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Hinacle
I can’t search "-Chata-" in osudirect! when not put "Chata" T-T
DJPop
-Chata- doesn't work in both osu!direct and http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist, it just works via beatmap search in-game.

I'd tell remove tag "-Chata-" instead of "Chata", but let's just leave them for now.

Rechecked done, you can have a bubble :)
Abe Nana
' A '
abalee
background not fit except Easy diff if i don't misunderstand this song.

Insane:
00:56:297 (8,1) - : change it to two 1/2 sliders seems better for me.

few jumps not fit in my opinion.
00:33:326 (2,3) - ,01:10:183 (4,5) -

hard:
try to make the spacing consistency.
rui

abalee wrote:

hard:
try to make the spacing consistency. sorry no changed
Topic Starter
Hinacle

abalee wrote:

background not fit except Easy diff if i don't misunderstand this song.

Insane:
00:56:297 (8,1) - : change it to two 1/2 sliders seems better for me.I think this rhythm is very good. sorry no change

few jumps not fit in my opinion.
00:33:326 (2,3) - ,01:10:183 (4,5) - This jump is a my favorite. Is one of my placement. no change

hard:
try to make the spacing consistency.
Thank you mod~></
abalee
gain more stars.
popner
Tag vocaloid2? (You can change this when BAT comes)

Why this is still not ranked? :(
those
To the BAT checking this for rank, or mapper(s):
Got some concern with the suitability of the background images. Although Miku is singing this song, the song lyrics provide a general sad tone. As such, backgrounds for Easy, Normal, and/or Hard should be rechosen.
Additionally, the current bg for Normal uses the same one as http://osu.ppy.sh/s/47539, which gives an additional reason to change, as the two songs are not similar in very many ways.
Star Stream
Using same BG with other ranked map(s) doesn't matter.
And I can agree with you when you're saying only thing about lewd image. but unless that, It's just up to Mapper.
Garven
Ahoy, Hinacle!

[All Difficulties]
01:44:983 - Start kiai here

[Chata's Easy]
00:14:126 (1) - This feels a little short for a spinner in an Easy. It might be best to map through it at this point.
02:25:783 (1) - ^

[Star's Normal]
01:10:354 (2) - After seeing 00:43:783 (5) - I fear this might be a little misleading. I'd just unstack it.
01:49:269 (4) - You know - just stick to one rhythm or the other. I'd prefer the 1/1 rhythm stacked under a slider end personally.
02:07:954 (1,2,3) - Why so much whistle? ;_; So noisy

[Insane]
00:19:612 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Why so much new combo spam?
00:24:069 (2,3) - Swap the positions of these to keep your circular flow smooth. Right now, going from 00:23:726 (3) - > 00:23:897 (1,2) - feels unnatural
01:41:897 (1,2,1,2,1) - More new combo spam
02:20:983 (1,2,3) - This spacing felt really weird to play

@those: The BGs are fine. You could say that they are the memories of the happier times behind the screen if you really want.
Abe Nana
Topic Starter
Hinacle

Garven wrote:

Ahoy, Hinacle!

[All Difficulties]
01:44:983 - Start kiai here

[Chata's Easy]
00:14:126 (1) - This feels a little short for a spinner in an Easy. It might be best to map through it at this point.
02:25:783 (1) - ^

[Star's Normal]
01:10:354 (2) - After seeing 00:43:783 (5) - I fear this might be a little misleading. I'd just unstack it.
01:49:269 (4) - You know - just stick to one rhythm or the other. I'd prefer the 1/1 rhythm stacked under a slider end personally.
02:07:954 (1,2,3) - Why so much whistle? ;_; So noisy

[Insane]
00:19:612 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Why so much new combo spam?
00:24:069 (2,3) - Swap the positions of these to keep your circular flow smooth. Right now, going from 00:23:726 (3) - > 00:23:897 (1,2) - feels unnatural
01:41:897 (1,2,1,2,1) - More new combo spam
02:20:983 (1,2,3) - This spacing felt really weird to play

@those: The BGs are fine. You could say that they are the memories of the happier times behind the screen if you really want.
Thank you mod~!!
Fixed!!
Garven
Bah, I wish there was a better mp3 available. I found this but it seems to be long dead, unfortunately. Ah well.

[Normal]
01:48:754 (3,4) -
Topic Starter
Hinacle

Garven wrote:

Bah, I wish there was a better mp3 available. I found this but it seems to be long dead, unfortunately. Ah well.

[Normal]
01:48:754 (3,4) -
Fixed!!

Thank you mod Garvn>3<//
Garven
Reubbled!
ztrot
few things I need to point out.
[Easy]
00:40:183 (2) - this would go better if it started at 00:40:526 maybe make it look like this? http://puu.sh/R10w

[Normal]
00:53:897 (5) - Remove the whistle body from this slider not the whistle on the end points seeing as it is the only slider that has a whistle sound of it's slider slide.

Suggestion 01:11:897 (1) - remove the new combo from this spinner.

[Hard]
looked fine to me

[Insane]
No real complaints here.


[Source]
your source is inccorect but because we can't make up our minds over ch2 or tonasa just leave it blank please.

also after these fixes i would have no problem ranking it.
Abe Nana
wmfchris
[Insane]
I myself don't really care about boundary case of obscene backgrounds, but it's still better if you can change the BG.
01:44:983 - I prefer starting the kiai here (like the other diffs) because the real accent is there (not at 01:44:640 - ). Also if you start the kiai eariler the note 01:44:640 (6) - gives a kiai hitburst which doesn't fit there.

[Hard]
02:25:097 (5) - how about removing clapping here to highlight the accent of (6)?

[Easy]
02:07:954 (1) - The single note still refers to a new phrase so new combo here?

you'll have to response towards ztrot's mod on normal as well.
rui

wmfchris wrote:

[Hard]
02:25:097 (5) - how about removing clapping here to highlight the accent of (6)? fixed. it is nice idea :3
wmfchris Thank you mod

http://puu.sh/Yoa3
Abe Nana
(´・ω・`)
Yuukari-Banteki
[Chata]
set tick rate to .5 or 2 because you have so many 1.5 beat sliders (some BAT disagree with this statement)

[Star]
same tick rate issue, suggest a tick rate of 2

[rui]
set tick rate to 2
01:41:383 (4) - can you make the same distance from 3 as from 2: http://puu.sh/ZML0

[Insane]
01:39:497 (2) - make this the same distance from 1 and from 3: http://puu.sh/ZN8G

Ask me when you are ready for a remod >.<
Abe Nana
Melophobia
Note: Hinacle can't upload this map because he can't stop playing LoL and pinball :<
Garven
>_>
NatsumeRin
...i random checked this and about to rank and saw the thread...

/me moves out.
Sync
lol
Topic Starter
Hinacle
really sorry my bad

maybe all fixed!!
NoHitter
Let's try getting this back up there.

[General]
- Due to a new rule, you can't put Hatsune Miku as artist anymore. You need to add the name of the composer instead.
- Just add Hatsune Miku to the tags.
- Add kiai refountains at 00:49:783 and 01:55:612 since they fit the song.
- I would suggest Tick Rate 2 for this song because it fits.

[Chata's Easy]
- 01:04:183 (2) - New combo here to be consistent with your previous combo patterns.
- 02:25:783 (1) - Might be too short for an Easy. At least make it the same length as 01:12:069 (1).

[Star's Normal]
- Those normal-whistles in the chorus sound really noisy. Reduce the amount (I suggest you follow the hitsounding in [rui's Hard] for the chorus.)
- Why don't you add claps during the chorus as well? They sound better.

[rui's Hard]
- 00:59:897 (5,6,7,8,1) - A 5-object stream with this BPM would fall under an Insane IMO. I suggest removing (6).
- 02:05:212 (4,5,6,7,1) - Same as above. I suggest removing (5) here.
- 02:20:297 (1) - Remove new combo here to be consistent with your combo patterning.
- 02:22:012 (1) - Same as above.
- 02:24:240 (1) - Same as above.

[Insane]
Good!
rui
[rui's Hard]
- 00:59:897 (5,6,7,8,1) - A 5-object stream with this BPM would fall under an Insane IMO. I suggest removing (6). ok deleted
- 02:05:212 (4,5,6,7,1) - Same as above. I suggest removing (5) here.deleted
- 02:20:297 (1) - Remove new combo here to be consistent with your combo patterning. fixed
- 02:22:012 (1) - Same as above. no fixed. because 02:22:012 (1,2,3,4) - is vocal follow. so I want to use new combo to divide
- 02:24:240 (1) - Same as above. fixed

Thank you for modding NoHitter :3

http://puu.sh/1hs49
Topic Starter
Hinacle

NoHitter wrote:

Let's try getting this back up there.

[General]
- Due to a new rule, you can't put Hatsune Miku as artist anymore. You need to add the name of the composer instead.
- Just add Hatsune Miku to the tags.
- Add kiai refountains at 00:49:783 and 01:55:612 since they fit the song.
- I would suggest Tick Rate 2 for this song because it fits. sorry,I think hear Tick Rate 1 is good sound

[Chata's Easy]
- 01:04:183 (2) - New combo here to be consistent with your previous combo patterns.
- 02:25:783 (1) - Might be too short for an Easy. At least make it the same length as 01:12:069 (1).

[Star's Normal]
- Those normal-whistles in the chorus sound really noisy. Reduce the amount (I suggest you follow the hitsounding in [rui's Hard] for the chorus.)
- Why don't you add claps during the chorus as well? They sound better.

[rui's Hard]
- 00:59:897 (5,6,7,8,1) - A 5-object stream with this BPM would fall under an Insane IMO. I suggest removing (6).
- 02:05:212 (4,5,6,7,1) - Same as above. I suggest removing (5) here.
- 02:20:297 (1) - Remove new combo here to be consistent with your combo patterning.
- 02:22:012 (1) - Same as above.
- 02:24:240 (1) - Same as above.

[Insane]
Good!
Thank you mod!

Fixed!!
Topic Starter
Hinacle

Hinacle wrote:

NoHitter wrote:

Let's try getting this back up there.

[General]
- Due to a new rule, you can't put Hatsune Miku as artist anymore. You need to add the name of the composer instead.
- Just add Hatsune Miku to the tags.
- Add kiai refountains at 00:49:783 and 01:55:612 since they fit the song.
- I would suggest Tick Rate 2 for this song because it fits. sorry,I think hear Tick Rate 1 is good

[Chata's Easy]
- 01:04:183 (2) - New combo here to be consistent with your previous combo patterns.
- 02:25:783 (1) - Might be too short for an Easy. At least make it the same length as 01:12:069 (1).

[Star's Normal]
- Those normal-whistles in the chorus sound really noisy. Reduce the amount (I suggest you follow the hitsounding in [rui's Hard] for the chorus.)
- Why don't you add claps during the chorus as well? They sound better.

[rui's Hard]
- 00:59:897 (5,6,7,8,1) - A 5-object stream with this BPM would fall under an Insane IMO. I suggest removing (6).
- 02:05:212 (4,5,6,7,1) - Same as above. I suggest removing (5) here.
- 02:20:297 (1) - Remove new combo here to be consistent with your combo patterning.
- 02:22:012 (1) - Same as above.
- 02:24:240 (1) - Same as above.

[Insane]
Good!
Thank you mod!

Fixed!!
NoHitter
Rebubbled!
Topic Starter
Hinacle

NoHitter wrote:

Rebubbled!
Thank you~><//
kanpakyin
Ranked.

(ノ・ω・)ノ
Sekai
o.o Rainbow rank

Gratz =w=//
Chewin
Welcome back, Hinacle!
alacat
congrats ^^/
BeatofIke
Hinacle so moe~ <3
Congratulations!
Mythol
gratz Hinacle~
Kazuo
gratz!
Rare
あーひなくるっ!!!ひなくるっ!!!ひなくるっ!!!ひなくるっ!!!ひなくるっ!!!ひなくるっ!!!ひなくるっ!!!ひなくるっ!!!ひなくるっ!!!ひなくるっ!!!
ryota1212
Rankedおめです~ :)
Topic Starter
Hinacle

kanpakyin wrote:

Ranked.

(ノ・ω・)ノ
Thank you kanpakyin~><//

and thank you everyone XD
rui
congrats ヾ(〃^∇^)ノ
jamxx
gratz!
Fionana
おめでと!
Melophobia
Omecle~
hoLysoup
:>!
Topic Starter
Hinacle
yeah~!!

I'm happy~(´∀`)

Thank you~!!
NAI_old_1
good!
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