TheVileOne wrote:
Easy
Nothing but polish issues.
00:20:886 (1) - Use a three point slider instead? Nope
00:19:469 (2,1) - 0.7 snap has a better flow than 0.6. What is the difference?
00:33:642 (3,1) - Spacing? Nop...
00:38:367 (2) - Looks better with the curve opposite. What do you think? Yup, looks better
00:44:508 (4,1) - Spacing? No...
01:08:603 (2,3,4,5) - Is there a good reason why this pattern is like this? I would prefer a more perfect shape. Fixed
01:25:138 (4,1,2) - Make spacing more perfect? I think is fine o3o
01:29:390 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing and form of this shape could be better. Try to make it perfect with grid snap off. Nop
01:35:060 (1,2) - Blanket isn't perfect. http://puu.sh/1wUT2 I don't know you mean
01:42:619 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing Fixed
01:57:737 (1) - Not perfectly wrapping around 5. Maybe add a couple extra points to try to make a better blanket. Fixed
02:15:218 (4,5,1) - Spacing. ?
02:41:201 (1,2,3) - Bring the spacing closer to 1.0. Why?
02:45:926 (3) - Slider looks imperfect. Angle also seems not right. I prefer this kind of angle instead http://puu.sh/1wV8d Make sure it works with your patterns though. Fixed
03:00:099 (3,4,5) - Imperfect spacing. Why?
Normal
00:18:524 (1,2,3) - Make spacing equal. Fixed.
00:19:469 (3,4) - These could be made better. Fixed
00:26:556 (3,4) - Needs to be exactly 0.8. Maybe slider could be nicer looking too. Fixed
00:53:485 (2,3) - Looks bad IMO. Fixed
01:45:926 (4,5,1,2) - Inconsistent spacing. It plays better all 0.8. ok
02:39:312 (1,2) - I would rather see forward flow here :/ nop
02:56:319 (3,4,1) - Spacing. nop
03:03:879 (4,5,1) - ^ nop
03:23:957 (2) - Is this supposed to be lopsided? nop
Collab
00:29:154 (2,3,4,5) - Why is this spacing larger than the other notes spacing? Nop
00:30:571 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 1.15 spacing is sort of sluggish compared to 1.2 IMO. I'll leave it up to you if you want to fix. nop
00:40:965 (1,2,3) - Make exactly 1.3 here. The spacing is off. Fixed
00:42:146 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - you shouldn't have inconsistent spacing segments in your map. This is the only 1.4 section you have. 1.3 plays a lot better. (I know the spacing changes more later and i'll get to that) Fixed
00:47:816 (1,2) - Doesn't look as good as 00:49:705 (1,2) - . Perhaps you could do something about it. Looks fine for me
00:52:540 (7,8) - Make 1.7 like the rest of the pattern? Fixed
00:53:249 (11,1) - Jump does not play good to me. It's too sudden. IMO it should be 1.7 like the previous combo. Fixed
00:54:902 (1,2) - Exactly 2.0. yup
00:57:028 (4,1) - Too large IMO. nop
00:57:973 (2,3,4,1) - Keep spacing consistent and not above 2.0 please. Nop
01:00:099 (3,1,2) - ^ nop
01:07:894 (7,8,9) - Ugh... plays badly after such large jumps. This is not the place to decrease the spacing. My suggestion: 01:07:658 (6,7) - needs to be 1.8. 01:07:894 (7,8,9) - also 1.8. 01:08:367 (9) - Stack this on 1 instead. 01:08:485 - Add note, stack it too. Fixed
01:12:146 (6) - Place at x 217 y 256 If you end up moving the slider after, just make sure it has equally spacing between the notes.Fixed
01:13:091 (2,3,4,5,1) - Inconsistent spacing Fixed
01:33:170 (1,2,3,4) - More curve to this would look better if you can solve the overlap problem. Fixed
02:33:997 (4) - You should delete. It looks better. Fixed
02:58:445 (4,5,6) - Exactly 1.7 or 1.8 ok
03:05:532 (2,3) - 1.2? ok
03:12:146 (7,8,1) - Make spacing equal? Fixed
Conclusion
Good song, good luck on getting this ranked. It's definitely worth it.
Thanks... After a year xDDrezoons wrote:
I didn't see that it was a graveyard map. Oh well, since i'm stupid i mod it so here is my mod even if it has no purpose:
[Easy]
Slider Tick Rate +1? Nop
00:27:028 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Combo too long for an easy diff. Fixed
01:09:548 (3,4,5) - Move evrything 2 frid left and 1 grid up like this: Nop
01:28:445 (4) - Maybe a slider here? Because the violon play the same from 01:28:445 to 01:28:918 than from 01:27:501 to 01:27:973. nop
01:50:178 (1) - Why not a finish here? Ok, fixed
01:27:264 (5,1) - The blanket isn't beautiful. ?
02:08:603 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Combo too long for an easy diff. Fixed
02:46:871 (1,2,3) - The alignement isn't good. Fixed
[Normal]
Slider Tick Rate +1? nop
01:33:170 (4) - It would be better if you'd move the second slider point one grid right then one grid down. fixed
01:36:005 (3) - Ctrl+H then move it where it was. It's prettier like this. yup, fixed
01:42:146 (2) - Same as 01:33:170 (4). just one grid right
01:50:178 (1) - Finish? ok, fixed
02:08:839 - add a note? unnecessary
02:15:926 (6) - Shouldn't the NC be here instead of 02:16:624? fixed
03:09:548 (1) - CTRL+J then put it where it was. Like this the transition between this slider and the following note will be better to play. Fixed
[Collab]
00:27:501 (5,6,7) - Why a jump here? The song is still quiet then it's rather surprising to see a sudden jump. For me it's fine
00:39:075 (3) - If you decide to increase the distance snapping. Be constant! Then this note should be further from 2 than it is. Fixed
00:47:816 (1,2) - Try avoiding the overlapping. Fixed
00:49:705 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
00:57:028 (4,1) - The jump is very unexpected and hard to see imo. You should put 00:57:028 (4) in the middle of 00:56:792 (3) and 00:57:264 (1). Nop
01:22:540 (4,7) - They aren't at the same high. Fixed
01:29:390 (1,2,3,4) - Another suggestion of placement:
01:34:587 (5) - It's not exactly at the end of the slider. Fixed
01:49:942 (2) - ^ Fixed
02:41:201 (3) - Move it to x=256 y=240 to keep the symmetry. Nop
03:13:091 (1) - Move the end point to x=448 y=320. Then, the blanket is better. Fixed
(Yes, i'm THAT stupid)