Hi there Fenya, Cristan, -Pikachu-, Kogure, Mikumiku97
02:35:532 - For the storyboard of Easy and Normal... Shouldn't this be at the beginning like the Collab difficulty?
•00:29:863 (2) - This is actually a comment: I really like what you did there with the slider's form and the two previous circles. It flows really much.
•00:44:036 (3) - As you can see on your previous combos, they all have (or most of it) has three objects per combos. Since the vocal stops on the previous object, it would be good to add a new combo here.
•00:48:288 (4) - Hm, a new combo should be added here because it seems to be a bit long right now.
•01:16:162 - A finish sounds way more better than a whistle here o_o
•01:20:414 (4) - I am sure you can make a better blanket here with the previous circle. Right now, the way it's placed, the next circle is overlapping the last circle. So to make a better blanket, move the slider one grid to the left and move the next circle to x:264 y:168. After that, just re-arrange your next objects.
•01:22:304 (3,4) - It doesn't sound really good the way it is, to be honest. The song doesn't fit with these objects. My suggestion here, is to reverse these objects, like this. By doing this, the slider will sound better because before, it sounded like it was late.
•01:52:068 - On the previous spinner (before the first kiai time), you had a finish. Why does this one has a whistle?
•02:39:312 - A finish will sound way more better than a whistle, to be honest. Since you're restarting after the break time, it would be great if this slider's beginning starts with a finish.
•02:44:981 (3) - A new combo should be added here to keep the consistency with your previous combos. As you can see, these previous combos are formed with three objects. So this one should have a new combo.
•03:01:044 - You should maybe delete this whistle to fit with 02:57:264.
•03:07:658 - Seems like you have forgot to add a whistle here. Add one to keep the consistency with your finish/whistle on the downbeat.
•03:19:942 (1,2,3) - Highlight these circles and move it to x:184 y:168 to make a better flow with your previous slider.
•00:15:690 (4) - To follow the vocal, a new combo will be good here. Also, the combo seems to be long, so a new combo fits pretty well here.
•00:32:225 (4,5,6) - Highlight these objects and move them one grid to the left. It will be more centered.
•01:59:627 (3) - Can you move it somewhere else? Right now, it's obviously overlapping the last slider.
•02:53:485 (2,1) - They are both overlapping each others, which is a bit odd and ugly to see.
•00:08:839 (2) - This circle will flow better with the previous slider if you move it to x:168 y:48.
•00:10:256 (2,3,4) - Same thing as said previously, but these circles should be placed that way.
•00:10:493 - This whistle should be deleted and add a whistle to the next circle. In that way, it sounds way more better and it focus on the vocal.
•00:11:438 (2) - Same reason as the one above. Delete this whistle, it doesn't sounds pretty good and it has a whistle to the next object, which is alot. Also, you could add a whistle to 00:12:619, it will follow the vocal.
•00:28:445 (1) - Seems like you have alot of 1/1 objects and this one could be easily be deleted to follow the vocal and song. At this place, there's no vocal, so why adding an object here?
•00:34:587 (7) - Add a new combo here, the combo is too long and it doesn't fit the vocal. After that, remove the new combo to 00:35:532 (1) - and add a new combo to the next object.
•01:56:792 - This circle should be deleted since there's no vocal and it's like an extra circle which is a bit useless.
•01:58:682 - This circle should be moved at 01:58:918. It will sound better and also, with the whistle, it sounded awkward.
Cristian
•00:45:217 (5,6,7,8,9) - Is this stream neccesary? It seems to be overmapped if you keep it..
-Pikachu-
•01:14:036 (1) - What do you think on adding a whistle here? To be honest, it sounds pretty good if you are trying to follow the vocal.
Mikumiku97
•03:10:256 (2) - I think this slider should be in the other way. Like this. It won't be the same as the previous slider and it will be more better in the esthetic.
•03:12:146 (7,8) - As previously said on Easy, these objects should be reversed. In that way, it will be more focused on the vocal. Here's what I meant: http://puu.sh/1qRKe
•03:16:162 - to keep the consistency with your two previous whistle, I think a whistle will sound pretty good here.
General
Just by hearing the song with the objects, I think the offset should be looked at. 02:35:532 - For the storyboard of Easy and Normal... Shouldn't this be at the beginning like the Collab difficulty?
Easy
•00:27:028 (3) - For the vocal, you should add a new combo here. It seems to follow more the vocal and because of this suggestion, I also recomment to remove the new combo at 00:29:390 (1) - .•00:29:863 (2) - This is actually a comment: I really like what you did there with the slider's form and the two previous circles. It flows really much.
•00:44:036 (3) - As you can see on your previous combos, they all have (or most of it) has three objects per combos. Since the vocal stops on the previous object, it would be good to add a new combo here.
•00:48:288 (4) - Hm, a new combo should be added here because it seems to be a bit long right now.
•01:16:162 - A finish sounds way more better than a whistle here o_o
•01:20:414 (4) - I am sure you can make a better blanket here with the previous circle. Right now, the way it's placed, the next circle is overlapping the last circle. So to make a better blanket, move the slider one grid to the left and move the next circle to x:264 y:168. After that, just re-arrange your next objects.
•01:22:304 (3,4) - It doesn't sound really good the way it is, to be honest. The song doesn't fit with these objects. My suggestion here, is to reverse these objects, like this. By doing this, the slider will sound better because before, it sounded like it was late.
•01:52:068 - On the previous spinner (before the first kiai time), you had a finish. Why does this one has a whistle?
•02:39:312 - A finish will sound way more better than a whistle, to be honest. Since you're restarting after the break time, it would be great if this slider's beginning starts with a finish.
•02:44:981 (3) - A new combo should be added here to keep the consistency with your previous combos. As you can see, these previous combos are formed with three objects. So this one should have a new combo.
•03:01:044 - You should maybe delete this whistle to fit with 02:57:264.
•03:07:658 - Seems like you have forgot to add a whistle here. Add one to keep the consistency with your finish/whistle on the downbeat.
•03:19:942 (1,2,3) - Highlight these circles and move it to x:184 y:168 to make a better flow with your previous slider.
Normal
•00:12:619 - Add a whistle here, it seems to be quiet with anything.•00:15:690 (4) - To follow the vocal, a new combo will be good here. Also, the combo seems to be long, so a new combo fits pretty well here.
•00:32:225 (4,5,6) - Highlight these objects and move them one grid to the left. It will be more centered.
•01:59:627 (3) - Can you move it somewhere else? Right now, it's obviously overlapping the last slider.
•02:53:485 (2,1) - They are both overlapping each others, which is a bit odd and ugly to see.
Collab
Fenya•00:08:839 (2) - This circle will flow better with the previous slider if you move it to x:168 y:48.
•00:10:256 (2,3,4) - Same thing as said previously, but these circles should be placed that way.
•00:10:493 - This whistle should be deleted and add a whistle to the next circle. In that way, it sounds way more better and it focus on the vocal.
•00:11:438 (2) - Same reason as the one above. Delete this whistle, it doesn't sounds pretty good and it has a whistle to the next object, which is alot. Also, you could add a whistle to 00:12:619, it will follow the vocal.
•00:28:445 (1) - Seems like you have alot of 1/1 objects and this one could be easily be deleted to follow the vocal and song. At this place, there's no vocal, so why adding an object here?
•00:34:587 (7) - Add a new combo here, the combo is too long and it doesn't fit the vocal. After that, remove the new combo to 00:35:532 (1) - and add a new combo to the next object.
•01:56:792 - This circle should be deleted since there's no vocal and it's like an extra circle which is a bit useless.
•01:58:682 - This circle should be moved at 01:58:918. It will sound better and also, with the whistle, it sounded awkward.
Cristian
•00:45:217 (5,6,7,8,9) - Is this stream neccesary? It seems to be overmapped if you keep it..
-Pikachu-
•01:14:036 (1) - What do you think on adding a whistle here? To be honest, it sounds pretty good if you are trying to follow the vocal.
Mikumiku97
•03:10:256 (2) - I think this slider should be in the other way. Like this. It won't be the same as the previous slider and it will be more better in the esthetic.
•03:12:146 (7,8) - As previously said on Easy, these objects should be reversed. In that way, it will be more focused on the vocal. Here's what I meant: http://puu.sh/1qRKe
•03:16:162 - to keep the consistency with your two previous whistle, I think a whistle will sound pretty good here.