle.

Tenta resnapp all note

Xavier18488:

vou por hitsound aqui primeiro porque falta consistência e esqueceste adicionar:

00:01:513 (1) - Adicionao whistle em inicio de slider porque faze sentir a parte musica
00:03:304 (5) - ^ tambem
00:04:872 (1) - ^ tambem mas em no fim slider só
00:06:887 (1) - adicionar whistle faze sentir musica
00:09:573 (3) - mesmo aconteca explicado no 00:01:513 (1)
00:10:469 (2) - adicionar whistle
00:12:036 (1) - adicionar whistle no fim de slider
00:12:931 (3) - ^ tambem
00:40:245 (4,5) - elimina os whistle que nao faze sentir
00:44:722 (1) - elimina o whistle no inicio de slider porque nao faze sentir
00:45:170 (2) - ^ tambem
00:48:528 (2) - adiciona o clap
00:48:976 (3,4) - elimina os claps que nao faze sentir
01:43:603 (3) - elimina finish nao faze sentir imo
01:44:275 (6) - ^ tambem
01:45:842 (2) - elimina o whistle no fim slider
01:53:006 (2) - adicionar o clap
01:53:454 (3,4) - elimina os claps
02:26:588 (3) - adiciona whistle
02:56:140 (3) - elimina o finish
02:56:588 (4) - elimina o finish e clap
02:56:812 (5,6) - elimina os whistles
03:00:842 (1) - elimina o whistle no inicio
03:01:290 (2) - ^ tambem
03:03:304 (2) - elimina o whistle no inicio e adiciona o finish para fikar consistência como 00:47:185 (4) e 01:51:663 (3)
03:04:648 (4) - adiciona o clap
03:05:096 (5,6) - elimina os claps
03:36:887 (1) - adiciona whistle

Gameplay é para coisa melhorar jogar e ler facil:

00:12:036 (1,2,3,4) - Não estão igual formas de slider por favor tenta 100% igual formas de sliders
00:20:767 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - isso slider mais perto do stream fika mau jogar é bom mais espaço como este http://puu.sh/Hc0B
00:22:334 (11,12,13) - 1 grid para esquerda para corrigir o symentrico
00:42:260 (4,5) - tenta bom stack como este http://puu.sh/Hc8u
00:42:707 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - juntos é mau, mais espaço e verdade se tu corrigir isso tem cuidado spacing no 00:44:722 (1,2)
00:46:737 (2) - mexe no x:100 y:264 para corrigir o symentric com o 00:46:514 (1)
00:48:528 (2) - 1 grid para baixo para corrigir o symentric e stack
02:58:827 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - mais espaço e se tu corrigir isso vai tentar corrigi os spacing no 03:00:842 (1,2)
03:31:737 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - confusao jogar e dificil perceber isso tenta mais facil como outros kiai

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Ylinestra44:

I gonna put hitsound here because some missing to consistency or fit song:

00:25:693 (3) - the end finish is not make sense imo remove finish and add clap
you kiai have lot stream the red tick with whistle is don't sense this music imo example this 01:56:364 (3) - the whistle is don't sense this music and many more don't sense imo i just i don't get it why..

Gameplay:

01:03:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i don't like because inconsistent spacing and bad jump try perfect Star with good jump
the gameplay look great for me
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desculpa atrasado. estou gostar e continua trabalho acredito isso uma dia vai ser approved!
e verdade alguma nao percebeste meu mod ou dificil corrigir avisa mim posso explicar melhor se quiser
Here star ! good luck

Pereira006 wrote:

Ylinestra44:

I gonna put hitsound here because some missing to consistency or fit song:

00:25:693 (3) - the end finish is not make sense imo remove finish and add clap Removed
you kiai have lot stream the red tick with whistle is don't sense this music imo example this 01:56:364 (3) - the whistle is don't sense this music and many more don't sense imo i just i don't get it why.. If you ask me now, I can't remember why I've put them there, but in my ears, they sound okay.

Gameplay:

01:03:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i don't like because inconsistent spacing and bad jump try perfect Star with good jump
the gameplay look great for me It doesn't look like a good star, because it's not supposed to be one. I made this on porpuse, and that's why I'll keep it.